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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>12105810

>> No.12209642
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12209642

STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.12209706
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>12209617
do NOT lewd sister claire.

>> No.12212504
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>>12209642
>You got yourself showered and dressed, putting in the bare minimum of effort
>This was going to be a pain
>You got into your car and drove an hour into the countryside
>You hadn’t been anywhere close to here in nearly a decade
>It reminded you of your youth
>Camping, hiking, full of imagination
>Happy
>You pulled up to the side of the pumpkin patch, a large farm overlooking a massive field of pumpkins and behind it, a large corn maze.
>It felt serene
>Maybe this wasn’t such a bad idea after all
>Just as you pulled in, Moona’s car pulled up next to you
>She excitedly got out of the car, dressed as a witch, and greeted you
>”Anon! Hi! You came!”
>You smiled
>It was a half smile, but a genuine smile
>First time you had one of those in a while, at least when it didn’t relate to some stupid video game
>Her joy had an infectious quality to it
>She was so happy to see you despite the fact that not a day earlier you’d completely brushed her off
>To a solitary creature like you, this was very strange
>”Hi, Moona. You look good.”
>Moona smiled and did a twirl
>”Thanks. I special ordered it. I even got a wand and a magic grimoire to go with it!”
>You thought it a bit cringe, but you were a bit jealous at the same time
>She was around your age yet magnitudes happier than you were
>And over a simple Halloween costume no less
>Perhaps being her brand of autistic wasn’t so bad considering the joy
>You and Moona walked into the farm
>It was something of a dump, but it had a charm to it
>Hung from the tree at the center roundabout were cheap ghost cutouts
>To the left resided a bunch of goats, pigs and sheep in a petting zoo that smelled almost worse than death
>To the right stood the pumpkin patch
>At the center stood a barn, converted into a haunted house
>You felt like a kid again
>Normally this sort of thing would leave you put out and exhausted, but this felt like a trip down memory lane
>You’d not been here specifically, but you’d been at a few places like it
>You would always get the most excited among your sisters
>In a way, you were just like Moona when you were younger
>Even you couldn’t maintain your usual aloof persona in the face of it
>”So, what should we do first? We need to do the pumpkin patch last, too heavy.”
>You put your hand to your chin
>”Why not the petting zoo?”
>Moona’s eyes lit up
>”With all those cute goats?”
>”Yeah.”
>You both walked to the pen, more accurately a stye, and Moona pouted
>”There’s a fee!?”
>You raised your eyebrow
>”You came here without any money? You know the pumpkins aren’t free right?”
>Moona looked slightly embarrassed
>Normally you were tight fisted with your cash
>But what’s a corpse need money for?
>You paid ten dollars and motioned her in
>”You paid for me? That’s so nice!”
>Moona gave you a big hug and you felt your tummy fill with butterflies
>You couldn’t recall the last time a girl who you weren’t directly related to hugged you
>”You coming with?”
>”You want me to?”
>”Of course!!! I didn’t come out here just to do this all on my own.”
>You paid the extra ten to the doorman and followed her inside
>With a childlike joy, she pet the pigs and goats
>You knelt down and scratched the head of one of the sheep
>You used to be passionate about animals, had a special way with them
>Even the more nervous among them seemed to trust you without hesitation
>Memories flooded back into you
>It was like looking at another person, while still looking at you
>A person who was young, hopeful and happy
>When did you become so bitter?
>”Anon look at this!”
>Moona had her face squished against one of the sheep, her hat resting on both hers and its head
>”Isn’t he so cute?”
>”Yeah. He is pretty cute. So are you.”
>”What did you say?”
>”Oh uh… nothing. I just said he’s cute.”
>”No, I mean after that.”
>”Come on. We should go see the corn maze.”
>Moona stared at you quizzically and followed after you
>”Bet I can find the center before you do!”
>Moona charged forward
>”Wait!”
>You chased off after her
>Despite the size of her… chest, she was surprisingly quick
>She must need at least two sports bras for a load that heavy

>>12209250
Doesn't much matter what you think. I'm going to continue it.

>> No.12216263
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>mfw my creativity is outpacing my energy
>Have a lot of ideas but am to tired to write them coherently

>> No.12216890

>>12216263
You tell me. I wrote 4 chapters of a series in 4 days, each with 3k words or so. Now I'm completely out of fuel, just idling by.

>> No.12216943

>>12212504
Hey are you updating that original document still? This one; https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTzEWKpYUglZD_EMER_bB6oxEyG6MY7kCWnNByLPwU9d5DIqNfbSIo9qqguwKGYrOpJfZv1b5Dxs1Fn/pub

>> No.12218655

>>12209706
Haachama getting bullied in Australia by (You)

>> No.12219417

>>12209642
>>12216943
I have no idea why it didn't update. Hopefully this one will.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTzEWKpYUglZD_EMER_bB6oxEyG6MY7kCWnNByLPwU9d5DIqNfbSIo9qqguwKGYrOpJfZv1b5Dxs1Fn/pub

>> No.12219518

>>12219417
Gnarly, thanks.

>> No.12219962

>>12219518
Oh shit that's where the name comes from

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>>12209642
Not a new story but just to notify archiveanon, I did finally update that shitty imgur for the Architecture General into a rentry
https://rentry.co/exq5m

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>>12222632
Sick. I'll toss it in; thank you

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>12199498
>but in all honesty I doubt I could even make if I particularly wanted to
there aren't words to accurately express how sad this makes me feel

>> No.12223517

>>12223057
Anon, you just have to accept sequels never go right. A trilogy is the way to go but that's three times the work. Don't force the anon to write a shitty sequel and sour your experience

>> No.12223639

>>12223517
fair enough. nene corruption guy, please abandon everything and work on a trilogy for cold air, hot blood

>> No.12225552
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How the fuck do i catch up on all the previous threads?

>> No.12225825

>>12225552
try reading through them

is there a need to, though?

>> No.12226377

>>12225825
Yes

>> No.12228091

>>12216263
I know that pain.

>> No.12229639
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>>12223639
Again, I appreciate the interest, and while it wouldn't be my first trilogy I have no interest in continuing nor really any idea where to go with it.

>> No.12229929

>>12229639
all good, was just a joke anyway
thanks for the read anon

>> No.12230228

>>12209642

Wrote a short fic about Watame taking care of a sick (You)
Before you read, temper your expectations; I haven't written anything in about a decade. This is my first story here, so I hope somebody finds some enjoyment in it.

TAGS: Watame, fluff, SFW

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS7rbGO_iVRqqTgZ2beW69XtSf3ZZxQWZZE8gv7Q4FCksb51w542skMErKSBFts1jLqpgOZUIqnpK11/pub

>> No.12230467

O my oshi,
if you read this
know that I am dying
of your endless
touch

that reaches
through the screen
and wrenches
my heart

and lets it fall into a million
pieces
mirrors
reflecting
every phase of you

every face
every smile
every gesture
every love

that shatters me further
until atomized
I have become
more than myself

a million more selves
that can live
to worship
you.

>> No.12230961

>>12230467
Pagman me???

>> No.12232725

>>12230228
Short and cute fic. Didn't take too long to introduce Watame, and how far back you two go is shown pretty well for how short it is. How exactly it got to this point isn't shown, but that's fine for something with this many pages. Fluff was good and ending was neat. Thanks for the story, anon.

>> No.12234592

>>12230228
Comfy and fluffy, just how I like it. Watame suddenly coming to your house felt a tad forced and rushed but that's honestly not that big of a deal. Your vocabulary was pretty good considering you haven't written anything in ages so that was another plus. Overall a nice short.

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>>12209706
Helping Polka stretch before her stream by rigorously fucking her under the guise of it being great for flexibility.

>> No.12236303

>>12209914
Nuns are purpose-built for hardcore breeding. This is a law of the universe.

>> No.12236578

>>12209706
A story where you are a manager for Hololive (another one) and you care so much about the company and its talents that you literally overwork yourself to death. Falling to pieces day by day, you can feel your organs shutting down, random sharp pains everyone, constant headaches, throwing up every couple of hours. But if it's all for them... it's worth it. Or so you thought. Perhaps a Holo could change your mind? Or perhaps life just isnt that kind and they will never know your sacrifice.

