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Story anchor. Gimme.

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Story recap!
There were 2 stories posted last thread because OP is a fag.

First Train and Kafka Stop 19 and Stop 20: >>55080286
tags: anthology series, (you), Suisei, underage sex

HoloFantasy - Chapter 7, Pt. 7 ~ Distant Longing: >>55085530
tags: fantasy, series, Coco, Polka, Marine

/VT/ WRITING RUMBLE STORY ANCHOR
Reply to this post with your contest submissions.

Submissions are now open, and close on 08/25. Rules, submitted stories and other information can be found at:
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why'd the thread get capped? Because of earlyfag?

Whew. I hope I baked that right.
>>55100015
Don't know. You'd think they would have deleted it a lot earlier if they were going to. It seems kind of random to just axe it out of the blue.

>>55100102
Trannyjannies gonna trannyjanny

>>55100015
Taking a hard guess I think the janny saw the similarities of the thread edition name (btw we should probably vary the contest edition names to make sure they don't delete on reflex) to the dozens that the earlyfag shat out during his schizo moment.

>>55099025
>Do you mean the actual Rance or HFanon?
The actual Rance. Referencing their past lives.

>>55100445
Ah, those good ol jannies taking action ten hours later when the situation is already resolved.

>>55101080
A tale as old as 4chan

>>55099980
>>55080286
>Stop 19
Ooh Suicest.
The narration for this felt odd. Lots of 'Telling' rather than 'Showing'.
As for the fetish. Not something I'm in to but damn that felt weirdly tense. Overall meh on it being hot but a wow on it being interesting.
>Stop 20
Man you really can't get away from trying to tell a story with the intersexual thing can you. Unlike like the last one this is a more solid meh.

>>55101942
I can sorta see why you feel that but I dunno. Didn't really feel too much different to how I usually write these. Maybe it's just how it came off.

I'm glad I got the tension right. That was I was aiming for.

like I said, everything from here on gets a lot weirder. I've reached the end of the stuff that I can write that's more "normal" as normal as underage sex can get anyway. When I said it was gonna get weird, I wasn't just referring to the D word. I know people aren't sold on it but it's something I can write.

You taste that? That’s some artisanal bread right there. Isn’t it fucking delicious?

requesting a fic of Shiori archiving the details of her Goth GF impregnation sex by anon, that is, (You).

>>55102872
What the hell are you on about

>>55103830
I think he's talking about the thread being made by someone not using a bot to do it.
>>55103093
It's a good idea, but prompts/requests should be anchored to the prompt anchor (55099859).

>>55103830
He's talking about the thread you AIDS-infested nigger.

>>55103920
Calm down, Sasuke.

>>55098463
Yeah, I definitely agree with you there. I was struggling with that one for a bit and the ending could've been a better chapter end. But I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for providing the pic, it made me laugh.
>>55092700
I hope it's good when it's finished. I've been thinking about stuff I want to write for months and even set up a YT channel so I can upload tracks I want to feature at some point without needing to resort to catbox. Unused audio: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pUeXRD5OdDU&feature=youtu.be I wanna do it right when it gets to it. Thank you for reading and enjoying it!

>>55099859
Requesting a fic about Shiori starting an online archive of chuuba fanfiction before she debuted.

>>55103897
i already did.

>>55104579
Oh, my bad. But since there's no prompt recap from the last thread anymore, reposting them from time to time (ideally with additional discussion/details) and submitting them to the prompt archive might work better than it used to.

shion owes me sex

>>55105472
Well go collect your debt then

>>55099980
Rip that Holofantasy chapter. Jannies couldn’t handle it.

>>55105605
the next time she calls me kimoi in her bratty child voice

>>55105605
This stupid fucking brat... exposing her tummy to adult... she needs correction....

