/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>58098877
ah shit.

>>57708359
I always appreciate how responsive you are to the feedback you get. I know I got a little heated and it caused me to do a little introspection of my own and how I read things. I don't intend to come off as frustrated, but some of the ideas you are trying to present like Fauna's psyche momentarily taking control of Civia deserve to be showcased and admired. There's a lot of good surface level mechanics and stuff within the things you're building, so I believe things like that should be expanded and pridefully represented if that makes sense.

If Laplus is so powerful then why is she a big baby that wants milkies and a mommy?
Doesn't that make her a little kid?

>>57173373
Finally read through this, here's my loose thoughts that I had while doing so in no particular order:
Pick a more readable font anon, or at least settle on a normal speech font. I know this has been pointed out but you really should just have a normal workhorse font that does 95% of the work and reserve special fonts and use of stuff like color in text for special stuff. Specifically that fucking Constellation font seems fucking perfect if you're going to stick with the magical girl theme.
Good music choices, really makes the text pop out and have more effect.
Personally I'm not so set on alt!sui's name, kind of feels like she should have the same last name but that's just gut instinct. I feel like it should be, for lack of better words, more vtuber-ish even if she's kind of implied to have a wreck of a channel.
The blank square for default no one talking should probably be fixed, but that's clearly just from this being proof of concept.
>>57187136
I think having this just be a kinetic novel with no choices would be fine... though I'm not gonna lie. A hidden variable tracking Kana's dialogue choices in key events determining if she gets a good or bad ending sounds like it would be a fun way to incorporate player choice even if it's just a binary good or bad ending.
As for the questions, in order:
1/2: Honestly you don't need an anon insert here, I think just having it be Kana (with occasional peeks at what Suisei is doing) would be enough unless you want to actually write anon insert + romance since...
3: If you're doing magical girl stuff it would be kind of weird to have a male reader insert here anyway. I know it was literally thrown in last thread because of ideas getting thrown about but if you really want to write a magical girl story then having it be a personal narrative with Kana (and Suisei) would be for the better. Otherwise I think going the more "conventional" route thrown in the greentexts would be better.
4: Only do stuff like that if you want to commit to the idea. I don't think this would benefit from the additional routes unless you can outline a good reason for a route split. Maybe alternate scenes would be enough if you want to encourage rereading but other than that I can't really see it being worth it.

At least post some more screenshots of her actual 3D so I can jerk off you fucking faggots

>>56054775
damn

>>56044158
What is it about Mori and Suisei that make them the target for incest?

>>56037043
Stop meta posting and ignore it already you fucking faggot

>>55481346
I mean I was thinking of it operating under Back to the Future rules where there is only one timeline with the changes being done 'flowing' retroactively and the reason the kids keep disappearing is because the kids from the corrected timeline don't go back, only the ones from screwed up circumstances who go back seeking answers and seeing the situations of their parents that they think they need to fix. Maybe the ending would be some big fluff moment that shows everyone is still 'real' in the corrected timeline.

>>55129225
Why the fuck should I care about catalogfag stuff?

>>55012428
Stop metaposting

>>54929592
Jesus

>>54579547
Speak for yourself. I'd be clasping my hands together for that eventual reading stream where our greatest masterpieces get to the showcased for potentially 3-4view levels.
>Mfw she straight roasts one of my chapters for something stupid I wrote or how the delivery was fake and gay.

>>54394705
just enjoy it deadbeat

>>54322501
this motherfucker wants to be dominated by big tittied tall women.

>>53034226
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Stop doing this to yourself deadbeat and go take a nap or something

>>52879887
I'm just going to start filtering all images associated with you

>>52408607
This whole hoshibuta thingy made me realize people have no clue how transitivity works.

>>52105692
>all holos that want to play XVI should play all the previous main games first, starting from FF1
This but unironically

>>52051274
...

I was aroused, then I was less aroused

>>50703530
Your logic is literally the reason why they won't leave...like I get that you're the good guys now but please resist the urge to reply to every anti so you can screenshot your mega own.
But go ahead, keep giving them (you)s so they keep coming back.
We're literally going to be stuck in this loop forever aren't we?

people are going to ignore that fauna was on vacation for a while until recently just to try forcing narratives

>>49938072
is this not a general
i thought thats what the extra g stood for