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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>12416681

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.12491938
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>12491938
Scenario: You finally get to date and marry your oshi. Your marriage is relatively stable, though sometimes you go a bit too far, it is good enough. Eventually, the two of you decide to have a child. But no matter how much you try, you can't seem to conceive. You go to the doctor, expecting to hear that she has some problem in her eggs but it turned out that it was actually you that was shooting blanks. No problem, guess the dream for a child was dead but it's fine, you'll get over it. Except your oshi(wife) wants to have a baby no matter what, she talks to you about getting artificially inseminated, and you agree. However, she is adamant that she wants to have a black baby, and if you don't accept it, she'll divorce your ass and take half your assets including the house and car. What do?

>> No.12493536

>>12491938
Protecting a clueless Rosemi with your life.

>> No.12493711

I'm only keeping this thread open because Rosemi is in the OP.
I don't have anything worth writing.
Also I hope Rosemi is doing okay.

>> No.12493999

>>12493536
Might make a quick story based on this, just to take a break from what I'm writing right now.

>> No.12494052

>>12493999
>No new ip
Anon... did you reply to your own prompt?

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What the shit was the entire thread last night? Holy fuck.

(I can't believe I missed it.)

>> No.12495085

>>12494400
The last few threads have been pretty active recently; I'm pretty sure it's the fastest this general has been in like months.

>> No.12495297

>>12495085
Almost as fast as we used to be before...

...the happening.

>> No.12495369

>>12495297
So... trees made /wg/ 41% themselves?

>> No.12495827

>>12495297
Man that early thread was legendary.
Though I think the general recline comes more from the council debut and subsequent hornyposting moving to /infinity/ kind of took a lot of the wind out of our sails, at least until more people dripped in here looking for chuuba fic.

>> No.12496031

>>12495827
Meh. I like the thread being slower. Not critical life support, but just calm. We even managed to get a new author or two recently. Maybe three? Not sure.

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>>12491938
PLEASE, BROTHERS! AQUA SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX!

>> No.12497407
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>>12497241
Dating Shion but being unable to resist breeding her retarded best friend!

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>>12497407
SLAMMING INTO AQUA WITH THE FORCE OF A FREIGHT TRAIN! PISTONING HER SOPPING WET GASH AS SHE GASPS FOR BREATH! PUMPING LOAD AFTER LOAD INTO HER BABY FACTORY AS SHE LEGLOCKS YOU IN PLACE! WATCHING IT DRIP DOWN HER THIGHS AS SHE TELLS YOU SHE WANTS MORE!

AQUA SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX

>> No.12498145

>>12497931
Supremely overbased

>> No.12498631

>>12497241
>>12497407
>>12497931
Anon, please. It's November... I can't handle this much of the onion.

>> No.12498763

>>12498631
Cum to Aqua everyday instead. I've already turned all my horny energy into fapping to a different chuuba everyday. Today was Okayu.

>> No.12498765

I want to wape Wosemi!

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>>12498631
It's Nonstop Nut November anon, haven't you been keeping up

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>>12498631
Onion sex.

>> No.12498998

>>12498763
I've already accidentally conditioned myself to immediately get hard when I see or hear Aqua. I don't want to make it any worse.

>> No.12499177

>>12498998
Come on Anon. Doesn't her awkward, idle slurping sounds make your cock throb while your brain instantly jumps to the thought of hearing that sound as she takes you into her mouth? Don't you want to slide between the soft, pillowy mounds if her fat tits? Or do you just want to roll her in to her back and stuff her full of your cum? Maybe on to her stomach so you can appreciate her plump, slightly jiggly ass while she screams out in pleasure?
Fuck the Onion, Anon. She's made for it.

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>>12498998
>ねええ、ご主人様...アティシのなかこんなにだしたいの?

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>>12491912
https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vQ3jiXtS2Gp6tKfPivUJuY-iwT_8IsU_kggda7vBS-FuH8I4Jzzceu_dWysDDXs2KWX_UnUxz-4Jw97/pub

Lazing Catto

Tags: Okayu, fluff, NSFW


Alright, here it is lads. Sequel to Nursing Catto is complete, three months after I got started on it. I didn't plan on writing so much for this, but I really wanted to emphasize the comfort of spending a lazy day with a lazy cat.

Achievement unlocked: Break 100,000 thousand words of smut alone.

>> No.12499477

>>12499443
UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH

>> No.12499492

>>12499443
OH SHIT

>> No.12499550

>>12499443
seeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXX

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>>12498763
That was your mistake. You'll never be able to pull yourself away from Okayu once you get a taste.

>> No.12499853

>>12499443
there goes NNN

>> No.12499997

>>12499569
>cum to Okayu
>sequel to nursing catto comes out
Let the festival of nut begin.
God Ogayu is so fucking sexy.

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>>12499443
It's about to be an agonizing work day. I've waited so long, what's another few hours..?

>> No.12500357

sex

>> No.12500545
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>>12491938
Aqua decides that she needs a vacation so she invites some of her friends to go to an island with her
They skydive to the island but when they land they're captured by pirates and bandits that occupy the island
Now Aqua has to step up and escape the island and save her friends

tldr: far cry 3 but with hololive characters

>> No.12500658

>>12500545
>Aqua
>step up

her friends are basically dead

>> No.12500733

>>12500658
just tell her to imagine its like Apex

>> No.12500764

Did that CYOA story ever get made?

>> No.12500806

>>12500733
>Aqua moral corruption
Hmm....

>> No.12500814

>>12500545
>>12500733
The entire story is just the aqua corruption arc and involves her slowly becoming an unhinged autistic killing machine.

>> No.12500824

>>12500764
I think everyone agreed it was too much effort and gave up.
I’m still hoping we make a /wg/ collaboration fic someday though. And I mean a proper google doc not the takeshi greentext

>> No.12500940

>>12500814
Yeah

Just like far cry 3

>> No.12500947

>>12500824
One sort of happened.

>> No.12501063

>>12500947
You mean Holofantasy vs. Holocalypse? That was cool and I loved it, but I’m talking the whole thread. Every writeanon.

>> No.12501202

>>12501063
>/wg/ Ultimate
>Everyone's here!

>> No.12501720

>>12501202
The constant change of writing styles would be funny

>> No.12502001

>>12500764
Do you mean a CYOA in a fanfic that branches out or CYOA in a "the thread votes on it like a quest" ?

>> No.12502194

>>12501063
Something like that would be fucking sick, and would go down in /wg/ history. I wonder how we would do it though, and it would be hard to do without breaking anonymity.
If we hypothetically were to attempt this I’d say each writeanon who wants to participate identifies themselves with one story they’ve written, and we decide which chapter each Anon gets to write. Then AA starts us off with the first chapter, it gets passed onto the anon who writes the second chapter, then passed onto the anon who’s in charge of the third chapter and so on.

>> No.12502468

>>12501063
Maybe what we could do is run something similar to a Secret Santa, except each writer that signs up gets a scenario or two to write at random, not knowing anything about the original text.

It would still require someone to write and build the skeleton for the story and the full outline of all possible scenarios, and someone else to organize them all into one continuous document, but it could be fun. The story as a whole would probably be incredibly incoherent at the end, but it would be hysterical.

>>12500033
Sorry anon, I was going to post it last night but didn't have the energy to give it a final once-over. I guess it worked out for the best considering how the thread came to an end.
Hang in there.

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>>12499443
God, this fic. You continuously astound me.

We're are not worthy.

>> No.12504764

>>12499443
I just saw your post in /ag/ and I immediately came to check in here
blessed

>> No.12505109

>>12499443
Pretty hot! One minor criticism: if this is a sequel to Nursing, why are they so shy? She spent all day suckling Anon's cock, she shouldn't be blushing and dancing around like this.

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>>12504764
B-but Anon, I've never been to /ag/, not even once

>>12504377
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

>> No.12505361

>>12497407
I still can't get used to how those toes look.

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>>12499443
That fucking cat, man.

>> No.12505577

>>12505361
they some long fucking toes, hey brah

>> No.12505901

>>12505114
yeah noticed it was a different one, it was just a weird coincidence for both of you to post after one another
still loved it, had to reread the previous chapter before that

>> No.12507467

Any stories about Kizuna Ai in here? I've been horny for some daisenpai

>> No.12507854

>>12505109
Hmm, you raise a good point. It's probably a case of the author projecting onto the text - personally I get really flustered when talking about sexual things, so I guess my first instinct is to pass that along to the characters.

Though in this case I think that's more the case for (you) and not so much Okayu, right? In this story she's pretty nonchalant about talking sexual things, I alluded to that quite a few times. It's only at the end when things get romantic and somewhat serious that she starts to fumble through her words a bit. Maybe it's a bit OOC for her, but I can't imagine anyone admitting "Let's have kids because I love you" without a bit of emotion to go with it.


>>12505901
I checked out the thread and the timing was uncanny as well as our choice of picture. I mean, deaver is 80% to blame for my lust for this cat, but out of all the pics we ended up choosing the same. Don't blame you for thinking it was me...

>> No.12507982

>>12499443
Can't wait for there to be actual feedback to this fic so I can decide whether to read it or not. Gotta wait for the sex spam to die out first as usual.

>> No.12508033

>>12499443
IT'S FINALLY HERE LEZGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

For real though, spectacular work, Anon. You imrpoved upon Nursing Catto greatly. You keep on astounding me.
Great job!

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>>12507467

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>>12491912
>>12405969

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>>12491938
You and Botan try and get Lamy drunk enough to pass out so the two of you can have sex behind her back. Naturally, the both of you have a few drinks here or there to not arouse suspicion, but by the time Lamy's actually conked out, Botan and you are too drunk to be careful and have loud, sloppy, raw sex in the same room.

>> No.12510815

>>12510548
Lamy joins in

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>>12510548
Then while she's bouncing up on your cock she pukes all over you and the night is ruined. The smell lasts for days and you could never see Botan as sexy ever again. Soon enough, you started to stay away from hags, especially ones who drink, and develop a cunny fetish. That's when you found someone actually proper to fuck... pic related.

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>>12510965
I am unable to see Shion in a sexual manner.

That tummy is only for brutal abuse

>> No.12511331

>>12510548
This reminds me a lot about a certain Fate & Nanoha doujin series. Hot shit.

