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>>10295308
Officially requesting an FMG story with Fujikura Uruka from Phase Connect. She takes some weird expired cough drops or something and ends up growing hyper muscles bigger than the Hulk. Sudden rush of confidence, tons of flexing and showing off and bragging, especially her biceps and pecs. Optional: Lia and Tenma lusting after her muscles, Pippa doing something that makes Uruka even MORE musclebound for the lulz.

>>10295308
A love triangle prompt involving Ina, Mori and (You).
>You fall in love with the most popular girl in the school, Mori.
>She's talented, beautiful, and you hit it off well with her
>But You realizes that Mori doesn't see you as a romantic option and just treats you as just another "friend", and Mori often has difficulty finding time for you.
>Meanwhile, throughout all this, You befriends a quiet, shy, introverted girl name Ina at the back of the class. You soon realize both of you have a really similar personality and sense of humor and start talking and hanging out every day.
>Mori continues to hang out with her clique of popular kids of school while You and her slowly drift apart
>Mori gets into a big yab and You save her from the incident
>Mori realizes she's in love with You and tries to mend the distanced between you and her. You don't mind but realize you realize you're no longer in love with Mori.
>Regardless, the three of you start hanging out with each other. But it's an tense dynamic - neither Ina or Mori likes one another and are just there for You.
>You realize you have to make a choice. And also realize your newly found, deep feelings for the shy introverted Ina... or reignite the embers of Your past love for Mori.
>Mori continues to be the most popular girl in the school and wins the student council elections to become president. She picks You to be Vice-President, respectively.
>You continue to deepen your bonds with the both of them. But at this point, Mori and You are getting closer due to the student council that Mori's popular clique propagate a "Mori and Anon are dating" rrat amongst themselves and the rest of the school that gives them a reason to bully Ina for being a "homewrecker,". But She still have feelings for You and hasn't given up on You. One night, during a school event, while Your is busy with council stuff, Ina tells Mori that she's going to confess to You and doesn't want her hanging out with You anymore.
>Mori, at first, is taken aback by this but decides to play this off as nothing more than a desperate act and just mocks Ina for thinking You will go out with her.
>That very same night, once the school event is over and all the students are packing up and going home, You are invited (thru text) by Ina to meet at the local park where you and her always hang out
>As you approach the park and reminisce all the times you spent with Ina, You see her in the distant looking out over the pond. There's a period of silence. And you can't be helped but be lovestruck by Ina's beauty, with the moonlight softly illuminating her.. it's almost a dream, almost as if she was some sort of perfect, angelic creature.
>Ina knows You are there, staring at her in silence. She heard you approach. Her heart is beating rapidly through her chest, to the point where she wants to run but she steels herself. She wonders if You realize why she called you here. The cold evening breeze brushes softly against her cheeks, and her bangs fall over her eyes. She shakily moves them aside and turns around, getting a full glimpse of the man she loves.
>She waits. You wait. They both know what's going to happen. It's going to happen. Ina opens her mouth, her throat dry and raspy, palms are sweaty, knees weak, her arms are heavy and before she can mutter the words...
>Mori comes from behind, barreling through some bushes. As those three magic words escape Ina's mouth, Mori says them at the same time.

I think it could make a very interesting Romantic Drama story. Hope one of you writer anons pick it ups.

>>10296427
Oh hey, this prompt is back.
I genuinely hope someone picks it up, it would make for a pretty good story.

>>10296427
>>10296592
It does sound pretty interesting. I'm already working on my own thing, but I kind of want to write you getting into a band with all of holomyth after this, bridging Ina and Mori but forcing you to make a choice too. The others would just be on the side, and I'm not sure how I'd solve the whole triangle, but I guess this is just me wanting to also write holomyth as a band as well.

Is the anon that wrote Omarun is Cute AND Funny still around? I read it last month and liked it a lot but there doesn’t look to be a part 2 and it is pretty far back in the archive for it to be getting updates I worry.

>>10297014
He is, he's just incredibly busy following a string of disasters and some other things. He's still around and has plans to continue.

>>10297014
They were around and mentioned they were still alive a few threads back.

>>10297014
They were here a few threads back when this question was also asked.
That's about as big of a sign as you can get that it's still (probably) being written.

Today's word of the day is...

Clowder n. a group of cats.

>>10295308
Accidentally walking in on Rushia sniffing your clothes

>>10297815
There was no word of the day yesterday.

>>10298205

I will name these interjections 'word of the thread' from now on instead. This is because threads have started exceeding 24hr uptime and having two words of the day (or more) per thread seems both superfluous and absurd to me. That is why there was only one last thread. When I started this, threads were moving quickly so it made sense to label it as I have done at the time.

>>10298448
>seems both superfluous and absurd to me.
There's a word for this attitude. A slimy, repulsive word, loathed by all and uttered only with extreme contempt. Can you tell me what that word is?

>>10298070
why is she crying

I’m thinking of starting a long series that involves a shit ton of chuubas, but have it be sort of shounen anime style where most of the characters are side characters and only appear at one point in the story then maybe right at the end, with only a few main characters (love interest, rival, sidekick, etc.).
I’d like to make it a mix of chuubas from all sorts of places, not just hololive, so nijisanji, 774, maybe a few indies and more. Obviously this means there will be a lot of chuubas readers won’t know about, which is why I’ll try giving the characters enough depth and charm so that you don’t need to watch the actual chuuba to like the character.

What’s everyone’s thoughts on this? Not about whether I should write it or not, but more just what everyone thinks of the idea.

>>10300389
>not just hololive
around >75% of /wg/ are hololive-only watchers, sadly. Just that alone would make the fic a harder sell for other /wg/ anons to read.

>>10300389
Reckless ambition is the greatest bane to actually getting anything done.

>>10300389
Anon, the scope of this project is enormous. Far be it from me to be pessimistic, but in this case I think it would be doing you a disservice not to discourage you.

>>10300824
I think that might be the biggest hurdle to overcome, but I really don't want to stay in the confines of hololive. I want to write about other chuubas, so like I said I'll have to work on making their characters interesting even if you don't watch them; they can sort of be treated like an OC if you don't know said chuuba. It might even encourage some readers to branch out, who knows.
>>10301769
>>10301826
Well, when I said shounen anime I wasn't talking One Piece levels of length. It'll be long but probably would only end up being 150,000 words total as a ballpark estimate (really ballpark, this is just a loose idea with no semblance of story at the moment), maybe a little more. Besides, I'm feeling a little extra motivated lately.

>>10302543
>they can sort of be treated like an OC
Anonchama...

>>10189339
To the Anon that wrote Girl-boss Watson in the previous thread, it was a pretty good third chapter. incredibly excited to see where things go especially with that cliffhanger.

{spoiler]Pretty weirded out by Anon's knowledge of pop culture. Like he's supposed to be this old veteran of the MTF back when the foundation was still around but if the voice of narration is Anon, then the fact that he's making these references is pretty weird. Maybe if you put some scenes or references of what Anon does on his off time then him making those references wouldn't be as weird
On the whole /k/ faggotry thing, I actually really like that you decided to integrate it into his personality. Like instead of it just being the narration, it's now in his dialogue so it's become a part of him. Also really like Anon and Pekora gushing over guns like a bunch of nerds which is cool. Could use a bit less peko in her sentences though
I feel like Anon and Pekora got along a little too fast which is a little weird. Felt like it would be better if you spaced it out or maybe make it so that the entire scene happened after a couple meetings. Like put the whole "Amelia getting jealous" scene after you've established a rapport between Anon and Pekora. On the scene itself, I really liked it. It was really cute and very fun to read.
The whole using "Tenet" to blow up the grenade twice was pretty cool. I'm actually excited how you're gonna use it creatively in the future.
I also agree with what the other Anon said in terms of your /k/ faggotry in the fight scene in the end. It felt like you were trying too hard into making Anon cool instead of just showing it. The "Tenet" thing was cool. Saying: "While anybody with a double-digit IQ can throw a grenade, it’s not so easy to have it land precisely behind the makeshift cover your enemies hide behind." was not. Trust that your audience can infer that your character is cool with just their actions instead of purposefully showing attention to it. But I'm glad that you're at least toning it down from previous chapters.[/spoiler]

>>10302646
Anon your spoiler reps.

>>10302646
your spoiler reps

>>10302622
Nah don't get me wrong, I'm still going to use the chuuba's character traits and speech patterns, but I don't expect the readers to watch every chuuba mentioned before reading so they're obviously not going to know a lot of the non-hololive characters. Meaning they can just treat the chuuba they don't know as a character just in this story since they haven't watched them at all.

