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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>53707610

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Lui belching in your face during sex and other stuff involving hags burping:>>53710047

sleep schedule correction to your favorite chuuba:>>53711541

Your wife awakens to her NTR fetish by watching you jerk off to porn and becomes a cuckqueen:>>53711822

Anything involving prostitution:>>53715640

Corrupting your family tree of pure bloods by interacting with a filthy half-elf and having baby making sex with her.:>>53727725

>> No.53730730 [DELETED] 

>>53730493
Why is that rrat sad?

>> No.53731061

What are some things you would like to do with a cute girl? The less down-to-earth and reasonable the better.

>> No.53731347

>>53730730
Caught her bf (me) mating pressing her best friend

>> No.53731394

>>53731061
Use her as goblin bait to help with the quest I'm currently stuck on.

>> No.53731419

>>53731061
Make them pregnant with all the babies a single load can carry.

>> No.53731924

>>53731419
I wonder if there are there any techniques/folk traditions for increasing baby count?

>> No.53732659
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>>53731924
Probably just gotta do all the standard stuff(Waiting for the right day, womb massaging, hormone application if you're really desperate) but to a woman who's already fertile, so she's producing and releasing more eggs for when the time comes.

>> No.53732763

>>53731061
Hurt them emotionally.

>> No.53733183
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>>53731061
Beat in a duel and take as my concubine

>> No.53734770

>>53733183
Based woman conquerer
Through violence do two hearts see eachother clearly

>> No.53735121

>>53725041
Both of the good CHADcast fics were inspired by an outline in the archive called "Fujo Chadcast Hypno Discussion".
"The Clubroom" is the one that goes for making it a full degen hypno fic where you get played around by the CHADcast anime club. It originally had a pretty divisive ending but the author stepped up later on and gave it a better one.
"Fuji Fantasies" meanwhile ditches the hypnosis aspect in order to turn it into a fun highschool comedy. I hope the author is still writing chapters for this.

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>>53734770
I concur. Sharing a bloody fight with a girl can really get the juices flowing.

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>>53733183
based. Funnily enough I had a wip along those lines where you beat Fubu in a "chosen champions representing two armies" kind of duel, Ghost of Tsushima style.
Your victory would've made the Kemonomimi race surrender and join your Lord's nation and as a prize, you would've taken Fubuki, otherwise fated to bleed out on the battlefield. You would've nursed her wounds in your lavish estate and made her your wife (willingness pending).
Sadly, I password locked the doc because I'm a schizo and have since forgotten the key.

>> No.53736135

>>53735962
dunno why it made me remember that prompt of arranged marriage with Mio to unify clans, the marriage being proposed by your political enemies so your dinasty dies without a heir

>> No.53737887

>>53736135
>the marriage being proposed by your political enemies so your dinasty dies without a heir
imagine the look on their faces as their plan backfires and you impregnate the wolf hag so vigorously that she becomes know as the "queen of fertility" for the next centuries to come

>> No.53738649

>>53737887
>With uncountable heirs to his name, the Ymous family begins to envision impossible power fantasies
>Scared for political influences, Anon, Mio, and their thousands of newborns leave the country.

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>>53737887
>Anon gets hit with the "Daddy's girl" gene, having an entire batallion of girls that he just refuses to let marry

>> No.53739639

>>53718715
You're probably going to have to think of how to balance this later on but I think this makes for a good "core" set of values to balance for CYOA. Honestly only suggestion is to have an endings page at the end that ties the values together to determine how your chuuba ends up.

>> No.53740621

>>53739460
I like this iamge of Mio.

>> No.53742541

>>53732659
nice honkers

>> No.53742897
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>>53742541
reverse paizuri from a schizo zoomer is probably pretty great

>> No.53743464

>>53731061
Keep buying her food at a restaurant and insisting she eat it until she's engorged into a shameful bloated belching mess of a food coma

>> No.53743718
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>>53739639
Yup, that's what i was gonna do.
At the cost of some actual useful time, i managed to finish this one.
This is the kind of stuff im aming for. Its intended for both casual players (That just want to pick something that sounds funny) and for better players, that want to actually build a character
Also i just fucking lost the template because photoshop crashed and didnt save! fun!

>> No.53744115

>>53730493
Request to have a link to Bae related fics and green on the Bae general, kronii has one, but why dosnt bae?
Please! :)

>> No.53744135

>>53742897
Reverse paizuri?

>> No.53744209

>>53742897
What the fuck is a reverse paizuri?
The dick goes between the titties, how the fuck do you inverse this thing?

>> No.53744257

>>53744135
>>53744209
Maybe its from the top so she's face to face with your ass? at least that's what i interpreted

>> No.53744330
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>>53744135
>>53744209
You dinky goes down into her tits instead of up

>>53744257
This guy's got it

>> No.53744372
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53744372

Post THAT moment in a fic
>Nothing will stand in the way of my HoloJourney(s)

>> No.53744557
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>>53744372
>"…What the fuck is Heartbreak Tokyo?"

>> No.53746052
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>>53744372
>"What do I look like? Some kinda Menhera Wrangler!?"

>> No.53746511

>>53743718
I don't know if this is relevant or if I have to do something with it myself, but here's a concept:
>stream that niche game you used to play
>-3 menhera, unless you have [numberfag], in which case +3 menhera instead

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>>53744372
>Turns out, there is still a lot more EXPOSURE to indulge in for the two of you. You hope this THERAPY will never end.

>> No.53746891

>>53735962
I recall making a prompt similar to that a long while back, involving Fubuki and beating her in a samurai duel and then nursing her back to health and taking her as your wife after that.
Any chance of you picking it up again? Or did forgetting the password kill your drive for the story? I would've loved to read your take on it.

>> No.53747265

>>53743718
Great downsides. It's hard to believe this is your first cyoa.
Shouldn't festa be fiesta? Also, you may want to simply widen the overall frame so you don't have to horizontally compress all those images. It looks pretty weird rn.

