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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. We’re currently hosting the /vt/ Writing Rumble - Winter Writing War, a friendly competition for the holiday season! The info page & contest archive can be found here: https://rentry.org/VTWRWWW

Check the main archive below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>63222261, where we discussed humilliation, characteristics of furry/half-human chuubas, futa, and other intellectual topics.
/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

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*Yawn*
Story anchor... Give Mooms something to read during her morning routine.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap!
Last thread, Holoshorts received an update with Matsuri.

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CONTEST STORY ANCHOR
For any stories you want to enter for the contest, put them here (on 25 November 2023 like in da rules: https://rentry.org/VTWRWWW))

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>>63341360
Sure, here you go.
https://rentry.org/w5esx2

>> No.63351054

>>63350867
based

>> No.63351067

Mumei is so unbelievably hot. We need more moom stories

>> No.63351095

>>63350867
I expected the link to lead to Shrunken Troubles, I must admit. I was very pleasantly surprised it was not, cute little short story. I liked that you included Fubuki's otaku tendencies.
Anon delivers!

>> No.63351150

>>63350867
Fubuquickie!

>> No.63351243

>>63351067
She's a bit of a noname in /wg/ so far, isn't she?

>> No.63351653

>>63351243
BIG KEK
nice one

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>>63350867
Way to step up and deliver. Kitchen sex is dangerously based.
You fucking titled dropped before I could in my own story, you silly bastard.

>> No.63352004

>>63351781
I like referencing other fics.

>> No.63352285

>>63352004
>>63351781
I'd like to fuck Fubuki while we watch a sex scene of the HoloJourneys TV show.

>> No.63352433

>>63352285
I'd like to fuck Fubuki

>> No.63353150
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>>63352004
You're a cool dude. We all help each other make it!
>>63352285
Would Fubuki take it a step further and get herself cosplay props to use during the fucking?

>> No.63354606

>>63353150
>Would Fubuki take it a step further and get herself cosplay props to use during the fucking?
Fubuki dressed up and acting like Polka would be fun.

>> No.63355559

>>63354606
> Kokoro Connect but with VTubers
Hmm

>> No.63356083

>>63350867
this was unexpectedly really good. i didn't open the story horny but i ended up wanking to it. strong work anon

>> No.63356278

>>63355559
I don't think random body swapping would work as a fic here because the Anon character would just furiously masturbate the whole time.

>> No.63356388

>>63350867
It's a nice scenario, plus short and sweet. But the grammar, word choices and flow could use some work. How can Fubuki bite you while she's lying on the counter and you grabbed her hips?

>> No.63356565

>>63356278
There wasn't just body swapping
There also were full age regressions and I can't remember what else

>> No.63356789

>>63348433
I'm a lot more into humiliation than CC from what I can tell, but even still, there's like, important distinctions in intent. I want to feel like I'm the center of her attention, like even when she's getting her brains plowed out or acting teasing/cruel to me, it's because she genuinely gets turned on more than anything else by my submission and flusteredness. It's strongly at odds with conventional NTR, which is all about the girl gradually weakening her bonds with (You) rather than strengthening them

>> No.63356940

>>63350630
it feels like all out war right now...

>> No.63357005

>>63356940
More of a cold war honestly, nobody really seems all that jazzed for this contest

>> No.63357019

>>63356940
What did (You) mean by this?

>> No.63357113

>>63356789
That's very understandable. I can see the cuck lying on the bed with his limbs bound to the bedposts while his gf is above him on all fours, talking to him and playing with his body while she's getting fucked from behind.
>>63357005
Well, it's not the first contest and not meant to be a big one. But I'm still planning to submit something for it, and the real fun begins once we get to the voting period.

>> No.63358219

>>63350867
cute. short. hot. very cool, anon.
>>63350666
linking to anchor

>> No.63358416

>>63356565
The other one I remember was randomly losing their inhibitions. But the first arc with the body swapping was definitely the peak of the show. That and hearing Sawashiro Miyuki say she masturbates to me (specifically me).

>> No.63359028

>>63358219
Call it the Fubuquickie, please

>> No.63359341

What do anons think of a Doctor Who/Holoverse crossover to continue the legacy of the show that it’s pissed away?
I can envision the premise.

A dimensional rift has opened, and there seems to be only one way through. The TARDIS comes in. Kronii feels a disturbance in time as it careens through the centuries. Without thinking, she strikes it down, sending it on a crash course for a certain moment in time.
Eventually, it crash lands on Earth, in the 21st century, in the middle of Tokyo. A brunette girl comes across it and nervously approaches the knocked over blue box.
Suddenly, the doors spring open, and out flies a mysterious looking man, glowing with golden energy at his hands and face. The girl backs away in shock as the man flops to the street below. As the sirens blare, he staggers to his feet and dusts himself off.
“Blast, knew I shouldn’t have installed that ejector seat…” He notices her. His eyes light up at the sight of something familiar: a human. “Ah, hello there! Who are you?”
The girl, face stricken with concern for the fellow’s strange state, replies, “I-I’m Sora. Tokino Sora. What’s going on with your…?” She gestures to the golden energy, which is intensifying.
He smiles back, a little sad. “Hello, Sora. I’m the Doctor. And… I’m very sorry we have to meet right before this happens.” He clenches his teeth and squeezes his eyes shut. The energy pulses, starting to jet out from his face and fists. A loud shout erupts from his throat as the golden light spews forth from him, a deafening sound like a jet engine accompanying it.
Sora steps back, shielding her eyes. She doesn’t understand this at all. What is she witnessing? She’s seen so many things in her time working for Hololive, but nothing like this!
The eruption goes on for several more seconds, intense like nothing she’s experienced before. But then, his scream goes silent, and everything fades once more. Amid the car alarms and flickering flames kicked up by the crashed box, Sora peeks through her fingers at where the man had stood… only to find a completely different person in his place.
Baffled, she lowers her arms and blinks. “Wh-What?”
The new man blinks back at her, looking as confused as she is. “Erm…” He coughs, and a wisp of golden smoke exits his lips, like hot breath steaming in the air. “Uerph… Not ready, I think…” He looks at Sora through new eyes, and tries his best for an apologetic smile. “Sorry.” And then he slumps to the ground, unconscious.
As sirens begin to blare in the distance, Sora stands paralyzed in front of the crash site. What is going on? What has she been in the wrong place at the wrong time for? But when the wailing of the sirens gets louder, she sparks into to action.
“Right, um…” She fumbled in her pocket for her phone, poking at the first contact in her list. The phone rings a few times, but eventually the line connects.
“Hello?”
Sora takes a deep breath, her eyes fixed on the unconscious man and his blue box. “A-Chan, we have a problem.”

>> No.63359632

>>63359341
I am thoroughly disgusted.

>> No.63359840

>>63359632
Explain

>> No.63359917

>>63359840
Your autism is leaking out everywhere.

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>>63359917

>> No.63360205

>>63359917
Anon, were a general in a Venezuelan hotdog farming forum that is dedicated to writing fanfiction about women pretending to be anime girls.
We're all autistic here.

