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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread: >>40722363

>> No.40831545
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.40831591

Thread is already made. >>40830707

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Story recap. There were two stories posted in the last thread.

Auntie's little secret, Ch. 3: Tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, /ss/, grooming, dark, fluff: >>40724121

The lady of Death. TAGS: Mori, Kiara, Mumei, SFW:>>40811698

>> No.40831683

It's something other than an earlyfag thread so I'll use it.

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Prompt recap. Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Teaching a chuuba how to play warhammer:>>40723421

Marine has strongly implied that she fucks her dad in the past. So an incest story with her and her dad would be pretty hot.:>>40731359

Parachuting into Frankfurt with Gura as a member of the Confederate Army to save Anne Frank (Alternate timeline where the South won).:>>40746223

(You) are a college student hired by single mom Mio to help tutor her high schooler daughters (Ayame and Subaru) in the subjects they are having trouble in. Sex ensues.:>>40751588

Aqua getting forcefully blacked behind a convenience store:>>40762189

Hypnotizing and Corrupting Reine to be straight.:>>40775390

Being forced to eat a chuuba's terrible cooking until her cooking is the only thing you can stomach and actual good food tastes bad.:>>40776430

Mori selling her ass for sponsorships. She didn’t need to they would have got them anyway but then what would J-Chad Schlick to?:>>40826598

>> No.40831710

Noel was so poor when she was younger, she had to suck smelly salaryman dick in dark back-alleys for their nourishing cum just to live.

>> No.40831775

>>40831710
I think you're thinking of Marine.

>> No.40831851

>>40831710
Guaranteed this is the earlyfag trying to bring shit over here, because I'm still in the other thread playing with marineschizo

>> No.40831888

>>40831775
Marine is pure, noel really isn't.

>> No.40832084

>>40831851
You ruin a perfectly good thread for no reason?

>> No.40832187

>>40832084
Noelschizo, is a schizo, it's kind of his entire schtick.

>> No.40832317

yeah I like this one better

>> No.40832437

>>40831888
Marine is a high school drop out and has had to suck dick for every job she has ever gotten.

>> No.40832696

Just ban Noel and Marine from these threads.

>> No.40832764

>>40832696
No, just ban Noelschizo and marineschizo who is apperantly this guy >>40831851 Marine and Noel aren't even an issue.

>> No.40832786

>>40832696
Not only is that stupid, it’s also impossible to enforce.

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>> No.40832904

>>40832832
Discount Fubuki.

>> No.40832932

>>40832696
Noel and marine aren’t even a problem. Nobody here has a problem with them. Not as far as I can tell. It’s just those two fucking schizos that are the problem. Not help that one of them is lurking here if this fag >>40831851 is not lying.

>>40832832
Save your images, ain’t nothing worth while getting discuss.

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Soooooo.... what's everyone working on?

>> No.40833046

>>40832696
We’ve been able to discuss Marine and Noel before. No reason to ban them just because two fags are off their meds.

>> No.40833054

>>40833013
Nothing.

>> No.40833057

>>40832932
>>40832786
>>40832764
They attract schizos. Thats the problem.
All their stories are shit anyway, so nothing would be lost if they got banned from the thread.

>> No.40833133

>>40833057
>They attract schizos. Thats the problem.
The problem is not reporting the schizos. Not Noel and Marine. One anon point blank admits that he’s riling up the other schizo in this thread >>40831851

>> No.40833194

>>40833057
>They attract schizos. Thats the problem.
Each vtuber have their own schizos. If we ban Noel and Marine, they win. Let's not give in.

>> No.40833226

>>40833013
I realized I haven't written smut in over a year, so I'm spitballing ideas for a short lewd story to bang out before I start working on the next part of my series.

>> No.40833329

>>40833226
>spitballing ideas
What have you got so far?

>> No.40833423

>>40833133
He has been banned or at least all his posts have been deleted in the other thread but he immediately ban evades.

>> No.40833508

>>40833423
Not him, but just keep reporting him? Fuck, mod’s probably would have dealt with him sooner on the other thread if people just reported instead of using that as an excuse to make another thread.

>> No.40833517

>>40833013
I'm working on some Lui light dom play. Footjob, stepping, emasculation. Lui's character is giving me difficulty though.

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>>40833329
Playing with the lore that vampires can't enter your home unless you invite them in...with the twist that they only have to be invited once, and can then come and go as they please. What you thought was going to be a one-night stand turns into Mel repeatedly breaking into your bedroom in the middle of the night to fuck you, much to your sleep-deprived annoyance.

>> No.40833720

>>40833508
Actually, the other thread wouldn't have had any issue to begin with if this idiot >>40831851 didn't decide to rile them up and continue to rile them up to ruin the other thread.

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>>40833523
>to fuck you
Please, anon...just have her drink my blood. That's all I want...
Just to have her absolutely tear into my neck and drink it in big gulps like she's having water for the first time in days.

>> No.40833762

>>40833523
>clingy vampire mel's neverending lust for your semen flaring up every single night
>have to quit your job due to sleep deprivation and spend your existence refueling your body just to have it all drained through your penis regularly
Sounds like a cool one-shot idea.

>>40833728
I've never read much into her lore, but doesn't she hate blood and prefer acerola juice or something?

>> No.40833874

The OP of the last thread was already a problem. It was made by the Noelschizo. As I said banning Marine and Noel from these threads would have no downsides.

>> No.40833911

>>40833874
>As I said banning Marine and Noel from these threads would have no downsides.
Except Marine and Noel aren't the problem.

>> No.40833913

>>40833874
You're not fooling anybody. Shut up and start talking about Mel.

>> No.40833964

>>40833762
Correct. She gets squeamish at the sight of blood.

>> No.40834004

>>40833874
Noel and Marine aren’t the issue. It’s the two schizos.

