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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>19693941

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STORY ANCHOR
POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.19782050

Do you have any pikamee stories

>> No.19784200

>>19780665
>>19780713
A story where you’re selling hardcore drugs with Pikamee as she’s losing herself to her drug habits.

>> No.19784267

>>19780713
Electrostim play with Pikamee. Preferably lightly shocking your balls and head and then kettle laughing when you inevitably make a wet grunt and cum all over her face.

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>>19765692
>First story you shared
I wasn't actually the one that shared it, but Employee Benefits. I'd been lurking for awhile, so when it got reposted here by someone looking to farm (You)s, I had a bit of a chuckle. In retrospect I thank them, because it incited me to write a little more actively

>Story people like the most
High Density Comet. It's honestly one of my least favorite stories, but I still feel good hearing it can make people nut, because it was my first time writing an extended sex scene

>Story you're most proud of
A Flick of the Hips. I would recommend it to anons curious about architecture and/or who want to be in a relationship with a cute lewd elf haffu. Don't think I ever posted it here directly, actually, since most /ag/ lit got lumped into the archive link. From my pre-google-doc days, but here:
https://justpaste.me/WOCR

>> No.19784456

>>19784341
Anon, you should probably stop assuming the worst in people. Whenever I see stories outside of /wg/, I bring them here simply by linking them to the anchor. There's no bad intentions behind it. Most times I don't say shit and get not a single (You), and if I do I direct them towards the thread. I dunno what sort of traumatic experience you had but no one is trying to steal your thunder here.

>> No.19784769

>>19784456
Apologies, it's been months and I don't much remember the wording of the post itself. I DO however recall the shellshocked replies it got, which wasn't much how I wanted to introduce myself to the thread lol.
There's no subtext or sarcasm to read into there though, genuinely. I'm glad I could meet you folk and see some of the most creativity I've encountered in any writing community ever

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>>19765692
Oh, yeah, I forgot about this. Uh.

>First story you shared
Insecurities bubble to the surface. Something about cute-yet-needy Polka being needy enough to grab you was, put simply, really fucking hot. Balls took over on that one. Never thought it'd lead to all this.

>Story people like the most
Probably Lies Come To Light? I see that mentioned a lot. Like, a lot-a lot. Something I hammered out between games of Vermintide somehow became a communally approved gold standard for ryona. Not sure how that worked out, but I'm glad it's liked. There's also the Kiara series that one Anon keeps jerking off to.

>Story you're most proud of
Easily Holofantasy or Relapse. Relapse was something I tried really hard on. I was deeply inspired by the stories it was a sequel to, and I tried to channel all that into something. Holofantasy grew into something a lot bigger than I had anticipated as well, but I'm still having a lot of fun with it. A lot of ideas on the cork board, places to go, things to see, etc. The reception to it has been wonderful, sexual or not, and I always am happy when I see people asking questions about it.
Love you guys.

>> No.19784898

>>19784806
>AA plays Vermintide
And just when I thought you couldn't be MORE based

>> No.19784992

>>19784806
You truly are a treasure of man AA.

>> No.19785200

>>19784806
We love you man. Hope your grandkids are doing well!

>> No.19786936

Here’s to one year my friends

>> No.19787075

>>19780713

... for fuck's sake.

Anyhoo...

>>19761662 Gen 0 hyper muscle, with AZKi giga-hyper muscle, pecs focus.

>>19761705 Hime Hajime death by paizuri.

>>19761769 Kusatori hyper futa

>>19761897 Ollie/Mori juice

Stay classy, /wg/. See you when I see you.

>> No.19788267

>>19784806
>All my favourites fics came from the same writer
Huh This isnt the first time it happens

>> No.19788991

>>19788267
The dude created the archives. He has a real passion for writing unlike any of us. Of course his jokes are going to be of above average quality. Pretty much everything he pumps out is equally as praised.

>> No.19789026

>>19788991
> jokes
How the fuck did my brain come up with that. I meant fics.

>> No.19789740

>>19789026
I'm glad you like my jokes, Anon.

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>>19761662
>>19780713
might as well give this prompt a fitting image

>> No.19791585

>>19787075
>>19790439
I will never understand why you haven't just said fuck it and tried to get this commissioned. You have to understand that these prompts are niche as fuck right?

>> No.19791852

>>19791585
People get things for free so I should too mentality. I get it. It's why I hate the draw thread

>> No.19792195

>>19787075
>>19790439
For fuck's sake I can't find a single piece of AZKi hyper muscle artwork. Just picturing her adorable idol face buried between endless walls of pecs and trap meat, bulging and inflating and fucking growing endlessly. Mountainous biceps brushing against her classic twintails, and in the middle of that infinite muscle mass, comes the powerful weeping strains of Inochi. Because even as a monstrously jacked omnihulk, the only thing more powerful than her pecs is her SOVL. And as she wraps up her third encore, and the strains of the universe itself are nothing more than an overstretched bikini already starting to burst from the sheer pectoral mass, AZKi calmly turns to her awestruck genmates and sweetly asks with all the respect and reverence in the world... "Well.. Now that I've finished my concert... would you like to see how big they get when I actually flex them?"

I may be the only man in the world with this reaction, but the thought makes me fucking DIAMONDS.

>> No.19793052

>>19784806
>wrote lies come to light
>plays vermintide
>set up the archive
How can one man be so based?

>> No.19793668

>>19780665
The bus flies along the road toward Disney World, it's so fast that kids on the bus are being flung from their seats by centrifugal force. The bus is packed with tourist and they all have cameras and video recorders. They're here to see the magic of the Happiest Place on Earth, and there is plenty of magic here in Florida, where the sun shine everyday of the year.
The bus turn a corner so fast a passenger smashed through the window. Glasses shattered everywhere as the bus hurtles down the highway at 80 miles an hour. passengers hold on to their seats for dear life.
"I'm going to be sick". Says Gura. "Please slow down". But no one listen to her.
It's too hot. The air conditioner isn't working properly, and the heat inside the bus is unbearable, Sweats trickle down Gura's face and wet her eyes. Her hoodie stick to her back and make it hard to breathe. The driver ignores all of those problem and speeds up. He's only doing 80 but he could easily do 90. People scream as they're thrown around the bus, slamming against the windows, the seatbelts cutting into their flesh.
the bus hit something on the road. The frontwheels spin and come off the ground, sending the bus through a fence and into a field.
"OOH MY GOD!" Gura screams from the back of the bus. People are trapped in between smashed seats and the ceiling. The engine still running and the brakes aren't working. The bus roll over twice and come to rest. Passengers stumble out onto the grass. Some of them lie there, dazed. A woman has a cut on her face. A man has dislocated shoulder. Several children have been knocked unconscious.
And yet Gura has arrived anyway right outside the entrance of Disney World. The buses are backed up for miles. People are queuing to get in. This is just the beginning of the week long holiday. Everyone come here to be happy, and they'll never be happier than they've ridden Space Mountain or eaten cotton candy at Mickey's not so scary Halloween Party.
People begin to scramble over severed limbs and bodies to join the queue. It's a long way to the entrance. Many will die before they reach the entrance.
Gura marches to the front of the queue, passing through hundreds of patiently waiting families. She reaches the entrance of Disney World.
"Next". Says the guard.
"Excuse me, sir." Gura says. "But I'm here to see Mr.Fagin"
"Fagin?" The guard stares at her.
"Fagin my way, now move it dingus." Gura laughs and shoves past him and into the park.
Gura follows the signs to the main street, She's wearing a baseball cap, sunglasses and a fake moustache, but she doesn't think she fooled the cumbuds. She hopes not.

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>>19792195
Ahhhh, you know what? I think I'll give it a go.
I respect the passion because I have the same fetish, but haven't been confident in my writing ability. Though I may as well try, since I also quite love the idea of cute dainty idols being turned into big beefy stars.

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>>19792195

>> No.19795801

>>19770530
I still really love both Okayu fics you've put out. It's a shame more people aren't willing to write about her, so I hold those close.

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>>19780665
>Put off watching the Hakos GFE video
>Finally watch it
>Immediately read the Hakos fic series again
>mfw

Fuck I knew it was a bad idea to watch the GFE video.

>> No.19799211

Laplus is too cute she was literally going on 5ch to defend herself in third person... She deserves more attention here

>> No.19799251

>>19799211
What's funny is that it technically isn't out of character.

