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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>22494379

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were thirteen stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

To be 17 again. Ch. 3: Tags: Ookami Mio, netori, fluff, NSFW, haglove, defloration:>>22495595

Footsteps Across Time: Siege of Vienna: Tags: SFW, NSFW. Kiara, Mori, Ame, Mumei, Coco, Kanata, Laplus. OC x Kiara. Enemies to Lovers. Violence, Fluff, Drama, Shipteasing:>>22497091

untitled traditional tale: Tags: SFW, Kronii, Kiara, Mori, Ame, lore:>>22498829

Goddesses' bliss: Tags: NSFW, Kronii, Fauna, Sana, Mumei, Baelz, IRyS, several fetishes, poetry (?), lore:>>22500914

Family: Tags: SFW, Kronii, Boros, tale, lore:>>22500914

short and swet Mori story: Tags: Fluff, SFW. Mori Calliope: >>22506874

Cursed Night: Tags: Calliope Mori, OC, angst, fluff:>>22510462

It Has Been "0" days Since Haruka Karibu Fucked The Timeline: Tags: Haruka Karibu, SFW, Tob, April Fools Snuffy:>>22542487

The Boxer:Tags: NSFW, Korone/Anon, femdom, rape, chuuba abuse:>>22570094

CH: Lotus Festival: Language of Love: Tags: Matsuri/OC, Izuru, Fubuki, Fluff, Angst, Friends to Lovers, Drama, Comedy:>>22575439

Daihime sex: Tags: coercion Daihime femboy:>>22596168

Tusk:Tags: adventure, (you), Kaela, Zeta, Reine, Fubuki, supernatural: >>22621258

Random greentexts: Tags: Greentext: >>22519454 >>22595418 >>22597916

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

"Hag correction" this "Brat Correction" that where's the "(You) get corrected into a perfect boyfriend" fic:>>22494459

Towa using her devil powers to make illusions to make it seem like you're not banging her brains out on public transportation:>>22508327

You are senchou's kouhai, she's a tender bully to you, and despite everything you can't bring yourself to hate her. After many years have passed, you met again with her, now old and fat. She embarrassed to see you, turning out into such a fine man. After forming a friendship, you learn she's still a virgin at her age, and that the overly sexual senchou you saw was her being a pushover to look cool. Then you fugg her:>>22524135

Being the terrible example that turned Mumei into the fucking weirdo she is now:>>22528181

I want more sad Suisei fics:>>22535543

Anything involving Terumi:>>22555009

Fauna giving Kronii a slow and sensual oil massage using Fauna's essential oils with aphrodisiac properties.:>>22563979

Going on 'practice' dates with Reine only for it to become increasingly obvious she wants them to be actual ones:>>22565939

You knew Mori in High School, so when you saw her become an idol you were interested to see where it went. However, you decide she's fallen to all the fame and was probably nothing like she used to be. That is, until she shows up at your door, telling you that she's in town for a performance and wanted to visit you:>>22577948

Gyaru Wamyfication:>>22578920

Gyaru Okayu borrows your light novel and becomes your friend, yet over time you begin to suspect she might actually be less interested in the light novel and more interested in you:>>22581724

Ame lost a bet and now has to go out in public on a date with Gura while wearing a wireless vibrator, which Gura controls.:>>22613909

Suisei start to forget about you ( her husband ) Because she is too focus to chase her dream, so focus she dont event care about you and getting abusive if you try to involved with her job or wasted her time. She getting more popular until she move out from your apartment and rent a new one near hololive.:>>22618874

Looks like your constant dodging of Koyori and her seemingly endless need for a 'lab assistant' has finally caught up with you.:>>22624522

Outrapping Calliope to humiliate her at her own show:>>22626598

Moona incest with her brother (You) seems like such an easy low hanging fruit of a smut fic. That I'm surprised we haven't gotten a fic of it yet:>>22631667

You kidnap Koyori and eat both of her legs with your best mate Hannibal:>>22636188

A story about brutally defeating STARTEND in a 1v3 gunfight and then raping them pregnant!:>>22637886

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

"Hag correction" this "Brat Correction" that where's the "(You) get corrected into a perfect boyfriend" fic:>>22500498

Towa using her devil powers to make illusions to make it seem like you're not banging her brains out on public transportation:>>22508327

You are senchou's kouhai, she's a tender bully to you, and despite everything you can't bring yourself to hate her. After many years have passed, you met again with her, now old and fat. She embarrassed to see you, turning out into such a fine man. After forming a friendship, you learn she's still a virgin at her age, and that the overly sexual senchou you saw was her being a pushover to look cool. Then you fugg her:>>22524135

Being the terrible example that turned Mumei into the fucking weirdo she is now:>>22528181

I want more sad Suisei fics:>>22535543

Anything involving Terumi:>>22555009

Fauna giving Kronii a slow and sensual oil massage using Fauna's essential oils with aphrodisiac properties.:>>22563979

Going on 'practice' dates with Reine only for it to become increasingly obvious she wants them to be actual ones:>>22565939

You knew Mori in High School, so when you saw her become an idol you were interested to see where it went. However, you decide she's fallen to all the fame and was probably nothing like she used to be. That is, until she shows up at your door, telling you that she's in town for a performance and wanted to visit you:>>22577948

Gyaru Wamyfication:>>22578920

Gyaru Okayu borrows your light novel and becomes your friend, yet over time you begin to suspect she might actually be less interested in the light novel and more interested in you:>>22581724

Ame lost a bet and now has to go out in public on a date with Gura while wearing a wireless vibrator, which Gura controls.:>>22613909

Suisei start to forget about you ( her husband ) Because she is too focus to chase her dream, so focus she dont event care about you and getting abusive if you try to involved with her job or wasted her time. She getting more popular until she move out from your apartment and rent a new one near hololive.:>>22618874

Looks like your constant dodging of Koyori and her seemingly endless need for a 'lab assistant' has finally caught up with you.:>>22624522

Outrapping Calliope to humiliate her at her own show:>>22626598

Moona incest with her brother (You) seems like such an easy low hanging fruit of a smut fic. That I'm surprised we haven't gotten a fic of it yet:>>22631667

You kidnap Koyori and eat both of her legs with your best mate Hannibal:>>22636188

A story about brutally defeating STARTEND in a 1v3 gunfight and then raping them pregnant!:>>22637886

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>>22632355
Here's for the archiver who wanted an overview for To be 17 again.

Ookami Mio, the beloved talent from Hololive Gamers is undergoing a terrible time in her life. Her husband doesn't love her or even acknowledge her, she's childless and growing old, the only solace she finds being her work and her friends.

Said events wounk bleed onto her streaming life and make her fall behind her genmates, so the higher ups decided to assing her a talent manager that would help her get up to speed.

Reluctant at first, Mio didn't know this was the beginning of a new spark in her life.

>> No.22641542

What have been your biggest influences as a writer?

>> No.22641653

>>22641542

Haruki Murakami and other Jap authors. Also the Holy Bible amen.

>> No.22641748

>>22641542
JRR Tolkien, Rick Riordan, and whoever John Flanagan. All of them have stories I ate up as a child and I doubt I'd be writing today without them. Not that I'm anywhere near the writings of Tolkien or Riordan of course, but they do inspire me a lot.