>> No.40834012

>>40832696
The problem is not in them but in the fucking schizos and this general would not have survived if we were cowed by schizos we'd still be using 2views as thread headers.
I think the only real solution to this is to close ranks and hornypost till the schizo gets ranged banned like the 2view earlyfag.
So... Is that anon from last thread actually writing that Marine/Noel hate sex yuri fic idea from last thread? Cause the fucking schizo slapfight is prime material to mine for the mean shit they say to each other before they shut each other up via kissing and passionate handholding.

>> No.40834022

>>40833911
No Noel and Marine means no schizos.

>> No.40834072

>>40833013
Not really committing to working on anything, but I'm just daydreaming some western-themed ideas. It just occurred to me that Shanghai Noon with holomems would be fucking awesome

>> No.40834123

>>40834022
Yeah, and the schizos can be dealt with, so why ban Noel and Marine?

>> No.40834130

>>40834012
>ranged banned like the 2view earlyfag.
He's still making the threads, just changed to hololive and put up a prompt/story recap

>> No.40834258

>>40834072
>Princess Laplus' retainer Iroha finds herself in a strange new frontier and has to team up with a gunslinging Gura to rescue the princess from her captors
I'd read it.

>> No.40834284

>>40833013
I'm out of gas and can't write anything today. Been staring at this google doc for a good hour now and nothing's coming, so I'm going to play games instead.

>> No.40834404

>>40834012
Even if you ban Noel and Marine, it wouldn’t make a difference since the schizos would just look for another Vtuber to argue about if this post is anything to go by >>40831851

>> No.40834439

>>40834123
There are no good stories involving them, so what is the point of keeping Marine and Noel in the thread when all it does is bring in schizos?

>> No.40834482

>>40834130
Anon...
That would mean they got so buck broken by getting banned that they made threads they hated while doing bitch work for months. That would be even more pitiful than if they just gave up after getting banned for their attempt to control the thread header.
>>40833523
I think this would be a cute one-shot, with potential to expand into a series if you run with 'giving permission to enter to the supernatural' as a theme.
I.e something like summoning Choco/Towa once is enough for them to pop up anytime they want, having a near-mori experience means she can have a near-anon experience anytime, etc.

>> No.40834484

>>40834404
This is the sixth time you've replied to that post.

>> No.40834497

A lot of this "arguing" looks suspicious to me.

>> No.40834511

>>40834439
>bring in schizos?
Because this anon >>40834404 said it best. They'll just look for a different holo to schizo about. So banning them would do nothing.

>> No.40834626

>>40834511
Not to mention, if we do ban them, then the schizos will win.

>> No.40834627

>>40834482
>That would mean they got so buck broken by getting banned that they made threads they hated while doing bitch work for months. That would be even more pitiful than if they just gave up after getting banned for their attempt to control the thread header.
Earlyfag's a schizo bitch, more news at 6. It's the same guy.

>> No.40834753

>>40834284
Have you tried masturbating? Rubbing one out usually works for me. Only SFW ideas, though.

>> No.40834809

>>40834439
Schizos just care about derailing theads. So it doesn't matter what chuubas they use.

>> No.40834892

>>40834497
Yeah, turns out, one guy brining in schizos will make the subsequent threads pretty fucking shitty. Who would have thought?

>> No.40834891

>>40834497
Looks like the same guy to me. Ignore it and carry on

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>>40834482
>Anon is haunted by like half a dozen supernatural women who all want his dick
>all HE wants is to get some fucking sleep for once
Could be fun. Though I think I'll hold off on turning it into a series until maybe after I've finished what I've already got on my plate.

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>>40833013
doing a revision on my Kurokami's arrand boy fic. I thought it'd be cool to make it chuuni...but after looking at it I thought it was a little weird. So I gotta rewrite an entire scene and extend some others.

otherwise, I'm having more fun than I had in a while writing fics. it's been a year since I've written a fic

>> No.40835075

>>40833013
PD;PTanon posting their Mecha wip has given me the kick in the rear needed to get back to work on the Aqua Mecha fic, and to put the Suisei has Anemachi as a schizo split personality smut fic into the back burner for now.

>> No.40835100

>>40834891
I think it might be one or two people intentionally trying to derail this thread, too. Replying to themselves and each other to make it look like more people care than is the reality.

>> No.40835146

>>40819349
Of course I'd remember it. It's one my favourite greentext because it's hot as hell. Also just need more Kanata sex in general.

>> No.40835176

>>40835100
What makes you think that?

>> No.40835376

>>40835176
The bad English, constant references to one post, circular arguing and complaining how /wg/ is ruined... it could just be a group of SEAmonkeys dogpiling each other. It is that time, after all.

>> No.40835407

>>40834943
this weirdly makes me think of an idea an anon posted several months ago where (You)'re normal and any girl who sees your dick is suddenly corrupted and slaves over your dick against your will.

>> No.40835481

>>40834753
Nah, wanking gets rid of inspiration for me. Besides I only feel like wanking about once a week

>> No.40835540

>>40835376
>constant references to one post,
You mean the one post that makes it clear that the poster is/was baiting a schizo in the other thread?

>> No.40835762

>>40835540
Yup, they're really fixated on that when it's nothing new here.

>>40835481
>once a week
How do you even function? I jerk it usually once a day.

>> No.40835798

>>40835540
Would explain why he suddenly stop posting. Though I don’t know if it’s because the other thread has been derailed completely or if jannies/mods dealt with him.

>> No.40836040

>>40835762
>Yup, they're really fixated on that when it's nothing new here
And it doesn’t occur to you that the poster could do it again and again if he ever felt like it? Which is why people are fixating on it?

