/wg/ - Writing General - Tamaki Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>11936180

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>12020033
After years and years, you finally manage to get a job as a manager in Cover Corp. However, you end up as Kiara's manager, which is very unfortunate because you absolutely hate her. This would be a story of how you slowly start to fall in love with her the more you work with her.

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>>12020033
your loving wife Marine giving you a handjob and licking your chest while showing you pictures of her at the age of 14

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>>12022675
needed

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>>12019950
This retard cat turns me on like no one else
>>12020033
Can somebody write a story solely based around Tamaki's "oh~ yes" in this video? https://youtube.com/watch?v=I21CbgW30CY

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>>12020033
Noraneko is acting clingier than usual to Fumi, wanting to come over to her house often and practically sit in her lap rubbing her face and breasts all over her. Turns out she is in heat. Fumi is a fox god so she can change her appearance to suit any need, even if it's the need of her retarded cat friend begging to be fucked by a penis, her friends penis
Or you can make Fumi not a futa.
Or you can just write about Noraneko in heat and raping (You) or a person of your choice. Just throwing some ideas out there

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>>12020033
Kronii menhera fic

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Anyone else remember an Ayame fic about some cop having to patrol a mountain and encountering her? The writeanon was asking if the second half of it was alright. It seemed pretty well written so was wondering if the person writing is still here.

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>>12019950
Just looking at that image scares me. If Noraneko does all the crazy shit she does, what's her definition of sex? I feel like it'd terrify me

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>>12028578
God, IMAGINE sex with a legitimate autist.

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>>12020033
Marine accidentally drops the wrong video. Instead of putting out her AMV Unison, she instead put out her JAV where all variations of her fuck each other in a massive Marine-exclusive hot and steamy orgy. You can have each Marine have a different variation of some sort to explore a wild range of fetishes.

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>>12029716
She starts chewing mint gum, then after getting her mouth minty, spits her mint saliva on your dick, freezing it

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>>12030453
She places a mentos inside your urethra and injects coca cola into your balls. If you can't resist her trying to make you cum, your cock will explode into a gory mess.

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>>12026647
I'm still here but recently I haven't gotten any good amount of free time to myself, meaning I can't make any good progress. However I'm still pretty motivated to write the story, I have the skeleton of it all planned out. If my situation persists, it will take a long time but I am determined to get it done one way or another.

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>>12031100
ganbare writeanon

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>>12031100
That's nice to hear. I only recently started having time to write again, so hopefully all goes well with your story.

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alright writeanons, let us know what's being baked in the oven of your brain, and for the rest of you, what are you looking forward to? Say something to help motivate the writeanons as well.

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>>12032543
I'm looking forward to Holofantasy 6, Cover High 6, Holocalypse 6, and Girl-boss Watson And Her Paramilitary Death Squad 5. I haven't read any of the other WIP series, so that's it.

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>>12032543
Trying to light a fire under my own ass to get myself to work on CH. The next chapter is more or less fully mapped out in my head, but when I try to actually put any of it down on paper my brain refuses to cooperate.

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>>12032543
Shounenshit doesn't appeal to me, which rules out the majority of the series; I was thoroughly enjoying Ritual Book, though. Also quite looking forward to the continuation of the Chocosen series.

Smut aside, I most enjoy any stories which are designed to cause pain, to trick the reader, or to wax philosophical.
I hate fluff.

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>>12032543
Still trying to somehow manage my time and start working on a Fubuki story that I've been thinking of since the end of August. I have the 'skeleton' of it thought of, but I'm yet to write it.
Also truth be told I don't know if what I have planned will even work the way I want it to, but I'll still try it out.

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>>12032976
based

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>>12033007
I love Friend

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>>12033007
Hey, that webm gives me an idea. To that guy complaining about no one liking futa yesterday - just put Fubuki in it. The thread'll be all over it like flies on shit.

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>>12019950
BRAAAAAAAAAAAP

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>>12033786
Hey, thanks for your valuable contribution.

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>>12033747
I don't know about fellow Fox lovers, but I'm not about to close my eyes on something I dislike just because Fubuki is in it.
I didn't like the NTR fic, I didn't like the scat fic and I'll definitely not like the futa pic.

I know it's most likely just me and a handful of others, but I just get irked at this misconception, for some reason.

Should probably start charging for rent, huh...

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>>12033898
You read them though, didn't you?

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>>12033957
Why would I read something I don't like fundamentally just because it has my Fox of choice?

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>>12033747
Honestly it kind of falls apart for Futa since for the most part it's still Fubuki and Anon (Reader-Insert) as the characters. Futa prompts are from what I can tell are usually Talent and Other Talent, one or both of whom has a dick.
This forum doesn't really read or write those kinds of works and well the latest example of this is the Iofi and Ollie futa fic, which as far as I can tell no one read here.
So I don't think the add Fubuki to it and it'll get readers thing will really work in this specific scenario.

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>>12034039
I don't know why, that's literally why I'm advertising Fubuki as the postergirl for fucked up fetishes - because you do anyway, even when you say you don't want to. Even the fucking scat fic got a positive reception.

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>>12032543
Man... the oven of my brain is cooking way too much bread. Aside from thoughts on how I'm going to continue Holocalypse after I finish the chapter I'm writing, I have ideas for a Shion story where she's your high school bully but the two of you suddenly have to work together to solve an otherworldly mystery affecting the two of you, Nene autism fluff, a rough and unfinished plan of another series involving various chuubas from lots of different companies/indies, (You) waking up with amnesia and having a bunch of chuubas try to convince you that you're their boyfriend and a lot more.
The only problem is the oven is set to room temperature, meaning half of these ideas will probably never get finished.

>>12032593
Pic rel is a progress report if you're interested

>>12032918
Surprisingly based taste. I'm a fluff fag through and through (apart from a few fics I've written) so I can't fully agree but I've been meaning to branch out and try something new. Just don't know where to start.

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>>12034082
>Iofi and Ollie futa fic, which as far as I can tell no one read here.
Yeah, I think the fetish might not be the problem here.

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>>12033957
I didn't. Nor do I have any wish to.
Why would I read something that I know for a fact I dislike?

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>>12032543
Midnight oil HoloFan work I'm probably going to stop soon since it's so early. I have three chapter's worth of shit at least planned out but if I keep writing on my phone I'm going to kill myself. Finally committing more to tonal music in the background on top of it. I've no ETA besides when it's finally done.
https://youtu.be/Hh45EYY5kwQ

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Got a question for futafags: do you want to fuck the dickgirl or have the dickgirl fuck you?

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>>12034212
Isn't it usually dickgirl on dickgirl?

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>>12034134
I mean it got 600 views on ao3, which as far as I can tell is pretty decent for hololive fanfic on that site, so it's got some people willing to read it, those people are of course not here so that's why my point is that a HoloxHolo fic really won't work out better if one of them is Fubuki than it would otherwise for the /wg/ audience.

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>>12034212
The futa will sub to me, no questions asked. Her dick will be made useless.

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>>12034251
Huh? Iofi on Ollie futa did well on ao3 and that's why putting Fubuki in a fic won't make it more popular among /wg/ readers?

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>>12034329
You weren't here when it was posted but it got fuck all of a response when it was originally posted here as a published google doc.

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>>12034397
I've been here since early May. Did you consider that maybe not as many people like Iofi or Ollie?

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>>12032908
>>12034131
>>12034192
LETS GOOOOOO

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>>12032543
More of that Bael series please

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>>12034754
The author said he was putting the series on pause to work on other stuff, mentioning the Gura short he did.