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>>22641542
As a teen I loved Alberto Fuguet and Charles Bukowski. I couldn't get into thick, overly wordy books at the time, so their style was really attractive to me and made me love the punch in each sentence.

Hopelessly juvenile though, as I matured I developed a taste for Dostoyevski and Gabriel García Marquéz. Dosotyevski's bleak depictions of the world coupled with the internal monologues were my favourite, later I appreciated how G.G.M. would depict his characters and their misfortunes indirectly and as he put it "Put a bit of poetry in every sentence"

>> No.22641888

>>22641748
whoever else, like John Flannagan, I meant.

>> No.22641933

>>22641542
Madoka Magica and Mobirioto Guardian of the Spirit. Though, unfortunately, I haven't really developed the skill to make a story even half as good as either of those. One day I hope I can.

>> No.22642422

>>22641933
Practice and study, Anon. Practice and study. I'm nowhere near my writing heroes (Tolkein, mentioned above) but I've certainly improved a lot since I started writing fics over a decade ago as a stupid kid now though. It helps that I had more than a few encouraging voices through my life, but sometimes those can even just be people reviewing your fics.

>> No.22642438

> influences: literary
> creative output: smut fanfic

>> No.22642684

>>22642438
I, at least, don't put out smut on here but other works. Not that smut is a bad thing, people who put smut on here probably have a few non-holo things they write that they don't share.

>> No.22642701

>>22642422
I'm improving slowly but surely. You know how it is though, there is no harsher critic than yourself.

>> No.22642896

>>22641542
The past decade of hosting and being a part of TTRPG's. That's mainly why I like writing in second person

>> No.22643614

>>22641542
When I first tried my hand at writing I didn't really have any inspirations; though now I'd say Fate Grand Order, Katawa Shoujo and some random smut here and there, as well as the Epic of Gilgamesh

>> No.22643797

>>22641542
I suppose Mitch Albom and Hunter S. Thompson have been big influences on me.

>> No.22644750

>>22641542
Homer

>> No.22645003

>>22641542
Not in actual narrative, because it's frankly not consistently well-planned out, but Kamachi Kazuma's style of liberally paragraph breaking and loading his text with diacritics/font modifications to mimic the cadence of actual speech has probably influenced my style the most. It reads much more naturally than most styles and builds tension well

>> No.22645840

>>22642438
if you can't make a hot sex scene then you can't write an emotional journey. Simple as

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Sigh~ I'm reading through the old threads, and seeing young AA in anon, so innocent, so sweet, I think I'm falling in love all over again... I miss him... I hope he comes back to us soon enough.

>> No.22646030

>>22641542
My own mental illness and frustration with IRL things

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>>22645958
Whoops, I meant "in action". I was busy day dreaming about the times we spent together in the past and ended up making a typo. Oh, what I'd do to bring him back...

>> No.22646161

>>22645958
pls be trolling

>> No.22646228

>>22646161
Hm? How come?

>> No.22646386

You guys scare me sometimes

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>>22645958
Could have sworn he told you he's not on board with this weird shit

>> No.22646572

>>22642438
I began writing fanfics as an excercise a while ago, it's a lot easier to take pre existing characters with defined personalities and putting them into situations to play with said personalities.

I did a bunch of writing before it too, poems, essays, short stories and so on. I didn't think fanfic writing was that fun.

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>>22646541
Nah, he knows I'm in love with him and he's fine with it so long as I don't make any sexual advances on him

>> No.22646827

hey AA, the Footsteps Across Time: Siege Of Vienna link directs to Say, Can You See ch.5

>> No.22646842

>>22639632
Holo Council is failing, you're a 'troubleshooter' talent manager who comes in to help failing idols and entertainers. You've handled a lot of weird shit in your life, but can you handle a bunch of very lazy primordial beings (with the two exceptions of an owl and a deer)?

>> No.22647190

Man, I just recently came across a picture of a certain cheeky dog-boy's roommate and now I can't help but want to write a correction story, even though it would be gay as hell.

>TFW ywn teach Tamaki what a real tower of babel looks like

>> No.22647203

>>22646704
You should start writing some love poems

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> tfw it's off topic to talk about the writers of this thread
Fucking jannies. I love Flare btw!!! Wow, so good to have to shoehorn chuuba talk into every post to not get banned

>> No.22647498

>>22647190
It's not gay if it looks like a woman, sounds like a woman and behaves like a woman.

>> No.22647505

>>22647346
There's a world of difference between discussing authors and the creepy shit you're pulling

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>>22647505

>> No.22647724

>>22647346
No, that wasn’t discussing authors that was you being a schizo

>> No.22647759

>>22647617
You can cry about it all you'd like that doesn't mean you weren't being a schizo

>> No.22647815

>>22647759
I'm just saddened that we have an actual jannie as a writer here and that he's making his presence to obvious. Just follow the rat dancing gif trail and it's easy to see who it is.

>> No.22647928

>>22647815
THAT'S what you think is happening?

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Wake up or she gets it

>> No.22649706

>>22649519
Still waiting for PF to write a love letter.

>> No.22650670

>>22649706
I'm pretty sure I already confessed

>> No.22651284

>>22649706
Stop.

>> No.22651618

>>22649519
How important is that ahoge for matsuri?

>> No.22651751

>>22651618
It's her power limiter. With that removed, her menhera tendencies will be augmented by powers beyond even the comprehension of the Ancient Ones.

>> No.22651752

>>22651618
Ahoge's are actually exposed nerve endings and key for a chuubas spacial awareness.

>> No.22651859

>>22651618
Ahoges are like fingernails on cats. Clipping them will cause her to frantically spasm out in pain and fall down on the ground foaming at the mouth after having passed out. It is extremely sensitive so don't touch it.

>> No.22652012

>>22651752
>>22651859
>Grabbing her sensitive ahoge while fucking Matsuri
H-hot

>> No.22652157

>>22652012
No it just hurts. It's the same thing as cracking Laplus horn in half

>> No.22652790

>>22652157
>Laplus horn breaking ryona
I mean the plot almost writes itself.

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>>22639584
Ame of Destruction

https://rentry.org/tf3na

Tags: giantess, crush, snuff

Ame tries out a new city builder game in VR. Every move she makes seems to end in disaster for her newly acquired tiny citizens.

>> No.22654346

>>22653699
I'll never understand fetishes that don't involve the genitalia

>> No.22655321

>>22654346
Giantess is probably getting off on the powerplay, same reason you'd feel powerless and insignificant to a giant.

>> No.22655553

>>22655321
Everything in the world is about sex except sex. Sex is about power.
-Logan Paul

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I need a fic with bondage, teasing, orgasm denial... FUTA, URETHRA INSERTION, MUZZLE!!!

>> No.22658609

>>22639584
Wilted Rose: Rommates?
Tags: OC, Mori. Depression, Anxiety, implications of abuse in backstory, fluff, friends to lovers, romance.

Description: "Scrawny, short, meek, shy... All things that describe me. I thought I'd made out like a bandit getting an apartment on my own just outside of the famed Holo U, where I was set to attend. At the last minute though, the landlord requested I allow someone to become my roommate. I had no idea what I was in for until it was too late."