>> No.40836165

>>40835407
I think I remember that discussion.
Its one of those ideas that would probably work better as a pure comedy about dealing with the slowly pooling harem corrupted by your dick. With the structure being something like (You) doing shit to keep the harem away, and inadvertently mind break a new chuuba while doing something innocuous in your brief moment of freedom. With the chuuba having an extremely exaggerated reaction to you doing something like standing behind them in line.

>> No.40836259

>>40836040
I don't worry about things out of my control, especially when doing so would make my day that much worse.

>> No.40836495

>>40836259
Not asking your to worry about it, just saying it a reason why people are fixated on it.

>> No.40836561

>>40836040
>and it doesn’t occur to you that the poster could do it again and again if he ever felt like it?
The anti-noel fag has been going at it for the past 2 or 3 thread now. Though, if it is one poster just trying to entice other schizos to come and just fuck over /wg/, that's a different story altogether.

>> No.40836691

>>40836495
"People" aren't fixated on it. All of those replies are the same person. They all say the exact same thing, just worded differently.

>> No.40836696

>>40836165
>you stand in line waiting for some food after work.
>pekora slips on air and accidentally bumps her butt into your crotch.
>she suddenly turns toward you with heart-shaped eyes and drool coming down the corner of her lips
>she starts grinding her ass against your cock.

>you escape and just decide to eat at a diner.
>waitress korone shows up offering you a drink
>she accidentally spills the drink on your lap
>in a panic she wipes your lap down with a towel
>she suddenly slips your cock out of your pants and viciously sucks it down.

>> No.40836719

>>40833517
Lui seems like she'd be the type to break off the session before you even say the safe word because she was worried she was doing it too hard.
...
It could be an interesting gimmick for a Lui smut fic. A fic about trying to get her to be more confident in her Domme skills

>> No.40836727

>>40836495
>people
Person, I think. Someone with filthy brown hands living under a scrap metal roof.

>> No.40836886

>>40836691
Exactly my thoughts. It's an abysmal attempt at forumsliding.

>> No.40837203

>>40836719
That's exactly what I meant by her character giving me difficulty. There's a disparity between what her outfit suggests, with its formal design, leather materials, and disciplinary switch-thing, and her actual personality.

I've been a bad boy and I want Lui to discipline me but every time I imagine her stepping on my dick I always imagine her reminding me to tell her if it hurts and breaking out into laughter when she tries to scold me.

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>Anon espouses anti-Noel rhetoric to get the last thread to reach the bump limit faster
>continue to do so in the new thread until it gets derail
>This thread also gets derailed because the idiot never thought it would spill over in his thread
Noel really does live rent free in her haters heads.

>> No.40837367

>>40837203
Why not just roll with that? It has a certain appeal of its own.

>> No.40837638

>>40837334
>his thread
This is clearly the kurofag's thread, idiot. You're the earlyfag buttmad over getting called out so you subconsciously attribute this thread to him. You've also got shit English.

Just stop being obvious for like two seconds.

>> No.40837706

>>40837203
I mean imagining it as a BDSM session with the goal of Lui getting more confident.
...
And since this literally sounds like that one Yakuza 0 substory, maybe the key to Lui learning to be a better Domme is to have Coco show up and give her the encouragement she needs.

>> No.40837773

>>40837367
It just doesn't interest me. Lui's outfit is incredible and the driving force behind my motivation for this idea but her personality is kind of a turn-off.

I was also writing it as smut that I could use to get off so my own desires are most important to me.

>> No.40837883

>>40837706
>"You call that weak shit 'stepping'? Move the fuck over, bird. Lemme show you how it's done."

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>>40837638
Whatever you say. I’m just enjoying this shitstorm while lurking. But do stop using Noel as your go to chuuba for schizos. She deserves better than that.

>> No.40837977

>>40837883
I fucking imagined Kazuma Kiryu saying this and burst out laughing

>> No.40838012

>>40837334
The solution is just to ban Marine and Noel from these threads.

>> No.40838190

>>40837334
>This thread also gets derailed because the idiot never thought it would spill over
It what makes this low-key funny to me since the Noel is a whore post came out of nowhere and near the end the bump limit of the old thread.

>> No.40838198

>>40837977
>lui gently stomping on annon
>"t-take that you disgusting- pig..."
>"You call that weak shit 'stepping'? Move the fuck over, bird. Lemme show you how it's done." a deep Japanese man's voice speaks up.
>you're eyes shoot open and you break into a sweat
>"ORRRRAAAAA!!!!" he stomps down on your spine as thousands of yen bills fly out of you

>> No.40838332

>>40838198
>Then you get up perfectly fine
>Hand him a platinum plate for his troubles

>> No.40838473

>>40838332
>lui panicking looks back and forth between you and Kiryu having no idea what transaction just conspired in front of her.

>> No.40838562

>>40838012
Nah, won’t work.

>> No.40838671

>>40838562
you're throwing (You)s into a black hole

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>>40831566
MATSURI SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX

>> No.40838756

>>40838671
This entire thread is a black hole. No point in trying to pretend otherwise.

>> No.40838776

>>40838473
>Minutes later
>Lui is finally kicking with confidence and is learning to Domme with confidence after witnessing that mysterious stranger's technique.
>Coco swoops in, asking about the whereabouts of the legendary Dragon of Dojima.

>> No.40838807

>>40838756
Yeah, we really should just go back to the other one, huh? Then everything would be all right.

>> No.40838912

>>40838807
Don’t know why you think that since the Schizo made sure to derail the other thread from the start.

>> No.40838919

>>40838776
And the end is you and Coco having their balls crushed by Lui and Kiryu?

>> No.40838927

>>40838807
I'm not using your thread.

>> No.40838935

>>40837334
Shame we're the ones paying for it.

>> No.40838967

>>40838927
Preach.