>> No.19799321

>>19799251
I can literally imagine her model, this tiny little bratty girl who doesn't even reach the ground with her feet, furiously typing away at the slanderous words of the anonymous. It's way too fucking cute... this is the first yab that only makes a Chuuba look better

>> No.19799346

>>19799321
Someone referred to it as a rare reverse yab and I'm inclined to believe them

>> No.19799433

>>19780713
Anon(You) are an astronaut and get stranded on a planet similar to earth but very clearly alien. Then you get sexually assaulted by Fauna, but angry and with purple hair (it sounds a lot better in my head I swear)

>> No.19800020

>>19799433
So the reveal at the end will be that it was actually earth in the future, and fauna wanted to rape you so she could rebirth Mumei right?

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>>19799346
>Her IP got leaked
>She posts on 5ch
>Oh god no what could she possibly have been say-
>Just correcting people on poor assumptions of herself, like her age and work ethic
>When somebody said they were gonna tell her they were changing oshi's, she recommended they do so on an ASMR video so it'll be drowned in other comments and she won't see it
>Posts that she hopes her own throat gets better soon

It really shows that she's as much an actual sweetheart as everyone says she is.

>> No.19800508

>>19800084
Damn Brat, Requires a cute fluffy fic.

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The two gakis of hololive are actual sweethearts irl. We really need a fluff fic featuring these two

>> No.19800977

>>19800084
If only I knew how to write Laplus then I would.

>> No.19801130

>>19800977
>chuuni gaki that's actually a really kind and sweet person.
That's basically it honestly. Also I guess you can write "Thou" and "Thy" for her chuuni speak

>> No.19801280

>>19801130
Alternativeky you can use "cool" sounding/big words to try and represent chuuni speak with the Gap Moe represented by her switching to smaller/normal word choice.

>> No.19801294

>>19801130
Damn, I should write more laplus then.

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>>19800084
Literally custom-tailored for bullying with love.

>> No.19802338

>>19799346
A reverse yab deserves a reverse yab ritual.
A fic where Laplus beats the shit out of (You) because her IP address got leaked.

>> No.19802377

> tells AA not to archive unfinished fic
> gets upset when he doesn't
Why am I like this

>> No.19802486

>>19802377
What unfinished fic? Wait. Are you the second holoreality image prompt writer? I thought you were going to continue working on the fic so you unpublished and as such asked to unarchive it.

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>>19801130
Shit I just realized that La+ is the chuuba version of Jahy-sama.

>> No.19802530

>>19802377
attention-seeking is a problem behavior many of us have to deal with and it's only an issue when you act on it

>> No.19802570

>>19802486
No that's me, I don't know what his deal is.

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>>19802486
No, I wrote the one about meeting Gura in an alley. I actually know exactly why I'm feeling this way and since you're so special to me, I feel like telling you, but please don't share it with anyone because it's rather embarrassing!

When I gave up on that fic I told AA that it was up to him to decide if he would archive it or not, because I had no intentions of finishing it. The reason I'm upset is because AA actively chose not to do it. In my mind, the fic in its unfinished state, despite there being several other unfinished fics in the archive, was so uninteresting to him that in his eyes it wasn't even worth archiving. That's why I'm upset but please don't tell anyone because they'll call me childish, or worse, a f-slur!

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>>19803076

>> No.19803145

>>19803076
You're a slave to your own emotions.

>> No.19803433

>>19803076
I mean, you told me archive it or not, it was up me. I figured it'd just be a bad memory or some shit. I could still just time travel and grab it if you want, but it wasn't anything like that. I was looking forward to a second part, but c'est la vie.

>> No.19803771

>>19803076
Anon...
Two things. Generally when you ask someone to not do something, people generally act in good faith and respect the wishes of someone when it would take effort to do that thing in the first place.
Second off, WIP posted to thread are generally archived if they get anchored/noticed since the purpose of the archive is so that someone doesn't have to archive dive the 4chan archives to look it up.

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>>19803433
I am proud of my works and if I'm not I'd be sure to tell everyone, so I don't have any bad memories about them other than two from my dark past. I actually got the urge to go back, snatch it and finish the fic but a big ol' "404 thread not found" barricade made me lose interest in it all over again.

>>19803771
Yeah but I didn't ask him not to archive it

I shall reflect upon my feelings and come out as a better man! Anyway, in other news, is anyone interested in CBT?

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>>19804792
Only if it's me squeezing a little dicked futa Matsuri's balls so hard she's screaming that they'll break as she cums from you pounding her from behind at the same time

That art's kinda hot though, morose because it looks more like the menhera succubus is threatening to hurt you rather than actually

>> No.19805053

>>19804996
seconding this
>>19804792
Give me a few then.

>> No.19807187

fingers, O fingers...

>> No.19807857

I need more Flare amnesia onegai

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Seems like a slow night. What are you guys working on?

>> No.19808375

>>19807905
Festival of Sensations part 2, but it's taking a while thanks to being busy at work and then being tired from work.

>> No.19808683

>>19807905
The rest of Holofan Ch. 6 is drafted out essentially, just needs to be filled in. I have an interview tomorrow, though, so that potentially slows things down further.

>> No.19808843

>>19807905
Elden Ring is determined to keep me from writing about hag seggs.

>> No.19809418

>>19804792
>is anyone interested in CBT?
Honestly creatively I'd be interested in 'how' you'd do it writing from the male 2nd person since it does seem like an extension of femdom and abuse but also rather centered aroung "your" pain rather than her pleasure. I'll be interested to see how you handle that.

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>>19747487
Thanks man, that's some high praise and I'm glad to see people enjoying my work!
>>19807857
Gonna repeat what >>19808843 said and say that Elden Ring has put a stop to my writing for the time being cause holy shit is that game big and I can't stop playing it in my free timeThe fact that the underground is an entire area all together and not just a dungeon like I thought is fucking mind-boggling
Please take this cute Flare as compensation for my lack of writing

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>>19807905
I had a manic episode and sperged out here all weekend instead of writing my next chapter like I should have been doing

>> No.19811130

>>19810186
That underground area is crazy. Wonder how many people will even end up there.

>> No.19811162

>>19811130
Anyone trying to rightfully fuck Ranni, probably.

>> No.19811354

>>19810908
Which story?

>> No.19811427

>>19811130
Assuming you guys are talking about Siofra, it's practically impossible to miss as long as you've got an ounce of adventurer's spirit in you because of the massive unexplained dome with a mysterious lift in the Mistwood.

As for Nokron, well... that's most likely something I'd need a guide for. Honestly, I feel like there's actually way TOO much in this game - the Soulslike character system has a point where there's not much benefit to going forward - once you've got your weapon(s), talismans, and finished your build - and you reach it before you're done with all the content.
I got sick of bleed being the hottest shit on the block because of how simple it makes things, so I go sorc thinking it'd be like DS3... and sorc's stronger than ever, especially with Moonveil grabbing you by the hand and carrying you to the end.

Actually on-topic: I've found myself watching a hell of a lot of Lulu recently because I think she might be the only chuuba who may actually finish this thing on-stream. Her soulsborne runs were always fantastic and so far her ER streams are great fun; every time I get frustrated at how simple things are, watching her streams always lights that fire again. Highly recommended.

>> No.19811448

>>19810908
Hololive: Subjection?

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>>19811354
>>19811448
yes
god I'm so embarrassed

>> No.19811618

>>19811549
Eh you were a sperg but the thing that matters most is that you broke out of it. Welcome back anon.

>> No.19811750

>>19811549
Don't worry you're allegedly not the first writer to have a menhera breakdown in the thread. As long as you come back to writing good shit all is forgiven... eventually.

>> No.19811832

>>19811549
Hahahaha you should have seen MY spergout. Don't worry about it man, it happens to everyone. Next time though write what you're feeling down then turn it into a story, the raw visceral emotions makes for good writing.

>> No.19811926

>>19811549
Next time turn that menhera episode into a story like how I turned my depression episode into one

>> No.19812168

>>19811549
All good man, I just hope you'll eventually keep writing. As I said, your series is quickly turning into one of my favorites.

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>>19811549
Forgiven.

>> No.19812221

>>19812176
but it's going in the book.

>> No.19812705

>>19811549
It happens sometimes. Just please take your meds.

>> No.19813337

>>19811427
>an ounce of adventuring spirit
You overestimate casuals. Half of the people who've played bloodborne haven't gone to cainhurst castle. Will check out Lulu though.

>> No.19814348

>>19811549
Couldn’t even last a day. Pathetic.

>> No.19814968

Anyway, earlyfag is a cunt.