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>>63359917

>> No.63361186

>>63359917
Where did people like you come from all of a sudden, I thought the last thread felt a little unnatural as well

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>>63361186
Anon who wrote the excerpt here. I understand if people don’t like Doctor Who as of late. Neither do I. I just thought it would be a cool idea to continue the legacy the show once had and mix it with a fantastical world that it would fit into like a jigsaw piece.

>> No.63363989

>>63359987
>>63360205
>>63360322
>>63361186
Crossover fags fuck off.

>> No.63364359

Aight this is the thread.
>>63359341
Wow, this is beautiful.

>> No.63366017

>>63350867
Does this qualify for the contest?

>> No.63366111

>>63350867
>With a conceding side eye, Fubuki gave me a lecherous glance and pushed back against my crotch.

>"I think were low in milk as well..." She murmured as she grinded against me

I stopped reading just to inform you that this snippet caused me to go from 0 to 10. I am now FUCKING DIAMONDS, which is a problem given that I'm at work with nowhere to jerk off.

>> No.63366476

>>63357005
It kinda feels like the host just wanted to force a contest so he could submit an entry himself, that’s what I think anyway. Hardly any effort/creativity went in because the rentry is a straight up copy-paste from the last contest.
But hey, all the power to him I guess. It’s not that I care, I’ll just hold off on entering this one.

>> No.63366638

>>63366476
I don't know, there was active discussion about the rules and categories. I'm happy with what we've got, except maybe the submission system.
Contests don't need a separate anchor, just take all the fics submitted in the contest period and sort them into the appropriate categories.

>> No.63367127

>>63366017
I mean it's a vtuber fic within the word limit so yes. Only problem is the anon that posted it hasn't said anything about if they want it as an entry.
>>63366476
There's not exactly much in the room to be creative for a rules post when the rules are meant to be an incremental change rather than a big systemic one.
>>63366638
Honestly I think the contest anchor is just there to act as a way to say "I want to compete with this entry". It's a legacy from the last contest, but I think it has a purpose especially since this time we're running with word limits.

>> No.63367265

>>63366638
>Contests don't need a separate anchor, just take all the fics submitted in the contest period and sort them into the appropriate categories.
That I’ll have to disagree with. If someone doesn’t want their fic to be submitted to the contest they should have that choice.

>> No.63367492

>>63367265
Hear, hear

>> No.63367693

>>63367127
NTA but it does feel kind of low effort when you’re using the exact same rentry. It’s not about the rules not needing a change but more about giving the contest a fresh look and being creative for those that might view the contest page.

>> No.63367724

>>63366017
Yeah sure, why not.
Call it a Cozy evening in the foxhole.
>>63350867
>>63350817

>> No.63367743

>>63350867
Very short fic, but exactly as long as it needed to be. I'm not sure it's long enough to jerk off to through reading alone - I'm sure a considerable amount of extraneous fantasizing will be required to crack a nut. With that being said, what is there is HOT and I think you should submit it for the contest. It's a great little short.

I snickered AND cringed simultaneously at the HJ reference. Kino.

>> No.63369585

>>63356789
I learned to appreciate humiliation play too, but I'm the opposite, where I want to be disconnected from it entirely while the act is going on. then she teases you after. this way, she can maintain her focus on getting good dick, and then the attention is solely on you when she gives her report, or makes you watch a recording.

>> No.63369667

>>63350867
>Nothing will come out of your Hollow Journeys!
Kino.
>>63367724
Tags?

>> No.63369836

>>63369667
Fubuki, NSFW, fluff

>> No.63369968

>>63356789
So is this take on humiliation from an M perspective? I can only think of it from an S perspective, as in inflicting it. The other side actively turns me off. Of course that’s all through the lens of consensual noncon humiliation

>> No.63370065

>>63359341
I'm not huge into Dr. who (and I watched 2 whole seasons and still couldn't get into it), but I think this could lead to something interesting enough, the misadventures of Dr. Anon and his hololive member companion. passion goes a long way, and if this idea is something you're passionate about you should make it.

>> No.63370072

>>63369968
>consensual noncon humiliation
That's a bit of an obvious oxymoron.

>> No.63370293

>>63370072
Consensual noncon is a thing, anyon

>> No.63370294

What do you call consensual rape? IE a rape fantasy played out by two people who agree on a safeword beforehand.

>> No.63370395

>>63370294
Just rapeplay, no?

>> No.63370408

>>63370294
cnc (concensual non consent), or rape play

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>>63370294
That's just sex.
That's literally just two people having sex.

>> No.63370511

>>63370456
>You guys have rape without the violence? Like two people consenting to get raped?
>...Sir, that's just sex.

>> No.63370530

>>63370294
Theater

>>63370456
It is two people having sex, but two people having sex is not always consensual rape.

>> No.63370610

>>63370456
It's not just sex because you're still handling them violently without regard to their comfort, and your partner is playing into it by struggling, screaming, crying etc.

>>63370395
>>63370408
Just rapeplay, gotcha.

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>>63369585
I didn't mean to imply I prefer being present for the action to reports, but I definitely prefer it to recordings where the girl totally forgets herself to the pleasure instead of making her dialogue with the bull all about her partner.

>>63369968
Yeah, being ordered around really gets to me. I think I may have given the wrong impression earlier when talking about cuck/bull interactions; the thing that I actually don't care for is full-on sex scenes between the girl and cuck with no or minimal cuck presence (totally, not just physical). I tend to quickly skim through that kind of thing in doujins and look for the verbal discussions/reports before and after. Hearing a bull take charge of my girl and dictate what I am/am not allowed to do is also pretty hot, though I prefer most of it ultimately coming through her lips rather than his

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>>63371357
*full-on sex scenes between the girl and bull, sorry. Have another sultry Aki

>> No.63371745

>>63371357
Inch resting. I simply don’t get it though. My penis doesn’t elevate at the idea at all. I only get hard at a woman being submissive. But if it gets you going, then by all means, anon

>> No.63372007

>>63371357
whats your opinion on those weird instances where the bull starts fucking the cuck with the help of the girl?
i know some people get off to that, and even though i dont care about the fetish, im intrigued on what your thoughts are on that particular powerplay

>> No.63372437

>>63372007
NTA but that comes with sissification which I also hate with a passon, either fuck my wife or get the fuck out, you're not here for me, or you shouldn't be anyways. on the toppic, I also hate "cum cleaning" where the cuck is expected to eat her out after the bull creampied her.

>> No.63372496

>>63372007
It doesn't really work for me, but not for the reason you might think. I enjoy similar extreme levels of play like "cleanup", chastity, pegging, findom, etc., but sissy stuff crosses the line because it inevitably escalates to the point where the fag is getting more pleasure from dick than from being emasculated and made to submit. It's liberating in a sense since he can just shut the brain off and feel ecstasy. The despair and denial are essential aspects of it to me.

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I’m perplexed on the Reine short. I know in general what must be done, but I do not know how to do it. Curious circumstances…

>> No.63372916

>>63372549
What if you introduced another character like Ollie or Anya? Hell, you could turn it into an Anya-bullying fic with enough bullshitting

>> No.63372942

>>63372437
>you're not here for me
But anon, you're the only reason I'm fucking this skank anyway.

