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>>72128509
>Thrusting up through her shirt to poke the grenade up
>catch it, pitch it away
>it blows
>you blow

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>>63512267
Got through chapter 1, but I think my eyes need a break before moving onto the second. The green on black strains my eyes a little, but I'm just not used to it. Anyway, it was a very engaging first chapter. You painted the background, need to know history, and even the general public states very cleanly. I really enjoyed the little includes of other languages within some of the dialogue.
I noticed a few tiny grammatical things here and there, but easily nothing breaking in any way.
Subaru was my commanding officer during the Second Homeland War. But thanks to some Party apparatchik, she got screwed out of any promotion. I ended up becoming Captain while she stayed a Lieutenant. - The second sentence should likely be part of the first via a comma, though with introspective thought, the rules can be bent, so it still reads fine.
Having taken what should’ve been hers, it was hard for me to face her even after the War ended. - If "War" is going to be capitalized to reference a named thing The War would be its full title. Hope that isn't coming off as too nitpicky or anything. A friend of mine always does his best to do the same for me and help make whatever I read as good as it can be, so I try to do the same for others.
Your passion for your project is abundantly clear once again and you made something awesome. I'll be sure to read through chapter 2 and post my thoughts when I can.

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>>57870011

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>>55372458
Extremely good if youre specifically into crpgs. It also works without game breaking issues which is nearly unheard of these days

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>>54908569
To be fair, we've had a lot of recent events that have made the catalog completely visceral in the past week alone.
>General EN3 stuff
While this has been mostly positive, the the Shiori baiting has been insane, and the FuwaMoco stuff hasn't done the catalog a lot of favors either.
>Gura
Same old shit, here we go again, but now in surround sound thanks to Miko including her in her live. I just checked the catalog now and theres at least 3 bait threads about it.
>GFE that TEMPISS this [Insert scapegoat of choice] Deflection!
That speaks for itself.
I imagine most people who just want to partake in their own oshi's general are either fed up, annoyed, or just stepping away for a few. It's just the beginning of the month though, we can still try to throw the activity into other places and maybe someone will take a look and want to get involved. Also, as more submissions come in, the more likely someone might want to get involved, since they'll see others having fun with it. We can only go up from here lads.
>Mfw I self motivated myself to want to write some more. I'm gonna mow my damn lawns and then get back to my chapter! There's a hag in a box to be found and saved.

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>>53837839
Here and getting ready to cruise.

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>wins 1v3

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https://files.catbox.moe/fdwg5a.webm

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you kids taking samefagged bait again? sucks to be you eh?

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Can we get more than 42 total posts Or are you all too busy biting on the lowest effort bait threads?

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>>33735619
>Multiply by a million because the majority of people enjoy Tempus
LOL

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>>32985140
>>32986666
lol at the tranny seethe in the replies to these posts
zero arguments too of course

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What does button have on her shield to make it do that

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>>19258950
>get peachone and ebony wings
>above level 8 they combine, giving you another weapon slot
>YOU CAN KEEP UPGRADING THEIR COMBINED FORM

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>biggest EN off-collab yet
>2 hours left for kizuna ai last live
we eating good bros

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>>18660493
I have it installed, I just can't play it yet because of EAC

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>>13241787
Battlefield lion GOOD

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>>9581411
Botan won both the best outfit in Hololive contest as well as being a strong contender for best props, only being contested by the sheep.

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>>9429991
>Since when did you decide that other people will use your margins?
Because it was obvious you would reply like this and pretend that the difference from 15k to 18k is insignificant.
>she just spams minecraft streams, so there are not that much other game streams to look for
So basically the current data is invalid, there is nothing to base a discussion on, and we can let the thread die. Nice

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>>9429150
we cool

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What the fuck is this thread I'm not even sure what you people are mad about at this point.

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