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>>12236303
If God didn't want me to shoot every drop of cum I had into Claire's virgin raw pussy he would not have created my cum

>> No.12236806

>>12209706
A futuristic dystopian era in which Hololive rules over the Vtubing world with an iron fist, dominating the land of the rising sun.

>> No.12236871

AA can you fix the tags which have two variations but mean the same thing? Right now I can't go into it but there's "futanari" and "futa" in tags for example.

>> No.12236980

>>12236871
Must've gotten lazy for three or so of them. Done. Please point out any other inconsistencies that strike you.

>> No.12238260

>>12230228
This made me crave for more Watame fics. God I love this fluffy sheep.

>> No.12238395

>>12225552
but why though?
There's literally no reason to catch up on the threads unless you really want to know how the thread reacted to how a story in the archive got posted.

>> No.12238567

>>12238395
I think it's the same guy who posted about this before and that was his exact reasoning for wanting to do it.

>> No.12239496

>>12230228
Oh that was just sweet and fluffy, it's not an original premise but your execution of it was very good with a nice ending that lands it pretty well.
For your first writing in a while this is good. Eager to see more of your work in the future

>> No.12240812

>>12230228
Wonderful return to writing, my man. Thank you for the fluffy meal.

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>>12236303
>>12236641
stop thinking sinful thoughts about the sister

>> No.12242994

>>12242261
Suddenly in the mood for a hotdog. 1

>> No.12244236

>>12209706
Spirit Hunter Fubuki encounters the ghost of Bill Cosby who proceeds to sexually abuse her in the dark.

>> No.12245328

>>12242261
Honestly these post make me think about a Sister Claire fic that seems like it's setting up a smut fic, but it's entirely just teasing that it might happen and the entire fic is just about (You) visiting her church confessing some sins and leaving or something like that.

>> No.12245352
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>>12245328
Confess your sins

>> No.12245379

>>12245328
Sounds like a nice and comfy idea but nuns don't take confessions.

>> No.12245403
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>>12245379
Claire does

>> No.12245495

>>12245352
I write fanfiction on a Mongolian basket weaving forum

>> No.12245600

>>12245352
I masturbate to fanfiction on a south tibetan clarinet-playing forum

>> No.12245637

>>12245495
Newfag here, I often see people refer to 4chan as this but why?

>> No.12245783

>>12245637
open wide newfag
it originated from this place's status as an anime board every time someone posted "y anime??" here
it got corrupted from anime board into various ridiculous substitutes
it's not a reference to anything in particular

>> No.12245889

>>12245637
>>12245783
I thought it was joke that spiraled from (japanese) anime forum-> chinese cartoon forum-> Country Ridiculous Activity forum

>> No.12245952

>>12245889
it definitely started off with anime forum
no definite way to track its slow corruption

>> No.12246846
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12246846

I know I said I'd stick to the three stories I'm currently, but I just got inspiration for another ryona fic.

I know it's silly of me to ask, but would you all be interested in picrel?

>> No.12246971

>>12246846
>I know it's silly of me to ask, but would you all be interested in picrel?
bruh it's silly of you to ask.

You really are a prolific, huh? You've churned out a massive amount in a short time span. I'd normally keep to myself about this because your business is your business, but be careful of burnout, yeah? It hits suddenly and hard.

>> No.12247007

>>12246846
Yes. Don't forget to give her stockholm syndrome too so that she won't fuck other men.

>> No.12247043

>>12246971
I've been so intensely creative, even for me this is quite the oddity. I'm usually a bit low energy but the words are exploding from me, so happy I can churn so much for everyone.

I'll try my best to pace myself, but you know how it is with creativity. You get an idea and you just need to run with it. I'll try to take some more breaks every now and again, thank you for the concern.

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>>12247043
>You get an idea and you just need to run with it.
it do be exactly like that sometimes.
well, i'm here to read as long as you're here to write. admittedly i'm really hyped for this idea

>> No.12247971

>>12246846
Yes, along with a short epilogue about anons asking why the fuck is she streaming so much.
Also if you take requests, can you have her horns be broken/taken off? Ever since I saw it in a GBF doujin, the thought of horned girls getting their horns broken is just so hot.

>> No.12248188

>>12247971
never even considered that. If I find a way to include it, I will.

>> No.12248365

>>12232725
>>12234592
>>12238260
>>12239496
>>12240812

Thanks so much for the responses! I'm glad you liked it, it was just a short thing I threw together at 4am so I'm really happy to hear positive replies haha

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>>12248365
Bless you fellow sheep lover.

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>>12209642
Short prologue of a story that I've been delaying for too damn long. Not sure if I want to update the docs or just make a new one when I write out the main contents of the full fic.

Tags: Aqua, Shion, Fluff,Eventual NTR SFW(for now)

>> No.12250366

>>12250342
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRGQZtefAWxX0QMbssgZ7cZuQfBkdAWI-Ypdu91qwghJdcw2iTkmF6_JfYnwMqxWVDH4uXA8vdYliDt/pub

Dumbass me forgot to link the actual fic.

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>>12209642
Here's the Ayame story I promise:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR6JE6xGswIMDDGP7DfSHJQ5Be49oUcgZKyKE6-3Y-UptakpoSku4couZ-ZC3eOSv2IHXkxWpc3gS6Y/pub

>> No.12250875

>>12250545
oh and the tags:

ryona, NSFW, Ayame

>> No.12251013

>>12209706
Making Ayame fall in love with you only for you to tell her that you want to find a virgin girl instead.

>> No.12251017

>>12250545
good work anon

>> No.12251068

>>12250545
Arigatou writeanon

>> No.12252120

>>12250545
is this gonna be a series, or just a one off?

>> No.12252264

>>12252120
It's going to be 5-10 chapters long I'd say. But it'll be self contained.

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>>12245352
I am and do several things /vt/ hate but I refuse to change because my autism makes me stubborn.

Picrel, see filename.

>> No.12254374

>>12245352
I vent and overshare my traumatic experiences in my writing material

>> No.12254560
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>>12245352
I power through annoying daily duties by imagining Fubuki embracing me when I'm finally done and home and praising me for how hard-working I am and how much of a good work I do.

I love this fox too much.

>> No.12254665

>>12245352
Every night I lay in bed and imagine daily life being married to my oshi. I feel pathetic but it’s one of the only things that makes me happy anymore.

>> No.12255258

>>12254560
Are you perhaps a waifufag? I may or may not be one also and do something similar with a girl unrelated to hololive.

>> No.12255386

>>12255258
Unironically yes.
Cringe or pathetic may it be, it does help me with powering through shit I don't want to go through.

>> No.12255517

>>12255386
Not cringe at all man. Unironically, waifuism has saved my life. I've literally gone from in the hospital, barely alive after trying to hang myself, to going to college with a 3.5 and working on the side. All because of my waifu. Love is powerful.

If you need to to do what needs doing, cling to Fubuki with dear life. I'll write a Fubu story just for you. Anything you'd like you and her to do?

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>>12255517
I'm glad to hear someone else shares my sentiment. I myself was in a tough spot a while back. I had just finished high school and was drained in every sense of the word. I wanted to go to Uni but didn't think I was good enough. I wanted to get a job but Covid struck and no one in my town was employing.
Then I discovered Fubuki and Hololive. I decided to just try my hardest and see if I can get at least one of my two wishes granted.
I'm currently in my second year of Uni and I haven't been as happy as I'm now in a long time.

I appreciate you doing such a sentiment for me, it means a lot. My tastes are quite vanilla and I'm a fluff enjoyer through and through.
If it's not a problem for you, I'd like to read about a similar scenario as the one I described a few posts above - just Anon coming home late from work/lectures/errands/whatever exhausted and barely awake. Fubuki welcoming him home, hugging him and praising him for job well done and for working hard, followed by a lap pillow to alleviate his stress and spooning in bed as she encourages him and tells him how much she loves him and how proud she is of him for doing his best.

I crave and live for such scenarios.

>> No.12255982

>>12255859
Good job man. I'm so happy to hear it. Remember Fubuki loves you.