>>55105910
>7 year long hiatus return chapter destroyed by someone throwing a molotov at the bookstore in passing

>>55100015
Probably the OP image, I've been banned for borderline images like that before

>>55109929
>borderline
you could straight up see irys' tits

Grab a random fic from the archive and share your thoughts
>Speaker of the word of N
This is a reference to some old stream incident right?
Man, our standards for archive worthy stuff back then were kind of low.
>Sakura-tinted Glasses
I still vaguely remember this but sure let's give it a reread.
Kind of meh. I know I'm not really the shipping kind of guy but micomet + suicopath kind of anti synergize with each other.
I vaguely remember saying this back then too but this entire fic felt like it was just setting up the concept of micomet in the zombie apocalypse with a zombified miko and doesn't really go anywhere with it. Like the thing could fit in as an introduction of Suisei as a villain in a post apocalypse fic with a hidden 'love'. Other than that the fics okay.

>>55110159
Let's try it again at the 250 post mark, with a more safe image then.

>>55110159
oh shit you're right I totally didn't notice that

Fanfics up!

>>55110159
Holy shit that thumbnail really hid that huh?
You could also see some pink from Bae's as well.

>>55099859
ah i was supposed to quote this, ok here it is. >>55103093

>>55107924
So this is how it feels to watch the library of Alexandria burn...

You know, that just urges me to back up my fics on google drive or a usb.

Also

What fics would you recommend for someone who really needs something sweet and happy to read? Like, only top of the notch fluff, and hopefully involving Polka.

>>55111765
A Day at the Dentist with Polka

>>55111765
>What fics would you recommend for someone who really needs something sweet and happy to read?
Have you tried Paradise Lost?

>>55111974

>>55112053
Did you enjoy it?

>>55111974
Middle-aged scat fetishist-kun was pretty happy after Fubuki ate the long burgers, but to be fair, I wasn't because Fubuki is precious and I don't want her to shit herself in an alleyway.
Anything else?

>>55111765
Cross Cultural POLlination is only in the hard archive but is great

>>55112180
Unhealthy Addictions. It's really sweet.

>>55085530
>HoloFantasy - Chapter 7, Pt. 7 ~ Distant Longing
That was just a very awesome read dude. The narrative was perfect for the tone you were going for, and your imagery is always crystal clear. The one way confessionals each of the main girls had was so sweet and heart felt, I really felt the weight of their bonds. I was really having my heartstrings pulled during Polka's bit. Coco's was a delightful mix of somber planning and her usual fiery strong nature.
The foreshadowing you got going on is really inciting too!
I can't wait to see how you work with HoloX. You're more than likely going to get to their big reveal WAYYYY before I do in my own story.
It's no secret you've been having your share of struggles, and while there's little we can do as an anonymous image board to help with any of that, just know that your stories make this one reader pretty happy, and you continue to be an inspiration to myself as well as many others I'd wager. Keep doing the best you can, and everything that is owed to you will come.

>>55111765
My Girlfriend Polka is a cute story with some smut in it. A Down Day With Low Pressure Polka. HoloFantasy may not always be super sweet when to comes to the fennec, but it's got some good payoffs. I'll also just shill my own stuff since I tend to put in some fluff with Polka almost every other chapter.

>>55109929
Note to bakers -- no coombait OPs.

>Write a great chapter/fic
>Feel that I've peaked
>Don't want to sully what I wrote before, because I know that it won't be as good.
How do I get over my fear of mediocrity?

>>55113474
Balls. Went to shill and forgot the title. HoloJourneys.

>>55099802
Hey I'd like to suggest an edit for the rentry.
>>>/vt/thread/55045522
isn't a duplicate made by the earlyfag it was the actual thread we used before this.
Think you may have added that accidentally rentry maker.

>>55113541
You kick that fear in the teeth. You never know how good it'll be till you create it and give it life. Every installment, every iteration, is its own thing. You can never truly peak unless you stop wanting to keep moving forward and improving. Your limits are only realized if you let them hold you down. Even if you feel like your next piece is not as good as the last, feel pride in that you tried and made something with all your heart. You can then reflect on the differences between the two, and likely find things you enjoyed you did better on the newer part, and things you want to replicate from the old. From there, you can begin to cook an even greater piece of literature. I know you won't let that fear hold you back, so go kick some ass.