>>63350714
A male chuuba being your bull solely because he wants to be friends with you, and he has no interest in your girl.

>> No.63373151

>>63372942
who would even be a good fit for that, anyway

>> No.63373216

>>63372916
Bullying Anya or Anya doing the bullying?

>> No.63373281

>>63372942
>A male chuuba being your bull solely because he wants to be friends with you, and he has no interest in your girl.
That sounds fucked up in a way that I can't quite explain

>> No.63373286

>>63373151
I would fucking lose my shit if it was Shien or Axel.
>Big fucking retard
>Has trouble keeping his spaghetti in his pockets
>But women do like them
>Seem like total bros too.

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>>63373151
Here me out ....

>> No.63373349

>>63372942
You jest but these types make for some of the best bulls imo. Already bros, learns you're a maso, wouldn't say no to plowing a hottie even if it's far from top of his priority list, looks for ways to make it as enjoyable for you as possible and strictly adheres to guidelines.

>> No.63373604

>>63373291
>Wait a second... your penis is plastic!
>Shock washes over your bulls eyes, stopping its incessant plowing of your gf Miko
>Turns out that your childhood best friend, Suisei, set Miko up with you in a conveluted plan to get back to you.

>> No.63373748

>>63373216
The former is what I meant there, but you could feasibly do either.

The topic of the conversation naturally drifts to bullying and wedgies. Reine brags she was such a good bully back in the day when the suggestion/SC comes in that she probably could give an atomic wedgie as cartoony as they are. Anya, not wanting any part of it, is motioning to her turkey friend that she's not wearing underwear. Reine sighs and gives one to herself only for Anya to reveal by moving that she is definitely is in fact wearing underwear just like she used to rip off of nerds.

Needless to say, still-atomicified Reine has a lot to talk about for the next while of her stream inspecting what's left of Anya's undergarments.

You can do a lot by introducing another gal to your story if you're stuck

>> No.63374130

>>63372942
>But anon, you're the only reason I'm fucking this skank anyway.
>i don't care, get your rocks off then get the fuck out.
>but...i kinda just wanted to hang out and watch movies with a bro...

>> No.63374147

>>63373604
>Suisei forcing you to hang out and go on "humiliating tasks" (read: dates) with her as part of your cuck duties.
Ah, convoluted romance plots.
I think the only way this would get more convoluted would be if it was suicest and she was actually your estranged sister now "bull".

>> No.63374197

>>63372007
i do remember one fic about that. it was setup as the girl being manipulative, so she convinced the cuck to fuck a few guys, and when he was about to pop, he had the biggest bull fuck him.
IT was done offscreen but i remember the dialogue, both of the cuck and of the bull, being fantastic. The scene finished with the bull kinda snapping to reality and realizing he just plapped a guy, while the cuck was in cloud nine and the girl was fingering herself
i came a bunch

>> No.63374323

>>63374147
Sounds like something I'd write

>> No.63374651

>>63374147
I read a fic once with a futa bull that ended up falling in love with the cuck and they both just ditched her in the end

>> No.63374792

>>63374197
i know im being a bit fruity here but guys snapping out of their homolust after demolishing some bussy is the best.
bonus point if they were teased to the extreme and they dump gallons of nut on the slut

>> No.63375266

>>63374130
>Bull support group
>Chad gyarou speaks up, cigarette in his mouth
>I-I thought we'd watch a movie together or play smash, but I think he only wants me to fuck his girlfriend

>> No.63376079

>>63373748
Well, as soon as my family stops playing the shitty piano for more than 2 seconds, I'll try to write something.

>> No.63376443

>>63375266
>"Everyone...Everyone calls me a fat bastard yknow...so when he reached out to me...i was happy"
>"But now...now i know ill never be anything but...fat bastard"
>He starts criying, CEO boss pats his back

>> No.63376652

>>63375266
>fat guy stands up
>"i'm the janitor of the apartment building of this couple. the husband keeps calling me over to their suite after he leaves for work, and when i get there the wife is usually in loose clothes or not wearing underwear... i just want to do my job..."

>> No.63376744

>>63375266
>>63376443
>>63376652
Guys, I'll say it now: This will make for an EXCELLENT gag doujin

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Contest WIP check.
>words
>genre (optional)
>something you wanna share

Im at 2728 words,14693 characters and my genre is romance

Its fun to come up with city names that keep the setting's country ambiguous as fuck

>> No.63376971

>>63376079
Godspeed, wedgie anon.

>> No.63377219

>>63375266
>Tentacle monster spawns from another dimension
>*Incomprehensible, lonely eldritch sobbing*

>> No.63377376

>>63375266
>Young shota can't keep it in any longer
>I met this lady, super nice woman, while I was shopping
>I'm friends with her son, I mean, were kinda friends, but he only hangs out because I have a lot of toys
>His mom, he doesn't appreciate her, and neither does his dad, she's a really sweet woman.
>So I was over one time and she let me stay for lunch. She cooks really well, really, really well. I don't eat that good at home
>And she called me a good boy...
>Young shota tears up
>And I thought, I thought I found someone who cared for me, and then she slid down my pants!

>> No.63378267

>>63375266
>black guy stands up
>i'm Americana transfer student
>my Japanese not too good
>left America because sex object to white woman
>came to japan full of polite people
>became sex object to japanese house wife anyways...

>> No.63380025

>>63367724
Outta curiosity (and lust), what other smut - if any - have you written, anon?

>> No.63380268

>>63376744
>Wreck-it Ralph but for NTR doujin bulls
>Featuring Sadistic Shota who's a gayleaning bisexual, Tanned Gigachad who actually just thought she was single and feels awful about the whole thing, ugly bastard landlord who's more concerned about getting his rent money because the yakuza are threatening to kill him over gambling debt, and CEO boss who's about to lose his job in a merger

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since that anon making his FE hack and my fourth replay of ENGAGE happened, i think we could make a really cool and chuuni chuuba medieval setting.
Specially if you have really cool titles for the knights
>Shirogane the Bull
>Shiranui the Desert Snake

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>>63380025
I'm auntieanon, so everything that falls under that.

>> No.63381018

>>63380354
>Shirogane the Bull
Who did she cuck to get the title?

>> No.63381369

>>63380268
>"I wanna be more than just a bull! I wanna star in my OWN wholesome slice-of-life romance anime!"
>"It sure must be nice... being the good guy..."

>> No.63381961
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63381961

I managed to get over 3k words done today and more importantly finished a scene that was kicking my ass all week. If I can do it, all you bros can smash your own writing goals too!

>> No.63382621

>>63380360
no wonder

>> No.63384333
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63384333

>>63376809
>1742 words
>Action

Im going to experiment with this one a little for the writing rumble and make something of a chuuni battle Shonen anime.

>> No.63384945

>>63376809
>Words
0, but that will change, hopefully
>Genre
Prostitution and smut
>Something you wanna share.
I made a greentext about it some time ago, might be worth it to turn it into a fully fledged fic.

>> No.63385639

>>63380360
No wonder it was both so good and so short, haha. Bless you.

>> No.63387585
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63387585

>>63350714
Mumei using her powers to give you a werewolf dick and then screaming you to knot her

>> No.63387797

>>63387585
oyur promt does nothing but your pic makes me wondder what prehistoric momei would be like.