>> No.53748330

>>53746511
I say you give it a try. /tg/ has some really good tutorials to get started. That's a good idea but sadly i dont have use for it
>>53747265
Thanks. As i said, i used to devour these for hours, so i always had some ideas.
Yeah, that i dissapeared, and the frame was a crude first attempt. Since i lost the template, its a good idea to rework it

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>>53743718
Why didn't you start making this from a gdoc/ wrord processor file in order to get the ideas out first instead of going straight to Photoshop?

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>>53749193
Im a brrat. Thinking is not something i do very well.
Besides it was supposed to be a prototype and then i started having way too much fun and i just went with it

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>>53730517
Had a bad day, lost someone I loved, so I worked on an old WIP I had talked about in the past and put them into it. Was gonna release this all as one fic, but the length in total would probably end up being a little ridiculous so it'll be a likely kinda short series. I also just wanted to get this out today if nothing else.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTBnAtUnpCviof7wlQMSmrzrjmxoR86i1FuGitV1kiMq_ZgwJ2dxk2mBDHnOYGjZBlpXGX2ZUcmiXpV/pub

Tags: SFW, Mumei, Myth, Council, Author's Cat, Drama

>> No.53749941

>>53749340
Well at least your prototype was well received enough that you can be confident about starting over again.
Maybe write out your first draft in a word processor this time so you'll have it easier when it comes to editing before moving over to Photoshop to make the image?

>> No.53750048

>>53749781
>spoiler
Man, that sucks.

>> No.53750177

>>53749781
sorry anon

>> No.53752371

>>53749781
This is some really fucking engaging prose. I hope the next parts come out soon because damn this was a good setup chapter for all of this.
Huh, never thought the anon writing the Mumei helps you kill EN fic would ever come back. Thought that wip was never going to get released.

>> No.53754870

>>53744115
Wrong thread?

>> No.53755536

I completely forgot to post this morning! I dreamt vaguely of bumping into Marine and squeezing her butt at a convenience store. No context beyond that - although to be fair, I remembered the most important part. Damn, but she had a soft, supple ass...

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>>53755536
Forgot pic. Very important.

>> No.53755603

>>53744115
Are you asking for fics where Bae shows up? Because our script archive has this handy feature, you can put in Bae and it'll filter the archive into just the fics with her.

>> No.53755711

>>53755603
I think he thinks the kronii archive is somehow affiliated with us and wants one for bae as well.

>> No.53755803

>>53755711
The Kronii archive isn't kronii-specific, it has a bunch of Bae fics.

>> No.53756183

>>53755803
That's because early clockgen was a weird storm of writing that just came to be for reasons no one really knows.

>> No.53756299

>>53756183
I do, it's because Kronii had the most blatantly horny design any HoloEN has had while also being depressed, resulting in a higher concentration of horny, depressed people than usual. Depressed people are also more creative, thus kroniifics.
t. part-time kronie, full-time depressed

>> No.53756627

>>53756299
I'm still kind of in awe at that archive. Thousands of horny fics/greentexts across dozens of authors and then one day everything just stopped.

>> No.53756924

>>53756627
I mean that's kind of what happens when your general decides to make the worst possible decisions for a general thread while also having yabs.

>> No.53757066

>>53755576
>>53755536
Enjoy >>53730517

>> No.53757810

>>53730582
Marine getting paranoid over (You) finally agreeing to a date and blowing her chance to get laid

>> No.53758847

>>53756924
What happened again, anyway? Wasn't it like...Discord shit that resulted in it imploding?

>> No.53759050

>>53757810
Okay I know this is about Marine blowing her chance to get laid after getting a date with (You) but I had a bit of a reading comprehension failure when I read this first.
It made me think Marine was getting paranoid after (You) get a date with someone else and she tries to ruin it... Only for her efforts to make a mediocre date into a memorable one that gets (You) laid

>> No.53759234

>>53758847
Have your pick:
>Couple namefags becoming major discussion topics, including their discord and twitter groupchat (?) activities
>Schizos raiding the thread
>Kronies generally being menhera against their oshi
>schizoposting other holos, driving away saner kronies
I still love Kronii but I never go there anymore.

>> No.53759512
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53759512

Ignore the numbers, how does this concept look?
Not included yet:
>>yabs
>screen record leak
>went on /vt/ again
>out of context clipmonkey drama
>tell your viewers how you really feel
>male on stream

>> No.53759652

>>53759512
All good, but you should think of more if they get to choose 5. I'd go with game genres, but I can see why you wanted a little /vt/ themeing.

>> No.53759799

>>53759512
How the fuck do you reduce menhera

>> No.53759864

Are there any good murder mystery fics?

>> No.53759869

>>53759512
Honestly the choices look like good names. Only real problem I have is that 'no stream' somehow builds up menhera given that the rest of the list is implying that menhera is basically a stress bar, though that might be a joke I'm not getting.

>> No.53759883

>>53759799
That's the neat thing, you don't.
Unless anon adds *** as an activity.

>> No.53760324

>>53759883
>Adds Sex as an entire page
>Two separate tracks.
>One burns seiso to reduce menhera.
>The other cranks up drama to reduce menhera
>Each tier of the track has to be taken in sequence
>Both tracks convene on one event
>NTR Impregnation stream
>Burns all seiso and menhera cranks up drama and audience
>Locks you into the worst ending
Genius.

>> No.53760758

>>53759869
'No stream' is less like vacation and more like burnout/anxiety/said something stupid on twitter and laying low

>> No.53761542

>>53759512
How do you increase Seiso? I've seen a few ways of lowering it, but no way to bring it back up.

>> No.53762135

>>53761542
NTA but I can kind infer that seiso is going to be something like a purity/corruption bar sort of thing where it's easy to lower but harder to gain points in.

>> No.53763071
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rentry.org/WGWC
Well that's all she wrote. Any suggestions before kick-off? There's this nagging feeling that I've forgotten an important step or consideration.

