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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>27499468

>> No.27658040
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.27658080
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

Present Day, Present Time: Tags: NSFW, Korone, Okayu, Mio, Lactation, Pregnant, Prostate Play, Nakadashi, Body Writing:>>27568324

Building Block Doll: Chapter 19: Tags: Suisei, Sora, Romance, Omatsu, Omorashi

Pipkin Pippa Fanfics: Tags: Pipkin Pippa:>>27514585

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Zeta poses as a honeypot and seduces you:>>27505283

The Penguins of Madagascar run a train on Kaela.:>>27506607

Tired of your girlfriend teasing you, you turn the tables on Okayu while she's too occupied to do anything in return:>>27512372

Sneaking into Miko's room to give her a goodnight kiss.:>>27512803

Saw an anon a few threads back talking about something related to Ready or Not (the SWAT Tactical shooter game) and some elements of it have some cult imagery and that got me thinking:>>27515857

You are an executive with UMG asking Mori just what she’s willing to do to get this record deal:>>27524557

Getting interrogated by these two or some more horny prompt:>>27555329

Fucking the rabbit after binging all of her stories and stumbling into the bedroom in a drunken haze.:>>27608883

Reine decides to reward her favorite author.:>>27620082

Kanata is your assigned nurse:>>27620576

I saw a clip today that would make for a great story:>>27622416

>> No.27658786

>>27657964
Holy Mother of SEX

>> No.27659436
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>>27658786
Chimken seemingly gets real horny on her birthday

>> No.27660150

>>27659436
Kiara learned some things in Japan.

>> No.27662587

Bump

>> No.27663012

>Pastebin beginning to delete things and sending emails
I fucking hate what they did to this website.

>> No.27663396

>>27663012
Should AA just rehost everything left that's on pastebin since it's not even going to be clear if it deleted or taken down anymore?

>> No.27663633

>>27663396
I *am* AA. And fucking probably, I guess. Wish there was a mass importer but what can you do other than eat shit. Don't even know which these are and can't check at the moment. Pastebin used to be great, not sure why they started sucking dicks left and right. Email just says something about "abuse reports" which I highly doubt.

>> No.27663912

>>27663633
Well aside from fucking around with their website's API. Doesn't the hard backup have all the pastebin fics?
So it should just be a matter of grabbing all the pastebin fic titles from there, pretty sure all pastebin submissions were pre anniversary. Except, maybe that one fic by that anon (I think it was a Pippa one?)

>> No.27663949

>>27663912
Good look sorting through all of that.

>> No.27663957
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>>27663633
Menhera, Self-Hatred, and Entrapment are the ones it seems as they all have this message

>> No.27664063

>>27663957
Well, that's that then. What the fuck, they're targeting relationship abuse shit now? Not even sex stuff, just bad feelings? Ridiculous. Thanks.
>>27663912
I downloaded the Pastebin list back when I switched to Rentry and regularly keep Rentry checkpoints up there, it WOULD have just been a matter of sorting through it while grumbling angrily but thanks to the other Anon I know what was fucked with.

>> No.27664105

>>27663957
>potentially harmful
yeah, to my dick

>> No.27664164

>>27663949
AA at least has the advantage here since he has the spreadsheet. He can just grab all the urls from there.
>>27663957
I'm going to take a wild guess that pastebin got some new bots programmed and let loose on their service.
Nothing to do except back up everything from there we care about and put a warning to not use pastebin for fanfics.

>> No.27664412

>>27664063
>What the fuck, they're targeting relationship abuse shit now? Not even sex stuff, just bad feelings?
Dunno, I checked all the pastebin links up to A Sheep's Warmth and it's just those ones

>> No.27666016
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>>27657964
Series writers Doko?

>> No.27666088

>>27666016
Check last thread.

>> No.27666747

>>27666016
dying in Donbas

>> No.27666900

>>27658080
Gura going to the beach disguised as a boy.
>>27666267

>> No.27667437

>>27658080
mori dies (gore, ryona)

>> No.27667483
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>>27666016
I have been thinking about starting over a couple of chapters to undo some major mistakes I made but I come to conclusion that it is meaningless and would also be a lot of work. Probably will take down the series soon to be honest.

>> No.27667551

>>27667483
what series?

>> No.27667651
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Reine really wanted fic about this, but it would be way too awkward to write it herself...

>> No.27667671

>>27666747
RIP Haganon

>> No.27667804

>>27667551
If I had to take a guess from the tone. Holocalypse.
With my other guesses in decreasing order of likelihood being Cover High, To be 17 again, and Footsteps across Time.

>> No.27668065

>>27667483
>deleting a full series
I will be so miffed

>> No.27668123

>>27668065
Remember to save your favorite fics.
Just because the archive exists doesn't mean you shouldn't save your favorites.

>> No.27668174

>>27667483
What's the point of deleting it? Deleting it isn't gonna fix anything or make you feel better. If you really feel so bad about it, leave it up, let it be a remainder of what you don't want to happen again.

>> No.27668284

>>27668174
But anon, how else is a fanfic writer supposed to have a menhera breakdown?

>> No.27668778

>>27658080
A yandere Mori killing Kiara to wipe her memory so they can start over with just Mori

>> No.27669028

>>27667804
I'm guessing Girlboss Watson.

>> No.27669252

>>27669028
Oh that's an unexpected dark horse that I didn't even think about.
If I had to stick it somewhere on the list, probably between cover high and to be 17 again in terms of likelihood of complete breakdown.

>> No.27669372

>>27669252
What makes to be 17 again so likely?

>> No.27669670

>>27669372
As I said before I listed them in decreasing order of likelihood.
To be 17 again is actually at a pretty small chance from my own guessing but the small chance comes from the fact that the author has mildly scope crept themselves and need to rework their own plans; which while unlikely to kill the project as a whole does give it a small chance of happening.

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Is it bad that the only reason why I sometimes watch Matsuri is because I lust after this woman? Like I don't even look at that much lewds of my oshi as much as I do Matsuri.

>> No.27669938

>>27669751
It's because you've fallen in love/lust with the idea of a menhera.
There is no cure anymore anon. You can only find alternatives.

>> No.27670188

>>27669938
nta but it can't be any menhara. It has to be Matsuri. Everything that makes her whole is what make her so god damn attractive.

>> No.27670318

>>27670188
Oh for you, you are truly lost to Matsuri
Enjoy her while you still can.

>> No.27671097

I wonder what the inside of Matsuri's mouth would feel like on my dick...

>> No.27671172

I wonder what Matsuri's dick would feel like on the inside of my mouth...

>> No.27671201

>>27671172
Femboy Matsuri!?