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>>12034131
Something that I've always been confused by; the fluff tag means it's just purely wholesome all the way through, right? Like, a depressing thriller with a saccharine sweet ending doesn't count as fluff, yeah?

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>>12034212
not gay or anything, 100% straight (honest) but if fubuki said she wanted to peg me i'd bring the lube and rubber gloves myself

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>>12034972
I wouldn't say all the way through, no. If it has a large portion of fluff in it I think it'll get the fluff tag, it doesn't necessarily have to be all fluff; although it's mostly up to the author. For example I wrote a fluff story that ended in tragedy, and it ended up getting the fluff tag.

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any spanking fics that are new-ish? Like, after the ryona play with Fubuki

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>>12035089
Fluff and tragedy aren't mutually exclusive. If it's both it gets both unless author tags are provided that want it to state otherwise.

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>>12034972
I think it just means that the author would like to tag the story as a fluffy story that elicits those kinds of emotions.

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>>12032543
Dunno, probably lost motivation to write after what happened as of recent. Might pick up a few stray prompts here and there if they catch my fancy but for now it's just slow riding.

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>>12035285
You good?

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>>12031225
Thanks anon
>>12031445
Thanks anon I hope too that everything with your story goes good.

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I think fluff is better after a struggle. It makes the happy end feel like a reward.

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>>12035327
Eh, I'll live.

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>>12035467
This a "happened here" thing or...? Either way, hope you find the inspiration again.

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>>12035123
Can't say I recall anything that had any spanking-focused scenes... High-Density Comet might have had some?

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>>12035797
Yeah, HDC had like a paragraph.

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>>12032543
>>12032593
I'm actually way ahead on girl boss Watson chapter 5, should have it out the next few days. I write more than I publish so I can go back and retcon shit that's not out yet.
Here's an excerpt from a future chapter. Tell me if it's pretty funny or too on the nose. I'm not changing this one but if it's too much then I won't be as obvious with these kinda stuff in the future. Some lines are italic but that doesn't work here:

“Right, right. Who was it that you left in charge? Think I ran into her once, the biker-looking Japanese chick?”
That girl was pretty cute, you’re not too sure about the weird wood sword though. Doesn’t seem effective.
“Yeah, she’s the founder’s… err- roommate?”
What the fuck? “Roommate…?”
“Man, I dunno. I don’t know anything, it feels like.” Watson swipes her nose, huffing slightly.
“She’s supposed to be the next boss in line, but I cut a deal with the founder and cut the line. I think she’s cool with it though. She just mostly browses like… Facebook memes or some cringe shit.”
“You sure…? Want me to look into her?” This doesn’t sound like the most-stable foundation for
a highly sophisticated criminal organization.
“Nah, I got a feeling it’ll work out all fine. And I’ve already had her checked.”
“What’s her name?” You should learn it, just in case you need it.
“…What
is her name? K-something, I don’t even remember, hah. Well, as they say,
forget about it!” Watson’s the only one who says that. Her and Italians.

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>>12034131
That’s a lot of ideas all of which sound real interesting. I hope you end up writing all of them

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>>12034131
I remember the Shion being your high school bully was a prompt once here but it was slightly different from what you have in mind.

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>>12036383
Yeah, I remember that too. Shion is just the perfect bully

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>>12034131
Damn that's a lot interesting ideas you got there. I'm also super happy your working on the next HC chapter, love that series.

And now that I think about it, that Shion prompt sounds kinda like the start of deltarune.

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>>12036012
It seems like decent bit of foreshadowing but the Ame lines feel a bit off in regards to feeling like her.

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>>12020033
Old prompt.
It's the apocalypse. The end is nigh, so you and your favourite chuuba spend time reminiscing about your lives together, before agreeing to meet each other in the next life and dying in each other's arms.

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>>12036637
>>12036383
I dunno, I kinda like prompt more when it's about Shion regretting her bullying you instead of working together to solve some magic problem. Feels a lot more grounded y'know.

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>>12036915
There's a fic like that about Matsuri in the archive.

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>>12037036
Suisei and Botan too. It's an interesting idea though, so while I was casually browsing through the prompt archive, I thought I'd pull it out.

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>>12036915
Already fulfilled by "Apocalypse Meow", "See You Later, My Shooting Star", and "Detonation: Paradise" in the archive if anyone's still looking for them.

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Give me a chuuba that is a bit shy but still firm in personality. I'm going to try to write something a bit ballsy and see how people like it. Feeling confident.

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>>12037829
If this is NTR. Like Actual Painful NTR...
Tokino Sora or Watame.

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>>12037829
>bit shy but still firm in personality.
Agua? Migo? Peeko? Roosher?

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>>12037829
..Watame? Not really sure if she is that shy but she has a firm personality.
>>12037890
Now I really hope it is.

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>>12037890
If it is NTR I hope for Aqua or Rushia because they're both already emotionally vulnerable. They'd be so heartbroken...

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I actually figured out two perfect candidates for the role, tell me which you'd like more:

Civia or Moona

>>12037890
It'll be sfw, just a bit... I dunno. You'll see when chapter one is finished.

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>>12038107
>implying that they're the ones getting cucked.

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>>12038146
I'd say Moona just for the fact that I know nothing about Civia.

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>>12038146
Moona, I suppose. She wins by default over a chink

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>>12038187
>>12038194
Moona it is then. I will go ahead and get the first chapter done.

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>>12038256
>SFW
>Author feeling ballsy
It's going to be another Painful Moona abuse fic ain't it.
Cautiously excited.

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>>12038256
Aww, was kinda hoping for Watame but it is what it is. Looking forward to the first chapter Anon.

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>>12036053
>>12036793
Thanks, I hope I don’t disappoint
>>12037009
Yeah I was on the fence for a while because I was considering this, but the idea I have in mind is something I’m actually excited about writing because I haven’t seen anything like it in the archive before. Don’t want to spoil what said problem will be but there’ll be plenty of character development for Shion. if I don’t fuck her character up.

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Another question: would you want you as MC to be male or female? If female, it'll add an element of uniqueness to the MC, she'll be a "first of her kind" sort of thing and I can really do a lot with that. But if you'd rather it remain male, so it goes.

>>12038482
Watame wouldn't quite fit what I'm going for with this character, however I can see her fitting another role should I keep going.

>>12038330
It would be abuse. I'm taking time off from abuse for a while.

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>>12038784
Male to appeal to 99% of the population here.

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>>12038784
>she'll be a "first of her kind" sort of thing
A submarine made of paper mache would be the first of its kind too

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>>12038784
I always go for male. This still applies here.

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>>12038784
If you're a female, go for it. But if you're not - you're cutting out relatability for potentially 100% of the audience.
If there are any female readers here who'd really like a change of pace, though, please speak up. Think dustbunny was the last one.

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>>12038784
If you're still going for the reader insert 2nd person style, I really don't see why you would go for a femanon unless you yourself are female.
If you're like going for a different PoV style other than Reader Insert Second Person, then you have some more leeway but the Anon is generally as shorthand for a generic you, the gaijin reading a chuuba fic on a vietnamese checkers forum.

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>>12020033
mi goo

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>>12032543
mainly working on Holorealm ch.3, but progress hasn't been the best. also gonna throw it out there for some stuff I've already drafted, but likely won't see the light of day for a long while.