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRFUl1bOzdvMYEfIvnekVJe9C56cfPDakhJgQu9mQH8jCO9pm98iQdjh9wgqPIoUkVjpPIu2hzKc78G/pub

Rentry catalog:
https://rentry.org/footstepsandstories

This one took awhile to write because of just how heavy it felt in some areas. Ultimately though I enjoyed writing it.

>> No.22658956

Imagine Sonic paying money for Mumei because she reminds him of Longclaw.

>> No.22658959

>>22641542
Vidya like DMC or KH alongside a few others.

>> No.22659037

>>22645958
what

>> No.22659123

>>22653699
>>22654346
I like em BIG

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>>22646827
My bad. Thanks.

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>>22659037

>> No.22660827

>>22659037
Pekofag living up to his name.

>> No.22660992

>>22660623
god Gura's cute

>> No.22661017

>>22660623
That's a very cute Goomba

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>>22651751
*snip*

>> No.22661438

>>22661311
You fool, you've killed us all!

>> No.22661504 [DELETED] 

>>22660992
>>22661017
C-cute? *whistle yelp that no human being should make*

Y-y-y-you too I guess... but it's not like I care or anything... b-baka!

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>>22651751
sounds great

>> No.22661769

>>22661438
Our only hope against Matsuri's Menhera delusions now is Haachama's Schizophrenic delusions.

>> No.22661821

>>22651618
Speaking of ahoge, I found a really cute Matsuri cosplay that actually pulls off the hair really well. Don't think I've ever seen a wigless ahoge. Especially not one with nude bandaid alt versions

>> No.22662011

>>22639584
https://justpaste.me/gHM2
I normally write fetish stuff but sometimes I just have weird ideas that wouldn't really fit in the more specific threads. (Nina Kosaka, Psychological Horror I guess, Sad)

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>>22658609
Cute and sombre, I really liked that.

If you were the one talking about writing a Mori high school/college romance than you definitely didn't take that long cause that was last night.

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> haven't read anything from here for fun for 3 months
> haven't jerked off to anything from here for almost 2 months
> haven't written anything in a whole month
> still here every day
What the fuck? I thought burn out from this hobby was supposed to let me go free, not give me more time to rot away doing nothing...

>> No.22663057

>>22662926
There is no escape from reading and writing fanfiction Anon. You can only escape into another fandom and fall into their fanfiction hole.

>> No.22663460

>>22662926
I still read most of what gets posted here, but my writing output is cratering. Too much time on /vt/ has left me convinced that vtubing is just yet another cynical extractive industry meant to fleece the middle class of whatever pennies the rest of this meatgrinder society didn't already manage to steal.

>> No.22663649

>>22662533
Yep, that's me. Yeah I know it wasn't that long but it certainly felt like it to me because I stopped and started more than I normally would. Glad you like it!

>> No.22663829

>>22658609
Small nitpick, but Mori is 167cm, which is 5'4, not 5'10. Don't know why you changed her height so drastically when she would've been taller than him already.
Overall though, the story is... well, I'm going to wait and see how it goes. It's well written, the prose is correct, it flows well, all that is perfectly fine. But so far I like none of the characters. I get that Mori is supposed to be socially retarded, but picking and prodding the guy when he doesn't want to talk isn't endearing, and neither is bringing up his insecurities. If those insecurities were more specific I'd buy it but if an adult male is short, scrawny and has a girl's name, they are probably insecure about it. The other girls acted exactly like college girls do, being obnoxious with the subtlety of a sledgehammer, so points for realism, but again, not very endearing.

>> No.22664086

>>22663460
The majority of people on this board do not like vtubers and wish for you to stop watching them. Do not listen to these people.

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>>22663460
If I didn't come into /vt/ I probably would still enjoy Vtubers a lot, but the moment I came /here/ I stopped paying attention solely to the streams, and soon started wondering things like "why did Pekora and Miko stop collabing after all?", "why was Ollie moaning in that clip?", "why does Ayame stream so little?" and this shit began to fester in my mind. It's like conspiracy theories, but believable. Of course I don't believe that Pekora raped Miko, but WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED? And wanting to know more led me to spend more time here with other people theorizing on why, for example. They fed me answers that I was looking for for questions that I never knew I had. All these things got in the way of my enjoyment, and now I can't watch funny moments without wondering if it's scripted for example. It's sad, really sad. I had so much fun with this hobby, and this place ruined it. Though it is my fault for coming here at all, am I really that guilty for wanting a place to belong?

>> No.22664342

>>22663829
Yeah I get it, and the change was an intentional decision just out of personal preference for how I think it would work best for emphasizing the differences I felt were there. It could have gone without it for sure but considering it's already there I don't think changing it back would do me any favors.

The girls (Calli included) being abrasive and socially retarded is intended, not saying it's an excuse for them not being endearing, but I plan for things to change over the course of the next chapter or two at least. Right now Rose is very misunderstood and his only lifeline is a girl who has absolutely no sense of social sensitivity, he's shattered like glass and Mori attempting to help glue some of those pieces back together is going to be a developmental process for both of them.

>> No.22664650

>>22663460
Take the JP/2view pill. Trust me, even if you can't understand what they're saying you'll enjoy it far more than the councilwhores.

>> No.22664996

>>22664650
DON'T TAKE THE FUCKING INDIE PILL. You have no idea what sort of despair you'll go through when your indie oshi just woke up and posted yet another depressive post about her growth and that all her Vtuber friends left her, and you can't do shit but just keep watching, hoping she doesn't get disheartened and graduate tomorrow or something. It's not fun for indies right now, if you haven't joined yet, just don't.

>> No.22665405

>>22651751
>>22639632
Living in the post apocalyptic hellscape caused by Matsuri's ahoge getting separated from her body. You are on a quest to reunite the ahoge to the head of Matsuri and prevent the apocalypse from occuring.

>> No.22665510

>>22664996
I'll continue to support Terumi and Durropo Charming until the day I die.

>> No.22665549

>>22664996
Don't use twitter, easy. My indies could die tomorrow and I'd never know, ignorance is bliss

>> No.22665784

>>22665510
>Duroppu
I really need to fix my sleep schedule because she streams either right as I leave for work or first thing in the morning

>> No.22666020
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>>22639565
AAAAAAAHAHHHHHHHH I LOVE JAPANESE WOMENNNNN

>> No.22666164

>>22666020
Anime women aren't Japanese women. They're vaguely humanoid entities with highly abnormal facial and body proportions. Just because they often speak Japanese, does not make them Japanese.

>> No.22666499
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>>22639584
You sigh, looking out the window. The trees are swinging in the soft breeze, and the birds are chirping loudly. It's just another day at school. Class doesn't start for another 20 minutes, you didn't really bring anything to pass the time, so you can do nothing but watch the clouds while you spin around your gnawed pencil in your fingers.

"Nee~ Otaku-Kun~ moshi moshi~ are you there~? "

That cloud kind of looks like a monkey riding a tricycle. You chuckle at the thought.

"Otaku-Kun?" Was someone calling for you? That seemed awfully close.

You turn around to see a tanned girl, cat ears and tail with big breasts popping right out of her badly buttoned up blouse, leaning in, staring you right in the face with a puzzled look. You look at the mole in her plump breast, then look up at her face.