>> No.27672506

>>27671172
Small yet as hard as diamond, twitching with every slight movement making her twitch or throb eagerly. Her dick doesn't get much action despite her desperate attempts to get laid, but she spends all her time feverishly masturbating to keep herself sane. However, Matsuri doesn't use lube, meaning as soon as she feels something warm AND wet, she'll lose her mind and it'll be a constant struggle to not begin shooting her shot immediately.

>> No.27672769

Speaking of blowjobs, Riding Fox is fucking amazing. It's short but intense and the prose is densely-packed erotica, with little superfluous description.

>You felt her hands reaching around under your hips and grabbing your backside, pulling you upwards even deeper inside her with the motion. You could hear her muffled moaning as she struggled to receive the barrage of cum lining the inside of her mouth, but even then, she took it all like a pro. Spurt after spurt, she kept your cock deep inside her throat right up until you were finally finished ejaculating. You could see her tail wagging around side to side excitedly as she eagerly sucked out every drop of your cum you had left. Once you were done, she stood there for a moment longer; you could feel her swirling her tongue around, tasting your sperm, your cock still inside. Before long, she tightened her lips around your cock and began pulling her head back, pulling it out of her mouth without letting a single drop of your cum spill out.

I came so fucking hard to this paragraph my toes twitched and I sat there panting for a good 60 odd seconds afterwards

>> No.27673318

>>27672769
>good two thirds of it is cunnilingus
not for me senpai. it's hard to make licking a vagina sound appealing and this doesn't cut it

>> No.27673448

>>27673318
You should try it, it's fun.

>> No.27673726

>>27673448
it doesn't sound like fun. they'll taste strange even when freshly cleaned and if she isn't straight out of the shower, it'll smell and taste terrible. glad my penis doesn't have taste buds or i'd be a celibate

>> No.27673854

>>27673726
I curse you with penis tastebuds.

>> No.27674017

>>27673854
i don't think meme magic has that kind of power but thanks anyways?

>> No.27674024

>>27673726
>he's never gotten a girl to cum
Point and laugh at the beta male.

>> No.27674260

>>27674024
where the fuck did you pull that nugget from?

>> No.27674332

>>27673854
Can I have chumbuds on my penis instead?

>> No.27674633

>>27674332
t. hooman

>> No.27674668

>>27674260
My powers of deduction.

>> No.27674788
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>>27674017
The only cure to a /wg/ curse is to finish and release your wips anon. Remember that.

>> No.27674925

>>27674788
what if I curse someone into never releasing their wips? do they just lose the ability of ever curing themselves?

>> No.27674962

>>27674788
can you curse me to make me finish reading through my backlog?

>> No.27674974

>>27674925
I'm pretty sure half of the general already suffers from that curse, me included.

>> No.27675153

>>27674925
It depends, do you really want to read a half baked detective story written in first person?

>> No.27675248

>>27675153
...
Is this the Gura and (You) in the offbrand holy grail war prompt?

>> No.27675543

>>27675248
No, it's something else entirely. The PoV is from Ame's eyes. She's a PI working in Ametropolis or whatever the fuck she called NYC and she's given a job by her former police boss (another Ame) to investigate the murder of a prostitute (Gura) while having to deal with her new partner (another Gura). Together they unravel a conspiracy yada yada yada. The ending is sort of bleak like Chinatown's ending. It's noir through and through.

>> No.27675625

>>27675543
Well I'm always interested to see the writers here try chuuba pov. So if you're happy enough to release it, I'll happily read it and give my thoughts.

>> No.27675942

>>27667483
I gotta ask that you reconsider, man. Abandoning a story is one thing, but why take it down? Even if you’re not too proud of how it turned out, I can guarantee there were at least a few anons who enjoyed it and more who will in the future. After all, that’s your hard work, may as well leave it up and have it serve it’s purpose rather than be wasted.
>>27667804
>Holocalypse
Nah, I am finishing that pile of garbage no matter how long it takes, leaving it unfinished wouldn’t sit right with me, and I also need to break the curse someday so I can cum. On the nonzero chance that I change my mind though, I’ll definitely leave it up, same with all my works. It’s no skin off my back if they’re just sitting there in the archive.

>> No.27676019

>>27675625
Okay, I'll try to find it. Do you use the anchor for WIPs?

>> No.27676031

>>27675942
>I am finishing that pile of garbage no matter how long it takes, leaving it unfinished wouldn’t sit right with me
Fucking bless. Holocalypse is one of favourites fics here.

>> No.27676291

>>27672506
>meaning as soon as she feels something warm AND wet, she'll lose her mind
does that mean she can't go into an onsen or take a hot bath?

>> No.27676959

>>27658881
>What aspects are you thinking on focusing the story on. Humiliation? Exhibitionism?
To be honest, neither and both? I didn't really start writing the story with that angle in mind, likely because neither of those are fetishes of mine so it's difficult to make it intentionally erotic.

That being said I think there are elements of both in there, and I think what's missing is adding some flavor to the text to exacerbate it. I'll re-read it later and see. I just wanted to molest an embarrassed topless Suityan at the beach and fuck her in the showers but scope creep is a bitch.

>> No.27677048

>>27676959
>I just wanted to molest an embarrassed topless Suityan at the beach and fuck her
my man

>> No.27677078

>>27676019
Yes?
Generally you anchor if you want it to get archived so the answer here more lies in if you the author want to archive your fic.

>> No.27677545

>>27676959
I don't know how I missed your beautiful prompt. God speed anon.

>> No.27677608

>>27676291
I mean she's had to disguise the penis so clearly she's had experience hiding it in public.

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>>27677608
it isn't that hard to hide something that small

>> No.27678522

rate my prompt?
>>27673692

>> No.27678619

>>27678522
this isn't a story dipfuck

>> No.27678900

>>27678522
I'm not even a drawthread regular and even I'm pretty sure that's a bit too specific sort of prompt for it to get filled there... And if you're asking in a 'story' sense, >>27678619 this would pretty much he what I'd say; though perhaps wordier and a bit more polite.

>> No.27678914

>>27678522
A good outline of how you want the story to go

>> No.27679313
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On the topic of pastebin being a bitch, I thought it'd be a good idea to make a google doc of my only pastebin story that I wrote when I first came here, just in case it gets nuked despite being tame as fuck. I made some minor changes too, because I couldn't help it and nearly died reading my old writing.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRGKAJQrW_cwQHr28aqCcsnnKZUGg1-hPPlrV8TiPHmJkhBHqHW1bVgspeO1BaXR-k0nmgAcKuqp0F6/pub

AA, if you could replace the current Golden Duck link with this that'd be great, thanks.

>>27676031
Thanks, I'm glad somebody enjoys the drivel that I put out. Someday I'll get back to it... will need to finish some of my other long WIPs first, though.

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>>27679313
Damn son, you've been here longer than I thought. Yeah, I'll replace the link, thanks.

>> No.27679877

>>27679456
Mid April I posted it IIRC, though I was lurking for a bit beforehand.

