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>>18471177
Finally, a good 2view

>>18472090
>pippa
>good

These 2views are shit and if you don't post Nina (the cute magical girl) as the next thread OP you're a fag.

>>18471177
I love Pippa so much bros. She’s the perfect woman.

>>18475858
Fuck off, earlyfag.

>>18472090
>2view
reps, now

>>18478207
she's not a 2view but she's still a nobody

What is it we want pippa to do again?

>>18480011
Ideally stop being an obnoxious lolcow-obsessed dyke, unless you meant the footjob thing

>>18480260
Those are both things I would like pippa to do if at all possible, thanks

>>18480011
We want her to finally take a shower, her smell is coming through the screen

>>18471177
> recent stories
> 2
Writingbros, don't look...

>>18484276
they're not, that's why there's only 2 recent stories. place is dead.

>>18483132
just use your tongue

>>18484276
Oh shit, 8 of the last 30 stories are mine

>>18484276
Did you not read the greentext and discussion from the last thread. Thread the liveliest it's been this year
These new threads always start off dead because some of the regulars pray that the board kills off the early thread and won't hop on till it's undeniably the new thread.
Also because I'm reasonably sure a lot of us don't really open up discussions but happily join in when there's something interesting like a prompt or story to discuss.

>>18484604
>did you not read the thread
Oh, I think you know the answer to that chestnut, sugar!

>>18484604
Terrible TERRIBLE shame that the interesting shit starts right around bump limit. The stuff about Haachama eating your cum for protein and the Korone/Okayu green texts could have gone further but they were bluntly interrupted by the thread sinking to page 12.

>18485107
I mean I liked the discussion.
Don't know why you have to be a fag about it.

>>18485330
It's okay, anon. Some people also like flies, scat and NTR. All it means is that you're a sad excuse for a human being. We'd just really appreciate it if you enjoyed that """discussion""" somewhere else.

>>18484604
I throw prompts out there all the time on the off-chance that one of them will garner enough interest to drum up some discussion. I'll take spitballing story ideas over shitposting any day. And sometimes they get turned into actual stories. Or I turn them into stories myself.

>>18485528
>Or I turn them into stories myself.
'mon, brah. You've never written so much as a paragraph in your life.

>>18485107
>Haachama eating your cum for protein
I will always shill for more gokkun fics

>>18486954
Gross. Freak.

Pippa loves fucking lizards

>>18485528
Honestly same, I hate just bumping with a 'bump' and usually spitball an idea I had as a prompt to the prompt post when it's getting close to needing a bump.

>>18488293
The garbage you retards come out with is even worse than giving a single word bump, though.

>>18487674
She also loves bugs.
Probably reads those bug rape/insemination/egglaying doujins.

>>18488410
Maybe she's the one who paid for that fly fic.

>>18488663
Better yet, Pippa is insect anon.

>SEAnigger hours
>activity crashes
>2/3rds of posts are bitter shitposting at anybody who floats an idea
Welp, time for bed! If any anons remain awake from this blessed continent of America, this land so cherished by God and granted us as a haven and refuge from the Old World, you should probably get some rest too, so we can have fun again tomorrow. I'll try to publish what I'm working on and also post some new prompts, and I hope we can keep discussing really fun stuff like Sora-anon's romance prompt, grooming high school Okayu, refusing to let Suisei forget you, Mio's hairy pussy during pregnancy, and that drug lord prompt where Subaru cums her brains out every time she kills a man.

See you all tomorrow!

>>18490340
Kill yourself, mutt.

>>18471245
It's late at night, you're walking home and this pink-haired girl coerces you into buying her mixtape. You're not sure if this is a robbery or not but she's incredibly autistic and has her scythe out.

>>18490340
> America
> Singular
No way, gringo. This is our land.

Who would make a good rival for an action/adventure story? Someone who (You) are constantly competing with and sometimes fight? Can be a friendly rivalry or actual enemies.

>>18486954
i try to anon but this is harder than I thought

>>18491240
Depends on the setting, I have a fic I'm working where Noel would technically be your rival. I've seen Ayame used I think more than once for that in stuff in the archive.

>>18491240
Ollie for comedic reasons

>>18491186
Imagine unironically watching Whori

>>18491240
I think rivalry between two guys is definitely the best kind but the only males I watch are the stars and none of them really fit that category too well.

>>18491772
>Best friends with Temma
>Blood feud with Dark Temma

>>18491772
I think Shibuya Hal would make a good one, the calm, strong and no nonsense kind of rival, but I doubt anyone here watches him.

>>18491385
>Ayame
The temptation for rape correction would simply be too strong.

>>18491240
Suisei, as long as you bullshit up some powers for her suitable for the setting. Girl could totally be a rival or villainess with an ambition that's rivalling yours.

>>18491240
Any chuubas with non human features will do. Unless you're going for the intellectual rival which I very much doubt you can pull off.

>>18492586
>Making Ayame REALLY pay for it the next time you duel because she's been half-assing her training

>>18491240
The personification of an anti. His name doesn’t matter, nor does yours. All that matters is that you’re opposite sides of the same coin. One dedicated to chaos and destruction, the other to saving and preserving.

>>18493618
Also, he's white as a snowman, whereas you (the selfless protagonist) are black as coal save for the semen in your ballsack.

>>18493331
Elaborate? I don't get why the non-human features makes them a good rival.

>>18494740
It's a roundabout way of saying he just wants more Fubuki, because he's a creatively-bankrupt cretin with the intellect of a gnat.

>>18494740
Either falseflagging or baiting for Risu.

>>18494806
Nice thesaurus usage. Bet your accent would out you as a warga-warga in a second, though.