>> No.19815257

>>19807905
I want to write a Metal Gear revengeance inspired fic after playing through the game but I think that's a bit too chuuni even for me.

>> No.19815308

>>19815257
That'd be fucking sick.

>> No.19815320

>>19815257
Well you know what they say, write drunk edit sober. Kill that fucking voice that says it's cringe and see if it turns out cool.

>> No.19815354

>>19815257
THE TIIIIIIIIIIME HAS COME TO END

>> No.19815450

>>19815257
Chuuni? Yes. Cringe? Perhaps. Fucking epic? Deifinitely.

Jokes aside, since the major characters in the game are incredibly exaggerated and hammy, replacing them with your chuuba of choice wouldn't feel too out of place I feel.

In contrast I wanna write an MGS-inspired story with convoluted plotlines, seemingly out of place silliness and interpretations of what a "dream" is.

>> No.19815479

>>19815257
>arguing with Haachama's decapitated head about memes

>> No.19815526

Shion awoke in the field, feeling rather peculiar. She had been experimenting with new transportation magic that could revolutionize travel. Now, however, her entire body hurt. She sat up and looked around. She was in a clearing in the center of what appeared to be a copse, a far cry from where her home was. "H-hello?" A voice say timidly from behind her. Shion whipped around, to hear an "Eep!" And a rustle of feathers. A talking bird? "Sorry, you startled me. Uh, are you a h-human? You seem lost...can I, uh, help you?" "I would like some help, yes, but I would also love to see who I'm talking to." Shion said, firmly. "It's rather rude to make yourself scarce like this, wouldn't you agree?" From behind a bush Shion heard nervous laughter then out trotted a...yellow horse? "H-hello," said the animal "I'm Fluttershy. What's y-your name?"

>> No.19815583

>>19815257
I feel like Pekora would make a good armstrong.

>> No.19815588

>>19815308
>>19815320
>>19815354
>>19815450
>>19815479
Well if that's the case, Which chuuba would fit Monsoon and Sam?

>> No.19815686

>>19815588
It'd be best to use the inspiration in broad strokes rather than try to make it a 1:1 copy of MGR's story. But if you want a powerful but sympathetic anti-villain type character similar to Sam, I guess Botan or Lui would fit best.

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>>19815526

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>>19815779
I will NOT be continuing that, fyi.

>> No.19815894

>>19815588
Could always use HoloX's literal samurai. Monsoon is a doomer who wants (You) to accept who you are, murderous intent and all, and Sam wants you to stop lying to yourself and be the best you can be without taking any shortcuts or letting bullshit stand in your way.

>> No.19815898

>>19815864
thank god

>> No.19815963

>>19815588
Would Artia be Armstrong?

>> No.19815997

>>19815588
yeah, don't do a 1 to 1 conversion of the bosses to the chuubas, just do similar goals/personalities and maybe some references to their special abilities(monsoon's splitting/mistral's arms) and you should be good. Just remember the objective isn't to be "accurate", rather you want to emulate the over exaggerated nature of MGR and it's hamminess.

>> No.19816042

>>19815686
>>19815997
I'm not gonna 1:1 copy the story, just make a oneshot inspired fic. I don't really know how to write Botan nor have I watched Lui before so I'm thinking of Ayame for Sam. Sounds like fun writing a cocky strong character for Ayame.

>>19815894
I just realised the only HoloX member I actually do watch is Laplus but Iroha seems interesting.

>> No.19816235

>>19816042
that's good, honestly the only thing i would expect from this is the action scenes to be crisp, just like the lightning bolt action we've come to love.

>> No.19816353

>>19780713
Manhandling La+'s tiny body to vigorously fuck/molest her on all the furniture in your home after finding out what a good girl she was on 5ch.

>> No.19817696

>>19816353
UUUOOOOHHH

>> No.19818505

Long ago, in a distant land, I, La+, the shape-shifting mistress of darkness, unleashed an unspeakable evil. But, a foolish Samurai Warrior wielding a magic sword, stepped forth to oppose me. Before the final blow was struck, I tore open a portal in time, and flung her into the future, where my evil is law. Now, the fool seeks to return to the past, and undo the future that is La+.

Gotta get back, back to the past, Samurai Iroha.

I: Beginnings and Endings.

The portal closed and Iroha landed in a crouch on the busy city street. Nobody paid her any mind, all eyes were downcast as everyone, all wearing crimson robes marched on, going about their day. Except for footsteps and the sounds of skytraffic overhead all was silent. She looked around, crimson banners hung from buildings, esoteric characters emblazoned in gold writ upon them. Otherwise the city had no decoration. Just slate grey buildings and black cables that ran into the foggy mist above. No trees. No grass. No rubbish on the streets.

Iroha walked through the crowd searching for... anything really. A food cart. A mouse. An open establishment. Something. There wasn't one. Iroha had already tried to get people's attention but nothing worked. Not even brandishing her sword. The Robes just stopped until she got out of the way. So she walked. The more she walked the more a weight seemed to collect on her shoulders, and she felt as if she was going to sleep when a metal bar being pushed into her stomach halted her. She shook her head and focused her eyes, this time pain came, a shock from the bar, a stun baton. It hurt, of course, but didn't do any real damage. It sure broke her trance, though. This time she saw what shocked her, a man, crimson, black, and gold armor stood before her, his entire face but for his mouth covered by a helm. "Awake now, scum?" The man demanded. "Where is your robe? Where are your papers? Where are you going?" He demanded.

Iroha cleared her throat. "I am new to this city, and-" the baton slammed down on her shoulder. "DON'T YOU LIE TO ME, SCUM!" The man roared, scant centimeters away from her face. "NO ONE IN OR OUT! ROBE! PAPERS! INTENTION!" He barked. She gestured to her Hitatare "This is my robe." The man sneered. "Funny." He raised his baton again, and Iroha unsheathed her sword. He stopped. "A...weapon?" He seemed incredulous. "This is my papers. And I am trying to find a way out." The guard backed away a step. "Now, hold on just a second sc-er-citizen. As I said, nobody gets in or out of this layer." Eyes narrowing Iroha stepped forward. "Except for Citizens, that is," the guard stammered quickly. "Yes, you can go where you wish. Even I will bring you. Yes?" "...Yes. Bring me to the exit of this level." The guard flinched. "I cannot go there, please understand, citizen." "You can lead me there, yes?" He shuddered, and seemed to be getting anxious. "Well. Yes I. Could do that. For." He slumped over.

Iroha started to move to him, then smoke billowed forth from his mouth, ears, and nose. The samurai hopped backwards, clearing three meters before she landed. The guard twitched, writhing on the ground like a fish on the dock. Smoke began to rise from his body. First his helm fell off ash, this his boots. Leg guards, gloves and arm guards, finally his pants and armor. After a few moments all movement ceased. Iroha cautiously moved toward the pile of armor until she felt radiant heat. On the ground, inside the armor, was ash, like he had been cremated from inside out. Only teeth remained, and those were metal, glowing red hot.

"What is this... horrible place?" Iroha asked out loud. Only oppressive silence answered her. She looked at the guard on the ground again and realized something. He had to have come from somewhere. Where? She decided to scout the area, hoping to find a place to sleep or rations to eat. Moments of rattling locked metal doors on bland stone buildings she came across an opened door. Iroha looked around, then quickly ducked inside. Monitors, view screens on the wall. An input system that presumably controlled them. A small cot. Chair, table, and... unfinished food and drink on the table. Iroha wasn't too keen on the idea of finishing someone else's meal, but she was starving, so she dug in. Like the city the food was bland. But it was filling. The drink, plain water, was a Godsend. She sipped at it until she no longer felt parched. After a few moments, and feeling like life returned to her, she began searching the room more thoroughly.

The first surprise she stumbled on was a backpack full of supplies. It seemed a typical soldiers kit, but she was glad to finally see something so normal in this place. She also found maps. Printed on dot matrix paper, drawn partially in ASCII, and annotated in a strange language, but maps they were, and, another blessing, the exits to this level were marked, as if given to her by a God from the machine.

Readying herself, she aimed to set out.

>> No.19818590

>>19811549
You should be you stupid cunt. Fucking pathetic you did all that because your fics didn’t get enough (you).

>> No.19819882

>>19818505
This seems decent but you should probably just write it in a doc instead of thread posting since unless you were posting smut, people really won't have anything to say until something happens in the narrative.