>> No.63387898

>>63387797
Your post does nothing for me but your typos make me laugh

>> No.63388524

>>63387797
>"Hey you, do you want the primal spark of prometheus?"
>"chombe chombe...shuna...tuga??
>"Yeah this thing...all you need is to become a werewolf and knot me"
>"mmmmbeleeeee tunga! shoo shoo!"
>"FUCKING LEARN LANGUAGE ALREADY!!"
>"bwolo..."

>> No.63388813

>>63388524
kek that's a fun idea. Mumei gets sent back in time/civilization resets and she has to make everything as it was...except she doesnt know shit
>"And thats' all you can do with electricity"
>"fascinating...how do we make these...electroissity, Oh wise oracle"
>Mumei looks at the romans
>"I dunno...that's like...your job"
>Hard cut to a crucified Mumei triying to bite her restrains off, mumbling something about "that's why she sent the muslims"

>> No.63388934

>>63388524
>tosses a dictionary at cave anon's head
>"here read a book, maybe you'll learn something"
>"uugh?"
>cave anon starts ripping out the pages and eating them
>"NO I SAID READ NOT EAT! CAN'T YOU PEOPLE EVEN READ!?"

>> No.63389599

>>63388934
>"Fuck it. Not even a knot, just take me"
>"Dudh?"
>Mumei gets naked
>Cave anon sniffs her. She doesnt smell like a wet animal and isnt a block shaped cavewoman
>"Eughh"
>"COME BACK HERE! IM A WOMAN TOO YOU STUPID GORILLA"

>> No.63389754
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63389754

>>63350666
Anchoring Holoshorts again with another entry featuring (two of) picrel!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTHQNoyNK1_zHfuT4kP0bJdxTCWMilPc6L1eNFwJYbZVcyspsJFyIkCMQfXT58CGVuoA0oixd_PtCoh/pub

Anya and Reine are hard to write for me...

>> No.63389896

>>63389754
>>63373748
Shit, forgot to mention you anon. Used your prompt for it.

>> No.63389926

>>63389754
Anya is the final boss of Hololive fanfiction. She so quite and demure that it's a little hard to find things to extrapolate into dialogue. Anyhow;

What *is* a nuclear wedgie? and can I proompt you into that being the wedgie AkiRose gets? Mature ladies need immature bullying.

>> No.63390258

>>63389926
Ha. I suppose that’s true. Not a lot of stuffs to extrapolate.

A nuclear wedgie is an atomic wedgie that doesn’t get hooked over the head. It’s not formal terminology (though the former is only “formal” because of a throwaway line in an episode of Friends), but people use it enough. I hate to say I know nothing about Aki. Does that make sense for her?

>> No.63390424

>>63389599
>she bends over and starts shaking her ass
>"here! take it! put your club inside my cave!"
>"oooohu?"
>cave anon curiously approaches
>"that's right big guy, all for you buddy, just give mama what she nee-AGH!"
>cave anon mistook her ass for a giant peach and took a curiosity nibble. but grunted in disappointment and gives up on her.
>"you stupid freaking-" she mumbles curses at the cave man
>"well then! you need that red flower of heat, and i need dick so you don't get what you need till i get what i need!"
>a blanket of snow drops on top of both her and cave anon.
>dawn of the ice age

>> No.63390772
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>>63390258
Oh, so that's it. I think the natural end point for that would just keep pulling vertical until the fabric rips, I feel like in a cartoon the underwear would rip off into one solid piece the bully would hold up to cheers from a crowd
Aki is like a housewife or wine aunt, but she can be a bit of a ditz and daresay yabai type before or after a few Strong Zeros. She's not a prude though so I think a cartoonish playful goofy wedgie would be best for her instead of anything more sexual.
I guess you could hook them over her elf ears too though

>> No.63391207
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63391207

Hope someone remembers this snippet, because this was the plan all along.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/43548387/chapters/129162832

>> No.63391268
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63391268

>>63350714
Holo x Genderswap Holo orgy, with scenes such as
>Noe(M) x Fure(F) + Fure(M) x Noe(F)
>Peko(male) breeding frenzy on all of Usada Kensetsu
>Ollie(F) gets a train run on her by all of ID(Male)

>> No.63391307

>>63391207
I remember this. Like a distant memory, lost to the depth.
What WAS the brown’s name??

>> No.63392731
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63392731

>>63350714
Fic detailing the morning after having wild babymaking sex with your chuuni boss Laplus

>> No.63393014

>>63390772
She has elf ears…? Man, I really don’t know Aki.

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63393168

>>63390772
>>63393014
She does not.

>> No.63393414
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63393414

>>63393168
Oh, they're not full elf ears, you're right. She is only, what, a half-elf right?

>> No.63393653
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63393653

>>63393014
>>63393168
Well, anyway, the length of her ears aren't that important...

>> No.63393931

>>63393168
>>63393414
>>63393653
Losing it bestie

>> No.63394020
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63394020

>>63393931

>> No.63394204

>>63376744
Seconded

>> No.63394267

>>63350714
I’m going to self-indulgently request a wedgie story by someone other than me because the one with A-Chan was genuinely amazing. This time, I’m looking for Lui. Mature hawk lady needs to be humiliated, and wedging is a great way to do it.

>> No.63394306

>>63380354
Ayyyy that's some good ending titles.

I do have Gentle Strength for Noel and uh...nothing yet for Flare. I swear I put ending titles on my ROM...

>> No.63396138
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W'rknratcnter

>> No.63396679

>>63396138
If all rrats were this cute.

>> No.63397091

>>63394267
I'll give it a shot, but I doubt i'll strike gold twice
t. A-chan wedgie greentext guy

>> No.63397157

>>63397091
Bless you anon, Godspeed

>> No.63398562

>>63370294
>mfw people are so porn addled they don't even recognize the distinction between sex and rape anymore

>> No.63398565

>>63396138
The waves...

>> No.63398732
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63398732

>>63376809
Right now it's sitting only at 856 words which is actually quite a bit less because it's a lot more notes for perspective plot points than it is content. I have a vague idea of how the first 25% will be, but I'm nervous about execution. I want it to be more episodic at first but that's something I've never tried before.

People said in the first book that Botan was far too cold compared to her real counterpart so my aim is to explain /why/ she become so cold in the first book. She'll be a lot more Botan-like this time but life will harden her sorta thing. I know nobody is really excited for it most likely but nonetheless I hope you'll read it when I finish the first chapter. I'm going to put all the critiques from the first book into practice so here's hoping the sequel is a better book.

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63398798

>>63398565
Waves were the mating presses, and the mating presses were waves.

>> No.63399185
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63399185

>>63397157
https://rentry.org/tizvp
Hawk's Wedgie Perch

I don't feel particularly proud of this one, but maybe you'll like it, I dunno. Might request something for holoshorts if you do.
I'll anchor it only if someone else thinks it's fine.