>>55113915
I'm going to use this post to throw in my own suggestion, but I don't think we need to be that on the nose about OP being a faggot. It literally being in the OP post seems over the top.
Also as I said last thread, I think >>55100001 the contest anchor should be near the top.

Shion deserves to be bullied and not sexually.

>>55114401
>replace one of Shion's nuggets with a deep fried Carolina Reaper
>Cries long after the heat wears off because it was the only thing she had to look forward to that day

>>55113541
You take that fear, look at it straight in the eye, and shoot it. Shoot it in the goddamn face.

>>55114745
please don't make shion cry

>>55099859
Aggressively trying to impregnate all of Area15

The OP faggot stuff (especially in the actual title post) is too much imo, and I don't think a bot would have any problem calling itself a fag. All that does is polarize newcomers. Personalised filenames is not foolproof either. I think I have an easier way to ensure the bot doesn't take over.
Every time a new thread is made, we put a link to it in the old thread right? While the bot would just say
>New thread >>XXXXXXXX
and then leave, we can make the post linking the new thread personalised instead. If you're baking, tell us about a story you wrote and how you feel about it in hindsight then link the new thread in the same post. If the earlyfag tries to use a random story, the actual author can call him out and prove ownership via changing a word on the document that contains the story. And if the post linking the new thread talks about an obscure, 5 word greentext from over two years ago we know that's bullshit.
It might seem like a bit of effort but I'm all for kicking the guy out after the shit he pulled. I'm 90% sure he switches IPs, so it's more than likely he's already back.

One more thing. Am I the only one who sees the fatal fucking flaw in havng a copy paste rentry for the OPs? That makes things way harder for us to know if it's a bot because we'll be expecting to see the same OP every time. Why not have the baker make his own OP, anchor and prompt anchor each time to further personalise everything and make it impossible to be automated?

>>55115621
>Why not have the baker make his own OP, anchor and prompt anchor each time to further personalise everything and make it impossible to be automated?
I wouldn't go that far, but maybe something like a brief recap of the last thread? Like-

>Previous thread: >>12345678 - Featuring a new Polka smut fic and some discussion over how hags suddenly become good at all forms of oral sex when they hit thirty, regardless of experience

>>55115621
Maybe it's just a my opinion but I thought the problem the earlyfag was less with the early threads specifically (especially now that we're going with thread approved early threads instead) and more because leaving it in the hands of one guy has consistently lead to it falling in control of one schizo rather than by what the thread wants. The rentry fixes it since it will at least ensure its being made by one of us while specifically spiting the one guy that's been fucking with us for years.

>>55114745
I was actually thinking of that bully fic that got dropped but this works too since it makes Shion cry.
But do you know what else I want to see despite being disgusted by it? Shion being glued to the toilet and there's no toilet paper in the toilet and she's just had a messy dump.

>>55116543
That sounds ok, I'll be sure to personalise them all whenever I make it though.
>>55116725
I've got no problem with early threads, this is all just to out the schizo who was controlling them.
>The rentry fixes it since it will at least ensure its being made by one of us while specifically spiting the one guy that's been fucking with us for years.
As I said, I really don't think playground insults will be what causes him to leave. He won't have any problem being called a fag if he gets to fuck with us. Also, I don't mean this in an inflammatory way, but how does creating that rentry ensure it's being made by a /wg/ regular? The schizo can easily just access that rentry and update his script using whatever is in there. If we go with my method and force whoever is baking to tell us about a story they wrote, that ensures he can't make one without being called out.
That is, unless he's AA. Which would shatter us.

>>55117460
What if someone who isn't a writer wants to bake?

>>55117687
I don't see how that would be a problem if the posts look as they should.

Hell, back in /int/ I used to bake for /fr/, and I didn't even speak french.