>> No.19822137

I've a fucking need to write an epic heroic moment against insurmountable evil kind of story, but I know that the impact of it won't be as good as if I wrote it in a multi-chapter series building up the characters, stakes, and plot. But that final scene where the hero, bloodied and tired, but far from defeated, stares straight at the final villain. Both beings brandish their weapons, their words long tossed to the wind. Now only the victor will decide the course of history, and the fate of the world. I have a great need to write that scene, but I'll bide my time and slowly continue writing out the series I'm working on.

>> No.19822990

I have a need to write a story about my self-insert overcoming odds and becoming a better person.
I also have a need to write a good chuuba story.
Those two needs are not compatible.

>> No.19823496

>>19822990
I don't think they're that incompatible in a series. One shots need to focus on impact and making their length count but a series has much more leeway in making the journey be worth more than the destination.
I think if your SI can grow with the chuubas in question it isn't as incompatible as you think.

>> No.19823778

>>19823496
What series even is this

>> No.19823954

>>19823778
Not from here but generally some of the more smarter Self Insert fanfics I've seen generally divorce the author and the character based on the author so that the SI can grow, be hurt, heal, win, lose , etc. Effectively treating them as another character.

>> No.19824940

>>19823954
I mean what series are you working on

>> No.19825731

>>19780713
A hag shaving her pussy hair into a heart for you

>> No.19826861

>>19784267
So, light CBT or is this shock thing different?

>> No.19826954
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19826954

>>19799211
>>19800084
There was a knock on the door of the hovel that Laplus called a home. Who could it be? She didn't order anything recently. The peephole was too high for her to see out of, and bringing over a stool would take too long. What if her visitor got frustrated and left in the meantime? Against her better judgment she opened the door, the only hindrance being her oversized sleeves.
A stern-looking man at the door greeted her. With the sun at his back, he loomed over her like a dark shadow.
"Is this you?" he asked, The tablet in his hands glowed with light, showing a gallery of all-too familiar internet posts.
"Who are y-- w-who dares intrude upon my sanctuary?" she stammered. "Speak now, or face the wrath of the great demon Laplus Darknesss!"
The man was unfazed. "You really ought to know what can happen if your IP leaks. The internet isn't a safe place for kids," he said. "A bratty girl like you needs to be taught a lesson."

Laplus took a fighting stance. "W-why, you! Don't make light of Laplus Dia Highest Death Thirteen Daina Art of Impact Sign empa-Emperor Road of the Darknesss!" She tried to slam the door shut.
"Yeah yeah, whatever," he said, keeping the door open with one hand. With a swift move, he tied the girl's sleeves together.
"Insolent human! Your meager attempt to seal my power--"
The man picked her up like a sack of potatoes and went to find her room.

Laplus wanted to cry. She was basically naked. This intruder was going to see everything.
"...I know some sites can get inconvenient if you don't have a static IP, but if your IP leaks then you might as well invite people into your house."
"Uh.. uh huhn..." she sniffed.
"You have a phone, don't you? Depending on your service provider, you can use that to dynamically change your IP. Disconnect with airplane mode, and you can do whatever you want anonymously."
He was saying something, but the words barely registered.
"Also you should be more careful about cookies and trackers. I know your computer isn't top of the line so every bit counts. You can do this, this, this, this, this, and this "
She didn't. This was all helpful information, but she just wanted it to be over.
"I've been doing this for a very long time. Watch, you can do this, this, this, this, this, and this, and your computer performance will double. Now, I've got some other stuff to be doing now, so I'll give you my business card and you can email me if you need any more help."

Laplus opened her eyes. ...For all of that bluster, this was just tech tips. That... that wasn't so bad, she thought. Maybe he was just trying to scare her. Maybe there were more nice people online than she thought.

And then he raped her.

>> No.19827421

>>19826954
Y'know, that was actually good before the anti-climactic ending.

Care to elaborate on the raping process?

>> No.19827486

>>19827421
no

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>>19827486
oh

>> No.19828174

>>19780713
Laplus is made for getting stuck and fucked from behind! Her horns don't allow her to go backwards, and her plump little hips don't let her go forward. Fuck her thoroughly and then tell her that she could have just simply flipped sideways

>> No.19828633

>>19825731
Let me fix that
-A hag asking your help to shave her bush into a heart for you

>> No.19828795

>>19825731
If you unironically believe any of the girls from Hololive, or more specifically, the hags, would shave their pubes into patterns, you're delusional. To them that kind of stuff is very weird and way too slutty. At best you could have Nene doing it because she's a wild spirit but any other girl instantly shuts the idea doen

>> No.19828839

>>19826954
5/10 not enought rape

>> No.19828846

>>19828795
Excellent. They should remain unshaved.

>> No.19828909

>>19828846
Being optimistic maybe 30% of Holos have hair down there

>> No.19828946

>>19828909
Careful, you'll set the bush schizo off. Just ignore his crazed rambling.

>> No.19829041

>>19810908
>>19811549
So, is everything you do just a way to attract attention or what?

>> No.19829171

>>19828909
Being optimistic 30% are all shaved there while the majority must have hair then and maybe only some hags have a bush. Being all shaved isnt so common like it is on the west

>> No.19829222

>>19828795
>>19828909
>WHAAAT YOU'RE ASKING FOR SOMETHING FICTIONAL ON A FIC? HOW DARE YOU! GO TOUCH GRASS!!!
go back

>> No.19829259

>>19829222
Stop writing fanfic if you're not gonna use the characters

>> No.19829295

>>19829259
So tell me in which stream Fubuki emotionally abused his boyfriend? Since you think all fics must be representations of real events. Or in which stream Kiara raped a worker

>> No.19829318

>>19829259
>Stop writing fanfic if you're not gonna use the characters
I don't think you understand what fanfic is

>> No.19829360

>>19829259
Actually kill yourself you schizophrenic fuck.

>> No.19829369

>>19829295
>in which stream Kiara raped a worker
Do your member reps

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19829404

>>19828909
Then this must be corrected.

We can start with Noel, I know for sure that bitch shaves. If she's taken down, it will be a domino effect across the entire organization.

>> No.19829406

>>19829369
Yes and I still havent been raped. I want a refund

>> No.19829425

>>19829295
>>19829318
Fanfic is "take this character with their fundamental ideologies and ways of acting and throw them in this scenario", not "take this character, throw everything that makes them themselves out and put them in random scenarios"

>> No.19829441

Guys, can you not derail the thread with this bullshit?

>> No.19829484

>>19829425
So in your opinion only 10% of the archives are fics. You're really a retard. I cant insist enought go back

>> No.19829536

>>19829484
Only 10% of the fics are good fanfic. The others may be good stories that are well liked but they aren't fanfic

>> No.19829579

>>19829536
>akshually
God you're worse than a redditfag

>> No.19829595

>>19829441
>Guys, can you not derail the thread with this bullshit?
You're asking too much from this place.

>> No.19829615

>>19780713
A terrible storm sinks the ship, leaving Anon as the only human survivor. However, Anon is not alone; a fearsome white leon(Botan) accompanies him in the lifeboat. Days turn into weeks and months, and Anon and the Leon must learn to trust each other in order to survive.
Botan's character should be written like in Lion's Den

>> No.19829627

>>19829425
I agree that capturing the character voice is essential, but you're being a faggot about it and should fuck off.

>> No.19829643

Don't you love having different opinions, guys? Isn't it amazing how so many different people can come together and discuss their stories and thoughts and ideas all in the same place? I love you guys.

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>>19829259
>>19829425
>>19829536
>mfw I'm the bush schizo and I've never sperged out like this
Hagchads, stay winning!

>> No.19829693

>>19829646
Everytime I see that image I remember that was made by a Discord bot. Technology has evolved into loving hags. Amazing

>> No.19829810

>>19829643
>Don't you love having different opinions, guys?
No, because their opinions are wrong and them enjoying the same thing I enjoy but incorrectly makes them even worse than people who don't like it at all.

>> No.19829896

>>19829810
this but unironically

>> No.19829900

>>19829425
>a bush that you have never seen nor will you ever is all that defines a character
listen to yourself for 5 seconds
you're like some religious fanatic

>> No.19829928
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19829928

Related to the idea of Lapu being a sweetheart under her chuuni persona; I really love fanart that depicts her as almost comically ordinary.
Like this one that's straightup described by the artist as
>(You) head out to a convenience store late at night, and meet Laplus

>> No.19829988

Is the thread derailed? Should I just wait until the next one?

>> No.19830008

>>19829988
>Is the thread derailed?
Yes.
>Should I just wait until the next one?
Also, yes.

>> No.19830015

>>19829988
You posting a story?