>>10302543
Motherfucker 150k words is a fantasy brick. It would be as much of a task to make sure nobody is reduced to clipfag bait, than actually write the damn thing. I'm trying not to belittle your idea but you seem like you're not only way out of your depth, but you're so far out of it that you don't even understand what you're doing.

>>10302543
>150k words
Jesus Christ anon unless you're like a super autist you are probably hilariously over estimating your own interest and capability in writing something that long.
Cause at minimum something like that would take months, and that's being generous.

>>10302710
We hurt you because we love you. Nobody can stop you, though, so if you do decide to start on this... all we can say at that point is good luck.

>>10302682
>>10302683
Whoops my bad

>>10302543
>>10302800
150k words is literally longer than most starting fantasy books. Like I won't stop you cause I know there are people out there who writes fanfics that long and I've read fanfics longer than that but that's just asking to burn yourself out. Though I am curious, which chuubas are you gonna focus on?

>>10302710
Honestly you know what.
Do it.
You want to make the great vtuber fanfic, I'll read it.
Show your ambition.

>>10302800
>>10302839
>>10302940
Oh I absolutely agree, this is a fucking pipe dream and is extremely unrealistic. If I do end up gaining enough autism to do this it'll take ages, not to mention I have other WIPs and life commitments. It's even possible that this general might not be around long enough for me to finish it.
If we think about the word count though, I don't think it's all that unrealistic. My current series stands at about 50k words and isn't even finished, and I've written a few other long fics to add to that word count as well, so I don't think it's that big of a jump to 150k.
As for chuubas I'm going to focus on, I'm not sure yet. I watch quite a few chuubas outside of hololive (admittedly not that many indies), and I just know that I want variety. Some chuubas I've already started imagining scenes for are Hal, Rene, Rosemi, Towa and Gorilla just to name a few.
>>10303030
>>10302866
Still a maybe because this is a stupid idea, and if I do decide to start it it'll be a while from now. Thank you for the motivation though.

>>10303669
>Hal, Rene, Rosemi, Towa and Gorilla

been watching Apex stuff lately buddy?

>>10303876
Huh, now that you mention it four out of five of them do play it a lot. But like I said, that's just naming a few. I have a lot in mind.

>>10295271
Damn, Meno, are you over 50? Because you look like you're in Menopause

>>10299332
You didn't come home early

>>10304921

Bed

>>10307480
...is where I want to take that fox.

I miss Hololive before EN was a thing. Before Coco speaking English wasn't her main trait. Man, do I miss the golden age of Hololive.

>>10307203
Gura and You fifth and sixth wheeling while the rest of HoloMyth go on a group date! Pretending to date each other as a joke on the rest of the girls. One of you accidentally catches feelings!

>>10307784
Gone and not coming back. If you want to point fingers... it's the fault of EOPs. It always is.

Niggersanji is mostly untainted by their vile touch, despite their hilariously desperate attempts to change that. You might find solace in the JP side.

What do you think about isekai? Some consider it a "lesser" genre, like supernatural female-oriented romance about vampires/werewolves, made purely for mindless entertainment. On the other hand, literally anything that has The Hero's Journey at its core will have a form of "other world" in it.

>>10308097
Isekai when done right is pretty good. The only problem is only a handful of series do it right compared to the oceans of absolute shit you have to wade through to find them.

>>10308159
Given the diversity of the Hololive JP+EN, would it be possible to construct a world that would feature all of them with as little shoehorning as possible (basically HoloALT)?
I guess EN2 would have to be thrown under a bus because you can't really stack catgirls/doggirls and cosmic concepts.

>>10302646
>150k words
Nigga that's longer than Moby Dick

>>10302646
Author here. Okay, I think I'm really starting to understand what's cringe now, thanks dude. I'm still working on writing better, so it's a process. I'm really happy people notices lots of the minor details, things like Anon being pretty hip will come back later, I've also explained the amount of 'peko' in the last thread. I guess everyone is kinda divisive on the /k/ thing, not everyone hate it which is nice, but I won't go into so much detail specifically on guns anymore.
Overall, I think this is the weakest chapter so far, I was struggling a bit with every aspect of all scenes. The pacing is a bit off and Pekora doesn't feel that natural, but I didn't want to edit and rewrite the whole chapter multiple times since I'll never be satisfied with it. Hopefully the minor issues are acceptable and I'll move on to make the future chapters better, or at least the same quality.

>>10302543
>Holofantasy barely breaches 100k words
>150k
Godspeed.

>>10302543
Wow, 150k words? If you think you’re up to the task go ahead, personally I like to read everything this thread produces so you can be sure that you’ll be writing for at least one guy

Are there any stories which actually represent Ayame's personality accurately... at all? Or is it all just OC?

>>10318911
Ayame has a personality?

>>10319499
Rushia cutting boar-
Rushia boing boing!
Kanata Gorilla!
Marine horny!
Fubuki is cat
Bottom left

Haha I see we share the same humor my friend, so I decided to give you these funny memes too

>>10308623
Considering the chain of replies this came from, I assume this is for an Isekai?
Then yes, and you don't even need to throw off EN2 as unless you completely fall for the Isekai meme you don't have to have it be a fucking progression fantasy where Your Protagonist goes into fantasy world beating up incrementally stronger bad guys while dicking through every Holomember.
The dumb power levels for everyone really doesn't have to fucking matter as long as you don't focus on that shit but on the actual bits people would want, by which I mean if you focus on characters, fluff, etc; rather than on some Isekai action no one would really fucking want.
To simplify, it could probably work as long as you don't make it a standard fucking Isekai fantasy but something more character focused like I dunno a fucking harem fic.

>>10321865
>standard isekai
>not wish fulfilment harem fanfiction
It literally is a lesser genre because it relies on explicit cheating or implicit cheating (Earth knowledge) to solve problems, and anyone who can "write it well" wouldn't be doing it in the first place. >>10308097

>>10314364
NTA but damn Holofantasy is that long? In that case I can easily see it reaching 150k because it’s not finished and the latest chapter was like 30k words.

>>10323479
No, Isekai isn't a lesser genre because of the cheating but because of the fact that a lot of shit is so fucking derivative that it feels like they're all a fanfic of something that doesn't exist but has the all the standard Isekai shit.
It's a lesser genre entirely due to the large amounts of shit work and not due to anything conceptually.

>>10302710
>>10302800
Are correct character traits and what not really all that important though? Some of what's considered the best stories in the archive have chuubas that act nothing like their actual selves so that they can fit the story. Take menhera wrangler and Kintsugi for example. The author of MW depicted some of the personalities pretty accurately, but a lot of the characters (even the ones that aren't crazy) act nothing like the chuubas themselves. In Kintsugi, Mio may as well be an OC because I cannot see any similarities between the Mio on stream and the Mio in the story. But everyone still loved these stories, so is there any point?

>>10295308
Kiara masturbating to the thought of herself always being in her anti's heads while posting rrats about herself.

>>10325584
A good story can be carried on how it plays out even if some of the personalities suffer a bit for it. The inverse can be said as well; a story which may be kind of "eh" can be carried by the characters being deeply entertaining and faithful. A magnificent story does both. I'd say it depends a LOT on how the actual story plays out.

>>10308097
Pretty much what this >>10308159 Anon said. But i don't think that Isekai is exceptionally difficult to get right, rather it's just that Isekai is a lightning rod for shit writers. Being transported to another world which you effortlessly dominate is like the most commonly relatable fantasy there is in present time. So it just attracts all the cringe writers with negative points in the creativity department to write it. It's like their containtment genre. Just ask yourself the question of "Is writing an Isekai really relevant to plot? Or can I just write a different setting and nothing would change?" If your setting survives that question, you could probably write a good isekai

>>10308623
Probably, but shoehorning will be needed. The genres their characters belong to is all over the place, I can't see any way to make them ALL naturally fit together

>>10325871
Well there is a pretty lazy/obvious way to get them to all fit in, that of course being the harem fic where they're lusting for (You) and natural arc being catching them all and making them yours.
The only problem being that I am cringing even just suggesting that even if I would have a guilty fap to the premise of having them all.

>>10320542
t. never watched ayame

>>10328108
Ayame has more personality than you'll ever have. You're just mad because she can make more money than you'll make in a lifetime without even trying and has 50 anime girl friends to fuck.