>>12511209
Kinda gay desu. I want to lock Shion into a mating press and pound her so hard the earth's crust on the other side of the globe bulges out into hills and peaks with each thrust.

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>>12511209
Not based. Brutally abuse her tummy by putting a baby in it. Her small and tight witch cunny would feel otherworldly. She would tease you at first but once she realizes how big your cock feels when inside her small bratty body, she would soon lose herself to pleasure.

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>>12510965
Absolutely cringe and bluepilled.

>> No.12512081

>>12510548
>>12510815
Holy based.

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any fics involving missionary, handholding, hugging, and kissing?

>> No.12513427

>>12512840
You sick fucking degenerate

Realtalk, only one I can think of that's sort of close to this is Petting Your Fox 2, Kintsugi, Miss Sakura (at the very end) and Play In The Rain And You'll Get Wet (at the very end). The fact these are the only four that come to mind saddens me.

>> No.12513565

>>12513427
If it saddens you, write it. Simple enough.

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>>12513427
God bless you, anon. Thank you

>> No.12513787

>>12513565
I can't write smut to save my life, Anon. I love reading it, but I hate writing it.

All I've ever written is SFW Fluff and I don't think this will change anytime soon, if at all.

>> No.12513925

>>12513787
I can't say I relate because my first smut was a goddamn banger, but you won't get better if you don't try. You probably hate doing it because you feel like you're bad at it so to avoid feeling bad you lash out instead. My fetish is niche here too, and I, said the same thing as you, "it's sad that X isn't done more". The response was to write it myself, and so I did.

>> No.12514139

>>12513925
You're right, yes. I do think I'm bad at it, but at the same time, I don't really want to write one. Sure, it might be because I think I'm bad, but also because it's not the type of content I'd like to do. Maybe one day when I'm horny and gutsy enough, I'll write some vanilla smut, but I doubt many people would be interested in that.
Then again, if I do feel like writing it, I will. Regardless of whether anyone wants to read it or not.

Also, which is the thing you were sad about not being done more of? Also, which smut story did you write? If you don't mind sharing, that is.

>> No.12514327

>>12514139
>vanilla smut
>doubt many people would be interested in that.
That's where you're wrong kiddo, I'm always into that. Yes I'm a degenerate who writes degenerate things but a good old vanilla fluff story isn't something I'll pass on.

>> No.12514453

>>12514139
The fetish was futa and the story was ERROR.exe (vanilla Sora story), supposedly a few people blew their loads to it. It was my first smut so hearing that gave me confidence to write more and more.

>> No.12514504

Oh, look who came crawling back!

>> No.12514598

>>12513787
I'm not really one to talk since I never actually finished my smut story but I share the same experience as >>12513925. The small part I did post was quite well received and it was first time I had ever written smut. I was super self-conscious at the start as well but you really just gotta get down to it, no excuses. And if it sucks? Then it's just a learning experience and you gotta try again.

You really can't knock until you try it at least.

>> No.12514681

>>12514598
That being said, most anons who's first experience releasing smut is criticism saying it sucks, they usually have their spirit shattered and soon enough drop writing smut. Double edged sword of sorts.

>> No.12514788

>>12514327
>>12514453
Well, I guess it's nice that at least one person would read a hypothetical future story. Then again, it might never get made.
I liked your ERROR.exe story, but I would honestly not go as far as to say I've jerked off to it. I'm having a hard time jerking off to words on the screen, unless there's some imagery. But it was still enjoyable, so good job on that.
Unfortunately I've not read any of your... other stories. Futa is not my thing. Never have, never will.

>>12514598
Oh, I don't want to completely disregard the idea of me writing smut. I'm just saying it's unlikely. Even if I was confident enough in writing one, I still wouldn't do it unless I felt horny enough for it. I've not reached such a point yet, but if I ever do, then who knows.

>> No.12514799

This thread is so fucking horny. It's nice.

>> No.12514934

>>12514788
Well if you haven't completely disregarded it then, I'm willing to bet it's going happen sooner or later if you stay in this thread.

>> No.12514968

>>12514788
Oh no sorry I'm saying I'll read it, but someone will. I don't read most stories posted here, I just like writing. I was, of course, exaggerating. My Sora smut was by all accounts an amateur's work, because it was. But it was good enough for some people and that was good enough for me.
> can't jerk off to words on screen
... W-what are you doing in a writing general, anon?
> futa
Most people don't. People used to read it even if they weren't into it for the sake of feedback, but not anymore after certain events. I've been wondering if I should write another vanilla story but there's just so many of them already, it feels like I personally don't need to contribute to that number. That being said, since the futafags don't really make themselves known, at this point I'd enjoy switching back to vanilla to get some proper feedback, it's been a while.

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>>12514968
>can't jerk off to words on a screen
>w-what are you doing in a writing general, anon?
not that anon but i prefer fanfics because reality can be whatever i want. Plus i really like fluff

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>>12491912
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR6JE6xGswIMDDGP7DfSHJQ5Be49oUcgZKyKE6-3Y-UptakpoSku4couZ-ZC3eOSv2IHXkxWpc3gS6Y/pub

Two new episodes of Lazy Oni. I hope you enjoy.

I'm going for more of a slow burn with this one. Each chapter it'll get worse and worse. I hope I'm not going to slow or that it's a bit to boring. If it is, bare with it.

>> No.12515360

>>12514934
Oh, it probably will. I don't really think it'll be in the forseeable future, but maybe some day. Who knows.

>>12514968
>... W-what are you doing in a writing general, anon?
Reading Fubuki stories (mostly) and goslinging. Sometimes OD'ing on Copium, too.
>I've been wondering if I should write another vanilla story but there's just so many of them already
Factually incorrect. There are never too many vanilla stories. Ever.

>> No.12515510

>>12515360
I just mean like, take that earlier story posted in the thread for example. Lazing Catto. To most people, it's a work of art. The anon produces good vanilla content on a semi regular basis, he and others. Most good writers of this thread already do vanilla. But then take smaller fetishes like futa, there are no dedicated writers for that. There's a bigger demand (or there was supposed to be), and so I try to stick to these smaller fetishes, since there are much better writers above me already taking care of the vanilla side of things.

>> No.12515564

>>12515203
Gaslighting Ayame epic style

>> No.12515666

>>12498765
redpill me on rosemi
how rapeable is she

>> No.12515949

>>12499443
>>12500033
Fucking incredible. A masterpiece of work. I dunno if my heart has ever felt like this before.

>> No.12515982

>>12515666
https://streamable.com/6hde77
You can't fake autism like this, I'll leave the rapeability up to your discretion

>> No.12515996

>>12515510
>Most good writers of this thread already do vanilla
True. Still, I stand by my previous statement. There's never enough vanilla.

>> No.12516104

>>12515203
I hope this ends with a masochistic Ayame completely enjoying being abused.

>> No.12516528

>>12511331
>a certain Fate & Nanoha doujin series.
You, uhh, wanna help a brother out?

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>Dream about working together with Nene, Botan, and Suisei to evacuate a city following some sort of horrible demon catastrophe
>Helping direct Botan in a helicopter while fucking Dante from DMC is 1v1ing a Titan or some shit
the last thing I read was smut. what the fuck
>>12515510
It's nice to have authors that can handle the more niche fetishes. There IS a lot of vanilla but there's nothing wrong with that. I think there needs to be more futa with (You), personally, if only to round things out

>> No.12516777

>>12515203
I'm really enjoying this so far anon. Keep up the good work.

>> No.12517004

>>12516695
Have you perhaps requested any futa stories?

>> No.12517059

>>12515203
Will this end with murder?

>> No.12517199

>>12517004
I don't particularly like futa much myself. I read it when it's posted, but...else, it's not my cup of tea. That aside, the only futa I like is when the futa is on the receiving end. That tends to make people go "BUT WHAT'S THE FUCKING POINT?"
The point is that it's hot. But that sentiment isn't shared.

>> No.12517308

>>12517199
So you want more like AA Matsuri's baby carrot. I'm not particularly interested in that genre since the dick usually gets ignored in that case, which indeed, makes it so there's no point. You have made no futa prompts then?

>> No.12517445

>>12517199
>the only futa I like is when the futa is on the receiving end.
Based beyond belief

>> No.12517549

>>12517199
I'm the same. I love when a futa gets dominated.

>> No.12517695

>>12517308
>So you want more like AA Matsuri's baby carrot
Yes. I wrote it. That's absolutely what I want to see more of. I've made some prompts in the past but I cannot recall them off the top of my head. Generally it involves futa on the receiving end, but none really click off the top of my head. I'll ruminate on some. Maybe Nene? Nene could be fun to turn into a gibbering pile. Dunno.

>> No.12517772

>>12517199
I'm of the opinion that someone like Mori should have a fatass dick and still be a stuttering mess.

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>>12517695
>Nene tries to flex her big futa cock and how you should do your "husbandly duties" and please her only to be a quickshot who can barely handle a handjob

>> No.12517943

>>12517695
What a twist. Anyway, I don't know if I'll ever write you dominating a futa because I like to focus on the dick when this genre prefers focusing on her dick being made useless. I really like writing chuuba futa on chuuba female and that's what I'll keep doing for the most part. The fact that most people here prefer (You) to fuck the futa is a bit odd. Still, with a proper prompt, I could maybe take some interest in it.

>> No.12518190

>>12517885
That's my shit. I love stuff like that. Talking a big game only to end up being completely unable to handle any stimulation whatsoever without doubling over, leaving (You) to take advantage of the situation you're in and turn the tables on them. I've seen people mention Pekora in a similar role due to rabbits having no sexual stamina.
>>12517943
No sweat. Write what you like.

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>>12517943
>chuuba futa on chuuba female
have you released anything yet? I would love to read it.

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>>12518296
I mean most of my stuff is futa. But I guess I focused too much on Futa x (You) despite not caring much about the genre. I have CocoGura MoriShion futa fuckfest, PPTenshi vs Tenga and most recently Shark Mating season.

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Godspeed anon. I will watch over your career with great interest.

>> No.12518694

>>12518461
>futa fuckfest

Why did these words make me laugh so much

>> No.12518875

>>12518694
It's an unorthodox name, stands out. Always a bother to type out, but it has a charm to it.