>> No.19830049

>>19829810
Congratulations on your first correct opinion! Unfortunately, the rest of your opinions differ from mine, and are therefore worthless drivel.
If you'd like to remedy this and become a better person, I might suggest endeavouring to be more like me. Start by reading the book "Everything I Say is Right," by yours truly.

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>>19829900
If the chuuba wouldn't realistically shave or wouldn't realistically grow her pubes, yes, I do believe that is an important character trait. It shows whether they have an antiquated way of thinking or not and if for example they shave their pubes whenever they go on a date it tells that they are lazy to do it on a daily basis like Suisei, or if they shave everytime it begins to look noticeable even when they aren't going out it shows they care about hygiene, stuff like that.

You people fail to realize just how important small details are when making a story.

>> No.19830113

>>19829988
Just make a new thread dude, post it there.

>> No.19830147

>>19830086
goodness gracious great balls of fire, where's the fucking menhera wrangler when it's us that needs him

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>>19811618
>>19811750
>>19811832
>>19811926
>>19812168
>>19812705
Thanks, anons. Next time I flip my shit I'll use the energy not to blogpost, but to finish that one Mori mommy incest sleep rape fic where (You) plow her while she's passed out drunk.
>>19812176
Is Flare in the Book of Grudges? What are the punishments for such treason?
>rape correction
Be more specific please.
>>19830086
>daily basis like Suisei
Suisei doesn't shave.

>> No.19830199

>>19830159
I specifically said otherwise. Please read. Suisei said she doesn't like shaving outside of special occasions, so whenever she goes out with someone you bet your ass she will shave. Sorry to ruin your fantasy

>> No.19830288

>>19830199
>I specifically said otherwise. Please read.
Why would anybody want to listen to what you have to say?

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>>19830199
>Suisei said she doesn't like shaving outside of special occasions
Post the timestamp.
Unironically girls like these are the easiest to get to stop shaving when you're seeing them. They already treat it like a chore so they'll be happy if asked to stop.

>> No.19830322

>>19830288
The world doesn't run on people not caring

>> No.19830332

I had no idea Building Block Doll was written by the same author as Lazy Oni and Sakura Summer. Does he still post here?

>> No.19830398

>>19830332
He hasn't self identified since his chimpout
>>19830322
Good thing you've got zero impact on it then

>> No.19830413

>>19830332
No. He moved to AO3 after a spat with some of the local trolls. Might have been after Lazy Oni and its bizarre ending, I think.

>> No.19830488

>>19830312
> spoiler
Not necessarily. Some people treat showering like a chore but they still do it because they believe it's the right thing to do. Some people think dressing up for an event is a waste of money, but still do it because it's the right thing to do. You see where I'm going with this? Shaving pubes can be annoying but I doubt the huge Stacy Suisei would allow herself to be seen in any form other than perfect, and to her, having a shaved pussy is part of that, otherwise she wouldn't think it's an important part of preparing for special events.

>> No.19830504

>>19830413
Didn't he leave after anons saying his last fic about moona and reine was too similar to sakura summer?

>> No.19830542

>>19830504
They said it about every fic he released afterwards lol

>> No.19830563

>>19830488
btw if you can have all this discussion about this and still believe that whether the girl shaves or not isn't an important character trait, then you're just in denial.

>> No.19830721

Anyone got that story about dating yandere Ame not knowing about her time travel abilities, and she keeps going to the past to alter small things, making you question your sanity until you become totally dependent on her?

>> No.19830743

>>19830563
>discussion
You vastly overestimate the value applied here. I just like talking about women's pubes.

>> No.19830772

>>19830563
Hot opinion dude but you can keep it, I'm still writing all my girls' minges bald as a baby's butt

>> No.19830905

>>19830772
Based.

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19831072

>>19830772
I share this sentiment to the opposite effect. Mio could show up on stream talking about laser waxing and I'd still write her with a tasty jungle between her legs.

>> No.19831129 [DELETED] 

>>19831072
So, you’re not writing Mito then?

>> No.19831136

>>19831072
Yeah, you do you. That's what fanfiction is about

>> No.19831189

>>19831072
So, you’re not writing Mio then?

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19831300

>>19831136
I celebrate our diversity (of chuuba vaginas)!

>> No.19831319

>>19831072
>tasty jungle
I can't help but think this is like fart fetishists where their fetish only exists as long as it's never fulfilled
Have you ever been down on an unshaven woman? It's the total opposite of tasty. It's also smelly and tickles your face, unless they've got stubble a few days old, in which it's like making out with a sheet of sandpaper

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>>19831319
>Have you ever been down on an unshaven woman?
Yes? I love eating gash.
>It's the total opposite of tasty.
Never been to me.
>It's also smelly and tickles your face
Literally the very best part besides feeling the coarseness on my dick later.
Look anon, I don't know what ogre you went down on, or how she traumatized you so much that you ended up thinking that female body hair is equivalent to /ringo/. But you're a sample size of 1.

>> No.19831939

>>19831568
No, you wanna shag wilderbeasts, more power to you

>> No.19832051

>>19830159
Any idea when will we get Subjection's next chapter, while at it?

>> No.19832177

>>19832051
Anon, the author of subjection was a tripfag and not an anonymous. And the last thing that tripfag said was he was leaving and possibly shitposts.

>> No.19832372

>>19832177
Your mom tripfagged on my dick in bed last night

>> No.19832458

>>19832177
Seems you were right, was just another shitposter.

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>>19832051
I'm writing it right now, so soon I guess. A bit stuck on the first NSFW scene because I'm finding it hard to keep track of 3+ characters' dialogue at once, least of all when one has a dick in her mouth.
>>19832177
I prefer not using my trip for anything besides anchor updates, but here you go for this post.
>but you used a trip during your spergout
I was also downing modafinil like skittles, please understand

>> No.19832586

>>19832544
No, I will not understand doomposterchama.

>> No.19832759

>>19832586
> another anon gets busted for being a shitposter and people keep on bringing it up for months arc
0 days since timeloop

>> No.19834613

>>19831300
sex

>> No.19836712

>>19829928
Ah yes, Laplus Slice of Life.
Would honestly be decent fluff fic, but it needs a steady hand to balance mundanity and Laplus being 'supernatural' too much in either direction would break the comedy of her being "normal" despite being some demon Loli.

>> No.19837018

>>19830332
No clue, edging on probably not. But despite that other anon saying he's moved to ao3 he hasn't actually posted anything since january so who knows whether he still lurks here.
Only way I'd be able to tell is if another fic has his docs style of formatting where the entire thing is posted in one gdoc for some reason.

>> No.19837505

>>19830413
>He moved to AO3 after a spat with some of the local trolls.
unless you know of an another account he made after leaving these threads, he didn't move to ao3. the account he posted some of his fics he made /here/ on hasn't been active since before he left. i actually think he might have killed himself

>> No.19837693

>>19837505
…shit, I really hope not. Far be it from me to psychoanalyze somebody from fanfic but he did seem a bit troubled.

>> No.19837891

>>19837505
I mean he has deleted/stopped publishing his WIPs that weren't going anywhere at least so it is also possible he's "washed his hands off" of chuuba fic like he said last year and is posting original fiction somewhere else.
I think I may have been too insensitive to his trauma coping fics, like I didn't like how they were all shaping to be the same story told over again but I probably could have told it in a less volatile way.

>> No.19838167

>>19837891
Sounds like he should have gone to an actual therapist for help on whatever he was suffering.

>> No.19839073

>>19828174
I didn't know I needed this until now
> face fuck from the front to get her to understand what happens next
> flip her, belly exposed and eat her out, teasing and not letting her orgasm
> press the tip to her entrance and watch as she squirms, trying to get it inside already
> fuck her sensless until she finishes
> flip her, tape her mouth and continue fucking her bareback, with full knowledge that she is sensitive after the first orgasm

>> No.19839335

>>19837891
Man. I just want an Ayame abuse fic where she properly accepts her beatings and constant unprotected rape as a loving correction for her foul personality.

>> No.19839994

>>19839335
Well writing it yourself is always an option... But yeah that fucking ending to his Ayame fic really did shit the bed.

>> No.19841969

>>19839994
>Ayame fic really did shit the bed.
What shat the bed was his refusal to listen to others and reasonable critique.

>> No.19842129

>>19837891
You can't blame yourself for what someone else did. If he killed himself it was his choice, and if it wasn't you it would've been someone else blaming themselves.

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What did she mean by this, /wg/? I'm not sure...