>>18494806
But Fubuki has human features. She has human ears to listen to people and fox ears to listen to animals.

>>18494959
That'd be the intellect of a gnat showing. Believe it or not, fox ears and a tail count as "non-human features", you fucktard.

>>18494956
God, you Fubabies shit this place up non-stop. Don't you have anything better to do?

Do you ever get the feeling that Vtubers are already basically "anime fanfiction?" Like, they're taking the styles and tropes of regular anime, but then taking it in a weird direction with unrehearsed, unedited content made by people that don't have much experience.

And to tie it to the theme of this thread: phase connect is hololive fanfiction. Pippa is the edgelord version of Pekora/Kiara.

>>18495158
Isn't that more of anime acting, though? I guess the lore could be fanfiction.
>Edgelord version of Pekora/Kiara
Oh no, they're hot.

>>18495158
What the fuck are you talking about?
That's like calling wrestling fanfiction of sports.

>>18495158
Aren't you embarrassed? Like, how do you have the balls to come out and say something like that?

>>18495158
Who's the goody two-shoes version of Ina?

well writeanons, the jig is up, what're ya working on?

bonus question: what's the most chuuni thing you'd do with your chuuba of choice?

>>18497112
Fighting a possessed nightmare knight Temma at the cusp of a cataclysm that threatens to destroy the world.

>>18494951
Is Risu even good rival material?
She seems too 'comedic' to be taken seriously normally and her serious 'Ayunda' mode doesn't exactly give off the vibe of a rival.

>>18497112
A recurring dream I have is obtaining the power to know everything, and for some reason that power is always used maliciously against the chuubas. Something like snapping my fingers and suddenly every Holomem who has a boyfriend goes on public knowledge, the adress name and face of their boyfriend, and of the chuuba. I don't even hate any of them enough to want this. Maybe I've been too immersed in the drama. Technically that's not really the most chuuni thing I'd do with them but I'd rather not go on a too long of a rant.

As per what I'm writing? Trade secret.

>>18497316
The mobility of a squirrel is to be taken seriously anon. You have wolves, dogs, cats, but nothing can come close to what Risu can pull off. Imagine her jumping from wall to wall as you try to gun her down on a dark hallway, only the light of your muzzle lighting up the place as with every shot it reveals her getting closer and closer until...

Risu can be scary too.

>>18497415
And then she sucks your dick

>>18491240
I wanna say that Laplus would be a good rival character. Her chuuni personality would be very entertaining and endearing to read about and how it blends with your main character's personality

>>18497634
I mean the 'conventional' character for her would probably be Joke Character that's secretly powerful but I think Laplus could work as a rival character... if you can somehow write her such that she can be taken seriously within the narrative. The whole chuuni thing handled poorly might make her a joke that won't work out as a rival.

>>18497434
No, that would be low-effort.

>>18471245
Haachama taking cum on her face from viewers live on stream.

>>18491240
The entirety of HoloX, provided that they're portrayed as being at least semi-competent at the whole secret-society thing.

>>18499324
That stupid ESLchaama story is still hot. You could probably do this story in that style to great effect.

>>18497112
I planned to write some Towa fluff but wanted to make things a little different, so now I'm writing a story where Towa has to constantly stay within 5 metres of you or else both of you will eventually die, due to... bullshit devil magic. Honestly I just wanted an excuse for Towa to move in with you and become clingy because she needs to stay close.

>>18499550
I'm pretty sure you'd need the Anon that wrote that original ESLchama fic to write this since fuck I can't imagine anyone doing that unless they can find writing like that normal.

>>18471245
Lamy has had a few too many and now you can't get her to stop clinging to you and mumbling about how much she loves you.

>>18500166
This, but she's actually mumbling about how she wants you to try on her clothes, drink a little sake and let yourself become.

>>18500166
I hate that the idea alone put a spike of longing in my heart

>>18500209
>she starts undressing on the spot and gets both of you thrown out of the bar

>>18500166
>You then get a notification on your phone that Lamy is streaming
>You slowly start to back away from the Lamy beside you.

>>18500255
Here, take this. It'll make it hurt more
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QgjmR7eo0IU

>>18500315
You're a motherfucker but damn if that isn't some potent shit.

>>18500452
I am a motherfucker, yes. Your mother, to be precise.

>>18471245
Polka's new medication has curbed her depression, with the side-effect of massively spiking her libido

>>18501393
>curbed her depression
Why would you want this? Polka and depression are like peanut butter and jelly, like bacon and eggs, like hookers and blow.

>>18501424
Because I prefer my oshi to be happy.

>>18499376
Honestly for the most of them you don't even have to change much to make them a rival group or organization, just increase their competence and hide their gap moments such that their image doesn't become a joke.
The only one that's difficult is Chloe; even then her mask gives you a really easy 'out' to not having her stinky moeblob persona ruin tone by making it so that her 'mask on' persona is actually a highly competent 'cleaner' of people.

>>18501454
You picked the wrong oshi then, didn't you?

>>18501393
I need this but with Shion. Girl deserves to be happy and being horny is a plus

>>18501393
>with the side-effect of massively spiking her libido
this is diametrically opposed to what all antidepressants actually do (ie make you drier than the sahara desert)

>>18501960
It's magic. I ain't gotta explain shit

>>18502095
upvoted, fellow redditor : ^)

>>18497203
You've got my attention anon.

>>18504827
Oh fuck off it hadn't even reached page 10 yet.

>>18504869

>>18504869
Why do you even bother responding to the shitposter?

>>18497112
I'm planning out how to write the Ancient Ones loving (You) through Ina fic. Current idea is to have each chapter effectively be in two parts one from Anon PoV and the other from Ina's each covering the same event.