-depressive ex-bf of Suisei working through issues of mentally damaged Holos in Cover.
-purposely breaking up/hurting a chuuba so that they can become the idol they were meant to be, also likely Suisei.
-Fluffy short of baking shepherd's pie with Korone.
-Hatefucking Migo because she says she "will never lose to a man's cock", only for her to come back again and again "just to make sure."
-brutally fucking/disciplining Shion for being a kusogaki, with eventual Aqua being roped in.
-story of the differences in the "idol" lives of Astel and Suisei, one being a "fallen star" and the other a "flying comet". Just want to write about living in different versions of success, perhaps with some jealousy and compromise thrown in.

Man I really wanna write alot about Suisei huh.

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>>12019962
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRA-QIWY559M-pHdWLCbxGVfibEVn26BvdKGHcoaaWe_aDDkTZnpK-aCSfHwvY9G1ikcg7Sx1QiG5o1/pub

I hope you enjoy. If it's too stupid or uninteresting I'll just work on something else.

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>>12041471
>Astel story
Love you anon. Also Suzy does that to you.

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>>12041471
Suzy's a great character.

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>>12032543
Well, someone already made the prompt I had submitted, but as a bait-and-switch shitpost. So I've decided to write a version that's closer to what I had envisioned when I submitted it (and I'll post it here too since people have shown interest in that).
I'm almost done with Chapter 1, so look forward to it. First time I'll be posting something here too.

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>>12041474
Okay, so... it's very well-written. It's smooth, and one line easily leads into the next - there are no jarringly immediate changes in set pieces or scenes, which are signs of a novice who hasn't done any storyboarding writing from their mind.

With that being said, and I genuinely feel terrible for it - I'm going to skip this one. A Witcher crossover. To me this is leading into the fanfiction stereotype of the author putting their two favourite things together regardless of relevancy, and I'm cringing harder than the first PekoMoon collab trying to read it.

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>>12042347
Eh, fair enough. I'm glad it was written well at least. Honestly that's what's important to me. I'd rather it be well written and have people just dislike the premise than the reverse. Thanks for the critique.

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>>12042446
I'm sorry, I feel like shit not being able to see past it.

You did the CyberMoona fic, right? Are you planning on continuing that at any point?

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>>12042550
Don't feel like shit for it, I was honestly expecting people to not go for it. Better to take the risk. Like I said, the fact that it was well written is far more important to me so I'm glad I could accomplish that.

Yes. And I'm trying to figure out how to continue it. I have the ending in mind so I want to be careful in how I get there. One of my largest weaknesses as a writer is I rush to the finish line and I'd rather take a minute, think about the in between carefully, and write something better than if I were to just burst through the gate. I might write the next chapter today, I've got half of it done already.

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>>12042701
I think that's a fairly widespread weakness; it's common to think of a particular scene and then construct a daydream/fic to accommodate it.

The CyberMoona fic has been on my mind recently. I'd like to see the setting developed a more. Why an android, and for what purpose? Anon is a student, but is the rest of society as dilapidated as the ruined bridge he made note of and the robot he found? What's going on here?

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Bump.

[Anonymous No.]

Someone should write a story about viewer sucking Tamaki'a cute penis

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>>12045335
There's only one person who would ever write that here

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>>12032543
Aside from my copious amounts of WiPs, I'm actively working on a fluffy Suzy fic about essentially becoming her househusband.

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I want to write a story about Beatani but she's enigmatic to the point of being intimidating.

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>>12045335
Tamaki would be the type to unironically do shit like putting her cum in people's food to make them subconsciously addicted to her dick.

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>>12047134
that's really hot

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>>12047134
I think that's more of a Kagura Mea idea if she had a cock honestly. That stinky whore would do some pretty bad stuff with it.

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>>12047468
hmm, then maybe Tamaki doing an endurance stream where she tries to fill a pot with cum, because she severely underestimates her output level
but she refuses to give up and keeps jerking off for several hours straight, even at the risk of dehydration or penile injury

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>>12048229
So I tried doing some research on this because it is interesting, and it turns out the glans that store create semen usually don't hold more than enough to make 6-7ml of semen. However, these glans can produce quite rapidly, if there is a demand for it. I wonder... so long as you stay properly hydrated, just how much can a average adult male ejaculate in a day? Because I've seen some... prostate stuff and the guy filled up like 1/4 of a water cup over the course of 20 minutes.

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>>12048510
That's an interesting visual. I might save this for POLlatio part 3... or 4?

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>tfw have inspiration for like 8 different stories and I keep wanting to go from one to the other without finishing any of them

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>>12022675
ToT

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>>12049798
Wow, thanks for getting rid of everything that makes Marine attractive.

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>>12050363
>still has a fat butt
what are you talking about?

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>>12019962
Another part of mechamoona is done

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS2qzLF4I8kaP4t5u2IsMUAcMWGkTXOCeN9s_eiXUj20LbkRDh2VuO-r1EDtUyfO9OZkN6D7qQYUHIb/pub

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>>12050419
I'm not attracted to butts. I'm a hips and bush guy.

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>>12051871
>bush
You attracted to pubes?

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>>12051933
I never understood that fetish desu

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>>12053734
Clean shaven or GTFO

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>>12053734
I never understood NOT having it.
>>12053894
Disgusting.

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>Wake up from issues
>Fall back asleep thinking about eating out Polka
>Cannot recall any of the details
fuck

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>>12056355
F

[Anonymous No.]

Writer's headcount:

>Have you ever released a story?
15 yes, 0 no
>Have you released a story in past 30 days?
11 yes, 4 no
>Have you released a story in the past week?
5 yes, 10 no
>Have you released more than 1 story in the past 30 days?
7 yes, 8 no

With this we can say at least half of our writers aren't writing on a regular basis.

[Anonymous No.]

Before I read Odysseus. Who gets cucked in this story? (You), FBK, Fubuki's gf/bf?

[Anonymous No.]

I just read 'The Apple of Her Eye' and I don't think I've ever felt so dirty and sad reading a fic, I'm just so distraught. Major props to the writeanon, I think this has become one of my favorites.

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>>12058985
(You). Fubuki cucks (You).

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>>12058985
Don't worry, It's pretty tame in terms of NTR anyway.

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>>12058985
It's a (You) get cucked NTR but the author actually pulls their punches in regards to making it hurt so it's not AS bad as it looks. Depending on how you feel this might make it better or worse.

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>>12041474
I feel like you put too many adjectives in your sentences from time to time, although your mood setting was pretty good. As the other anon said though the crossover with the Witcher was a bit eh

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>>12059188
I just felt horny. I'm a piece of shit and I'd like to formally apologize to the author if he's here.

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>>12050755
I really enjoyed the interactions between roboMoona as she takes what Anon says literally every time. Those were funny. Just her overall attitude as a robot not understanding how a human should act and her willingness to serve Anon in a way he doesn’t want was the highlight of this story. Honestly good shit, looking forward to more

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>>12028578
She could stream an impregnation RTA session and end up getting away with it.

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>>12050755
Wasn’t sure about this at first but the concept is interesting, and I can see it having a lot of potential in the future with things like Moona’s origins, the EMP and other mysteries in this futuristic world.

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>>12058366
I’d say it depends on the length, and what you count as “regular basis”. Some writeanons pump out 10k+ word stories so that’s obviously going to take time, and is different from some people who might release 1k word stories more often. Not saying one is better than the other, just that it’s different

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>>12059234
>>12059848
>>12061280
>wg now enjoys getting cucked
Man what happened here

[Anonymous No.]

Finished the first chapter of the new series I talked about earlier this morning.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR7sUC0jhm_EAWn6wnNnglLFTP9mZhNGSInZQgUKTanfjaKbGjAkPvBMvHmyAr9RZFej79lGm0VFbVp/pub

Also, this is the first time I publish something on Google Docs, so please bear with my most certainly dogshit formatting.

