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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>6900899

>> No.6941014
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>>6940915
Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.6941154

>>6941014
You wriggle up Lamy's ass and wear her like a suit.

>> No.6941254

>>6941154
anon ive seen some weird, wild prompts before but this takes the cake. sweet fucking jesus Christ

>> No.6941311

>>6941254
It's just a bodysuit fetish...

>> No.6941365

>>6941154
>not a new IP
The worst part of this post is that you're either the prompt board anon, or the OP. I'm not sure what is worse.

>> No.6941385

>>6941154
I'd love to see this one written out, but only if the protagonists are a few wee bairns who end up pulling off the "3 kids in a trench coat" gag.

>> No.6941568
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with the talk of femcels browsing /here/, I'm surprised no one's written about bea

>> No.6941597

>>6941568
Nothing about her attracts me and her fanbase is even worse.

>> No.6941609

>>6941568
>really want to blow a greasy haired femcel's back out
aaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SEXXXXXXXXXXXXX

>> No.6941763

>>6941609
Y'know, come to think of it, isn't dustbunny planning to be a chuuba?

>> No.6941782
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>>6941014
They aren't all futa, please take a look!

Risu asks Korone to help her to extract all the nuts from a listener.
Listener is strapped to a table. Risu is giving him a hand job with one hand while holding a half-full jar with cum in the other. Korone is lubing up a strap-on (or her cock, if you're not a insecure faggot) preparing to give him additional stimulation. They make listener cum over and over again until their dick and prostate hurt; the jar must be filled no matter what!

Towa being a shy futa that can't resist her urges and constantly asking Kanata to help her with her boner, no matter where they are, clothed or not, in public spaces, against walls, with someone sleeping next to them, even jerking off onto Kanata while she is sleeping! Possibly behind Coco's back or in the same room!

Risu visiting OkaKoro and they have a fun off collab stream, but Korone has to leave for something for a while and Risu suddenly switches to Ayunda dominating Okayu and fucking the shit out of her. Korone gets back and smells the sex, but doesn't confront them about it, only being much colder to Risu. Later that day Korone kidnaps Risu and makes her cum over and over without ever touching her pussy to show who is boss!

A whole story about Haachama losing her virginity but written in the famous pepperoni copypasta speech style, aka Haachama's english speach pattern. The more brain cells i lose the better. Bonus if you can actually make me nut with it.

Watame is invited by Haachama to eat her homemade cooking, but it turns out Haachama made stewed lamb!
Something primal awakens inside Watame, she is extremely aroused by seeing her kind being cooked, spacing out and rubbing herself with utensils while Haachama talks to her or to the stream! Watame eats the lamb and has the biggest orgasm of her life!

Quick and short prompts:

Watame escaped captivity, catch her before her wool grows so much she can't live
Luna sees your dick in the shared bath
Watame has to have her wool sheared for summer and (you) help her
Matsuri convinces you to flash your dick to her
Marine goes out to buy a ship

Done - Luna has a fucking gun!
You beat the fuck out of Rushia but she still loves you

>> No.6941822

>>6941782
at this point you should stick them in the prompt archive and come up with some new ones bro

>> No.6941874

>>6941154
I bless this prompt. It shall be safe from the underwhelming or monkey paws.

>> No.6941880

>>6941597
The only thing I like about her is the idea of her grooming her own fans.

>> No.6941906

>>6941874
That prompt IS the monkey's paw.

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>>6941822
I've kinda been slapping them out as it is but i should indeed think of some news ones. Once my Towa prompt gets finished, I'll do a little cleanup on this wall and do some news ideas.

>> No.6942454

>>6941597
I can't say I like her fanbase but she seems like a nice earnest neet with her own problems. It's no surprise /vt/ latched onto her like they did.

>> No.6942468 [DELETED] 

Watangan Midnight

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16CFUREM-QG_IK1mx-IOk4nJj1ySrv0r771A8MczySu4/edit

Tags: Watame, Comedy

Here's that story I promised for the anon who potentially kept me from burning my car down on the highway or worse.

>> No.6942514

>>6942468
Oh shit, he followed through.

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Watangan Midnight

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16CFUREM-QG_IK1mx-IOk4nJj1ySrv0r771A8MczySu4/edit

Tags: Watame, Comedy

Here's that story I promised for the anon who potentially kept me from burning my car down on the highway or worse.

>> No.6942557

>>6942468
>>6942528
>burning my car down on the highway or worse
unironically seek help

>> No.6942604

>>6942557
NoContextAnonChama...

>> No.6942625

>>6942468
>>6942528
Anon, you locked it again.

>> No.6942661

>>6942528
Stop being so selfish and unlock it anon!

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Watangan Midnight

https://docs.google.com/document/u/2/d/e/2PACX-1vSN93AnkK9zWBw3QJRfWMvX4puN1lKeK3okXl4C3lfLzMmIE4275GrIxvgyovwED74KvUUO95pBwed7/pub

Ok I got the right link AND the fucking image this time, jesus christ I need to stop drinking before posting.

>>6942557
It was a fuel leak, anon. I caught it before it got worse.

>> No.6942721

>>6942662
Eyyy! Third time's the charm!

>> No.6942727

>>6942662
> Not a Watame edit on the image even though one could do it in 10 seconds
Ngmi

>> No.6943056

>>6941365
If it makes you feel better that isn't the original prompt board poster, just someone else.

>> No.6943167

>>6942662
I gotta say, I'm not familiar with Wangan Midnight, Initial D, stuff like that. It never interested me in its prime. I did read the story, but it kinda flew right past me

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>>6943167
Initial D is pretty great, but it goes downhill pretty fast.

>> No.6943243

>>6942662
Brilliant

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>>6943234

>> No.6943339
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>>6942662
See, 10 seconds. Totally not 7 minutes.

>> No.6943349

Would the language elves speak be called Elvish or Elven?

>> No.6943400

>>6943339
But thats not what she drives in the story. There is a pic edit of what she does drive in the story.

>> No.6943426

>>6943349
Elvish, as far as I know. Elven is the race-based adjective.

>> No.6943483

>>6943349
Think Tolkien used Elvish.

However, dwarves speak Dwarven. Go figure.

>> No.6943490

>>6943339
If I had done that for the OP image, though, it would have killed the joke.

>> No.6943558

>>6943339
I can totally see Watame committing vehicular homicide in this.

>> No.6943598

>>6941014
Towa accidently drinks bibi's pee and gets addicted to drinking bibi's pee and triese to make bibi pee more than usual

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>>6943400
Fuck u i just wanted to brag about my editing skills why u gotta do me dirty like that how could you ever do such a thing i was just trying to be helpful here you know that whole be kind to others and others will be kind to you treatment but no you just had to ahead and spit on my fucking hand didn't you well I'll have you know that i am deeply insulted by your behavior and i believe that it was uncalled for specially in the current situation of this place in which people are arguing left and right and everyone just needs a little bit of positivity in their life but you seem to not want that for some reason perhaps you just like being contrarian well i like it too but that was just mean and i felt like i had to get it off my chest

>> No.6943670

>>6943637
kek

>> No.6943808

>>6943637
yeah well you stinky

>> No.6944549

shilling my shit again
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vToTMULufrc6MAvJ4Z2X_I7Tv7cPZAmzxusZZFjzrLkqsqo9hKVpE6qOmpS9SQO0yKCRWQriud7Oykg/pub

>> No.6944608

>>6944549
Ah, yes, "Untitled document." A classic.

>> No.6944650

>>6944549
anon you could at least put a title so that archive anon can better save your shit

>> No.6944794

>>6944608
>>6944650
gomenasai im new to this

>> No.6944896

So writers, what you got cooking?
Bonus points if you can attribute a track or something to it, I need more stuff to listen to when working. Try and think of what you'd want to be listening to when the scene is on going. Example for me anyway: https://youtu.be/LFue83scgMo

>> No.6945005

>>6944896
I got two stories in the shelf. Haven't touched either in over a week. I can't believe my only story will be a Lamy transformation one. Not like this... i wanna keep writing but i don't think i can write smut. I just reached the sex part and i feel weird.