Alright, let's get to work.
>>18459379
>her adorable smile is gone. her normally pristine hair is unkempt. her sclera are bloodshot from crying. judging by the dark rings under her eyes, she hasn't gotten a decent night's sleep in days. and she can't even look you in the eyes. she looks like an absolute mess
>then again, you probably look even worse
>"So-"
>but you can't even finish getting her name out before you find yourself caught in Sora's embrace, her tear-soaked face burrowing into your shirt
>her grip is like a vice, clinging to you as though you might vanish into thin air if she dares to let go
>"You're okay..." her muffled voice is weak and laden with pain. "Thank god you're okay..."
>caught completely off-guard, you can do little more than stand rooted in place like a statue. your gaze nervously flits over to the only other occupant of the spacious office, a sharply-dressed middle aged man seated behind a mahogany desk
>Motoaki Tanigo, you presume
>considering the current situation, being hugged by Sora like this right in front of her boss just feels like an invitation for further disaster. but your momentary panic starts to ebb away as you notice a distinct lack of anger in the man's expression
>if anything, he looks mildly amused, watching the two of you with a the faintest hint of a smile on his face. he gives you a tiny nod, as if silently authorizing you to respond to his employee's little outburst
>finally managing to spur yourself into motion, you let one hand rest atop Sora's head to gently stroke her hair. "I missed you too."
>"I'm sorry," she whimpers into your chest. "I'm so sorry..."
>"Shh...it's alright..."
>soon enough her iron grip slackens, and she releases you to step back and wipe the tears from her cheeks, apparently regaining some level of composure
>taking her retreat as his cue, the seated man finally speaks up. "Thank you for coming here, Mr. Anon. I know this invitation was a bit...abrupt."
>"Yeah, well I've had a lot of free time lately."
>"So I can imagine. Apologies for using Ms. Tokino's phone to contact you. I suspected you wouldn't have picked up if it were a number you didn't recognize."
>"You suspected right."
>he lets out a sharp exhale of amusement. "Please, have a seat. You must have quite a few questions for us."

>>18506177
garbage

IDK if an anon is working on something already, but I'd like it if someone could do a fanfic of Pippa being femdomed by an OL while being leashed.

>>18506177
I'm gonna be honest here I think you're at the point where you probably should have thought of making it in normal text now since the greentext format isn't exactly being played to its strengths... especially since the question of the lore of what are chuubas here is now at the forefront due to the plot you're bringing it to. I do like where you are going with this, and would totally read a version of this that's written like a normal fic.

>>18506177
>so you sit. and you ask. and he answers
>you learn the exact nature of Hololive and its 'talents'. of Sora's status as the first of the company's ever-growing cast of idols. of the deference that comes with it
>with each revelation, the tangled web of lies that Sora had built up over the course of months further unravels
>until you finally know the truth about everything

>>18506871
yeah you're right, this isn't working

>>18507317
it wasn't working to begin with. you can't write worth shit

>>18507317
It's working. It's just it has potential to be even better in a normal fic.

>>18507421
it's hot fucking garbage and was from the beginning

>>18507317
Giving you the benefit of the doubt here and assuming your the writeanon. Generally from the recent greentext roundrobins that have happened around here usually they worked because they stuck to effectively being like a plot summary of events, meaning randoms can just add what they want and hope others continue the chain.
The key difference here is that this is now character centered rather than event centered meaning that jumping into the roundrobin is now about effectively half-writing the next scene in a fic rather than thinking of events that might be nice/cool to happen next. So effectively you're already writing the fic's scenes.
I'll still read it if you decide to make it into a traditional fic, or if anyone want to pick it up and make it into a full fic.

>>18507665
yes, that's me. I get what you mean, this sort of thing doesn't lend itself to greentext. maybe I'll try and make it into a proper story someday

>>18506177
This is fucking great. There's no dip in quality from before and I want to know what comes next.

>>18506217
Malding SEAnigger. God I wish I could rangeban your kind.

>>18506871
I mean, a greentext draft is probably always better when rendered in prose, but I'll take good content in draft form than no content at all, any day.

>>18507822
I swear to god Sora-anon, if this is you, and if you give up because some schizophrenic genetic failure keeps shitting up the thread with seething one-liners, I will take your prompt and write it into a fucking War and Peace length novel just to spite you and prove it does work.

>>18507939
you've never written a thing in your life, seanigger schizo.

>>18507822
don't bother

>>18507939
I'm not stopping because of that tumor. I'm stopping because the other two anons with actual points to make are right that the idea can be done justice better if I write it out as a full-length story

>>18507861
>a greentext draft is probably always better when rendered in prose
I mean I agree, but the thing was this whole greentext thing kind of started at being bounced around anons on the thread for a prompt but then it slowly became a greentext draft for a fic as you said. A fic that's probably better done and explored conventionally as full fic rather than as half-scenes in greentext form.
...
Also what's the deal with all of the fucking one line shit responses? Did they get emboldened because they did actually manage to exile the Questanon from here (albeit indirectly).

>>18508300
To add to what you said, the strengths of a greentext style story is that it's up to the readers imagination to fill in the gaps of what wasn't explored, that includes dialogue, actions, emotions, setting, etc. It's meant to be a short thing that makes you go "huh, that's cute/interesting. Wonder how that would work out if it was a full fic?" and then you imagine the scenes in your head while using the greentext as a guide. It's still great but it's in the weird middle area of a full fic and a greentext summary where it doesn't say enough so you're engaged to imagine the scenarios but it still has enough where it pulls you towards a specific picture in your head if that makes any sense.