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>>12064346
I don't enjoy getting cucked. I enjoy reading about obvious beta males getting cucked. And also the slow degradation of a woman's purity. The only right way to enjoy NTR is to not self insert and to observe it as a spectator.

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>>12064927
>liking NTR at all

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>>12064346
Speak for yourself. I still think that shit is the worst trash humanly imaginable. But at the same time, I'm the only one who can make myself read it. If other people enjoy it, they deserve to be pressed against the wall and fired at, but as long as I don't have to actually read it, it's whatever.

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>>12059234
>>12061280
Woah, nice, I almost missed this. Even went all-in and had the loser bust a nut to the thought of his partner being a whore, which is impressive since I get the impression the author's not really a fan of the genre they're writing
>>12064346
The best part of having extreme masochistic tendencies is that the little spergouts people have when they talk about content pandering to me themselves have kind of a degenerate kick to them

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>>12065394
You're a disgusting fucking pervert

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>>12066030
There are anons itt that want eggs to be laid inside of them and girls to shit in their mouth. NTR isn't the worse fetish out there. Quit projecting.

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>>12064377
For now, you seem to just be setting up the premise and you haven't gotten exactly into what Anon's job is, so not much say. For one thing, starting a new line for each person's dialogue might make this easier to read. Calli comes off as more confident and not easily flustered at her job than I'd gathered from her streams, but that's fine given she must've been doing it for a while. I'm not sure where you plan to go with this, but getting closer to Mori and meeting the rest of Myth seems to be a definitive, which is where things will really pick up. Interested to see the next part, anon.

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>>12059188
I'm glad I could write it well. It was painful as all fuck but cathartic as well. Glad other's can get something out of it.

>>12062245
Don't be sorry. We can't help what we like.

>>12061820
>I feel like you put too many adjectives in your sentences from time to time
How do you mean? Can you give me an example? I read through chapter 3 again and aside from a few times I was redundant, I'm not sure what you mean.

>>12062265
I'm so glad to hear that. Thanks a lot.

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>>12066595
Thanks, I'm gonna write the next chapter soon, so look forward to it.
But before that I'm gonna rest a bit. It's pretty late right now and I can only write so much in a day.

I'll probably start tomorrow since I exceptionally have no class that day, which means I can go to a slower pace (hooray for mid-semester break).

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>>12067103
Pekora motivates my penis into becoming the big penis.
I want Pekora in a cheerleading outfit to nervously encourage me to keep masturbating to her while she can't take her eyes off my dripping dick. I will only finish if she gives me a great big cheer and catches the finish in her mouth.

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>>12066265
I find it kind of hot when you throw me under the bus like that.

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>>12067236
Then you have to do the same to her tiny bunny cock too. Her loads are much larger than yours though so be ready for that.

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>>12067642
'Kay.

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>>12067642
Futas with micropenises are so hot, especially animal girls with anatomically correct ones. Except Mumei, poor thing.

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>>12068016
Mumei has a micropenis?

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>>12068220
Most birds don't have penises, but the other members of Holotori are extremely primitive birds species that haven't lost theirs (mallard, junglefowl, and peafowl). Mumei on the other hand is a barn owl, which has.

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>>12068016
Micropenis quickshot futa is the only futa I can consume.

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>>12068481
that makes me incredibly horny. Reading that literally gave me an erection.

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>>12068896

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>>12056355
I don't remember typing this post

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Any thoughts on how you'd write gyaru speak in English? Particularly the way Choco talks sometimes? I'm just using a bunch of 'super' 's, dragged out 'so' 's, 'like' 's and shortening things here and there. I'm not so fixed on getting it accurate, but I am curious what the English equivalent would be.

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>>12070013
Whatever you call the written equivalent of Valley Girl speak, I guess.

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>>12070013
definitely valley girl speech

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>>12068016
I'm still wondering why futa doesn't get stories anymore

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For me, its Mori wielding a huge scythe, but still being an absolute sperglord about it

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>>12070326
because either there aren't enough readers or those who do read them just don't provide feedback

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>>12068016
>you will never mock Mumei for her micropenis

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>>12070879
Maybe so. Even big futa stories only get one or two (You)'s. It's like not moaning while getting a blowjob, you are enjoying it but the girl (or guy) doesn't know, so you need to let them know through positive feedback what they are doing right or wrong.

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>>12070879
Especially since most of the audience here want (You) x Vtuber rather than Vtuber x Vtuber stuff. Not that there's a problem with that since that is why I'm here

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>>12072343
Yeah. I think futa stuff is just a problem due to it being chuuba x chuuba, though it still gets reviewed. It'd be nice if it had more feedback, but y'know.

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>>12064377
This is pretty good Anon. Not much to say about it since it's just setting things up for future chapters other than it looks promising. Can't really think of any criticism here except maybe Anon's reaction being way too calm.

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>>12072343
>>12072857
This is actually pretty interesting. Usually self inserts get more hate than anything else in the world, no matter the media. But here people love to read (You) in the story. I personally prefer much more so futa on female or futa on futa. I'm guessing it's because futa x (You) is much lazier than actually doing 2 chuubas so no one bothers with it.

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>>12019950
"Bad dreams, bad time" story in the archive is not available, the pastebin is "private or pending moderation". Anyone can fix?

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>>12068016
Please I need the EN girls bullying Mumei for having a small dick.

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>>12072981
>Usually self inserts get more hate than anything else in the world
Nah. The popularity of isekai shows that people love it more than before.

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>>12073022
Darn, that was a nice short story.

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>>12072981
It's because we're all here for chuuba waifu fics. That's pretty much the main draw to here aside from the active writing community.
The use of Anon as the reader insert name also helps since, we know what these fics are, we know what Anon means, it works better than a throwaway 3rd person OC name or the (Y/N) shit that wattpad reader inserts do.

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>>12072981
As much as it doesn't appease to the self-insert style, it's probably better futa works with female or another futa. I don't know how vocal the people who want to get pegged by a futa or going up the back alley are, but it feels like those ideas are satisfied in other genres anyway.
I'd be willing to read a few just to check if they got the kind of shtick I find hot about futa, but it definitely sucks not getting much response for your work.

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>>12020033
Explaining the complicated lore to one of your favorite series to your chuuba gf only for her to cut you off and ask if you're gonna fuck her or not.

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>>12072949
Eh, yeah, I guess you're right. I tried to make it not too over the top, but I guess I got a bit too far into the other direction. Also, thanks, glad you liked it.

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>>12073280
Yeah even as someone that likes Matsuri's baby carrot and sequels, even I can tell that, that kind of futa isn't the kind of futa people into futa want and is more like trap yaoi targetted at men. Pretty sure the essense of Futanari is in the two girls fucking.

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>>12073353
don't worry, Selen is willing to hear all about Bionicle lore, and baby, there's A LOT of it.

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Since the topic went towards this, what's your favorite futa story in the archives that doesn't involve (You) and why? I would like to write a chuuba x chuuba stuff so this question is way more helpful than the last.

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>>12073935
Not into futa, so I can't answer.