I love writing fluff. I'll get too it. And again, good job. Fubuki would be proud.

>> No.12256984

>>12245352
I've masturbated to the idea of fucking my favorite writers more than once.

>> No.12257019

>>12255517
>>12255859
It is absolutely cringe but hey, "if it's not broken don't fix it.". We all have our ways to cope with pain, some are weirder than others but at the end we are still the same.

>> No.12257416

>>12255982
Thank you, it means a lot. It goes without saying that I love her too.

Thank you! I'll be looking forward to it. Please, by all means, don't rush it. Take your time.

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>>12209642
>>12257416
Here it is. I hope you like it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRwk5uMV8z2KJTorMzcChyJuO5CAIXdVYBnq-nZj9wRO7_wpFTlsKLswv2fnS1aY0CtLYvYAcCJ8-6E/pub

tags: fluff

>> No.12258233

>>12256984
w-what
like...stephen king, or...here?

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>>12258233
If I ever got my hands on half the smut writers here I'd provide a lot more inspiration for content

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>>12257841
Dear god Anon, I expected sweetness but this was like concentrated diabetes.
And that's a good thing.

It was exactly what I needed - short, fluffy, cute and sweet Fubuki story with no needless drama or anything else.
For all intents and purposes - it was perfect. Exactly what I needed, exactly what I wanted. Absolutely beautiful.

Thank you for writing this for me, Anon! I immensely appreciate it!
I'll have fantastic dreams thanks to this story.

Once again, great job! Thank you for writing this, I truly appreciate your hard work!

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>>12258276
please maintain a healthy distance between me and the other writers, thank you.

>> No.12259203

>>12258466
Thanks so much! I'm glad I could write it well for you. I love writing fluff pieces like that so if I'm feeling inspired, I'll happily write another.

>> No.12259468

>>12259203
You're very welcome! You absolutely deserve the praise!
If you ever decide to write another one, I'll definitely be here to read it! Whether it's Fubuki or not. I love your writing style, so any and all fluff you write, I'll be here to read it.

>> No.12259483

>>12258276
Whoever has the biggest cock gets to be the one who fucks the other's boypussy. No ass to mouth though.

>> No.12259926

>>12250366
Damn Anon sounds like a total dickhead. Also did we really have to NTR the precious onion of all people?

>> No.12261853

>>12250545
>Ayame Ryona smut
>It's going to be a series
I kneel. The ryona could be better, with a need for more reaction to the hits and pain but the 5-10 chapters you're promising makes me excited to see more.

>> No.12262247

>10 things added to the archive yesterday
You guys are going nuts

>> No.12262275

>>12261853
I'll keep that in mind. Thanks much.

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>>12245352
I grew up in an emotionally abusive household of only women and all the women I came to trust outside of family as a kid and late teens ended up betraying that trust; so I swore off relationships because it couldn't be helped. I'm not into casual sex either so my desire to not get rekt was always stronger than the desire for physical intimacy. I've been a waifufag for a pretty long time, and it never really bothered me. Multiple people have asked me if I'm gay, but I just don't register real women as a man anymore.

Korone started to change that for me. It's not that I'm romantically attached to the dog, it's more that her personality is so in tune to what I always thought was my ideal that it reignited the flame of hope that maybe it's not so impossible after all. Maybe it's cope, or maybe it's because it's these girls' jobs to pull at our heartstrings, or maybe still it's the cultural differences and I'm the one who ended up looking for a partner in the wrong hemisphere. But I'm less against giving it another shot now than I used to be.

Thanks for coming to my TED Talk.

>> No.12264320

>>12245352
I pissed myself at age 14

>> No.12264460

>>12245352
I try not to see Suisei in a sexual light but it gets hard sometimes and I end up cranking one out to her.

>> No.12264628

Anybody got some Inamori fic here? I was just passing by

>> No.12264693

>>12264628
I want to say no but check the archive.

>> No.12264881

>>12264628
There actually is one, but be wary of penis if you ain't into that

>> No.12265012

>>12264628
I think you're better off looking through AO3 for that. Chuuba x Chuuba fics are kind of rare here.

>> No.12265037

>>12264881
>>12264693
I already read all their fanfics here, I was just hoping if someone made a new one

>> No.12267326

>>12264460
Suisei is Suisex after all.
There's just something about the combination of her backstory, body, and dislike of being sexualized that makes her so SEX.

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>>12245352
I didn't think this would get any replies, have a sweet picture of claire winking at you to make you feel better.

>> No.12269258

How old is everyone here? Just curious. I know there's some really old writeanons, but what's the average?

>> No.12269479

>>12269258
I'm in my late 20s.

>> No.12269544

>>12269258
Early 20s.

>> No.12270045

>>12269258
I'm willing to bet I'm the youngest writer here at 18 years old.

>> No.12270149 [DELETED] 

>>12270045
I’m DEFINITELY the youngest at 9

>> No.12270235

>>12270149
MODS

>> No.12270297

Any Watamates here have any clear understanding of her family problems back when she was a child? I just recently became a Watamate myself and all I know right now is that her dad is a shitty person. I wanna make a fic comforting Watame instead of Watame comforting (you). Felt inspired after reading the recent Watame fic here.

>> No.12270595

>>12270045
Almost 19 here so probably

>> No.12270740

>>12270045
That would be me anon
Let’s just say, the rules say I can’t be here

>> No.12270932

>>12270595
What month? I'm 19 in February.

>> No.12270972

>>12270932
Me too...

>> No.12271087

>>12270972
Oh...

>> No.12271343

>>12269258
24
I didn't feel comfortable putting out until partway through university

>> No.12271370
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>>12270297
Secondhand info, but the short version:
Dad was divorced from Watame's family, and has implied he'd rather put Watame in an orphanage than raised her if she went to his custody: see https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zaAS3xYGOkU
Grandma raised her because mom was busy, and Watame struggled with mental issues throughout her childhood: see https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kYGcChYRCg
Relationship with grandma and mom is good though, but grandma's gone now: see https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NsFgA2N12Qw
She saviorfags for her fans because she knows what it's like to be on the other side. Sheep love.

>> No.12271492

>>12209642
Kiara and Mori weight gain piece written in collaboration with an anon friend! /wg/ stands for weight gain! Tags on-site!

https://archiveofourown.org/works/34831927

>> No.12271521

>>12269258
29 and dreading hitting wizard status

>> No.12271656

Any update on the story about Amelia fucking her dogs? Is it still being written?

>> No.12271878

>>12209642
This story isn't that good but I wrote it because why not. Futafags let me know what you liked/disliked about this fic. Also AA, can you make this story, Paradise Lost, and Odysseus a series in the archive? I wrote all three stories and I think it'd be a nice idea to have them all in one place. Anyways, enjoy.

Fubuki, Futa

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSYkG2ygOQJ_GWj6XqsUNDyu59pFHjdQyqE5hhRJIUiCqcLbWBnSlmdON8GalJ_eeHhIzf60HnXp7lf/pub

>> No.12271916

>>12271656
It is. Im procrastinating, sorry. (´•ω•`๑)

>> No.12272105

>>12271878
None of these three stories feel connected though. It's like a different Anon and a different Fubuki in a different setting each time.

>> No.12272309

>>12271878
Series is normally dedicated for stories that are deliberately interconnected

>> No.12272671

Huh there's more story than prompt today
>>12250366
She's going to rape anon isn't she

>> No.12272833

>>12271370
These sorts of things are why I like these women so much. It feels like for many of them, the lack of needing to be physically visible allows them to be more emotionally visible, if that makes sense.

>> No.12273128

>>12269258
25, almost 26

>> No.12273473

>>12272671
Shion is a bit twisted in this one so there may be more than 1 form of NTR :')

>> No.12273558

>>12272105
>>12272309
ok that makes sense, sorry

>> No.12273641

>>12273558
Anon I know making it into the "series" archive is a pretty big achievement but you still gotta work for it.

>> No.12273740

>>12273641
Is it though? It doesn't seem very hard. Just write two short chapters and boom

>> No.12273805

>>12273740
Surely that's why we have 900 stories and 18 series.