>>18508300
>Why do schizos do schizo things?
That’s all he can do, just learn to ignore him.

>>18497112
Writing a sequel to the Mio fic I posted last thread.
>bonus question
Watson solving cases

>>18508838
So we're getting a heavily pregnant sex scene right?

>>18508902
Pregnant yes, heavily pregnant no. Sorry.

>>18509113
What's the fucking point, then?

>>18471245
Sorry for the delay but here's the Shion valentine's fic that I promised.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTGoARkm_Yte0oNRv5MzuaTzNHDQKPqq-ArkSllaWSH9bjemeHgOVXF-6QWCxztIZ4CjoZs77TMZYoP/pub

>>18510049
>>18471197
I linked to the wrong post dammit

>>18510049
I like it. The part from Shion's POV didn't feel entirely necessary, and you switched between present and past tense a couple times, but overall it's a nice injection of fluff that I really needed.
Also, "I can’t being like those normies!" should be "I can't be like those normies" or "I can't imagine being like those normies" or something like that.

>>18510795
Thanks! I'll write more stuff for the thread so I'm gonna try and improve on those points.

Fixed. This is what I get for not writing for 2 months..

>>18510049
It's too short and Shion is badly OOC.

>>18510049
This fic may be rough at certain parts due to awkward use of pov, but it's got soul and some of the best fluff I've read in a while.
Good work anon, hope you can write more and get even better at making stuff like this.

>>18511392
I think it might be because this fic was retooled from a Rushia concept before the yab happened. I distinctly remember one of the posts here during the time the yab was happening being about them having to rethink their Rushia fic.... Or it could just be me being schizo and thinking of something else.

>>18512411
I thought the same

>>18510049
That last sentence ufff

>>18509113
Will she at least stop shaving her armpits?

t.bushman

>>18510049
CUUUUUTE

>>18500166
>>18500315
Bros...

Please don't do this to me, I don't wanna get hurt again.

>>18517954
>will never feel Lamy aggressively rubbing her face into your chest while cheerily telling you how much she loves you with a very slight slur of her words between giggles
>will never feel her begin to slow down as she just holds onto you, the alcohol finally beginning to hit her as she grows sleepy, content to use you as a pillow while she keeps insisting that you're important to her
>will never get to just sit there as she begins to softly snore on your chest, clung to you with a tiny smile on her blissful features
This world is cruel, Jack.

>>18474247
Japanese women hate face sitting. You'll never get her this way.

What are some good feet fics if I'm not much of a ringofag?

>>18518446
I don't think any exist?

>>18500000
Checked

>>18518243
Why must these things be so far out of my reach

>>18518321
>Japanese women hate face sitting.
This is an oddly specific claim, please explain.

>>18518734
>Lamy is pregnant
>but also drinking
I suppose if the kids are coming out retarded no matter what, we don't have to care about our obscene, degenerate birthing sex accidentally hurting them.

>>18471245
Coco tearfully admitting that the Cocock is a lie, that she actually suffers from extreme penis envy and wants you to fuck Kanata while she pretends it's her dick

>>18518734
>>18519727
>pregnant
anons...

>>18521810
...She is pregnant, right? I mean I'd still fuck her even if she wasn't, but...

>>18522001
that's from the architecture general's most frequently contributing drawfag

>>18522059
Ah, I see. I think he did the Polka pic too? Not sure. Based either way. I'd suckle those fat titties and play with that tummy while pumping a child into her.

>>18521772
It's far from fake.

>>18524094
That being said, the "alpha" Mickey mouse dragon schlicking off in the corner of the room watching Kanata get fucked right in front of her wishing it was her doing it does sound pretty hot

>>18524872
>Not having Coco pressing herself against your back, trying to push you deeper so she can pretend she's the one thrusting

>>18525909
From the prompt I was imagining this, Coco dirty talking Kanata as you rail her with your giant dick.

>>18480260
I thought people eat that shit up

>>18526436
you thought wrong, pippa, stop being a faggot

>>18525909
>>18526329
Well, it could work but it certainly would be difficult. Also having her slip slamming against your ass would feel pretty gay

>>18526436
Pippa is a newfag pretending to be an oldfag. Pretty gay desu

>>18524872
>Coco having the best orgasm in her life from she watches Kanata get railed.
>Starts having regrets about this after that but before she can say anything You look at her, your cock still hard from watching her..

>>18526722
I really wouldn't care if I'm balls deep in angel pussy and her fat dragon titties are pressing against my back

>>18527802
This. As long as a dick isn't actually going in me and she's just thrusting with me, I have fat, hot titties pressed against my back.

>>18528164
Like you're giving her a thigh-job or something?

>>18528222
Y'know? Yeah, that'd work. Don't care, still fucking Kanata.

How would Kanata feel in this threesome? Would she be disinterested at first then get into it or just onboard the idea from the get go?

>>18528453
I feel like the former. Egged on and peer pressured by Coco, then slowly starts to get into it.

>>18528453
I think REAL Kanata would only ever accept this at ALL if she was already dating you for a while. Coco and you would have to approach her and talk her into it, but even then she would take a while to accept the idea.

>>18471245
(You) find lulu's deleted archives on tapes. When you reach the end of the last archive, she comes out of your tv. The rest of your days are spent making memories with her.

>>18528453
She's initially disinterested in (You) and this whole setup but gradually gets corrupted by it and will eventually admit she's not doing it just because she loves Coco anymore.

>>18528643
>*babies
ftfy

>>18528810
That does not sound like my hero Kanata at all.

>>18528868
I like that you can insert that word in many many ways, each changing the fic completely.