"Hm~?"

You jump, startled. She laughs at your reaction.

"Ah, gomen, gomen~ I wasn't trying to scare you or anythin'~" She stands straight up.

You think you remember this girl. Right, it was Okayu, the gyaru girl from class who's always asking you to lend her your stuff. A girl with blonde hair and leopard prints on her animal parts, she always wore a shirt way too loose for school standards despite being warned several times, a skirt that barely covered her thighs, and always walked around with the school bully Korone.

"Nee~, I forgot my eraser, you don't mind lending me yours again, right~?" Her voice was so calm and carefree, dragging out her words like she had all the time in the world.

You sighed, lending her your eraser again without any struggle.

"Arigato, Otaku-Kun~ aren't you the sweetest~? I swear I'll pay you back somehow~" She never did. It was best to let it go. At least she always returned your stuff, so that was nice.

"In fact~ what do you say we sneak out of here for a few minutes and I give you a little reward? Class doesn't start until 8:30~ you know~?"

You told her it was all good and that she didn't need to do anything for you, but she insisted... in a very persuasive way.

"Nee~... " Okayu leaned right into your ear, lowering her voice to a soft whisper, hot breath hitting your sensitive skin. "Have you ever had a blowjob, Otaku-Kun~?"

Okayu leaned out, leaving you flabbergasted at her words. Did she really say that? You turn to her, she's smiling gently. Then she gives you a look.

"If you want your reward~ come meet me in the janitor's closet... I'll be waiting~"

The cat walks out of the classroom, though not before pausing at the door and doing blowjob gestures with her hands and winking at you, before finally walking out of view
Her laughing can be heard in the hallway softly. You had a massive hard on, your heart was pounding. Would you follow her? Class was in 10 minutes... Actually, fuck class! You hide your raging boner by tucking it under your belt and follow after her in a weird strut.

Writing the lead up is such a chore...

>> No.22666817

>>22666499
>Someone's finally writing the Gyaru Okayu fic
You have my attention writeanon.

>> No.22667403

>>22639584
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSjcPA-T3uk8lE6QkPqGBn2GyHxQ4dxUIRvfwY_USKiZTOQUIu5FnWU5z24MevTM-VD6B1Zcn1ku6Vh/pub

Forsaking My Own Flesh And Blood
Tags: Nene, fluff, slice of life

Not entirely sure where I'll be going with this, but I plan to write more in the future.

>> No.22667519

Rape Miko, now

>> No.22667702

>>22666817
Nah I'm done. Too tired. The quality of this intro is rushed and subpar

>> No.22668253

>>22667403
>Teaching Nene English
I'm down for wherever this goes

>> No.22668421

>>22667403
It's an interesting start.
I think the initial intro was probably a bit too overstretched and while it does do the work of setting up the narrative voice, I think the backstory could have been told more organically in a way that would fit the story better, perhaps in a 'learning english' conversation with Nene?
If you do want to write more of this in the future, perhaps integrating the thoughts in a with dialogue would make it flow better.

>> No.22669158

>>22650670
If you don't publicly confess with a letter it doesn't count

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>>22667519
Booking a plane flight, give me a minute

>> No.22670582

>>22660623
Has anyone done a Tsundere Gura story?

>> No.22670693

>>22670582
No we've had abusive, and childhood friend but no tsundere yet or from anyone actually. I don't think we've had a tsundere fic yet

>> No.22671512

>>22667403
>”We can have a, uh, study session at my place if you’re not busy tonight.”
>I hold them open for Nene, letting her go first like a gentleman.
Anon is a bit creepy, and I’m not sure Nene would agree to something like that so readily considering how paranoid she actually is, but I’m still interested in where this could go.

>> No.22671598

>>22670693
Depends on your definition of tsundere really. I’m certain there’s been a few stories about girls who are mean to the guy they like and pretend they don’t have feelings for them.

>> No.22672046

AA, for when I assume you get home you missed this one from two threads ago

>>22470316

>> No.22672097

>>22667403
Anon, please tell me this is not you self-projecting how you would handle this kind of situation. The anon character is acting in a highly inappropriate manner, and if Nene wasn't so obviously infatuated, there's a good chance he would already be in trouble with his superiors. I'm not sure if you've ever held a job where you work with children, but the foremost rules are basically don't spend time alone with a child, and don't touch a child.

>> No.22672352

>>22671512
>>22672097
OH NO NO NO

>> No.22673216

>>22670582
Gura doesn’t seem much like the tsundere type so much as a cheeky brat who bullies you but does it in a cute and endearing way.

>> No.22673914

>>22672046
Yeah, fuck me. I'll handle it. Thanks.

>> No.22674477

>>22658609
I feel like this entire thing could have used some scene breaks rather than having the entire thing in one pseudo-continuous narration. While I get that the mundanity connecting the scenes are kind of the point, it does kind of chafe when moving forwards between scenes.
Still this does seem like a pretty good start for a series, the hook at the end does seem to have some solid potential.

>> No.22675091

>>22672097
>Serial Offender Anon: Smooth Criminal

>> No.22675428

>>22673216
That literally sounds like the exact archetype that evolves into becoming a tsundere when their feelings conflict with how they normally act.

>> No.22677793

>>22670582
We barely get normal gura

>> No.22678043

>>22672097
Some of the story is self-projection, but it was more with Nene than with Anon, to be quite honest.

>> No.22678078

>>22666164
cope enshart

>> No.22678098

>>22677793
I mean do you have ideas for a 'normal' gura fic?
Doesn't have to be anything big or 'high concept'.

>> No.22678505

>>22677793
Out of the Blue came out a few weeks ago. And there was that pair of birthday stories about her. And like a shitton of AmeSame stuff in the archive.

>> No.22679859

>>22671598
Do you a have any examples?
Closest I can think of is the latter half of Hating You Hating Me with Miko having conflicted feelings and acting strange due to them.

>> No.22680377

>>22679859
Now that I’m put on the spot, I might be wrong. Cover High definitely has a bit of tsundere from both sides since it’s set in high school, and the story could definitely take a big tsundere Pekora angle. Which I may like to see Aside from that I guess there’s Miss Sakura where Miko refused to believe she had feelings for Anon until Marine convinced her otherwise.

>> No.22680896

>>22678505
God Out of the Blue was fucking magic. Really lived up to its title and blasted us out of nowhere.

>> No.22681983

>>22672046
I can't stop reading the title as 'Bay of Sugma'

>> No.22684493

Jesus I think this is the first Archive update where the list is so long you have to scroll down to see it all. Not bad.

AA will need to hire an intern soon enough.

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>>22684493
The anchor's been great help already when I don't tiredly try to smash it all into Rentry before running off to work. Else everyone just throws a bunch of tomatoes at me when I forget something, which also works out. I live in constant fucking anxiety that the archive password will one day leak somehow to the point where I've had actual stress dreams over it. That or somehow people find my Twitter or some shit.

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22684958

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!

>> No.22685023

>>22684493
>>22684856
This actually got me thinking, if AA were to get stabbed and be on his deathbed, who would he pass the archive onto? Which Anon would take on the role of AA 2?
Probably multiple people with backups just in case one of them turns traitor and nukes the whole thing.