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>>40836561
It’s probably a janny or one of his discord circlejerk. Using the appropriate demonym for dung-colored SEA- sorry, Maritime African Americans is a ban in five minutes flat, but somehow this schizo can rampage for 8 hours over three threads and nothing happens.

>> No.40839064

>>40838993
Pretty sure they're both just ban evading, amigo.

>> No.40839171

>>40838912
You're right. Once this thread's over, we'll make a different new thread, and not go back to the other one. You're okay with that, right?

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>>40839064
>no deleted posts
Highly doubtful.

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>>40839189
Like 40 fucking posts were deleted from the last thread, what are you on about?

>> No.40839446

>>40839171
Did you even read my post or did you reply to me by accident. Since I made my thoughts clear on the matter.

>> No.40839493

>>40838757
>Festival’s baby-smooth, perfect innie
I’m a hairchad and even I understand she’s best this way.

>> No.40839533

>>40839237
Friend, you're talking to a retard.

>> No.40839591

>>40839533
He's smart enough to know all SEAniggers are a blight upon the entire world and that makes him all right by me.

>> No.40839689

>>40839237
Quite pungent, my dear.

>>40839446
You just sit there fuming while we ignore your thread, okay?

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>>40839591
Holy based.

>> No.40839872

>>40839689
Oh, that would explain why you kept on repeating the same question to me. Take your meds, idiot.

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40840166

can we please give this a rest?

Are any of you working on fics or have ideas to flesh out?

>> No.40840174

We can at least all agree that Flare is a shit tier chuuba, right?

>> No.40840233

>>40840166
Try reading the thread?

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>>40833013
Got enough of an outline to get me started on the part of Kurokami's errand boy, and I also outlined a lot of the next chapter for my main series. Yesterday's talk of Watame's big, meaty, milkers has got me itching even more to get back on my fantasy bullshit and get another step closer to making touching those a fictional reality. I'm sticking with Kurokami till her story is done though, and no amount of sheep tiddies, half-elf thighs, or even fennec butts will stop me.

>> No.40840443

>>40840290
But sheep milkers, anon.

Fat, sweaty sheep milkers.

>> No.40840663

>>40833013
Almost at the end of one chapter... for a fic that would take at least two dozen to finish
May God have mercy on my soul.

>> No.40840830

>>40838757
The hottest thing about this pic to me isn't the visible vulva, or the position, the outfit, her perfect ass or anything like that.

It's that fucking grin. That fucking grin is so unbelievably FUCKING hot.

She KNOWS what I want to do to her. Knows I want to plough her cunt until we're both bleeding. Knows I want to cream in her asshole til it's flowing out of her mouth. She knows I want to pin her down and squeeze her throat until the life starts draining from her eyes just so I can let go as I let out one almighty nut in her and repeat it all again.

She fucking knows, and she wants it too.

>> No.40840835

>>40840166
Scroll up.

>> No.40840839

>>40840663
What in god's name are you writing?

>> No.40840851

>>40840663
What kind of slow-burn concept that needs a novel's worth of chapters are you writing anon?

>> No.40840877

>>40840663
You writing an encyclopaedia or is every one of your chapters like 500 words long?

>> No.40840891

>>40840166
/wg/ threads are always terrible when they’re made after American hours.

>> No.40841178
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>>40840443
Yes. I'm very much aware, but if I continue on the series to get to those sweet fun globes, I likely wouldn't stop until the arc is done because of how shit is about to ramp up. I won't let the delinquent fox's story go unfinished.

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40841217

>>40840839
>>40840851
>>40840877
Here's part of it, anons; the (You)s are making me nervous and a bit excited. Thanks for the interest.
As for chapter lengths, the thing's not encyclopedia but definitely not 500 words either. I just write every day and hopefully I'll find myself out of this void somehow with the chicken scratch outline I wrote

>> No.40841240
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>>40840663
I know that feel well bro. Just keep going and having fun. I look forward to shaking your hand when we both reach that two dozen mountaintop.

>> No.40841390

>>40841217
...
Are you actually making a disco elysium-esque ame detective fic?

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>>40841240
We'll get there soon enough, my man. Inshallah

>> No.40841616
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>>40841390
That is the plan, yes.
And a few other things.

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>>40841240
>>40841392
Meanwhile, there's me that just had t erase 10 pages of hard work because it didn't fit the tone

>> No.40841861
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40841861

Anyone have tips for writing a good action scene?
I'm liking what I'm doing to build it up but I'm not really sure how I can write with impact

>> No.40841993

>>40841861
If it's supposed to be particularly fast-paced I'd recommend using ellipsis. That way the reading experience becomes more rushed and disorderly, similar the action taking place in the story.

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>>40841768
>tfw you have to erase three chapters and there's no decent way to work them into the story anymore
>>40841861
short sentences, anon. that, and don't write action as if you're watching a movie. to git gud at action scenes, we'll have to read... actual novels (terrible, I know)

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>>40841768
It's alright bro. The power to recognize that and do what is needed is to be respected. You can always do what I do and set the bit you erased for later, you can likely find some bits that can be repurposed into a different scene, or just some of the dialogue that you liked. Keep going dude.
>>40841861
I have no idea how I would explain this, your best bet is like with smut/fluff; read works with action scenes in it. Perspective is really important for those though, so keep that in mind.

>> No.40842192

>>40842008
>The power to recognize that and do what is needed is to be respected.
thank you bro. it hurts a little, but I know it's for the best.