>> No.53763564
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>>53763071
I have a few suggestions:

>I don't see anything mentioning how voting will actually be done.
>I would add something in the beginning (The fuck is this?) to welcome ESL writers as well, as I feel like I see that as a common hang up
>In that same section, I would add something to encourage writers that we will accept any concept or idea, no matter edgy chuuni, self-indulgent, fetishistic, etc it might be.
>In "Tips for getting started" I would add something about not being afraid to ask the thread for story recommendations, as well as for help craft the story (eg: bouncing ideas)
>In Do I get a prize? mention possibly getting your fic translated and read by our Koreabros. (this is mostly a joke)

>> No.53764438

>>53763071
I think its good as is.

>> No.53765393

Live

>> No.53765392
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So how are the wips coming along anons?

>> No.53765750

>>53765392
I started writing again and saw a giant cricket in my room that ran away. I spent two hours hunting it down. I cannot find it.

>> No.53765849

>>53765392
The grind continues. Slow, but that comes with the hobby.

>> No.53765926

>>53763071
Just saw this. It's good as heck. Here's to having Word War One, Two, Three, up to Sixty-Nine!

>> No.53765931

>>53765750
Have you considered not being a bitch?

>> No.53766582
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Read
>Lost and Found (Both chapters)
This fic was really cute and the dialogue is funny. It gave some real romcom manga vibes.
Honestly only real problem is that the formatting was kind of weird, like it works in some parts since the close together string of dialogue make them flow really well when it comes to comedy but it feels more awkward outside of those scenes.

>> No.53767703

>>53765931
Crickets can be scary.

>> No.53767730

>>53767703
Yeah, like your own shadow?

>> No.53767746

>>53765931
>>53767730
Cricket hands typed these posts

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>>53744372
>After all your endeavor, you have created Rushia the Second to walk the Earth. And she loves you.

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>>53767703
Which is why I'm going to hunt it down and fucking kill it

>> No.53767770

>>53765750
>>53767703
>>53767746
Bitch-made hands typed these posts.

>> No.53767795

>>53767770
Well, I was made by a woman, though I don't know if she qualifies as a bitch

>> No.53767817

>>53767795
You're a bitch. You're scared of crickets.

>> No.53767834

>>53767817
Not the cricket guy though lol

>> No.53767862

>>53767834
Then why are you responding to that post?

I'll tell you why. You're bitch-made too, and you know it.

>> No.53767923

>>53767862
Like I said, my man, I've been made by a woman, and though she certainly has her bad sides, I don't think she's a bitch.
Fun talk. Here's your last (You) from me ;-)

>> No.53767949

>>53767923
Run away, bitch.

>> No.53768356

/wg/ is always such a beacon of intellectual discourse

>> No.53768995
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Without changing the title you're currently working with, do you think you could fit a title drop into your current wip?

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>>53768995
It may as well not even be considered a title drop.

>> No.53769846

>>53768995
>A Boot Camp on Fennecs and Love
Uhhhh
Umm
>”Wow you guys are going on a camping trip with Polka? That truly sounds like A Boot Camp on Fennecs and Love!”

>> No.53769939

>>53711557
I'm tired, sue me

>> No.53770013

>>53768995
> Daggers of Wrath

> You pick up the dagger off the ground, blood trickles onto the handle as claws stab into your own hand.
>That wretch shall taste your wrath. The lich's death is nigh.

Does that count?

>> No.53770081

>>53768995
ALL my fics are written and planned around title drops

>> No.53770193

>>53770013
I mean the shitty title drop is right there
>>That wretch shall taste your wrath. The lich's death is nigh, this time he shall taste The Daggers of Wrath.

>> No.53770806

>>53770193
Not him but holy shit that made my skin crawl lmao
That's pretty good

>> No.53770986

>>53770193
I dream of possessing this level of shamelessness

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>>53768995
I think >>53744372 already nailed it for me.

>> No.53772038

>>53730582
Not that it'll ever happen but a futa fic where a chuuba of your choice tries to get (You) pregnant despite it being physically impossible.

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>>53772038
Ugh, isn't that basically the ball impregnation trope used in futa fics? The ones where the girl sticks their dick up your cock and cums down into the guy's balls.

>> No.53772249

>>53772158
I've never heard of that trope before, anon. Plus it sounds extremely weird and I wouldn't want to see it.
What I want to see is (You) getting butt pregnant. Its impossible but I really want to see a chuuba determined to get you pregnant by fucking you endlessly in the ass until by some divine miracle, you "do" get pregnant.

>> No.53773155

>>53772158
what the fuck

>> No.53773978

>>53770081
What fics have you written? I know it's probably not 'he said the thing' style titles drops but I'm kind of blanking on remembering what fics have done title drops for real.

>> No.53774243

>>53773978
Sad genuine smile, TB17A, Like we never knew each other and Since the day my sun died reached their cheesy title drops.
I can't stop, I just love them too much.

>> No.53774285

>>53744372
>Worry not, Ayame, I will be your Our Cures

>> No.53774665

>>53774243
Oh my god, every single one of those title drops are coming back to me. Out of all of those I liked the one in sad genuine smile the best, even if it's the one closest to a "he said the thing" style of title drop.
Also I fucking knew you were the writer for those last two fics >>53500969

>> No.53774881

>>53774665
>I fucking knew you were the writer
How?
Also, thanks for the read and the review!
I do agree it was just angst, that was sort of the point. Letting go of ghosts and whatnot.

>> No.53774989

>>53774881
>How?
I could connect those last two fics by way of writing style... Though up until you revealed you were also the writer for TV17A I hadn't realized you were the writer for the taboo topic smut fics.

>> No.53775144

>>53774989
The difference between my second and first person prose is very pronounced, I'm aware of it. I try to salvage the best bits of each, but when I do so I tend to lack something from one or the other.

>> No.53776289

>>53763564
>>I don't see anything mentioning how voting will actually be done.
I was planning on providing a google form during the voting period, but I guess I can briefly mention how it'll be carried out.
>>In Do I get a prize? mention possibly getting your fic translated and read by our Koreabros. (this is mostly a joke)
That's funny, I'll throw in a quick mention.
As for your other suggestions, a good lump of encouragement for new writers is included within the pointers section, which is already of substantial length. I don't think it's necessary to go harder on that aspect, even if the main idea of this is to gather new blood. Unless of course, everyone else thinks there's not enough and I should put them in. But I'll add the part about asking for help in the thread.