>> No.12519078

>>12516528
Ore to Nanoha to One Room by Type-G, and the sequel where it's MFF threesome.

>>12515949
I hope it was worth the wait. Happy to hear it tugged on those heartstrings a bit. It's what I was going for.

How does one gosling over their own piece of fanfiction? I don't know, but it happened to me too.

>>12518461
My only criticism of the CoCoGura story is the anal was too short.

>> No.12519143

>>12519078
>The anal was too short
NTA but man. I notice there's not a lot of anal stories either.

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>>12519078
Unfortunately for most people here, I don't like anal. I kind of forced it out into the fic just to satisfy some individuals, but mostly glossed over it. You'll notice I don't ever really use words like anus or asshole or idk chocolate star like some weirdos do because I think describing the ass isn't hot, so I just use stuff like entrance and insides. If you want anal there's plenty of fics with it, particularly Matsuri's dangerously tight ass like most like to mention (if you aren't AA). I didn't have much trouble with it in Marine's curiosity but when it comes to futa where the prostate isn't the focus, it's "too dirty" for me to write.

>> No.12519257

>>12519222
>Chocolate star
I guarantee you no one finds that term sexy. It's almost always used for the sake of humor.

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>>12519078
The cat is more powerful than you could know

>> No.12519946

>>12519078
Oh so THAT'S where those butt panels are from, okay cool. Thank you!

>> No.12520058

>>12515203
Ahhhh, I can't wait to read this. Something to look forward to after work.

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>>12491938
Being a young Suisei's music instructor and doing your best to avoid uoohhing when it starts to become clear she has in interest learning what sex is

>> No.12521807

>>12521715
Full image?

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>>12519143
One day I'll have to listen to the internal voice that keeps screaming to write Shion & Aqua anal destruction. And Pekora. And more Rushia.

>>12519267
>Picrel
It's not fair!

>> No.12521881

>>12521807
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6578576&tags=hoshimachi_suisei+loli

>> No.12521992

>>12521846
For some reason the brats are the ones I have the hardest time writing. It's fucking ridiculous. I don't understand why but my brain refuses to cooperate. I'm trying to learn more about Rushia so I can write her a bit better for something I'm working on; relatively confident in that regard. But Pekora and Shion are massive no-fly zones for me and I'm not sure why.

>> No.12522037

>>12515203
I think you got into a good rhythm for writing this because these chapters work much better than the first. I especially liked the scene where the piss bottle breaks open on her and the horn pulling. You make some damn fine abuse fic.

>> No.12522573

>>12521881
Just came. Thanks anon.

>> No.12522881

>>12522573
Prematurechama...

I don't think I've busted to a single picture ever since I discovered doujins. Back then I even jerked off to Nicky Minaj anaconda where the girls are twerking and a Bojack Horseman episode where he is fucking a girl for 20 seconds, both on loop. The least I can wank to now is like 20 seconds of content, as I found out from that Gura ringfit audio getting fucked animation.

>> No.12523519

>>12522881
>Gura ringfit audio getting fucked animation
S-Sauce?

>> No.12523612

>>12522881
>Gura ringfit audio animation
The one where she's getting railed in the ass? God damn.

>> No.12523733

>>12516777
>>12522037
Thanks so much! I really appreciate the positive feedback!

>>12521715
This is something I can do. I'll put a pin in it and write it when I have the time.

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>>12523519
>>12523612
Yes, only the greatest creation in the history of mankind.
https://files.catbox.moe/zqzjx9.mp4
I wish less animators were such pussies about using actual audio from chuubas instead of "le morals", this animation is pretty ok but the audio just completely takes it to a new level. I busted so many times to it I was starting to become premature, so I stopped.

>> No.12523785

>>12523734
Anon...fap to it again. Because I sure as hell am.

>> No.12523789

>>12521992
Rushia isn't a brat.
I've seen her being described as being crazy or caring but never a brat due to how she characterizes herself.

>> No.12523848

>>12523789
Poor wording on my part. I was referring to Pekora and Shion. I don't think Aqua's bratty, just dumb. I know Rushia's a good girl.

>> No.12523887

>>12521881
Damn it, this is making me want to add copious amounts of oral sex into Omarun. Look at that soft Suityan.

>>12521992
Hmm, I haven't tried writing Pekora for more than a few short posts, but her speech pattern is can be hard to wrap your head around if you try to emulate it in english, or any other language I guess. Since it's such an important part of her character, getting it wrong breaks immersion.

Shion's problem to me anyway is that out of all the holos I have interest in, she's possibly the most stereotypically young female of all (I know what that sounds like). As much as I'd like to, it's hard to get in the head of something so far opposite to me, so no matter how I write her it will likely come out cliche.

>> No.12524191

>>12523887
>making me want to add copious amounts of oral sex into Omarun
You're really gonna do that to me? You're really just teasing releasing three godlike fics in a row AND including one of my top tier kinks in one of my most awaited stories?

please I'll do whatever it takes

>> No.12524357

>>12524191
Write a fic about eating his ass while he rails Polka with his superior cock.

>> No.12524419

>>12523887
>Damn it, this is making me want to add copious amounts of oral sex into Omarun.
Anon on a dedicated quest to make anyone foolish enough to do NNN fail immediately.

>> No.12524502

>>12523887
Yeah honestly for pekora's speech patterns, there are two ways to do it in english, and none of them are really that good.
The first is just putting -peko at the end of every one of her sentences. Which really doesn't look or read that good.
The second is making peko puns... which are corny as fuck and probably don't work if you're doing a serious theme.
The third is to not do it at all, and that just does not feel like Pekora.

>> No.12524938

>>12524502
Those pekomiko comics that have been getting translated recently do it in a decent way, turning some words into a hybrid of peko and the word like pekoaxe instead of pickaxe idk. I think adding peko at every sentence's end is important, but mixing some words here in there like Japanese does is much more so. All chuubas with a verbal quirk introduce it mid sentence, like Luna speaking uwu style. Pekora is the easiest of the bunch to replicate honestly.

>> No.12525861

>>12524502
I think I said it once before, but you only need to show a verbal tic enough for the reader to figure out how often they generally use it, and then occasionally use it again to remind the reader its still there.

>> No.12526607

>>12491938
Getting femdommed by Nina! No, the other Nina.

>> No.12526614

>>12492853
Neck too short.

>> No.12526621

>>12491898
I want to rape Rosemi.

>> No.12528321

>>12526607
Forsen's Nina?

>> No.12530792

>>12526607
...Nina Saotome?

>> No.12530861

>>12526607
Nina, the princess of Wyndia?

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Motivation.

>> No.12532151

>>12532045
I'm going to mating press this bunny bitch.

>> No.12532341

>>12532045
>drinking till I pass out writing a ToT fic
>wake up and vomit, left in pain basically all over my body
I think some vomit got into my windpip, cause it hurts when I breathe now.

>> No.12532619

>>12532341
why do you do this to yourself

>> No.12532867

>>12532619
Wagie woes, and I really like Moscow Mules. Also found writing flows better for me whilst drinking

>> No.12533421 [DELETED] 

>>12532045
>eating only cake till I get heartburn writing a fic
>get tier 6 diarrhea every couple hours
I think some shit got on the toilet seat, because I saw a brown spot there, disgusting.

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRTh5df1faYRNRi4QTPtBBfv_L_htfCMgjQp0paWwJsvPro-rbf1nIqTW4UdMRufIMNajQJECRbFdmL/pub
>you let the girl hug you as you wrap your arms around her in turn, the sated delinquent dotting your cheeks with affectionate kisses.
AAAAAA MY HEART

>> No.12536418 [DELETED] 

>>12536145
>>12491912

>> No.12536432

>>12532341
>ToT fic
are you writing this >>12521715 promt by any chance?

>> No.12536532 [DELETED] 

>>12536418
That's not a new story, chump...

>> No.12537347

>>12536432
The times don't match.

>> No.12537514

>>12537347
don't match what

>> No.12537528

>>12537514
They don't match up with bofa

>> No.12537543

>>12537528
what's bofa?

>> No.12537560

>>12537543
RUN AWAY

>> No.12537675

>>12537543
Bofarnel is a hamlet in Cornwall, England, in the United Kingdom. It lies within the civil parish of St Winnow, 6 miles (6.4 km) southeast of Bodmin and 2.5 miles (4 km) north of Lostwithiel. Bodmin Parkway railway station is 1 km to the north of the hamlet.

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>>12537560
no you sit the fuck down he needs to learn
>>12537543

>> No.12537818

>>12537543
ANON NOOOOOOOOOOOO GET OUT OF THERE

>> No.12537940
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You have 8 words to say to any chuuba you want. She'll hear it clearly and she'll know it came from you. What do you say and to who?

>> No.12537960

>>12537940
Polka, you are loved. Please don't hate yourself.

>> No.12537988

>>12537940
I love you Korone please suck my dick

>> No.12538038

>>12537940
Ayame, you're a bitch. Quit Hololive and die.

>> No.12538074

>>12537940
You're beautiful Marine, I love you. Marry me.

>> No.12538099

>>12537940
Suisei, please rip ass on stream just once.

>> No.12538221

>>12537940
Fubuki read every story from /wg/, pretty please.

>> No.12538300

>>12538221
>Fubuki reads herself raping, getting raped, shitting, pissing, and everything in between
>It makes her horny to see herself depicted in situations that aren't just vanilla sexual or overly cutesy

>> No.12538364

>>12537940
should have quit when you were ahead, ai

>> No.12538761

>>12538364
Ai is still making more money than most top earning Holomems combined. It isn't even le meme "Nijisanjeh actually does very well in Japan guys, trust me!", she's actually still going fucking big, even if it's through tik tok dances.

>> No.12538873

>>12514968
Futafag dropping into the thread to say I support you anon! I’m not usually in these threads but checking the archive lately I’ve found some damn good futa fics.
I’m mostly active in the Kronii threads, but I wrote this story earlier
https://rentry.co/7rvct
It has minimal chuubas in it other than a mention of Kronii and Fauna “enhancing” and manipulating an unnamed girl who (you) bullied and letting her have revenge on you with a newly added futa cock
I’ve written a lot more stories than this but crossing over the Kronii and /wg/ archive seems like a bad idea

>> No.12538934

>>12538873
Could always just leave a link to the Kronii general archive in /wg/'s, sort of like how /ag/'s archive has a link.