>> No.40842316

>>40841861
Even if you are shit at drawing, id say you should always try and storyboard the fight
Sure throwing a punch is fine, but the best action scenes connect and flow seamlessly, thats where a storyboard helps.
Overall try and fit the action to the character so it doesnt take you out. A big character shouldnt be doing backflips unless its a dbz style action scene

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40842500

"I'm almost at the end of the chapter!"
>that was 4k words ago
>ending nowhere in sight

Man, this is like edging myself unwittingly, except it's me trying to achieve the climax of finishing the chapter, then cleaning up the mess afterwards (in editing and beta reading), but the edging doesn't fucking end because the chapter needs more and more stuff to conclude coherently and I just want to coom the final product already

I'm not sure where I was going with this masturbation analogy, to be honest

>> No.40842520

>>40841861
Short sentences, focus on what's actually happening. Especially when begging, it is easier to focus on a single character with the eventual status update on the rest.

Action scrnes are a balance of two things: you need to clearly communicate what's happening, and you need to be quick

>> No.40842717
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>>40842500
Just keep going and you'll achieve that climax you're longing for. Don't let the pressure to deliver SOMETHING dissuade you from making your work how it is meant to be in your mind. Even if the ending is further away, just keep getting closer.

>> No.40842726

>>40842500
what is it

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>>40842500
Just keep edging, anon! Edge until you finally make it!
We'll all make it, bros. We'll all get to the climax soon enough.

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>>40842003
how bad were these three chapters that you needed to cast them into the abyss?

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40842951

>>40842846

>> No.40843385

Alright lads. Slampig Okayu NTR writefag here.
I'm writing Okayu's character right now, the angle I gave her was sort of a more mature rrat!Ayame since I couldn't work with just a "haha sex feels good" slut. I want a characterized slut.
What would you advise me, lads?

>> No.40843571

>>40842717
>>40842807
Yeah, it's what I've been telling myself. It's a chapter that's taken about two months to write, so I'm getting kinda jittery for taking this fucking long, doubly so now that I know it's almost done. Hope the last little bit of meat on the bone doesn't come across too rushed.
Still, it's been a productive few days lately, so maybe I can give myself a good boost for the last few parts. Thanks for the words of encouragement. I'll be sure to climax as good as I can for you.

>>40842726
terrible, terrible stuff

>> No.40843648
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40843648

>>40842951
what the fuck?

>> No.40844187

>>40842951
so this is where the fic becomes a pseudo-quest with the /wg/ anons helping Ame solve her mystery, right?

>> No.40844243

>>40843385
Depends if she likes you or not. Is it strictly just sex? It's probably compensated dating to some degree, even if it's just snacks as someone said earlier. Flirtatious, teasy, but generally very laid back.

>> No.40844623

>>40843385
My two cents is that Okayu comes from a broken household, and for her sex is just the great equalizer.
Have an issue? Fuck it out. She hates conflict and fights, and her relaxed approach is her way of ignoring the problem. Also, in her mind, if people "like her" they will never bother/fight with her

>> No.40844718
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40844718

>>40843385
>Slampig Okayu NTR
g-go on?

>> No.40844764

>>40843648
If you want to see part of it here's a pdf https://files.catbox.moe/y2w5l2.pdf
Just to let you know, the concept of what I'm writing now has become largely different maybe some parts will be re-used but I dunno yet
>>40844187
>so this is where the fic becomes a pseudo-quest with the /wg/ anons helping Ame solve her mystery, right?
UHHHHHHHHHHH

>> No.40845065

>>40844718
it's not the NTR you're into

>> No.40845102
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40845102

>>40845065
back to writing them myself then i suppose

>> No.40845595

>>40843385
Are you another anon picking up that concept, or are you the first one from earlier this week?
Either way I really want to see Sora getting fully cucked by way of you getting along better even outside of the sex.

>> No.40845617

>>40844243
It does develop into that. I want them to bond over stuff like Okayu teasing you when going through your bag and finding spicy manga you use as fap material
I want them to bond and develop something that makes Anon feel guilty about Sora, but also unable to lesve Okayu alone
>>40844623
Also have this
>>40844718
You NTR your gf with Okayu. Not her ntring you.
Gomene, chloecuck

>> No.40845777

>>40845595
I'm actually the one whi dropped the original prompt of slampig Okayu. I was also the one who requested the chuuba.
I have the final cuck planned out. I will not dissapoint with that

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>>40840290
>>40841178
>I won't let the delinquent fox's story go unfinished

You have my thanks, Anon. Thank you for focusing on delivering the Kuro fluff that I crave so, so much.

>> No.40845888

>>40841178
I'll raise a glass of sheep milk to you when you get to it. Watame deserves to be enjoyed in all the ways.

>>40845102
Good luck with your writing, Chloecuck

>> No.40846259

>>40845617
>You NTR your gf with Okayu. Not her ntring you.
>Gomene, chloecuck
it's alright, even if it's not what I typically look for the idea still sounds hot. I wish you the best of luck in your fic writing!

>> No.40846295

>>40845888
thank you!

>> No.40846703

>>40831566
still requesting gigastacy haveing hot sweaty sex with holojp, i mean look at this:

>>40777251

>> No.40847158

>>40846703
can't believe kiara fucks dogs

>> No.40848351

>>40831566
Exploring space with Mito.

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40848443

>>40848351
Fubuki's mama?

>> No.40848585

The fuck

>> No.40848806

>>40848443
No the nijisanji girl.

>> No.40849487

>>40847158
She's a white woman, what did you expect?

>> No.40849569

>>40831566
Kurokami grudgingly letting you fuck her fox ears.

>> No.40849671
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40849671

>>40848351
Don't know much about her, but that's a cute and creepy astronaut

>> No.40852455
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>> No.40852776

>>40852455
I have a raging desperate need of Foobs armpitjob since reading a few fics featuring her. namely, Petting Your Fox

>> No.40852854

Is it just me or is the /vt/ archive down?
I just want to skim through some past writefag threads.

>> No.40853040

>>40852854
Warosu seems to be working fine

>> No.40853395

>>40853040
Oh, I wasn't on warosu earlier, I was on the alice archive as I didn't know /vt/ was on warosu.
Thank you for clearing that up.