>>18528936
Unfortunately anon, this isn't a love story but a cuckquean fic where you are the bull.

>>18471245
Your girlfriend Elira playfully teases you for having a microdick and puts you in chastity
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wXk5eY689N0

>>18529342
No, Kanata would never do that, never in a million years!

Kanatan...

>>18530947
>Coco will never feel Kanataso's insides nor fertilize her
At the end of the day, she exists to be fertilized herself.

>>18529994
Never heard Elira's voice. It's nice.

>>18531403
> Coco has many connections, people in power, friends with power
> despite all this, they can't manage to give her a phallus
> Coco starts getting angry at Shion for not being able to do what she asked
> rapes the witch to vent her anger
> no matter how hard she slams their clams together, it just isn't enough
> Still frustrated, next on the list is asking Rushia for help
> Rushia is just a necromancer, can't do true magic like giving her body parts
> Coco already knows this, but she went anyway...

>>18530445
>After the incident everything seems to have gone back to normal in the KanaCoco household.
>On the surface at least. Kanata is antsy and unsatisfied.
>Coco tries to help by going back to their old sex routines but it wasn't helping.
>Eventually Kanata dissapears in the night.
>The next week Coco receives a mysterious video file.
>Kanata getting fucked by (You).
>But not just that, Kanata having a loving date with (You), Kanata kissing (You), Kanata saying she loves (You)
>Coco cries while she sees her best friend having the time of her life.

>>18519565
it's actually very simple. japanese people just have awful taste in almost everything.

>>18519565
How come you haven't heard of this? Japanese people hate fetishes in which the woman is in a dominant position. A lot of Japanese women will deny cowgirl or face sitting because it's weird and unfamiliar.

>>18533095
Finally a problem Rape Correction cannot solve.

>>18533274
Not with that attitude, it can't.

>>18533663
>Rape them so hard it mindbreaks them into wanting rough sex but finding no one who can properly provide it, resulting in them becoming the rough one

>>18534171
raping them in becoming rapists themselves.

>>18536252
Is this what happened to make Miko who she is?

>>18537117
miko fell out of a tree at birth and hit every branch on the way down

>>18537284
Miko was born at the top of a tree?

>>18537627
The stork delivering her to her real mother got shot down. Baby Miko then hit every branch straight on the head as she fell down, she survived this. Luckily a local shrine maiden saw this and thought she must have been blessed by the gods.

>>18537627
you weren't?

>>18538039
>>18537627
No wait, wait a second... Miko is a fucking bathtub baby. Think about it. It would explain her skin condition and why she is so dumb too.

>>18539609
I don't get how being born in a bathtub would make her retarded.

>>18531708
IMMENSELY HOT. This needs to be written down into the archives

>>18531708
>she can't stop herself and fingers herself to the hardest orgasm she's ever had

>>18543059
>water birth
>mom is too tired and passes out for a few minutes before pulling you out of the water
>brain damaged for the rest of your life

>>18544362
pic related

>>18544362
People normally don't perform water births alone, anonchama...

>>18544446
Her mother birthed her in a local spring. Unfortunately she was left too long in it that Miko got brain damage, but due to where she was born the spirits favored her into becoming a shrine maiden.

>>18506177
sugoi

>>18506177
>we may never know how this ends

>>18546296
don't need to, it's shit

>>18546341
>11:24 PM, Central Time
>6 AM in Europe
>12 PM in Indonesia
Like CLOCKWORK. So you're underage, aren't you? Don't know of anybody who gets out of work at noon.

>>18544362
I want to fuck this dumb wigger.

Vibin', chillin' warm, cozy, feeling giddy, ain't nothin' in the world to upset me.

>>18546661
She's BUILT for ryona + impregnation + sex slavery.

>>18546517
you should pick a better hill to die on than that shitty story

>>18546741
>Sex Slavery
Cringe, you beat and impregnate Mori because she's for you and you only

>>18547211
When did I imply otherwise? Sex slavery just implies (forced, constant) availability, not polygamy.

>>18547266
Alright, good. Just kinda came off like you meant pimping her out

>>18547500
That's what you do with whores, and Mori is nothing if not a whore.

>>18547601
Nothing some correction can't fix, in any case.

>>18547500
Dude, never. Women are for keeping at home and making an army of children with.

>>18547708
Incredibly based and same

>>18546517
Don't reply to shitters shitting on the thread. They'll get bored when they don't get (you)s

>>18547698
What would a rape corrected Mori even look and act like?

>>18549032
You're right, sorry. I just kinda get emotionally invested in writing threads after like ten years of writing on 4chan and on adjacent sites like THP and anon-kun.
>>18549167
Look? Pregnant.

Act? Who cares. Enough weight on her tits from the milk, on her hips from the extra fat, and on her belly from all the children, and it's not like she'll be able to put up much resistance or do more than talk back.

Alternatively, I've personally known several women who did a 180 from bitter hags to total sweethearts after giving birth to a child. Not sure how that works out, but it's always a possible angle.

>>18549431
Nobody asked, blogposting faggot.

>>18549431
The things I would do to the rrat

>>18549944
Her Valentines Day stream is the closest I'm ever going to get.

>>18549431
>Alternatively, I've personally known several women who did a 180 from bitter hags to total sweethearts after giving birth to a child. Not sure how that works out, but it's always a possible angle.
The cure to Ayame?

>>18549944
Her positively psychotic reaction to horror titles triggers my protective instincts something fierce.
>>18550073
It's a possibility!

>>18550073
Maybe

>>18550073
The condoms and birth control are the only thing keeping her a bitch. Her oni instincts are kicking in and desiring children. The only way to fix her is burn through all of the condoms she's brought and breed her.