>> No.22685037

>>22684958
I have some stuff I'm working on but I've been so lazy, it's almost been a month since I actually sat down and typed something.

>> No.22685081

>>22685023
There's unironically explicit instructions that lie with a very, very close and trusted companion should I meet my untimely demise with regards with what will happen to the archive.

>> No.22685129

>>22685081
Damn you’ve got all the bases covered, kudos.

>> No.22685144

>>22685081
Damn AA you really have it all planned out.

>> No.22685217

>>22685081
are you actually dying or just super fucking paranoid?

>> No.22685289

>>22685217
AA is getting kinda old so he can never be too careful.

>> No.22685320

>>22685217
>Has stress dreams about the archive pw getting leaked
>Prepped instructions for the archive in case of an untimely demise.
I means the answer seems rather obvious.

>> No.22685371

>>22684958
I’m trying to write a scene where a chuuba tries to seduce (You) into having sex with her by being really horny and getting her hands all over you. Problem is I don’t think it’s quite hitting the mark. I feel as though the reader’s gonna get through the scene without even feeling a bit turned on. I need something to really spice up the scene and make it hot.
>Captcha: YMSTD
very fitting...

>> No.22685389

>>22685217
As someone who's almost died once, I can assure you that there's no such thing as being too paranoid about your own mortality.

>> No.22685493

>>22685371
What's troubling you, dialogue or the descriptions of the actions?

>> No.22685524

>>22685217
I don't think I've got anything fatal, no. But >>22685389 has the right of it. Life is a fickle whore and can be ripped away at any moment by any funny combination of cosmic dominoes with a deck that's generally stacked against you. It's just being safe.
>>22685371
Do you feel like it's too bland or something?

>> No.22685717

>>22685524
AA, If you were to die, the archive should be the least of your worries, and having the people discussing it as if it was the most important thing just goes to show that they don't care about you. You should probably go over your life priorities my man, this sounds like an obsession

>> No.22685820

>>22685081
Man, wouldn't it be funny if that someone was pekofag.

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>>22685820
I don't like nor want responsibility. Running the archive is a troublesome chore which I do not care enough for to do. I also do not have a passion for writing like AA does, and my will to be here is fickle. If AA goes, I'll probably leave to go terrorize another small group of people.

>> No.22686058

>>22685939
Unfortunate. The amount of seething that would cause would make me die of laughter.

>> No.22686068

>>22685939
That's one twisted crush

>> No.22686249

>>22684958
I have unironically added new lines to Foxfamily Christmas for the first time in two months, so I guess you could say we won't need to wait until next christmas for its release.

>> No.22686295

>>22684856
> I live in constant fucking anxiety that the archive password will one day leak somehow
Even if it did, aren't you using Google to host it? They're cocksucking glownigger Antichrist-servitors, but they've figured out 2FA for accounts. -Just- the password leaking probably wouldn't be enough to compromise the Archive.

>> No.22686328

>>22685023
I mean this is sort of related but in the worst case scenario can't we just throw the archive onto ao3 via their Open Doors program.
Reading up on it, it seems like that project of theirs would be the perfect backup/archive in case the worst happens, either to AA or the fandom due to The Final Yab somehow occuring.

>> No.22686380

>>22685820
Why the fuck do you always have to bring him up?

>> No.22686426

>>22686380
He's made it pretty clear >>22686058

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>>22685717
>caring about a hobby beyond the most superficial basis is surely a sign of an unhealthy, consuming obsession
I fucking hate zoomers and this irony-poisoned social media world so fucking much, holy fucking shit.

>> No.22686510

>>22667403
Fucking excellent.
>>22672097
Who cares? I want to see a torrid teacher/student romance where (You) know what you're doing is terrible but Nene's seduction is too overwhelming.

>> No.22686569

>>22685493
Not sure, bit of both? It feels boring. Maybe generic isn’t the right word but I guess it doesn’t feel very special.
>>22685524
>Do you feel like it's too bland or something?
Pretty much this. I might try sleeping and coming back tomorrow to see if a fresh perspective might shed light on a solution.

>> No.22686722

>>22686295
I think they mean the rentry page rather than their google account.
>>22686569
I mean in cases like this the old idiom of writing "Write Drunk, Edit Sober" might be the solution If it's feels boring then maybe you should cut loose as it were and put in stuff that would spicier and sexier than what you're normally writing about; then wrangle it later in editing into being coherent.
Either that or listen to some erotic ASMR while looking at lewd pics of the chuuba in question in order to rile up those sexual fantasies.

>> No.22686797

>>22686436
I like bird watching. I feed the birds everyday. In case I were to die, I left instructions with a close friend of mine on how to feed the birds, and where I have an emergency sack of food for them. I have nightmares thinking about what would happen if I didn't bring food to the birds.

This sounds healthy to you?

>> No.22686850

>>22686797
That just sounds like the last will and testament of an old man that found comfort in feeding the birds.

>> No.22686924
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>>22684958
For now, the next chapter in my current series, I want to add some suspense and tragedy here and there so I'm toying with the scenarios I want to use.

A new cuckquean fic is lingering in the back of my head, involving chuubas raping (you)

I also want to give a spin to an IRyS prompt I saw some time ago about you two cuddling during times of poverty.

>> No.22687076

>>22686722
I'll give this a shot, muchas gracias.

>> No.22687104

>>22686722
>write drunk, edit sober
Unironically works.
A glass of wine or a shot of whiskey helps a lot.

>> No.22687164

>>22687104
>>22686722
You guys got any advice for someone that doesn't drink?

>> No.22687191

>>22687164
I am 100% serious when I say this.

Change the font to comic sans.

>> No.22687326

>>22685524
You're right to worry. Tell your doctor you want a full scan of your liver. Tell them how tired you've been feeling lately. If they say no, insist. Get that scan at all costs.

29/05/2031

>> No.22687329

>>22687191
I'll try it but I don't know how that's gonna help.

>> No.22687451

>>22687164
"Write Drunk, Edit Sober" is idiomatic writing advice.
It more means that one should write 'drunk' and not worry about how it's going to look later, then edit 'sober' by going through that shit and making it read good afterwards.
Basically write like you have the inhibitions of being drunk and shut up the editor voice while you're making that first draft of what you're making. Then you can comb over it with a clear head.

>> No.22687521

>>22687164
First of all, good on you. Second, >>22687451 has it about right. Take the voice in your head telling you that you're writing garbage and shoot it in the fucking face. You can worry about editing later.

>> No.22687600

>>22687451
That's the gist of it, but you're making the mistake of assuming the surface-level understanding is wrong. Sometimes it really does just mean write drunk, edit sober. Doing things drunk is a great way to get started on something you're otherwise too embarrassed or unconfident to do.

>> No.22687613

>>22687326
Buddy there are only 12 months in the year that date doesn't work.

>Tfw AA lives forever because death is not american

>> No.22687675

>>22687613
> implying America will still exist in 2031
Foolish child

>> No.22687690

>>22686797
Yes? You spend a good chunk of your life taking care of birds, of course you'll worry what will happen to them if they croak.

Not caring about things isn't a substitute for a personality, dude.