>> No.19842936

All authors are fucking menhera aren't they?

>> No.19843286

>>19842936
They need to be in order to write about chuubas, because they are all menheras as well.

>> No.19843350

>>19842936
I guess being artistic tends to cause some emotional imbalances (or is the reason to be artistic), so not really uncommon for artists/authors to be fucking whackos.

Happens to the best of us, but it gets better when you get older.

>> No.19843659

>>19843350
> but it gets better when you get older.
No, sir. It really, really does not.

>> No.19843954

>>19843350
>>19843659
I mean, take AA for example. He used to be quite wild in his 20's according to him but now he's a lovely ol' grandpa that wouldn't hurt a fly. Hell, Korone used to be a major bully and a terrible mother before she grew older and mellowed out

>> No.19844224

>>19843350
Her eyes glance my way once again
She smiles at my face
"Such a handsome young man!" She says
"Please tell me your name!"

I beam with a smile
tears hiding in my eyes
I take her wrinkled hand in mine
And tell of my life

She marvels at my tale
"Ah, the wonders of the youth!
"You remind me of my grandson,
I'm sure he'd love to meet you!"

The nurses come, it's over now
The visits come to end
I'll come back next week
My grandma's forgotten friend.

>> No.19844369

>>19843350
Art is my refuge from normalcy. It is all I have in this messed up stale world where even world wars aren't enough to excite the masses anymore. The information of technology ruined a whole generation.

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>>19844224
Fuck

>> No.19844754

>>19844224
should rail her, impregnate her and take the opportunity to father some cool uncles and wine aunts
go suzarian, she doesn't need to survive the birth

>> No.19844798

>>19844224
What's this a reference to?

>> No.19845092

>>19844369
Anon, if you ever think of killing yourself because someone didn’t like your stories or throw a tantrum, seek a psychologist. Not even being insulting, legit, seek help.

>> No.19845489

>>19845092
Killing yourself is one thing, but why would you seek a therapist just for throwing a tantrum online? Much as we hate to admit it, getting hurt and/or angry because something you've poured effort and personality into was slandered is natural, and if someone chooses to throw a tantrum over it where they're anonymous and there are no real life repercussions whatsoever - well, what's the harm in that? Not condoning it, but I sure wouldn't consider it a sign of mental illness, just a guy venting in a healthy manner. In fact, it would be more telling of psychological problems if he vented anger anywhere BUT online.

>> No.19845625

>>19845092
Where the fuck did I ever imply I was suicidal? Suicide is giving up on literally your most prized possession, your life. I'd never fucking do it, no matter how low things get. Even if I was put in said situation I'd never just kill myself. I'd make some mustard gas bombs and kill as many I hate as possible before dissapearing into the woods, living out my life in the wild until my inevitable doom from inexperience.

>> No.19845980

>>19780713
A chuuba helping (You) rape the other members of her gen

>> No.19846098

>>19830721
That should be near the top of the archive

>> No.19846470

>>19830721
https://pastebin.com/D6FmwUcV

>> No.19847154

>>19831300
>brown Shion
sexsexsexsex

>> No.19847207
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>> No.19847714

>>19845980
I hate that the first thing that came to mind when I read this prompt is Rushia choosing (You) to be her method of revenge against sankisei.

>> No.19847815

>>19847714
It’s okay, anon. Rushia was and still is a traitorous whore who stabbed her fanbase and her friends in the back for profit and gain. But it’s best if we just forget about her and never mention her.

>> No.19848211

>>19847714
That sounds pretty hot and spicy ngl

>> No.19848480

>>19828909
Isn't shaving not as popular in Japan?

>> No.19848534

>>19848480
Not anymore, at least not amongst people below 30. People have stopped living in the past all over the world

>> No.19848749

>>19847815
Not what I meant.
I more meant it in a "I hate how the low hanging fruit chuuba and gen to this idea would be Rushia and 3rd gen" since my thought process was that it needs a chuuba gen with decently "tight" inner gen bonds and a chuuba within there you can make up a decent reason for why they'd want you to do this since they kind of have to be your partner in crime to this.
Spitballing here but the only other few gens I can think of that might be compelling would be something like:
Ina wants (You) to rape the rest of Myth because the Ancient Ones are forcing her to do it perhaps with a sideplot of her actually wanting you to do it.
Matsuri forcing you to rape Gen 1 because she schlicks furiously to the sex tapes made from you doing her and wants some footage with her genmates.

>> No.19848869

>>19848534
>living in the past
One day it'll be in vogue not to shave down there like in the 70s

>> No.19849038

>>19848534
So you're saying the hags down there...

>> No.19849609

>>19845625
Anon, I’m not referring to you. Just that if anyone ever felt like that, they should seek help.

>> No.19849783

>>19848749
considering the last hologra, I imagine Botan pushing her mate onto the rest of gen 4 due to her lioness instinct to achieve a traditional lion pride

>> No.19850190

>>19849038
The antibushfag (read: homosexual) agrees that the hags got bush.

>> No.19850836

>>19849783
>gen 4
Anon...
Though that does sound pretty hot. Botan forces you to catch them yourself, but once you do she'll hold them down herself so you can enjoy yourself on their bodies.

>> No.19851019

>>19848869
No such thing. Maybe you'll a get a trend in future TikTok to not shave, or a feminist movement about it if we still have those then, but now that cameras are available and nudes widely distributed, pubes will never go back to being the norm

>> No.19851895

>>19849038
>>19850190
And to answer this, yes. The hags have it. But not for long. As the younger generations grow up and become hags themselves, then you'll have a world in which even the hags are clean shaven. If this is a future you don't want, you better hope you hop off this train in less than 20 years or so, because in 20 years those girls will be almost 50, and there won't be a single hair left for you down there.

>> No.19852193

>>19832544
>I'm writing it right now, so soon I guess
Based. Looking forward to it!

>> No.19853319

Guess my Finana Imaginings short from another thread is in the archive? Huh. Cool. I'm the guy who wrote that recent Lumi NTR fic, that's hilarious that my shitpost story is in there.

>> No.19854731

>>19853319
>that's hilarious that my shitpost story is in there.
all stories get into the archive unless the authors says they don't want them in the archive

>> No.19856082

>>19830312
Iirc she was talking about if she was a man and if she would shave or not if she had a beard. Suisei has never talked about her pubes on stream.

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>>19856082
Oh, I see. Honestly I thought that anon was just making it up whole-cloth - turns out he was just bizarrely twisting the truth like a delusional lunatic.

>> No.19856380

>>19856219
Did you expect anything from a schizophrenic who shoehorns his fetish into everything?

>> No.19856400

>>19842936
Only a handful of writers have gone full schizo/are full schizo. Most of them are just chill.

>> No.19856519

>>19842936
I can't speak for the others, but I am 100% menhera. I just keep my breakdowns out of the thread.

>> No.19856912

>>19856400
Most writers have left after getting some pushback.

>> No.19857195

>>19854731
Thank god it's in there, though, i forgot about it and I'm glad somebody saved it.

>> No.19858800

>>19857195
Yeah, the only way a story gets removed from the archived is if the author requests it, or if the author is acting like a shithead. Our archivist is pretty based.

>> No.19858938

>>19858800
>or if the author is acting like a shithead
not even then, took a million years for that pekofag shit to get deleted

>> No.19859052

>>19858938
because the screeching retards crying about it were what was constantly incensing PF until enough was enough

>> No.19859130

>>19859052
yeah i'm sure you were totally innocent pekofag, it was just the mean old anons that were forcing you to shitpost constantly

>> No.19859373

>>19858800
Plagiarism also gets you removed, but you need beyond the shadow of a doubt evidence like that matsuri one.

>> No.19859460

>>19859373
What was its name?

>> No.19859468

>>19856912
No? Only Sakura summer Anon left because he couldn’t take criticism. Also on a related note I think that guy also wrote “Fallout: Hololive” and “From a person who will die in three days” because I recall those stories having a similar format and their links are dead.

>> No.19859512

>>19859468
same person, newfag

>> No.19859544

>>19858938
Since we're on the topic, I think it's a great time to post this.
https://e-hentai.org/g/2161858/f4ea567b98/

>> No.19859552

>>19859460
I forget it, but I'm reasonably certain it was proven to be a top reddit post with the name switched out to be matsuri.

>> No.19859702

>>19859552
It was the college rape one. I remember.

>> No.19860005

>>19859552
>>19859702
I remember now, thanks.