>> No.6945051

>>6944794
It's okay, anonchama, I'm just teasing. It's a cute fic so far. If I may, you prefix every bit of dialogue with "character says" - it feels extremely stiff and subtracts from the impact of the story. Liven it up with characters emoting. They shout, yell, moan, whisper, bark, cry... rarely does anyone just "say" something.

>> No.6945109

>>6941014
Fubuki gets fired and her life goes to shit until one day she decides to end it all. It'd be better if she did it out of spite for the other girls.

>> No.6945116

>>6945005
Try getting horny before writing smut

>> No.6945173

>>6944896
My mind is made up. After almost two months of no interest in creative writing, my next fic will be 'Fucking Aqua in the Ass'.

But I am trying to work up the interest again. I was pumped to write as I fleshed the idea out last night, but after finishing and going to bed, all I want to do is play Satisfactory whilst grinding on Runescape.

>>6945005
It's a fresh feeling all smut writers have to adapt to. It's the horny entering your body. Embrace it.

>> No.6945181

>>6945051
i know i know that as well as describing motion are things i know i need to work on

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>>6945173
>my next fic will be 'Fucking Aqua in the Ass

>> No.6945289

workshopping the lovey-dovey fluffy Fubuki smut fic which is a side chapter of the menhera wrangler series

my go to theme for any kind of smut will always ALWAYS be https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rjlSiASsUIs

some scenes I'm thinking of:
>hugging you from the back and stroking your dick while you're in the shower
>forcing her to walk on all fours from the bathroom to the bed with your dick still inside her
>intense staring while you pound her missionary style, yet still have doubts whether you should kiss her
>excessively long session of cunnilingus
>she suckles your finger(s) in an effort to encourage you to go harder
>lots and lots and lots of slapping(from you) and biting(from her)
>pulling her hair from the scalp at the point in between her ears.

And other stuff I'm still trying to arrange

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>>6945173
>my next fic will be 'Fucking Aqua in the Ass'
No harm will be done to Aqua, right anon?

>> No.6945433

>>6944896
https://youtu.be/JqwKeddXPOg
Okayu's newest cover inspired me to write a fic about her doing drugs, its mostly done so i will hopefully post it before the end of the thread but no promises

>> No.6945458

>>6945341
Her shithole will probably bleed red

>> No.6945536

>>6945341
It's barely better than a hentai plot, but I'm working on the prompt posted one or two threads ago about Aqua being in her bedroom when someone hangs up a sign emblazoned with "you cannot leave this room unless you've had sex in it or you'll be cursed." Aqua, being the stupid little onion she is, puts enough faith in superstition to try and avoid the curse, and so gets on the phone to (You).

Thing is, I don't actually watch Aqua - I just want to fuck her. So I'll be gagging her. She may be hurt in the process, or afterwards. My dick talks and I listen.

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>>6945536
ELECTROCHEMISTRY [Trivial: Success] -
OH MY *FUCKING GOD* YOU WANT TO HAVE ROUGH, BRUTAL SEX WITH THAT AUTISTIC RETARD! WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR?! LOOK AT HER PILLOWY *FAT ASS* WAITING TO BE RAILED! UOOHHHHH!! SSSSSEEEEXXXX!!!

>> No.6945807

>>6945637
Basically this. I'm not even bothering to take the Volition check because, even if it ends with Aqua defiled, I don't want to be stopped.

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>>6944896
The finale of
https://youtu.be/jSjwI8FXETk

And the beginnings of something that had this come to mind
https://youtu.be/bqwS8yaS8W4

>> No.6946115

>>6907071
The shark turned and looked around. The drop to the floor had been higher than she'd expected and she saw why. The incinerator was on the second tier of three, and 18 lined the wall. Whatever Ina was doing here she was burning a LOT of bodies. Or had been, anyway. Leaving the room by a single set of double doors Gura followed a hallway. There were several off-shoots each one leading to either another hallway or a room full of weird or sometimes morbid-looking stuff. This place mut be huge. Gura came to one with tons of open books, writings on the wall, and... pictures of Kiara. Now this is what she was talking about! The big score! Oh wait, holy shit, this was creepy. Gura took her phone out and began photographing stuff around the room, all the texts, open books, ect, and sending them to Watson. She even picked up a few books and took pics of the cover and spine, noting they had library markings. "Dewey Decimal System? Ina is a huge nerd." She muttered to herself. "Oi, you're the one who knows it's called the Dewey Decimal System." A voice from behind her said. Gura keep rummaging around. "See, you'd think that's fair, but I payed attention in school. I don't know how to use it...but...I know...what... it's...called?" Gura's eyes widened in realization and she spun. Behind her a blond stood in the door, a huge grin on her face. "You should see your face right now!" She quipped, cackling. Shark brain kicked in and she ran past her, going into one of the offshoots, another hallway. Then another. Easily she was able to outrun the blonde, on land she can hit 40kph. In water 50kph. But...dead ends didn't help. She looked around for a door to duck into when she heard static crackle overhead. "Gura. I have camera all over the place. I'm looking directly at you right now." Ina said. "You are admirably fast-" something appeared in front of her, a figure like oil shimmering on water, then Ina stepped out. "-but that means little to one who can teleport." She said, the speaker repeating it. "Come, let us...talk. I'm sure there are many questions you will want to ask me."

>> No.6946145

>>6944896
Trying to start the next Cover High chapter but brain broke.
You can probably use the Summer Pockets soundtrack as mood music for the whole series. Or at least the more recent chapters where it's explicitly almost summer. https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLw2da1jQ_a9Jwca0qU7IeFaQxwFSi5yq9

>> No.6946183

>>6946145
Oh hello there, Cover High writer!

so, uhhh... about that smut fic you were gonna do on the side...any word on that?

>> No.6946252

>>6946183
If you're referring to the Shion one, I posted it a few threads ago: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSJLnXZ7ZMaIiHhEc8r2QUpS_1D6Lu_r7QTq1_g_T9h__sNDTgmGmTQhRibv5-wmAIO5ypecUGSo-Ow/pub
If you mean the lewd bonus chapter, it's still shelved for now. But I do plan on finishing it once the main story is done. I may release it alongside the final chapter.

>> No.6946334

>>6946252
Yeah, the bonus chapter. That's cool - way better than it being cancelled. Godspeed, anon.

>> No.6946502

>>6944896
I’m trying to write a tragedy, and while my usual go to for sad music is
https://youtu.be/6y1N_fKqHik
This story has more of a
https://youtu.be/OG7YnId8ivg vibe

>> No.6946520

>>6941014
(You) muster up the courage to ask your oshi, who you've spent months building up a loving relationship with, to sleep with another man to satisfy your cuck fetish. She's reluctant, but loves you so much she wants to try it at least once to make you happy. When reporting to you in bed how it went a few days later, she's shocked how well your dick responds to hearing about what she did with the other guy and how sex with you doesn't quite stand up, finding some enjoyment in having power over you and even being willing to do it again. Cue her gradually getting more and more into it session by session, pushing the rules you set for yourselves, gradually getting harsher with her dirty talk, and incorporating more denial-type play into your sex life.

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>>6946520

>> No.6946740

>>6946520
I, uhh.

Well... if there's a writer here who shares your fetish, best of luck.

>> No.6946745

>>6946668
Oh no, don't you bring Kiara into this. Use cuck vtubers like Towa, Sora, or Haato instead.

>> No.6946804

>>6946520
cuckchama.....

>> No.6946810

>>6944896
Due to recent events I've finally started working on a fic about Loaf based on something she talked about on stream a while back.

>> No.6946863

>>6941014
Having to constantly tell your extremely chuuni classmates that no, they do not have mystical powers. Only for you to get kidnapped by a bbeg with your only hope being your chuuni classmates that you always put down. Turns out their powers are actually real.

