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Didn't read, but I love Mori!

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>>39183423
Mori is happy so I'm happy

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>>37968675
Nice work so far OG. Make sure to continue letting the reader know what's going through Sherah's mind, this is nicely done. You can also try getting across her emotional state through body language. For example, instead of saying Sherah is increasingly nervous, you could say she was fidgeting nervously, I think that tends to be more immersive for the reader. Your writing has gotten noticeably better since you started. I guess Sycamore is about to explain the Risuners need to look within for answers, or something like that?
>>37969918
Airborne? Sounds scary, take it easy.
Also how does a monitor just fry, was there a surge? If yes, buy surge protectors, they're worth it for what they do.

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>>36746485
I had an interesting chat on the topic with hospital Comfy who had views on the benefits of the essentialist perspective.
To clarify, yes, I posit that I had a more constructivist view. I'm not convinced by your argument, I feel like it still folds changing factors into a supposedly static core concept.
But Comfy brought up the practical concern that in a fictional setting, you would always expect a character to keep "something" of themselves, no matter what transformations they might go through. This "something" is undefined and varying per-character, but it's always there, and effectively, I can observe this to be true in all fiction I can think of. While this is a bit intellectually unsatisfying, I can accept this as precedent for defining an unchanging core concept.
>>36746523
>I'm starting to get attracted to vnug boi but for once it's not in a sexual way. Cute motherfucker.
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>>36746856
Me and PG can be pretty unconcise in our discussions, feel free to ask for any clarifications or QRDs! I think relating directly to your system, the main takeaway is that there should probably be some kind of magic glyph involved in the "long distance dream sharing" module.

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