>> No.12273903

>>12273805
600*. Not saying it's common, just saying it's not very hard to do.

>> No.12273953

>>12273903
Better get in while it's hot then, because new series get added to the bottom of the list.

>> No.12274359

>>12273953
So do stories.

>> No.12274585

>>12274359
Yes but stories have a browse by new function.

>> No.12274722

>>12273641
>>12273740
>>12273805
>>12273903
>>12273953
>>12274359
>>12274585
This is such a non-issue, why are you guys even talking about this?

>> No.12274905

>>12274585
And series chapters get added to that too, what are you getting at?
>>12274722
Ask the guy trying to put series' on a pedestal

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>>12273473
>gets you fiending for mesugaki cunny hard enough to cheat on your girlfriend for her
>just starts fucking other dudes
absolutely devilish

>> No.12276833

>>12246846
Yeah but only if its just one anon. Ryona with more than 1 person aplying the violence is peak faggotry.

>> No.12276986

>tfw no story about your highschool vtuber friend that flirt with you after seeing you cry because of the fluff content there is in the fics

>> No.12277049

>>12276833
Not true. Beating down a slag with your bros is based as fuck, and you not having any friends doesn't change that.

>> No.12277638

>>12276986
Make it Watame too because she's now the comfort chuuba in this thread other than Fubuki. Not that I mind it, I love my fluffy sheep.

>> No.12277944

>>12269258
35

Wizardry isn't all that's cracked up to be, although I can maintain an erection with the power of my imagination alone for hours.

>> No.12277996

>>12269258
20

>> No.12278033

>>12276781
God this gaki never fails to make me horny as hell.

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Another chapter in From a Person Who Will Die in Three Days

>>12209642
>You got yourself showered and dressed, putting in the bare minimum of effort
>This was going to be a pain
>You got into your car and drove an hour into the countryside
>You hadn’t been anywhere close to here in nearly a decade
>It reminded you of your youth
>Camping, hiking, full of imagination
>Happy
>You pulled up to the side of the pumpkin patch, a large farm overlooking a massive field of pumpkins and behind it, a large corn maze.
>It felt serene
>Maybe this wasn’t such a bad idea after all
>Just as you pulled in, Moona’s car pulled up next to you
>She excitedly got out of the car, dressed as a witch, and greeted you
>”Anon! Hi! You came!”
>You smiled
>It was a half smile, but a genuine smile
>First time you had one of those in a while, at least when it didn’t relate to some stupid video game
>Her joy had an infectious quality to it
>She was so happy to see you despite the fact that not a day earlier you’d completely brushed her off
>To a solitary creature like you, this was very strange
>”Hi, Moona. You look good.”
>Moona smiled and did a twirl
>”Thanks. I special ordered it. I even got a wand and a magic grimoire to go with it!”
>You thought it a bit cringe, but you were a bit jealous at the same time
>She was around your age yet magnitudes happier than you were
>And over a simple Halloween costume no less
>Perhaps being her brand of autistic wasn’t so bad considering the joy
>You and Moona walked into the farm
>It was something of a dump, but it had a charm to it
>Hung from the tree at the center roundabout were cheap ghost cutouts
>To the left resided a bunch of goats, pigs and sheep in a petting zoo that smelled almost worse than death
>To the right stood the pumpkin patch
>At the center stood a barn, converted into a haunted house
>You felt like a kid again
>Normally this sort of thing would leave you put out and exhausted, but this felt like a trip down memory lane
>You’d not been here specifically, but you’d been at a few places like it
>You would always get the most excited among your sisters
>In a way, you were just like Moona when you were younger
>Even you couldn’t maintain your usual aloof persona in the face of it
>”So, what should we do first? We need to do the pumpkin patch last, too heavy.”
>You put your hand to your chin
>”Why not the petting zoo?”
>Moona’s eyes lit up
>”With all those cute goats?”
>”Yeah.”
>You both walked to the pen, more accurately a stye, and Moona pouted
>”There’s a fee!?”
>You raised your eyebrow
>”You came here without any money? You know the pumpkins aren’t free right?”
>Moona looked slightly embarrassed
>Normally you were tight fisted with your cash
>But what’s a corpse need money for?
>You paid ten dollars and motioned her in
>”You paid for me? That’s so nice!”
>Moona gave you a big hug and you felt your tummy fill with butterflies
>You couldn’t recall the last time a girl who you weren’t directly related to hugged you
>”You coming with?”
>”You want me to?”
>”Of course!!! I didn’t come out here just to do this all on my own.”
>You paid the extra ten to the doorman and followed her inside
>With a childlike joy, she pet the pigs and goats
>You knelt down and scratched the head of one of the sheep
>You used to be passionate about animals, had a special way with them
>Even the more nervous among them seemed to trust you without hesitation
>Memories flooded back into you
>It was like looking at another person, while still looking at you
>A person who was young, hopeful and happy
>When did you become so bitter?
>”Anon look at this!”
>Moona had her face squished against one of the sheep, her hat resting on both hers and its head
>”Isn’t he so cute?”
>”Yeah. He is pretty cute. So are you.”
>”What did you say?”
>”Oh uh… nothing. I just said he’s cute.”
>”No, I mean after that.”
>”Come on. We should go see the corn maze.”
>Moona stared at you quizzically and followed after you
>”Bet I can find the center before you do!”
>Moona charged forward
>”Wait!”
>You chased off after her
>Despite the size of her… chest, she was surprisingly quick
>She must need at least two sports bras for a load that heavy
>You ran after her, left, right, right, left but had lost sight of her completely
>You groaned
>Perhaps this wasn’t a good idea after all
>You called out after her
>”Moona!”
>”Over here!”
>She walked back to you, covered in sweat and panting
>”You run fast for a girl.”
>Immediately, you mentally facepalmed at the fact you just said that out loud
>”Thank you. Lots of practice.”
>Right over her head
>Moona straightened her witch hat and smiled
>”For a boy you run very slow. You don’t get out much?”
>You pouted
>No need to rub it in
>You both ventured on to the center of the maze, for what reward you didn’t know

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>>12278160
>Like clockwork, you could feel yourself getting winded
>Turns out a life of sitting around, consuming junk and only leaving to go to college and the supermarket left one quite out of shape
>Moona looked barely phased by the exercise
>At the center lay a giant scarecrow with a pumpkin
>It was at least 6 meters tall and 3 wide
>It was like something from burning man
>Moona’s eyes sparkled
>”It’s so big! Anon! Let’s take a picture!”
>”I dunno…”
>”Come on.”
>She gripped your hand and pulled you beside her, taking out her phone for a selfie
>Your heart couldn’t beat quick enough
>This was the first time you’d been hugged by the member of the opposite sex in decades
>Moona snapped an image
>”Anon c’mon! You weren’t smiling at all. We need to do it again!”
>Moona grabbed you again, left tit firmly pressing into your shoulder
>Arm rather, considering the size
>You smiled, but for a reason all together different than for the image
>”Better. You’re such a sourpuss~”
>”I’m not that sour…”
>”You’re frowning like always.”
>She giggled
>You wanted to argue but anything you said now would be a clear lie
>”Want to go back?”
>”Yeah just… give me a minute.”
>You were still out of breath from the walk
>Moona giggled and sat beside you
>”Moona?”
>”Yes?”
>”Can I ask you something?”
>”Sure.”
>”Why hang out with me? I don’t mean to sell myself short, but I’m not exactly the cream of the crop when it comes to friends.”
>Moona looked down
>”No one else wants to talk to me.”
>”I see. I know the feeling.”
>”You’re really nice though. You like spending time with me too, right?”
>”It’s been fun so far, Moona. I’m glad you got me out here. Never would’ve done this on my own.”
>”It’s been fun for me too.”
>”So America. You intend to stay here forever?”
>”No. Just until I finish university.”
>”What’s Indonesia like? Do you miss it?”
>”No.”
>She said it in such a way that gave you the impression you shouldn’t press
>You got up
>”Ready to head back?”
>”Yes.”
>You reached out your hand and pulled her up
>Moona looked at you curiously
>”What are those marks on your wrist?
>You quickly pulled your sleeve down
>”Nothing. Let’s go.”
>It was time for the haunted house, the large barn making the centerpiece of the farm
>Beyond the doors it was still bright despite their being no lights
>The wood barely stopped any light, it may as well have been glass

>> No.12280127

>>12269258
27

>> No.12282647
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Keep that motivation going.