>>10329394

>>10329394
Hi Ayame

>>10325871
Isekai also is tied toward the entire "Changeling Fantasy" as well. Which is to say the entire "Well it turns out you were at a very early age taken away from X and now that it's revealed you have powers/are royalty/actually from a famous family/etc"

>>10332139
Eh.
Not really. I guess you could see the reincarnation type isekais as kind of changelin fantasies but for the most part the japanese isekai is very much about a japanese teen/something a teen can insert to going to fantasy world.
For the most part their identity as a part of 'our' world is pretty central to their identities. They don't become something of the world they go to but bring in themselves to the new world.
The fantasy kind of relies on them being an ordinary person from our world.

>>10332139
Yeah, it's a lot of minor things like this that add up. Wanting to be someone who's better than you, wanting to escape from this world, wanting to fucking die and be released from your responsibilities with no way back, wanting to be born with better circumstances, wanting to be born talented/attractive, wanting to be born with good parents, wanting to be someone important who can effect the world, wanting a harem. It's like you can tell what problems an author faces irl by reading their manga. Also notice how rare it is for the mc to just join a group of bros on an adventure. Atleast bros that share your interests are easy to find

>>10333668
>They don't become something of the world they go to but bring in themselves to the new world
Isekai was the colonialist fantasy all along

>>10333728
I mean there is also the trend chasing angle where new isekai shit follows the flow and steals shit from other isekais, kind of like what >>10325871 is saying; isekai kind of attracts and refines the shit that flows to it till it becomes a part of the general fantasy. The lack of male peers could be seen as insecurities of the author but it could also be seen as trendchasing harem shit because the screen time a male has takes up time where a cute girl could be in.

You should stop talking and pay attention to me because I don't like this topic.

>>10335282
Who the fuck are you?

>>10335500
Risu

>>10335715
Oh. Come back when you're somebody interesting.

>>10335911
Hey, we treat treerat with a little more respect than that around here. Watch yourself.

>>10336180
"goes on /vt/" isn't a personality

>>10336324
Risu is Risu you damn FOOL!

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Writeanons, do you ever have trouble getting off to your own smut? At that point you wonder if it's any good since even you can't get turned on by it. But then it sometimes feels like you're looking at it too critically when you reread it instead of enjoying it. And as much as someone can tell you to keep doing your reps to improve, don't you ever get discouraged knowing nothing can be perfect?

>>10342044
yeah, i've never looked at my smutfics once since writing them

>>10342044
I've only written one smut so I can't really answer your first question, but as for your second no not really. I don't want to make a perfect story, I just want to make a story better than my last. That's it.

>>10342044
I've written a few but I can't exactly get off to them(barring one), perhaps due to the fact that I had to put in a ton of work to get the story out in the first place, and even in re-reading them I'm more focused on whether there's any mistakes and other self critique which is a genuine cockblock. I can only gauge its quality by how other anons bust their nuts to it.

>>10342044
I started writing my smutfics because no one wanted to write the prompts they were based on but as a result, I couldn't get off to them because it felt kinda awkward for me.

>>10344487
Damn bro, that actually sounds rough. I guess it's harder for a writer to enjoy a smutfic they wrote compared to something else they wrote.

>>10342044
For all the smut I've written I've never once been able to get off to it.

>>10346017
It's still fun to write though, eh?

>>10346147
NTA but actually no. I don't get off to my own smut and I don't really have fun writing it. I... I just do. Holy shit...what am I doing with my life?

>>10346147
Sometimes. Sometimes I'm really into it and feel it in my veins (Matsuri's Baby Carrot and Disastrously Tight Ass is one such example), other times it's...just because I feel like I should.

>>10346183
>>10346243
why do you even write smut then? i find it great

>>10346147
NTA but it's fun to write about chuubas which is why I do it.

>>10342044
My smut makes my weewee go weewoo. Only I know exactly how I want the mass of muscle and bone before me to flex it's tendons around my erectile tissue. I write because no one else out there can get into my head and know exactly what my tastes are. It's all the benefits of a loving relationship with a partner you trust deeply, who knows you inside out, except it's just me and my hand

>>10295284
https://rentry.co/392tn

Chapter 4 of Detective Watson and Inspector Anon! Please let me know how the story progression feels and if there's anything I need to work on regarding that!

Criticism is greatly appreciated as always!

>>10333852
That's only when the Isekai shifts into the "Uplift" subgerere when MC is the Enlightened Colonist who raises the Heaten Barbarians into the light of the Proper World.

>>10333728
I wonder if the entire "No Bros" mindset often ties a worry about the possibility of the MC being viewed as gay if they're not being rewarded with a woman/women/a harem.
After all wanting to hang out with guys instead of DESIGNATED HORNY FEMALE(s) might not come off as being 100% Hetero to those wanting the pure power fantasy.

>>10295308
Botan has to get the rest of Gen 5 back home after a night of drinking as she's the only sober one and thus designated driver. This turns out to be far harder than it sounds

>>10346286
Tough to say. Originally I started writing because there were no stories about my Oshi (Risu) and I wanted to make her presence known. After that, well... maybe something something give and take. I really don't find destroying my sleep schedule and body staying up till 5Am to write fun (it's the only time of day I feel like doing it). I'm an art anon, I like drawing. But writing? It's just eh... yet I still do it just because?

Also I can neither get off to my own smut nor art and I'll always call you a freak of you can, coming from the world of art you're NOT NORMAL.

>>10346380
>It's all the benefits of a loving relationship with a partner you trust deeply, who knows you inside out, except it's just me and my hand

>>10346383
It's still pretty good. Only real complaint is it's kind of a bit too short to really have anything to say about it, but given that you've kept up a schedule of releasing a new chapter every weekend I kind of can't really complain about it. It's good but kind of a bit short.

>>10346431
>Risu
I have to ask which risu story did you make?

>>10348312
None. I started one but never finished it.

A small bump before bed. Why the fuck did I stay up all night playing a randomizer FUCK

>>10295308
More fics about beating the absolute shit out of Matsuri. Her new outfit is reawakening my need to beat the impurity out of her.

>>10346383
Alright, things are starting to ramp up and I'm excited to finally get to the meat of the story especially with confirmation that Anon's dream wasn't just a regular dream. Still a little confused on how commonplace knowledge of the supernatural is but other than that it's fine

Might have been a good idea to specify where they were going and where the crime scene was because I was very confused when they went into the morgue which was also the funeral services as well as the crime scene
It might also be a good idea to add more descriptions or paragraphs of location and movement because it can be pretty jarring when the characters are in a new area with only a single sentence detailing that they are but with your goal of writing a chapter every week it's understandable.

I hope whatever you have planned for the story is good after all this setup because I wanna see what you have in store for us. Keep it up man

>>10342044
It's not even overthinking where I could do better, I just can't get into it. Everything I've tried to write for my own enjoyment was unironically better in my head.

Smut writers... I love you all.

Now, which to jerk off to...

>>10353173
Whatever you tell, make sure you describe the process in detail so the author knows what you liked.

where's Omelas guy? I'm craving new content. Did people bully him off a few threads ago to what?

yo incestanon
i just murdered millions of unborn children to your magnum opus again

specifically it was "This continued on for a few minutes, Fubuki twitching against you while you give small thrusts to empty out the last of your load in her."

the idea of wrapping her in my arms, pressing against and into this stupidly cute fox as she lets out small gasps and twitches in response to the warm liquid she's getting pumped into her is just.... it's a real fucking 'chef's kiss' thought, i can tell you that

>>10355945
Their last post added to their omelas anon directory was the scplike file for watame labelled "Lamb", given that on the main archive it has a sequel for written regarding Ina and their own directory hasn't updated for that.
There's two possibilities, either they fucked off from the thread, or they've dropped the name.
Probably the first since there hasn't really been anything I can pin to their writing style posted recently

>>10355945
Wait, why would people want to bully him off ? Isn't Omelas one of the most liked story here ?

>>10356869

>>10358062
iirc he was very unreceptive to feedback on his later scp works and that caused some discord. whether he was "bullied off" though i'm not sure of because it's not like he gets trashed every time he's brought up

>>10358182
what does this symbolise

>>10358218
Idk...

>>10358304
huh? are you incestanon reacting poorly to feedback or some other bloke?

>>10356869
I think I'm starting to lose my memory because I didn't remember I wrote anything that remotely hot until I went back to my docs. Thanks for the compliments friend. Maybe I should get off my lazy ass and start writing again. Last thing I wrote was Kurofoxbday and that was like 2 weeks ago.

>>10358491
yeah i get you. it's just y'know

you COULD be productive, write stories for the thread, study for exams, work hard and show off to upper management and lead a fruitful and fulfilling life

or you could play video games and watch vtubers

dunno 'bout you, but i've been doing an awful lot of the latter

>>10358367
No he's right here! >>10358491

>>10358182
>>10358304
Are you perhaps saddened that he did not say that about your own fic, anon?