>>55113541
A more complete body of work has an inherent advantage over a less complete ones. Even for stories/series where the ending isn't the best part you wouldn't want it to just have no ending at all.

>>55117793
I mean they wouldn't be able to tell us about a story they wrote if they haven't written any.

>>55117940
Maybe they can tell us about something they read?

>>55099859
Turning any chuuba into a loli and giving them headpat correction

>>55114401
This brat deserves to get bullied sexually and nonsexually. Shit like belly punching while cumming inside her.

>>55118472
Ryonafag pls

>>55118462
Do they keep their memories or do they revert to kids?
Imagine turning mr Koro into a kid and she kicks you in the balls for fun

>>55117687
Ehh, I don't think we lack *that* many writers. There's probably always going to be enough writers around willing to bake at any given time, and if not we can go without a thread for an hour or two. I don't think we'll need to rely on any readers to make the threads, but I guess what >>55118059 said works.

>>55118472
Shion does not deserve having cum flooding her womb. She deserves a condom and then being forced to drink out of it so it can be used again.
Or better yet, have her tied to a chair and have her watch you fuck Aqua instead. At least Aqua wouldn't bully me like what Shion does.

>>55114745
Okay that's too mean. You sickos need help

>>55118462
>>55118798
GOING BACK IN TIME AND TURNING MORI INTO AN AIRHEAD CUTESY PASTEL GIRL TO THE POINT THAT HER PERSONA IS NO LONGER REAPER RAPPER BUT PRINCESS OF THE UNDERWORLD

>>55115621
>>55116543
>>55117460
All right then, I'll update the Rentry and remove the references to homosex in the anchors

>>55118462
I'm imagining this as some weird ritual where you're specifically targeting chuubas in order to collect XX years of life total in order to use it to turn all the hags into lolis. Now it's up to the council of hags to try and stop you before all of them turn into X years old kids.

>>55121735
I'll destroy this man and his twisted ambitions.

>>55121735
the hags are all turned into zoomers and all the zoomers turn into hags

>>55121893
>hag Bae
does not compute

>>55121966
>Hag Bae is constantly out of touch with what kids these days are into
>Also dances tango
MUH

>>55118472
>This brat deserves to get bullied sexually and nonsexually. Shit like belly punching while cumming inside her.
Yeah, consensually

>>55121893
What about the cakes?

>>55121966
>"Ahhhh I getcha! You don't wanna rizz this rat because you got a more...mature taste. I mean I am older than anyone you've ever met...but it's all about how young a girl feels. Am I right? You seem prefer your women to look like they're racing against the clock, I can do that. Ya like em to show the age of wisdom in their eyes, and how their bodies like to take things just a little bit slower now, and not to mention how THICCC those thighs tend to get. Say no more. >Bae transforms into hag bae
Yup. I can get down with this.

>>55121584 (me)
Updated the Rentry with new guidelines based on the discussion earlier in the thread. If there's something unclear or needs to be rewritten, please let me know so we can edit it accordingly. Have a swell day, everyone.

>>55122784
>soft belly hag Bae immediately becomes self concious over her outfit

>>55122726
hey all become femcels like marine

>>55122911
Anon please I already masturbated....

>>55122911
>"I...huh...oh gorsh...this is....how could i wear this?"

>>55122911
Bae would be the type of hag that's really into sports (or dancing in this case) to try and be as fit as they can
but they still have hagness in their body no matter how much they sweat

>>55123693
Reminds me of this.
>Mio twirling around in place and asking you if her old school uniform still fits
>the top's barely long enough to cover the underside of her massive swaying tits
>her soft tummy and love handles slightly spill over the dark blue waistband of her skirt
>the skirt itself is so short that you can see the bottom of Mio's fat matronly ass cheeks jiggle on every rotation
>the tiny white panties are wedged so deep between her lower lips that they're almost invisible, lost in the thick forest of Mio's unshaved pubes
>she pauses and repeats her question, somehow unaware that her stupidly erotic, bodacious milf body could never fit into an outfit that small

>>55123085
Marine has a perfectly healthy and active sex life with someone much younger than her.