>> No.12539068

>>12538873
Don't worry too much, there's several futafags here too. There's one or two reasons they don't really give feedback, either they hate me directly or they prefer, as the others mentioned before, (You) dominating the futa, which isn't what I do. Any of the futa stories sticks out to ya? I'm guessing you're not good at giving feedback but just naming a story you enjoyed is enough.

>> No.12539163

>>12538873
s-sekkusu?

>> No.12539258
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>>12539068
Don’t know who wrote it but that Risu one was absolutely fucking spot on. Listening to her NNN videos I can definitely picture her domming and humiliating (you) with her nuts and enjoying it. I don’t know if there’s any fics about them but Moona and Reine could work for that too, similar tones and all, however Risu’s non stop nutting using (you) is very appealing. Something about your oshi making you her bitch just really works for me.
>>12539163
I don’t want to namefag or avatarfag here, but yes

>> No.12539405

>>12539258
I did write that, yes. Most people hated it here and personally I can understand the why, given I went a bit hard at a part of it. Surprising to know someone actually enjoyed it. I do have some more Risu futa coming up possibly this month (?), I'm still unsure as to how her personality during the sex will be, but it's likely going to begin with you getting raped at first.

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>>12539258
my fault anonymous 4chan user carry on

>> No.12539572

>>12539405
Which Risu one did you write? I remember the Futa one being very well received?

>> No.12539626

>>12539405
It seemed exactly right to be, I’ve arguably written harder stuff, like a story about Mumei teaching an ancient hunter gatherer about civilisation thousands of years early, Kronii punishing her for it, and the former hunter trying to rescue her only to fail and get raped by Kronii’s clock before she kills him.
Honestly, futa sub seems weird to me but I’m a complete masochist with very distorted views of sexuality and relationships. It just seems kinda pointless to give a girl a futa dick and then it doesn’t do anything. Although switch futa works (for example Bae letting you dominate her for a moment and then unleashing herself on you afterwards and making you beg and plead for her to stop)
Being rraped by the rrat! Chaos cock!

>> No.12539700

>>12539626
>it just seems kinda pointless to give a girl a futa dick and then it doesn't do anything.
This is the point. Giving them a dick represents giving them sexual power but by having them getting dominated anyway it's like some otherworldly form of domination loss.

>> No.12539744

>>12539700
This. They absolutely have the power to fuck you, but they lose to your superior cock instead. At least give them a reacharound or something, though; before you force them to shoot all over their own face.

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>>12539700
>Giving them a dick represents giving them sexual power
y'know they've got that already, right...? you don't have to change their gender just to get dommed

>> No.12539876

>>12539572
Most people joked about not reading it because it was either dom or futa, something like that, but the actual criticism was that while I did well later on, the parts where I focused on (you)r sensations was a big turn off.

>>12539626
I have the interest of writing proper hard rape, but I feel it's pointless. There was an anon that did overtly hard stuff, and while it captivated people, the verdict was that shock value didn't really serve for good fic material. They eventually fucked off into a journey of self discovery. I have SOME interest in futa subs so long as you actually play with her dick or she jerks herself off at the very least. I am currently writing Risu as a hard ass on an unrelated SFW fic and I agree, it just seems right for the nut warden to be a massive dom. Just gotta make sure I focus on the right things next time, even if you did enjoy it as it was.

>>12539791
NTA but cocks are the ultimate domination tool. Being penetrated by one will turn you into a bitch to anyone's eyes, while the one fucking will be the powerful one. A woman can't dominate a man without one, they are just too weak. But if she could slap a cock in your ass, you'd think otherwise. Even by definition, rape cannot be perfomed without penetration.

>> No.12539897

>>12539700
Damn I always thought futa was just about getting dicked by a dickgirl

>> No.12539961

>>12539876
>NTA but cocks are the ultimate domination tool. Being penetrated by one will turn you into a bitch to anyone's eyes, while the one fucking will be the powerful one. A woman can't dominate a man without one, they are just too weak. But if she could slap a cock in your ass, you'd think otherwise. Even by definition, rape cannot be perfomed without penetration.

this is why people call futafags headcases

>> No.12540012

>>12539876
>but the actual criticism was that while I did well later on, the parts where I focused on (you)r sensations was a big turn off
I remember a lot of people saying they were really turned on by it; even me, and I generally hate ever being on the receiving end of anal penetration. It was pretty good, in my opinion.
>I have SOME interest in futa subs so long as you actually play with her dick or she jerks herself off at the very least.
It feels like this is important. She has a dick - you've bothered to indicate she has a dick. Have SOME fun with it. Don't just leave it out entirely. Matsuri's BC had parts specifically focusing on teasing Matsuri's dick and watching her use her pitifully small one while getting railed by yours. You need to make sure SOME aspect of her having a dick is used.

>> No.12540323

>>12540012
I guess it’s kind of the inverse of people who like futa dom stuff because if it’s futa x male the dude doesn’t usually fuck her. Only time I’ve done futa sub type writing was during my big Takeshi historical story where I had him fuck Marine as Kronii watched but I wasn’t very good at writing that I felt. Domination loss can be good, but again I feel I’d be better at writing it in the receiving end (one prompt I’ve got is asking Kronii for anal, she messes with the timeline to give herself a clock, you jerk her off to completion to make it flaccid, which sort of works for a moment except she gets hard again and rails your ass anyway)
To each their own I guess.

>> No.12540531

>>12539876
>Even by definition, rape cannot be perfomed without penetration.
by what definition exactly? certainly no legal definition used by any civilised country. you DO live in a civilized country, don't you anon?

>> No.12540545

>>12540323
What?

>> No.12540643

>>12539572
Checking the thread again, I can see why you'd say it was well received while I didn't take it that way. An anon said to samefag as much as possible shortly before I posted my story when giving feedback to trick writers into feeling like they are wanted, so I just assumed the worst. If those (You)'s were actually genuine, I'd be impressed.

>> No.12540698

>>12540545
The anon's talking about a story in the /infinity/ archive.
Shit was weird.

>> No.12540738

>>12540698
/∞/

>> No.12540845

>>12540698
That split scares me

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>>12540845
Don’t be scared, anon
:)

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>>12540845
I promise you there's nothing to be afraid of, anon. Come play with us :)

>> No.12540987

>>12540873
>>12540964
> it's the /become/ recruiting arc again

>> No.12541006

>>12540643
I'm pretty sure they were? I left a comment on it at least that I meant. I thought it did pretty well for a futa tale.

>> No.12541271

>>12540873
>>12540964
I have unironically posted a story there before but ya'll weird no offence.

>> No.12541297

>>12541271
what was the story? I might remember it.

>> No.12541301

>>12540873
>Yanclock
Huh. I have a boner.

>> No.12541403

>>12515203
This is pretty fucking good. Normally I'm averse to reading abuse fics because I'd feel bad for the victim, but I really enjoy how you write Ayame to be a believable bitch yet not entirely contemptuous. I can enjoy this for the relatable sadism without feeling guilty. If you don't have the whole story mapped out, I'd prefer a happy ending, but I trust you'll make it good regardless.

>> No.12541537

>>12515203
Oh shit, I completely forgot to look at this, work drained everything outta me.

I really liked chapter two. Serious development, we've got anger issues at the forefront after the events of chapter 1, and both people seem to be more aware than ever that soon, the relationship is going to boil over.

I don't think chapter 3 needed to be a chapter so much as an extension to chapter 2; Ayame acted like a bitch, got told off by anon, and nothing changed at all. Kinda felt like a filler episode.

I am thoroughly enjoying this series so far, Anon! Where are you thinking of taking it?

>> No.12541544

>>12541297
Well it wasn't smut so you probably wouldn't, but the fic was called Ace Combat Area 88. I looked at the thread one and an anon was requesting a story where Kronii was your weapons officer so I decided to write it. That was a while ago.

>> No.12542090

Give me a roll of 1 to 5. Whatever you roll, roll xD100.

>> No.12542178

>>12542090
3,
22, 89, 19

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>>12491912
Well, I finally touched up this Shadowlive chapter into something I'm more satisfied with. Went from 2k words to 5k but that's fine, now there's some actual plot. The accent should be less cancer now. I even proofread it this time, but there will still be the usual past-presente tense inconsistencies because I can't for the life of me figure that shit out.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTjqgv0SbNC4CiU8YB0JuKsOkFKOWyu6HNJ6hTV3CgF0yF58XHpzvs3ijdHX24URcpT0OhvB0YcUTp_/pub

Tags: post-apocalyptic, Ayame, Okayu, Iofi, Ollie, Risu

>> No.12542265

I want to write something that can evoke emotions in a truly aspiring way, something like when you see pure, selfless heroism in action. Examples like Mumen Rider vs Sea King, Endeavour vs Nomu, or your cliche Kamen Rider scene.I'm practicing writing this type of scene, so if you have any chuuba and scenario you can suggest to me, I would appreciate it.

>> No.12542320

>>12542197
I'm curious, what's the hard part about the past and present tense in English?

>> No.12542340
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>>12542178
Oh.

>> No.12542379

>>12542320
I'm not sure. I like using both of them at different circumstances even though I'm aware that is not allowed. This nags at my mind and I constantly go back to change some parts but I still leave others where I think of it as better with present tense. It's really only a problem I have in writing fics, it seems.

>> No.12542451

>>12542340
>spoiler
What have I done? Please tell me Anon will make it. I don't want to be the cause of his demise.

>> No.12542506

>>12542379
If you're constantly thinking that certain sentences would be better in present tense then it's probably more of an issue of how you've phrased the sentence itself.
Also it's less that it's "not allowed" and more that you'll probably annoy people if you switch tenses every three seconds.

>> No.12542572
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>>12536432
No, though I was the one that posted that prompt. My fic is an loli Elira and loli Selen threesome.

but upon getting sober i remembered Selen did ballet as a kid so might add a solo scene with her in a leotard because I'm an animal

>> No.12542592

>>12542379
Interesting. I would've thought you'd have more problems with the future and past perfect tense because english needs helping verbs for them

>> No.12542596

>>12542451
Anon, he's...he's going to experience some financial hardship...

>> No.12542624
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>>12542596
I'm so sorry, little anon.