>>10361077
I'm not sure... I feel like what he said is a bit too much but if it was my story maybe I wouldn't think this way?

Any new cute, heartwarming stories here? Smut is optional.

>>10362978
just ctrl+f your favourite chuuba and the tag fluff in the archive, anon.

>>10362978
yeah there's this really cute ayame fluff that was written recently called Porcelain Doll, give it a read
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTV0R5weq8ELwIlovvLY7orHMWnw8-O_hYgQSKOZTrJjngbrD-h-L4x-rVbXiujdO9IsSq1GFvQmD5J/pub

>>10362978
My personal favorite at the moment is "One of Many Thousands"

>>10362978
Newer stories are towards the bottom of the archive so start there and like the other anon said just use ctrl + f "fluff".

>>10346863
I’ll try to write more next time, sorry! It was about 3 AM when I finished writing, so that was a big contributor to how brief this chapter was. Instead of cutting myself off to Friday and the few hours after it, I’ll just get it done during the weekend and not push myself to submit something that short again (if I can help it).

>>10351550
Sorry about how confusing the morgue segment was! I was a bit loopy writing that part, and I definitely should have done some more explaining now that I read back on it. I’ll try to do a better job of fleshing out locations in the next chapter!

>>10363584
Oh wow, you're cunt
And I'm gullible, so what do I know

>>10365174
did you enjoy the fluffy ayame story anon

>>10365332
Eh, felt kinda sick to my stomach with all that violence and murders, but I got an idea

Impostor syndrome Ayame meets (you) who doesn't treat her like a porcelain doll - talks normally, kicks her ass creativity-wise and in vidya. She actually has to learn to lose, learn to learn and not to just rely on talent and cuteness.
Ayame is kind of torn inside - she's glad to have you around to remind her she isn't a doll, but something inside her wants to go back to times where she could get whatever she wants without lifting a finger. She feels extremely guilty about it.
Something-something you help Ayame accept that desire and say that even if she eventually beats you at X, it won't cause her distress as you both know she worked hard to do it.
A teary-eyed farewell would be great as well. She gets back into streaming with renewed resolve, and (you) keep contact with her management and check up on her sometimes, from afar - she doesn't need your lessons and your presence anymore.
Optional teary-eyed reunion scene, as Ayame tracked (you) down by herself.

>>10365174
I've never read or heard of that story but I instantly knew there was no chance that was actually a fluff fic. You're really gullible, Anon

>>10363584
Is there even any Ayame fluff in the archive? Or is it all just abuse and niggers?

>>10366631
lots of abuse, but no niggers as far as i'm aware. someone care to change that?

>>10366494
You gonna write it?

>>10366631
There’s definitely a few, we just haven’t had any in a while.

>>10366513
Haven't been on 4chong for a while. Forgot about having to look things up before going in.
>>10366802
Lmao no, I can only write beginnings of stillborn crossovers/regurgitations of media I happened to consume, with self-insert main character and others having less complexity than furniture
I'd ask for this one to be written by Exposure Therapy anon, as he would know a lot more about how to approach this prompt, but I get a feeling he got his hands full already.

>>10367117
Well, now that you’ve requested a particular writeanon I think your chances of getting it picked up have significantly decreased

Stay motivated, writeanons.

>>10367802
Eh, no matter, it wouldn't have been picked up anyways

>>10367814
Motivation Peko I just slept in until 5pm I think I'm fucked

Well, takamori is kill. RIP to at least two projects I had in the works.

>>10375551
What?

>>10375629
Kiara's most recent stream, during her superchat readings said she was pretty much done with takamori but that that the are still friends.

>>10375779
ooh thank fucking god no more forced lesbian shenans
If you're still into it, you can still write about it - it still happened and is part of the zeitgeist surrounding the two, you don't need to let that dissuade you.

>>10375948

I understand what you mean but it's not really the same now, at least not for me. Would feel weird to continue writing about it unfortunately.

>>10375779

One more for the road then

Kusatori request. Mori is tired of chimkin's whiny shit and finally agrees to fuck her. Mori's flaccid cock is bigger than a telephone pole stretching her like a living condom, and after she finally crams it in chimkin, her cock grows fully hard, bigger than a skyscraper inside her, and she busts a few octillion nuts and cumflates her before chimkin bursts with Mori's cum across the far reaches of the universe. She revives, of course, but knows her place afterwards.

>>10375779
I HAVEN'T HAD A DUB THIS BIG IN A WHILE LETS GOOOOOOO

>>10375779
>>10376271
I mean it was always kayfabe, with fanfiction just playing into it. If you were into it I don't see why Takamori no longer being pushed as hard by Kiara should affect that.
Admittedly Kiara pulling out of pushing it so hard kind of kills the dynamic as it is currently. So I can kinda see why you'd put those works on hold.

>>10381549

>I mean it was always kayfabe

Post-Japan sure, but when they were there together I think it was legit. That's the impression I got anyhow. Idk, I might do a completely different "break up" one shot about them instead.

>>10375779
idk I think the main reason why people liked it so much was because it was the classic "gothy butch girl x peppy cheerleader"

>>10382541
That was definitely a large part of the appeal, sure.

>>10382503
I mean I was always in the "this is forced yuribaiting" camp for Takamori but you do you. We can never truly know what's beyond kayfabe outside of what they themselves say so all fanfics effectively live in a large zone I call "Interpreted Characterization" for a large majority of what's being written about them. So if you saw them as actually legit together back then, I can also kind of see it in a way since Mori did attempt to reciprocate.

>>10383223
It always rubbed me the wrong way that Kiara kinda forced that ship onto Calli and her calling off the ship now just made my impression of her even worse. It feels like she was just using Calli and is now throwing her away. I guess it is true. Orange woman bad.

>Pg. 9 after 40 minutes
Jesus Christ.

>>10385553
Yeah boards been much faster than usual these days for some reason.
Doesn't help that /wg/ activity is down... but given that this also corresponds with the low effort shitstirrers leaving that isn't necessarily bad.

>>10383223
TakaMori was always since day 1 corporate mandated. They may have liked each other a bit more afterwards but it's still forced. The OkaKoro "we've gone beyond kissing" was fake, they admited it. Then there's PekoMiko, they are 100% best friends, the kind you have for life, but nothing more. Haachama and Watame.... I miss that, but it was never meant to be. Festivaluna, that was real but Matsuri fucked it up really bad. Noel and Flare is kind of real, there's not much doubt about it, but how far they go is beyond me. I don't think they be out there scissoring, maybe just a couple kisses here and there. I think that's about it.

>>10295284

Takamori - No More

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSG7-S4T_MTQ8gzeNgF__clhuK4KVg7aIrQrZ4Je7n4ffTuSgfDt5kbuxyTxhj3uZk_ROfvW7H0oM6x/pub

Written in the spur of the moment so forgive the short word count. Goodnight all.

Tags : Tragedy, Mori, Kiara, SFW

>>10386695
Eh, for takamori specifically I think it was like something they workshopped with management predebut and tried to make work... only to just have it naturally fizzle out after Kiara left JP such that the natural distance made whatever might have grew out of the forced yuribait phase just go back to a normal friendship.
...
Would probably make a good fic.

>the season doesn't make any sense for the climax and resolution
>have to rework everything from the start
>fug

>>10387443
This could probably have used a couple more minutes in editing to smooth out some of the lines. Narration doesn't really feel fitting Kiara and the dialogue's kind of just mediocre.
Still it is pretty decent for what could have taken at most like 3-4 hours of the news breaking.

Post your favourite:
1. Smut
2. Fluff
3. Abuse
4. Comedy

I'll start:
1. MINNA NO RAMEN
2. She's not horny, she's lonely
3. Punch whore
4. Chuuba taker

>>10387443
Nice and short read. Even without fitting all the build-up to the confrontation, describing the stress and aversion before it was good. Internal narration felt raw and not clunky. Some nitpicking - the "All things ...quick transition" line feels just a bit off using transition twice so close. Other than that, feels like it could be a really nice part to a larger story, but it works well like this too.

>>10346383
- I think its fine that there's a shorter chapter before our first major encounter. Naming another character is interesting - could be something worthwhile if the Sergeant keeps appearing with this case and more. Only bad thing that stood out was this line "thoughts which threaten to think about creepy things" - feels like it could be more eloquently put, but otherwise it was a nice and short chapter!