Seriously though, I want everyone's opinions on this. Are you guys all good to go? We're really doing this? The writing contest will commence on the 25th (Tuesday) if nothing else comes up, and we might even be able to start shilling it a couple of days in advance.

>> No.53776937
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>>53776289

WE'RE FUCKING DOING THIS
WE'RE PUTTING OURSELVES ON THE MAP
OUR FIRST MAJOR EVENT

SHOW ME YOUR GODDAMN WAR FACE /WG/

>> No.53777078
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>>53776289
We are past the point of doubt, anon. It's happening!
>>53776937 LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOO

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>>53776289
Lets...
fucking...
GOOOOOOOOOO!
>>53776937
>SHOW ME YOUR GODDAMN WAR FACE /WG/
>pic related

>> No.53777186

>>53776289
>>53763071
Honestly it all looks good enough unless someone wants to step in and make an advanced how to start writing chuuba fic guide.
Outside of that I think a google form or poal me poll would work since those are pretty much the best polling solutions that we can use while still keeping all of this anonymous.

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>>53776937

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>>53776937

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>>53776937
I'm gonna make the best shitpost fic for this contest.

>> No.53778155

>>53776289
Yeah, let's do it. I'm entering

>> No.53778174
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>>53776937
IT'S TIME

>> No.53778655

>>53776289
Alea iacta est. Good job putting this together and good luck to everyone who enters

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>>53746891
It's in the back of my mind, but honestly pretty far back there. I was quite confident in the opening scene and don't feel like trying to piece that whole thing back together from memory.
I've been pretty lazy with my writing reps altogether so I kinda look forward to the contest - maybe that'll get my ass moving again. Sorry man.

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>>53750048
>>53750177
Thank you I appreciate it

>>53752371
I'm terrible with being consistent with timeframes and updates, so I won't make any promises as to how soon but I hope I can release more relatively quickly.
I never left. Don't be afraid to call out if you're curious as to the status of a fic, the author might still be around

>> No.53779864
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>>53776937

>> No.53780129

>>53730493
Without that gay ass haircut she has usually she's actually pretty sex

>> No.53780912
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>>53730582
Pekora Incest, pekocest if you will.

>> No.53781001

>>53768995
There's no new title, but if I kept the title of the first part I don't think I could fit it in well.

>> No.53781047
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>>53780912
I know Pekora's talked a bunch about her childhood, typically where she's being kind of a bratToT, but has she talked about her brother in that way like a few other Holo's have?

>> No.53781060

>>53780912
With her mother?

>> No.53781684

>>53781001
What's the title of the first part then? What makes it hard to do a title drop with it?

>> No.53781960
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>>53730517
Balsa: Chapter Sixteen

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSaNa0jnoOgjvF9NzXhfQ3i7Joi7xLjpyO_jGI6oUlZLNEzN--8siuEknULYiABFICm-gY7l3vRRqrP/pub

tags: medieval fantasy, (you). Botan, Koyori, Civia, Watame

I spent more time editing and correcting this so I hope it helped the flow of things. I hope you enjoy.

>> No.53782082

>>53781047
I think she mentioned at some point that she wasn't afraid to walk around the house in her underwear even if her brothers were around, but that's the closest thing I can think of.

>> No.53782108

>>53781684
Hedonist's Reckoning. It would be like making the same joke twice - I chose that title because both words contain oni, after all.
Maybe I could use one of the two words in the story, Ayame is pretty punny after all.

>> No.53782370

>>53782082
I feel like that's more opposed to incest tendencies, because she's not seeing her brothers like normal men who shouldn't see her in a state of partial unrest.
When you're afraid of your family seeing you in underwear, that's when you treat them as sexual beings.

>> No.53782422

>>53730582
Noel getting gangbanged by a tribe of choco shota

>> No.53782549

>>53782108
Yeah with a title like that you can't really do a title drop without forcing it like
>I guess Ayame just learned it was time to pay. To pay A Hedonist's Reckoning.

>> No.53782644

>>53782370 (me)
Undress, not unrest. Unrest is what I have

>> No.53782697

>>53782422
Okay I know this is referring to that pixiv set but this makes me think of Choco asking Noel to look over her nephews for the weekend.

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>>53782370
Unless they're already past that point in their relationship

>> No.53784327

>>53784214
>nice butt
>small but not nonexistent boobs
>hair let down
that rabbit got me acting unwise

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>>53784214
>A full effort is made to repair this rabbit's moral compass
>She even starts warming up to you, and you start to think there's hope for her after all
>Walk in on this
This rabbit is both wonderful and exhausting.

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>>53784620
>Freshening up for seggs with Pekora, talking to her from the bathroom
>She suddenly goes quiet and you peek your head to see what's going on
>Pekora puts a finger up to her lips, before pointing down, where you make direct eye contact with Marine before she pulls out a hand grenade from under her pillow
Domestic life with this weird little idiot seems like...fun?

>> No.53786083

>>53782108
Woah, I didn't even notice the oni in either word. That's pretty clever.

>> No.53786132 [DELETED] 

>>53786083
Are you an esl?

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>>53785975
That idea works so much better than you know considering the dynamics I have planned out. I'm not really sure how I want peko to react to the whole "did your mom" thing yet though. Things might be a little bumpy before they get fluffy with the smaller rabbit. I 100% will make Marine fuck with her on an almost daily basis though. Flare is also gonna lightly torture the would-be dictator a bit.

>> No.53788164

>>53730582
Going over to your friend's house, and getting molested by his mom Shishiro Botan.

>> No.53788715

>>53786083
Thank you! Other titles I considered before felt either too vulgar to fit the romantic undertones, or too vague to say much at all. Therefore I decided to look for words containing oni and found this almost fatefully fitting combination.