>> No.63399630

I've never nutted to Polka before, but I was just watching porn and the girl was kinda chubby and it made me think. What if Polka was your overweight, menhera, neet sister who your parents locked up in an apartment because of shame. As such, it's your job to deliver her groceries every few days and throw out her garbage. But one day you feel particularly pissed off about being forced to do it, so you start molesting her defenseless fat body. But she doesn't react or try to stop you. And before long, she's become your personal freeuse onahole, even though you hate her and think she's gross. So anyway, that's a long way of saying I've now nutted to Polka.

>> No.63399758

>>63399630
What do you mean by overweight? Because a little bit of tummy pudge is cool and all but I am not getting hard or molesting a beached whale

>> No.63400047

>>63399758
9kg overweight.

>> No.63400282

>>63400047
too skinny I need my hands to sink into her chub

>> No.63400994

>>63400047
Wow, can you even move around at that weight? How disgusting.

>> No.63401166

>>63387797
>>63388524
Mumei only came into existence with civilization, so around 5000-6000 years ago.

>> No.63401197

>>63401166
Uh, not true. Your garbage lore doesn't exist anymore Omegatranny.

>> No.63401302

>>63401197
Curses, foiled again! I will be back for my birthday on December 32nd.

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>>63401302
made me giggle

>> No.63402446

>>63401166
>>63401197
I guess Mumei is just "an owl" now, so she's at most as old as the first owls that evolution brought about. So she could be like 5 dozen million years old.

>> No.63403634

>>63401166
on one hand you are right.
On the other hand, the perfect meta narrative to exploit the lack of mumei stories is this one i just crafted
>Mumei re-births herself or whatever the fuck you want in primitive times
>caveman everywhere. They worship her because she teaches them basic stuff
>Caveman and Cavewoman have 0 shame and they have animalistic sex everywhere, all the time
>Mumei wants in. Caveman see that she shaves herself, that she's taller than all of them and that she isnt built like a fridge.
>Eugh
>Mumei starts jumpstarting civilization because she's desperate for some dick
>mesopotamians think she's too skinny
>egyptians think she's too white
>Greeks think she's cute but they love bussy
>Romans dont like that she throws herself at them instead of being conquered
>ottomans think she's haram
And across al civilizations, one myth starts taking shape: The myth of the desperate owl, meant to be told across campfires and who follows an overager owl thatj ust wants sex.
The tales are tall, but they also happened and Mumei is doing her best to cover them up

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>>63350714
Nene molesting Subaru's nipples until they get hard, then her eating subaru's sweaty ass

>> No.63405968
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>> No.63407320

wedgies.

>> No.63407476

>>63405968
Noone is brave enough to write Koro-san domloss.

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63407608

>>63407476
Am I losing, or is she losing? I'm cool with either. Might be even be hot to do both. Give me a while, I'll get there eventually.

>> No.63407863

>>63407476
For some reason everyone has lost all of their desires to fuck the dog after the abuse thread days.

>> No.63407928

>>63404885
Subaru's sweaty butthole...

>> No.63409023

>>63385639
I wish someone would say this about my dick.

>> No.63410002

>>63407608
I can see either as well, in a playful way. I'd also like a Korone that could overpower me but lets me have my way with her because she likes it so much.

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>> No.63411492

>>63390424
>her ass for a giant peach and took a curiosity nibble. but grunted in disappointment and gives up on her.
How dumb is Cave Anon, because if his sexual instincts don't activate to that, the species might be doomed

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63411571

>>63410002
Might opt for both then. The idea I have for Korone later is a fun one, and I could probably work this into it if it strikes right at the time.
>In a city that is bustling and can satisfy every kind of vice, anon is just enjoying himself until his girls come to him saying they might have spent all their money at the gacha casino
>theshitIputupwith.jpg
>runners of said money trap heard of the man's exploits and offer him a deal, participate in a little tournament they run, put on a good showing, make them a good amount of scratch, the debts wiped clean
>easy enough, fighting in front of a crowd is one of anon's own addictions, and it never hurts to have a nice ego boost, he will probably get frisky too if the fights are exciting enough and bring Botan or Nene to the nearest hotel room, maybe both of them.
>An underground cage match gauntlet that is brutal, bloody, and downright lawless ensues, and it's reigning champ; Korone
>However the match ends, it's the best fight the doog ever had
>"Hey weenie! Locker room. Now. I want a round 2!"

>> No.63411588

>>63411492
well considering he's probably a cromagnon, his species indeed doomed themselves by not breeding with the moomussy

>> No.63411996

>>63411571
>Send Korone flying with a right hook
>Stands up, her nose is bleeding, she cleans it on her wrist
>Laughs at the top of her lungs
>"Ehhhh! I feel alive!"

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>>63411571
>>63411996
>fightsexual Koro-san
Good, good, go on...

>> No.63412477

Good thing I put Mighty Blow on Korone then.

It increases her attack by 6 when she's initiating. Very much simulates Orayo.

>> No.63413015

>>63412089
>In the locker room Korone starts off by wanting another quick boxing match with no gloves on her this time
>Fine, you can go another round
>A few exchanged jabs and both a fresh bloody nose later, you're somehow tangled up in one another
>Korone slams you down and starts licking the blood off your face
>IKnowExactlyWhyIHaveThisBoner.jpg
>Press Korone against the lockers, lay her on one of the benches, rut her doggy (heh)
>Now somehow even more bloody and bruised, drenched in sweat and other juices, some of your friends come find you and tell you the good news of the wiped debt, and introductions are in order
>Korone throws a large purse at Watame, tells her she's borrowing you for a little longer, he needs to show you how he learned to throw a punch like that
>The girls race off to the casino again
>....Did I get just whored out?
>Get whisked by the doog up to her penthouse suite, complete with a mini boxing ring
>round 3 it is then...

>> No.63413218

>>63399185
>>63394267

>> No.63415318

Board fast because Kiara, hold fast.

>> No.63415633

>>63415318
jesus fuck i forgot she was baiting and i almost shat myself.
Didnt think the idea of losing Kiara would scare me so much

>> No.63415664
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>>63415318
kikkirikill me

>> No.63416004

>>63415633
She's all-in on the idol gig. If she ever disappears from hololive it will be because she DIED.

>> No.63416133

>>63416004
so what you are saying is...that AltKiara also exists and will suck my cock, finger my prostate and then threathen to kill herself??

>> No.63416242

>>63416133
You what?

>> No.63416319

>>63416242
ALTKIARA IS REAL, SHE WILL SUCK MY COCK, FINGER MY PROSTATE, THREATHEN TO KILL HERSELF, THEN START CRIYING SO I HAVE TO TELL HER ITS OKAY AS WE PLAN TO TAKE THE IDOL INDUSTRY BY STORM

I LOVE MENTALLY ILL WOMAN ANON, I LOVE THEM SO MUCH

>> No.63416444

>>63416319
Dude she already IS mentally ill. You don’t need an alt version

>> No.63416460

>>63416319
birds of a feather, anonchaama

>> No.63416524

>>63416444
Actually the word is Austrian

>> No.63416595

>>63416444
lets be honest here. You dont end up doing youtube if you are a normal person.
And you dont end doing VTubing if you are not mentally ill or in the spectrum.
Mental illness is the spice of life

>> No.63416783

>>63416595
All things are possible through not being a normie

Seriously, though. I’ve spent time with a lot of “normies,” and dear God in heaven they’re insufferable and boring.