>> No.12542660

>>12542596
>ARGOMERYCOIN IS PLUMMETING
>BUY THE DIP IT'S OVER
>FUCK IT WASN'T OVER AAAAAAA

>> No.12542824
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add another notch to the nut tally of 'remembering how to love her', AA

was so worth the imminent assrape by johnny sins

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>>12542824
>was so worth the imminent assrape by johnny sins

>> No.12543715

>>12543371
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9LsfSnb9_u0

>> No.12544817

Not really part of anything I'm writing, but perhaps because I am going through some sort of writer's block/burnout, I'll just post whatever short excerpt I've written. Who knows maybe someone else could pick it up or I'll do so in the future, but here it is.

"Death comes for us all, in the end," you muse as you light a cigarette, bringing it to your bloodied lips. Your back leans against the wall as the multitude of aches and broken bones throb within your chest. You look at your legs, one has a baseball sized hole right through the shin, and the other has your foot twisted at an unnatural angle, a disgusting bite mark where your ankle once was. Around you, bodies lay in ever growing pools of blood, motionless while their saccharine fluids mix indiscriminately with yours. Orange hair, purple hair, blue hair, even maroon hair. You hack out some blood that had built up within your system, nearly putting out your cigarette had you not pulled it away in time. The thin line of smoke seems to haze your vision even more as you feel your consciousness slipping. Not yet, you tell yourself. There's still one more thing to do, one more person to bring down, before you can rest. You blink away the haze, and there she is. Long, luscious pink hair, tall and buxom in figure, and red eyes that glowed with a rage that fit the hellish landscape she came from. She brandishes a large scythe, who's blade was as long a man's torso, and walks towards you with a purposefulness you could only imagine. You could've shouted, screamed, or even try to escape, but you hold your ground, as best as a dying man laying seated against a wall could.
"Any last words?" She says as she stands menacingly atop of you, raising her scythe high. You take one last puff of your cigarette before spitting it out, and with the last of your energies pull out a revolver you kept hidden beneath you.
"This is for Ame." You say, before a gunshot rings out.

>> No.12544966

>>12544817
Very well written Anon. Hope you get pass your block soon. I try to power through my blocks by just continue to write but it affects the quality, I have to fix it in post afterwards

>> No.12545080

>>12542197
The Okayu accent is much more tolerable now, thanks for improving it; the previous version was damn near unreadable.
The new plot developments also pretty interesting. They kind of suffer from us the audience not really having a good grasp on the surrounding physical setting (i.e other than the current knowledge of vaguely a nondescript city) but it's still interesting.

>> No.12545150

>>12542824
I'm very glad you liked it, Anon! Thank you!
>Nut tally
Do people tally that? I know there was some guy who said he ripped his dick off to the Kiara series like sixty times or some such...

>> No.12545538
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Found the perfect pic for that story about Anon going underwater in a shark cage and meeting Gura. Maybe this isn't new but I thought it's neat.

>> No.12545620

>>12545538
I'm not normally into lolis but this pic has me feeling things I shouldn't feel

>> No.12546906

>>12545538
I want to fuck that shark.

>> No.12547150

>>12542197
It wasn’t exactly a bad chapter, but I guess it was just a bit boring. Probably because it was a transitional chapter and not really much happened, so it can’t be helped.

>> No.12548222

>>12537543
bofa deez nutz in ur mouth, faggot

>> No.12548461

>>12548222
it's all about the timing, this job

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>>12545620
Same. I don't usually like chestlets unless they're mature in other ways (ie Suisei), but this Gura got me acting up.

(Good thing I already did my Nonstop Nut duties today).

>> No.12548967
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>>12491938
Hypnotizing (you)r oshi into loving you.

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>>12545538
>>12545620
>>12546906
>>12548716
You'd really lust after a slut?

>> No.12549705

>>12549447
Gura is a spotted sand tiger, because she fights in the womb. Or at least that's the biggest and most well known species to do so.

>> No.12550191

>>12549447
absolutely, i want to fuck chocosen so bad

>> No.12550208
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>>12491938
(You) got into a traffic accident that paralyze you from the waist down and leaves you sad and miserable. Your friend Rushia however, couldn't be happier that this had happened because it gave her a chance to finally get close to you, her one true love. Problem arise however when you start getting better and she realizes that you wouldn't need her anymore when you fully heal. To avoid the two of you from drifting apart again, she's determined to keep you injured so that you'll always need her.

>> No.12550240

>>12548967
Hypnosis smut fic but the ending reveals that your oshi was the one hypnotizing (You) for as long as you've been in a relationship with her.

>> No.12550472

>>12545538
"Goooood eveniiiing!"

The noise startles you, sending you into a panic. You're not wearing comms - how the hell can you hear a voice 50 meters below the surface? God, did you not wait long enough? Are you going to pop like a balloon?!

"Or is it morning? It's hard to tell from down here."

No, that's definitely not you hallucinating.

"Back here. Heeeey! Helloooo?"

You turn around, immediately startled by what awaits you on the opposite side of the cage. You'd rub your eyes if the diver's mask weren't in the way. A... girl? At this depth, with no diving equipment? No... It can't be, there's just no way.

"Yes! Hi mister, how 'you doin?"

"Fuck this, I'm not sticking around this monster, get me off this thing!" You think to yourself, reaching for the panic button.

"Wait wait, no! Don' goooo!" She pouts, her hand reaching into the cage as far as it can go - though her small size means it's not very far and not an immediate threat, whatever she is. "I'm not a monster I promise!"

You stop for a moment, morbid curiosity overriding your fight or flight response.

"W-wait, can you hear me?" You think again, this time not to yourself.

"Yep! Neat huh?"

Your eyes shift side to side. It's a dream, it has to be.

"Who the hell are you?"

"I'm Gura; nice 'ta meetcha'."

Yep it's a dream. This bikini-clad underwater-breathing telepathic little girl has a southern accent. You smile. Yep, definitely a dream.

"G-Gura huh, I see." You suspiciously eye her extended hand, the only part of her that poses a threat.

"Oh, sorry. Didn't mean to be rude, heh." She notices your hesitation and pulls back, holding on to the cage once again. "My bad. We don't get many visitors." Her eyes eye the metal frame separating the two of you. "Hey what's with the cage? Want me to getchu out?"

The girl strains her muscles against the steel and, to your dismay, the bars start to bend.

"Whoa whoa, no no, i-it's cool!"

"Huh. Okay then..."

>> No.12550637

>>12550472
Cute scenario. Either cast magic missile, or whip IT out.

>> No.12550776

>>12550472
Next she takes you to her home and a big ass shark comes and she calls it honey then proceeds to fuck it while you watch.

>> No.12551373

>>12550776
You're really trying to push a cuck story aren't you

>> No.12552083

Just found out that the guy from the original Takeshi video isn’t actually named Takeshi. I think I need a moment.

>> No.12552095

>>12550472
I like it

>> No.12552818

>>12550472
"So what brings ya down here?" She asks, tilting her head.

"Uhh..." You point at the great whites circling in the distance. "Was just looking for a bit of excitement from the old, boring life, y'know..."

"Oh, oh oh, me too!" She excitedly jumps up and down, the cage rattling with her moves. "You've no idea how boring it is down here sometimes!"

"Huh, that's hard to imagine. Wait, can you really breathe underwater?"

Gura nods, looking at you as if you're the weird one here. She then looks at the cage again.

"Oh I know, if you want a thrill how about I call'em over here?" She turns to the sharks, giving you a big, innocent smile.

You shake your hands negatively. "N-no no, it's alright, I think this is enough excitement for one day."

"But alreeeady? I haven't even gotten started yet!"

You raise an eyebrow.

"Started? On what?"

Again, she tilts her head and frowns. "If I didn't know 'ny better, I'd say you're unaware of the toll for intruding in Atlantis territory, mister. Tsk tsk, thankfully I believe we're extremely clear, what with all the signs n' stuff."

There are no signs! "I-I don't see any signs!"

Her eyes pop open whilst pursing her lips. She squints, looking down at the ocean floor. "No. Nooo, there it is, I can see it from here." She points.

To you, everything is just pure blackness. There's nothing there!

"O-oh, I see. Well, can you refresh my memory, Gura?" Your heart beats quickly now, unsure of just what kind of awful situation you put yourself in.

"Um, okay?" She squeaks, then clears her throat. How did she do that directly into your head!?

"□●● □ ●□□ □ ■"

You blink. What?

"Now c'mon, drop'em. I'm good at this, ya know?"

She hooks the corner of her mouth and opens wide - exposing her gullet to you.

What?

>> No.12552899

>>12552818
Whip it out. Make her bleed, scream and shout. Show her what you're all about.

>> No.12553145

>New HololiveERROR
>Suisei gigastacy's her way through Sora confessiong to (You) to ask you to go to the movies with her instead

>> No.12553248

>>12553145
>politely say no
>tell sora you're flattered, but would prefer to remain friends
>go back home and continue simping for 2d girls
The moment 2D becomes 3D is the moment it becomes shit. Fact.

>> No.12553335

>>12553248
>Botan and Noel are in the background talking about how someone who went missing was last seen with Suisei
>Fubuki may be possessed by Sora's ghost and doing the same
I don't think that would end well for you man

>> No.12554141

I'm writing a yandere Watame fic and I just realized that the fic is way too similar to another fic called "Fate's intervention" almost to the point of plagiarism. Should I just drop it?

>> No.12554213

>>12552818
"Sorry can you say it again? Drop what?" You take a short step back.

"Your paaaaants!"

Yep, she really did mean to drop your pants. You just needed confirmation.

What the fuck?

"Wait hang on, why?!"

"The toll, mister! It clearly says it right there on the sign!" The gears in her head turn for a moment. "Gasp! Yoooou didn't read the sign, did ya?"

You don't respond, afraid of what her reaction might be. You wonder if you can reach the panic button before being torn to pieces by this inhuman creature, and decide you don't want to take that chance... yet.

"Sorry, I didn't! They kinda just dropped me here, there were no signs up there!"

Her eyes lock onto you. "Oooooo you're in trouble..."

"Wait, wait, I'll do it. You just need me to drop my pants right?"

"Well that's a start!" She grins, eyeing you up and down. Why does such a soft-looking kid instill so much terror?