>>18550073
Poking holes in the condom or replacing her pills with tictacs to make her pregnant. She suddenly becomes much more responsible and actually consistently streams. She proceeds to be the biggest earner in hololive giving (you) and your daughter a very comfortable live while being a loving wife.

>>18546741
But where are the fics?

>>18552705
You should know by now that all the writers have left. It's just shitposters who remain.

>>18553145
kek

>>18553145

>>18553145
Has there been any development's on the status of Rushia-chan's vaginal occupation?

why are so many of the stories here in second person? i genuinely cannot think of a single thing better about second person than third person.

>>18553358
because fuck you, that's why

>>18553284
Still a femcel, except that's being told by people who have a vested interest in you believing it. I'm inclined to because the specifics don't make her look good.

>>18553358
natural way of 4ch stories

>>18553358
Because it's about (You)

>>18553382
Aww. Good for her, but no fun.

>>18553392
ok, but why?
>>18553413
no, it's about some nameless guy that by design has no personality. just saying that he's you doesn't magically make the fic super immersive.

>>18553526
>ok, but why?
>>18553375

>>18553526
Honestly it's half the natural writing style for self/reader insert a here since using first person is a bit too much especially with staying anonymous.
The other half is because these stories aren't about (Us) but about them, about the chuubas who we want to do this kind of stuff to us/do that kind of stuff to them.

>>18553721
>these stories aren't about (Us) but about them
then why bother with a pointless self insert at all? why not use only chuuba characters?

>>18553857
because that's what AO3 is for

>>18553857
Because then it'd be a completely different kind of story.
The use of anon is much closer to first person Self-inserts that are more common in other parts of the internet than to a third person original character. It's necessary to have them because the point is to insert into them and 'feel' that experience.
Meanwhile a third person fic with only chuubas is more about exploring their relationships and characters to each other.

>>18554077
fanfiction is fanfiction. i see no need to make such a distinction.

>>18554166
>It's necessary to have them because the point is to insert into them and 'feel' that experience.
if you can't relate to a character that has more personality than a block of wood then you either don't have a personality yourself, or you literally do not have a sense of empathy.

>>18554299
You keep outing yourself as someone who's never bothered to read a decent amount of the archive.

>>18554299
???
Are you actually just a tourist that stepped in and randomly read some works here and assumed all the second person used here is CYOA book style no personality protagonists?

>the self-insert hater is back
Timeloops are real, folks! Don't forget it!

>>18553101
These are the new stories we got added to the archive in the past 7 days. So 5 stories in a week, and if we're counting big greens like the Haachama greentext there's also the Sora greentext, and for this thread's stories Anon just posted >>18510049.

So at around 5-6 stories per week, we're slow, but we're definitely not dead. If we kept at this exact pace for a year it would add a minimum of another 200 links to the archive.

Also, activity and inactivity build upon themselves. If (You) write, it increases the chances others will. If (You) don't write, it increases the chances others won't.

>>18554299
So write a third person story where 'Anon' is a named character with his own backstory instead of (You).

>>18554675
>I posted Selen instead of the screenshot...
Ahem. THESE are the new stories that got added to the archive in the past 7 days.

>>18554675
I like your positivity but I'm afraid writing is what's killing this general. Futa, insects, rape, NTR has been flourishing and that pushed all the vanillafags away. That causes more of these fetishes to come out and less tourists to stick around. The NTR arc absolutely was the death of this place, even if it was just a fun experiment for some writers.

>>18554675
Don't bother. Periods of inactivity come and go. Remember last month, maybe the month before when we got a huge load of stories out of nowhere after doomposterchama was ringing his bell and holding up his 'the end is nigh!' sign on the corner again? The nature of the hobby means that lulls in content are to be anticipated from a laundry list of external sources ranging from time constraints to just needing a break.

>>18554741
Not everyone's a schizo like you.

>>18554675
Honestly I think something that might be unstated from this is the fact that a lot of the writers here are kind of going for bigger fics/series that just take more time than one shots.
>>18554741
The only writer I know that's gotten pushed away from this thread is the Sakura Summer writer, and that one is more from them being menhera about taking critique than anything done from content.

>>18554815
>holding up his 'the end is nigh' sign
kek for some reason that reminds me of watchmen.

>>18554701
I want to contribute more, asking for horny prompts occasionally, but deep down I already knkw none of them will int interest me or cather to my fetishes so I never end up taking them. Despite that I still contribute a ton, sort of. My stories are pretty small recently. 8 of the 30 last stories are mine. Still, even though I try to write a bunch, there isn't many others like me anymore. I'm guessing it's something of the sort like "Fubuki generic smut of vanilla fetish X Y and Z has already been done" so these people don't pump them out anymore, but fuck man.

I'm gonna write some more to my main story and see if I can pump out some horny greentext or something again if I don't just jerk off and sleep.

>>18555142
Holy fuck my sentences are really messed up when I'm tired.

>>18555142
Either you're losing hope or pedestalizing yourself and I can't tell which.

>>18554437
AME LEAVE /WG/ ALONE

>>18554437
>only 1 person has ever relised that self inserts add nothing and only take away
>more than 1 person saying the same thing is a timeloop
>>18554381
>>18554412
if there are as many second person main characters with personality as you say there are, then why don't you tell me about some of your favorites and describe their very unique personalities?
>>18554675
people wouldn't like that the main character is an oc and not a chuuba even though there isn't any difference between that and a self insert.

>>18555245
It's both? I'm proud that I pumped out so many fics but It's really sad to look at the archive and see that most of the fics are all just mine, fics that I posted ages ago still right there not far from the latest one. It's not a good sign for one to fill up most of the stories posted.