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40854061

>>40852776
Same but I want one from Suisei

>> No.40854182

Armpit review WHEN

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40855373

>>40854182
I've gotta finish huffing them all, it's hard to pull away from

>> No.40855513

>>40849671
I wonder how that conversation went.
>I want a spacesuit
>L-like in sci-fi, Mito-sama?
>No a spacesuit like the ones with a built-in diaper
>wh-
>fuck you that’s why, now get to it, chop chop
>y-yes daisenpai….

>> No.40857127

>>40854061
Jesus this Suisei has hips.

>> No.40857733

>>40831533
RAPE

>> No.40857883

Why is /wg/ so shit now? We were going so well through christmas but it's back to low-effort shitty stories and bait.

>> No.40858421
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40858421

>>40854061
God that's a sex Suityan. That jealous maid suicest fic is starting to look pretty appealing

>> No.40858455

>>40857883
Be the change you want to see in the thread, anon.
My own WIPs are still cooking. Are yours?

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>>40858421
>Starting
that shit was appealing on day one, and I'm not even into incest.

>> No.40858547

>>40858421
gimme the sauce

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40858598

>>40858463
appealing (to make), I mean. Though forcing Suisei to cosplay as her coworkers in general seems nice

>>40858547
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/5928509

>> No.40858605

>>40858455
I stopped writing since my stories never got any attention.

>> No.40858758

>>40858598
God damn, thanks

>> No.40859224

>>40857883
Wasn't this identical bait posted in the last thread?

>> No.40859304

>>40859224
Yes. Earlyfag is getting lazy.

>> No.40859366

>>40859304
Figured. Gave up on bumping his false thread, too.

>> No.40859470

>>40857883
>We were going so well through christmas
Christmas and New Years were magical. Authors and writers posting several different stories, not to mention the threads were comfy. Fuck, I want to go back to that time again.

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>>40859470
>Authors and writers

>> No.40859556

>>40859470
>Fuck, I want to go back to that time again.
Just use Warosu.

>>40857883
The holiday spirit came and went, so we return back to /wg/‘s natural state.

>> No.40859654

>>40859520
It's a personal distinction for me. Since I consider authors to be different in that they mostly write multi-chapter stories. Whereas writers write one-shots fics, and miscellaneous stories.

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>>40833517
>>40837706
Anon, I NEED you to do this for me. There is nothing hotter than a confident but sweet woman breaking through the mental barriers preventing her from being the S to her cute little M. Nervous hesitation gradually fades as she sees how much he responds to being placed beneath her... oogh...

>> No.40860636

>>40859654
Before I start, I just want to say I k ow what you’re trying to say, but I still need to make this point. Authors are someone who should be respected. They wrote many great classical stories and even from the western canon. A literary achievement that has yet to be replicated else were. Writers are your dime a dozen hacks and wannabes that just write genreslop. Every story here is written by a writer and not by an author.

>> No.40860857

>>40860636
Nigga shut up

>> No.40860916

>>40860857
If you ever read a classical story, you’ll that I’m right.

>> No.40861012

>>40860916
I mean you seem to struggle to write 4chan posts I don't think I can trust your literary expertise on this one

>> No.40861124

>>40861012
I read Harold Bloom. I think I know what I’m talking about

>> No.40861167

>>40860636
So you're arbitrarily making up definitions in order to field your retarded opinions?

>> No.40861198

>>40860916
“author, noun. The writer of a book, article, document, play, shitty post on 4chan etc.”
Nobody cares about your made-up pseudo-intellectual definition

>> No.40861203

>>40861124
NTA but you're a /lit/ pseud who isn't even fluent in English. I was gonna write you should have quit a few posts ago but really you shouldn't have started

>> No.40861311

>>40861124
>Harold Bloom
Isn’t he that one retard that thinks Shakespeare is the pinnacle of english literature, despite Yeats being better than him in every conceivable way?

>> No.40862922

>>40861311
To be fair to Bloom, all English critics/scholars think Shakespeare is the greatest English writer to have ever existed. Even though his plays and poems are kind of mid.

>> No.40863270

>>40862922
You're retarded. Shakespeare definitely has some stinkers but if you're going to call Macbeth and Hamlet "mid" then you should get your brain checked.

>> No.40863778

>>40863270
>Macbeth
You mean the play in which Shakespeare got on his knees to suck King James I’s dick because he funded his acting company?

>Hamlet
If I wanted to read a Greek tragedy, I would go with the source and not a rewritten fanfiction of one.

>> No.40864020

>>40863778
You remind me of a sperg I once saw in my Classics class that hated Dante's Inferno because to him Dante was just copying Aeneas' descent into the Underworld. What are your thoughts on Milton and Elliot?

>> No.40864349

At least it's about writing this time. Even if on a meta level.

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40864441

I like Jeff Kiney, he does a great job at writing psychosis

>> No.40864472

Which chuubas are sweaty sleepers and which ones aren't?

>> No.40864508

>>40864441
I fucking hate greg

>> No.40864601

>>40833013
Okayu gets stuck halfway under the bed and Korone takes advantage of it.

>> No.40864647

>>40864601
Anon gets stuck halfway under the bed and Korone and Okayu take advantage of it!

>> No.40864654

>>40864601
She... raids Okayu's cookie jar whilst she can't do anything about it, right?

>> No.40864684

>>40864441
>Zo wee mama!
>>40864508
From what i remember, while greg was an asshole, his family were wackos and i cant blame the kid when manny and his mom literally ruined his life at every chance they had

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>>40864472
I bet Botan doesn't think she sweats all that much, but if you spent the night next to her it'd be like someone dropped a bucket of water in bed

>> No.40864790

>>40864697
Hag sauna.....