>>10295284
Omega origin story. Feedback is appreciated.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT-jkAUGbvERVU4ADNKnFKgiYAKnbvevgu1YmqPL6Ru7GA56HyuNp6PK54vrjBIhShPW2wKUgegdJXn/pub

Tags: Amelia, Kronii, Omega

>>10295284
Idk what this is don't ask me. I haven't eaten all day so I felt like writing this.

The sounds of scratching could be heard all over the house. Nails on steel, slashing and bashing. Screams of pain for so long you'd wonder how their voice still works at this point. It was the usual routine for Mio and Fubuki, halfway through the week of the hunger of an Oni. Ayame, having to abstain from human flesh ever since she was bound by a soul contract into joining Hololive, had these hunger fits almost every week. The pleasure of the hunt and the feast afterwards, it's something an Oni simply can't stay without, not without terrible side effects.
> hungry...hungry hungry HUNGRY!
A knock on the door breaks her out of her screaming.
> Ayame? I brought you food.
It was Mio, behind the several inches thick door of reinforced steel. She opens up a little hatch and slides in a plate with a slab of meat on it. Before she can even close the hatch again, Ayame lunges forward at the door, ignoring the meat falling to the ground which clearly wasn't anything more than cow, her arm fits right into the opening grabbing Mio by the hair and pulling with all her might. It did not matter that she was her friend, right now she was a feast to be had.
> A-Ayame! Let go!
Mio grabs the arm and places her foot against the door, struggling to get out of her grip. It hurt a lot, Mio was screaming in pain, her fine fur simply wasn't giving in and Ayame was pulling her more and more. Fubuki came rushing down the stairs to the basement.
> Ayame!
The fox unsheathed her blade and cut off Mio's hair, releasing her from the Oni's grasp. Mio falls back into the ground and Fubuki tries to close the hatch, getting major slash wounds on her arms and clothes. She stabs her sword through Ayame's hand and pulls it out immediately after, which caused the demon to pull back in pain. The hatch is closed and locked. Ayame screams and begins punching at the door with all her might, so loud it almost feels like she will actually break it down.
> FUBUKIIIII!! OPEN THIS DOOR! OPEN IT RIGHT NOW!
Fubuki ignores the screaming and looks at Mio on the ground, she has her hands on her face, sobbing. Then the pain came rushing in, claw marks all over her arms, one on her chest and even her cheek, blood was quickly pouring out of the wounds, staining her slashed clothes and pooling down at the ground. The sight of Fubuki covered in blood makes Mio stand up to help her, and they both rush upstairs to get patched up. Ayame licks her wound, and then her claws, tasting the fresh blood of the fox maiden. A heavily maniacal laughter begins to echo through the halls, Ayame laughs as she claws away at her own face, the tears won't stop trickling down. The laughing turns to screaming, pure despair in her voice. The realization sinks in as to what she just did. This continues on for hours, screaming and crying from the Oni. Once she finally stops, Ayame crawls towards the slab of meat on the ground, covered in dirt. She eats it through dry tears, like a beast that can't control itself, ripping it to shreds with her sharp teeth.
> Just one more week... and then I can stream again. I can... I can do this...
She lays down on the cold concrete floor, the smell of moss and metal is the only thing that fills her nose. Finally, she falls asleep.

>>10391450
Damn bro, dark. I like it, give me more

>>10391450
Strangely enough I do like it conceptually. Would love to see it expanded, or for more of the concept to be done to other holos restraining their 'natural instincts'.

>>10398661
Source?

Is the anon writing that expanded flare amnesia mystery fic still here? I just remembered it and want to know if you're still working on it.

>>10358188
the only thing I've seen about him being "not receptive to feedback" is some anon obsessively insisting that this is so because he was using codes instead of numbers, I'm not exaggerating.
>>10358062
bunch of circlejerking about how omelas was the only good story and even that went worse due to high concept bullshit, and the rest is just straight terrible

>>10400771
hello omelasguy

hey anon, Im gonna put this into a gdoc for archiving. Do you have a preference for the name?

>>10391450
hey anon, Im gonna put this into a gdoc for archiving. Do you have a preference for the name?

>>10400771
Eh in fairness Omelas (the orignal) was only good because of the initial concept of fubuki emotionally abusing and neglecting You and not because of the other stuff like the near future setting or the dumb magic present in the actual omelas sequels.

>>10401631
Basically, yeah. The guy fluked a good story and that's really obvious if you read all his other stuff.

>>10401579
Instincts of tamed beasts, I guess.

>>10401851
done. Its a good piece of work anon, there's the minor grammar/ consistency issues inevitable when writing directly to the thread but overall its like an 8/10 imo.
>>10295284
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSIVLHcUP0tfQH8pPtygyoqz7VBe1gKBaxyerDQDPHqgD7bfAWZ74pNRPLTpM59LS-2M0XqTxvN9d7l/pub

>>10399015
369489/4/

>>10401963
Idk why short stories get so much attention. I made that in 10 minutes there's barely any effort in it... more eyes I suppose.

>>10297014
Happy you found it enjoyable. I'm still around, yeah, and I have full intention of continuing that story. Got a lot things keeping me out of the mindset to write consistently and frankly also distracted by a lot of spur of the moment prompts since then that put me in a position where I have 3 open projects.

But it'll get done, just need some more time.

>>10400890
meds

>>10401833
people went batshit for the suisei one too

>>10403080
Shorter works like these are, for lack of a better word, polarizing.
They're short and easy to 'get' so that a comment is easy to make for it compared to something larger and harder to digest. Not to mention the fact that being in thread means it's not a click away but literally just there.

>>10406631
Also means that it'll get the entire thread audience rather than just people interested in reading that fic. I'll never click on anything HoloEN, but if it's posted in the thread, then I'll probably give it a once-over out of interest just because it's there

>>10406882
Oh yeah that's also a relevant factor. Pretty sure the last fic that got posted via straight up posting like this was the Fubuki cancer one.
Kind of showed the power inherent in that since I would have stopped giving a shit about it past the second part if it was updating its google doc but I kept reading it as it was posted since it's right there.
I mean I started to hate it since the author seemed to want to stretch it out even if the shock value has run its course but well that's something from the writing not the format.

>>10406882
Why don't you like HoloEN?

>>10389444
1. Marathon sex with friend
2. Play in the rain and you’ll get wet
3. Don’t read abuse
4. Dramatic Miopost

>>10389444
1. Luna's assistant
2. Don't read fluff
3. Don't read abuse
4. Don't read comedy

>>10407523
Because you touch yourself at night.

Feels like armpit sex is hard to convey in text. I guess it's one of those "focus on the person's reactions" type of things but I dunno.
Bump.

>>10409131
>armpit sex
I just... I can't. I just can't anymore. The more I learn everyday, the less I feel I know.

>>10409156
What, you've never seen an arms up Pic of your oshi showing off her sweaty, smooth armpits and thought "I... I want to rub my cock there. I want her to close her arm down so I can thrust against it and cum against it"? Come on, Anon! Every part of your oshi is something to be sexualized

>>10408028
Cringe

>>10409231
I can't say I have, no. What I think is: that probably smells.

>>10409131
I mean, it's not much different than a paizuri honestly. The receiver gets no pleasure, it's a sweaty hole not meant to be fucked, and they can basically only tighten it up.

>>10409277
Pussies smell way more anon. Also have you been living under a cave? Wait till you hear about hairjobs or earfucking then.

How do you guys feel about a smut from the chuuba's view where she's looking back fondly at how you got together after a chance meeting at a retreat or the like? Would read a bit like a letter to you about the past. I'm wondering if describing how she feels during fucking would be something you could get off to. Even if it's not, she could be describing how much pleasure you seemed to be in, how good it felt for the both of you. I imagine there must be a few stories in the archive like this, but I haven't come across them myself. Any thoughts or stories that involve this kind of shtick?

>>10409625
>I'm wondering if describing how she feels during fucking would be something you could get off to
This is almost exclusively what I envision anyway, so yeah, totally. My partner's pleasure is way more important to me than my own. Sounds fucking hot, but at the same time, it wouldn't be hot if you were describing all of Anon's sensations, like his breath growing ragged or twitching as he busts.
If you can avoid turning into an otomefic, then that sounds awesome.

>>10409625
My own pleasure is the only thing that really matters so I don't care about this concept. Female orgasms aren't real anyway so why even bother?

>>10409277
Don't look up eye peneration

>>10410263
That sounds like exactly what the tin reads, but okay, I won't.

>>10409597
I know these things exist, I just don't understand them. Nor am I looking to do so.