>> No.12282870

>>12282647
These motivation posts are getting more and more erotic...

>> No.12283103

>>12282870
Possibly a plot to regain the favor of virgins by Peko-Anon?

>> No.12283269

>>12283103
It's Cover High Anon. They said as such. They also fucking hate Pekofag, so...
That fucking bunny suit pic won't leave my mind even when I look away from the thread. I want to fuck Pekora's tits while she wears it...

>> No.12283363

>>12282647
This might be... no, DEFINITELY is a stupid question to ask, but is Pekora actually your oshi or just someone you enjoy writing about? Or maybe it's just the chuuba you originally started motivation posting with, and it stuck?

>> No.12283454

>>12283269
damn...didn't notice. Head empty only lamy

>> No.12283599

>>12283103
The "favors of virgins"?

>> No.12283740

>>12283599
refer to >>12283454

>> No.12283776

>>12283740
No, you're not getting out of this one. Explain.

>> No.12283816

>>12283776
I dunno..tired?

>> No.12283900

>>12283816
You always were my least favorite Lamy anyway. What a disappointment.

>> No.12283963

>>12283363
She's not my oshi, but she's definitely my favorite chuuba to write.

>> No.12283970

>>12283900
I think they're insinuating everyone who likes your stuff is a virgin.

>> No.12284106

>>12283816
>>12283970
Samefag

>> No.12284114

>>12271492
Ok I really don't get this. Is the fetish supposed to be having them be this disgusting. Like I need a second opinion from an actual architecturefag to see if they actually find this erotic cause this just seems like it hits the disgust buttons rather than the kind I see in the architecture thread.

>> No.12284266

>>12284114
Never try to understand a fetish. Even something as simple as "I much prefer thighs over asses" is actually impossible to explain when you think about it.
End of the day, it all comes down to sensations or experiences people enjoy that will never be understood by someone who doesn't share that preference.

>> No.12284331

>>12284266
scatfag...

>> No.12284382

>>12271878
Wait wasn't there already a sequel to that fubuki scat story? I swear I remember reading one that was basically (You) comforting her after she was forced to shit in other anon's mouth? I don't see it in the archive.
In regards to the futa smut. It feels kind of mid, just feeling like actions and dialogue without much in the way of reaction, description or emotion to try and spice it up.

>> No.12284421

>>12284382
Oh, you're right, it's not there. Let's go back and find it.

>> No.12284463

>>12284266
It's actually quite easy to understand fetishes if you know a person's life story, but in an anonymous Mongolian basket weaving forum, that's a bit hard. For example, someone with mommy issues will most likely search for nursing or older women to take care of them, as well as things like milk and incest. Someone who was abused as a child will most likely turn to rape fetishes and abuse in general, as well as lolicon and paedophilia in cases of sexual abuse. For someone with few experiences with women will most likely turn to hentai in general instead of going for real porn. I could go on but it gets a bit specific so it's hard to describe them all. Being a psychologist must be real awesome, just from some life stories you'd be able to tell what that person thinks, their fetishes, what secrets they hide, etc.

>> No.12284466

>>12284382
Wait, the fuck? I swear I grabbed it. Fuck me.

>> No.12284494

>>12284421
Found it. >>11870101

>> No.12284547

>>12284494
Oh. I did grab it, I just forgot to designate it as a sequel. Alright, fixed that.

>> No.12284681

>>12284463
It's not always that simple. For example, I really enjoy imagining eggs being laid inside me by spiders, tentacles, flies, slugs, stuff like that. The idea of being pinned down by something dangerous and watching as new life slowly descends down a tube and slowly pushes its way into my innards, filling me in ways I couldn't experience in real life ever... knowing that I'll either be giving birth to it later or end up being eaten after it hatches inside me.

Never had a life experience even that even comes close to explaining such a fucked-up fetish, but there it is.

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>>12284681
oooooooooooooooooooookaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
thanks for explaining that in further detail, egg fetishist

>> No.12284869

>>12284766
You're welcome!

>> No.12284957

>>12284681
Anon, you underestimate psychology. I believe such a fetish is an evolution of rape fetish which is created by experiencing the loss of control in one's life, even if it wasn't something big. Fetishes, the heavy ones, are usually coping mechanisms. I can't deconstruct it without you giving me some backstory, but it's more obvious than you think. If you were to tell me your deep dark fantasies secrets, I could certainly go "aha! That's why!" eventually. We don't "develop" these things out of nowhere. Humans are intricately built machines and each gear turning inside us is a life experience that is moving our parts around to the shape of their rhythm.

>> No.12284980

>>12284681
I really want to write that Mio story that you requested but as >>12284382 and others have said my smut is just action so I'll need to work on my writing skills before I can write that Mio fic. Also, not to be an armchair psychiatrist or anything but maybe that fetish might derive from a man's instinct to breed? I dunno.

>> No.12285025

>>12284957
Correction, not an evolution of rape, a variation of it. Both can be brought upon by similar circumstances but at the end of the day they can be quite different.

>> No.12285094

>>12284957
Maybe you're right. Figuring it out would require deconstructing an entire life story, though, and I don't want to derail the thread, especially given that at the end of the day - no matter how fucking weird it is - it's just a fetish, no different in function than any other.

>>12284980
I'm REALLY surprised anyone remembered that Mio prompt.
>smut all action
Are you by any chance the writer of Coffee-Stained Lips?

>> No.12285111

Wait what does it mean if I have an intense fetish for long red hair? Was I unknowingly raped by a long red haired lady when I was a wee lad?

>> No.12285143

>>12285111
>Marine can time travel

>> No.12285148

>>12285111
Maybe you really enjoyed Tsukihime as a tyke.

>> No.12285198

>>12285111
...Were you really into Washu from Tenchi as a kid? I was. Ryoko too. Probably got me into waifu shit as a whole.

>> No.12285243

>>12285094
>Are you by chance the write of Coffee-Stained Lips?
No, the smut I've written isn't that good and I remember that prompt because it was unique and I have a good memory.
>>12285111
Could've been Makime Kurisu

>> No.12285248

>>12285111
With you saying that as a joke, I'm gonna have to asoom one of two things:
> you had a sexual experience with a red haired woman at a young age, not necessarily in a direct way.
> you weren't around many red haired woman through your life, and thus, during puberty, you took an attachment to this new stimulus that you didn't get to know earlier in life.
The two most important parts of one's identity are their first 6 years, which one can't record in memory, and their teenage years in which they try to differentiate themselves from their parents by trying out new experiences. A redhead, if you never got to get acquainted to one of them before, would be a way to rebel against your past experiences. Then again, as I have nothing to go on, these are just my best guesses meant to be taken as informative if wrong or with a grain or salt if correct.

>> No.12285338

So close to finishing a chapter in my series, already at 8k words... Still... needs... more... work.

On an unrelated note, what are your top 5 smut works in the archive?

>> No.12285375

>>12285338
The KFP employee's chronicles and Foxfriend and overly nice boyfriend

>> No.12285404

>>12285338
This has been asked a million times. Anon please. You gotta say "no Fubuki or matthewanon" as well as "no AA" at this point to get any meaningful or refreshing answers.

>> No.12285443

>>12285338
As I was thinking about this question, I remembered something I've been wanting to ask the author of High-Density Comet for a while, if they're still here.

When you wrote this fic... just how big did you intend for Suisei's ass to be? I imagined her just to have a particularly rotund set of cheeks, comparable to Brazilian hotties, but a lot of the descriptive words in that story gave me the impression that her ass was something monstrously, inhumanely huge.

>> No.12285479

>>12285143
>Marine gains the ability to time travel
>Immediately uses it to speedrun grooming a man into the perfect mate

>> No.12285515

>>12285243
What smut have you written, anon? Don't be embarrassed, we almost all feel the same way of our own works.

>> No.12285533

>>12285404
You're probably right, but my brain is just spamming Sleeping Beauty all over again. That shit changed my whole perception on cunny.