>> No.19860780

>>19858800
AA never once removed a story because the author was a shithead, that old dog doesn't get involved in shit

>> No.19861052

>>19858938
Is the story not on the archive? I've never get to read it because all that dramashit happened when I took a break of /vt/

>> No.19861228

>>19861052
It got unarchived after a pretty compelling argument that it doesn't have chuubas.
Yet... reasonably certain if Pekofag just shat out an Oga chapter the fic would be let back in, but given PF's complex regarding making stuff for the enjoyment of others he's never writing that.

>> No.19861339

>>19861228
Well, haha, I wrote my own fic primarily to hit my own fetish, even though it's pretty shit, it just so happens that enough guys were horny about similar shit that it got some eyes on it.

>> No.19861373

>>19861052
got removed because it didn't feature chuubas, on the condition that it'd be re-added if he rewrote it to include them. he did not, and had a tantrum about it after AA officially took it down

it was popularly agreed upon at the time for various reasons which i can't be arsed explaining that pekofag should write a new chapter or rewrite it to include oga fucking him in the ass

>> No.19861541

>>19861339
I never once said words such as "it just so happens", you're shit at pretending to be me.

>> No.19861556

>>19861228
>>19861373
Oh I see. After reading all the drama I thought the story was about having a friend who dress like Pekora

>> No.19861615

>>19861556
You're correct. But dressing as does not equal the character.

>> No.19861694

>>19861373
I still find it hilarious that after the huge argument those anons had that went for like 50 posts after bump limit the final conclusion to solve all the problems was to have Oga fuck him in the ass.

>> No.19861709

>>19861615
I see. I personally would let it on the archive but I also understand your point.
Anyone have a link or knows if he upload it on another site?

>> No.19861740

>>19861228
That wasn't the reason it was taken down. AA didn't agree with that logic. It was taken down because someone was absolutely blasting their ass all over the thread saying that it was AA's fault for him doing that unless he removed PF from archives. He took it down, the shitter stopped, another guy took his place, probably the same one. Who would've thought negotiating with terrorists is le bad?

>> No.19861750

>>19861709
No and no.

>> No.19861785

>>19861694
There's not a single problem that dont get solved by a Holostars fucking you in the ass.

>> No.19861858

>>19861709
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSAL28ZFk_vysT0fI730rHWa5Q8TF7LWrFeQi2dPy4YqFRGsAbi4w3QblrNOgWiRpHM3Zqyh4KQIARI/pub

>> No.19861863

>>19861740
ngl senpai that's a pretty shit fantasy you've cooked up for yourself and if you made a fic about it, it'd get shit on

>> No.19861938

>>19861541
Oh no, I'm not pretending to be you, I'm actually saying my own Lumi/Yuri fic was an attempt to slake out my own sexual fixations. I have no idea WHO you are.

>> No.19861976

>>19861863
>you've cooked up for yourself
He didnt even do that. It came from a old pasta that had Konata instead of Pekora

>> No.19862071

>>19861976
Fucking holy mother of newfags, do your reps or get out

>> No.19862073

>>19861938
WAIT if you're the "let's just pretend" thing, that was actually fucking hot for all the wrong reasons, so thank you for writing it

>> No.19862074

>>19861976
how about you actually read the post i'm quoting, nigger

>> No.19862289

So anons What's the sequel you're waiting the most? Do you really believe its gonna be written?

>> No.19862359

>>19862071
>newfag
Nigger I'm here since the first abusive thread

>> No.19862379

>>19862289
I was waiting for Luna's assistant part 2 but the author was kind of a prick so I gave up on that. So I guess nothing now

>> No.19862389

>>19862289
I NEED to see Calli fuck her little brother while Kiara goads them on

>> No.19862406

>>19862359
clearly not since you have no clue what you're talking about

>> No.19862471

>>19862359
You literally got everything about how PF started wrong and you try to claim that shit?

>> No.19862555

>>19862289
eagerly awaiting pekofag 2: oga's awakening
nah, it'll never get written

>> No.19862711

>>19862555
Glad you like my works so much

>> No.19862933

>>19862289
I'm still hoping that the psycho killer sequel gets written but given that the anon writing that literally also included a screenshot the last time he gave a progress update that was basically "It hasn't been opened in months"; I'm not holding out that it's coming soon.
Also Hag Orgy Part 2 but given that that anon is dying in Kyiv I'm not holding much hope for that one as well.

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>>19862933
>Kyiv
Detonate the vacuum bombs.

>> No.19863003

>>19862933
I'm also waiting for Hag Orgy part 2. Still sad that it doesnt contain Korone but well.
>dying in Kyiv
dont tell me that writeanon is Ukranian

>> No.19863083

>>19862711
what works? neither of them are in the archive, so they must not exist

>>19862998
he spelled it correctly

>> No.19863108

>>19780713
Taking Calli to a metal concert to show her what real music is like

>> No.19863294

>>19780713
Taking Calli to the abattoir to put that cow to rest

>> No.19863302

>>19863083
It's Kiev. The other spelling is khohol cope.

>> No.19863394

>>19863302
no, he spelled it correctly

>> No.19863461

>>19862933
>dying in Kyiv
You need to visit the thread more often. He came in a while ago and said that anon was a fake and that he's fine.

>> No.19863479

>>19863302
Back to /pol/ with you.

>> No.19863533

>>19863461
>making stuff up
He came in after that and proclaimed that the guy who said he was fine was actually a liar and that both of his legs were blown off on the morning of that day, and the reason he was phoneposting in the thread was because he literally couldn't get up to do anything more useful

>> No.19863580

>>19863479
>everyone I don't like is /pol/
Open a history book and you'll know how it's spelt.

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>>19863083
Anon. The Ukraine is a province of Russia.

>> No.19863719

>>19863580
I see you're new to 4chan, and can't seem to find your way to /pol/ due to the separation between domains. Don't worry, it's normal for newfags to make that mistake! Here's a link for your convenience: >>>/pol/

>> No.19863842

Whatever happened to that one Haachama fan fic where (you) go on date with her?

>> No.19863970

>>19863842
Author stopped working on it? I assume that’s what happened to most WIP stories.

>> No.19864024

Has a story ever inspired you to want to create a fanfic of it yourself?

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>>19862289
>Two responses are for my fics
That's touching, and if it weren't for Elden Ring I'd be on my way to fulfilling one of them.

>>19862379
>kind of a prick
Well a certain somebody decided to impersonate him the day he showed back up so I understand if he was a little nettled.

>> No.19864080

>>19864024
Uhhh.... no

>> No.19864183

>>19863533
Honestly maybe I should just roll with this. Can you imagine the (yous) I'd get if I pretended to be writing chuuba smut from a warzone hospital bed? A lot more interesting than spending the nights turning wrenches and yelling expletives covered in grease in the comfort of my tropical driveway sipping a cold one or seven.

>> No.19864196

>>19864024
Yeah. I wrote a fan sequel to Fox Family Bonding.

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>>19862998
>>19863712
God, imagine being executed by her.

>> No.19864249

>>19863970
I must be blind because I don’t see it at all in the archive

>> No.19864286

>>19864249
Most likely it was a dead link and was removed. Lots of stories are having dead links.

>> No.19864297

>>19864024
Not as such, but Holocalypse inspired my to write my own post-calamity fic

>> No.19864393

>>19864286
Damn what a shame

>> No.19864411

>>19864183
...Wait, who was the shitposter who kept talking about being off in the tropics? Wasn't that PF?

>> No.19864448

>>19864393
It really is, but what are we going to do? It’s the authors choice.

>> No.19864455

>>19864204
Lost Heiress to the Russian Empire Suisei is still the best rrat ever made and absolutely needs a fic written about it.

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>>19864204
There's a timeline where Princess Suisei Romanova saves Russia, then leads the Last Crusade to retake Constantinople. And yet we live in this one.

>> No.19864515

quick, somebody, an actual holo thread

>> No.19864555

>>19864515
It's already up, it's Ironmouse.

>> No.19864558

New thread
>>19864483

>> No.19864650

>>19864515
Why are you trying to make this tribal?

>> No.19864718

>>19864411
Well I know we have at least two BRs here and since PF says a dollar is about 5.5 of his local currency I assume he's one of them since that's the USD/BRL exchange rate.

I just happen to still be in the tropic, just pretty far north of it.

>> No.19864763

>>19864515
There’s already a thread up. Why the second one.

>> No.19864782

>>19864196
I wonder if Fox Family Christmas will ever come out? I hope it's still getting worked on.