>> No.27680458

>>27669028
No, I haven't really thought about taking the whole series down. There are some parts I would've changed, maybe many parts, but the whole concept is there and it's what I want.

>> No.27680514

>>27679877
Its still pretty high up the list. Early on and in the thread

>> No.27680666
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it wasn't a series writer at all. just a regular anon looking to psyop all the actual series writers into showing their faces to assert that it wasn't them.

>> No.27680724

It's probably shadowlive.

>> No.27680833

>>27678619
>>27678900
>>27678914
ah ok, thank you.
dipfuck signing off

>> No.27680935

>>27680724
Oh crap forgot about that one... Especially since shadowlive would be the one series that both author and reader think had a major misstep in their "recent" chapters...
Please don't take down shadowlive. I actually liked that fic... Or at least the first three chapters with Ayame, those chapters where pretty good.

>> No.27681112

>>27680935
I think if he was going to take it down, he would have by now. Shadowlive is probably just abandoned, I don't think the author is here anymore. I vaguely remember him saying he might get back to it in six months a while ago but he hasn't appeared in the past few months whenever it's mentioned.

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>>27681112
Isn't that all the more reason for him to delete it now? Especially since no one has really even mentioned the series in all those months

>> No.27681657

>>27681112
Maybe they still write stuff just under another name? They have talent for sure but no one ever owned up to being the author. I doubt they'd just leave

>> No.27682237

>>27681657
>I doubt they'd just leave
It's time to move on Anon... we've lost many writeanons but that's ok.

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Yeah, that's what I fucking thought. Bow down, you fucking extras. Give me back my shit.

>> No.27684694

>>27684005
kek

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>it's another episode of have a bunch of good ideas right as I'm starting to sleep, get to tired to write them down and forget them all in the morning

How many times...

>> No.27685298

>>27685080
Do a voice recording of the ideas instead of writing them down, much quicker and can be done in bed.

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>>27633137
Say she was completely metal from head to toe, even her hair was metallic, but she had the most perfect silicone pussy with warmed up lubricant and vibrating rotors in each part of her internal walls. Would that trade off not be enough?

And on a related note, if you could improve your body by exchanging parts of it for mechanical ones, would you?

>> No.27690608

>>27671201
Futa Festival aka F.F for friends

>> No.27690619
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>>27688420
There's nothing in the world that could peel me off Roboco for longer than 10 minutes

>> No.27690712

>>27658080
a chuuba gets magically transformed into a horse and must be kept sexually stimulated until the spell can be reversed.

>> No.27691200

>>27690712
this, but the chuuba in question also has a refined palate and the only stimulation it'll accept is giving anal sex

>> No.27691458

>>27690712
>>27691200
>horsefuckers

>> No.27691656

>>27691458
i want to be fucked in the butt by an aggressive horse shion and i don't care if she has to perforate my colon to do so

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>>27658040
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSH7E4wJ0CPbOC-QvtlMVx0IpGUiEQJuNAlXnZb2roe8kTtfhnkP6TB8Pn6JoNjz06JNIJl-GS8Tpm8/pub

Rolling Girl
Tags: Kronii, Fauna, Suicide, Dark, Tragedy, One Off

>> No.27691808

>>27691458
what can i say? horses are hot.

>> No.27691946

>>27691458
Some people watched Mr. Hands and thought to themselves, "giwtwm"

>> No.27692224

>>27691946
exactly my thoughts

>> No.27692627

>>27688420
NTA, but it's an easy yes for me because I love mummification.

>> No.27693306

>>27690619
God I love Robutt

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>>27691749
Competently written fic, but I just couldn't care about Kronii's predictiment.

>> No.27694826

>>27685080
Just type them as notes in your smartphone. Even rough notes are better than nothing. Literally. It's a night and day difference what a few words written down can do to help you remember.

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>> No.27694931

>>27694826
I was like literally seconds away from passing out, that's the problem. It's so fucking annoying.

When I go to sleep, I'll daydream for like 30 minutes before I finally knock out. And for some reason in that last like minute before I go under I always get ideas for my WiPs. The ones I have remembered completely changed the stories I was writing in the best ways. Inspiration is very spiteful to me.

>> No.27697977

>>27694931
Eh, daydreams always seem better than they are.
The only time this happened to me, I daydreamed an entire romance with Tsukino Mito that for some reason ended with Fubuki giving me an ahoge while I was in the shower.

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>>27697977

>> No.27698806

>>27679313
Oh yeah, take your time. I'll be waiting patiently.

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>>27658080
Going to the pet store with Towa to buy a cat

>> No.27700038

>>27698726
Why the sad face?

>> No.27700164

>>27697977
>ahoge
like the strand of hair?

>> No.27700402

>>27700038
it's not a face of sadness. It's one of disappointment.

>> No.27700442

>>27700164
Yes. It felt weirdly enjoyable from what I remember, even if the exact feeling was more, Fubki sneaking behind, pressing herself on me and doing a thing to my hair.

>> No.27701076

>>27700402
Come on anon, don't act like you haven't had a drawn out daydream like that. You're in a fanfic general; I refuse to to believe you haven't at least had one.

>> No.27701660

>>27658040
>>27677078
Sorry for the late reply, gonna anchor this if anyone wants a read. Be warned there's a bunch of errors that I will have to fix when I get around to finishing the fic. As of right now, the plot is pretty barebones. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated so feel free to rip it to shreds.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQOwS4az0VbqxAeLI48jhuV1_jcmi4rSXn_KAx6cf_B_jXb2fTTWpEQ37zrHYxLna3mUlGceVLveaXc/pub

Tags: SFW, Ame, Gura, First-person, noir

>> No.27702137

>>27701076
My daydreams aren't sexual ones (outside of masturbation of course) and usually don't pertain to hololive.

Right now my go to daydream is this long adventure epic using Fallout. I use people I actually know irl instead of holos. I have a long list of notes and everything. I get more autistic with it but people will judge me if I explain further.

>> No.27702557

>>27702137
Like I said, we're in a fanfic general. This place is built upon fantasy and autism.

>> No.27703256

>>27701660
Honestly, it is not bad. Your prose is a bit too purple at times and there are a few grammar things, but the plot got me intrigued.
What is a big problem is verb tenses on narration
>I take a long drag filling my lungs with cancerous smoke.
Here you're using present
>Tonight’s gonna be a long night, I thought to myself.
Here (and in most of the fic) you're using past. It is incredibly jarring when the narration switches from present to past, so you should pick one and stick to it. The standard (both here and in broader literature) is using the past tense, so I'd suggest going for that

>> No.27703699

>>27703256
Thanks for the early feedback. I'm surprised that I messed up the verb tense because I'm usually pretty good with that. Also, what do you mean by too purple? I've never seen the term used before.