Rubbing different kinds of sticky edible substances on your cock because Korone will lick it all off and bring you to a state of ecstasy no other human could hope to reach. Little do you know Korone just likes sucking your cock.

Reine tracks you down through your bedroom that you sent to one of her room review streams. She found many of the things that you have made you seem very endearing to her. She eventually finds your social media or whatever the fuck and falls even more for you. She WILL find you. She WILL fuck you. High impact sexual violence is coming your way.

Fucking a chuuba's armpits.

>> No.6946913

>>6946668
>>6946745
Incidentally Kiara is my EN oshi, though I agree she probably wouldn't be a very good fit for this. I started out asking for Akirose specifically but then figured it was probably niche enough without that qualifier banishing it into the wastelands of unpopularity. Maybe the Matsuri dude'll reappear

>> No.6946914

>>6944896
Currently nothing. But if something catches my interest like last thread's loafy prompt, i might start working on it.

songs with lyrics makes it hard to concentrate so i usually default to Ui's bgm while writing

>> No.6946954

>>6946914
I constantly have ASMR on while trying to concentrate. It's relaxing to have a man whisper about corn in my ears.

>> No.6947220

>>6946954
corn or camels man

>> No.6947252

>>6947220
https://youtu.be/v03h4Sw4hfI

>> No.6947279

>>6945116
Well, i followed your advice. Ended up getting a few sentences in but 90% of the time was just wanking, stopping myself to write some words, then going back. Maybe getting horny by jerking off isn't the best way to go about doing this...

>> No.6947311

>>6947279
NTA, but you said you feel 'weird' writing smut. Weird in what way? Because if it's like you're violating something sacred, you might not get over it.

>> No.6947408

>>6947279
The path to horny posting is a long one. Your horny energy is still unrefined, you cannot control it. The horny rules over you, and you obey it. Keep training, and one day you'll be the one to decide when you jack off, staying fully erect for hours on end.

>> No.6947439

>>6947311
I feel weird as in I'm not being descriptive enough, and doing more of technical stuff. I know I'm new but it feels weird to me. Might as well throw a sample. Futa warning

Gura, of course, was not dumb, kind of; she already expected something of the sort, but she was not exactly mentally prepared to see her Senpai having her hips swinging back and forth, biting into a pillow with tears running down her face as Mori pounded her ass with her massive cock, ocasionally slapping her cheeks just as harshly as Coco did to her just moments ago; all happening mere steps away from where she was.

“Damn, this bitch is t-TIGHT! Guh!” Mori says, gritting her teeth together; although her face indicated that she was enjoying herself.

Shion, however, did not seem to be enjoying herself as much, having her tight backdoor being ravaged, probably without any lube; it wasn't out of the picture, given how rough Mori was treating her. Gura hoped she at least spit on it before going in, for her poor Senpai’s sake. While one of Mori’s hands was busy molesting her Senpai’s tiny body, the other was occupied with handling a vibrating dildo which was rapidly being made to assault her small pussy that was slopping wet from the rough treatment; despite putting up some resistance, her body was giving in to the confusion of having her ass pounded roughly while her pussy was penetrated unrelentingly.


I haven't gone much further than this, some dialogue about kissing right before, and Coco penetrating Gura right after.

>> No.6947579

>>6947439
I'm not exactly a fan of futa, but that reads perfectly fine to me. You're overthinking it. If you wanted to improve further, consider reading a LOT of books, as only your vocabulary expanding will be able to offer succor to your anxiety.

If you're just not happy with it... join the club. I posted this last thread, but I wrote Fucking Fubuki in the Ass and, despite several anons assuring me otherwise, I think it's garbage. I know there are several other writeanons who feel the same way about their own smut.

Basically, the audience will think it's good, even if you don't.

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>>6947579
I never got feedback on my Lamy story so i didn't really know what my level was. Seeing all the good stories here got me down a bit but it seems like a simple compliment goes a long way down. Blogpost time, I'm ESL and I've managed to get C2 academic level fluency on an official English proficiency exam (112/120 TOEFL) , but I've never had anyone directly judge me for my English. Not my family nor friends nor strangers, so even though the score said otherwise, i am insecure about my skills. I'll keep at it, i suppose. Maybe after i put these out and i still get no feedback, i just wasn't cut out for writing, and that's fine, im an art anon anyway. This thing is fun but it's me being insecure about being a shit artist all over again. Quite annoying i must say.

>> No.6947835

>>6947816
Which Lamy story, my man?

>> No.6947863

>>6947439
I don't know if it helps, but I've realized that descriptiveness is only half the battle.
You gotta think about pacing and shit, like how long you focus on something before moving on to the next.

>> No.6947957

>>6947279
Edging is the trick, get yourself going, write, stroke, write, stroke. If you start focusing on one or the other too much, then you're doing it wrong.
get a heavy onahole that you can work on to keep your hands on the keyboard

>> No.6947974

>>6947816
Your English is fine, dude. I don't think many natives would be able to tell you're an ESL. In fact, I'll go ahead one step further and say you're probably better than most, because excellent fluency isn't a common goal in Anglo countries.

So, about feedback or the lack thereof: I don't know what your Lamy story was, but remember that futa is a niche fetish and not everyone here will read it because of that. The pool of audience readers here is relatively small, so choosing a niche interest may mean you're overlooked completely.

I never encourage dropping what interests you in favour of what interests others, but the converse is also true: nobody is going to read a topic they won't enjoy.

>> No.6947984
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>>6945289
Thank you anon, looking forward to it.

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>>6947835
Futile Lamyntations, which was my first story ever. I made it in one bout of inspiration, a innocent mind first experiencing the joy of being excited to try out a new hobby, but i kept comparing myself to others and ended up fucking myself over. I didn't mean to say all this shit, i have a very bad habit of mind reading, assuming a lack of an answer is equal to the other party being unamused so i keep on rattling on and on. I'm sure my writing is probably not garbage, but these damn demons man, they keep clawing at you until you feel like you're the absolute worst. It's 4AM so that doesn't help much.

>> No.6948065

>>6945289
Read your post earlier but forgot to reply to it:

Sounds awesome, anon, can't wait. Personally, I'll never get tired of Fubuki fics. I'll stand at the end of this conveyor belt forever, bent over and eyes closed.

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>> No.6948124

>>6947990
Some small, small issues aside I think your work is still stellar, Anon. I fall into the trap of comparing myself to others all the time, and it's worth remembering that as long as someone still likes your story, it's fine. My only real critique is that you remember to capitalize "I"s in your story. Did you plan on a sequel for this, or even make one? My memory is piss poor.

>> No.6948238

>>6948124
I literally studied capitalizing I's like two weeks ago, aka right before my English proficiency exam (which i booked 3 days before the exam with no prep lol) . I actually never knew in English that you're supposed to do that, and as you may guess, that story was right before that. No sequels, the Lamys are getting a lot of love already. I have that CocoGura MoriShion in the works but i also have a story about the treerat which i haven't touched in just about a month, so I'm relatively busy already.

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>>6947990
I remember reading that, and I most assuredly loved it. I apologise that I never gave any feedback. There were quite a few Lamy stories at the time, and I very well may have simply overlooked it.
Writing wise, it was one of my favourites in the Lamy catalogue thus far, but I did feel the ending was somewhat shorter than I would have liked. This is only because the transformation and following response itself is what I most enjoy in these stories, and your story seems to gloss over this in favour of outlining Anon's final moments of escape.
>>6948238
>the Lamys are getting a lot of love already.
Overall, I am inclined to agree with you, though I can't say we quite have the fervor we once had, nor the support of /wg/, which has largely dissipated since. Even so, I am ever thankful to all who have contributed to our media catalogue.

>> No.6948478

>>6948340
Hope things pick up for you soon. If I weren't in motivation hell I'd rectify it myself.

>> No.6949025

>>6944896
not my story, but I can't hear "tomorrow never comes" without thinking of the menhera wrangling stories
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pwFjLAZCyWE

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>> No.6949099

>>6949038
DANGEROUS!!!