>> No.19864791

Next thread: >>19864607

>>19864650
Having fucking Iron Lung as the thread header is nothing short of outright trolling.

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>>19864204
pic related

>> No.19864829

>>19864791
How is having Ironmouse trolling?

>> No.19864856

>>19864718
he has hinted at it for ages, and he very recently came straight out and said he was brazilian.

>> No.19864889

>>19864791
based as fuck

>> No.19864988

>>19864791
...
Earlyfag and co are going to shit that thread up just like last time aren't they?

>> No.19864999

>>19864791
seriously? again with the early threads? at this point since you're making it out of spite you've become a bad actor in this.

>> No.19865001

>>19864829
Don’t bother. Tribalfags are mentally sick.

>> No.19865015

>>19864791
But why? Ironmouse ACTUALLY DOES have a story in the archive this time. It isn't just bait.

>> No.19865065

>>19865015
Because he's a tribalfag and doesn't read the archive.

>> No.19865094

>>19864782
It is, I just recently gave it a re-read and some editing after not really having much of a chance to look at it for a few weeks. It's at around 11k words, and I have a lot more planned for it.

It will be my masterpiece.

>>19864856
I see, so that makes sense.

>> No.19865165

>>19864791
>Having fucking Iron Lung as the thread header is nothing short of outright trolling.
Ironmouse has a story, you tribalfag.

>> No.19865217

>>19865165
can you at least make the amount you samefag slightly less obvious
please
it'd be less irritating that way

>> No.19865428

>>19865217
People calling you out for being a retard isn't samefagging.

>> No.19865450

>>19865217
it really is painfully obvious when you have basic pattern recognition

>> No.19865549

>people finally figured out that the schizo has no power if you simply refuse to use his threads
Took long enough.

>> No.19865711

>>19865549
Yeah, instead you have the earlyfag going fucking ballistic in the thread instead, where as before he's dead silent. Great tradeoff!

>> No.19865735

>>19865549
Problem is jannies will delete alternative threads if they don't have enough posts, and the schizo is not above spamming the shit out of the threads he makes.

>> No.19865759

>>19865711
As long as as this general becomes hololive, does it matter?

>> No.19865796

>>19865711
And he’ll be reported and banned for spamming. What’s your point?

>> No.19865798

>>19865735
Why even make an alternative thread to begin with. What’s wrong with the iron mouse?

>> No.19865819

>>19865796
Yeah, like that Fubuki thread. The schizo Op of that thread was just spamming

>> No.19865823

>>19865711
You can't think of it in those terms. Living in fear of one (1) lunatic samefag shitting up the thread is just not a good vibe for a community.

>> No.19865878

>>19865798
>What’s wrong with the iron mouse?
It's not Hololive.

>> No.19865901

>>19865796
No, they won't. Jannies literally do not give a fuck unless you're posting hard dox. There have been hardcore porn OP pics up that have lasted for hours. They will not lift a fucking finger.

>> No.19866079

>>19865901
Jannies are just completely overwhelmed, particularly relative to their pay off $0. This board is nearly as fast as /pol/ and can spike faster during big events or drama.

>> No.19866385

>>19866079
Then consider me disheartened that after months of being plagued with samefagging bait that nothing has ever been done besides the one guy having a fucking menhera freakout.

>> No.19866459

So, what was wrong about the Ironmouse thread? The links works and there's an ironmouse fic in the catlog.

>> No.19866491

>>19866459
Wasn’t Hololive.

>> No.19866516

>>19865823
Maybe fanfiction just attracts menheras in everything, because you are right.
As ideal as it would be for this general to only get new threads at page 10, the existence of an earlyfag means this bullshit has to keep going every thread end until a mod does something.

>> No.19866679

>>19866459
There's a threadshitter who's assmad about most of the fanfics being about Hololive, so he concern trolls that it should be called the Hololive Fanfiction thread just to make people who ultimately agree with him assmad in the process, resulting in everyone being mad at the same time all in an attempt to force more alternative company fanfics, which only works in reverse because 4chan is a contrarian website at heart and authors want to make the concern troll assmad by posting more Hololive fics.

>> No.19866684

>>19866459
You’re missing the point. The issue isn’t that the OP image, but who posted it. By adamantly refusing to use hololive in his OPs for months, the earlyfag has made it extremely easy to identify which threads are made by him. Or more accurately, which ones aren’t. And I feel more inclined to use the threads that aren’t made by him.
Because I don’t like him.

>> No.19866713

>>19866459
Just mad about Ironmouse specifically I guess? I don't fucking know. You've got some faggot who's convinced this thread needs to be called Hololive Writing General because he's got a fucking hateboner for everything that isn't HL and all this dumb faggot is doing is pissing that guy off more into falseflagging about "why are you being tribalist??" because he got called a dumb tribalist faggot months ago. My personal rrat is that he's the earlyfag who's still fucking assmad about being told to fuck off and he started making OPs with indies to fuck with people.

>> No.19866853

>>19866713
Honestly, probably not a popular opinion, but /vt/ is large enough that it absolutely needs thread IDs. It now has the same problem as /pol/ where you have a massive population with a large contingent of lunatics mental enough to samefag for hours.

>> No.19866879

>>19866684
>The issue isn’t that the OP image
But it was, someone was screeching about it.

>> No.19866905

>>19866853
Agreed. Flags? Probably not, that'd absolutely only lead to fighting. IDs? 100%.

>> No.19866932

>>19866684
>And I feel more inclined to use the threads that aren’t made by him.
>Because I don’t like him.
this 100%

>> No.19866956

>>19866684
The entire point why the fag kept making second threads was because he was seething about indies and 2views. And how they had no stories in the catalog. Ironmous isn’t an indie nor is she a 2view and she has a fanfic in the catalog. So by that schizo’s own logic, a second thread shouldn’t have been made.

>> No.19867003

>>19866956
You ever consider that there's more than one person who hates how you've shat up this place for months, dude?

>> No.19867047

>>19867003
that would require some modicum of self-awareness, of which the earlyfag has none

>> No.19867065

>>19866905
Oh yeah, no, definitely not flags. But IDs are a great defense against the worst of samefagging spam without actually compromising anonymity.

>> No.19867153

>>19866956
They never cared. He was a tribalfag from the start. Dumb idiot didn't even know there was a Ironmouse in the catalog.

>> No.19867170

>>19866956
Be that the case, it still suits my own desire to see the earlyfag mad that people are starting to refuse to play ball.

>> No.19867292

since the earlyfag is mad 24/7 as long as someone else makes the OP, d'you think maybe it's possible to give him a heart attack with multiple back-to-back proper threads?

his arteries are probably fat-clogged and his blood 90% sugar so i reckon there's a good chance

>> No.19867407

>>19867292
All this seething because of indie vtubers?

>> No.19867445

>>19867292
A stroke from high blood pressure, at least. Problem is he's around 20 hours a day and clearly unemployed, so you'd need multiple people throughout the day willing to check if the thread is at 310-318 to make a proper OP.

>> No.19867486

>>19867292
No, because going off your logic you'd need to wait for the current thread to 404 to be a proper thread. You're still an earlyfag.

>> No.19867533

>>19867486
It's obvious he never cared about the thread 404

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love you guys

>> No.19868553

>>19868502
Stay motivated, friend.

>> No.19868721

>>19868502
mwah

>> No.19869233

>>19864718
Great work, detective

>> No.19869385

>>19864558
Now there's two stories about Ironmouse.

>> No.19869454

I want to drink Aqua's breast milk so bad you have no idea. Dear god please just give me one chance.

>> No.19869510

>>19868502
Anon...you're so...charming...

>> No.19869549

I-ironmouse is kind of cute. I would've fought to save the thread but the other one was already at 37 replies...

>> No.19869640

>>19869549
Might as well comment on the story an ironmouse fan made.

>> No.19869647

>>19869549
I've wanted to grab her by the horns for ages. She's very cute, but also hot...though I liked her old model better.

>> No.19869939

Can we rape Luna yet?

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19870044

>>19869939
Morally obligated to fuck this baby-voiced brat's fat titties.

>> No.19870080

>>19870044
Anon, that's Miko... You can tell by the short hair

>> No.19870093

>>19870080
Look at the earring.

>> No.19870131

>>19870093
She's... just sharing earrings with her friend

>> No.19870170
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19870170

>>19870131
Anon...Luna has a short hair alt, too...

>> No.19870187

RAPE LUNA RAPEEEEEEE

>> No.19870224

>>19870170
You can tell by the hair color it's not her

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