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>> No.53791256

>>53790671
nice butt

>> No.53792156
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>>53791256
Birds have nice butts, this is objectively true

>> No.53793152

>page 10 in under 20
???

>> No.53793249

>>53746891
Wasn’t there a story like this that was already written? I feel like I’ve read this prompt written out somewhere before.

>> No.53793298

>>53793152
Maybe if the thread was actually active and not kept alive by a single schizo bumping the thread whenever it reaches page 10 it wouldn't be a problem

>> No.53793373

>>53793249
I've talked about doing a feudal Fubuki fic unconnected to that anon a little bit ago, that may be what you're thinking of?

>> No.53793406

>>53793152
Shit’s crazy. I don’t even see that many bait threads in the catalog right now. A lot of other generals seem to be feeling it.

>> No.53793426

>>53793298
Is there a reason for that? A new thread is made after the old one is archive. Not like it would be a big loss or anything if this one is archive

>> No.53793518

>>53790671
>>53792156
God I love Mumei's soft girly butt

>> No.53793569

>>53793426
Two stories were posted in this thread so far. It at least deserves some more time to give more people to respond with feedback or their general thoughts.

>> No.53793588

>>53793152
This thread is dead as fuck. Why are you so surprised that it's going to get bumped off?

>> No.53793630

>>53793569
And no one is talking about them. Again, so what’s the issue of the thread just dies?

>> No.53793658

>>53793406
For what i pieced together, the return of Gura has sped up several generals
>First there's the bait threads, because of course the subhuman part of her fanbase is gonna bait
>Then numbertrannies are fuming and frothing at the mouth because their made up numbers dont match (specially with gura returning) so they keep raiding threads to try and get attention. Also mori had another good thing happenign to her and that always makes their anus bleed
>As a result of both, generals are accelerating to try and not die

>> No.53793713

>>53793373
Here it is, I’ve got it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTwsvf2-MQlBHWDl1JX5B_IO-9cMVfnLe9X051_F7YYmeMpqH8siH3EcPmKyTGiKYjue-irBdRIYyd8/pub
>>53793426
It just makes things easier for AA who has to go back through the threads.

>> No.53793735

>>53793569
>It at least deserves some more time to give more people to respond with feedback or their general thoughts.
Anon, outside of the main fics everyone talks about, do you actually believed what you just typed? One fic has almost been here for a day and the other is no one talks about.

>> No.53793771

>>53793713
>It just makes things easier for AA who has to go back through the threads
Never thought clicking on the previous link was such a monumental task.

>> No.53793845

>The “retards complaining about the thread being bumped” arc returns

>> No.53793898

>>53793735
I gotta believe people hanging out in a fanfiction thread are reading the fanfiction that gets posted.

>> No.53793899

>>53793845
More like keep the thread active and don’t complain when it’s about to be bumped off.

>> No.53793903

>>53793298
The word schizo has lost all meaning.

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>>53793713
Oh shit yeah that one, I forgot about that.

>> No.53794063

>>53793903
At this point, it just means the other poster posted something I didn’t like.

>> No.53794077

>>53793898
Your belief is misplaced.

>> No.53794113

Ready for the competition to be a total flop and for /wg/ to become the entire board's bogeyman?

>> No.53794271

>>53794113
Been ready since the dumb competition was made in 2022.

>> No.53794451

>>53794113
For what? Asking each general once politely if they have any fanfiction they'd like to submit? Doomposter, your mind works in such funny ways. Surely there are other, better generals to tell, even in this board

>> No.53794544

>>53794451
For asking them to save our struggling general instead of theirs.

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>>53794077
I disagree. I think think this place is pretty cool and has some cool people in it. I know people are reading and enjoying out there, even if they don't say it often.

>> No.53795235

>>53781960
I liked this chapter quite a bit more than the previous ones. It still feels like there are a few too many characters busy with different things, but you're writing so quickly so that the plot threads advance at a good pace, at least.

>> No.53795690

>>53795235
Fair enough. I'll start to tie the various threads together soon so it doesn't feel so busy. I've made it a commitment now to not add anymore new characters besides 3 villains since at this rate I won't have anyone to write for the prequel.

Glad you read it.

>> No.53796155

>>53794997
I'm going to correct that smug owl

>> No.53796346

>>53794544
god damn, a few thread being archived before the bump limit doesn’t make /wg/ struggling retard.

>> No.53796717

>>53796346
It does in their mind.

>> No.53796749

>>53794113
Pretty much yeah. I don’t expect others to waste their time writing for a general they don’t even visit. The time wasted in that would have been better spent just writing fics here.

>> No.53797255

>>53796749
Or watching streams, since nobody does that here.

>> No.53797341

>>53749781
Good concept and well written. I'll definitely read any more chapters that come out. I will say though that I don't exactly understand what about the girls existing makes Anon such a schizo, but I suppose that could be explained later.
P.S. you made my oshi cry and threatened her life so watch your back

>> No.53798623

>>53797255
Except me.

>> No.53798648

>>53798623
Is that all you have to say?

>> No.53798661

>>53798623
What a waste of a post.

>> No.53799072

why does this autist write every post like he's sasuke from naruto?
>What a waste of a post
>tch, not worth my time
>how...imaginative
do you really think you are cool or what?

>> No.53799106

why does this autist write every post like he's sasuke from naruto?
>What a waste of a post
>tch, not worth my time
>how...imaginative
do you really think you are cool or what?

>> No.53799111

why does this autist write every post like he's sasuke from naruto?
>What a waste of a post
>tch, not worth my time
>how...imaginative
do you really think you are cool or what?

>> No.53799143

why does this autist write every post like he's sasuke from naruto?
>What a waste of a post
>tch, not worth my time
>how...imaginative
do you really think you are cool or what?

>> No.53799162

Bot-chama please....

>> No.53799185

>>53799162
kek that broke him

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>>53730582
Anon, the knight, gets captured by the despicable brown desert dwellers, who decide to take him to their palace in order to turn him into a member of the royal harem of Queen Flare

>> No.53799705

>>53799475
>despicable

If they're so despicable why does it sound like you want to be part of her sex harem?