>> No.6949200

I haven't written anything in years but lately I've had this drive to write porn fanfiction.. (specifically porn fanfics of Umineko and various chuubas like Kiara, Marine, and Nene...) I should create my own content instead of waiting for someone to it for me. Do you have any motivation tips?

>> No.6949247

>>6949200
Nope, struggle with it myself. Best advice I can give you is write something - anything - and you'll have a better foothold for making a story. Even a single sentence helps narrow down the infinite possibilities.

>> No.6949260

>>6949200
Feel the heat in your heart, and the heat in your dick. Harness your fantasies - let them embolden you, make you stronger. Lust is power - use it.

>> No.6949329

>>6949200
think about how you want to bone them. Do you want to inflict some physical pain? Choke the life out of them while her pussy vice grips your dick? Watch her cry as you pin her down by her wrists and lick her face? Berate her for riling you up while you slap her ass multiple times, forcing her to apologize to you?

The more specific the scenes you have envisioned in your head, the better.

>> No.6949345

>>6949329
Anon, these are all rather aggressive suggestions.

Anything you wanna tell us?

>> No.6949392

>>6949247
I don't do much at work so I just go on my phone, and I'd be lying if I said I didn't consider writing on company time. Writing on a phone doesn't feel very satisfying though...
>>6949260
Very inspiring... I like a lot of things, and I'm glad to have found some stories in the archive that fit what I enjoy. That series where Kiara rapes (you) and treats you as her property is incredible, and I'd like to be able to write something like this.

>> No.6949411

>>6949329
Actually anon, you're very right. I would love to aggressively have sex with a chuuba! Or to have a chuuba aggressively have sex with me, that works too.

>> No.6949427

>>6949392
>That series where Kiara rapes (you) and treats you as her property is incredible, and I'd like to be able to write something like this.
Then I'm glad I inspired you, my friend. I'm sure you'll make something wonderful.

>> No.6949431

>>6947990
I read through the Lamy catalogue but didn't comment on any of the stories. Since you asked, I'll be honest. Your story was alright. It felt like it dragged on too much with no meat to the plot. It's simple, and I feel like it would have fitted into a greentext just fine. I think the Barkeep report and Post-Lamy morning procedure are the best stories in the catalogue. Barkeep is a very detailed SCP-like report, while Post-Lamy focuses on how the Anon feels and what he does after turning into Lamy. Lamypocolaypse had a unique plot and was interesting, but again it felt like it dragged on a bit.

There you go, I also mentioned other stories better than yours to compare yourself to. More food for your demons. But Anon, everyone compares themselves to others, specially in writing. Writing in particular needs you to read stories written by other people better than you in order for you to get better yourself, and there's just no way around it. If it bothers you too much, you could try what I did and just write short, gag stories (assuming you're funny). Writing a long and serious story comes with the burden of thinking you might have wasted someones time with your boring ass story (You didn't, they had nothing better to do anyways). But a short story/greentext takes a minute tops to read, and getting a laugh out of someone is far easier than getting someone invested and emotional in a story.

>>6948340
Also I was planning on writing a story about SCP: Containtment breach, except it's Lamys breaching Cover (based off the Barkeep report). But I haven't really figured out how to go about it, so i'm just sitting on my ass for now

>> No.6949433

>>6949345
i would like to believe they're rather tame compared to the stuff that's in the archives.

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>>6949200
Do you mean combining Umineko and chuubas or do you mean smut of both Umineko and chuubas
Either way, based

>> No.6949487

>>6949427
Will you write any more of it? I live for Kiara being deranged but still being a massive Stacy.

>> No.6949561

>>6949468
Smut of both Umineko and chuubas separately. I have a few ideas for Jessica/Natsuhi, Battler/Rosa, Battler/Jessica, and Natsuhi/Rudolf/Kyrie, but I've yet to do anything other than talk about it with a friend. As for the chuubas, I'd like to write something with NTR, where you cuck a chuuba by having sex with her friend, or steal her girlfriend away. (Takamori would be good for that). I really like noncon, both with (you) doing it and the chuuba doing it to (you).

>> No.6949607

>>6949487
Maybe in the future. The series I'm working on is my primary interest and even then motivation to do that has been hard to come by lately. I'm glad so many people like it, though I do admit I feel like I'm letting people down by not having the willpower to continue.

>> No.6949622

>>6949561
Oh wow, an NTR writer. Check out >>6946520, we've had at least one cuck here without an interested writer. No pressure to write ofc, all the prompts are just morsels, like sushi on a conveyor belt.

>> No.6949647

>>6949561
>Battler/Rosa
Exquisitely based taste anon

>> No.6949657

>>6949607
Don't worry about it. Never feel like you owe anything to anyone here - guilt writing kills passion quick.

>> No.6949747

>>6949607
Don't worry about it too much, anon. You're doing it for free out of the goodness of your heart (and cock), and I'm certain everyone is thankful for it, even if you're taking it slow.
>>6949622
Well, I would rather be the guy who cucks than the guy who gets cucked, honestly. Although something like this might be interesting to write... I think it's important in NTR to have the cuck actually be disappointing for his partner beyond just having a small cock.

>> No.6949899

>>6949747
>Beyond just having a small cock
Agreed, it's the same as being dissapointed because someone has small tits, and that's supreme faggot bullshit

>> No.6949948

>>6946115
Gura followed Ina silently. It was only a few twists and turns and then a staircase. Up they went, three floors, and came out in Ina's house. "I thought you were going to take me to see Kiara?" Gura enquired. "Don't be absurd, you stilly little shark. Do you honestly think I would risk my prize showing her off?" She scoffed. "You all really do underestimate me, do you not? Well, you won't for much longer." The Witch said, eyes glazed over. Wait...why did Gura think of her as the Witch? Ina is a priestess. "Ina... are you... alright? You don't seem yourself." Ina turned to the smaller woman, her eyes...Gura looked away and shivered. That was repulsive. Black in black, two tiny dots in the center, a shade lighter. Expression like one of post-orgasm bliss combined with utter madness. "What are you doing to Kiara?" She asked, tremor in her voice. "That's a secret. I can't tell you." Ina thought for a moment, then sighed. "Gura, I think I have to kill you now." She said distantly.

>> No.6950286

>>6946863
> the last one about Reine
> but from her POV, detailing her thought process and deductions when desperately searching for (you)
> (you) are complicating things by being an opsec nutjob who watched way too much DEFCON: not posting pics of yourself anywhere public, erasing all EXIF data and repacking all the random photos of sunsets, just in case, using VPN, random emails and 32-character length passwords etc. etc.

>> No.6950486

>>6945935
> protecc precious left boob, right boob probably can take care of itself

>> No.6951585

>SEA monkey holiday ongoing
>Thread slows down to a crawl
Coincidence?

>> No.6951685

>>6951585
Actually, the past few days've been unusually active, not counting the shitposting

>> No.6951722

>>6943234
I hate you.

>> No.6951771

>>6951585
It's like five AM

>> No.6951877

>>6951585
Just waiting for discussion to pick up
Not about braps, scat or teeth-shattering, heart-wrenching abuse, about cute fluffy stuff
Preferrably Fubuki, but Mio is fine too

God I wish to just spend the eternity cuddling them

>> No.6951902

>>6945289
Can't ever, EVER, have enough Fubuki.
This feels like it's gonna be some bona-fide gourmet shit, so I'm looking forward to it, Anon.

>> No.6952043

>>6951685
>Shitposting
CAN DO!

(You) felt more than saw the sunlight, the blind on your face was still tight, and woke up. "Who's t-" "Haachama has a new recipe for you to try! It's yummy, eat!" You swallowed hard and pulled against the chains holding you, crucified but feet on the ground, to the wall. Your arms ached, and your stomach was bloated and in constant pain. Behind you, on the wall, was splatters and splashes of your own waste. Haato stepped forward and grabbed your face pinching your mouth open and forcing the 'food' into your gullet. It was horrible. It tasted like actual shit. You gagged and heaved, spitting it on her face backed by vomit. The fist never came. "Awww... you don't love me? How can you say you love me if you don't eat my poop!?" She giggled manically. Her laughter faded, and the door closed behind her. Tears dripped from your as you began to sob. How had this happened? What had you done to deserve this?