>> No.22687778

>>22687690
> if they croak.
*if you

>> No.22688173

>>22687690
He's had the archive for a year. He's had 50 years to live, and probably at least another 10. The archive should not be giving him nightmares from how much he cares about it. But I dropped this because this is boiling down to life purposes and yadda yadda, and at that point there's no reason to argue

>> No.22688370

>>22688173
>He's had 50 years to live
Keep up with the times old man, that was confirmed rrat

>> No.22688915

>>22688370
Ah, yeah I saw that. It's 52, not 50. Though it doesn't really matter for the point I was trying to get across, does it.

>> No.22689764

>>22687600
I mean for some people getting drunk will just torpedo any chance of them writing. Sometime the liquid courage isn't going to help.

>> No.22690154

>>22684958
Living in a dorm room currently and I forgot to bring my WIP story with me, so working on nothing right now.
The WIP in question is a Fubuki story I've been meaning to write for more than 5 months now, but haven't made much progress on.

I feel like writing a short story right now, but I don't know what it should be about. If anyone has any suggestions for a short one-off, I'm up for suggestions.

>> No.22690555

>>22690154
Given that 90% of the fircs here are published via gdocs why wasn't that wip on your Google drive?
Also if you want a short story idea how about.
(You) are Shion's rival at the Magic Academy the two of you go to. The relationship between the two of you has always been tense, with one-upsmanship and competition being the primary way you had communicated till now. But the kusogaki has gone too far this time, you have challenged her to a duel and await her on the dueling grounds. Where it goes is up to you.

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>>22691145

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>>22691233

>> No.22691369

>>22691287
Objectively the good ending but fuck you.

>> No.22691411

>>22691369
There's something else connected to the initial image?

>> No.22691465

>>22691411
Well, yeah. They fuck her in the ass. Isn't that the expected outcome?

>> No.22691513

>>22691411
Drunk gangrape where I wish I was in Selen's place but also that the guys were two chuubas.

>> No.22692068

>>22691513
Where would I find the original ending?

>> No.22692098

>>22692068
The artist hasn't made it

>> No.22692257

>>22684856
I am going to find your Twitter and we'll be best friends even if you don't want it.

>> No.22692407

>>22690555
>Given that 90% of the fircs here are published via gdocs why wasn't that wip on your Google drive?
Because I'm literally so lazy to open Chrome at times I'd rather write it on MS Word and then import it to Google Docs. It's my own brand of autism, please understand.

>> No.22692503

>>22692407
That's... actually impressive, in a retarded kind of way.

>> No.22693216

>>22692407
I don't blame you, I write everything on my phone, which means I still have to go on my computer to publish anyways

>> No.22693334

>>22693216
How the fuck do you write fics with a phone keyboard?

>> No.22693406

>>22693334
NTA but you press buttons corresponding with letters of the alphabet until words are formed.

>> No.22693451

>>22693334
NTA but any fic below 2K is much better to write with phone because you can just lay down and chill at bed

>> No.22693883

>>22674477
Glad you like it so far! Mundanity transitions are an old habit of mine for this kind of writing where a lot of it is carried on daily interactions rather than giant events at first, I'll keep an eye on that though. Looking back I do feel there were some instances when I could have hard broken a scene and started a new one.

>> No.22694539

>>22687451
I kind of do this in a way because I don't plan anything out in my stories except for giant overarching 'events.' I just write and see where it takes me, so I'm usually not too concerned about the editor in me until I finish and go back.

>> No.22694655

>>22687164
Please don't drink to write a fic, it's not worth it. Ignore the retards here who think being an alcoholic is a cool character trait

>> No.22695057

>>22694655
t. a shit writer

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>>22680896
What the fuck, I just read Out of the Blue while listening to Gura's oceanside humming ASMR and cried. The experience was so magical, and it hit me so damned hard.

>> No.22698221

>>22693334
I get the motivation to write better that way. An idea hits me and my phone is there, so I just do the rest like that.

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>>22684958
Right now I'm trying to see where to take Building Block Doll. I am unsatisfied by the last chapter and want to think carefully before putting the next chapter out.

In the meantime, I'm going to probably just rework Tusk entirely. Those first two chapters were crap and I can do far better than that. I have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote that, way below my usual level of writing. To do that, I'm going to reread the book that gave me the inspiration to write it in the first place. I want to write half as good as he does.

Oh an also I'm working on a petplay story but that's a bit on the backburner.

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>> No.22701204

>>22701061
Boner

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>>22701061
I want to molest Towa with Suisei's aid

>> No.22701678

>>22701204

You or one of the "girls" anon?

>> No.22702005

>>22701678
Yes

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22704122

>>22639632
Having a taboo love affair with a lonely high-school aged Okayu

>> No.22705793

This guy >>22704122 is a pedophile

>> No.22705795

>>22693334
I've tried this a few times and found it impossible. My brain already forms ideas faster than I can type them out on a proper keyboard, so slowing down my input even further makes me forget shit mid-sentence and get really irritated

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>>22705793
I am? Sweet!

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>>22705959

>> No.22706426

>>22706045
that is the worst punching techniqe i have ever seen. she's not even punching. she's basically just slamming her fists down on a table to make a point, except the table is some guys balls.

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>> No.22709250

>>22688915
You’re genuinely retarded

>> No.22709912

>>22693216
Get the google docs app, you can still use it offline. In fact, if you enable offline editing you can use regular google docs on your computer whenever you want, no need for >>22692407 to use MS word.

>> No.22710709

>>22709912
Anon I think by publishing they meant the kind of publishing to web the thread does since the gdocs mobile app does not support doing that, only the sharing of the file or the non anonymous publishing.

>> No.22711102

>>22707877
Whos the girl in the middle?

>> No.22711160

>>22711102
> girl
It's me.

>> No.22711892

>>22711160
Man, Coco reading the archive is somehow even more terrifying than the fact that most likely the IDs are probably aware we exist.

>> No.22712132

>>22712083
Hah dumbass

>> No.22712148

>>22712083
Pekofag c'mon man...

>> No.22712210

>>22712148
Shut up you saw nothing

>> No.22712246

>>22711892
Do they? I'm ready to start burning files if I have to lmao.

>> No.22712260

>>22712083
Hey I just saw you on one of those vt repost twitters

>> No.22712275

>>22712260
Nah that's someone else

>> No.22712735

>>22712275
I'm actually mad that you seem to be correct

>> No.22714764

>>22712246
I mean it's not exactly a large leap of logic. Since it's pretty much reliant on these axioms
>HoloID knows about this vt
>Reine is interested in fanfiction
Ergo
>Reine would have eventually come to this place at some point

>> No.22714996

>>22714764
It would be her wouldn't it? Instead of worrying about getting bombarded with new faces because someone threw the name out there we should be worrying about getting assassinated. I think that's better, actually.

>> No.22718681 [SPOILER] 
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>>22639632
A fic where you come into a young Towa's life and bring the light of color and creativity into her life. Ending then reveals that you are actually picrel.

>> No.22718701
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>> No.22718749

>>22718701
boing boing

>> No.22718810
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>>22714764
Reine being into fanfic makes me think of this image, like she's telling Fubuki about all the weird shit that's been written about her.

>> No.22718864

>>22718701
story about sucking on Luna's sensitive tits when

>> No.22718957

>>22718810
Sorry, but I absolutely want Friend to know I'm extremely proud of having spent many hours writing about eating out her asshole, and I'd do it again.