Attempting to normalize your breathing, you take a few moments. After that, you work on the zipper that runs down your jacket and loosen it until it exposes your upper stomach, giving you access to the hem of your wetsuit pants. Lucky to be wearing a two piece, you think.

Meanwhile, Gura hums playfully, eyes following your every moment. With a sigh into your breather, you do as the mini rapist orders and lower your pants down to your knees.

"O-okay, happy now?"

"Pffffff, hahahahaha! Mister what is that? Whaaat is thaaat?" Her eyes go from your face down to your flaccid member.

"Hey! It's cold, okay! What did you expect?!" Being laughed at is definitely getting on your nerves. So what if it's almost receded into your body?

"Coooold? It's so hot I'm in my underwear! Ah, I forget how surface dwellers are a teeny tiny bit weak..."

"W-well, so... can I go now?"

"Go? No way! You're not even hard yet, how am I supposed to suck your dick like this?!"

You raise an eyebrow.

"Excuse me?"

"Eh? What did you think this was, you dum dum?"

>> No.12554397

>>12554141
As long as you're not copying it word for word, I think it should be fine to continue. We need more watame fics, so please don't stop unless it truly is plagiarism

>> No.12554597

>>12554141
If you feel like it's not different enough even while using a different chuuba, it means you're not writing her well. Consider checking up to see if you're actually giving her a proper personality or just a cookie cutter yandere one.

>> No.12555439

>>12554213
You ponder for a moment.

"Uh, I don't know. What, is this some interspecies cultural exchange or something?"

Despite your better judgement, the mention of dick sucking has awakened your little guy, your groin growing warmer by the minute as blood begins to pool there.

"What? That's weird. Nah, I just like doin' it. Unless you want me to take a bite outta 'ya leg, but that's no fun."

"T-that doesn't seem fun, no. I agree."

"Weeeeeell, now that we're in agreement, come on! We don't have all day!"

You look at her, then down at your prick. Your gloved hands aren't going to cut it to jerk yourself to full mast, at least.

"Um, how about some help here, Gura?" You point down.

"You're gonna have to get closer, dum dum. Oh, maybe I can crawl inside!" Again she tests the bars.

"No no, it's cool! Uhh, I'll come closer!"

Hesitantly, you waddle your way closer to the edge. Gura doesn't move an inch but continues the humming from before. You swallow hard until you're within arm's length of the girl. It takes some self control to not back off as soon as her hand sneaks inside again, reaching for your cock.

The sensation is... pleasant. Despite the slight terror, Gura's dainty fingers melt away all your doubts when she carefully runs them up from your balls all the way to the tip. She wasn't kidding about feeling hot, though - her skin is warm, and its warmth spreads through your shaft while she works her fingers up and down, being rewarded by your stiffening up considerably in her grasp.

"Wah, look at'cha." She grins, looking you in the eyes. "Not bad, I guess all ya need was a little push."

Now at full mast and throbbing painfully, your member reacts and twitches with each of her pumps, squeezing you up and down until your glans is fully exposed to the cold water that surrounds you. It's lonely whenever she lets go.

"You seem ready. C'mon, 'hut it 'over 'eah."

Gura presses her face against the cage and opens wide.

>> No.12556256

>>12555439
As she bends down lower you finally notice that big, blue tail sprouting from behind her. It wags excitedly side to side.

"Oh, of course..." She looks up with the corner of her eyes, unsure what prompted your comment, but you're too exhausted to explain. You swallow hard at the sight.

Her teeth are sharp. Well, they look sharp, so they must be. You truly wonder if it's a good idea to stick your dick in there, but... Her submissive behavior and puppy eyes settle it.

Finally, you move your hips and line your glans with the tip of her tongue. Eagerly, Gura's strong, rather long and textured tongue meets your frenulum with a tentative lick; it's hard to call her mouth wet, considering everything around is, but her saliva is gooey and warm, and it's easy to discern it from the saltwater that surrounds you.

She licks and prods, and amidst involuntary twitches of your dick, soon your hips are pressed squarely against your end of the cell, and your cock proudly pokes out for her to use.

"Hehe, see that wasn't so bad!" She smiles innocently, though that innocence is shortlived when her thin lips plant short kisses on your underside, until she parts her mouth and you pop inside.

You groan silently. Her mouth is a furnace! Between bobbing her head up and down and giving your whole shaft a taste of her lips, she occasionally brings out her tongue to lap at your underside, its rough texture scraping your skin up and down, making you wince and sigh whenever the same is done to the sensitive glans. You don't hate it, though, and it is different...

Looking down, you notice her eyes have been staring up at you the entire time, observing all your smallest expressions and reactions. Now that you think about it, the sight of your cock being taken into this tiny girl's small, doll-like mouth is dangerously erotic, if not erotically immoral.

Before long, her small hand runs up your thigh and she cups your balls with her soft fingers.

>> No.12557135

>>12556256
With a level of expertise you can't quite explain, her palm and digits all work together to massage and goad your baby factories, her warmth spreading all over your groin and warming you up inside.

Not to fall behind, her mouth begins to pick up the pace - and after a few deeper strokes, Gura's small nose is pressed firmly against your abdomen and your entire shaft disappears down her gullet. You wince as her upper teeth lightly scratch against your skin, but the sensation is immediately replaced by the intense feeling of Gura's active and receptive throat constricting your glans and massaging you from every side.

"Woah, is this what a girl can do if she doesn't need to breathe?" You think, being met with a grin.

"I told you I was good at it!" Her thoughts transfer to your mind just as the tip of her tongue sneaks past her lips to lap at your balls, lathering them in her gooey spit, forcing even more of your girth down her esophagus until there's no centimeter of you left exposed.

It's heavenly. She expertly uses her throat to milk you, hooking onto your corona and stroking back and forth with her wet muscle. It's so comfortable there, as if your cock were never meant to belong anywhere else.

Back and forth, back and forth the combination of her lips, fingers, throat and tongue leave no part of your genitals untended to. You start to feel an intense orgasm boiling from within. You breathe heavily now, your breather having trouble keeping up.

You look down at her head. Her hair floats freely with each plunge of her head. Tentatively and carefully you place a hand on her dome, gently petting her head. She stops for a moment, tail lightly twitching again.

"Ehe, that feels nice, mister."

Your chest squeezes tight. She's... kind of cute, after all.

As a reward, Gura picks up the pace - pulling back and violently shoving her head against your pelvis, driving you completely wild.

>> No.12557259

did the "Cheer up peko" whatever story was inspired by a hentai scene
because I'm just watching it and it seemed too familiar

>> No.12557448

>>12557259
Not in particular, no. I mean I have watched and read so much porn that maybe there is a suppressed memory there that inspired me but it wasn't a deliberate attempt at copying something.

>> No.12557574

>>12557259
When I posted the prompt it was based off a pic of Pekora in a cheerleader outfit, so nothing to my knowledge. I guess the idea just exists?

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>>12557448
>>12557574
then I assume it's just a coincidence thag both have a bunny girl cheering you to keep masturbating

>> No.12558123

>>12557822
Haha what's the source Anon? Just curious you know? Totally didn't develop an exaggerated encouragement fetish from that story and now I want more. Just asking!

>> No.12558285

>>12558123
Usamimi Bouken-tan: Sekuhara Shinagara Sekai o Sukue

>> No.12559010

>>12557135
Gura's violent movements see her facial features slam into your pelvis, and though this doesn't seem to faze her much, your flesh and bones begin to feel sore and tender.

"Ugh... Gura, that's -"

Those eyes again - looking directly at you and with no signs of slowing down.

It only takes her a couple more repetitions until you feel your innards constrict and contract. Your legs stiffen up, and your teeth bite down into the respirator.

"Ugh, I'm -!"

Instinctively, you grab a handful of the girl's hair and shove your cock down her throat as far as it will go. And surprisingly, there's no hesitation or protest from her, Gura going as far as coiling her tongue and jerking you off with it to hasten your peak.

A powerful first shot races up your urethra to explode right down her gullet - muscles contracting hard right after and quickly sending another wave of jizz to splash against the back of her throat when she winces and pulls back. You shove Gura's face back into you once again, and comfortably expel every following rope of cum directly into her stomach until you stop contracting and twitching, her tongue finally squeezing out the last few droplets you had left in your canal.

The girl slowl pulls away, making sure her lips maintain a nice vacuum around your girth until she breaks free. Looking up, she grins as a pair of thick white lines of jizz escape her perky nose, quickly being diluted into the surrounding fluids by the currents.

"So, how wazzat? Not bad for a li' kid huh? Even though I am over 8000 years old." She snickers, licking her lips.

Your breathing is shallow, but you can't deny that felt amazing. "Y-yeah... Well I'm glad you didn't bite me, at least..."

"That'd be silly! And painful."

You chuckle, but notice that your breathing really isn't slowing down.

"Oh... shit."

Gura looks at you curiously.

>> No.12560300

>>12559010
You check your oxygen levels. Three percent left.

"Oh shit oh shit..."

You can only rationalize that all the panic and pleasure made you use more oxygen than expected. Observing sharks is thrilling... getting a blowjob from one is on another level.

"Heh..." Your eyes begin to feel heavy and your vision begins to darken.

"You okay there, mister?" The girl lifts her eyebrows.

"Hah... Hey, Gura..."

"What's up?"

"You're right... you are damn good at it!" You chuckle just before your senses start to fade out completely.

The last thing you remember is the girl's voice calling out to you, though you're not sure why or what for...

------------

GASP.

Your eyes open wide, fast enough to catch the pillar of water you hurled straight upwards out of your stomach as it splashes down against your face.

"Ugh... Where-"

"Bro, what the hell!" A crewmember, cradling his head, shouts repeatedly as he turns round and round in place. "I can't believe it, it's a damn miracle!"

Looking around, you recognize everyone else; crew members and others who intended on making the same trip. It's dusk now, and you wonder just how long you were out for.

The people around you clap and cheer, and in your current state of confusion, you're not sure why. But after a minute, the memories start coming back to you and you sit up.

"Wait... Did you guys just pull me up? How long was I out for? Where's Gu-" You hesitate, lest you get called insane.

"Huh, are you nuts? It takes 30 minutes to decompress, man. You hit that button an hour ago, you've been laying' there a while."

You blink. But... how?