>>10410402
I mean, it's the same as anal to me. That hole was never meant to be fucked, it's a disgusting shitpipe that is biologically made so that nothing enters it, only stuff leaves. Yet, some people like to fuck it. If you can understand anal, then armpits and other holes are fair game.

>>10410657
Yeah, I can see where you're coming from there. I too think all sodomites should be eradicated from society. As the bearer of a degenerate fetish, though, you should do the right thing and end yourself.

>>10410767
Futa loli rape trap bestiality exhibitionism worm hole eye penetration mind fuck tailjob wingjob feetjob gokkun cum follow . Just the way I like it

>>10409131
I think it's like any of those 'not really sex' sex acts where the focus is on the psychology, your mind as you stick your dick through the tightness of her armpit, the reactions she has to your dick, etc...
Armpit sex isn't really my fetish so I can't help with the specifics but much like any kind of obscureish fetish you kind of need to distill what makes it so hot in your head and write it out and see if you 'get' what makes it so hot in the first place. Because if you don't understand it yourself your probably going to have trouble conveying it via text.

>>10411048
No Vshojo fics

I'm blasting bury the light as loud as I can but... I just can't do it bros...

>>10411885
Well, you know the rules. If you can't contribute with stories you're gonna have to do it some other way. On your knees and start sucking, I'm sure you're motivated enough to do a good job.

>>10391450
this is quite a nice idea on the primal nature of Ayame(and perhaps the other demi-human girls). I'll probably use this as some form of inspiration in my works, so you have my thanks.

>>10411048
You know thinking about it. It is kind of weird how the general has mostly stuck to kind of vanilla stuff...
Though given that most of the works here are made out of love of the talents, the really hardcore stuff is probably warded off by that same love.

>>10415295
this is exactly why i haven't written a nasty rape fic for fbk yet. every time i think wouldn't it be nice, i'm tempered by "hang on, no matter how emotionally impactful i make it, it's not gonna matter if they don't give it a chance."

fluff fags are the same thing as moebutas honestly

>>10415444
t. emotionally frigid sociopath

>>10415444
>Implying that all of us are fluff fags.
Dude just write the fic, I'm sure some of us are as sick of vanilla stuff like you.

>>10415493
speak of the devil.

>>10415295
I've been pushing for real rape fics for a long time. No real luck. At least weirdanon made the Korone maggot story but there's a whole genre that is very popular not being explored here

Write it yourself fags are the worst btw. As if I don't already. I can't jerk off to my own fics you dumbass.

>>10415791
I hate that I relate to that spoiler so much. I don't want to be selfish but fuck I can't jerk off to my smutfics without cringing.

>>10416457
ditto. works best when we're all writing each other's fics

>>10415791
I mean I think conceptually, the problem with writing a realistic rape fic isn't the sex act itself but the perspective.
Standard /wg/ 2nd person isn't really conducive to making a realistic reaction rape since let's be honest here we write in 2nd person partly because of board culture and partly to have a harder disconnect between the writer and the subject. It's why we don't really get fics that are in (You)r head much due to that, as well as the nature of the Anon who
is supposed to be a reader insert. Which kind of makes the passion from raping your oshi a bit hard to make if you stick to the usual style.

>>10416457
>>10416737
Did you guys ever submit any rape prompts hoping they'd be picked up? Granted its a slim chance, but I was wondering which chuuba's and storylines you had in mind.

>>10417002
an anon here a while back was in the process of writing a rape fic for fubuki. he said he was writing fubuki first person except for all the sex, which he was writing in third person. nothing at all from the rapist's perspective, to emphasize the fact he was a psychopath.

iirc he dropped it because he was unsatisfied with how the sex turned out though

>>10417101
i'll be honest, my fingers are really itching right now.

if i was going to write a rape fic though, i wouldn't be making it erotic - at least, not writing it the same way i write other smut. it'd be torture, plain and simple, not corruption.

>>10417175
Why does everyone here think you have to be a psycho to enjoy some rape? It's more common of a fetish than you think.

>>10417305
i was typing out and backspacing like three different replies and i just can't be bothered

you are an absolute fucking retard, the worst kind. try reflecting on what other people are saying before you open your shit-filled mouth and spew it all over the thread

>>10417393
Lol

>>10417305
Anon this is a writing thread and the thread was discussing a realistic rape fic. This isn't hentai, with a girl getting mindbroken and getting into it, this is about raping your oshi, using her like a sex object in a fit of lust with no concern for her pleasure then leaving her crying and broken, wondering about her future.

>>10417273
It makes sense you'd shift from normally erotic scenes if you've chosen to write about rape. What exactly gets you off, or just interested, then? Forcing them to your will? Breaking them down? And then, does it get better with how much you can self-insert, or is it fine as long as there's rape? I'm asking as someone who doesn't write about it much but would at least like to try it once.

>>10417652
Which chuubas would be the best to break and humiliate? I'm thinking Watame, just the thought of her being a broken sobbing mess makes me horny as hell. Just imagine using her wakipai fetish against her and humiliating her with that. Fuck.

>>10417652
Yeah and? I hate mind breaks and drugs and aphrodisiac bullshit. Rape is meant to be rape. It doesn't change anything, rape IS a common fetish. It's a step up from domination. Them not feeling pleasure (or feeling it but knowing it's wrong) is a big part of why it's so enjoyable.

>>10417175
Was that the dropped WIP about learning Fubuki's schedule, capturing and raping her? The one that got dropped before it actually got to anything spicy, just the stalking bits. I vaguely remember reading it, don't know if it got archived though since I can't find it.

>>10418014
i think i know the one you're talking about. i believe the author did archive it after declaring it dropped and open source, but took it down later for reasons their own

>>10417652
you have a good grasp of what makes a good rape story. that delicious immoral impact of seeing the thing you love not just injured - in fact, not necessarily physically harmed at all - but mentally crushed, reduced to a husk. the empathetic response of pain on one's behalf is delicious

Other than the rape fetishists, I would like to ask if there are femdom enjoyers in this thread? I am thinking of candidates other than the obvious Choco. In terms of kyonyuu chuubas I have strong preference to Nui Sociere, but her character doesn't really do femdom.

>>10419224
>femdom
a large portion of the abuse fics here are chuubas abusing you. i'd say there's a sizable audience for it

>>10400393
Still here and still periodically working on it. Finals pulled me out of writing and fucked with my motivation for a while, finally found my groove recently so there's that. Still glad to know that there are people who still remember it even after almost a month and a half of complete silence, I'll probably get the next chapter done in the coming days so whoever's still interested in it can have that to look forward to.

>>10419982
>I'll probably get the next chapter done in the coming days
Yeah baby!

You better not die

Fact: scars on your penis caused by bacteria look like white veins surrounded by redness. Write that in your next story!

>>10423282
Might pass on that one.

Fact: leaving your cock out in direct sunlight leaves not only the foreskin but the head itself very wrinkly and extremely dry in a matter of minutes. Write that in your next story.

>>10423605
Do you have a fact that DOESN'T make my soldier shy from duty?

Fact: apparently the penis is extremely susceptible to cancer from radiation, much more so than any body part. Even 5 minutes is already bad and can cause sunburns. Please don't leave your cock out for 30 minutes under harsh sunlight. Write... write that in your next story.

The rape fetishists have figured out how to rape us through plain text

>>10389444
Petting Your Fox (both parts)
Exposure Therapy
Don't read abuse
Dramatic Miopost

>>10423710
I can't believe Anon caught cock cancer from sunbathing only his dick in the balcony of his apartment.

>>10426612
I want to spank it.

>>10426612
Nope, can't do it. Can't sexualize the peko. Faggots ruined her.

>>10427418
Sounds like the only faggot here is you, denying bunny cunny

>>10427418
You might be homosexual

>>10417815
Just because rape is a common fetish (according to you), that doesn't mean that X group of people will have the same percentage of people that like rape as the whole population.
If anything, I would argue that 4chan population is not "normal", therefore it shouldn't have as much rape fetishists. Especially on board that is dedicated to idolizing certain people.

>>10427621
Hotdogging the Peko buns...

Stories for when you're betrayed by a fart and shit your pants?

>>10429709
No

>pg.10
Rise.

>>10419317
I don't really think the appeal of abuse (as used by the thread) really aligns with femdom. Abuse is kind of utterly reliant on emotional pain whereas the actual hard sexualization of femdom kind of detracts from since obviously that kind of abusive pain isn't the focus for femdom.

Sex with Polka!