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>>12020033
the most bland unoriginal story possible with all of this thread's favorite tropes: >second person with fubuki and a male self insert as the only characters
>you're in a relationship with her but she abuses you
>it's not that deep though and the reader is supposed to get off to it
>it ends with all the characters in the exact same places they started in
>also it's smut

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>>12064377
>>12019962
Anchoring this for you since you forgot

This is pretty good for a first chapter, not much happened but the setup proves to be very interesting and I'm curious to see where you'll go with this story so I hope you have a plan or an outline for the overarching plot. The writing is serviceable and engaging enough to want to read more, not much to say about the characterization since you just started but from what I could see it'll prove to be good if you keep it up. You definitely need to work on the formatting, you should NEVER put two characters dialogue in the same paragraph. Each time a new character speaks should be a paragraph in it of itself. For example, the third paragraph should be something like this:

“So, that’s the next soul on my list, huh?” a husky yet unmistakably feminine voice drags you out of your thoughts.

You turn to the source of the voice to see a shapely, incredibly beautiful pink-haired woman, who looked a few years older than you at most and was clad in a black dress and a cloak that looked vaguely like a coat that was resting on her shoulders. Whoever that woman is, she seems to have business here.

“Uh...Hello?”, you hesitantly ask as the stranger walks up to your corpse with a sad sigh

“Such a shame, to die so young…” she mutters.

You walk up next to her and tap her shoulder “Um...Miss?”

The gesture gets the pink-haired woman’s attention. “Oh, you must be that poor dude’s soul, right?” she asks.

“Uh...yeah, I guess?” you reply, confused by this beautiful but strange woman who can apparently see you even though you’re a ghost, “And who are you, exactly?”

The stranger does not seem phased in the slightest, almost as if she was used to this situation, “Oh, right, I didn’t introduce myself yet, did I? Name’s Calliope Mori, apprentice to none other than the Grim Reaper himself. Nice to meetcha, my guy.”

Apprentice? The Grim Reaper had an apprentice? Huh. Now you’ve seen everything.

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>>12074047
pretend i didn't mess up the formating

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>>12073935
I legitimately can't come up with an answer. Maybe the PPTenshi vs. Tenga one? Futowa was too rapey for me.

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>>12073935
Out of the only two I've read, PPTenshi vs Tenga and One Thursday Night, I'd definitely choose the latter. If you're new to writing this, I'd even recommend the latter since it just felt well written overall. I can't speak for everyone, but I find having one sex-crazy girl learning she can feel way better with her cock instead of just laying there and going to town with it being the hottest aspect.

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>>12073935
probably the Shion x Aqua one
I generally like the futa being dominant but also having a bit of a back and forth, especially in situations where they had just gained a cock and are still geting used to all the sensations that come from it.

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>>12074067
Yeah, I know my formatting is dogshit, first time using Google Docs to write something lol. Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it.

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>>12072142
here's the cheat code no one wants to talk about:
when providing feedback, samefag like a fucking faggot and make sure it's not obvious
doesn't matter how many readers there actually are if the author thinks they've gotten a massively positive response

i did it, i said the thing no one should say

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>>12074647
By saying that you only put doubt into my mind

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>>12074708
yes. i wonder if it will start a new arc

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>>12074647
This but it's a fic about an indie and anon's desperate attempt to give her an audience by doing as described in her streams. As the amount of normal viewers dwindle, she finds you getting close with one of your accounts and you play up the character so each of your accounts feel distinct enough. However, some random monitoring your every move seizes the moment to get close with her by assuming your identity and making the first move. For a while, you continue playing the character before something she says reveals she thinks you're already together. She thinks 'you' are a bit aloof, sometimes a jerk in real life, but she's relieved to see you at every stream. Eventually, you lose the motivation from being cucked and stop the act, leaving her to realise she's been fucking a stranger and none of her viewers are real.

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>>12074999

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>>12074999
Didn't some anon already do that? I don't have the screenshot but basically he used multiple accounts and devices to make it seem like there're multiple viewers and he eventually started saving up so he can drop a red SC when she eventually got monetized. In the end, real life stuff forced her to stop streaming and anon asked the thread for any charities he could give the money he saved so he could feel better

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>>12075255
Wasn't aware, but the thought crossed my mind that something like this was already out there. Probably better as something to read in thread then write a fic about.

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So question: how do you guys feel about darker themed stories, like Apple of Her Eye and Moona's Ordeal.

The ones I'm thinking of don't (need to) deal with ryona specifically, but they're of subject matter of similar levels of heavy. Would that be interesting to you or should I keep doing fluff stuff and cybermoona?

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>>12075462
People have said they want more ryona since Lies Come To Light.

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>>12075462
>>12075486
All three of these stories are some of my favourites in the archive. They are each absolutely fantastic in their own way.

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>>12075462
>how do you guys feel about darker themed stories
can't get enough of them.

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>>12075462
more darker stories would be great

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>>12075462
Didn't you say Apple of Her Eye and Moona's Ordeal made you feel like shit writing them and you didn't want to do any more? Don't compromise your own enjoyment for the sake of others. Remember that this is a hobby thread meant to share stuff you like creating, not to appease readers.

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>>12075486
>>12075597
>>12075613
>>12075711
Awesome. I have a few ideas for stuff I can do. To be honest I'm getting board of Cybermoona and the Fubuki anthology. I'll keep working on both but I want to do something that lets me flex my muscles a bit more. I'll try to work on the grammar as well.

Any chuubas you'd like to see struggle?

>>12075781
They did but I came to a realization with it: The reason I felt like shit was not only because it was (sorta) venting my own experience, but because I thought it meant my mind was fucked for writing material like that.

It's just the opposite though: I write at my peak when I'm writing about topics that hit me the hardest. For both of those, the words just came out of me like water. For cybermoona I'm struggling to finish just a chapter despite wanting to write.

And ultimately if it's too much I'll swear off it. I realized that writing it doesn't make me flawed as a human being and that's what was getting to me the most.

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>>12074047
lmao, you messed up the formating. Your opinion is now shit and invalid.

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>>12075912
>I realized that writing it doesn't make me flawed as a human being and that's what was getting to me the most.
Wish more people would realize this. The masses paint morality as black and white, good and evil, but it's just infinite shades of grey and exploring the pitch-black depths of depravity doesn't mean you're a fucked up individual...although, as Nietzsche aptly pointed out, the abyss will gaze back.

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>>12075999
i said to pretend i didn't :(

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>>12076042
What does it even mean?

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>>12076085
That the abyss will gaze back? It essentially means that if you explore the worst humanity has to offer, it can change you. You might see things in a way you've never seen them before, and find yourself agreeing with them.

It's not some shounenshit corruption thing going on, but simply a statement that your perception of the world might change as a result of what you let in.

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>>12076182
It may be trite, but the easiest way to express an example of this is to point out that Hitler did a lot of things right. He is popularly portrayed as a figure of pure evil, but an extensive case study of Nazi Germany reveals he is a character built by circumstance and patriotism.

Of course, if you say this aloud, boom - you're a nazi sympathizer. Thus has the "abyss" changed you.

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>>12076042
It was this >>12059188 anon that actually made me realize it.

I'm going to look at it less as a reflection of my mind and more of a story that should be told. If I can turn my pain into something useful, help others understand it, then I think it's positive. Helps a lot to control it too. Instead of how it is in real life, I'm the master of the tale. It only goes where I point it and I always point it in a happy ending.

I'm really glad others can appreciate it. Makes me so happy I write well enough for people to enjoy such things.

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>>12075912
Honestly, Sora.
I think her characterization as the first, the daisenpai, gives a good room to creatively interpret her. Especially since due to that status she has that whole isolation aspect to her in-hololive relationships.
Also I think Kizuna Ai has good potential for fics but honestly her being mostly Hard and meme lore kind of fucks up making anykind of fic involving her,

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>>12076311
If this activity enriches your life, then I'd say full steam ahead, anon.

And for all I argued against compromising your own enjoyment, I'm glad you feel as such, because Apple of Her Eye and Moona's Ordeal were really fucking good stories.