>>55124893
>"It fits even better than it did back then."

>>55124955
That's what she wants you to think anon.

>>55124955
Yeah ME.
GOD PLEASE JUST LET IT BE ME.
I WANT TO BE UNDER THE LOVING ARMS OF A MATURE WOMAN SO MUCH.

>>55122911
Ya know that's a really clever way to subdue this chaotic "hag"
>After being relentless and trying to appeal to Anon's version of an ideal woman, bae turns herself into a hag which in fact gets the man's neurons activating.
>Her completely off the wall and boundless energy is suddenly quelled down as Anon begins to admire her new soft form as she prods his mind for outfits that appeal to him
>This rat hag is now tamed. And bred.

>>55125046
Better start learning sword swinging

>>55122911
>>55123693
>>55125341
>hag Bae goes through an internal mid-life crisis, worrying that she isn't pretty anymore. that she's become fat and dumpy, far from the pristine idol she once was
>but feeling you using her tummy as a pillow and nuzzling your cheek against her skin, asking if you can stay like this just a little longer, it starts to feel like maybe she might still be beautiful

>>55125802
this reads less like a hagpost and more of a architectpost

>>55127069
Most hag enjoyers tend to be a low-level architect as part of it. Not for giant building projects usually, but at least for a shack.

>>55127069
>>55127407
As a hag enthusiast, I can confirm that I dabble in lower scale architecture. It makes it a little harder to picture in a setting where all the hags are fighting monsters and evading attacks, but I can at least make a clear picture for who is plush and soft.
That is, before the post adventure time skip where every gal is bred, with children, and perfectly chubby in the right spots.

>>55128456
B-but you're not skipping all the successful breedings and the pregnancies, right?

>>55128609
I wrote 30 chapters of buildup before the first sex even happened. You really think I would skip parts like that?!

Fuck man, The Perfect Day was beautiful. I don't even remember the last time something made me tear up like this.

>>55114745
And then rape?

>>55129452
Yeah, but while Shion's asleep so she won't realize she's pregnant until a few weeks later when she starts to show

>>55128844
Gomen, I just got spooked by the evil "time skip" phrase

>>55129082
Thanks man, shoutout to bird allegories

>>55130322
Don't you worry. There's way more adventure and way more breeding to be done before we do anything like that.

>>55130690
Great! I'm really looking forward to the first pregnancy and the resulting child.

Tell me what kinda mother your favorite chuuba would be.

>>55132186
Suisei would definitely struggle to adjust to motherhood and there would be A LOT for her to learn. However, I honestly think she would make a great mother, a bit clumsy but still a great mother. People who know her, know her as a driven woman but also a kind and caring one, one that is always willing to help. No doubt that her playful side would be a great benefit as well.

>>55132186
She would spend a lot of time playing and laughing with her children because she isn't overly focused on her career and knows how to work smarter, not harder.

>>55132186
I think she would be a very kind one, always doing something for her kids and making sure they're well. Very supportive of their dreams and ambitions also but not afraid to tell them the truth if it comes to it. A bit clumsy and bothersome at points, she'd insist on her kids calling her "Mama" even as they become adults but otherwise a great mom

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA LET ME IN

>>55132186
She'd die during childbirth

>>55132186
She would always do her best to make her children laugh when they are feeling down. She knows she can't erase all the sadness from the world, or keep them from hardships, but she will always be there to support them no matter what happens. She will likely stumble sometimes and not understand why, but she will get up and try again, no matter how many times it takes. If her children want her to teach them something, she will be tickled pink over it and probably get too into it.

>>55132186
>Baffled that she got pregnant
>over prepare during pregnancy, literally imposible to keep her down
>Last month she's a walking nuke of nerves
Then she raises the kid with a lot of love and a bit too much coddling but ultimately leaves them be Also treats every single of the kids achievement as a milestone to be celebrated no matter how small or big

>>55134423
I feel like Suisei would try hard in motherhood at least at first, if only because she has a strong sense of sincerity, so her husband would need to guide her along and maybe pull her back at times.