>> No.63417043

>>63416783
i dont think normies are boring per say. its just that mentally ill people are so much fun to hang around. I get a lot of normie exposure through my job so i have a few normie friends
>work, talk about the game for a bit, then maybe talk about some show, book or something
>get out of work, catch a beer, mention something about some girl
>one of them got into carpentry, that's nice
>end

They are not boring, just...normal. I find passion so much fun that i end up gravitating towards that one dude in the office who is really into birdwatching or something

>> No.63417353

>>63417043
I just can’t bear the whole “haha yes let us watch [the game] and then go to [the bar] to drink [the beer].”
Like dude, I love sports as much as the next guy, I PLAYED sports in college for crying out loud. But it’s like for these people, they’re not even interested in what they’re watching. What’s the point? Everything feels so empty with “normies.” The same applies to the “fake interesting” people, if you know who I’m talking about.

>> No.63417449

>>63417043
> we got used to the world being exciting and new
Through media, videogames, etc. we were lied to, that the normal world is much more interesting than it is.
Some people break from the mold and become pioneers in science, art, entertainment, because they don't wish to believe that working, multiplying and dying is all there is.
Much more people just break.

>> No.63418504

>>63417043
Eh, usually I'm in the same boat. I hide my powerlevel, so normalfags tend to gravitate towards me as they do with everyone else. Thing is, I don't like hanging around normalfags for extended periods of time. They're just boring.
>Go out to drink with coworkers
>Omg, did you see what [Pop Celebrity] did in [Show]?
>Gossip about someone who isn't present
>Some faggot who loves to pretend he's mentally ill or cold and edgy or some shit
>Some ugly, fat brown bitch who thinks being cynical and contrarian is having a personality
>The same 5 fucking meme phrases I've heard non-stop

Meanwhile
>Hang out with the same 3 or so dudes I've known since Highschool
>Discuss fucking hentai
>One of the dudes goes on an autistic rant about Hollow Knight
>Play vidya while getting wasted off vodka gummy bears
>One of the dudes tells us that his psychiatrist dropped him because they were catching feelings for him
>An actual homo raging in vidya, calling everyone else homophobic slurs
>Some of the most engaging conversations I've had

Maybe it's just because I've known them since forever, but I really can't picture the average person having that much depth as my friends.

>> No.63418657
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63418657

>>63350666
>>63350817
Kiara Sits On Your Face

You're working with Kiara as her manager. An important deadline passes you by and Kiara does not appreciate your incompetence.

https://rentry.org/fze77

Tags: Kiara, NSFW, facesitting, sweat, smell, femdom

>> No.63419090

Hey AA, was "Meat is Murder" intentionally removed from the archive by chance? I remember enjoying it during the last contest but couldn't find it when I searched. Fortunately found the link in an old DM I sent and the rentry itself seems to still be up
https://rentry.org/t9nz5c

>> No.63419276

>>63418657
Oh, this is pretty good. Have you written anything else like this? I'd love to see more.

>> No.63419850

>>63418657
As a KFP this fic made me both horny and sad... Wawa just wants to dance for us...

>> No.63421383

>>63419090
I cannot fathom why I would remove it. I remember specifically putting it in, even. Maybe I fucked up and deleted it or went back and had to redo it and missed it. Or maybe the author sent me an email and I completely forgot that, too. If it's not the latter, I'll add it back when I update the archive tonight.

>> No.63422274

>>63418657
subject matter ain't my cuppa but damn fine work anon, you nailed it

>> No.63423656

Huh, I think Koreanbro wrote a story of his own https://gall.dcinside.com/mini/board/view?id=yang_transl0&no=367
It's tagged "Creation" (at least GoogleTL says so) and there's no source given.

>> No.63425737

>>63350714
IRyS gets the tables turned on her and is molested by the rest of Promise

>> No.63426059

>>63425737
And she likes it?

>> No.63426243

>>63426059
All women like being molested

>> No.63426353

>>63423656
Probably something to do with comfort women and killing the Japanese.

>> No.63426528

>>63426353
I don't know, he really liked the "Ayame hates Koreans" greentexts and put them at the top of his directory thread.

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>>63418657

>> No.63428402
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63428402

me writing 1500 words, hating all of them and deleting the entire document in spite

>> No.63428757

>>63418657
Didn't expect lite-architecture when I opened this. One of the hotter fics I've read out of this place in months

>> No.63428827

>>63428757
I can only assume the author felt like Kiara didn't have enough ass normally and gave her an extra 10kg to make her ass really huge idk
i didn't feel like it was needed

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63429477

>>63428402
Those 1500 words might not have worked, but you're that much closer to finding what does work. You're gonna love what you make next.

>> No.63429800

>>63418657
I loved it. Honestly my only complaint is the situation in itself (look at smarty pants, caring about his plot in a fic where Kiara fat fucking ass smacks you in the face) and the fact that there is no sex, but hey, its great anyway.

Smellchads keep winning

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>>63429800
In order for Smellchads to finally seize power, we need to go nuclear
Sweaty Suisei Naizuru, to be more precise

>> No.63430224

not every nsfw fic needs to end in sex.

you have a billion penis in vagina fics out there.

why must you encroach here.

>> No.63430512

>>63430224
You’re right dicks should go in asses instead

>> No.63430588

>>63430224
to compensate for this offense i think we should get an armpit where i blast cum all over Miko's sweaty and slutty armpit

>> No.63430595

>>63430512
you're right.
bend over.

>> No.63430625
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>>63430145
The Brotherhood of Smell is planning something, brother. Our time shall cum.
Peace. Through. Scents.

>> No.63430662

>>63430224
>>63430512
Analchads, RISE UP!
Our time is now!!

>> No.63431514

>>63430145
My catbox link gets recognized as spam but this post with Sora https://litter.catbox.moe/1w0ngm.jpg

>> No.63431565

>>63431514
That is a very beautiful Sora picture, anon.

>> No.63431632

>>63431514
>fumihiko
Eugh I hate the way that guy draws bodily fluids and facial expressions

>> No.63431654

I think chuubas should shower twice a day and apply deodorant before sexual activity.

>> No.63431679

>>63431632
I dont mind his puddles but his faces are real dogshit. Still, i think he can make really hot pieces like that one i posted, they just need to hide the face
>>63431654
shut up shiori, you stink

>> No.63431872
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>>63431654
Nah. Being freshened up is good and all, but sometimes nothing beats the type of primal sex you have when your partner is sweaty, messy, and smells like their natural scent. It fucking awakens an animal within me and the fucking is rough until I'm sweating bullets too. I ain't even into smells either. Also sweaty bodies just gliding against each other is the stuff dreams are made of.

>> No.63431942

>>63431514
god I wish that were me

>> No.63431966

>>63431632
>>63431679
I guess his faces are very stylized and thus polarizing. I like the ahegao faces he draws, it's nice to see chuubas having an amazing time.

>> No.63432047

>>63431942
Which holo posted this?

>> No.63432211

>>63431966
i just think they are too much. I do love how he draws squirting tho, always a banger when its one of those "girl masturbating" drawings

>> No.63432536

>>63432211
Haha, a "banger"

>> No.63432700

>>63432211
squirt is pee

>> No.63433213

>>63432700
Well, mostly.