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>>12020033
(You) are Hoshimachi Suisei, a world famous idol. Your journey to get here is harsh and unforgiving, but ultimately you achieved your dream and you couldn't have done it without everyone who supported you from the beginning. Your occupation has brought you around the world and back again, but it's also brought you a busy and lonely life. One day, you are overjoyed when by chance, you met your childhood friend and old crush Anon at a fan meet and greet. To make sure it's actually him though, you begin to make small talk that keep hinting at your shared past, but as your conversation continues, you start to realize he doesn't remember who you are.

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>>12076383
Sora is actually going to be perfect for what I have in mind. I was thinking Botan but you bringing up Sora as one of the first actually makes the idea I'm thinking of fit perfectly. I should go to bed but I'm too damn inspired now. I'll write a bit and see if I can make it sparkle.

I've got several ideas though so more suggestions for chuubas are welcome. I need one that is socially anxious and competitive. The other two stories I've got chuubas I think I can work best with. I'll work on each one at a time, but I've got a lot of ideas for different stories.

>>12076496
Thanks a lot. So glad to hear people enjoy it. Means a lot to me.

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>>12076657
Oh how the tables have turned.

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>>12019962
Continuation of dom Risu, because that "potentially unfinished" taunted me.

You did as you were told, now naked and afraid; on all fours and with your behind turned towards her. Risu without hesitation lined her hard cock against your entrance, but no matter how much she pushed, it just wasn't going in, much to her frustration.

"You can't even do this ONE job? Idiot sailan. " Risu complained in Indonesian.

"Fine, you want to put up a fight, then I'll do things my way" You weren't even clenching on purpose, you were too nervous to even move. But Risu didn't care.

She put spit on her finger, and jammed it inside your ass, making you jump from the surprise. You thought that she was going to do some foreplay, but when she stuck the second finger in, you realized just exactly she was trying to do. Before you could open your mouth to complain, she spread her fingers apart, forcing your entrance open. The pain was terrible, but soon worse would follow. She spits on her already wet cock, and with her fingers keeping your entrance wide open, she thrusts her throbbing erection deep inside your bowel all in one go.

"There we go~ See? This is what happens when you don't do as you're told. Now I'm gonna have to punish you." Punish? To you, this was already hell, but you could tell she wasn't joking. You clutched your hands onto whatever you could and braced as she thrusted with great force, smacking her hip against yours and letting her cock reach the deepest parts of your ass. She let out a moan as you screamed in pain, and then begun her movement. You could only hear the wet smacking sound of your hips connecting as you kept your eyes shut and gritted your teeth. Risu kept both her hands on your hip, pulling you in whenever she thrusted to reach further inside. Whoever said this could feel good was completely wrong. Well, at least one person was feeling good: Risu. She pounded again and again, enjoying the tight warm feeling of your posterior. Periodically she would let out a small moan amongst her ragged breathing as you reflexively clenched during her deepest thrusts. You rocked back and forth as she kept going on and on with increasing speed and intensity.

"At least you're good for one thing, who would've thought!" Risu giggled sadistically as she began to scratch you with her nails. The burning pain now was on the inside AND outside. Eventually, Risu started picking up her pace even further, the intervals between smacks become shorter and the sounds louder, Ayunda moaned more and more as time went on, her cock could be felt growing larger inside you, throbbing and longing for the release of her squirrel seed. She then leaned herself onto your back, wrapping her hands under your arms and grabbing onto your shoulders, locking you in place. This position allowed her to thrust even faster, and harder too. Her hot breath could be felt on your back, her moans were now closer to your ear. With your eyes still closed and your senses enhanced, you could hear every little detail. From the drops of sweat falling on the ground, to her cock pounding again and again at your ass, the heavy smell of sex in the air, the salty tasty of cum in your mouth, her soft breasts squished against your back and the feeling of her rapid heartbeat transmitted through them, the heat of her body and the hard gloves grasping your shoulders for support. You could feel everything. You could feel how good she was feeling, even if you were not. And so, you simply resigned yourself to your one and only task, relaxing your body and letting her have your way with you.

Ayunda instantly felt the difference, she giggled.

"You're finally giving in aren't you? Well, no matter your intentions, this is still... your.. punishment!" She smacked herself extra hard against you, rocking you forth quite considerably. But you just grunted in pain silently and took it. Risu, unamused by your tough act, began to speed up once again. This time, she was close.

"Are you...ready for my seed? I'm going to fill you deep~ inside. You're going to become my personal little cum dumpster, I'll pour all~ my hot sticky cum inside you. And there's nothing you can do to stop it." Risu giggled, then moaned.

She pounded away at you like a dog in heat now, her movements were extremely fast and especially hard. Her cock rubbed deep inside you, going back and forth, until finally, she came for the second time.

"Take... my... sEeed~! Ah~!" Her moans filled the room as with one final thrust, she began to blow massive loads of cum inside you. Risu bit your shoulder and gripped herself onto you even tighter. Each shot could be felt covering your insides with a warm sticky feeling, every time she spurted, her cock twitched and she thrusted forward slightly. Her muffled moaning resonated into your skin as her biting started to hurt. Eventually, her orgasm settled down, and she sat there, breathing through her nose, still with her mouth clamped on your shoulder.

[Anonymous No.]

Writeanons, do you find it better to have an extended time period where you can continually write, or breaking it into multiple shorter time frames?

I did the latter for a while since it was manageable with work, but since I've gotten time again the former just feels so much better. Maybe it's exactly because I haven't written in a while, or I'm feeling myself with this story, but it feels like I'm writing better and enjoying it more too.

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>>12078164
Her grip got lighter and you could feel her legs were giving out. Ayunda was exhausted, her cock still inside you, cum oozing out of your posterior and dripping down onto the ground in great quantities. She removed her teeth from your shoulder, then her arms from your shoulder, and finally she turned around and sat on top of your back. The weight of her body, while not great, was hard to endure, especially after a tiring "punishment" session like what had just happened. You could feel how warm her body was through her soft plump ass, sitting atop your naked skin.

"You're staying there for now until I recover. Don't you dare give in. If you do, I'm punishing you even harder." Risu leaned in the rest of her weight onto you, making sure to make this experience as hard and uncomfortable as possible for you. She enjoyed every second of it.

"You proved yourself to be useful for something after all. From now on, you'll be serving as my personal cock slave. Every morning, I'll use you right out of bed. Before I stream, during my stream AND after, and finally, whenever I'm about to go to bed. You got that? Good." She pit her gloved hands on your back and patted your butt.

"You're staying there for a while longer. I'm going to stream using you as a chair. If you make any noise, I'll fuck you live on stream where thousands of people can see you, and I'll make sure to not go easy on you this time. Be warned." Risu crossed her legs, and began to stream. From now on, your fate was sealed as her personal attendant, until she gets tired of you, she will use your every hole, every part of your body to her pleasure. And such was your fate.

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>>12078168
when the groove gets going, you really want to wring the juices as much as you can, but don't blame yourself if you have to take shorter bursts of writing due to your schedule.

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>>12078392
>>12078164

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>>12076657
I really fucking love this prompt, especially since it seems like a fucking perfect accompaniment to the her single Stellar Stellar with her having to come to face with the fact that she's is now a shooting star and what that fully entails.
I'll pick up this prompt but don't expect it for a while. I'm pretty slow at writing but I like this prompt enough that I'll give it a shot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12078164
>>12078392
hmm. it's not fubuki pegging me...

but it'll do.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12076657
Chuubas have caused Anons pain for long enough, it is now time for Anons to cause Chuubas pain.