>>55138232
I love the idea of trying to wrangle her autism to have her understand the concept of something being heartfelt and meaningful without being insanely high effort

>>55139578
>You mean just brusing her hair will make her happy?
>... I don't get it

>>55138232
Oh yeah 100%. Suityan doesn't have the best record of even taking care of herself.

>>55122820
Thanks Anon.

>>55134818
Hagyame...

>>55136405
Lmao, I think Subaru would have an easier time compared to some of the holos. Her hips aren’t that bad looking. If her RFA streams are anything to go by though, the hospital will be very loud while she pushes the baby out.

>>55113474
It gives me fuzzy feelings that My Girlfriend Polka continues to get occasionally recommended despite being lite-architecture. Even not necessarily going as far as whales, plush girls enable a lot more intimacy and textile sensations in bed

>>55142348
Fatfags are disgusting. Imagine glorifying self-desctructive behaviour and a total absence of discipline.

>>55143112
Not glorifying it, it's unhealthy and fat acceptance movements are cringe. I simply sexualize it

>>55143112
The same could be said of many fetishes. Maybe even vaginal sex itself

>>55143112
t. fatty

>>55130690
All the HJ ideas around breeding and the new girls you developed in conversations in the last threads sounded really good. I hope they all get remembered and make it into the story, if feasible!

>>55145776
Which new girls did I develop? I'm having a massive brain hiccup. I don't want to possibly lose good stuff, so what what was all that?
Yes, as a male hag this happens sometimes, especially after I work out hard.

>>55147117
There was some Advent and Lamy (who isn't in HJ yet) discussion! Probably more but I can't check right now..definitely can relate to the forgetfulness. You could try saving all the HJ discussion you enjoyed for yourself, for inspiration or as reminders. It's what I do with prompt discussion important to me that I might need a lot of time later

>>55148611
I honestly don't remember any of that, I'll have to dig through the threads and see. The stuff about advent I've kept in my hat so far, aside from the bit about after Kiara chokes the shit outta one of them and they squirt all over the floor, she bows out and cusses Anon who only sees the situation he's just been assigned to handle an absolute jackpot.

>be me
>in therapy
>some sort of bullshit happened in the office so we had to do it over zoom
>doing therapy over zoom is shit so we just shot the shit
>tell her I'm writing a book (it's a SFW fic and she doesn't know about vtubers)
>she says its cool and asks me to read her a bit
>I read a small passage to her
>she sorta just goes quiet and when she's saying what she liked it was all a bunch of vague half-hearted compliments that wasn't even specific to what I read

o-oh... th-thanks...

>>55151795
>Not having a close friend who will read your smut and give you his honest opinion.
I showed my fics to one of my IRL friends. Told me he busted a good nut to it.

>>55151795
Don't let it get ya down. As your therapist she might have been hyperfocusing on finding central themes or tells to your own behavior to possibly expand on.

>>55151795
What did you show her?

>>55148611
Took me a few since there were all those schizo threads to weed through, but I found and remembered the part you were talking about. The primal mass breeding session. I just didn't see that last bit near the end of that thread about Lamy, which I like. Some of the other advent stuff jogged my memory too. I have a huge ass text file currently where I keep all my notes that I either drum up inspiration from here, or on my own. I also use it for chapter outlines. I used to delete my previous chapter outlines, but now I like to keep them, but the text file is getting too big. It takes a while to scroll down to character specific sections. Thanks for letting me know!

>>55153867
I'm not going to say for fear of people picking on me for it.

>>55153615
Possibly. I dunno. Really came off like she was just trying to spare my feelings.

I'll try to use it to improve but it definitely hurt lol

>>55156431
BBD?