>> No.6952057

/wg/ really went down on quality in recent days.

>> No.6952099

Reminder to ignore obvious bait posting.

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>>6952043
Well played faggot.

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>>6952057
>the earlythread fag is ruining the /wg/ shitposting including but not limited to Anon x Anon (xAnon?), The Taiga posting, the Lamy fucker, etc..
What happened bros... the golden age...

>> No.6952161

>>6952043
You know, I can actually see her doing something like this, given a few more years for her menhera to fester.

>> No.6952200

>>6952134
have faith anon, we'll pull through in due time. Just keep reading, writing, and don't give those fags any attention

>> No.6952222

>>6952134
It'll never be the same, but that doesn't mean we cant make it better. I'm brainstorming up a Botan fic so look forward to that eventually.

>> No.6952264

>>6952134
you literally just copy pasted this post from the last thread down to the filename wtf

>> No.6952298

>>6952264
Come on dude, don't respond. Why do you think these guys have popped out of the woodwork at the same time? It's the same group of cockroaches as it was a few days ago.

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>>6952298
I for one, have never engaged in any shitposting of the like until after the thread hits bump limit. as seen in my post last thread. the post this dude literally just cntrl+c'ed

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>>6952342
Its easy, you be positive and override the concern trolls feeble attempt at a negative message.

We think positive here.

>> No.6952454

>>6952342
Ah so your problem isn't about the early thread, it's about how you can't do your ERP anymore

>> No.6952459

>>6952298
Let people speak their mind, god damn, why are you so obsessive with gatekeeping.

>> No.6952576

>>6952454
I dont do that either. it was fun to watch though. And im not trying to spin this shit anymore man, im tired of it. still a no from me on the early threads but I faggots like you wont stop at it anyway. whats the fuckin point. tl:dr /wg/ gets western civilization'ed in 4 threads.

>> No.6952684

>>6952576
Feel free to stop coming here at any time, you'd be doing everyone a favor

>> No.6952694

>>6952684
No just you

>> No.6952722

>>6952694
>it's another "everybody is the OP" retard
I'm not getting into this. You'll get bored sooner or later anyway

>> No.6952775

>>6952684
buddy, I aint even throwing hands. why u gotta be such a cockroach ya dumb cunt

>> No.6952793

>>6952684
>>6952722
Man, you sound insecure.

>> No.6952812

All I'm seeing is both side not contributing anything worthwhile to the thread

>> No.6952864

>>6952812
I'm busy working on my fic. I don't really care about dead hours.

>> No.6952915

Id like to remind you faggots that this is a writing thread. And you should probably post a prompt or a story or something.

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>>6941014
Requesting HoloFantasy ALT featuring Kanata

>> No.6953229

>>6952993
You really want little Anon to fuck an actual angel? Her boss would flip her shit.

>> No.6953304

>>6953229
Hey, she's not an Abrahamic angel.

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>>6953229
Absolutely. As for her boss, I'm sure she'll understand.

>> No.6953357

>>6953229
I would slam into Kanata like the fist of an angry God.

Which may not just be a metaphor afterwards.

>> No.6953394

>>6953318
Kanata isn't exactly interested in Anon in a 'romantic' manner, but if it's an order from the Goddess of Pleasure she wouldn't be able to refuse it and that has potential to bloom into something...
If someone else wants to take this go ahead. I don't feel comfortable writing Kanata smut and I'm still in the beginning stages of another HoloALT and an actual chapter.

>> No.6953431

>>6953304
What kind of angel is she?

>> No.6953638

>>6952134
As long as we don’t lose our writeanons we still survive and rise again

>> No.6953967

>>6953431
The angel of dick

>> No.6954036

What would you do if shes one of those angels that doesn't have anything downstairs?

>> No.6954051

>>6954036
Use her mouth

>> No.6954056

>>6954036
Blowjob, gorilla handjob, assjob, titjob...

>> No.6954065

>>6954036
There’s plenty that can be done with a mouth, anon.

>> No.6954074

>>6954056
>titjob
Well, it's very kind of you to consider it, anon.

>> No.6954080

>>6953638
Writeanons don't matter if there's no audience.

>> No.6954093

>>6954074
I will rub against every part of her fucking body if I can't actually stick it in her pussy/ass.

>> No.6954096

>>6954036
How many holes do you think we've already made? Nose, ears, eyes, belly button, sleeves, shoes, feet, hair, underwear etc.

>> No.6954110

>>6954093
Kek, fair enough

>> No.6954193

>>6954096
That's some awe inspiring determination there.

>> No.6954218

>>6954074
God I would love to rub my dick on one of the flat-chested holos. Watching her trying to push her almost non-existent mounds of flesh around my dick would so hot.

>> No.6954224

>>6954096
>eyes
???

>> No.6954247

>>6954224
>he's never had an eyejob before
you're missing out on the best part of sex anonchama

>> No.6954253

>>6954218
Exceptionally based, my good man.

>> No.6954259

>>6954218
Dangerously Based

>> No.6954319

>>6954218
honestly i reckon matsuri would be able to do things with her fingers and mouth during a titfuck that'd make up for it ten times over

holy fuck i want to stick my dick in that crazy more than i want my next breath

>> No.6954351

>>6954319
i'm imagining matsuri doing the grapefruit and i burst out laughing

>> No.6954386

>>6954319
I could also imagine Suisei being proud about her chest and convincing you that she can get you off with her titjob.

>> No.6954398

>>6954319
you can't even imagine the things I want to do with that flat chested menhera.

I would trace my fingers(and dick) over her tanlines, suckle and slobber over her nipples until they're swollen and erect then bite down on them as she screams for more. This doesn't even include how much I would manhandle her while I fuck her senseless.

>> No.6954438

>>6954398
Fumihiko is that you?

>> No.6954451

>>6954386
yeah but suisex isn't a massive coombrain like matsuri, quite the opposite

i mean it'd still be fucking hot - an eager but inexperienced girl trying to get you off is great - but i don't think she'd be quite as good as the menhera

>>6954398
indescribably based

>> No.6954478

Is this /wg/ or the slutposting general?
>>>/trash/ is that way guys

>> No.6954497

>>6954478
same thing, really

>> No.6954505

>>6954478
shut the fuck up retard this is fuel for horny writeanons

>> No.6954524

>>6954505
soz bro it's actually horny writeanons doing the posting

>> No.6954533

>>6954524
bro
i'm fucking one of them too

>> No.6954558

>>6954533
you're fucking a horny writeanon!?

>> No.6954566

>>6954505
>be writeanon
>annoyed that a bunch of retards are jerking each other off with borderline RP
>get called a retard for saying so
S-sugoi...

>> No.6954570

>>6954438
no but his art turns me into a coomerbrain sex addled caveman.

>>6954478
those two are not mutually exclusive. just see the stuff in the archives

>> No.6954578

How about leglock with Lovelock? Honestly don't care about her past, it's just a cute design
Doesn't matter if it's hatefucking or lovemaking. Just don't go overboard with abuse

>> No.6954592

>>6954566
Don't bother, they'll use any excuse at this point.

>> No.6954598

>>6954578
>don't go overboard with abuse
anonchama...

>> No.6954606

>>6954578
>Lovelock
Who?

>> No.6954609

>>6954558
I FUCKING WISH!!! I'd spend every fucking day just fucking getting them riled up so we can pound out thirty thousand word NSFW stories DAILY
>>6954566
if this doesn't make your dick hard and force your g. docs to fly open i don't know what to tell you

>> No.6954642

>>6954609
>30k word smut
man i love smut and i think trying to write even a 10k word smutfic would be agonizing

>> No.6954649

>>6954609
I don’t write smut, so no, it doesn’t make me want to open google doc.