>> No.22719149

>>22718810
"So listen, there's this story called Omelas..."

>> No.22719298

>>22718810
This but she's actually telling Fubuki about the stories she's written and posted anonymously here while having deniability about what she's written.

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22719329

>>22640440
NTA, I would like to see the archive or the previous chapters of this work anon

>> No.22720653

>>22719329
They are both on the archive, but since you asked so nicely.

https://rentry.org/x8wm7
https://rentry.org/mkznu
https://rentry.org/yir3b

>> No.22721367

>>22718810
Can Reine into Japanese?

>> No.22722443
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22722443

>>22720653
Nice, thank you so much!

>> No.22722758

>>22721367
She tries.

>> No.22724818

>>22666499
bless your heart

>> No.22724821

>>22639584
Lotus Festival: Kataomoi
(Fanwork of Cover High)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTjF2C8CfgIFSPHJJgluCOszIaYM4MTCxGm-pgTdVrxn2E9PA-k6oXBQLaiD1HynrP759QS1t1e9dP3/pub

Rentry link with previous entries and other stories: https://rentry.org/footstepsandstories

>> No.22725816

>>22722758
That's better than half of EN lol

>> No.22727337

>>22724821
Forgot the tags

Tags: OCxMatsuri, Izuru, Fubuki, Fluff, Angst, Friends to Lovers, Drama, Comedy.

>> No.22728437

>>22712246
>/vt/ Fanfic Review! Is a stream title
>everyone scrambles to delete everything as fast as they can, air raid siren sound effect playing from the browser tab, post count quintuples with either people calling us horrible rapist monsters or asking for more

>> No.22728754

>>22728437
We would have to nuke everything, or at least not have a thread made for a few days until the influx went away. I just live with the hope that if any Holo knows about this place or even frequents it (They could be any one of us!) that they are smart enough to know that airing it out in public would just make us have to scurry for shelter.

>> No.22728858

>>22728437
>The effort to create /wg/ year one hard archive was actually done by Reine so that nothing could be torched.
Sasuga peahen

>> No.22729146
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>>22728858
>Have seen someone say Reine made the new archive
>Now this

A-am I living a double life? Am I Reine, or is she using her special ops indoninjas to hurl suggestive messaging at me?

>> No.22729319

>>22729146
FOUL INDO SORCERY

>> No.22729449

>>22729146
/become/ Reine.

>> No.22729907

>>22729319
carlos.jpg
>Foul? You mean… heh… fowl?

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>>22729907

>> No.22730072

>>22712148
Did PF just dox themselves

>> No.22730275

>>22730072
No, he's pretending to be a chinese Aqua crossplayer in the cosplay thread

>> No.22730290

>>22730072
No they were just LARPing as a chinese cosplayer on the cosplay thread for (You)s.

>> No.22730359

>>22704122
Sad this never got picked up. I think it would be interesting if it got treated like a proper saviorfag story, like, 100% everything you're doing for Okayu is making her life significantly better, BUT society would still crucify you for it because she's 16 or 17 and you're 30. Further props if the writer manages to work in some more nuance by having (You) wrestle with the obvious power imbalance in your relationship with Okayu.

>> No.22730385

>>22730072
I don't have any chuuba cosplays so I can't really post here. Also it's not really a doxx and wouldn't be since pretty much all pics I took are of my ass or bulge

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>>22730385
Can you really be sure it's not a dox? Never forget where you are.

>> No.22730714

>>22730385
>Missed PF ass/bulge

>> No.22730835

>>22730714
And thank god I did. It's all fun and games when the trap is 2D, but 3D legit puts me off.

>> No.22730866

Go to the fucking cosplay thread if you want to do gay ERP you faggots, that’s what they’re doing right this very moment. Don’t start this shit again here I already know where this is going.

>> No.22730893

>>22730556
I mean if you can somehow relate my bulge to my lewd Twitter then good job, you deserve to have it just don't spread it.

>> No.22730992

RATE THE STREAM

>> No.22731195

>>22730992
Anon...?

>> No.22731314
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22731314

>>22730359
>Okayu asking you to marry her as soon as she turns 18
>You so desperately want to say yes, but know how bad that would look to everybody

>> No.22731415

>>22731195
Shit, wrong thread. Am sleep deprived, pls andastand.

>> No.22731851

>>22730359
Reminds me of this manga I once read about a runaway high school girl who wants to pay a guy with sex so she gets somewhere to live, only he actually takes care of her.

>> No.22731951

>>22730992
>Chuuba makes you watch her piss then asks you to rate the stream.
Could be a decent shitpost.

>> No.22732059

>>22731951
Again, I was intending for that post to be on another thread, but my sleep-deprived ass posted it here instead. But now that you mention it, it really could be a good shitpost.

>> No.22732096

>>22731951
>Stream rating stream
>"2/10 I think somethings wrong with your prostate."

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>>22732096

>> No.22732226

Requesting 8 mile but aqua is Eminem, the chinese are the blacks that dont believe she can become a famous rapper and her rap rival is pekora

>> No.22733390

>>22730893
Couldn't someone just look at the EXIF data on twitter and find you out that way?

>> No.22733472

>>22733390
I wouldn't upload something from my Twitter here, I mean like literally recognizing the bulge which is obviously just a joke because it's impossible

>> No.22733501

>>22733472
>To my lewd Twitter
Don't do this to me. Don't.

>> No.22733640

>>22733501
Fuck off.

>> No.22733865

If I were to use an animal girl as a character but want the story to be realistic (i.e just humans and no animal girls), how would I describe them just being a regular person? When the character Okayu for example is mentioned the reader automatically visualises her with cat ears and a tail, and I can't just write something like:
There's my friend Okayu, a regular girl with no ears or tail and is not a cat.
What do?

>> No.22733878

>>22732096
Honestly sounds like something that could come out of a rat review with Mumei stream. Obviously Mumei would carry that stream since Bae would be too embarrassed looking at where the streams are coming from.

>> No.22733911

>>22733865
Describe her hair or something to indicate that she is notably lacking her animal features.

>> No.22734077

>>22733865
I feel like with animal girls the whole animal part is so intrinsically linked to them that if you want a realistic (no animal bits) fic with that you need to explicitly mention and make it clear that they are full human, while also mildly amping up their other characterisation to compensate.
Also kind of interested, so I'm going to ask.
What's the concept/reason for making them full human?

>> No.22734532

>>22733911
That was my first thought, but I wasn't sure how I'd go about doing that.
"Her golden curls of hair still wet from the shower, she bites her lip and scratches her... SMOOTH head."
Like I might be stupid but I have no clue how to write a description to make it clear they don't have animal features, because ears don't really get in the way of anything.
>>22734077
No particular reason, just that my story is set with (You) discovering that magic exists in a completely bland, regular Earth like setting and refusing to believe it for a while. So if that many different types of animal girls exist (foxes, cats, dogs, etc.) it might make the existence of magic more believable since animal girls is already a pretty big step towards a fantasy type setting.

>> No.22734610

>>22734532
I forget, does Okayu have human ears and cat ears? You could always have her brush her hair aside to show off some earrings or something.