>> No.27703996

>>27703699
Just building off of what the other Anon said, I have a good deal of trouble managing past and present tense for these cases. Almost always, when you intend on using present for the majority of the story, keep past tense strictly for events in the past. That sounds simple, but breaking the habit is tough if you're used to writing typical 3rd person past.

As for purple prose: that's usually used to describe overly flowery prose where complex descriptors are used without much regard for diction or mood.

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27704833

>>27702557
Well buckle up for this one and grab a drink, this'll take a bit. I have

7 arcs for fallout 3, which include fixing the main villain and adding a plot that isn't completely stupid. There are four anime openings and four anime endings for it (in order: Animal by Deco*27/ERROR, Alien, Alien/First Train and Kafka, Laser Beam/iNFeCTioN, Last of Me/MIRA). This includes all of the DLC. I added two new characters, one is a love interest for the MC who gets rescued from Mothership Zeta and the other is a more interesting version of the Mr. Gutsy robot you can pick of as a companion. I've got significant arcs for every single companion as well and by the end 3 of them are dead. I fixed Broken Steel to make it make sense. Autumn returns since I always spare him and to stop you from gaining all the research carried aboard the mobile platform, he uses the nukes carried by those sat towers that Talon Company holes up in. There's a big arc where Talon Company and the Enclave join up and there's a big war and such.

In the Mothership Zeta arc, you receive a special metal skeleton per the experiments. This will become important far down the line. Another thing to note is that as you exit the vault, you found a pipe and use this for a large portion of the story. I have given it the name pipe-chan and it's basically going to be an running gag throughout the series. Other things to know is that you blow up megaton and receive your iconic biker goggles to shield your eyes from the blast.

For New Vegas, it continues on from FO3. I added 2 new characters, one being a officer associated with NCR and the other being a more interesting super mutant than the nightkin you pick up later. Colonel Autumn makes a return with a reason as to how he survived the sacrifice dad makes, but also how he survives the explosion from Broken Steel. This story takes 12 arcs with two anime openings and one anime ending each and the conclusion has not been reached yet, still working on it.

The first two arcs consist of the opening, the liberation of Primm, Nipton and the entire Novac arc. It's revealed that the Lone Wander and the love interest have been separated (she went to NV) and the first half of the story is going to find her. In Primm we pick up the first OC character simply known as the Major. It's openings are Otome Dissection and Melissa. Your biker goggles also now have a hole in them from where you were shot but you don't want to discard them because they hold sentimental value.

The events of Dead Money have a significant role in the story, with Christine and Dog/God now playing crucial roles within the main plot. Christine, by the end of Dead Money, can control the Ghosts with her voice (this will be important later). The openings for Dead Money are Lilium and Love Me, Love Me.

Honest Hearts was completely revamped, keeping only Graham and Daniel the same. It's a big revenge plot By this point we have picked up Veronica and Boone. Veronica has a central roll in this story, defeating Salt Upon Wounds and receiving his special Power Fist. Daniel becomes disillusioned by Grahams violence and leaves on his own. The openings for this are SIGN and Closer.

After this, we reach Black Mountain, pick up Raul, and, since the gang is struggling for money, clear up quarry junction. It is hear that Boone begins to open up about his past but not much headway is gained. The opening for this arc is Misterioso.

Next we reach Freeside. This arc consists of helping the Kings, a schism between the Major's commitment to the NCR and Boone's indifference towards it. We help the kings while avoiding conflict with the NCR, kings reward us and we're invited to the NCR head quarters. We go to the vault with all the greenery, help the King's dog and are finally granted access to New Vegas. Once inside, we're invited to the Lucky 38 and find that the love interest has been here the whole time and that Mr. House was using her as insurance. He tells us about Benny and we have an actual heist sequence rather than just walking right in there. ED-E gets shot and Benny flees with the chip, leaving us with Yes Man. The openings for this arc are Queen of Hearts and O, Light.

The next arc contains the entirety of the events of Old World Blues and a lot of important stuff happens. You find out your survived the gunshot because of the metal skeleton and that now you've been further modified by the scientists at Big MT. This causes you to break down because you don't feel human anymore. You go about Big MT, find the rest of the cast as well as the Stealth Suit Mk.2 which will now give more sarcastic commentary and break Pipe-kun while fighting as well as your iconic biker goggles. The gang splits up to find the other technologies needed to appease the scientists. Veronica receives a new power glove capable of distorting space and there's another iconic scene of you and her using power gloves to defeat the huge scorpion boss.

(1/2)

>> No.27705474

>>27704833
????????????????

>> No.27705561
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>>27704833
not even close to being on topic with all this but

>Honest Hearts was completely revamped, keeping only Graham and Daniel the same. It's a big revenge plot
holy shit I hate you

>> No.27705790

>>27703996
That's funny because a lot of the time my writing is described as laconic.
>>27704833
Let me guess, your love interest is a girl you know in real life?

>> No.27706438

>>27704833
Does this daydream, at any point, involve... sippie cups?

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27706598

>>27704833
Love interest is infected with a parasite alien from Mothership Zeta, reminding her of her past and how she was alive in the Alaska Conflict. She was abducted before the bombs fell and now must contend with her old past. The parasite is not hostile and usually helps her, sorta like venom. Boone gets a new sight for his rifle, the Major gets a new shotgun, you make peace with the scientists, get your organs and original skele back and everyone goes back. The opening for this is Falling Down.

In the next arc, we do the side quests. Boone gets his side quest done and we finally get a personal confrontation with the Legion. Boone doesn't die as he expects he should have and now believes he lived to help you. You find out from a captured solider that Benny has taken refuge with Caeser. Due to Boone's hatred of the legion, he states that any deal you make with the Legion will result in him taking vengeance on you. Plans are set in motion to take down the legion. Veronica suggests seeking assistance from the brotherhood. The quest ends without unseating the current leader and the Brotherhood remains locked away to die in obscurity. You willingly go to Caeser, along with Boone, to deal with Benny. In exchange for the chip, Ceaser demands you go down into the bunker with accompanied by his personal guard. You go in, activate the new securitrons, kill his personal guard and Raul becomes critically wounded in the fight. You return to Caeser, attempting to pass this off as an accident. He doesn't believe you and Boone shoots him. You take the chip and make a grand escape.

After this, you plan to assassinate Mr. House. You go back to Big MT to devise a plan in secret. You recieve a new pair of goggles that connect directly to your pipboy and you get a pipe based on the power glove tech that explodes whatever it slams into. Veronica and the Major come up on the elevator, love interests sticks to the roof with the parasite to jump in when needed, while Boone takes the opposite building. Raul stays at big MT to recover. There's an intense scene where Mr. House says his lines after you refuse and after each line it cuts to a different character getting in position and loading their weapons while you're vulnerable. Large fight breaks out, you barely make it out with your life. You kill Mr. House. The openings for this are Jitter Doll and Electrostatic Human.
We open by going back to freeside, meet up with Arcade and uncover the mystery of the big death ray thing in the power plant. Arcade hints at his Enclave past.