>> No.53799757

>>53799705
Because it’s a prompt for writers.

>> No.53799834

>>53799475
This but the knight is Noel

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>>53799705
since the idea is clearly inspired by spanish-muslim fights, i thought that the idea of (you) being disgusted by them would make a nice contrast by the end, where you have secured yourself a dynasty in both the queen and her astrologist

>> No.53800004

>>53799907
>queen and her astrologist
Who?

>> No.53801574

You should live.

>> No.53801617

>>53799475
>>53799907
so you are El cid?

>> No.53801623

>>53801574
If you want it to live then say something instead of just making a post whenever it's about to be bumped off.

>> No.53801664

>>53801574
are you actually incapable of letting the thread die or something? I can’t fanthom wasting hours of my life to just bump a thread when it’s all but dead.

>> No.53802127

>>53801664
NTA but it's actually pretty easy, just keep the tab open on your browser while you're doing something else and take a look for half a second every so often.

>> No.53802159

>>53802127
Incapable. Got it.

>> No.53802195

>>53802127
Don't know why you're doing this. Thread is dead as fuck. So you're just wasting time.

>> No.53802361

I'll write a story for the Rumble! An idea came to me that feels promising even if I'm not very experienced.

>> No.53802497

>>53793713
Oh hey I remember this fic. In retrospect this reads more like a proof of concept rather than a proper one-shot since it kind of just zooms to the necessary scenes rather than actually showing how their relationship got to be that way since that would basically entail writing a slowburn fluff/romance about talking care of fubuki in the time it takes for her to recover.

>> No.53802835
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>>53802361
Go for it, anon; I wish you good luck

>> No.53802916

>>53802195
>>53802159
You fuckers are either dense about how general threads work, retarded, or actually trying to kill the general because letting the thread die just accelerates the flaws of being an anonymous 4chan thread while disjointing discussion of ideas and stories that get released while the board is zooming like this.

>> No.53803067

>>53802916
Try actually starting discussion rather than post:
>live
>You should live.
>Bump
Because if that’s all you’re going to do, then let the thread die.

>> No.53803224

>>53802916
>Actually trying to kill the general because letting the thread die just accelerates the flaws of being an anonymous 4chan thread while disjointing discussion of ideas and stories that get released while the board is zooming like this.
A new one is literally made within minutes. I don't understand this argument. And the new thread is going to link the old thread. So the only issue here is if the anon in question are that lazy that they can't bothered to click on the link for the old thread.

>> No.53803316

>>53802361
Ganbatte!

>> No.53803347

>>53802916
Yeah, safe to just assume that whoever posts like that is the third thing you said
>>53803067
It's important to keep posting just to keep the general afloat so that, eventually, actual discussion can take place. The board's been oddly fast for a week now so it's even more important
>>53803224
In my opinion, having new threads with low IP counts all the time creates the impression that barely anyone comes to /wg/

>> No.53803576

>>53803347
>having new threads with low IP counts all the time creates the impression that barely anyone comes to /wg/
The only time I see this as an issue is when the thread is made at night, other than that, letting a new/fresh thread breathing room fixes that.

>> No.53803768

>>53803576
Exactly. And if this specific thread dies now and a new one is made, there might be barely anyone to bump that new thread later

>> No.53804110

>>53803576
>>53803768
Don’t know what time zone you idiots at, but it’s like 5:20 PM for me. So if the thread dies within the hour, I’ll still be here. Anything past 10:PM and I leave.

>> No.53804379

>>53804110
Eastern, so yeah

>> No.53804553

>>53804379
nobody cares about easterners. I thought I was talking to a midwesterner or something. Fucking hell, no wonder you think we have low-IP at night.

>> No.53804641
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>>53803224
This thread gets bumped 10+ times a day. What kind of autism do you have that makes you think remaking the thread 10+ times a day is better than saying bump a few times until someone has something to share?

>> No.53804728

>>53804641
what remaking 10+ threads a day? A thread dies early and the new thread usually last a day or two.

>> No.53804743

>>53804641
>remaking the thread 10+ times a day
That never happened. So I don't know why you're lying about it.

>> No.53805151

>>53804728
>>53804743
It's called a hypothetical you absolute fucking smooth brains. Imagine no one bumps, no one puts up a lewd image on page 10. The thread would have to keep getting remade again and again every 30 minutes because no one wanted to keep it alive.
At this point you fuckers are either patronizing us while trying to drive people off or you're actually retarded.

>> No.53805154

For a thread about literature, reading comprehension is sometimes sorely lacking here.

>> No.53805155

>>53804743
If no one bumped it, like you want, it would always die lol. Are you too low IQ to understand hypothetical scenarios?

>> No.53805203

>>53805151
>Imagine no one bumps, no one puts up a lewd image on page 10. The thread would have to keep getting remade again and again every 30 minutes because no one wanted to keep it alive.
Or you know, you can try and discuss something instead of resorting to that.

>> No.53805535

>>53805203
I am but flesh and blood. Some days I only have the energy to talk about Fubuki's ass for 22 hours.

>> No.53806420

I'm really horny

>> No.53806854

>>53788164
Botan being Fubuki's mom just feels wrong. Like I guess they're both white haired but there's something wrong about a lion giving birth to a fox.

>> No.53806865

>>53802916
This. Bumping has been part of 4chan since its creation. I don’t know why people are trying to change that.

>> No.53806981

>>53805203
That would require the people who complain about bumping, and the people who bump to read from the archive or what's been recently anchored. There's a wealth of scenes to talk about and you can also bring up an older prompts as well. Even if it's just a simple sentence, it can spark something more.

>> No.53807090
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>>53806865
Seems like just a poorman's attempt at doomposting to me. The antibumpers are really rabid and just claim the thread should die. I bet they ain't so quick to throw that gauntlet down when it's their oshi's general. I may also be biased since I really enjoy this thread, but it's much better to keep it up on the catalog than one of the many bait threads that shitheels try to stir up trouble with through the day.