I keep having these strange dreams inside dreams. It's always me doing some incredibly important task in some solemn world where I'm supposed to meet someone to help me with something, for the better of my community?... but everytime I get to some important part, I "wake up" from that dream, extremely confused and absent minded, asking the people around me what happened and where did it all go. This other dream that I wake up into is usually some completely unrelated and unimportant thing, some fantasy setting, or a classroom, or like just now, a bunch of concerned chuubas asking me what's wrong. I just woke up but I feel unusual sleepy. I can't shake this feeling that if I fall asleep again, I won't wake up next time...I can barely move my tired limbs, my eyes keep closing.

If I fall into a coma, or if this world is... a simulation or all just a dream, please write a story about this but with some chuuba. It sounds cool enough.

>>10439897
Dreams within dreams aren't...uncommon, I guess, but yours is interesting in that your dream swapping scenes seems to be connected. Normally things just shift focus on older 'plotlines' are discarded. You may just be really invested in it even if your brain wants to change directions. Wonder what it could be, though.

>>10391210
There's an interesting premise pitting Ame's from different timelines against Kronii. But considering Omega doesn't come in until the very end anyway, you could have sold this story on the Ame and Kronii fight. That and also because Omega isn't exactly something people rushing out stories for. That aside, the use of tech by the Ame's was interesting. I think how the fight plays out is quite nice, but I didn't feel emotionally invested enough to keep my interest 100% of the time. There's a simple enough motivation with the Ame's trying to take Kronii's time abilities, but it's not expanded on much and Kronii merely serves as a target for their fight. Because of that it was difficult to particularly root for anyone in the fight and look forward to an outcome aside from just witnessing a battle against some godlike figure. Because I wasn't invested, the action lacked some of the impact and interest created by the tech and time-stopping abilities.

Regarding how it's written, there's a few things can be ironed out with editing. Some sentences such as "the sword picked up speed then it slammed" or "flurry of sword strokes each of them parried" could really use a break in a comma or something else to make it easier to read. An expression like "Ame-5 didn’t even realize she was dying but when she finally realized" could be more eloquently put by just describing how she'd just realised whatever was happening.

That aside, the scenario of many Ame's against Kronii was interesting. The use of all this different tech to debilitate Kronii was interesting - perhaps could have been made better by Kronii escaping using her wits rather than shrugging some of it off. How the fight plays out I think is quite fine, and with a bit more emotional impact I feel it could be great. The sacrifice play by Kiara was amusing to read. Maybe thinning out on the number of Ame's so you can take a look into their emotions might work. Hope you write more, anon!

>>10440091
I didn't elaborate further since the other dreams are more off-topic given only this one had chuubas and it was very brief but

The last dream that I remember other than this newest one, I was in some dark cave recruiting 3 people. 2 of them were giants and 1 was a bulky maybe 2m thing. I remember specifically that one of the giants and the 2m guy were the left and right hand man of someone important that I came to see, but before I got to him, I "woke up" into a battlefield, right before a charge against some place, and I kept asking them about what just happened and where I was, them telling me it was time, then I woke up into reality. This next dream, just now, I was wandering around an island at sea, the weather and scenery was kind of like northern Europe. I remember the sound of crashing waves as I entered a rusty bus rebuilt into some sort of shelter after I had met someone important. For some reason I remember very clearly that in that dream I had some community I needed to go back to after doing this, but then I woke up into the dream with chuubas. I can't remember much of everyone who was around me but the girl talking to me was most likely Mio. I remember her fine black fur, as well as a second person in blue dress which looked like Lamy but I could not see any of their faces. I was again, asking what the hell just happened and where I was, but more passively like I'm super slow and my mind is changing gears almost as if actually waking up, and Mio(?) just kept reassuring me nothing was wrong. These second dreams don't last long, so I woke up after that and wrote here.

>>10441036
>Mio(?) just kept reassuring me nothing was wrong.
Sounds like a pretty good dream to me.

>>10441873
Normally I'd agree but there was a massive sense of dread and confusion, like I was missing something important. My feelings in that first post were actually pretty real but my mind is more clear now. Especially given that their faces were just shadowy, I barely even managed to look to my right to see Mio and "Lamy" standing next to me before waking up, for the most part I was just standing there looking forward into the ground slowly coming to my senses as one by one, my internal functions started working while she talked to me.

>>10441036
>>10442452
It sounds like they were having a wacky adventure ,knocked into you in the dreamscape then tried to keep you from panicking while you woke up

>>10442452
Damn having that dread around it sucks. I don't know if it's comparable, but I'd get sleep paralysis if I slept on my back and it usually came with some awful sounds would play out. One time, it was more of a feeling than seeing it, but I felt Suisei approaching me with the intent to kill. I barely saw it as her face flashing in the distance and coming closer to me. I didn't realise she'd had a knife until I felt some kind of pressure in my stomach where she'd supposedly stabbed me.

I had a dream where I was part of a rap trio with Mori and Watame and we kept getting in trouble for being racist.

I don't remember much but let me tell you, we called ourselves Sheperd Squad and we knew how to fucking party.

>>10295308
whim x alora smut

>>10440355
Thanks for the feedback! I'll use it to better hone my skills as a writer. thank you.

>>10446069
Was Watame the one that was suprisingly racist, or di your dream just go with the usual logic?

>>10449874
We mainly kept covering songs that had nigger in them, and every time we did management kept saying "Stop picking songs that have it or at least don't say it". We'd all just nod and agree but then never listen to them. I don't remember any one of us being more racist than the other, but Watame was advertised as kinda of being the head of the trio, so she might have been.

>>10450333
Watame has been taking some new medication and she hasn't been the same since. She's been taking some new medication and she's got this crazy look in her eye, I'm telling you. Like she's got this evil look on her face all the time. I love Watame but I think it was pretty messed up what she did to those kids. She says they had it coming but I don't see why the cat had to get involved too. Poor little fella, I don't think it can even be called a cat anymore. No amount of therapy can fix what happened to those kids and it's all cause of this new medication she's been taking. I've been saying this for ages and nobody's been listening to me. I think Watame's cool despite being notoriously antisemitic. All those dog whistles she's been doing have gotten pretty obvious after the things she said about her fans. Something about "there's no brown in a rainbow" and "All black people are the same", I don't know what exactly she means by this but it can't be good I'm telling you that. I love Watame but she is pretty weird sometimes when she talks about all that pedophilia stuff, how she used to lure misbehaving little boys to teach them a lesson back when she worked in kindergarten. Now I don't wanna judge her too much but I think that saying "10 is too old" may be a bit too far. Honestly I think that she has her flaws but she is good girl at heart. She just needs to lay off that new medication that she's been taking because it's making her crazy.

>>10295308
>>10435946

Iofi Slays some Zombie Strange has been unpublished apparently. Guess the author wasn't too happy with it? I was just about to go blow my load to it. Shame.

>>10453424
It's only natural, the anon got like only one pity (You) to their story. Not even acknowledged. I get it that it's futa but seeing generic HololiveEN #212 chapter 34 getting 20 (You)'s and then your story flops like that? Must be pretty disheartening, especially for new writers (which I believe they were)

>>10453424
Could always ask in the Iofi thread if anyone has any clue what you're referring to.

>>10453424
NTA, No it's not it's still on ao3
https://archiveofourown.org/works/33678346
Author must have just taken down the gdocs.

>>10460119
>A Day At The Beach with Iofi
>The Haachama Hell's Kitchen story
>Devilish fucking Deeds
Holy shit, they're all the same guy? Wowza. Good for him.

>>10453424
Should've backed up your favourites.

>>10455305
The world is cruel like that. Spend hours carefully crafting a narrative out of passion for your oshi, post it... and some don't like the fetishes, some don't like the genre, others don't like the chuuba; it winds up getting no attention whatsoever.
I'm not going to criticize that state of affairs, though, because I don't read futa. Har-har.

>>10460185
It would be better if all new stories were Fubuki-related

>>10460180
Honestly only remembered it because I remembered seeing it getting reuploaded at ao3 and seeing the account also made some works I like.

>>10460595
Thanks for bringing it to my attention, detective. Updated the corresponding links.

>>10460668
I do hope the author's ok with that. Unless he posts its hard to know if unlisting was a mistake or an intentional leaving.

>>10460914
May have just forgotten? AO3 makes more sense than G. Docs if they wanted to reach a larger audience. If not, the email is always open; that or republishing the doc with a "hey actually take this down please" sort of message at the top. Unless there's actual proof of one or the other, it's better to hope it was just an accident. If proof of the opposite ever comes up, I'll gladly pull it.

>>10460980
based archive anon

Are there any other anons here who put their works on ao3? I'm new to fancfiction and this thread is the only thing I've ever written for, so the thought of posting my works elsewhere never really occured to me.