>> No.63433348

>>63433213
mostly is still pee my man. You're having a girl pee on you.

>> No.63433455

>>63433348
Eh, if I nutted inside of her it's only fair.

>> No.63433701

>>63350714
Having to ask your tiny loli girlfriend Kanata to open a pickle jar for you.
Tags: humiliation, femdom, sissification

>> No.63433808

>>63433701
Kanata isn't a loli...I think.

>> No.63434102

>>63433348
>bweh bweh squirt is pee
yeah and what about it, its hot. stop being a homo

>> No.63436946

>>63350714
Mori feeds herself to IRyS mid collab after a superchat says she’d taste like shit

>> No.63439185
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63439185

Gotta keep writing brothers. Eventually, something will come out.

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63442134

>>63439185
I'll never give up. This chapter could be considered done, but I'm going BIGGER.

>> No.63444318

>>63439185
Welp, at least mine's fucking done. Now all that's left is my contest entry...

>> No.63446522
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63446522

>>63439185
at a slow part in my fic, its a bit of a slog but I'll push through it

>> No.63449061

>>63351067
Specifically we need more Harpy Mumei stories

>> No.63450494
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63450494

got any charismas themed fics in the works?

>> No.63450778

>>63449061
That makes me think of that Mumei in caveman times idea from earlier in the thread
>Harpy Mumei finally getting pissed off at getting no sex.
>Just grabs caveanon and flys him over to her nest.
>Thus begins the legends of the harpies.
>Bird women who live at the edge of civilization to take good men away never to be seen again.

>> No.63451421

>>63450778
Lamia Kronii...harpy mumei and horsepussy fauna...onegai..

>> No.63452992
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63452992

>>63418657
Stenchou
https://files.catbox.moe/x3z91i.png

>> No.63455570

>>63450494
Not really, but I guess I can cook up something after I'm done with my current project.

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63455637

>>63350714
Shortstack correction

>> No.63457805

>>63455637
Horn-breaking the rest of Nerissa's family...

>> No.63459018

>>63457805
The threesome with her father and mother will be legendary

>> No.63459499

>>63452992
Based DrawAnon

>> No.63462553

>>63431872
>post about scent
>Chloe

Pots.

>> No.63462579

>>63419276
>Have you written anything else like this?
I'd say Heated Negotiations is similar. I was thinking of doing a facesitting scene in that one but ultimately split it off into the focus of this fic.
>>63428757
>Didn't expect lite-architecture
Kiara always talks about how her ass needs a buff so it felt like a good excuse.
>>63429800
>only complaint is the situation in itself
I waffled between a bunch of potential plot lines, some more emotional and elaborate than others. I figured the fic's main function would be as smut so I went with something quick and easy to onboard the reader. In general, for me at least, the eternal struggle of writing NSFW is figuring out the ideal ratio of plot.
>>63452992
Fucking excellent work, anon. Do you mind if I add that art to the fic?

>> No.63465529

What should you do when you write something that's shit? Show it off and get critiqued for something you already know is borked? Or perhaps just bin the whole thing silently?

>> No.63465875

>>63399185
Holy shit anon, this is amazing. I can’t believe I almost missed this. You hit every note of what makes a good story like this. Massive praise for this, thank you so much for writing it!
Also, based image

>> No.63466037

>>63465529
If you're totally sure why it's bad and how to avoid it in the future, then yeah throw it out. But if you want a second opinion post it. An alternative is that you are being too harsh on yourself.
In my opinion, if there is a problem you have with it, it might be beneficial to post it and have Anon's hash it out with you and try and get it to work instead of just tossing it outright.

>> No.63466388

>>63465529
We have a rolodex of writers willing to be beta readers. If you think there's still something redeemable about it you can email one of them to see if you can still fix it.
If you think it's objectively garbage, but it's already finished. Just post it. Someone may still find it good even if you think it's shit.

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>>63465875
I wrote this thing like three times, it was a mess from start to finish. To hear it's amazing is borderline unbelievable.

The Hoshimatic Project outfits are good though, I agree with you there.

>> No.63466882

>>63465529
Just post it and tag it as "shitty" or "poorly written" or something. Even if you think you know what's shit about it, other Anon's might be able to give different insights on what else about it is also shit.

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63466951

>>63466691
It didn’t feel like a mess at all, aside maybe from the narrator integration being a little out of focus. But honestly that’s a good thing, since it leads more focus to the actual FOCUS of the story, what’s going on with HoloX and Lui. I think it’s great

Those outfits have produced so much amazing fanart… genius move by cover.

>> No.63467037
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63467037

>>63423656

Yes, I wrote it myself

https://gall.dcinside.com/mini/board/view?id=yang_transl0&no=367

It's not a translation, it's creation
And now I'm going to translate "I Have an Egregiously Forbidden Relationship With My Younger Sister, Who Turned Out To Be the Internet Idol Hoshimachi Suisei!" soon

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTJyQudJBozdhuqG2AiLx437YyIi1sTxtqpQXzh7Sa_eZ07Lb42QarXYZnZIQgteColiJ46W7YDFzUT/pub

Big love guys o7

>> No.63467093

>>63467037
are you gonna eat Korone

>> No.63467421

>>63467037
Soldier on, Koreabro o7

>> No.63467475

>>63467093
Yes, on bed and with my PP
(And I don't eat dog meat fr)

>> No.63467506

>>63467037
So when are you going to translate your creation to English, hmmmmmm?

>> No.63467693

>>63467037
Good luck, Koreabro. As the guy who wrote it, I'm touched that you're going to translate it. Thank you.

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>>63467506

>> No.63467849

>>63467037
>KRbro is here
Heroic. Love you homes.

>> No.63467854

>>63467693
Thanks for your writing o7

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>>63467849

>> No.63468030

>>63466951
Hmm, well, if you say so

It seems like HoloShorts has an entry already prepped at a glance from the document so I won't bother you with a prompt request

>> No.63468215

>>63399185
>>63350666
Anchoring
Tags: Lui, holoX, wedgie, greentext, (You)

Might be more tags I'm not thinking of

>> No.63468385

>>63468030
This is one I have no fucking idea how I’m going to complete. It has Luna, who I don’t know, and Towa, who I don’t like (not because I anti her, I just don’t like her design or personality). Watame and Kanata were added in as smoothing for it. The whole gist is like a court drama parody of them on trial for “crimes,” but I’m having a bit of trouble translating the TV clips in my head to a sensible written structure

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63468591

>>63468385
That does sound... difficult. I don't think it'll be bad if it's particularly jump-cut filled or relies a bunch on TV-show like shown imagination scenes but I can't even think what would need to shown in those from that description.

>> No.63469587

>>63468591
That’s the difficulty. Smash cuts don’t really translate well to literature.
Nevertheless, I’ve written court drama before, as well as a long story that takes place primarily in narrator-skewed flashback sequences. It’s a tool that lets you paint events in multiple lights. I think I know how to handle it, even if it doesn’t align perfectly with what’s in my head. After all, the idea has been around for centuries in the form of a frame narrative (if I make a frame narrative around these shorts, will this be a frame narrative in a frame narrative? oogh…). One of my favorite Sherlock Holmes stories does this.