>> No.40864809

>>40864020
Milton was not very good. His works achieved their fame via Protestant desperation for literary recognition.

>> No.40864825

>>40864684
Wasn't he only an asshole in the first book? It's been a while since I've read those books.

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>>40864697
all hags need sniffing correction
>>40864825
Greg is pretty shitty through the series,since he's pretty obsessed with being rich/living the high life without putting any effort and is constantly triying to scam people.
but from what i can remember, since i used to read those books like a bible, after the first book his shittyness is nowhere near as bad as his entire family
>he gets into DnD, his mother ruins it for him and forces him to play with his asshole brother who ruins it on purpose
>they get hit by a hurricane and they lose power in the middle of the winter and get stuck without food. Turns out his little brother tripped the circuits to get power ONLY on his room (and stole the food). He gets away scot free
>His dad constantly forces him to do shitty things HE wants to do and once they backfire he punishes him
Its funny because as the series goes on, the bully brother kinda becomes the most normal of the family, while greg is a scammer and his other relatives seem to hate his guts because they keep shitting on anything he likes
I remember one thing in particular that made me really angry as a kid. He has a book he really likes signed by the author, and since he's triying to make money he attempts to sell it but then learns his whore of a mother did the signature herself because she didnt like waiting on line.
At the end of the book, she ''makes up'' to him by bringing him a signed copy, but it has the wrong name. I hated that whore so much, she was like Malcom's mother except ten times worse

>> No.40866032

>>40865550
I always did hate Manny. Thanks for the qrd I think I stopped after the third book but I know they're many more after that one.

>> No.40866589

>>40862922
What the fuck is mid?

>> No.40866863

>>40866589
It's zoomer speak for 'mediocre'.

>> No.40866926

>>40866863
Why not say mediocre.

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40866945

>>40865550
>all hags need sniffing correction
God, I wanna embarrass a hag by worshipping every inch of her body. They'd already be kinda self-conscious about what they think even the 'best' parts of their body are, so if I buried my face in their armpits and licked up their sweat like it was an expensive ice cream...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I NEED IT

>> No.40867399

>>40864809
>His works achieved their fame via Protestant desperation
>Protestant desperation
It's like I'm back at /lit/.

>> No.40867626

>>40866945
All I'm saying is lock me in a room with Botan and not an inch of her body will leave untouched by my cock

>> No.40867935

>>40831566
Anon being corrected with love and affection until he can no longer have lewd thoughts about chuubas!

>> No.40867980

>>40867935
Sex is a completely normal aspect of romantic love anon, why are you so afraid?

>> No.40868532

>>40866945
I want to nibble on her tummy.

>> No.40868625

>>40867980
Consider this: a story takings itself completely seriously, written in the style of (You) slowly breaking down due to constant abuse
Except it is just a chuuba being nice to you, and the breaking down is (You) learning to appreciate the platonic aspects of a relationship
That just sounds hilarious if well written

>> No.40868792

>>40868625
So what happens if the chuuba in question is a hag and her eggs are about to expire?

>> No.40868895

>>40868792
you can always adopt kobo and teach her proper english

>> No.40869066

>>40868792
The hag mentally and platonically rapes you, causing you to get her pregnant with your mind.

>> No.40869147

>>40868895
>>40869066
Or you can just go the "virgin mary" route if you don't want to involve sex.

>> No.40869284

>>40868792
Fuck first, mindbreak Anon latter

>> No.40869630

>>40854061
>>40855373
NEEDS to stop shaving

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>>40869630
You happy now?

>> No.40869835

>>40869810
gross

>> No.40869885

>>40869810
Very much so, yes. God I love armpits.

>> No.40869958

>>40867399
It sounds like that board is filled with people who think they're more clever than they actually are.

>> No.40870071

>>40869958
All hobby circles everywhere are

>> No.40870655

>>40869284
Gentle rape or no fucking at all.

>> No.40870903

What are some fics that show text messages?

>> No.40871662

>>40870903
Our cures.

>> No.40871857

>>40870903
Cover High

>> No.40872249

>>40871662
>>40871857
Thanks, anons.

>> No.40872634

>>40870903
That one yandere Kiara fic. That was a great one, shame it wasn’t finished.

>> No.40872835

>>40869810
>Doesn't match her hair
trash.

>> No.40872913

>>40869630
Calli doesnt shave because she doesnt grow hair from the neck down.
Which is great because i can enjoy her fantastic armpits without hairs

>> No.40873182

>>40872913
Did she ever actually say she lasered it off IRL? Not that it would stop me from writing her with hairy pits, mind.

>> No.40873306

>>40873182
i dont remember and im too busy writing a bae fanfic so im gonna say she cant grow armpit hair but she has a massive stinky bush.
That's canon, trust me, my dad is yagoo's enforcer

>> No.40873539

> Fubuki thread
> Fubuki not mentioned at all

>> No.40873585

>>40873539
this is bait.

>> No.40874431

>>40873306
>spoiler
What's the prompt if I may ask?

>> No.40874536
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>>40873306
> she has a massive stinky bush.
Fuck that’s so hot.

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>>40874431
You, a wageslave, find a wallet in the station. Said wallet belongs to Bae, the spunky teenager that lives on the floor above your apartment
Its an agegap romance and im confident that unlike the Mori fic, i can fit this in one/few chapters

>> No.40874929

>>40874838
that sounds pretty cute. I'll be interested to see how it turns out.

>> No.40875239

>>40869958
Never go to /lit/. You’ll never talk about books. It’s become the new /b/ or /qa/.

>> No.40875250

>>40874929
Thanks Anon. Im currently watching the rat, so writing its gonna be postponed, but i really want to write cute romance with the zoomer rat. I love her a lot

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>>40875250
There's a lot to love for someone who is so small. Godspeed.