>>10461136
i haven't, but it never really mattered to me. i wrote my works for this thread so in this thread they'll stay.

i will say this: as much as i admire archiveanon's dedication... ao3 is probably a better option.
at the end of the day, you can't trust one person to be here until the end of time to archive your works for you. better to chuck it on ao3 yourself, and post a link to that here.
the only advantage a docs link here has is anonymity, which admittedly is very attractive

>>10461136
I personally don't for the simple reason that most, if not all of my stories revolve around 4chan culture/references so putting it up for the general public would probably have the references fly over their head. The biggest thing is probably the self insert is always Anon, which, as mentioned, would not make sense to readers outside of this thread.

>>10461136
I mean the only thing 'bad' about also posting your work elsewhere is that it'll kind of link your work together under an author name aka you won't be anonymously releasing stuff anymore.

>>10461453
that too, but if you're just using ao3 as an archive, i'd argue just post it there and who gives a damn what people outside the thread think
given the average audience hololive attracts outside of 4chan, there's a good chance you'd hate their guts anyway

>>10461494
>given the average audience hololive attracts outside of 4chan, there's a good chance you'd hate their guts anyway
This, so much this.

>>10461136
I wouldn't say there's anything bad about it. There's already plenty of hololive stuff on that website anyways so use it if you want a bigger audience or something.

>>10461494
I also enjoy the anonymity of gdocs very much as well. Perhaps once this archive goes down for good I'll shift everything into a burner ao3 account.

>>10461136
I wasn't going to, but now that you mention it, I might as well.

>>10461532
Nah, my works will remain exclusive to this archive. I wasn't planning on posting them there, was just curious.

Honestly it's still weird how this general is the one place that actively has a writing community for vtuber /(and let's be honest here, more specifically) hololive stuff.
Is this because of the weird closeness writing about chuubas has to writing about actual people or is it just a 'this hobby is still too niche'.

>>10461942
The former turns some people off; the latter I could see being much more a turn off for people who go "oh, that's a bit weird" while referring to fiction about an anime girl.

I miss Pekoanon...

>>10462258
Same, anon. Same...

>>10462258
They specifically said they don't post that stuff unless they're horny out of their mind and want an excuse to get off (even though they said they're straight??)
Your best chances are getting them horny with smut. Here's a cool tip, though. Pekoanon if he real. https://sukebei.nyaa.si/view/3442532

>>10462258
I don't in the slightest. Good riddance to the massive shitposter.

>>10461942
eh, I'm inclined to believe there is some discord/fb/whatever community writing about chuubas that we're not aware of, especially in languages other than English. 4chan just seems to be the place for people to more easily locate a congregation of writefags. Also, chuubas aren't that much of a niche hobby anymore considering anime is mainstream now. The real niche is having more people actually having the talent/effort to write fanfics of chuubas and have the courage to post them(aka being writefags). The anonymity of 4chan helps in alleviating it.

>>10462258
I fucking don't Hope he fucks off forever for being the little shit he is.

>>10463292
What other language would have a fanfic community? Japanese, sure. They probably have something I don't know about due to the hard language barrier; but the only other language I could think could have a community would be indonesian; and of the sites that host fanfiction there's barely any in those languages for the most part.
The other websites that host chuuba fanfics (i.e host and can search for) are respectively ao3 and wattpad. Ao3 doesn't really have a writing community, and wattpad is a shithole of poorly written work.

>>10463993
Kek wattpad has always been shit

>>10464186
Any place that consider (Y/n) a good placeholder character name and accepts that as a common practice is a shithole.

>>10464186
I wonder what exactly attracts such shit writers to wattpad? Literally every fic I've read there is so awfully written it's painful to read.

>>10464495
If I had to guess it's because ao3 has an invite system

>>10464495
>I wonder what exactly attracts such shit writers to wattpad?
Something about making a show of their stories if they're successful or something.

>>10464495
Wattpad is home to 90 million readers. That's a lot of readers, anon.

>>10464812
Those sort of things always rubbed me the wrong way. Artificially bloating it. The real reader count is probably way the fuck lower than that, they're just going off of accounts in general...several of which could have been created by the same person who keeps forgetting their login info for whatever reason, creating other accounts to boost their own stories, etc.

>>10464929
Pretty sure it means actual readers, anon. Writers would get their own number

>>10464722
I didn't even realize they had an invite system. Is that a recent thing? I don't think I had to do that when I made my account a years ago or I just don't remember doing it.

>>10464495
The reader meme + the original work hosted there.
No goddamn clue why anyone would use it for fanfiction though. Guess there's the ease of viewing from the people already using it for stuff.

>>10465097
It's been there for a long time. You do have friends, right anon?

new thread
>>10465237

>>10461136
I used use ao3 when I was writing for other fandoms but I haven't posted any of my chuuba fics to ao3. I feel this place is more in tune with my tastes plus (You)'s give me a lot more dopamine than comments/kudos/hits.

>>10465208
None that read or write fanfiction to my knowledge.

>>10464495
no idea, which is why at least here writeaons take their works seriously and received constructive criticism(for the most part).

>>10465208
ah shit in that case I don't think I'll be able to dump my works on ao3.

>>10465541
You only have to wait two weeks at most for the invite desu

>>10462258
>>10462328
I mean, I'm still here. I had finally finished my first Fallout NV playthrough which was eating up all my time, and then I decided to... start a new one, and it's eating even more time. It's as >>10462575 said, sure, but also that no one really asks for pekoanon stuff. I won't just start ERPing out of nowhere. I just finished a story and am basically resting until I finally decide to start (or continue) a new one.

>>10467632
Probably because they don't want to derail the thread. You've got more than a few people who enjoy it. Just slap it out into a rentry or something so those who don't wanna see it don't have to, for courtesy's sake. Being honest, I jerked off to the watamate one earlier.

>>10467756
Impressive. I was gonna ask ArchiveAnon to take that one down because it was so short but I guess not. Or maybe you're just desperate. I think that writing directly to the thread is a big part of the fun I have with the pekofag stuff honestly. As per derailing, I think it's pretty self contained. The first time it happened, sure, 50 (You)'s of love and hate, but now it's like one or two and business goes as usualusual, so I think it's fine. It's really only the vocal ones that don't like anything I put out that make a scene but one would know better to ignore them.

>>10467858
I think a lot of people don't like the stuff you put out, or just you in general because of the shit you did. Most people probably just don't bother telling you to fuck off.

>>10467858
Maybe. I got tired of cumming to the Pekofag stuff we currently had and my thoughts drifted back to wanting to cum in the bratty watamate's mouth. I want to take out all my frustration on their body. Either way, do what you want, that's just my two cents

Is "the perks of working for Uber sheep" guy still around? Just wanted to sing your praises again. Something about it... It's short, but makes my eyes water. In a good way. Thanks.

Feels like people tear up to fluff more than tragedy in these threads.

>>10468936
I've suffered enough tragedy in my life thus far that unless it deeply personally affects me I have trouble feeling too upset. On the contrary, I'm affection starved and have next to no one in my life who I feel I can just talk who who will listen to me and comfort me out of the goodness of their heart rather than having an ulterior motive.

>>10468936
It's called a complete lack of affection in our daily lives and mild depression. It's great because our hearts are hardened to suffering and sadness, but it only takes a fleeting indication of love to make us feel something.
Or maybe I'm just mentally unstable.

>>10468936
The fact that I'll never receive a loving hug and words of affection and praise from my oshi makes me tear up more than tragedy.

>>10467858
We had a vote, fuckwit, more people here hate your stuff than like it and it shouldn't be archived. But a shitposter like you doesn't actually care, right? I wish mods here actually gave a shit and permabanned your ass

>>10469252
Not liking someone's stories is not ground to removing them for the archive.

>>10460980

Posting this now because it is past bump limit.

It was intentional and I will say that I have no problem if people know about my Ao3. The only caveat in relation to this is that my Ao3 is not exhaustive. In other words, I have written and posted stories that were exclusively for /wg/ that have been made unpublished (for now) eg Dog Maggots. You are free to pull them down. As for some justification; just felt like the stories needed to go unpublished here for various miscellaneous reasons, some of which may be remedied in the future, others perhaps not.


Sincere apologies for making your job more difficult than it needs to be archive anon, was not my intention to do so.

>>10469444
Miscellaneous reasons that totally aren't related to self doubt.

>>10469415
Right, right. This means that all vtuber cosplayer content has sufficient grounds for archival, too. Fantastic logic there, shithead. Kill yourself.

>>10469696
Are Vtuber cosplayers not allowed in /vt/? Pretty sure they are allowed