>> No.12285546

>>12285479
>First orgasm any% dry fire WR

>> No.12285820

>>12285546
>"Doctor doctor!"
>"Some woman broke into the Maternity ward!"
>"What?! How the hell did someone get in there?!"
>"What is she doing to that boy?!"
>"Ahoy! Don't circumsize this one please!"

>> No.12285862

>>12285820
Marine really is the kind to stick her tongue in unwashed foreskin and twirl her tongue around inside to collect all the cheese.

>> No.12285882

>>12285515
If I told you that'd kind of ruin the fun of anonymity. I will say that so far I've only managed to get one confirmed orgasm from one of my fics which is the goal, I think?

>> No.12285904

>>12285882
I've nut to plenty of stories but never said anything about it besides the Pekora one last thread...I should do say that more.

>> No.12285988

>>12285882
I don't really count but I got a really good amount, over 50 at least. But that being said, while my smut is good my stories aren't that great. If you can say "you can write action better than smut" perhaps you're just throwing your talent in the wrong direction. The last anon who tried to force themselves into making smut burned out and went on a journey of self discovery after nuking all their works, SFW or not, from the archive. Can't teach a fish to climb a tree.

>> No.12286019

>>12285882
If you see it that way, fair enough. Plenty of authors take credit for their own work here in the form of "I wrote XYZ fic", though. It's not frowned upon.

>> No.12286077

>>12285988
Yeah, not too happy about that. I kept hesitating over whether or not I wanted to read Dog Maggots, and then it got nuked. Now I'll never have the chance. Wish I backed it up, but this was exactly what taught me that important lesson, so it worked out in the end.

>> No.12286263

>>12284681
>>12284980
I mean this is also armchair psychology but I think it might derive more from fetishizing danger, i.e imagining the sharpness of a knife, the height of a fall, the weight of a truck. It's like those 'life ruining' fetishes like for those hard subs imagining and fetishizing getting their life fucked up and broken; with no chance of escape.

>> No.12286370

>>12286263
>>12284980
I gotta say your guesses are pretty shallow and don't have much correlation at all. But keep at it anons, one day you'll understand the human psyche.

>> No.12287071
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12287071

I was going to call it a night for writing cause I got a long day ahead of me, but to that one anon, I will sacrifice a couple more months of my life tonight to write a bit more of the Risu story. Dunno about timeframes though because I'm quite busy recently.

>> No.12287159
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12287159

>>12209642

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRzHevwK2XihAiifbR781HnisOCxf1pDTZz7s0lO7tyiun-rwqdleSGyjVvvrTUXMLHbgYAIS8HawbO/pub

Sex with the hags! Part 1.

Tags: Botan, Mio, Fubuki, Aki, Flare, Watame, NSFW, Group

Ok, like I mentioned a few days ago I decided to take some time to edit and wrap up what I had written so far to release this in chapters. It's bordering 13k words as-is, and there's quite a bit more left to do. It's been a while since I made significant progress, so hopefully that'll quell the drought of long format stories from me.

I guess there's no limit when you start out with a prompt that simply reads "Sex with hags. Every hag!"

>> No.12287238

>>12287159
I claim the (You) virginity of this post as I know many people will mention you after me. Just know you'll be eating my sloppy seconds.

>> No.12287278

>>12287071
Why...is she so small here?

>> No.12287308

>>12287278
It's her new model she launched like... last month I believe? I say "model" but it's just a PNG for her member's only loli streams. Of all Holomems she probably does the best cunny voice.

>> No.12287342

>>12287308
>Member's only loli stream
I've never heard of that. Fuck. Fuck...

>> No.12287444

>>12287342
IKTF. Only just recently found out Korone has member's only ASMR streams, and that she's surprisingly good at it.

>> No.12287480

>>12287159
Friend is a hag? I never knew

>> No.12287505

>>12287480
Yeah, her roommate's no spring chicken.

>> No.12287506

>>12287480
She is the same age as Watame, both are about 30~ish. Not really hags but older than Marine.

>> No.12287526

>>12287506
Anything older than 12 is basically ancient, anon-kun.

>> No.12287685

>>12287526
Hi Mohammed.

>> No.12288010

>>12287159
You're going to love this, trust me.

What you're seeing now is my normal state.

This is hag fucker.

And this, this is what is known as a hag fucker that has ascended past a hag fucker

Or you can just call this hag fucker 2.

And this,

IS TO GO EVEN FURTHER BEYOND!!!!

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

>> No.12289813
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12289813

>>12287159
It's more than I ever imagined when after someone begged for hag orgy following Harvest Season. Good fucking lord, Anon. And this is only part one. I cannot wait for the rest of this.
UOHHHH KNOCKING UP EVERY HAG! MATURE EROTIC! MATURE EROTIC! SHEEP SEX! SHEEP PUSSY! FLUFFY SHEEP IMPREGNATION! HORNY LIONESS BALL DRAINING! SEX FRIEND FUCKING! WOLF IN HEAT! SEXXXX

>> No.12290119

>>12278160
>>12278234
Moona's English is awfully good here. She's also not socially awkward at all. Seems quite out of character from what (admittedly) little I've seen of her.

>> No.12290189

>>12284382
>forced to shit in another anon's mouth
Wasn't she tricked? Actually not even that. She was told it was illegal to go in public, then readily accepted the idea of using a fan as a toilet. Let's not demonize the innocent and, if I say so myself, devilishly handsome scatfag(s).

>> No.12290456

>>12290189
Anon, she was manipulated into doing that after consuming copious amounts of food and needing to immediately shit.

>> No.12290515

>>12290189
I wonder who's behind this post

>> No.12290755

>>12209706
Sex with Haato except she begins to lose control of her personalities and swaps between her and Haachama at random. Haachama keeps encouraging you to do increasingly depraved things while Haato begs you to keep it vanilla. Will you shove it in Haachama's asshole to have Haato come back to it and shriek at your monstrous cock stretching her virgin anus open? Or will you respect Haato and force Haachama to orgasm from loving vanilla?

>> No.12290794
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12290794

>>12287159
I thought the long wait had let me get ready for this.

I was not ready.

Holy shit that was amazing, and I really can't articulate much more than that.

>> No.12292684

>>12287159
SEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXX
UUUUOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH
SEEEEEEEEXXX

>> No.12294108

>>12284114
There are many different breeds of architects, plenty that just like the tactile sensation of a bit of chub like you say, but a similarly large faction that fetishizes the depravity of gluttony and sloth. In a similar manner to how it's hot to see a pure, gentle girl turn into a cum-craving slut, I like seeing a well-moderated girl lose herself in an addiction to food/fullness.

That faction is deceptively large, actually, and the reason is because it's split into loads of smaller ones based on how much grossness an individual can handle before revulsion overpowers arousal towards it. There's a similar root cause behind why architects are aroused by, say, a girl getting fatigued from a basic activity like standing up, and a girl letting a meaty belch rip, but for a lot of people, the latter is strongly ingrained in their minds as something unpleasant.

There's a slippery slope that sometimes occurs when architects search for more intense fantasies in a horny fervor and discover that they CAN actually overlook a deeper stage of depravity, which is what leads to fetishizing burps, sweat, smell, braps, health issues, scat, etc. The latter few in the context of weight gain/corruption, of course, I have no fucking idea what goes on in scatanon's head

>> No.12295145

>>12294108
Okay but I was more looking towards opinions of some architectfags towards that particular story since the appeal of the architecture shown there was puzzling me.

>> No.12295304

>>12295145
The answer is yes, I found it pretty hot reading about Kiara stuffing herself into a queasy mess and then corrupting Mori into doing the same, for the reasons I outlined. Is something still confusing you?

>> No.12295428

>>12295304
So you're an architect but do architects generally like scat? I can see how they would because both fetishes are tied to food in some way.

>> No.12295580

>>12295304
Not really, I was just wondering if it was either me not getting architecture or the author fucking up the appeal. Turns out it was just me not getting it.

>> No.12295727

>>12295428
Nah, that's an extreme niche. Not even most slobfags are into that.
That said though, like I was saying, I believe that fetish has a similar origin to comparatively tamer stuff. It's just too fundamentally repulsive for most people to get over.