>>18554675
A lot of writers also write really long, 10k word stories rather than quick one shots too, so it’s less about the amount of stories and more about the word count IMO.
Oh and thanks for the Selen pic.

>>18555282
>people wouldn't like that the main character is an oc and not a chuuba even though there isn't any difference between that and a self insert.
If you’re not gonna write anything stop fucking complaining.

>>18555282
Like Exposure Therapy's tough ex-Yakuza with a heart of gold and fist of iron, HF's manlet who doesn't know what a pussy is with anger issues, Holocalypse's gruff bastard who can't let himself relax after committing a shitload of warcrimes, etc? You haven't read shit, fuck you.

>>18554815
I'd rather have writeanons take their time with their fics to make sure it's quality rather than hastily made shitty fics. The christmas specials of /wg/ were all great stories that were very enjoyable.

>>18555282
I can already tell you're not going to act in good faith and say all the examples given don't count. Burden on proof for your claim that all second person main characters have no personality is on you.
>main character is an oc and not a chuuba even though there isn't any difference between that and a self insert.
Honestly closest thing to that is GrandLeviathan's works on ao3 since pretty much all of their smut is 3rd person throw away MC and girl from a series they like. They have a few chuuba fics but the characterization from them all felt very clipwatcher that I never really liked them

>>18555470
am i wrong though? if the examples this anon >>18555568 gave were written is third person and the main characters had actual names they would probably be heavily criticized for having literal ocs as the main character in a fanfic that's supposed to be about vtubers.
>>18555568
now ask yourself, would these fics be better, or worse if they were written in third person and the mc had a name?

>>18555282
Don’t read the stories then?? If you don’t like 2nd person just leave, nobody’s asking you to read them. I personally like 2nd person because it’s the most immersive.

>>18556393
i was just wondering why most of the writers here intentionally make their fics worse.

>>18556166
Honestly that kind of theoretical question is more on author ability than on second person itself, and given that everyone here's anonymous mostly I can't really think of any of their third person work to compare.
...
Especially since if we're being honest they'd be more likely written as a 1st person self insert rather than as a 3rd person OC. SIs have kind of gotten their stigma killed in most fanfiction circles since people have grown up and stopped giving a shit about being ashamed about writing self inserts.

>>18556166
If the stories were written in third person and the character had a name it would be harder for me to put myself in the characters shoes, AKA self insert. I like self inserting myself into stories.

>>18556504
>worse
That’s subjective, and opinion based.

>>18556504
If all you're gonna do is complain and not write to contribute and be the change you want to see, then leave.

>>18556504
sucks not being the target audience, huh? off you go

>>18556548
if you can't relate to a character who isn't supposed to literally be you, you're probably a narssicist.
>>18556526
>SIs have kind of gotten their stigma killed in most fanfiction circles since people have grown up and stopped giving a shit about being ashamed about writing self inserts.
incorrect. self inserts have more or less died off in most fanfiction circles since people have grown up and stopped writing self inserts.
>>18556928
i assumed the target audience was vtuber fans, not vtuber fans with no taste.

>>18557111
>i assumed the target audience was vtuber fans
it is, that's why it doesn't appeal to you

>>18557219
>if you don't like second person you must not like vtubers
i'm genuinely confused on what you mean by this. please elaborate.

It’s so obvious when they post in bad faith. They should try harder.

>>18557111
>incorrect. self inserts have more or less died off in most fanfiction circles since people have grown up and stopped writing self inserts.
No?
Don't know what circles you go around but generally people stop being ashamed and just write what they want to write rather than bowing to the whims of some fag that wants to dictate their content. So SI writers are either young and unironic or old and stopped giving a shit about people that shit on the existence of their stuff

>>18557111
I can relate to characters fine, that’s not what I’m saying. 2nd person just helps me immerse myself into the story even more.

Just ignore the sealioning jackass who's arguing in bad faith or at least reply with longer posts other than
>I think this sucks or this is better therefore it is the subjective truth
or
>I'm just gonna ignore everything you said and focus on the one thing I have a reply to and act like it's an actual debate
Or at least wait until we reach bump limit before doing this cause that's when you can say whatever the fuck you want, no holds barred

>>18510049
Very cute. Short and sweet just like our resident kusogaki
The major criticism I have is that some parts felt repetitive; like the paragraph says that she has to go to the groceries and then the next paragraph is her saying that she has to got to the groceries or the part where you described her living quite close to you.
Another thing is that you should probably italicize the parts where the dialogue is referencing stuff related to the past to make it feel better if that makes any sense
also I have to agree with that one Anon, the last sentence was uooooohhh

>>18556096
True but some of GrandLeviathan's work are still pretty good especially the 2nd person Suisei & Fubuki fic which was fucking incredible

>>18557653
>eveyone i don't like is posting in bad faith
(you) are the only bad faith poster in this thread right now.

>>18558005
>you have to reply to every single post or you're just arguing in bad faith
you and >>18557653 are the only bad faith posters in this thread right now

>>18558005
>True but some of GrandLeviathan's work are still pretty good especially the 2nd person Suisei & Fubuki fic which was fucking incredible
Yeah, as much as I dislike how he writes stuff; I'm still waiting for 'Army of the Demon King' to update since I need a fucking holoOrgy fic and that had the closest thing to what I wanted outside of the hag orgy,
Which btw, Hag Orgy part 2 doko?

>>18558147
Read your posts and this is all I have to say: No one gives a fuck about your retarded opinion and you aren't an authority on style, write the way you want and don't expect others to conform to your asinine standards. And you only get this (You) because at least you bothered to make lengthy posts. Stop shitting up the thread please.