>> No.63471278

>>63467037
I got the gist of your story with Google Translate and it seems very poetic. It must be beautiful in Korean!
I hope you'll have fun with what the contest produced and with the most recent Ayame content.

>> No.63472127

>>63468591
God that image is so fucking hot. They look like they are humping each other and i fucking love girls fake mating until hormones take over andis no longer Fake

>> No.63472868

>>63469587
That seems pretty neat as an idea, though I'm truly wondering what you're cooking up for a... wedgie anthology for that. Good luck, I suppose?

>> No.63473422

>>63472127
>Suisei rapes Towa in the locker room
>Towa slowly comes to like it and is turned on
>Suisei slowly comes to be disgusted and only stays to finish the act

>> No.63474112

>>63473422
Thats a Bae irys prompt too
>Irys realizes she isnt as fruity as she thought
>Bae enjoys the pressing

>> No.63475096

>>63474112
>1.49 cms vs 1.66 cms
Can they even smash clams while standing up?

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63475430

>>63475096 (me)
the answer is "not likely" but fuck me if this isnt a hot idea.
Imma add it to the wip pile

>> No.63475492

>>63475096
>>63475430
IRyS picks Bae up, kisses her and then puts her down in some slightly elevated place.

>> No.63475630

>>63475430
Where do you get diagrams like this?

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63475658

>>63475492
cute
>>63475630
hikaku sitter. i just googled "height comparison tool"

>> No.63475788

>>63475658
Gotcha, thanks.

>> No.63475796

>>63450494
I cannot give you an exact date but I "forsee" a Suisei x-mas story that it'll be so good that it'll blow "Our Cures", "ALS", and the "Miyuki" story out of the water and it'll be talked about until the general dies for good.
No I am not the one who will write it. It'll "ironically" be the "Our Cures" author because he wants to try something new.

>> No.63475891

>>63475796
That's a really big claim there

>> No.63476040

>>63475891
I know. That's why I precisely didn't give an exact date so it wouldn't screw me over in the end.
Even if it doesn't happen this year, I just "know" it'll happen (hell it could even be written near the end of the tourney and win the whole thing) because Suisei is just that well liked here and while I genuinely don't like her, I am always curious to see what shennanigans she gets into when an author writes about her.

I say this without no ill intent or hate in my body.

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>>63475492
>>63475658
as much as a bottom bae is and as much as an ojisan irys is, i find it hard to picture pillow princessrys in these scenarios

>> No.63476136

>>63475796
Betareader-chama...

>> No.63476166

>>63475096
>IRyS grabs Bae by the ankle, making her do a ballerina pose
>Pulls her up, essentially making her stand on her toes and do little jumps as they plat each other
>Bae holds onto dear life by locking her arms around IRyS' shoulders

>> No.63476309

>>63476166
Holy shit yeah, leg lift would work perfectly, just press her right against the wall

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63476333

>>63476166
fucking genius. Im stealing that 100%

>> No.63476362

>>63475796
And I foresee MY fic mindbreaking /wg/ once again

>> No.63476616
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63476616

>>63475430
>>63475658
Holy shit, this has existed the entire time? I've been wanting a height comparison tool like this for ages. Nice.
>>63475796
>It'll "ironically" be the "Our Cures" author because he wants to try something new.
False, I'm not a good enough writer to pull that off.

>> No.63476809

>>63476616
>False, I'm not a good enough writer to pull that off.
"Our Cures" exist does it not? That#s proof enough you are a good writer.

>> No.63476972

>>63476616
That's not real, I'm 7cm shorter.

>> No.63478075

>>63472127
For me, it's that subtle discomfort but curios look on Towa's face.

>> No.63478263

>>63478075
She's scared but she's also blushing
Makes you think how she actually feels about being cornered by Suisex

>> No.63478356

>>63478075
>>63478263
they should also rub their itty bitty tities together

>> No.63478559

>>63476616
Haha yes I am exactly 194cm and not much shorter! Well done!

>> No.63478592

>>63475796
it better be wholesome Christmas-y Suicest...

>> No.63478627

>>63476616
wtf bro why did you shave 6 cms off me?? what did i do to you??

>> No.63478898

>>63476616
I know those are literally placeholder models with generic hairstyles but this just makes me imagine Coco and Botan with girlish twintails

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63479267

>>63478898
you now remember Coco Kaine
ooooh you wanna write a fic where Coco
uses that persona for whore roleplay with you because she's too embarassed to do it normally ooooh

>> No.63479335

>>63418657
This was incredibly erotic. It's fine that it didn't go for sex seeing as the situation didn't really call for it, only real dissapointment is that you didn't actually go for a nut shot.
Still, this was a really hot smell fic.

>> No.63479353

>>63478898
Coco did have twintails though

>> No.63479602

>>63479335
>only real dissapointment is that you didn't actually go for a nut shot.
do really hate this trend of domination stories threatening to this or that and not following through on it. Just do it, you already teased it, c'mon.

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63481450

>>63479267
>whore roleplay
Where she roleplays as a prostitute? Hot
>She gets really into it and can't look you in the eyes laying in bed the next morning when she remembers what she did and said in the heat of the moment

>> No.63482129

>>63481450
I know this isn't what you meant but imagining her getting really in-character about the whore persona seems absolutely hilarious to me. Like imagining her crying while cleaning herself up while speaking in a completely unknown language seems strangely funny to me. I don't even know why, but the idea of Coco getting really into the not-sexy part of the roleplay just seems really funny.

>> No.63482488

>>63482129
>Pimp watame is bitchslapping Coco, who is criying and speaking in spanish
>Cop luna shows up and "guns down" Watame, then plants drugs on the scene
>While Kanata and Towa are fighting over whose fault was that their college dropout daughter turned like this
>You just wanted Coco to suck your dick

>> No.63482864

>>63481450
Coco would feel ashamed to fuck someone for money instead of repairs, even as part of a roleplay.

>> No.63483148

>>63482129
>Slap Coco's ass, call her a whore
>"Yeah, I'm a whore, I like to get fucked in public"
>"Oh you do? You like it when people watch?"
>"Mhm! I want you to record me..."
>"Mm-m! You want me to record you getting fucked in the ass like a cheap whore?"
>"Yeah, and then my parents would see the video and they'd disown me."
>Lose your boner.

>> No.63483646

Someone baking a Coco edition?

>> No.63483942

>>63483646
if somebody else isn't, I will

>> No.63484012

>>63483942
I'd say go for it, otherwise someone else will do it also.

>> No.63484489

>>63483942
make sure her humongous personality is on full display

>> No.63484742

>>63484012
>>63484489
Baked, with her personality on full display
>>63484709
>>63484709
>>63484709

>> No.63484947

>>63484742
based

>> No.63485113

>>63484742
Dangerously spicy.

>> No.63485328 [SPOILER] 
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63485328

>>63484742
I love this dragon's amazing fat bountiful suckable personality.
I really need to make Anon fuck her already,

>> No.63485492

>>63485328
The dragon is always destined to be a cuck. Don't fight it.

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