"Lucky you there was an extra tank down there with ya, eh? How did you run outta juice on the first one so quick?"

No... there wasn't. You only had one tank.

"Gotta say though." The man chuckles. "Ya don't have to pull your pants that far down just to take a piss, man."

You smile.

If only he knew...

>> No.12560746

>>12550472
>>12552818
>>12554213
>>12555439
>>12556256
>>12557135
>>12559010
>>12560300
Very cute and hot, Anon. Nice job!

>> No.12560861

>>12537940
Marine, I want to fuck your belly chub

>> No.12561246

>>12552083
WHAT!? WHERE!?

>> No.12561344

>>12561246
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C9L1X-gNE1w&list=PLg8Att0kbKOlITnBlXbNXhVg2cUCX1QZ6&index=716

>> No.12561364
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>>12491912
Another two (and a half) episodes of Lazy Oni

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR6JE6xGswIMDDGP7DfSHJQ5Be49oUcgZKyKE6-3Y-UptakpoSku4couZ-ZC3eOSv2IHXkxWpc3gS6Y/pub

>>12541403
Ah that's so great! Thank you so much for saying that!

I always go for happy endings, though I haven't quite decided how this'll go yet. I know the ending, I just don't know what the middle will consist of.

>>12541537
I'm so glad. I reread chapter 3 and I think you're right. They probably should've been condensed into a single chapter. I'll make sure to do a little more movement with the next episode.

I know the ending but I haven't quite decided how I'll get there. I have a few ideas. It'll end happy though, that I can promise.

>> No.12561527

>>12561344
NOOOOOO

>> No.12561533

>>12550472
>>12552818
>>12554213
>>12555439
>>12556256
>>12557135
>>12559010
>>12560300
Use pastebin or google docs next time.

>> No.12561629

>>12537940
Fubuki, I love you! Please be my wife!

>> No.12563056

>>12561364
That last chapter was oddly cute.
I hope you can make the big ryona chapter that it's setting up work. You're doing good at setting up the emotional context that's setting it up, and the aftermath that leads to more but the actual bits lack the big impact to them

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>>12545080
At least now I have a general idea of what not to do when making accents so any future sailing should go easier. As per the surrounding world, I fear that I may have lost my chance to explain it without any heavy expositional dialogue. I was supposed to have done it in chapter 1, and I even tried it a bit on chapter 3.5 but I didn't feel like it would've worked. I have two options, to either focus more on the description of the surrounding area and add information bit by bit, or to make an extra chapter seperate from the story about the experience of one of the chuubas to understanding this new world. Both seem a bit odd to do, but the latter is looking a bit more tasty, as I can add way more info into it. Thank you for reading.

>>12547150
Was it? I thought there was tons of plot progression, though sure, there's no action. Chapter 3.5 was all talk and no development for example.

>> No.12565529

>>12563718
I mean theory you could also make a redone chapter 1 that explains stuff or even a prologue that's explains the world and foreshadows shit.
You have a lot of options here.

>> No.12566179
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12566179

i need the most vanilla and fluffy story you guys know

>> No.12566186

>>12565529
Redoing an already released fic? Pft, I'd never do that... But seriously, I think doing that is a bit taboo and bad practice + I don't like to make people read the same thing twice, just slightly altered. That would certainly bore them. A prequel would work, in theory, but I wanted to save it for NOT right after the chapter in which anon's past was revealed, a bit too soon so to speak. I'll probably release one or two more chapters then work on a extra one to give proper exposition to the world.

>> No.12566230

>>12566179
Try Porcelain Doll

>> No.12566259

>>12566179
paradise lost. just going on a lunch date with fubuki

>> No.12566280

>>12566179
Half of the stuff with Fubuki, the Aqua/Manager series...

>> No.12566349

>>12566230
>Porcelain Doll
>gore, tragedy
should i really read this one?

>>12566259
>>12566280
much thanks

>> No.12566375

>>12566349
Yeah, it's super vanilla and fluffy. Trust me.

>> No.12566386

>>12566349
Oh god

>> No.12566404

>>12566375
I'm going to trust to you, Anon. I know you would never lead me astray.

>> No.12566427

>>12566179
If dog maggots is still up...

>> No.12566477

>>12566179
There was a very comfy AZKi fic posted recently.

>> No.12566480

>>12566179
Lies come to light, while my guitar gently weeps, the fluffy Selen trilogy, and Omelas are all some great fluff fics

>> No.12566490
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12566490

>>12566404
Thanks, bro. Enjoy the story.

>>12566427
Unfortunately it's not. I never got to read it...

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12566494

>>12566404
Sorry about that, anon! That guy here, I gave you the wrong story! You don't wanna read paradise lost at all actually!

>> No.12566514

>>12566494
oi sit down bitch

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>>12566480
Fantastic recommendations, my man. All fluff connoisseurs would appreciate these.

>> No.12567170

>>12566179
>Fubuki
Not Friend, Waifu!, Fluffy, Exposure Therapy, Late Night Cuddles, Fubuki Comfort, Cuddly Fox, Petting Your Fox 1 and 2, Foxfriend Wedding, Union, Kokoronashi.

My absolute favorites of these are MatthewAnon's stories (Exposure Therapy (especially), Petting Your Fox, Fubuki Comfort), Cuddly Fox, Foxfriend Wedding and Kokoronashi.

>Other chuubas
A Wolf Mom's Love, A Fennec's Melancholy, Play in the Rain and You get Wet, Devilish Deeds (SFW one), A Sheep's Warmth, Childhood Hag, Purple, She's not h*rny, she's lonely, Kintsugi, Parched at night, Summer Sweet Nightmare, Milking your Wolf (NSFW), Delinquent Duo, Sleepy Days, Miss Sakura, Wouldn't you like to know?, Loving a kusogaki.

Hard to pick a favorite here, but it's most likely Kintsugi.

I hope one of these picks your interest.

>> No.12567464

>>12566186
Anon normal authors do edits for their shit all the time. I honestly wouldn't blame you if you did try and fix up the setting knowledge gap the audience has in the first chapter via editing it in or rereleasing it with better flow since that entry point towards the story was a bit rough since if I remember it right you released it along with the first 3 chapters in one thread.
Pretty sure it's not even a taboo here it just hasn't been done since people who drop WIP to the thread don't generally come back to finalize it.

>> No.12568826

>>12567464
Once a story has been released though barring pulling it with an explanation it won't really get reread. It's an issue I've noticed. It always feels very "get it perfect the first time because that's all anyone will remember". It may just have to wait until another chapter.

>> No.12569974

>>12549447
Sharks don't bite the tail when they mate.

>> No.12570616

>>12569974
You haven't seen her naked body, you don't know where else she may have bite marks. The shark bit her tail because it's the most attractive part to them since it's the only actual shark part in her body.

>> No.12570856

>>12570616
Shark who fucked Gura here. Can confirm. Holy fuck I can't explain it but that tail is so sexy.

>> No.12571352
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12571352

>>12491938
Ever since Moona's little brother found out his oshi was actually his big sis, life hadn't been the same. At first, he was disgusted. He had jerked off dozens of times to her streams, having orgasms unlike any others only by listening to her voice. But after a while, that disgust washed away and he began to think those thoughts again. Soon enough, Moona caught him in her room jerking off while in her bed, listening to her VODS. She decided to punish him by milking his tiny cock so many times he wouldn't even dare to think about her sexually anymore. Of course, she realized it backfired once she heard a knock on her door at 2AM...

emotionless handjob please.

>> No.12571410

>>12567170
Just so there's no confusion, but "Fubuki Comfort" was me, not MA. It doesn't really deserve to be bundled in with those others.

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>>12571352
That's kinda hot.

>> No.12571516

>>12571410
Yeah I could’ve sworn at least half of those aren’t MA stories. Maybe I’m wrong though and you’re is the only outlier.

>> No.12571553

>>12560300
So...this done? You wanna give it a name or something?

>> No.12571639

>>12571516
I'm pretty sure the last 4 he listed aren't MA stories.

>> No.12571725

>>12571639
No

>> No.12571793

New thread
>>12571742

>> No.12571861

>>12571639
I’m pretty sure petting your fox and exposure therapy are the only two written by MA

>> No.12572158

>>12491912
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRwXotcIaRFAtOQwGCQLfz85P0b64PnIGlTw24kmynKMS3stcFY_Fgt_M99rimXK0qyY2w5GF8zHVdP/pub

She's good at it!

Tags: Gura, NSFW

>>12571553
Oops, didn't see we were that close to the end of the thread.


>>12571516
Based on the formatting, MA's stories are in the first parenthesis, and the others are stories by other authors. Mine just ended up bundled with Exposure Therapy and Petting your Fox, both of which are his. It's easy to gloss over the parenthesis but I understood the meaning.

>> No.12572203 [DELETED] 

>>12571410
>>12571516
>>12571639
Anons your bracket reps...

>> No.12572219

>>12572158
Amazing timing, I was just getting around to saving it. Thanks.

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does anyone have the gura childhood friend gosling greentext? about gura being a loner at school and then opening up to you. I don't see it in the archives

>> No.12572350

How many of you guys use /vt/ outside of this thread? I ask because I sometimes wonder how many of you I’ve called a worthless faggot in a split over some dumb argument.

>> No.12572401

>>12572350
I come to /wg/ to read fluffy stories and add some positivity to my life. I have the /vt/ catalog bookmarked and ignore every other thread.

>> No.12572512

>>12572350
I'm here and the horny threads. Occasionally others but rarely do I post unless it's to say something horny. Sana please let me fuck your fat brown titties.

>> No.12572621

>>12572350
almost exclusively use /fbk/ and occasionally come here too

>> No.12572665

>>12572350
/∞/ exclusively but i've been here a lot recently

>> No.12572671
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>>12572350
I keep pinned:
> This thread
> /become/, when it's up to laugh at them
> Risu thread
> Horny thread
> Draw thread
When I browse outside of that, it's usually non-rrat threads or non schizo discussions because I got so fucking tired of that shit, it's like /pol/ in them. I click on any thread that even remotely hints at being horny too.

>> No.12572686
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>>12572350
Mainly visit the selen general, draw general, yubicraft, and /vt/ sings when that comes around
Also to MGR shitpost in threads

Mainly come to this thread to write down the OP number and to look and fanfics and read them if it looks interesting

>> No.12572734

>>12572350
Apart from here, I frequent the Stars and Suisei general. No place is safe /vt/ schizos though.