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>>12078164
>>12078392
hey author just wanted you to know that i ended a week-long nofap for this, and also that i didn't imagine risu, i imagined you pounding me

so yeah, thanks for the sex homie

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>>12078818
this is a concept I have been thinking about a lot actually. But instead of having a self-insert, I intend to use Astel as both of them are extremely talented in singing and video games, and both have "space" themes, yet their levels of success are vastly different. Nothing romantic per se, just want to explore how each party defines "success" on their own eyes, a lot of arguments, dissent, jealousy, and just the emphasis that what you get may not exactly be what you ask for. It's also ironic that in Stellar Stellar, Suisei sings about not wanting to be the "princess", yet Astel has always been dubbed as a Disney "princess".

But into the "to do later, maybe never" pile it goes.

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>>12078164
>>12078392
Never read Risu before this, but what the hell it was pretty hot. Thanks for the nut anon.

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>>12078168
Honestly depends on your motivation and time available. If you’re feeling motivated it’s best to write while you still are, if your schedule allows for it

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>>12079624
We need more holostars x hololive stories. And I don’t even mean in a romantic way, just regular interactions

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>>12076311
I'm glad I helped you realize anon because that story seriously mentally flashbanged me. I tried to play some games with my friends after but I just was too sad too. I also wasn't one to usually fantasize about rape but now I think I'll stay far far away from it.

It's been a while since I was moved by a piece of media so I thank you again.

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>>12078164
>>12078392
...Are you writing from experience again here?

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>>12064377
I think I have to echo what the other anons have said regarding your formatting. Right now, it's readable but it could be better with the use of more paragraphs; especially in regards to making the dialogue more intelligible.
Overall I'm interested in reading more, Hope you can manage to fix your formatting.

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>>12073147
>>12073022
This is why you writerfags should stop using Pastebin. Their shit tier bots can at any moment hide your story and you can't do shit about it. Use Google Drive or another paste site.

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>>12081653
pretty much this

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>>12081653
Yes. Absolutely use G. Docs when possible. Pastebin has gone to fucking dogshit.

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>>12020033
Got this idea from a youtube video :

(You) are a manager working at Hololive, forced to attend an annual Christmas party at the company even though you would rather be doing anything else. And just like last year, there is a Secret Santa event. Last week, you drew the name of your boss Yagoo. You really hope he likes the pens and pencils you grabbed during a quick trip to a convenient store yesterday. When it is your turn to open your Secret Santa gift, you plaster on a big fake smile and open the box. To your amazement, you find a toy that matches the one your mother gave you as a child but lost when you moved to highschool years ago. How would somebody find this ? Who knows you this well ? You look at the bottom of the toy and find a small handwritten note ; "From your secret admirer". You look around the room, wondering who it could be but are left in the dark. You just hope that it isn't Yagoo.

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>>12082782
I like it

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>>12082782
This...actually has a fucking boatload of potential, Anon. This is a really fascinating prompt

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>>12082782
I don't like it

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>>12070750
It doesn't matter how big your dick is, if you're a sub you're a sub.

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>>12082782
But then where would it go from there? How do you go about tracking down your stalker?

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>>12083232
anon just because a girl has a crush on you doesn't make her a stalker

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>>12083256
Well it's not possible for (You) to have gone to high school with all the holo girls so in order for them to find out what toy you lost they would need to do extensive research...

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I want Pekora to absolutely dom me with her smug bullshit and force me to cum over and over again because she's an insatiable slut who enjoys seeing me writhe in pleasure that's almost painful.

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>>12083256
c'mon bruh, nobody in love with you is gonna be of sane mind

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>>12083339
The secret admirer here is meant to be your childhood friends, which is how she knows what that toy is.

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>>12082956
:(

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>>12083632
fair

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>>12083664
Ah ok, I thought the premise was setting up for a mystery on who it was, but if it's a childhood friend then (You) would instantly know who it is.

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>>12083664
In fairness you could also interpret having and giving that to you as the person that gave it was really hardcore stalking your past.
>>12083771
Becoming a vtuber does things to you. Things that make you unrecognizable.

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>>12073087
How small we talking? Mean between average human and owl is 2.8 inches.

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>>12083771
Well.... it is meant to be a mystery, because (you) don't know which one of your co worker is your childhood friend. Either way, it doesn't matter. If any one want to pick this prompt up, feel free to change it however you like.

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>>12041474
It's decently well written, and doesn't really have any noticeable flaws other than not having the crossover setting be clear but even then it kind of has the problem of well as said earlier by other anons of not really having an interesting crossover. Since, while there probably is some settings that might make a good adventure with a chuuba and a reader insert, the witcher really isn't one of those.

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>>12084083
Anything below 2 inches is unusable so maybe keep it at that so one could at least stroke it with two fingers and make her blow her tiny little load?

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>>12050755
Honestly I was skeptical to this concept at first, due to Moona being really OOC but the world you've made is legitimately compelling and the story is really interesting.
Honestly it feels more apt for being like an original work since the chuuba parts honestly seem kind of secondary.

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>>12087779
I get this same feeling too. If anything, I think incorporating chuubas into this detracts from it.

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>>12082782
>>12083339
tangibly related

I imagine the reason that Irys seethes over Santa is that she wants to BE Santa, the ultimate bringer of hope.
So she tries to give people alarmingly personal gifts, and doesn't understand why they get weirded out by it.

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>>12082782
I smell loads of comedy potential.

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>>12081354
Again, I know, I'll try to fix my dogshit formatting next chapter. I'm just glad you guys liked it.

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>>12079624
This is a really neat idea. Hopefully you can pick it up again from that pile one day.

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speaking of not using pastebin, AA could you kindly change the link for the first chapter of MW to this one?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSIaP-K0YaQtEg9JLNLoVrOZsny6RtxtWXcMwLTnj0KPG6h901Zl5XDOLbc9ov91-qN1Qo1dNoJ9l4g/pub

I would prefer if the story doesn't suddenly disappear one day, and a single pastebin link kinda sticks out like a sore thumb.

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>>12088966
Wasn't MW Anon going to make another series? What happened to that?

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>>12092543
I'm writing it right now??? The other series is Holorealm and 2 chapters up. I'm just updating the links of MW to be more consistent.

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>>12092595
Oh, nice. But If I remember correctly you were going to do a story with Polka.

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>>12020033
Short comedic piece about Ayame getting into a chan-style flame war with anonymous users and losing badly. Or flaming someone else, extracting smug satisfaction from their increasingly frustrated posts, and finishing with her deciding to stream that day as a result.

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>>12073353
Seconding

I really want to see this

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>>12073353
Shit, missed this prompt. This sounds great.

I would genuinely rather rewatch episodes of Firefly for the gazillionth time than have sex

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>>12093468
That went into the "to do later, maybe never" pile, anon. Really sorry that it isn't going to see the light of day anytime soon. The only bone I can throw you is that I already made a rough outline for the full series.

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>>12073353
She may be into it if you do kingdom hearts. Bitches love kingdom hearts.

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>>12094617
Do bitches love the Elder Scrolls?

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>>12094663
The bitches do not love Elder Scrolls

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>>12094695
That is quite unfortunate. What is the bitches’ stance on dark souls?

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>>12094762
you could pull lulu with that

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>>12094695
>>12094762
You're more likely to land with something that isn't video game lore, video game lore is mostly written for and by gamers. Women generally prefer literary works and anything in their style: Twilight or Harry Potter, if they're higher class maybe classics (Doyle, Twain, Hemingway, Austen Shakespeare...) or something modern but thoughtful like Le Guin or Tolkien.
Looking at the gender ratio in the fandoms is usually a good indicator.