>> No.6954665

>>6954649
okay but apparently me and some others do so...........

>> No.6954704

>>6954665
And it annoyed him and others so.....

>> No.6954720

>>6954642
It sounds nightmarish to imagine, but on the bright side, it'd either have a LOT of sex or be very deeply emotionally gratifying sex after watching two autists manage to court each other over the course of the entire thing and it finally ends in a creampie.

>> No.6954735

>>6954704
nobody cares, go to /trash/. threadly RP is like tradition here

>> No.6954755

>>6954735
>threadly RP is like tradition here
Only after the bump limit.

>> No.6954786

>>6954720
yeah, if it was a proper story with sex being the culmination of a relationship arc then i can see that working well
>>6954755
ah it's one of you guys
here's your (You) stipend for the evening

>> No.6954793

>>6954649
I'm a writeanon and while I don't often write smut, but sometimes the idea really sticks in my head and begs to be written. I can't help but flesh out the scene in my head until I'm satisfied and then write it down and then be disappointed with the finished product

>> No.6954822

>>6954786
>Incredibly long romance arc with Pekora or Aqua ends in lovey-dovey sex
Sublime thoughts. That Cover High smut chapter is going to warm both my heart and my groin, I can feel it.

>> No.6954852

>>6954793
don't worry anon, your work satisfies me enough for the both of us

>> No.6954869

>>6954793
It's called not being a perfectionist.

>> No.6954899

>>6954822
i know a lot of us feel pressured by expectations... but holy shit i cannot WAIT for that, i'm so hyped for it in the future

i'm sorry if i hurt you

>> No.6954953

>>6954899
>i'm sorry if i hurt you
eh????
>>6954793
Don't worry Anon, you're your own worst critic.

>> No.6954974

>>6954793
I don't often write smut either but when I do, I often find myself trying to limit my degeneracy Gangbang, Corruption, degradation, etc but I try to make my smut fluff. I just need that one anon to give me a go ahead just so I can write degenerate shit and I will.

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hellooo is weirdanon here? i was wondering if he really picked up my mori potty training prompt! im excited!

>> No.6955016

>>6954953
oh someone asked writeanons how they felt about their works being anticipated and the general response seemed to be of discomfort

personally idm, i write what my dick tells me to and anybody that likes it, likes it

>> No.6955038

>>6954786
So are we just going to revise history that rp was only tolerated during after the bump limit?

>> No.6955123

>>6955038
well retard chan, if you're that concerned maybe you could write something instead of complain?

>> No.6955153

>>6955123
But he did wrote? He's writing his complaint.

>> No.6955186

>>6955123
they're just fishing for replies bro, it's not worth engaging. you'll derail the thread

>> No.6955197

>>6955038
kys

>> No.6955213

>>6954852
t-thanks?

>>6954869
>>6954953
maybe I am a little more harsh on myself when it comes to smut but I really can't help it. The imagery in my heads gives me a massive boner but when I write it out it just feels... underwhelming

>> No.6955248

>>6955213
You're not on /lit/ so I don't know why you're taking yourself seriously.

>> No.6955251

>>6955213
that does seem to be a common issue here. it'll probably go away the more you write and the more praise you get for it

have you got any smut in the archive?

>> No.6955284

>6955248
This reeks of bait.
>>6955213
Have anything you've put out? I'll give it another read.

>> No.6955315

>>6955213
Believe in your cock, writeanon.

>> No.6955353

>>6955284
>This reeks of bait
Anon, you have people from various nations, some with English as their second language. There’s no reason why he should take himself seriously.

>> No.6955465

>>6955353
Perhaps you're right - any mention of that place instantly puts me on edge - but I can understand that Anon wants to create something *he* can be proud of as well.

>> No.6955630

>>6954993

I'm here, been losing significant amounts of motivation to write with each passing /wg/ thread so unfortunately I can't guarantee that I will finish it. Sorry for the flaky response.

Out of sheer curiosity are you the same guy that requested the Mori emeto fic?

>> No.6955656

>>6955465
>any mention of that place instantly puts me on edge
Why?

>> No.6955698

>>6955630
you can't let the shitposting get to you anonchama

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6955748

>>6955656
I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and assume this isn't some incredibly elaborate setup to hook me on your bait. One of the first real annoyances-at-worst this place ever had was someone from /lit/'s /wg/ - which is apparently a barren wasteland since every retard there drove away their authors - that was trying to peddle some bullshit here. He was an issue for maybe three threads until people finally started to ignore him/the bait they were posting. As such, any mention of the board is now met with disdain.

>> No.6955772

>>6955748
Anon, literally everyone knows to ignore /lit/ from /a/ to /xs/. They're a laughingstock for a reason.

>> No.6955864
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>>6955748
>Taking /lit/ seriously for even a second
Don’t know if I should feel disgusted by you.

>> No.6955871

>>6955248
I know but I genuinely enjoy writing and I just want to improve myself where I can. Perhaps it is because I am quite new to writing smut but it's a niggling feeling at the back of my head I can't get rid of.

>>6955251
>>6955284
not sure if you've read it, but for smut I wrote the Noel auntiefication fic(smut is in the second half), the (you) x Coco x Lulu threesome and I suppose my most well known one is the Suisex chapter of the menhera wrangler series. Don't get me wrong, I'm generally confident in my characterizations and story progression, I just don't have the same amount of confidence in smut and I'm just eager to improve it for my own enjoyment and for you anons.

>>6955315
Thanks, I do and it's ruining me. I can't go a day without thinking of how to blow a chuuba's back out.

>> No.6955959

>>6955772
No shit. Didn't stop people from replying either way. Either way, that's my reasoning. It wouldn't be out of the cards for them to reappear given how fucking nightmarish it's been the past few days.
>>6955864
You don't have to take them seriously if they derail threads with a single post until people learn to stop fucking replying to them.

>> No.6955971

>>6955871
i've read all three of them and they're fantastic, anonchama. my favourite was the suisex chapter!

>> No.6956008

>>6955959
being unwilling to use a filter is like 90% of this thread's problems desu

>> No.6956329

>>6955630
ah! dont feel pressured, its ok its ok! and no! but i really enjoyed that one story aswell, you're really good!

>> No.6956649

Stay M O T I V A T E D, writeanons.

>> No.6956669

>>6956008
Doubt filter would work.

>> No.6956699

>>6956649
make me
please

>> No.6956717

>>6956329

I hate leaving stories half-arsed so I probably will finish it, just instead of my usual turnaround time of a couple of days it might take upwards of a week.

One final question because it wasn't made clear: is Mori just wetting herself here
or are you also asking for "the works"?


>>6955698

Thanks anon.

>> No.6956804

>>6956699
One dose of motivation, coming right up.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jrg9KxGNeJY

>> No.6956809

>>6956717
that's cool bro, take it at your own pace. it's not like we're going anywhere!

>> No.6956894

>>6956804
I'M MOTIVATED

>> No.6956907

>>6956717
i think you all should take more time to yourselves, just a few days to finish a piece is too little, dont be too harsh on yourself...!

and as for your question regarding the piece itself, if you're fine with writing calli messing herself, then i'd love to see it too!

>> No.6956912

>>6956894
GODDAMN RIGHT YOU ARE

>> No.6956997

>>6956912
you made me laugh, anon, and i needed it
thanks

>> No.6957042

>>6946145
Looking forward to it

>> No.6957162

>>6956008
>filter
Don't work.

>> No.6957218

>>6956804
>vergil is back on /wg/ to keep Anons motivated
Thanks Vergil!

>> No.6958139

>>6955213
Anon, just write.

>> No.6958287

>>6958139
Such a hard thing to do sometimes

>> No.6958381

>>6958287
I just think anons are just overthinking at this point.

>> No.6958422

>>6958381
Again, why? They should stop being perfectionist.