>>18558265
i'm not expecting anyone to conform to anything. the reason i made my first post was because i was genuinely wondering why 90% of the fics in the archive are written in second person.

>>18510049
God I need more Shion

What's JOI?

>>18558552
jerk-off instructions

>>18558552
Jesus Objects to Immorality.

>>18471197
More Mio seggs. I have like four or five more ideas for this continuity so stay tuned for more. As always, feedback is appreciated and I hope you enjoy the fic.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQOg8K1RXj-4Mu49Nj1nB4KoV52I7LwRZm5ZMa-8VItpzCXDNtl9Rg3XhBpHrs4D4camHoYZKs7DAJ7/pub

Tags: Mio, NSFW, nakadashi, paizuri

I keep trying to write ideas but when I'm 5 paragraphs in I realize any chuuba I'm writing is grossly out of character and delete it all only to do the exact same thing the following day.

>>18558686
The solution is not to write.

>>18558720
Yeah but I want to contribute more stories.

>>18558740
Then you need to write.

>>18558686
At some point you need to stop aiming for perfect characterization and learn to settle for "close enough."

>>18558686
Don't listen to >>18558816. He's telling you to settle for mediocrity.

>>18558686
>>18558740
Honestly the solution is to keep writing even if it feels wrong AND to look for feedback by posting to the thread even if you feel it's inedequate.
You can go far alone but sometimes you really do need someone else to point stuff out.

>>18558415
Well, many people answered your question. But you kept arguing and throwing insults, leading me to believe you aren’t asking a question but looking to start shit.

>>18558932
If you can't finish a story because your unreasonably high standards are impossible to meet, then you're never going to get anything done. Accept your own imperfection and you've taken the first step to becoming less imperfect.

>>18559078
Thank you for existing, Anon. In order to classify something as good, something bad must exist, and you excel in that capacity. Because of you, the rest of us have something we can point at and say to ourselves, "I'm better than that."

>>18558642
Okay. Some of that worldbuilding is a bit weird but damn does this make my dick hard.
You're are really making these fetishes sound appealing with your writing. Damn fine work with your smut anon.

>>18559146
And you excel at nothing. I'd rather be mediocre.

>>18559374
That's cool, dude. You're mediocre, though, so nothing you have to say is worth listening to.

>>18559451
I'd sooner read trash mediocre fics than the outright worthless drivel that pretentious losers like you always produce. You are nothing.

>>18559642
I'm better than you. You admitted it yourself.

>>18558642
anon... Ookami Mio is a wolf

>>18554815
Also I think it's unstated but chuuba fanfiction is still a niche of a niche. There aren't that many writers so lull's should be expected.

>>18558642
>Fox
Uh...

>>18558642
>tfw you've never watched a chuuba before or even looked at her design closely but still want to write a fic about her
Nice try

>>18558427
Why does her crying face bring such a smile to mine?

>>18558642
Hey dude, was gonna read your fic and give you some in-depth feedback plus constructive criticism, but I noticed you made a mistake with what kind of animal Mio is, so I'm just gonna point that out and ignore the writing.

>>18559368
Thank you
>>18559831
>>18560280
>>18560311
It appears that I associate Mio with Fubuki so much that I thought she was a fox. Whoops.

>>18561129
>thinking of mio as nothing more than a discount fubuki
Miofa... Don't look...

>>18561173
I mean they're best friends. Wouldn't it be cool if they were the same animal? That's what my brain thought.

Don't stop trying. Don't stop learning. Refine yourself one work at a time.
And always, ALWAYS creampie your hags.

>>18561296
amen

new thread: >>18561535

>>18561561
you so eager to beat the earlyfag you forgot the anchor n prompt board

>>18561296
sage wisdom

>>18561561
So the early thread problem has just metastasized now huh.
Honestly I never really gave a shit for the thread header except for the fact that it sometimes had people wander in on a false hope their oshi has fics.
Then again I joined in by the time the earlyfag was already a problem.

>>18561296
>Don't stop trying. Don't stop learning. Refine yourself one work at a time.
And always, ALWAYS creampie your hags.

>>18558686
I just write whatever. As long as you don't derp out like >>18558642 and get something basic completely wrong, nobody will mind much. After all, writing original English dialogue for JP-only chuubas is already a huge stretch as far as characterization goes.

>>18558642
>preggo lactation Mio fic
>quadruplets, fast pregnancy
You're a saint and will go unsung due to that major, major fuckup. I suggest you go back and edit it. Don't be embarrassed... or rather, take your embarrassment and use it as fuel to improve.

In your defense, when I first started clipwatching JP chuubas way back in the day, it took me like a month to realize Fubuki was supposed to be a fox and not a cat.

>>18559642
For the love of god, anon. Stop feeding the troll.

>>18561296
Hag sex... hag pregnancy...

>>18562153
PIRATE SEX! CLENCHING PIRATE PUSSY MILKING MY PENIS INSIDE HER WOMB OVER AND OVER WHILE I GET TO SPANK HER FAT ASS AND SQUEEZE HER JUICY TITTIES GOD FUCKING DAMN IT MARINE IS PURE DILUTED SEX

>>18561976
The weirdest part is that I've written about Mio before and didn't call her a fox so I have no idea what scrambled my brain this time. I will take your advice and edit it because it's a glaring flaw for a fic I really enjoyed writing.

>>18562153
>know that all hags must be impregnated
>but any time I see Marine's fat butt the urge to rail her asshole becomes unbearable
being an ass man ain't always easy

>>18562569
Just cum inside both, what's the big deal?

>>18563159