>> No.12295838

>>12295727
Conversely, I have no idea what architecturefags see in a girl overeating, becoming slovenly, or generally letting themselves fall into disrepair. It's something that does boggle my mind, but while I can't understand the appeal, I've got no problem accepting them.

Just chiming in with something - I can't speak for other scatfags but rather than finding arousal in the revulsion, I simply don't associate the act with disgust...but only when it's my oshi.

>> No.12297749

>>12250366
>>12250342
I have to ask is this going to be the kind of NTR story that's going to have Aqua crying her eyes out at the end because she got her boyfriend stolen?

>> No.12298073

>>12285404
Why AA? Their stuff is barely mentioned besides the Kiara stories

>> No.12298091

>>12298073
AA hasn't just done Holofantasy, he's done a LOT.

>> No.12298141

>>12298091
Yeah, but for favorite smut I only ever see the Kiara stuff mentioned once or twice out of everything else. Matthewanon is brought up a lot more in that regard so it makes sense

>> No.12298153

>>12297749
It sure seems like it's going that route but who knows what the author wants to do.

>> No.12298215

>>12297749
God I hope so. Aqua is prime bully material. She is weak, dependent, can't stand up for herself and doesn't know how to control her own emotions. She would be the most satisfying to break down by far.

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12298223

>>12271492
Okay, but...why ? I mean, it's kinda funny, but....why ?

>> No.12298308

>>12298141
Lies comes to light is commonly a favourite ryona piece here. Also remembering how to love her. I personally love HORN-Y!, then there's also HoloFan.

>> No.12298379

>>12297749
>>12298153
>>12298215
Man I got a more messed up ending for that fic planned.Shion rapes you and forces you to take responsibility. To add salt to the wound, Shion planned for Aqua to be raped by some dude and records it. Double NTR ending.I'll probably make the ending much more tamer but I popped a huge fucking boner thinking about that.

>> No.12298422

>>12298379
>Shion rapes you and forces you to take responsibility
Hmmm. I enjoy hurting others, but I really don't like it when turnabout is involved. Still, you do you.

>> No.12298567

>>12298223
Anon... there's people with more depraved fetishes itt

>> No.12298796

>>12298567
I know that, but still.

>> No.12298962

>>12287159
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
This is an absolutely wonderful thing to wake up to!!! Can’t wait to read it anon

>> No.12299059

>>12298962
> WOWZERS, I HECKING got CHILLS waking up to this STORYRENO! I'll read it right after watching my favorite episode of STAR WARS. AMAZEBALLS!! 11!!

>> No.12299093

>>12299059
Anon I didn’t get chills, I got rock fucking hard

>> No.12299114

>>12299059
Of all the things to get snarky over, you were upset by an extended exclamation? Were you dropped on the head as a kid?

>> No.12299160

>>12299059
Life is Strange has easy achievements/trophies

>> No.12299919

>>12299059
>this user is underage

>> No.12300077

>>12299093
Based.

>> No.12300248

>>12298379
Damn, that sounds hot as fuck. Painful NTR is the best, and that just sounds so messed up. I hope you can can make it.

>> No.12301709

>>12300248
NTA, but NTR is not my thing desu. Oh well, you do you.

>> No.12301761

>>12301709
NTA, but NTR totally is my thing. I understand you doing you, though.

>> No.12301780

>>12301761
Kek, nice one.

>> No.12302021

>>12287159
My dick hurts and my legs don't work. Thanks.

>> No.12302075

>>12298379
No, I don't like that part at all.

>> No.12302280

>>12287444
>surprisingly good at it
Korone's ASMR stream is not your typical ASMR stream, if that's what you're into. She's certainly been getting better at it but they're still so characteristically "her" that in the end it's a few minutes or binaural teasing and an hour or two of soft-voice zatsudan to the background of her knocking things over, her hard drive making death sounds and nervous flustered giggling.

It does feel nice to hear "ちゅき" right in your ears though.

>> No.12302450

>>12302280
Korone's at the better end of the spectrum, imo, but I think Patra's ASMR is horrid so take that with a dose of salt.
After 8 years of ASMR what consistently works for me is whispering and Korone is great at that hushed-voice conversation. In addition, she might think it's a bad thing but the ambience of her computer is great - this low, rhythmic humming of the hard drive occurring at seemingly set intervals.

My only complaints about her ASMR streams are where she starts giggling loudly, because the sudden sharp increase in volume easily knocks me out of my reverie

>> No.12302801

>>12302450
ASMR savants are just coomers in disguise.

>> No.12303030

>>12302801
I don't think that there is such a thing as an "ASMR savant" because it's not a matter of skill, it's a matter of applying the right triggers, which differ wildly from person to person.

I assume you're referring to terrible trend of ear-licking though and yeah, they're essentially the asmrtist equivalent of twitch thots

>> No.12303222

>>12303030
No I'm referring to YOU. You are the coomer in disguise. The people who watch ASMR not to get off are "coomers on disguise" is what I'm saying. Such a weird fucking thing.

>> No.12303338
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>>12303222
Oh, ok. Opinion noted.

>> No.12303552

>>12209642
a little late into the thread, but whatever. The next chapter of the unashamedly shonen HoloRealm, almost 10k words long.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRER4iM03FFZPYR1rOhA5f0i_8N6n0bDoq2ZfOG5tg1datPXgV1seaAutSW9KpP3i8fmpvpA9X8kXg3/pub

Tags: Amelia, Astel, Roberu, Noel, SFW, Adventure

Also for AA, here's the series description:

In a world that hates men, and subsequently [You], it seems like your only future was one of suffering and failure. Until that is, you had a chance encounter with a blonde detective, where through a series of adventures end up with the Claiomh Solais, an ancient relic that could potentially change the world itself. Enter the HoloRealm, and fight for your dreams of tomorrow, or die at the hands of all the women who hunt you.

I will admit, I'm still a little doubtful over my characterization of the Holos, but I hope as the story progresses it will make more sense.

As always, let me know what you think!

>> No.12304164

>>12303338
Good

>> No.12304589

>>12287159
>Anon is a muscular sex god with a big dick
Immersion ruined, couldn't fap.

>> No.12304820
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>>12288010
>>12289813
>>12290794
>>12292684
>>12302021
Glad it was worth the wait. Let me know what went well and what needs improving on for next time, or what you think I should do more/less of.

I have a pretty set idea what the Aki scene will look like as well as Flare's, but there are so many ways I'd like to write sex with Watame and Fbk that I can't settle on just one. I still mull over making the sheep lactate but not everyone is into that shit.

>>12298962
Let me know what you think, anon.

>>12304589
Anon, you too could become a muscular sex god with enough gym time. The dick part though isn't exactly easy to fix. Author and reader share the sentiment.

>> No.12304842

>>12276986
Writing something similar to this right now, except it's not as straight forward and there's no flirting involved.

>> No.12304937

>>12269258
19.

>> No.12305134

>>12303222
> "Oh, there's an ASMR stream on the line, I should check it out"
> proceeds to pop a raging boner to Haachama saying "poggers"

>> No.12305249

>>12305134
poggers, DADDY*

>> No.12305839

>>12287159
hell yeah

>> No.12306090

>>12283963
Who is your oshi?
Vergil?

>> No.12306135

>>12277049
Unfathomably based.

>> No.12306164
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>>12304820
>fat antisocial micropenis anon here (AKA Bodanpling)
Do it. Give us the sheep milk.

>> No.12306214

>>12271878
I'm torn here because I love Fubuki but hate futa.
I'm clearly not the target audience so I won't leave any feedback revarding the content but I will say thanks for the read regardless.

>> No.12306247

>>12306090
Polka

>> No.12306285

>>12306247
Absolutely based clussy connoisseur.

>> No.12306640

>>12250545
Good fucking god, that's delicious. Will you continue it, or leave it as is?

>> No.12307004

>>12306640
>>12252264

>> No.12307137

>>12307004
Ah, sorry. Didn't see.