>> No.6958427

>>6958381
anons are always overthinking. it's just a turbulent time right now and it's difficult to find the same spark

>> No.6958549

>>6958427
I just think they should calm down. Again, it isn't like they're writing high literature in the first place.

>> No.6958577

>>6941014
https://img1.gelbooru.com/images/b9/0c/b90c7ffc2d5cfc6331a042138246ba0c.jpg (not posting image just in case)

I got really horny looking at that link last night and it spawned three ideas

1) loli matsuri X shota anon
2) (you) rape loli matsuri
3) loli matsuri rapes (you)

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>>6958577
How are these vtubers?

>> No.6958717

>>6941014
It's the apocalypse. The end is nigh, so you and your favourite chuuba spend time reminiscing about your lives together, before agreeing to meet each other in the next life and dying in each other's arms.

>> No.6958735

>>6954822
>>6954899
Crazy how I get lewd rabbit on the brain and decide to work on the bonus chapter, then see these comments just a few hours later.
I don't plan on letting you lads down.

>> No.6958775

>>6958624
That anon needs to take his pills.

>> No.6958776

>>6958735
LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOO

>> No.6958784

>>6958717
damn... authanon, pls...

>> No.6958804

>>6958717
this sounds cute as fuck

>> No.6958834

>>6958735
>it's happening
Oh boy. Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy.

>> No.6958891

>>6958776
>>6958834
Easy there, Takeshi. Even if I finish it before the story proper is done, the plan is to hold off on posting it until the end. It'd be weird to show the culmination of (You) and Pekora's romantic arc when the two of you haven't even gotten together yet.

>> No.6958931

>>6958891
>Takeshi
Who?

>> No.6958988

>>6958891
Okay, okay, fair enough. I can get behind that.

>>6958931
srs?

>> No.6959073

>>6958931
>he lacks the critical information
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UHmFbT8DPX8

>> No.6959117

>>6959073
Who?

>> No.6959375

>>6941365
I’m the OP and I did not request that.

>> No.6959398

>>6958717
I like this, incoming autism in one chunk this time.

>> No.6959400

>>6959375
I'm the OP and I did request that.

>> No.6959429

>>6959398
Hit me with your best shot, anon. My eyes are closed and mouth wide open.

>> No.6959507

>>6959400
You can fuck off.

>> No.6959588

>>6959507
New thread soon, anon!

>> No.6959794

>>6959588
What?

>> No.6959854
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6959854

i want Mori to take off her flesh suit and go full skelly

>> No.6959860

>>6958577
Link is broken.

>> No.6959990

>>6959860
>>6958624
Are you guys taking the piss? Link works fine for me

It's just matsuri naked in public except for 3 bandaids

>> No.6960007

>>6959990
Link is broken on my end. Don't know what to tell you.

>> No.6960218

>>6959854
A skeleton? Why?

>> No.6960255

>>6960218
Maybe anon has a skeleton fetish. Maybe it’s because her fanbase is represented as skeletons. Who knows?

>> No.6960295

>>6960255
Yeah but like what's the prompt? Just Mori being a skeleton? You can just greentext that.

>> No.6960310

>>6960295
I sometimes wonder if those kind of posts are just minimalistic shitposts.

>> No.6960353

>>6960218
RUBBING MY COCK ON MORI'S PELVIC BONES
CUMMING ALL OVER HER RIBCAGE
FUCKING HER ORBITAL SOCKETS
GET DEADNANT GET DEADNANT SEX SEX SEXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX UOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

>> No.6960362

>>6960295
I imagine it in a comical, over-the-top fashion.
Like, she hops out of the flesh and immediately sounds just like Skeletor. Then, she goes and scares the shit out of her genmates for no reason in particular.
But that’s me. I wonder what anon had in mind?

>> No.6960416

>>6960362
>But that’s me. I wonder what anon had in mind?
That’s the problem in the end. It’s too vague.

>> No.6960426

>>6959429
Apcolypse Meow

Boton and I squatted back to back on the edge of my backyards cliff overlooking the rolling waves of the nearby sea. The blood red sky melted into golden clouds parted by a gigantic Jupiter sized asteroid hurtling towards earth. The local news did its best to downplay it to avoid a outright panic a month ago, telling people it would scoot by just out of our orbit. Then two weeks ago they admitted it would probably impact but our atmosphere would burn it all up till it was the size of a golf ball. Then a week ago they informed us that it would probably be the size of Texas but it'd be ok if we got to a shelter in time. Then just a hour ago, the tvs went dead, and the radio stations filled with static, and the phones lines cut to nothingness, cementing in the fact that we were in fact fucked.
Botan showed up at my doorstep within minuets after the phones went dead, banging frantically on my door with enough force to cause the solid steel door to shudder and almost buckle inwards. While she tried her best to remain stoic, she was visibly shaking and when she saw me she engulfed me in a Lion hug, (think a bear hug but with more substance), and buried her face in my shoulder. When I placed a hand on the back of her shaggy hair I heard her let out a cute little whimper, and I felt my shirt dampen. The poor Lion was terrified, with good reason.
One thing led to another and we grabbed the last two bottles of Smirnoff and headed to my backyard, since the gigantic space rock all to visibly was encroaching upon our planet's atmosphere. You could hear the rumbles of it getting closer, and you could smell burnt stone and space dust. It sort of smelt like sulfur but more alien I guess. But me being there seemed to steel Botan's will and she followed me to my favorite hangout spot, and the reason why I bought this house to begin with.
While it had a basically non existent front yard besides a mailbox and a path up to my door, it had a massive backyard, and the crown jewel was the gorgeous cliff and sea expanse. It had some of the most beautiful sunsets I had ever seen, and ironically this was one of the best.
Wordlessly we made our way to the edge of the cliff, and each taking a bottle of vodka we squatted down, leaning against each other for support. She had, after all shown me the joy of slav squatting, and the fact she casually showed me her back was a sign of immense trust. I could feel her chugging the entire bottle trying to gain some much needed courage, since she could see our end hurtling towards us at astronomical speeds.
At the rate the asteroid was bearing down on us, I was doubtful we even had a hour left. Before I could say anything though, Botan's small voice cut the silence.
"Hey, remember when we first met?" I could feel the rumble of her voice through her back, and I felt her tremble slightly as she spoke.
"Yeah we did that stereotypical anime bumping into each other meeting."
"Good shit right? You were awesome for buying me a new lunch"
"How could I let such a cute girl starve?" I teased back
I felt her breath hitch, and her her muscles tensed.
"We would have never met if I never turned that corner huh?"
"Probably not, it kinda was a once in a lifetime encounter."
"Was it worth it?" She murmured, before taking a long swig of her vodka.
"Very much so, I got to spend several years with the cutest lion."
Botan took in another labored breath and began to tremble slightly. I was about to ask if she wanted to be held but she instead rested the back of her head against mine. Her fluffy mane fell over my shoulders and entered my peripheral vision.
"Anon do you believe in the after life?" Botan's voice was the smallest I had ever heard it, and It carried a crack in it deeper than the grand canyon.
"I like to think I'm an agnostic. I never really practiced, but I do believe in a higher power."
"Then promise me we'll meet again, that you'll come find me on the other side."
Determination flowed into Botan's voice and I felt her back flex, pushing me forward. She spun around and grabbed me by the shoulders. I could feel her black talons sink into my shoulders. A smile crept across my lips, that was my lion, always finding ways to keep herself going strong.
"Fuck yes we will, if you don't find me first, I'll find you!"
I reached out and petted her head, and she let out a soft sound and nuzzled into my hand. The rumbling became louder as the retardedly large space rock entered our inner atmosphere.
There was no time left for pleasant moments. Botan hearing what she needed too reached into her coat and pulled out a small 9mm and handed me one. She raised it to the side of her head, and with a salute, pulled the trigger, and tumbled down the cliff side into the hungry sea below.
Following suit I raised my own 9mm and pulled the trigger, and was consumed by a comforting wave of blackness before I was eaten by the sea.