>>55151795
This occurs with anyone you show your work to irl. Truth is, they don't care, they don't like reading, and they especially don't like the way you write.
Even so, every chance they get they'll ask to see your work. It's nonsensical. Maybe they're just trying to be nice

>>55157883
Nta but that might just be your bad experiences giving you that impression. I’ve read excerpts of my stories to friends and coworkers and they’ve been genuinely interested in the concepts. Granted I changed the fics from second person to first on the fly, but I don’t think that would’ve made a huge difference.

>>55156431
I can kinda understand the apprehension, but don't let it deter you. I had a similar situation (almost) just now.
>Wife talking to be about a series she's reading and how a trope she came up that she despises: Main characters getting either power from higher beings, or becoming their champion
>Says she doesnt think theres a point when everyone else can do magic anyway
>lightly explain that it's to give said characters an edge so they dont get jobbed, since they are likely pitted up against forces they dont have the experience or full on skills to handle yet
>she gets it a little bit, but still hates it
>mfw she would give me shit for Nene's powers and possibly even the MC.
But yeah, not gonna let that bring me down. What I wrote kicks ass, and just feels right. Remember what you're writing can kick ass too if it feels right to you. You can even use the hurt you feel to better portray those feelings in your writing, if there's a scene or situation that really calls for that kinda thing. Every experience is an opportunity to grab inspiration. Don't give up bro.

>yfw THAT moment in a fic

>>55158449
Ah, I just dump the full manuscript on them.
Though I think they key phrase is "interested in the concepts". Feels kinda like they talk a big game about being super interested in your painting, but the moment you hand it over they're too busy to look at it. It may sound a bit selfish to demand their time, but I show interest in my friends and families hobbies (attend their dances and presentations, give them praise feedback on their artwork) and I genuinely mean it, but as nice as they are the reciprocity is never returned.
Sorry I'm being so negative, this is just a point of annoyance with me.

>>55160981
>Me aping one of my favorite schizo meltdowns

>>55160981
>In the worst time of my life, about to fucking hang myself
>Holy shit, I should really capture this emotion and put in a story
>No time to hang myself, writing about chuubas is imperative.

>>55160981
I have yet to experience a THAT moment moment

>>55165974
Literally me

>>55160981

>>55099859
Training FuwaMoco to start getting wet at the sound of a bell.

>>55170544
Wosemi when she sees your erection after she's done nothing but look at you funny for two minutes

>>55167297
What would it take for a fic to make you feel like THAT?

>>55160981
>Get to insert a title drop.

>>55173635
>tfw ill never get to do that in a graceful way

>>55175418
Why not?
Your fic title can't be that hard to incorporate

>>55173157
A well-executed plot twist. The emotional climax of a long romance. The cavalry showing up at just the right moment to kick ass and save the day.

>>55176452
I could incorporate half of it, but it loses all the punch that way. It just wouldn't be the same.

>>55177804
Don't be a bitch anon. If you can't fit it in elegantly then jam it in shamelessly.

>>55177804
>And so departed the First Train, and Kafka remained a bug
>Nothing will stand in the way of my HoloJourneys
>I left school will a girl in my arms and countless memories. Oh how I'll miss Cover High

>>55178618
I don't think that would ogey, but there's a potential for something at some point where I could at least have both words in the same sentence I guess.

>>55179053
>I left school will a girl in my arms and countless memories. Oh how I'll miss Cover High
Man could you imagine if this became the last sentence ending that fic.

>>55179775
Yeah, haha, imagine...

>>55113474
I'm glad people like it enough to keep recommending it.
I had fun (co)writing it, and i hope the anon that wrote the original greentext is part of /wg/

>>55156187
I wish I had so many notes that I had to reorganize them. That's impressive

>>55179775
>>55180361
It still kicks the ass of the HoloJourneys one. The Holo prefix is what really keeps me from doing anything delightfully campy like that. Best I could come up with is Koyori telling some hologram she makes that its going on journey, and that still kinda blows.
>>55182408
It needs a real reorganizing soon. There's character traits mixed in between arc notes and future ideas, smut notes in between setting and scene ideas, animal mating habits next to what kind of mothers some chuubas would be, magic ideas, oh and this part about how Suisei will talk to dolls and use her own doll to voice something really fucking gruesome.