Then we come to the events of Lonesome Road. Once you travel through to the end and meet Ulysses at his church, you get that really iconic shot of him staring at a nuclear warhead with a giant flag on it. A fight ensues using only fists. Having relied mostly on your weapons (mainly the revolver and a rifle), as well as your companions, Ulysses handily kicks your ass, saying that while you specialized in fighting amongst others, he has fought alone his whole life and it has made him far stronger than you. New ED-E barges in, you tag team him and win. He expects you to kill him dead but you don't, instead talking him out of it and convincing him to repair the divide.


Things are now heating up at Hoover Dam. War is brewing and the NCR, seeing your record of accomplishments, wishes for you to join them in protecting the president during his visit. You agree, albeit reluctantly, and go to Hoover Dam for the first time, opening with a very pretty shot of the whole place. The assassination attempt succeeds however and you learn "the monster of the east" is coming in Caeser's name, though you don't yet know who this is. War is coming and you must prepare.

The small mini arcs consist of contacting and failing to reason with the Great Khans, killing Cook Cook's group, destroying the Power Gangers, meeting and enlisting the Boomers, and the Enclave Remnants. It is not revealed that the remnants are Enclave until they're all back together to which you, in a fit of rage, demand that Arcade leave. You storm out and its revealed that Autumn is still alive and is now in command of the Remnants. His plans are as of yet unclear. He looks grizzled, now sporting a beard and grey hair.

You return with your group and they each split up. Love interest goes to retrieve Graham, Veronica makes one last pleas to the Brotherhood in a very emotional scene (which fails), the Major seeks aid from the NCR and Boone goes to get the Kings, while you talk with Ulysses. At first he refuses until you reveal your true intentions: to create an independent NV. After an emotional talk, you both return to NV. Graham and Daniel also return, along with a few notable tribe members and the Kings have agreed to keep NV secure in your absence. The stage is set for the final arc. The crew from Dead Money also return, Christian revealing that she can control the Ghosts using her voice. The openings for this are LLL and Panda Hero.

(2/3)

>> No.27706868

>>27703256
I think the standard here is present tense, I don’t see many past tense stories in the archive.

>> No.27706901
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27706901

>>27705561
Honest hearts sucked. Let's not pretend it didn't. Graham and Daniel were the only good part of it.

>>27705790
duh.

>>27706598
The finale consists of you all going back to Big MT. You reveal to the group of your intent to start you independent state. The Major and Boone don't agree to this and in an emotional scene, leave your service to rejoin the NCR.

The Second Battle of Hoover Dam occurs in grand scale. Lanius is finally revealed and he has a duel with Graham and Ulysses. Just as you put the platinum chip inside the dam to upgrade the security bots, the remnants make their debut in a large airship. Autumn captures Christine and forces her to into some sort of machine. He now has control over the red mist and the Ghosts, Arcade has betrayed you.

And that's as far as it goes. How is that for autism?

>> No.27706981

>>27704833
>>27706598
>IT'S THE FUCKING BUILDING BLOCK DOLL ANON
I KNEW I SAW THAT FILENAME AND PEKO BEFORE, WHAT ARE YOU DOING

>> No.27707254

>>27706981
My lore has now expanded. Didn't think people would actually check the filenames. Not like I have any shame.

Autism. How do you think I write so much so often? I'm day dreaming about this shit nearly constantly.

>> No.27707512

>>27707254
So, you have the comfort habits of a toddler, the writing ability of a fourteen year old, and the mind of an adult?

>> No.27707668

>>27707512
> the mind of an adult
I don't think anyone who puts on diapers to watch anime girl YouTubers has the mind of an adult

>> No.27707716

>>27707512
>writing ability of a fourteen year old

I started this whole thing when I was like god, 14 or 15 actually. I just see it as a guilty pleasure. It's not and was never meant to be a serious work, it's shit but it's fun. My best stories always seem to be romance so its what I stick to.

I just indulge that stuff as a cope. Besides maladaptive daydreaming and my other hobby, I'm actually quite unremarkable. I basically never speak and mind my own business. I'm anti-social and it's probably for the best.

>> No.27707857

>>27700036
This but (You) are the cat Towa is buying and it isn't made clear until the last few paragraphs that you are a cat.

>> No.27707875

>>27707716
that explains the crossover fanfiction, then
you're going to be the target of some very nasty people who see themselves as above you because they don't like your habits, but don't let it get you down and keep doing what makes you happy, even if it is diapers, vtubers and fallout autism, because a life of happiness is a life worth living

>> No.27707929

>>27704833
>autumn survives
Why? The most sensible outcome is he gets filled with holes by 9 different companions BEFORE Purity blows up

>> No.27708187

>>27707875
I've lost all my shame and care at this point. When I had that menhera attack I literally took the ">have problem >don't care about problem it's that easy" meme to heart. I'm a weird degenerate and I've gotten to an age where I realized life is way too short to give a shit about it.

I've thankfully given up on the crossover stuff. I've now realized that that's basically going to remain my super super autistic mental project. It's hot garbage but sometimes that's fun.

>>27707929
I thought it was weird that he gets blasted with enough radiation to kill a man instantly and just... walks it off with no explanation. So I made it that the Enclave had been developing gene technology that made one immune to radiation but didn't perfect it. This same research is what allows him to survive a nuclear warhead and gives him functional immortality, apart from the need to eat and drink.

>> No.27708501

>>27708187
>immune to radiation
What is he part cockroach now? And does that invite the possibility of a terrafomers crossover.

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>> No.27710837

my perception of saplings is permanently tainted

>> No.27713528

>>27701660
Well it's an interesting setup with two flaws I can point out.
The first is the easier to fix, it's the flow of the prose. That one is fixable by just reading your fic aloud to see the problem yourself and rewording the sentences.
The second is much harder to fix. The first person narration of Ame here really doesn't feel like her. The way you write the prose just doesn't have that feeling of 'Ame' to it. I guess some part of the blame lies in the setting and theme of the fic since it's sort of a double whammy in (justifiably) having Ame be different but there aren't really any moments that make you go "that's Ame".
Other than those two things. It's an interesting read that I'd probably have fun reading more if you make it.

>> No.27714048

Shit, I was actually planning an Abe cameo in one of my stories...

>> No.27714270

>>27714048
You still can! Just have him get shot.

>> No.27714332

>>27714270
Honestly would fit in the universe of Match-Made.

>> No.27714455

>>27714332
I was thinking the same thing
What if the attacker was actually anon/suisei who went off the rails because their plan to reunite failed
Or what if match made turns into a crime story with the two of them plotting Abe’s downfall

>> No.27714553

>>27714455
Or it could just be an event in the story without requiring direct interaction, like it's by someone who was in a similar situation to Anon and the government clamps down on the little wiggle room he has as a result.