>> No.53807484

>>53806981
When people here admit that they don’t watch streams because they’re too lazy, that should tell you something about this general.

>> No.53807615
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>>53807484
That's just a meme though ain't it? If you aren't watching streams, how would you even get here? The streams are our lifeblood for this stuff. You don't get an idea to write about Suisei trying to seduce her own nobleman brother wearing a maid outfit because he's been having wardrobe malfunctions for the new peasant maid with a huge dumpy without watching a stream or two.

>> No.53807620

>>53807484
I watch streams.

>> No.53808887

>>53807615
I hope it's just a meme.

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>>53807615
>>53808887
>"Anon" answered the dying man. "To tell the truth, I never watched Hololive or Nijisanji."

>> No.53809185

>>53807090
it's a shame we don't have more stories about Iroha. She goes so underappreciated.

>> No.53809266

>>53809185
Why don’t you write about her then.

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>>53809185
I agree. That's why she's going to get a few segments all for her in my story at some point. I adore this dorky samurai.

>> No.53809340

If I write a scene where a character is talking in a lisp, should I "translate" it or just leave it as is.

>> No.53809365

>>53806865
>>53807090
I'm not with the doomposters but I also get quite irritated when I see a mere "Bump". It takes like 12 seconds of thought to attempt to start a discussion. Even something vapid that only gets one or two halfhearted (You)s is better than dickall

>> No.53809433

>>53809340
I would say leave it as is, and have the narrator describe him or her as having a lisp
Though in truth I'm also a fan of translating it for effect, especially if that character is the only one who has it and it's one of their defining traits

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53809438

>>53809365
Be the change you want to see in the world bro. It all starts with (You).

>> No.53809511

>>53809438
It could also start with (you), so I don’t know why you’re shirking responsibility.

>> No.53809530

>>53809185
I have a WIP in the back burner about visiting your country bumpkin cousin Iroha.
And of course, incestous sex ensues.

>> No.53809578

>>53809185
I tried doing a story where (You)'re a knight and (You) defeat her in battle (because knights would win against samurai) then plunder her.

>> No.53809767

>>53809340
Just mention it once or twice. This is fanfiction, so most of the people who read it probably know what her voice sounds like anyway.

>> No.53809872

>>53809266
why don't you shut up?

>> No.53809893

>>53809578
>(because knights would win against samurai) then plunder her
So you would be a knight-pirate that won a fight against a ninja-samurai?

>> No.53810365

>>53809872
It's a valid advice, don't wait for others to do it, when you can do it yourself

>> No.53811106

>>53807615
I mean in theory there's a pipeline of someone coming from a gacha game crossover to fanart to fanfiction but I don't believe anyone would start writing like that without doing any sort of extra research. Unless they're somehow entirely writing off of cliche smut plots and surface level characteristics you're not exactly going to go far in your writing.

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>>53730582
After watching a youtube tutorial by an indian man, you gain the ability to read minds.
Is there where you learn that the laid back and calm anya wants to be stuffed like a pastry

>> No.53815085

>>53813853
Anya turned into bread?

>> No.53815109
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>>53813853
>tfw she read your YouTube history

>> No.53815157

>>53815085
>"thank fuck no one is reading my mind and doesnt know im a loaf of sourdough bread"

>> No.53815473

>>53813853
this concept works better with a few more chuubas and the inability to control what mind are you reading
>Marine and Anya in the same Room. Its looping the TAKESHI SEEEEEEEEEEEEX audio
>Senchou leaves
>Takeshi sex.mp3 keeps playing but not as strong

>> No.53815661

>>53815157
It turns out Anya wasn't a dagger at all, she was actually a magical loaf of bread shaped like a dagger the entire time.

>> No.53815963

>>53815661
what if every chuuba was bread and they had to bake you for discovering the gluten conspiracy

>> No.53816393

>>53815963
They're actually all potato bread because they're v-"tubers".

>> No.53816943

>>53816393
Ina?

>> No.53816959

>scene comes together in my head while taking a shower
>hurry to sit before PC
>Nothing comes out

>> No.53817229

>>53816959
Okay?

>> No.53817540

>>53816959
Write on your phone like a normal fanfiction writer.

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>>53730582
Okayu joined some weird tacticool operator LARPing club in high school as a joke. It was fun, and her feline senses and reflexes helped them win a few airsoft matches, but what becomes clear in her adulthood is that it was secretly an MK ULTRA type experiment and she sometimes gets activated for assassinations and the like.

>> No.53817932

>>53817545
What activates her kill mode? a word? an image? being denied food? ear scritches?

>> No.53818232

>>53817545
So the Manchurian Candidate but for chuubas?

>> No.53818403

>>53817932
You have to pet her three times and then say "okayu, time to play"
you find this out in the worst way possible

>> No.53818559

>>53817932
Her kill mode is activated by receiving a jelly filled donut disguised as an onigiri. Once that baked treat enters her gullet she'll cough out the her mission details in a hairball and start the killing.

>> No.53818712

>>53809185
I’m desperately searching for excuses to fit her into any of my stories right now. I think I’ve found one, but she’ll have to be the girl that loses

>> No.53819857

So. How do we rework the prompt archive? Last time we talked about how only prompts that generated talk should go there.
Should it be renamed to a bounty board? The Prompt Library? It would help new writers or those that are stuck if they want to pop in and take a crack at it while also allowing multiple takes at one prompt

>> No.53819896

>>53819857
>So. How do we rework the prompt archive?
It's perfect as is. For fuck sakes move on to something else already.

>> No.53820333

>>53819896
man you must be scrapping the literal bottom of the barrel for being a contrarian if you are defending the prompt archive

>> No.53820465

>>53819857
I don't think it needs changes in itself, just more promotion of its chief use when detailed prompts come up. A name change might facilitate that, of course.

>> No.53820504

>>53820465
man you must be scrapping the literal bottom of the barrel for being a contrarian if you are defending the prompt archive

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>>53797341
I'm kinda going for a 'human supremacy anti-theist' thing, but I can see how it looks more like he's just ranting and raving. I'll definitely make some room for him to better explain his views

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I dreamt about nothing!!!