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>>12095511
bullshit, start reading direct from the gossip section of women's weekly and they'll be all over your dick in no time

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>>12095511
Damn, so you’re telling me I memorized all that lore for nothing?

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>>12095699
That's not lore, otherwise I would have mentioned it. I would not dare to question the merit of Women's Weekly while you're around

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>>12086425
Good thing I'm 3.5. *sobs*

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Seems I've finally burnt out. I've tried to write a few different stories and I just cannot find a way to properly start any of them. Seems I'll just have to wait for the inspiration to return.

Creativity is suffering.

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>>12096215
I feel ya, buddy. It sucks becuase I want to write but I just can't whenever I sit and open a WIP

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>>12096215
Stop blogposting.

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>>12096340
I've got three ideas for different stories but then I sit in front of the page and all my creativity just fucks right off. I hate it because I think all three of them have great potential, but writing it because you feel you have to write it a recipe for a shit story, even if the concept is good.

I want to write but I just can't summon the creativity to not make it suck ass.

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>>12096415
Stop blogposting.

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>>12096415
What are you working on?

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>>12095791
Damn you could use your thumb to fuck the woman and she'd never know the difference. It probably would feel better even.

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>>12096554
I'll keep it a surprise for now. If I can execute it well though, I think you'll like all three of them.

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>>12096215
>>12096415
>>12098208
This is a terrible, meandering story with no chuuba and no resolution. Maybe you want >>>/lit/wg

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>>12098208
I hope you're able to execute them to your best degree.

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>>12096415
>but then I sit in front of the page and my creativity just fucks right off
I feel your pain, writebro.

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>>12096415
Read some other stories. Watch a movie, do something else. If you're burned out or can't muster the will, beating yourself up over it won't help. Go for a walk or something, too. Creative energy is a resource that appears when it feels like it or with proper motivation. Just keep the ideas going, maybe write them out somewhere, and try later. There's no rush.

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Survive...

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If I can't have a Katawa Shoujo holo story, I'll just make it myself!

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>>12101825
That's the spirit, anon !

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>>12101825
Holy based?

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>>12101825
BEYOND BASED

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>>12101825
my knees are more destroyed than ayame's hymen

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>>12103142
>>12103852
>>12104095
Sorry, I was lying...

Though my story will indeed involve some crippled Holomems, it won't be Katawa Shoujo style.

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>>12104588
Suisei with Broken Legs. Let's Go!

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>>12078168
The longer I have, the better. I have stayed awake past 35 consecutive hours several times because I didn't go to sleep the night before. When inspiration strikes at hour 26 and my monkey fingers who usually are too lazy to do anything are actually writing something, I will keep myself awake even if I am nodding off (rare for me) and I can feel my body breaking in some small way. When I'm on a roll after stagnating all week, getting those 4-5k words out is everything and I will not stop until I'm done. This does tend to make my endings trash as I beg myself for sleep in the 6th hour, but the ending can be fixed later. There's a reason many famous writers were addicted to stimulants.

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>>12096415
Sugar, water, exercise, sleep, or stimulants. Then start typing anything, like a comment here. Then keep writing the end of the comment but this time in your writing program. Then when the comment is almost done, start writing the story. It's a momentum trick, it helps if your only problem is starting.

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>>12104967
The feeling of knowing you're causing your body irreparable damage and largely taking chunks of your lifespan in just a couple of nights is of despair. I'll probably die of heart disease in my 50's if I'm lucky with a crooked back and permanent tinittus.

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>>12104588
Who are the crippled Holomems?

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>>12105465
Once you know about one you'll know about others to come, so I'll only say one. Watame.

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>>12105520
Meh, pretty standard character to use. Thought it would be one of the underused ones.

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>>12105520
Why not Subaru? Seems like a good choice for this fic.

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>>12105700
Mainly lore. All in its due time, anon.

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>>12105733
Ah, a multi-chapter series?

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>>12105733
Alright.

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New thread
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>>12105767
>>12105802
Anons please... the cripples aren't the main focus of the story, they'll just be there as characters come what will of that.

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>>12105892
What a scuff thread. Much like Nijisanji in general.

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>>12105892
>Ange
Isn’t she the chuuba that likes NTR?

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>>12106003
Appropriate given this thread's discussion, I suppose...

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>>12078164
>>12078392
I have to say the more extreme dom parts toward the end, like being a permanent cocksleeve or a chair, didn't do much for me. However, the sheer intimacy of Risu biting your shoulder and clamping onto you through the entirety of her orgasm was something else and made me quite sad that I'll never experience it. Thank you for writing this.

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>>12110204
Sharing this sentiment. I'm not normally into futa stuff at all - frankly I cannot get off to this, either - but I can appreciate the raw emotion demonstrated. However, the incredibly severe parts were also the final nail in the "I, personally, can never get off to this" coffin.

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>>12110204
>made me quite sad that I'll never experience it
there are usually a lot of eager girls by the railway station in the evening

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>>12110727
Yes, but I feel that few, if any, of those girls are my oshi, Risu. Or girls that I would want to become emotionally involved with.

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>>12110204
I actually realized it while writing that I was going WAY too hard, and eventually decided to stop focusing on (You) and describe more of Risu instead because otherwise it would've been just a weird rape fic that isn't even hot. That only happened because it took me a while to change gears, as I was not in the zone yet.

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>>12111318
The style is...familiar. You make other things?

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>>12111414
I'm literally the only person in this thread who has written futa in the last 3 months. Sorry to say but if you see a futa fic it's almost always undoubtedly me.

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>>12111513
Ah. It is you, then.
I think PPTenshi vs Tenga was nice.

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>>12111549
It's a fic I enjoyed writing, though I would have loved if I had more time to do Coco helping her and maybe even some Suisei peeping stuff. The beginning was scuffed, as some, or perhaps most of my fics are because it takes a while to get into it. Or maybe I'm just bad at the story part of smuts

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>>12111834
Couldn't hurt to brush up on it more, improve your technique. Either way, thanks for still putting out stuff.

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>>12111513
Wow, I'm SO sorry to hear that. Really, I am. Truly. Sure is a shame that no one else appreciates your mental disorder that is only one small step away from trannification.

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>>12112107
I personally believe that revisiting finished works is bad practice and I'm sure many-a people in here agree with this mentality. If I didn't set up the ending so concretely, what I COULD do is a sequel, but I honestly have no interest in that atm. I'm not sure what other futa things I wish to do in the future but maybe I'll finish an old futa Risu fic during November if she catches my attention this year around too with NNN.

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>>12112425
>NNN with Risu is just you forcing her to masturbate with her over and over again until it ends at the end of the month with both of you sucking and fucking one another until you physically cannot continue

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>>12112486
While it sounds hot, that doesn't really fit Risu's personality and to me making sure the situation fits the chuuba is just as important as the chuuba's personalization itself. I wasn't really planning on actually involving the NNN into the fic because as I said, it's an old draft, but if I actually revisit it and decide to scrap it for something new, which I doubt I will, maybe it could be some masturbation challenges with Risu.

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>>12112893
Looking forward to it either way.

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>>12113179
Haha I've been promising this fucking fic since it's birth in June, don't get your hopes too high.

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>>12113179
>>12113440
He's not lying. I've been subtly trying to motivate him to finish it this entire time, and it hasn't led to anything.

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>>12113440
I'm patient. Same way I'm waiting for PF. It'll come when it's time.