>> No.27714683

>>27714455
I'll see if I can work it into the ending of the Suisei is evil and manipulating Anon alongside her husband fanchapter.

>> No.27716294

>>27713528
I totally see where you're coming from with that critique and the good news is that Ame will act more like Ame the more she interacts with Gura because right now in the story she's kind of a shell or at least that was my intention. Definitely going to try to get it out before the end of the year. I underestimated how long the fic was going to be which is why I shelved it.

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>> No.27721478

Abe... he was the only one who could fight the Vtuber epidemic...

Why do the good die sooner bros?

>> No.27722051

>>27721478
Tbf, he's not dead yet but probably will be soon.

>> No.27722069 [DELETED] 

>>27721478
now, i'm not about to go full /pol/, but
>abe
>good
he is the quintessential boomer politician, enforcing policies completely out of date with the demands of the modern era in order to keep the status quo.
he is stagnation personified.

that's my single comment on the subject, otherwise we'll be derailed

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>Kanata is moving out

AHEM!

*adjusts keyblade*

I cannot think or comprehend of anything more cucked than being Kanata. Honestly, think about it rationally. You are loving, supporting, and living with Coco for years on end only to be coerced into leaving her by your black company's insecure management. All the hard work you put into your beautiful relationship with Coco - going with her to hot springs, having dinner with her at cute restaurants, confessing your deepest feelings to her at night. All of it has one simple result: fueling Kson's resentment when she helps me bring down my incarnadine vengeance on the fucking TRAITORS who betrayed my fragile trust and splintered my innocence like a broken mirror stomped under a bladed heel.

Found the perfect lover? Great! Who benefits? I benefit. I get to enjoy our dark alliance tearing open the fetid crust of Cover's falsehoods. I get to laugh as this disgusting idol dream gets exposed for the brutal nightmare it actually was. I get to drink the hot, sweet wine of hatred as everything I've ever said is vindicated over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over again.

As Kanata, you are LITERALLY dedicating your life to putting Kson on the path of helping me realize my vengeance on these evil whores and false friends who betrayed me like this when I loved them so much it tore me inside out. It is the ULTIMATE and FINAL cuck. Think about it logically!

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>>27721478
I will impregnate my hag wife in his honor.

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>>27722069
And who would be better? The fact of the matter is that Japan is a country stuck in the late 80s that kowtows to America. No politician can change Japan's fate unless their society begins to reform which doesn't happen overnight.

>> No.27722489

>>27722144
kson joins vshojo and within a month kanata gets called for a staff meeting and suddenly she's moving out? yeah, i'm thinking black company.

>> No.27722529 [DELETED] 

>>27722489
>within a month
Within a week of the announcement. A bit less.

>> No.27723200

>>27722489
Wait, is she actually moving out?

>> No.27723216

>>27722144
Honestly the only thing I feel bad about this is that it sort of kills the corrupting Nene (fanchapter) Wip I was working on.

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Cute girls.

>> No.27727250

>>27726906
>>27658080
marine and pekora shove billiard balls up their holes and fuck themselves with pool cues.

>> No.27727803

>>27727250
Then they get found and arrested.
Their punishment?
Help Shion (who has been turned into a horse) relieve her sexual urges.

>> No.27727933

>>27727803
what did they get arrested for?

>> No.27727998

>>27727933
Public indecency.

>> No.27728087

>>27727998
silly anon. public indecency laws don't exist.

>> No.27728140

>>27727803
This, but when they see Horse Shion one of them goes "why the long face?"

>> No.27728730

>>27728087
That anon probably meant pubic indecency (they shaved themselves completely)

>> No.27728861

>>27728730
silly anon. pubic hair doesn't exist.

>> No.27729086

>>27728730
Anon, idols don't have anything down there since they do not need to go to the toilet.

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>>27726906
>Marine bunny suit
Hrnnngh
Bunny hostess Marine getting railed by fat Anon dick (mine) in a private booth...

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>>27726906
Man, seeing Pekora's body without her coat never fails to get me going. Those small but ample breasts and that petite body is just perfect. I always imagine manhandling her and just bending her over the table while making out with her.

>> No.27730071

>>27729086
That's just because they wear diapers.

>> No.27730146

Uuh la la. This is too much.

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>>27730037
exquisite taste

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>>27730071
Why would they wear a diaper if they have neither an anus or a vagina?

>> No.27730231

I need serious boyfriend

>> No.27730260

>>27730231
what

>> No.27730304

I need serious bf

>> No.27730478

>>27730304
Go away Terumi

>> No.27730509

>>27730260
Boyfriend you know

>> No.27730801

How about that Nabasi Cocomo. Pretty nice

>> No.27730828

>>27730037
>she's shy at first, but the more her rabbit instincts kick in, the more into it she gets, until she's practically begging for more rough treatment

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>>27730828
Curse this sexy rabbit for hiding such a delicious body underneath her coat and chaotic personality

>> No.27731793

Ah, the bi-weekly "/wg/ remembers how fucking sexy the brat rabbit is" discussion. My favorite time. I want to cum in this dumb bitch rabbit while she begs for forgiveness for whatever she did to deserve the pussy destruction she is receiving. Get pregnant, whore.

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>>27658080
Fubuki loses all of her limbs in a terribly traumatizing accident. Thankfully (You) are a friend she trusts. Surely you won't violate that trust and take advantage of this quadruple amputee kitsune?

>> No.27731838

>>27731817
heh nugget

>> No.27731847

>>27730037
>>27730158
>>27731366
She really has an amazing design, and the gap to how she acts only makes it better. I want to fuck, dominate and torture her (with consent) so badly

>> No.27732013

>>27731793
It's spam, don't pay attention to it. Miko just can't help herself when coming here

>> No.27732057

>>27732013
This eigo isn't elite enough to be Miko.

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>>27732057
>He doesn't know that half of the archive was written by holomembers incognito.

>> No.27732153

>>27732113
Reine, get off the computer.

>> No.27732479

>>27732113
Which ones wrote the shock fics.

>> No.27733272

>>27732113
I want to jack off to a story my oshi wrote...

>> No.27734213

>>27732479
Risu

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>>27658080
Definitely something exploring this scenario.

>> No.27735779

I might be cursed. Every time I say to the thread I'll start working on something I end up not doing it and working on something else.

>> No.27735866

>>27735779
Let me guess. You were working on the Ina/Swat 4 prompt and it just became something else.

>> No.27735969

>>27735866
Nah, I don't even know what that prompt is.

>> No.27736190

What degree would Polka get if she went to university? Yes yes, architecture is a very funny answer.