>> No.53822901

>>53819857
I think the system needs a rework entirely. Unfortunately I can't really think of a way to salvage it outside of effectively turning the prompt archive into something like the regular archive except you submit outlines and idea compilations to it. I.e stuff like fujocast or greentext collaborations.

>> No.53823080

>>53822856
Great >>53730517

>> No.53824583

>>53821932
Heh, I got more of a schizo thing from MC as well (and from mumei). Kinda reminded me of Lee H. Oswald. Also made me curious about how the holos convinced everyone they were gods if you can just shoot them, excited to see where you take this.

>> No.53824637

>>53823080
Just report him, you stupid dipshit.

>> No.53824981
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So do we start the mass shilling campaign for the contest now?

>> No.53825004

I was browsing the prompt archive and found interest in the one about Mio and the hunter living in the woods. It was something like:
>while checking the traps you set up for gathering game, you find that a big black wolf has stumbled into one of them. It is hostile at first, but you manage to calm it down / feed it / set it free and both of you go your merry way. A few days later a mysterious black haired beauty shows up at your doorstep.
I like the idea but I‘m missing something to make it less generic while keeping it fluffy. Any suggestions?

>> No.53825033

>>53821932
Yeah, I just don't see why he thinks their existence will end the world, I guess. They didn't seem to be doing anything that bad, depending on your opinion of Mori's music. Like if you said that Fauna inspired everyone to stop hunting and then deer took over the entire state of Idaho or that Kronii put every magician out of business with her next level time stop card tricks, I could naybe understand where he's coming from.

>> No.53825057

>>53824981
And be the new vtwbg? No thanks.

>> No.53825115

>>53825004
It's literally just Little Red Riding Hood. The wolf becomes a grandma and then the hunter has to penetrate her to get a kid out of her belly.

>> No.53825316

>>53825033
Would YOU trust 10 women to have all that power?

>> No.53825512

>>53825316
I guess the mystery here is what that power is exactly, the only power revealed atm is that the watson watch works.

>> No.53825566

>>53825316
Wouldn't council and IRyS have their powers if they were on earth or not? So would myth but myth doesn't really have any calamity tier powers besides Ame, who already lost hers lol.

>> No.53825600

>>53825004
Typically, those kinds of stories (the Swan Maiden) end with the man finding out the woman's secret and the woman disappearing. Maybe have the climax be using your hunter prowess to find Mio and bring her back?

>> No.53825645

>>53825566
Silly, Ame is like dr. Who, you think the power is from the wacky gadgets but actually it's just god tier cleverness and power of friendship.

>> No.53826805

>>53825115
Okay that 'Little Red Riding' thing is just making me think of Subaru being your niece/daughter that's coming to visit who finds your new wife strange and suspects everything she does.

>> No.53826901

>>53826805
"Oi, Miosha. What big eyes you have."
"Subaru, we're anime characters."

>> No.53827919

>>53825645
That sounds lame. Glad I never got into Dr. Who.

>> No.53827949

>>53827919
>power of friendship
>lame
motherless behaviour

>> No.53828057

>>53816943
no

>> No.53828066

>>53825057
This.

>> No.53828069

>>53816959
What did you want us to do about it?

>> No.53828086

>>53816959
Just use your phone for those moments of inspirations.

>> No.53828111

>>53809161
>That image
I'll believe it

>> No.53828117

>>53825645
>power of friendship
Ame convinced Myth and Council to save the world through the power of lesbian sex?

>> No.53828121

>>53815085
Would be pretty funny

>> No.53828124

pushing it to 310 with botting i see

>> No.53828137

>>53825115
I hate myself for not seeing it.

>> No.53828145

>>53828117
I'd read it

>> No.53828159

>>53828121
It would be, yes.

>> No.53828208

>>53828124
What the hell does he gain by doing it? It's so blatant yet so confusing.

>> No.53828257

>>53755603
Yes, thank you. :D
>>53755711
Yes, kinda?
Concidering there is also Bae fic in the Kronii archive is posible some are here.
Comments about it show i wasnt of the mark, but seems to be abandone.
I just stumble unto it when begining to brouse /vt/ and find it quite neet group adition.
So, seeing a Bae theme fanfic treath wonder why it isnt mentio or included in the Bae general. Specially as this is the first time i stumble upon you all, not easy to find.

>> No.53828260

>>53779132
Understandable. Must suck to lose all of your progress and to have to start anew.
It's saddening to hear, but I'm at least glad you gave it a shot and can only hope you'll consider giving it another one at some point.

>> No.53828307

New thread
>>53828188

>> No.53828487

>>53828257
Are you having a stroke?
If you want to compile all the bae fics for your general you can do it yourself. You can Ctrl F to find them both on our archives and clockgen's ones.

>> No.53828702

>>53825600
I'd adore to read that ngl, the crane wife is one of my favorite tales

>> No.53828709

>>53806854
Why not big sister, or aunt?
Aunt have been unapreciated on writing from old times TwT

>> No.53828874

>>53813853
Wow, the rare anya post! :O
What about "You re staff, and can read minds, found Anya is the most perverted of all, now during a recording sesion need to keep profesionalism while this pervet is bonbarding you"
No smut, just rounchy, funny rounchy
Can be done with several characters, but anya fit the most being a literal shortstack but her demeanor is so pasive.

>> No.53828925

>>53825004
Really think there's some great potential in this prompt. Mio fics sre always gold but this one really feels like it'll have some meat on its bones for hoe you could play with the dynamic

>> No.53828976

>>53824981
Soon, maybe not quite yet.

>> No.53828988

>>53825004
Wilf is the one coming back.
Becomes pet
Because is wild it comes and goes.
Realize is pregnant
One day come back to pregnant woman givin birth.
Papa story begin!
Fluff, wholesome, romance <3

>> No.53829111

>>53828487
Yea, i get that. Tankhs anyway.

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