(This was kinda more dark than I'm used to)

>> No.6960443

>>6960426
First sentence
>Boton and I
I literally burst out laughing

>> No.6960461

>>6960353
>RUBBING MY COCK ON MORI'S PELVIC BONES
Doesn't sound pleasurable in the slightest.

>> No.6960538

>>6960443
Slavs gonna slav squat.

>> No.6960597

>>6960426
Hey bro, this was the best of your minifics so far. I gotta ask though, why the suicide ending? Asteroid's gonna blow them tl bits anyway so I'd wanna spend as long as I possibly can savoring my lover's warmth and feeling their body against mine.

>> No.6960615

>>6960597
Wow, way to be grateful, anon.

>> No.6960623

>>6959860
fuck, i checked it 3 times

https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/91391976

>> No.6960659

>>6960615
Fuck are you on about?

>> No.6960711

>>6960597
I sort of painted them as old friends, cause I didn't see that lovers part of your prompt, my bad.

I also feel that Botan would be the type that would want to go out on her own terms.

>> No.6960746

>>6960615
Well, the lad misspelled Botan’s name in the first sentence, and ended it on fucking suicide when the original prompt left no indication that was okay.

>> No.6960817

>>6960746
Prompt poster here - I don't mind.

>>6960711
That's cool, dude, prompts aren't requests, they're just ideas that might catch your interest. I thought it was a great little read and I'm happy you thought the idea was interesting.

>> No.6960831

>>6960623
So it was the same for you?

>> No.6960875

>>6960623
i hate that matsuri's horny meme face is all anyone ever draws of her, and yet it never fails to get me hard as rock

>> No.6960908

>>6960875
>i hate that matsuri's horny meme face
Why?

>> No.6960918

>>6960875
There's a reason why it's so effective in making us extremely horny for this menhera

>> No.6960960

>>6960918
It's a turn off for me.

>> No.6960973

>>6959854
I didn't write this -- an actual writer did this for an actual game, which is why this shouldn't be added to any archive -- but it immediately came to mind.
https://pastebin.com/s2LfmSux

>> No.6960977

>>6960362
>>6960416
I just thought of the skeleton thing first after seeing that pic, and thought it was amusing enough to post

Now I imagine a weird scenario with her doing some kind of striptease, starting with just her clothes of course, and it somehow devolve s into her doing something like that scene from Terminator 2 where Arnie strips of his arm flesh.
But then she just gets spurred on continue, and she starts playing around with her boney parts, making you feel the contrast between her soft bits and bone.

>> No.6961005

>>6960973
Anon, I think you should remove that link

>> No.6961047

>>6960977
>striptease where the subject takes off their skin, revealing all the gore underneath, before ripping it away leaving only bones
bruh

>> No.6961066

>>6960977
Anon why?

>> No.6961137

>>6961047
Nah, I'll pass.

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>>6960353
Calm down there Date, your bone fetish is seriously getting out of hand

>> No.6961178

>>6961163
Don't tell him to calm down.

>> No.6961211

>>6961178
Don't tell him not to tell him to calm down.

>> No.6961213

I'm liking the direction this thread has taken.

>> No.6961225

>>6961005
why?

>> No.6961267

New thread
>>6961240

>> No.6961404

...why don’t we just chill here and continue to shitpost, and only migrate to the new thread once this one’s archived? I feel like that kills two birds with one stone

>> No.6961420

>>6961404
Your ways are dying old man, get with the times.

>> No.6961487

>>6960875
never has mental illness been so fucking hot

>> No.6961522

>>6961404
I’m down, I don’t know why we didn’t try this solution earlier

>> No.6961535

>>6961404
What! Actual logic? In here? No. No, we should migrate and spend the entire thread sulking and insulting others.

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>>6961047
>>6961066
idunno, blame the horror movies that traumatized me when I was a kid I guess
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yHg61ZaIElA

>> No.6961638

So let me get the shitposting started: what'd everyone jerk off to most recently?

>> No.6961654
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6961654

Now that Noel’s started playing skyward sword I want to see Groose x Noel fic

>> No.6961694

>>6961638
(You)s are the only thing that make me hard any more.

>> No.6961714

>>6961694
I'll give you one, free of charge.

>> No.6961733

>>6961714
That's kinda gay.

>> No.6961735

>>6961638
Surprisingly, I haven’t jerked off in a fucking long time, mostly because writing has kept me busy. It also happens that I don’t write smut.
That Shion one from before got me close though

>> No.6961747

>>6961694
this one is on me, anon

>> No.6961778

>>6961733
Here's another.
Will this make it definitely gay?

>> No.6961779

>>6961694
Here you go, lad. Enjoy your complimentary erection.

>> No.6961796

>>6961654
Anon, what the fuck

>> No.6961799

>>6961735
The wax play/abuse one or the futa one?

>> No.6961804

>>6961694
>>6961694
does this count as jacking someone off?

>> No.6961841

New thread
>>6961240
>>6961240
>>6961240

>> No.6961843

>>6961799
Wax play. Shit was pretty hot

>> No.6961881

>>6961804
Think that ship's already sailed with all the smut fiction, brah.

>> No.6961884

>>6961796
Hey, I would read it. You should too if it ever gets made. Groose is the literal definition of gigachad and what all of us should aspire to be.

>> No.6961913

>>6961843
Fucking oath it was. I'm not even into wax.

>> No.6961923

>>6961804
Yes. Is there a problem?

>> No.6961948

>>6961923
That'd make you gay, anonchama.

>> No.6961956

>>6961913
Right? Neither am I.
Brat does things to me I swear

>> No.6961962

>>6961404
Oh now you care about the early threads. When other anons were complaining about it you fucks were supportive.

>> No.6961979

>>6961796
It's a weird concept but... I don't hate it

>> No.6961982

>>6961948
Only for you babe

>> No.6962019

>>6961962
Are you seriously going to continue bitching here when the solution has finally appeared? I'd shut my mouth and go with it if I were you. Or is this not about the early threads at all?

>> No.6962027

>>6961714
>>6961747
>>6961779
>>6961804
Thanks guys, just came.

>> No.6962033

>>6962019
Not really a solution. Just being blind to the problem.

>> No.6962055

>>6962027
Wipe it on a picture of your oshi and post a pic of it or it didn't happen.

>>6962033
Kill yourself.

>> No.6962095

>>6962055
He's right though.

>> No.6962104

>>6962055
Don't have a physical picture.

>> No.6962124

>>6962095
No, you're not. Kill yourself.

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>>6962124
Anon, take your meds.

>> No.6962179

>>6962055
>no way to take a pic
>no printout of Mori
Welp, guess I didn't cum after all.

>> No.6962232

>>6962179
Way to drop the ball anon. You've really got no digital camera?

>> No.6962244

>>6962169
Nice inspect tool bro.

>> No.6962249

>>6962179
Did you ever really cum if there wasn't another observer? It could be all in your head.

>> No.6962274

>>6962244
Yes, anon, people have different opinions. Like how people didn't want early threads but you brute force them.

>> No.6962296

>>6962232
Yeah, no smartphone because I don't want the government tracking me even more than they already do.

>> No.6962298

>>6962179
Wipe it on your PC screen, and sketch it by hand. Then come to my house and show me the sketch.

>> No.6962323

>>6962274
>everyone who i don't like is the grinch
No seriously, kill yourself.

>> No.6962349

>>6962323
Yes, that’s how you look right now. Take your meds.

>> No.6962419

>>6962349
You are worse than the guy forcing early threads. Drink bleach.

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>>6962323
But retard chan, if your willing to reply to yourself 30000 times, shouldn't you write something instead? Wouldn't that be more fun?

>> No.6962459

>>6962419
>Keeps defending early threads.
Just say you made a mistake. God damn. You narcissistic bitch.

>> No.6962473

>>6962448
Apparently not to you little weasels. Stay in your discord.

>> No.6962503

>>6962459
If it makes you angry, then I'm all for it.

>> No.6962504

>>6962473
What did he mean by this.

>> No.6962537

>>6962504
Guys is off his meds

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