>> No.40876887

>>40876582
Small girls are either the best or the worst. They're compressed love or compressed hate,

>> No.40876973

>>40876582
redpill me on Bae. Im planning to write something in the near future that might involve her and i want to learn a bit more about her

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>>40876582
>ywn have Bae come home and cuddle on the couch with you while telling you about her day

>> No.40877531

>>40876973
Literally the perfect little sister
>small but stacked
>Spoiled but not bratty at all, very cute hardworker
>very surprising housewife skillset
>zoomer brain, kinda dumb
>cute accent
>breedable

>> No.40877789

>>40875239
It's rather sad to see /lit/ just deteriorate to its current state.

>> No.40877901

>>40877531
How the fuck is Bae stacked?

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40878022

>>40877901
what do you mean?

>> No.40878101

>>40877901
>one step away from cowtits
>not stacked
you okay there anon?

>> No.40878254

>>40878022
great design but terrible chuuba

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>>40878254
You got a source for that bub?

>> No.40878461

>>40878254
sorry i meant to put this comment in a picture of Azki

>> No.40878577

>>40878463
>Bae if she was from the New York subway systems

>> No.40878695

>>40878577
About time they produced something worthwhile.

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>>40878463

>> No.40879432

>>40877531
Thanks. im gonna watch some clips to try and get her way of speaking

>> No.40879552

>>40878800
God, everything is better with Armstrong

>> No.40879706

>>40879432
She's live right now!

>> No.40879755

>>40879706
well that makes things easier. thanks for the headup anon

>> No.40879911

>>40879552
Who?

>> No.40880283

>>40874838
>agegap Bae romance
Extremely based. As an Ojisan brat, I'm looking forward to it.

>> No.40880910

>>40874838
Godspeed. I love me some ossan stories as well.

>> No.40881980

>>40879911
God, I'm old.

>> No.40882390

Anons, where do y'all think is a good place to get beta readers? Is it actually good to get beta readers at all?

>> No.40882488

>>40881980
The game did come out like ten years ago. So, I mean, yeah.

>> No.40882524

>>40882390
Your closest friends who also like chuubas. I'd say a colleague you could trust but unless you're actively emailing other authors and have a good rapport with them, that's not really an option.

>> No.40882782

>>40882488
>February 19, 2013
It was such a simpler time then.

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40882831

>>40882524
>be the only person in your circle of friends who likes chuubas
crap I was afraid of that. thanks, anon; I'll just tough it out then. URAAAAAA

>> No.40882871

>>40882831
Send e-mails to all the authors who have posted their addresses here and beg them to proofread your work.

>> No.40882986

>>40882871
>"Oh, this must be a commission request!"
>It's Anon doing a naked dogeza and begging them to read his WIP

>> No.40883060

>>40882986
Worst they can say is "no", right?

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40883158

>>40882871
>Dig through the archive
Will do, anon. I'll probably start going around by the time I'm halfway done with this thing. Wish me luck

>> No.40883182

>>40883060
They can say it's totally dogshit and they should abandon it only to steal it and say it's there's since there's no proof to the contrary that you can't just say is photoshop. Now, the odds of that happening are so fucking astronomically slim that it'd never happen but still.

>> No.40883421

>>40883158
I'll save you some time and say check Shrunken Troubles and That's the way Fubuki crumbles
You should take the time to read them, too, fantastic works of literature each
AA's got his e-mail in the archive header

>>40883182
IT WAS RHETORICAL.

>> No.40883464

>>40883182
Oh, no.
Someone writing my fic for me.
Whatever will I do.

>> No.40883594

>>40882390
You should email AA and ask him to read your fic. He's read mine and has proof checked a few others.

>> No.40883713

>>40883594
This. And if he says no, just make sure you keep asking him. He always capitulates.

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>>40883421
>>40883594
>>40883713
Thank you for the suggestion, anons. I'll read these before I go to bed and shoot an email once I've got enough stuff written down. Hopefully it all turns out well in the end!

>> No.40883899

>>40883823
Don't really annoy him by asking him over and over.

>> No.40883925

>>40883823
Good luck, anon.

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>>40883823
Enjoy, anon. Report back with your thoughts on each fic.

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>>40883899
knowing myself, I'll probably send just one email and get too spaghetti to ask further if I get no reply
>>40883925
>>40883957
>shrinking
>raceplay
Oh boy here we go...

>> No.40884293

New thread
>>40883946

>> No.40884356

>>40884140
Just want to make sure, anon. AA gets enough shit from this place, no reason to keep on adding to his misery.

>> No.40884619

>>40884293
>Filthy rrat
Disgusting. Someone should really call an exterminator.

>> No.40884717

>>40884356
Thanks for setting my expectations, anon. I understand especially since beta reading takes up one's free time as well

>> No.40886231

>>40884356
AA loves proofreading other people's stuff for free. He says he has a ton of spare time all the time. Feel free to do it, he definitely won't end up doing to be nice even though he's super busy or something, because he's not busy at all.

>> No.40886292

>>40886231
Pretty much this.

>> No.40886537

>>40886231
Oops…

>> No.40887255

>>40886537
AA has a really bad case of social anxiety. He really can't say no to stuff. So whenever AA agrees to doing something, he usually really doesn't want to do it, like proofreading other people's stuff, uploading stuff to the archive, looking for lost stories. People ask a lot of him, it's really sad. I hope he gets some help eventually.

>> No.40887413

>>40887255
Do you think he'd write my cover letter for me if I asked?

>> No.40887729

>>40887255
>AA doesn’t like uploading to the archive
The other two I can buy, but this? He made the archive in the first place. I don’t think he runs it out of reluctant obligation.

>> No.40887813

>>40887729
It's been a long fucking time, son. People change. Suddenly your pet project has taken over your life and you can't say no long after your passion has gone.

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