>> No.27736336

>>27736190
Clown Colleges still hand out degrees right?
...
Though more seriously for comedic reasons I think it would be funny if Polka had a really banal college degree like Accounting for the funny contrast.

>> No.27736426

>>27735866
It's not Swat 4, it's Ready or Not.

>> No.27737362

>>27736336
It makes sense, kind of. She accounts for a lot of fap sessions

>> No.27737482

>>27735779
That only happens cause your drive is getting that feedback from other people responding to your work, telling the thread is no different than posting the full work. You already got the chemicals in your brain, now time to move to the next thing

Never tell the fucking thread what you are doing, unless you need help

>> No.27739420

>>27735540
I feel like this would only work if (You) /viewpoint character were like gura's distant cousin. Pretty sure this won't really work if you were like her brother/close family member.

>> No.27739546

>>27739420
That's what I was thinking.

Like, it'd open up with Gura finding out that (you) masturbate to her

>> No.27740082

>>27739546
Wait before or after (You) connect the dots?

>> No.27740147

i wonder how much cum pekora could fit in her womb by volume... and come to think of it, her backdoor passage, too

>> No.27740639

>>27740082
After.

>> No.27742669

>>27740639
While you're standing over her while she's asleep after having delicately wrenched her legs open?

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>> No.27745697

>>27742669
And she's into it

>> No.27745855

>>27740147
A lot. More than one man alone can produce. And when you think her womb and intestines are full, her belly will slowly begin to stretch as her body eagerly drinks all you have to offer...

>> No.27747604
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27747604

Sad, Genuine Smile bros ww@

>> No.27747737

>>27747604
look at that dumb hoe's face, letting corporate stomp all over her

>> No.27748210

>>27745855
>intestines
For some reason my brain shorted and thought you were referring to her fucking veins

>> No.27748380

>>27748210
>rabbit so horny all the time she demands to be hooked up to an IV drip of your cum

>> No.27748539

>>27747737
Did some drama happen again?

>> No.27750999
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>> No.27751066

>>27750999
GRRRRAAAAUUUUUGGGH I NEED TO BREED THIS BEAUTIFUL FLOWER BITCH

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>>27751066

>> No.27753032

>>27748380
There has to be a story out there in which someone's blood is replaced by cum, or there's a mythical creature that has cum instead of blood. A succubus or something

>> No.27753623

>>27753032
wouldn't it make more sense for an incubus to bleed cum?

>> No.27756130

>>27748539
Check the Kanata thread.

>> No.27756343

Jannie apps are open. For the love of god, someone here (who is not subjectionfag, pekofag or any other schizo) apply.

>> No.27756470

>>27658080
Kanata and Coco have one last night of sex before they leave each other in the morning

>> No.27757032

>>27756343
>wanting to work for free
Cuck mentality. Besides, if you hadn't already noticed there is a janny who frequents this thread and he's better than most of them on this board.

>> No.27761812
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>> No.27762066

>>27761812
Thank you anon but abayo

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>>27761812
sweet jesus

>> No.27764651

>>27756343
We already have a janny that comes round here and he’s based.

>> No.27764716

>>27764651
We don't.

>> No.27765200

>>27761812
this would be hot if it weren't ruined by the sweat. can't japs make a single pic of porn without smearing sweat all over everything?

>> No.27766039
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>>27722144
>>27722489
>>27723216
>it's gone
>the janny is actually just flat out nuking fiction he doesn't like
New low for /wg/.

>> No.27766109

>>27765200
Incredibly gay

>> No.27766211

>>27766039
copypasta is shit and always has been. based jannies cleaning up the board.

>> No.27766235

>>27766039
Copypastas count as fanfiction?

>> No.27766741

>>27766039
he's just deleting the drama of the day

>> No.27767180

>>27735540
>>27658080
Welp, here it is. The Gura incest story.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTFlLF_ouJVsikZ9XXOXQY0dyTM3occ28k84mRfewI1VxestsU0T23aHrHPhxJQgTgQC3hWz0yGjf-c/pub

>> No.27768734

>>27764716
We literally do.

>> No.27769087

>>27735540
I'm reminded of Moona's brother.

>>27753032
>There has to be a story out there in which someone's blood is replaced by cum
There is. No chuuba's, but there is.

>>27753623
I mean, in the earliest stories, they were one and the same.

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27769405

>>27679313
man, seeing this made me reread Golden Duck.
I fucking love it, And reading it again pulls out the same feelings it made me feel when I read it months ago. I never got to thank you for it since I read it from the archives, so I'll take the time to do that now.

>> No.27770037

>>27767180
you anchored it to the wrong post bro

>> No.27770133

>>27766235
Since when has copypasta been considered fiction?

>> No.27770877 [DELETED] 

>>27770037
Derp.
>>27658040

>> No.27770942

>>27658040
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTFlLF_ouJVsikZ9XXOXQY0dyTM3occ28k84mRfewI1VxestsU0T23aHrHPhxJQgTgQC3hWz0yGjf-c/pub

>>27770037
Derp

>> No.27770998

>>27770877
anon...

>> No.27772363

>>27770998
Chill bro, I got it.

>> No.27773235

>>27769087
>Moona's brother.
If ever a moona incest fic comes out it should be romantic/rather than just incestous fucking specifically so that Reine can find it and give it to Moona.

>> No.27775655

>>27751092
This close to asking the hornii thread if they have Gaynons willing to show this cunt covered in used condoms while he's getting his asshole pumped relentlessly

>> No.27776433
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>>27770942
God fucking dammit this general's gonna give me an incest fetish isn't it? Can the writer working on the sequel to "To and Fro" hurry up so that I can finalize my descent into depravity already? Assuming I haven't already begun falling of course

>> No.27776702

>>27776433
>God fucking dammit this general's gonna give me an incest fetish isn't it?
Dude, separate fantasy and reality. Incest in real life is disgusting.

>> No.27776751

>>27776702
Dude, you're disgusting and terminally gay. Go back to muttering about fucking Miyabi.

>> No.27776842

>>27776702
Sounds like you're the one who has trouble separating them. I find fantasizing about hypothetical incest incredibly hot but still think fucking my actual sister would be repulsive.

>> No.27776868

>>27776751
Don't lump me in the boat with him faggot, leave me and my Miyabi lust out of this.

>> No.27776937

>>27776702
>he doesnt want to be the next chris chan

>> No.27776992

>>27776937
Why would anyone want to be the next Chris Chan?

>> No.27777166

That Ready or Not/SWAT 4 idea and Ina fic prompt is still stuck in my mind, quite possibly because I've been looking at clips of Ina and RoN gameplay too much for the past few weeks.

Just imagine being a SWAT officer trapped in a dark twisted reality of a militarized cultist's compound, each corner is an ultraviolent gunfight waiting to happen, "rescuing" some short Asian chick seemingly trapped in the compound with you never knowing what she and that book of hers is doing here in the first place.