>> No.22734701

>>22734610
Oh, Okayu was just an example. I'm currently thinking Polka is the character I need to make the story work. Unless she doesn't have human ears too? I know Fubuki does.

>> No.22734839

>>22734532
Well if you're looking for an idea for HOW to make it very clear that animal people don't exist then my first thought would probably be something like a scene where you see Korone hugging a dog while thinking about the mundanity of life, then having an imagine spot where you imagine what if Korone was some kind of dog girl/had dog ears.
This scene would pull double duty at making it clear that the world is mundane/normal and make it really clear that Korone is not a dog girl in this universe.

>> No.22735194

Sometimes I think about how Elira supposedly only started saying zamn after that Pomu futa story got posted.

>> No.22735323

>>22692407
Whats wrong with using Word (or any other program)? DESU I'd rather write my fics somewhere that doesn't rely on an internet connection.

>> No.22735607

>>22734610
Okayu does not have human ears. If any collab art featuring her does have some, she was just putting on fake ears for show.

>> No.22735764

>>22693216
Wait can't you just publish with rentry rather than with gdocs?

>> No.22735829

>>22728437
Well Amelia has admitted to going on fanfiction.net so... uh, perhaps she's not too far away.

>> No.22736123

>>22735829
The EN/ID have definitely checked this thread out of curiosity but I doubt they stay for long or actually read the stories that get posted here.

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>>22735829 (me)
Actually Amelia might be the worst case scenario if she found this place. Sure, you could argue Fubuki but the fox would have to translate every story and probably wouldn't be able to understand everything. Amelia on the other hand can read English and considering all the gosling stories we have of her...

>> No.22736252

>>22736123
Yeah thankfully 2nd person filters out normies into thinking the writing here is worse than it is due to shitty ESLs writing about (Y/N) (L/N) giving it a bad name.

>> No.22736278

>>22736215
>Calliope reads all the stories about her
>Kiara reads all the stories about her
>Gura only has the patience to read Out of The Blue, cries on stream
>Ame can't read
>Ina wrote all the stories involving her

>> No.22736397

>>22736278
>Ina wrote Girl of Emptiness
I kneel

>> No.22736660

>>22736278
None of the Holos strike me as the reading type, though I think Kiara once mentioned liking LOTR and Mori mentioned writing fanfic as a middle schooler.

Amelia is weird. She comes off as definitely having the chops for it, but not the interest.

Gura is an airhead and I'd be honestly surprised, regardless of what her thoughts on fanfic are.

Ina... maybe it's just my biases talking but most art people are shallow as fuck when it comes to reading and writing. Like, shockingly shallow. A Miura-style talent where the guy was a fantastic artist AND a fantastic writer is by and large the exception and not the rule.

>> No.22736731

>>22736278
What about Council?

>> No.22736834

>>22736731
Mumei was the one who made up the wheelchair rrat during her debut.

>> No.22736870

>>22736731
>Sana's face is still on a milk carton
>Kronii refuses to read anything written by her fans because she just automatically assumes it's all male-focused smut that dehumanizes her
>Mumei is suspiciously depressed after reading Mumei at the Windowsill out of fear of it becoming true
>Baelz had the guy writing the series about dating her found so she could actually marry him, which is why she stopped
>Fauna has maybe 0.3 fics so she doesn't care but is secretly sad.

>> No.22737100

>>22736870
>>Kronii refuses to read anything written by her fans because she just automatically assumes it's all male-focused smut that dehumanizes her
is she wrong?

>> No.22737154

>>22737100
Objectively yes because it can't ALL be that...right? Right??

>> No.22737192

>>22737154
Well yes, not every Kronii story in the archive is smut.

>> No.22737204

>>22737100
I know /infinity/ is a mess that's filled with tripfags but I'm sure they have some good stuff.

>> No.22737670

>>22736660
Reine has made mention of reading and liking fics from AO3 on stream, like the fic of Anya helping her and Kiara with laying eggs or that yuri smut fic of her and Kiara on their Maldives vacation making out in the shower and in bed.
So if anyone here has posted their fics on that site, there is a very high chance Reine has/will read them.

>> No.22737698

>>22737204
Most of their archive is incredibly low-effort greentexts and short stories pumped out at a breakneck pace - the equivalent of shovelware. This doesn't mean that it's necessarily bad; there's some pretty hot stuff in there. But unfortunately, the vast majority really is just dogshit.

>> No.22738121

>>22737154
Hey I'm pretty sure ao3 has some kronii fics that aren't writen by men.

>> No.22738937

>>22736278
>Ina wrote Holofantasy
>Ina is Archive Anon

>> No.22739070

>>22738937
Hey come on the chuubas only ghost write the smut side chapters of themselves.

>> No.22739233

>>22736278
>Ina wrote Raping Ina!!!

>> No.22739293

>>22739233
Man, Ina has some weird fantasies huh?

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>>22738937
Don't be ridiculous.

>> No.22739567

>>22739233
The quiet ones always have the more degenerate fetishes.

>> No.22739579

>>22736397
>Girl of Emptiness
Just read it. Man, to be able to see chuubas this way again. The amount of effort and attention to detail on this fic is absolutely staggering.

>> No.22739668

>>22739579
I don't know if he ever put anything else but that fic is fucking amazing. Love hit.

>> No.22739969

>>22739579
So did I, it was great. Prose, concept, everything. Only thing I didn't like was the silent protagonist having no dialogue whatsoever.

>> No.22740696

>>22739070
So that's why the April fools chapter was so weird. Mori has some weird tastes.

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>>22740696
>Polka wrote her Bad End

>> No.22741349

This thread went wild near the end.

>> No.22741365

>>22741349
It did, it really did.

>> No.22741524

bump

>> No.22741529

>>22741524
Anon...

>> No.22741571
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22741571

LUNA RAPE
NON-CONSENSUAL SEX WITH THE SEXY BABY PRINCESS

>> No.22741641

New thread
>>22741382

>> No.22741779 [SPOILER] 
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22741779

Oh we're at BL already? Shit. Well, uh...what's a candy you really like? Something simple.

>> No.22741868

>>22741779
Skittles

>> No.22742045

>>22741779
so how old is he anyway or is that going to remain an in joke

>> No.22742266

>>22741779
We had Herbina for a while - candy drops with liquid centre of an unindentifiable herb flavour (unless you look at the wrapper)
Rafaello are nice - almond and viscous sweet milk filling inside a crunchy shell with coconut shavings on it.
Lukum, Turkish sweets - fruit juice, flour/starch, light malt syrup(??) and god knows what else, processed into blocks of sweet jelly-like substance
Strela (arrow), Soviet candy - chocolate cones filled with something that tries to imitate creme brulee in flavour
Tipsy Cherry, also Soviet - chocolate candy with cherries pickled in some sort of spirit

>> No.22742288

>>22742045
Up to you. His three major character influences are all canonically of varying ages within their own series. Make your own conclusions/insert whatever age you want.

>> No.22742832

>>22742288
>three major character influences
Not just Vergil?

>> No.22742848

>>22742832
I'm reasonably certain Luca from Monster girl quest was a major influence early on.

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22742933

>>22742832
Yeah.
>>22742848
Correct, and two others. Though things have gotten out of hand in his head.

>> No.22743055

>>22741779
What's this from?

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