>> No.12307588
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12307588

>>12304820
>but there are so many ways I'd like to write sex with Watame
Need to use horns as handlebars while you plow her from behind

>> No.12307968

Did you know that sheep are exceptionally vulnerable to myiasis, and very woolly sheep in particular? Include it in your next Watame story!

>> No.12308414
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12308414

>>12307968
>Miyasis
>Being the host of parasitic flies
NOPE. NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE.

>> No.12308697

>>12307968
gee, I wonder which anon posted this

>> No.12310337

>>12303552
You're the Anon who did Holofantasy, right? I'm working my way through that series right now, it's very good. I can't wait to binge through a 4 or 5 chapters of this after I'm done that.

>> No.12311471

>>12310337
HoloFantasy is ArchiveAnon's series

>> No.12312038
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>>12307968
Xenochama, I'm this close to taking back all the nice things I said about you earlier this month.

>Captcha: 0RXGY
Ironic.

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>>12304820
Good, very good. Came twice (probably more later)
I can definitely see the time you took to edit it. There’s none (or at least a lot less) of the common trip ups with spelling, punctuation and word repetition you see a lot here (not to insult other authors/fics)
You did a good job on managing so many characters while keeping things moving, and the smut descriptions where hot as fuck.
Well worth the wait, thank you for the great story anon.

>> No.12312404

>>12311471
Well shit my bad, why everyone here's gotta be called Anon?

>> No.12313103
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>story about fucking hags
10 (you)s
>update to a series with actual plot
1 (you) from someone who haven't even read it
S O C I E T Y

>> No.12314157

>>12303552
Thanks for the description. I'll apply it when I fall out of bed at some point

>> No.12314185
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12314185

>>12313103
Hags are hotter than clowns. Unless you want to haggify Polka. I'd be down for milf clussy.

>> No.12314569

>>12287159
I'm not even that much into hags but this has been one of the biggest loads I've ever busted.
What the fuck?

Realtalk, I've been expecting this for a long time and you definitely surpassed all expectations I had of the story. Seeing that you still plan on adding more makes me beyond happy.
Thank you for your hard work, Anon! Definitely an 11/10.


UUUUOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHH SSSSEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXXX

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA SSSEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXXX

>> No.12315023

>>12314185
Hag Polka in her now ill-fitting clownsuit reminiscing about when she slimmer when you both met before you reveal the fact that the outfit - and her - still make you rock hard!!

>> No.12315122
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>>12313103
Come on, Anon. Hag Orgy's been in the works for what, four months? That's four months worth of erections finally getting some sort of stimulation. And it (the series entry) was posted a bit late into the thread past it. Honestly may be a good idea for it to be reposted early next thread because it's sadly going to get drowned out in a tidal wave of cum no matter what.

>> No.12315325

>>12287159
The long awaited Hag Orgy is here and it's fucking amazing! Anon you make some damn good smut, especially with making a 7 person orgy read hot while keeping it coherent with the imagery and action.
The wait was worth it.

>> No.12315530

>>12287159
Thanks anon, that was hot. Now where is Polka cunny?

>> No.12315672

>>12304820
Make the sheep milky. If she doesn't lactate I will be disappointed. Also use her horns as handlebars in some way, shape, or form. Please God just absolutely reduce Watame into a quivering mess.

>> No.12316041

>>12315023
I demand saggy tits, stretch marks, pubes, and crow's feet. Lean into what makes hags so amazing.

>> No.12317256

Any update from the anon who was writing the Flare amnesia story? I don't mean to rush it or anything, just really eager for the next chapter

>> No.12317455

>>12317256
Have some patience, Christ.

>> No.12317871

>>12317455
I'm gonna have sex with your dad

>> No.12317958

>>12317871
Ah, you’re that early thread fag.

>> No.12317992

>>12317958
Seems like it with how combative he is.

>> No.12318027

>>12317992
Why is he like this?

>> No.12318064

>>12318027
Who knows. He's been at this for months now. With no signs of ever stopping.

>> No.12318205

>>12318064
>He's been at this for months now.
What did ever do to this deserves?

>> No.12318236

>>12318205
Don’t start with this shit. We’ll get autist answer this.

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>>12209617
There's been twelve stories this thread. Are we on a roll of something?

>> No.12318365

>>12318326
Writer anons have been rather productive this time around, hope they don’t burn out.

>> No.12318433

New thread
>>12318380

>> No.12319038

>>12313103
It's in this thread's nature. To get a lot of (You)'s you need to do some really common fetish smut story or release a really well written SFW story as an already known good NSFW writer. There's no in between.

>> No.12319045

>>12287159
HAG SEX UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

>> No.12319377

You guys have been on a roll lately with the works! Glad to see it.

>> No.12319480

>>12319377
All me, but I'll stop it next thread.

>> No.12319512

>>12319480
Who said you could stop anon?

>> No.12319566

>>12303552
Just a couple nitpicks which are mostly opinions but I think the “friendship” between Roberu and Anon felt a bit forced. Like they had only just met but Anon was already feeling secure and protected or something. Just my thoughts. Also went a bit too hard on the shounen awakening trope when he unlocked the sword but again that’s just my opinion

>> No.12319568

>>12319512
I... I... I gotta go.

>> No.12319619

>>12319568
I swear to god anon, if I don't see another 10 stories in the next thread...

>> No.12319626

>>12319568
GET THIS NIGGA'S LEGS

>> No.12320144

>>12312229
>>12315325
>>12314569
Thanks. Definitely had to make sure the other members were accounted for and that was a bit challenging to do without breaking rhythm. Although Flare hasn't done much (yet) since I feel she needs to get a bit more hot and bothered before joining in. Anal doesn't count as cheating, right?

Also Fubuki will remind everyone why she's Mio's best friend shortly.

>>12315672
>>12307588

Don't worry, Watame will be handsomely rewarded for being on (your) side here. UOOOOH POUNDING THE SHEEP FROM BEHIND. SMACKING YOUR HIPS AGAINST HER ASS WHILE YOU HOLD HER HEAD IN PLACE BY HER HORNS AND SPIT INTO HER MOUTH. RAWDOG HER SO HARD HER TITS LEAK AND SPRAY EVERYWHERE FROM THE WEIGHT ALONE UOOOOOH SEEEEEEEEEEXXX

>>12315530
I will be wrapping up Nursing Catto part 2 next, and I'm almost done. Then I will work on that next; already have the gears running in my head.

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>>12320144
The moment approaches, I can't wait

>> No.12321312

>>12303552
Yknow what would fix this whole dilemma for the Empire? Invite anon to a “truce” and brainwash him to serve the empire and turn him into a girl through magic. This way you keep the status quo, no?

>> No.12321398

>>12303552
Nice one anon, looking forward to the next chapter!

>> No.12321423

>>12321312
No. Shut up.

>> No.12322536

>>12321312
Hot. I want this ending.

>> No.12324680

>>12322536
Anon, I'm going to magically turn you into a girl.

>> No.12326342

>>12324680
Go ahead. I doubt you even could.

>> No.12326397

>>12326342
sym sym sallabim

>> No.12326501

>>12326397
?

>> No.12326988

>>12326501
It's a spell, dummy.
Now check your groin.

>> No.12329131

>>12326988
Yeah, nah. Still there. Good try though.

>> No.12329850

>>12329131
Softer methods have failed. Time for the chainsaw

>> No.12329852

>>12329131
actually anon I just checked and it's true, your cock is gone. have another look.

>> No.12331220

>>12329852
What the? You're right. Where did it go? Give it back!

>> No.12331288

>>12331220
GANGBANG THIS BITCH NOW

>> No.12331461

>>12313103
No, that's my fault for posing it so late in the thread and in the same thread where a long awaited smut fic was posted. Im hindsight I could've posted the story in the next thread for maximum (you)s, but whatever.No hard feelings, as I was awaiting for Hag Orgy myself.

>>12319566
No, your concerns are quite valid. The whole chapter went through some major changes as I wrote it, and I believe some of subtlety I wanted to show was... not as subtle as I had hoped. Either way, thanks for checking out the story. Things are going to get much more dramatic from here on out.

>>12321312
Cool suggestion, I'll keep this in mind for later when I need to do lore exposition.

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