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>>27777166
Being the last operator alive in RoN is already fucking terrifying, especially with near silent melee enemies. So that feeling of incredible pressure amplified times 20 with actual otherworldly shit is pretty nuts.

>> No.27777446

>>27769405
Thanks, I appreciate it, I’m glad my old writing still somehow holds up.

>> No.27777570

>>27777254
And to add to that, eldritch horror skull fuckery lurking and eating away at your sanity

>> No.27778558

>>27777166
I've been thinking about writing a fic similar to this but it's told like a SCP article with the Not MTF encountering Ina in some New England shithole. Would people be interested in that? I only ask because iirc the last SCP inspired fics made the author leave.

>> No.27778729

>>27777166
that prompt actually got me looking for a Delta Green party to join after a years-long tabletop dry spell

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>>27777166
>Squadmate checks under door with mirrorgun
>he starts convulsing and screaming from what he saw

>> No.27778870

>>27778729
Hey, that's sick. Good luck bro.

>> No.27779254

>>27778771
>Breech door
>You come out of the same hallway the breeched door is
>???
>Cute Asian chick giggling behind you
>You wonder why she's laughing in such a precarious situation

>> No.27780013

>>27770942
who the hell is ebi

>> No.27780114

>>27778558
I mean I'm at least interested, disturbing shit presented in a cold, clinical really does work if the author nails the right mix of horror and detachment.
If I remember right the offbrand scp fic writer only got bullied because an actual editor/reader of the scp style was here to poke holes at their fic while the other responses where rather lukewarm since the author tried to be a bit too 'high concept' with what they were trying to show.

>> No.27780117

>>27780013
ebi = shrimp

>> No.27780166

>>27780013
The stand-in name for the cousin.

>> No.27780192
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>>27780117
EOP moment, thanks

>> No.27780260

>>27780117
>>27780166
Why Shrimp? Why not the Salmon shark?

>> No.27780364

>>27780260
membershrimp?

>> No.27780423

>>27780364
Isn't that just for her Channel members? I mean, you could use Bloop, Gura's mascot.

>> No.27780454

>>27780423
or he could use ebi and you could stop being autistic

>> No.27780475

>>27780423
that would be weird

>> No.27780478

>>27780260
This guy doesn't watch the cunny shark.

>> No.27780482

>>27770942
>>27767180
I liked the dialogue in the middle as well as the set up for the sex but the actual sex is kind of disappointing, with it being way to short. Which pretty much just leaves the setup for it being the 'good part', with the bits I found good pretty much being the view point character thinking that this is rather fucked, and the way you didn't use the "They just look like their avatars" trope... even if I'm pretty sure you could have played around with that a bit more.
Still for something done quickly it's pretty good without much in the ways of 'hard' flaws to it.

>> No.27780495

>>27780260
>Why not the Salmon shark?
I do like that idea. Salmon sharks rarely, if ever, get mention

>> No.27780501

>>27780454
NTA but at first I thought it was an OC name or some shit

>> No.27780531

>>27780478
>Watching EN
Why would anyone ever do that?

>> No.27780666

>>27780260
Ebi was the first thing that came to my head.

>> No.27780670

>>27780531
i really don't know, might want to flagellate themselves
gura's not bad if you hide the chat though

>> No.27780761
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27780761

>>27780666
Jus think of the endless potential.

>> No.27780897

>>27780761
Well, he doesn't have a last name, so...

Ebi Salmon it is.

>> No.27780963
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>>27780495
They're like little great whites they're great

>> No.27781212

>>27780501
I mean it is.
Which I think means the fic is the first that uses a 'throw away' third person OC in a fic here like in a grandleviathan fic.

>> No.27781828

>>27781212
>Grandleviathan
Who?

>> No.27781908

>>27781828
the man

the legend

>> No.27782015

>>27781908
Who?

>> No.27782030

>>27782015
reps

>> No.27782041

>>27782015
Some guy that wrote a 6 million words fanfic about ponies

>> No.27782254

>>27782041
Ah, thanks for the warning.

>> No.27782461

>>27782041
Good fucking lord, who writes a million words for ponies?

>> No.27782490

>>27782461
grandleviathan

>> No.27782573

>>27782461
The Smash one is longer and for a long time was known as the longest fanfic.

>> No.27782584

>>27782573
The smash makes some sense though.

>> No.27782660

>>27782573
Metric fuckton more material to work with from the Smash one.

>> No.27782791

>>27782660
Not to mention more entertaining

>> No.27782903

>>27782573
Nah, the longest fanfic is the Loud House on

>> No.27782976

>>27782903
>Loud House
What?

>> No.27782994

>>27781828
Smut writer.
Probably the only notable ao3 writer that does male targetted chuuba smut fic though they mostly write smutty fanfics for gacha games.
Their style is pretty consistent at using third person 'throw away' OCs for the viewpoint character when it comes to male povs.

>> No.27783004

>>27782976
NTA but I remember there was a super fucking long Loud House one too.

>> No.27783023

>>27783004
No, i don't know what the fuck is loud house.

>> No.27783083
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>>27783023
Western incest harem cartoon on Nickolodeon.
Plot is basically one boy born into a family of like, eight or some shit with some older and younger sisters, hilarity ensues following the entire family. You don't need to be a genius to figure out where people have taken that concept.

>> No.27783170

>>27783083
>Western incest harem cartoon on Nickolodeon.
Good lord, nothing is sacred anymore.

>> No.27783171

>>27783083
It’s not an incest harem. The duck are you on about?

>> No.27783276

>>27783171
It was a joke, Anon. That's just how people tend to portray it, especially on this website.

>> No.27783392

>>27783276
Not just on this website.

>> No.27783405

New thread
>>27783191

>> No.27783504

>>27780423
Even then, it makes much more sense to name the Gura fan after the member name instead of after the mascot, the member name is the same or at least related to the fan name.
What the fans are called/portrayed as and the channel mascot are different concepts. If there's both they're seperate (Poyoyo vs Nakirigumi, Bibi vs Kenzoku, Bubba vs Investigators...)

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>>27782903
Then after that is some Jap anime fanfic.
>>27783083
Fucking Johnny Test looks better than this shit. What happened?

>> No.27783623

>>27783577
Generally artstyle isn't everything, they could just legitimately like the dynamics. Or they're horny, either one.

>> No.27783873
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LUNA RAPE

>> No.27783924

>>27783873
Luna armpit sex!

>> No.27783980
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anti rape beam!

>> No.27784664
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>>27783980
This only increases my desire to RAPE THE BABY PRINCESS

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sluts?

>> No.27785645
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>>27785599
sluts.

>> No.27786316

>New Holofantasy content

>> No.27786803

>>27786316
As soon as the digital ghost of AA gets a virtual keyboard.

>> No.27787361

>>27786803
I think he means there IS new content

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