>>55183226
That reminds me of the posts about Mio not wanting to be treated as if she had equal rights all the time because she's only partly human.
I really like how much you share with wg and how open to discussion of the characters you are. One day the notes alone will be a library of their own...big, but hopefully helpful too!

>>55183226
>The Holo prefix is what really keeps me from doing anything delightfully campy like that. Best I could come up with is Koyori telling some hologram she makes that its going on journey, and that still kinda blows.
Anon...
You know Holo kind of sounds like Hollow.
You could absolutely fit in the phrase 'Hollow Journeys' somewhere in your fic.

>Finally back from your travels, eh? You look like you grew a lot in the years since you fell in that hole o' journeys.

>>55184438
Holy shit. I didn't know that.
>>55184396
Oh don't worry, the part about Mio persuading Anon to treat her more like an animal since she is in fact part animal is in there. I also just love getting to talk about this stuff and bounce ideas off people, it's just fun. I regret slightly that I would delete chapter notes as I completed them, I started not to do that, which I should compile into their own doc at some point. I at least still have the original note file that contains the outline for the first 7 chapters.

>>55124893
>>55128456
>>55134818
Stop, my penis can only get so hard. also that's a very cute ayame

>>55185317
I don't make notes, but when I'm deleting pages of usable text, I put them in a chaffe document just in case I need them again. Also, first drafts are always completely separate documents from rough drafts, so I'm able to go back and read the important comments I wrote if necessary

>>55186201
When isn't she extremely cute? But I get what you mean.

>>55179053
>>55179775
I've had the final sentence decided on for the past two years. It's only a matter of getting there.

>>55173635
I wish I could come up with better titles.

>>55170546
That's hot as fuck

>>55188967
Is your last sentence: Take cover, high!"
(High is a character you'll introduce in the penultimate chapter)

>>55160981
>when you've spent a lot of time doing delayed gratification and finally get to blow your metaphorical loud at the climax of the story that you've spent a lot of time preparing for

>>55193874
>Highly Awaited Fic immediately ends after a title drop, like the literary equivalent of the Sopranos cut to black.
I would fucking love/hate it if that ever happens.

>>55192593
There are a lot of sexy dog girl tropes that just weren't possible to write with Korone because she's too... independent to play a submissive dog character. Very excited to see what Anon's come up with for FuwaMoco.

>>55194773
The Sopranos cut to black makes a lot of sense, but I don't think it'd work in writing form.

NINISANNI SCENARIO THE AUDITION TAPES!!!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P8d0GyWGjXY

>>55198351
UAAAAAARGH!
I'm getting hyped. Never before had I thought a VN from a vtuber fanfiction thread could suck up so much of my time when this first released, and I'm ready to do it all over again with the sequel. The music almost felt nostalgic, and it's good to see the sense of humour still there. The girls still feel really vibrant and alive in this.

>>55195907
Personally I think it's more from it being harder to see Korone sexually instead of as the funny dog girl. Her accent and demeanour are kind of a big filter like with Miko and Luna. So it all kinda combines into a giant anti-lewd thoughts debuff.

>>55198351
We don’t deserve this much effort.

>>55199596
My, that's good to hear!
I'm glad to hear you're hyped and that the first one meant a lot to you. The sequel should have at least double the amount of content the original did, so I imagine it'll satisfy.
Please hold onto your hype! It give me energy to keep pushing through these ten page rough draft days.

>>55199956
I'll be the judge of that!
And I think you do deserve it, for the record. You guys are so nice!

>>55194166
>Mio when you compliment her youthful appearance

>>55198351
Nice

>>55198351
Nina...

>>55198351
Finana, my beloved stinky imouto...