>> No.12572739

>>12572350
I visit /stars/ from time to time, occasionally visit global whenever there's a big event on and check interesting looking threads like >>12445688 whenever they pop up. Other than that though /wg/ is definitely my main reason for coming here.

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>>12572686
Based MGRR enjoyer

>> No.12572954

>>12572671
The watcher..

>> No.12572985

>>12572734
>Stars and Suisei general

Yikes, heard those were infested with schizos when the collab happened. Has it calmed down recently?

>> No.12573021

>>12572671
are all SEAniggers shitposters or just you and that one other guy a month or two back?

>> No.12573063

>>12572954
Watching your oshi bouncing up and down on my cock.

>>12573021
> implying

>> No.12573125

>>12572985
For the most part, still got a few people posting bait but thankfully people rarely bite now. Was absolute hell when the collab happened though. I thought those two threads were safe from schizos but boy was I wrong.

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>>12573125

>> No.12573215

>>12572985
hoshiyomis consider plain hornyposting to be schizo shitposting though
they're a bunch of schizo idolfags

>> No.12573290

>>12573191
Can't even count how many times I've seen this image.

>> No.12573354

>>12573215
Hoshiyomi are like a bunch of repressed Mormon children. They lose their shot whenever someone says they want to fuck Suisei.

>> No.12573447

>>12573063
>Nonzero chance I fapped with PF in the horny thread without realizing it

>> No.12573559

>>12573447
I mostly go there to get ideas for fics, but I did help some people a couple of times...

>> No.12573605

>>12573354
Which is weird since Suisei has arguably the most SEX design in the entire company. Hell, Hoshiyomis are probably the second horniest fanbase second only to Miofas which is in an entire league of its own

>> No.12573646

>>12573559
Gay. Hot, but gay.

>> No.12573670

>>12573605
i feel like half of miofa don't even watch her and just have mommy fetishes.

>> No.12573676
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>>12573605
Prisuners and Hoshiyomis are the most obnoxious fucking faggots possible when it comes to horny posting. They behave like a bunch of men children. Now during NNN they fucked off but they'll come back once it ends.

>> No.12573737

>>12573646
I'm considering doing a Chuuba JOI fic, to see if I can do it well enough. That would arguably be less gay than PF but still very gay. Still haven't decided who to use tho.

>> No.12573743

>>12573676
Enlighten me on Prisuners, don't really know too much on Risu.

>> No.12573817

>>12573737
Absolutely Risu. Are you fucking kidding me? You already want to fuck Risu. A lot of people want to fuck Risu. She has an ENTIRE MONTH of content dedicated to what is essentially thinly-veiled JOI. Why not make JOI for her with the plot being it's a deluxe T3 membership only thing?
>That would arguably be less gay than PF but still very gay.
Oh, you love it anyway.

>> No.12573943

>>12573743
It's so bad that they'd rather let the thread die rather than encourage horny posting. A lewd image for the OP and they sage it to hell and make a new one. Posting images or saying you want to fuck Risu get ignored or they tell you to fuck off. Any fetish like futa will get you persecuted as a witch in the witch trials era. Plus they are super tight lipped about members only content which can be pretty annoying knowing that Risu is going through a lot of really bad moments in her life but they don't say shit, though arguably that's based or something.

>> No.12574024

>>12573817
I'd like to do one that would tease you for being small, Risu fits that bill pretty well, major size queen and all.

>> No.12574114

>>12573943
Jesus Christ that's fucking obnoxious.
>>12574024
Yeah, do it. Is this going to be more futa stuff or just normal Risu?

>> No.12574200

>>12573943
God damn they sound awful. I thought they'd be more chill about hornyposting considering the nnn stuff she does.

>> No.12574217

>>12573943
that sounds unironically based.

>> No.12574266

>>12573943
Hold the fuck up. Are you telling me the Risu futa poster, "fucking Risu in the ass" poster, "tell me about membership content" poster, and innuendo clip poster are ALL you?
I already knew you were the futa poster (duh), but the other ones are a revelation.

>> No.12574385

>>12574266
I don't post there. I don't like interacting with those creatures. I sometimes ask some trivial stuff or complain about them being tight lipped, but only when someone asks for members content and they get shit on for it. I just like to spread how obnoxious they are to other threads.

>> No.12574463

>>12574385
you sound like such a faggot

>> No.12574572

>>12574463
>>12574266
Also I'm not a filthy sodomite. I dislike anal.

>> No.12574633

>>12574385
>>12574572
It's okay to admit you've posted there. I'll even admit I quite like some of the content you've provided us. Clearly I was off the mark with the Risu anal poster, though.

>> No.12574638

>>12574572
You can't try to falseflag PF after they made an entire series about getting assfucked.

>> No.12574699

>>12574572
no, i meant a metaphorical faggot
t. literal faggot.

>> No.12574708

>>12573676
I think hoshiyomi all just silently agreed to pretend they’re not horny for Suisei and are just very good at containing it. Because there is no way you can have an oshi as erotic as Suisei and genuinely not be attracted to her unless you’re homosexual. I just refuse to believe it.

>> No.12574758

>>12574633
If you must know, my only comment in the last three Risu threads was this >>12531336 afair

>> No.12574775

>>12574708
It's so hard man.

>> No.12575049

>>12574758
Fair enough. You really shouldn't lump all Risuners together, though. I know there's at least a few of them who get triggered easily, be it from hornyposting or even posting any art from artists they dislike, (and I feel like that's driven off a lot of discussion recently) but I'm willing to bet the majority are lurkers or just quiet down when the shitflinging starts.

>> No.12575193

When is Risufag going to happen

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The discussion above is the reason I limit my browsing of /vt/ to this general only. Yeah we've had our stupid moments but boy compared to the rest of this site we're golden.

>> No.12575413

>>12575217
This thread is fantastic, and most of /vt/ is garbage. But let's be honest: most threads have probably not gone through a meltdown where they found out that somewhere between 3 and 5 of their frequent schizoposters were actually one dude.

>> No.12575451

>>12575413
And still want to fuck them

>> No.12575480

>>12575451
Stop being a faggoit.

>> No.12575491

>>12574114
Ha, as hilarious as it would be to do a futa Risu JOI, I would obviously do regular Risu for this.

>>12575193
If Risu ever gets a vocal tick, who knows. Even though I like her a lot, it's hard to get her personality down well onto a story. I think I can handle a JOI with her tho.

>> No.12575575

>>12575480
I can fix them
>>12575491
Hope it goes well

>> No.12575603

>>12573943
sounds based.

>> No.12575648

>>12575491
Consider me pumped. While I appreciate all forms of Risu, I've been hanging around here waiting for more non-futa Risu stories for forever.

>> No.12576060

>>12575413
true kek

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>>12575413
Ain't that the truth.

>> No.12576931

>>12575413
That was a glorious day.

>> No.12577049

>>12576931
Yeah, great to know someone shitting up this general is good for you.

>> No.12577491

>>12577049
*cums on you*

>> No.12577663

>>12577049
It's not, but it's a funny reveal.

>> No.12578824

>Watching all the prep for the sports festival
>Not sure what the big deal is didn't they just have a sports festival this summer?
>Look for VODs
>Last one was November 21st 2020

Ok, I'm legitimately shocked here. I knew this year went by unnoticed for me but I had no fucking idea how bad it actually was.

I need to lay down for a bit.

>> No.12579445

>>12578824
Oh god the year ends next month already...

>> No.12580827

>>12579445
Time's flow catches all by surprise with the strength of its raging currents.

>> No.12581511

>>12580827
Nah it's more like the fact that nothing important happened this year. Last year was full of shit happening every month, this year was full of nothing so your memory doesn't save it.

>> No.12582195

>>12573125
>I thought those two threads were safe from schizos
Anon, are you being for real? Stars has had schizos for ages now, do you remember what it was like around Miyabi’s 3D?

>> No.12582801

>>12575451
Speak for yourself

>> No.12583062

>>12574708
I think it's because Suisei doesn't approve lewds.

>> No.12583358

>>12583062
neither does fubuki but her thread's still a pack of rabid horndogs

>> No.12583396

>>12575451
How do you want to fuck me anon~

>> No.12583716

>>12574708
We do our best, out of dedication to Suisei.

>> No.12584202

>>12583396
Full nelson cum inside

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>>12584202
Oh anon, please don't. It'd be terrible if you fucked me over and over again, holding me tight as to not let me escape while you filled me to the brim with your hot...sticky cum~ that'd be... such a shame. Anything but that... peko~

>> No.12584592

>>12584469
Stop being such a fucking faggot. And fuck off with that cringy ass erp.

>> No.12585549

>>12584469
Ah, the time has come to fap again

>> No.12586437

>>12584469
Watch as you happily eat carrots glazed with my semen while slowly riding my cock.

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>>12585549
>>12586437
Ah, I'd love to help you get off anon~ you know so well how to really fuck me hard... but it would seem to don't have the time. But if you really want to... come on now, I want you to cum for me, stroke your big cock up and down peko~ I love to see you do it, It's so~ hot. I'm so hard right now peko... I can't help but rub myself as well. Come on, keep stroking for Pekora, imagine you slapping your cock on my little flushed cheeks, getting ready to fuck my tight mouthpussy hard and good peko~ god... I want it so bad. Give me your cum, I want it, give it to me peko~ cum, cum now, all over my face, your hot sticky load, shoot it all on me peko~

>> No.12587447

>>12587121
>hate PF but can't stop masturbating to them
Is this what being tsundere is like
Either way I came.

>> No.12587697

>>12587121
I-stop that. Getting this kind of boner can't be healthy.

>> No.12587883

>>12587121
Does seem we're out of time, yes, but do you think you can get off this easily? Just goading it out without doing any work?

That strategy doesn't work on me, you need to be way more... hands on.

>> No.12587996

>>12587883
Stop being a faggot.

>> No.12588171

>>12587996
Respectable request, however it has been temporarily denied.

>> No.12588379

>>12587996
Unless you have a pussy you want to flash in this exact moment I'm going to pump a few more cum shots to the gay rabbit, sorry

>> No.12588454

>>12588171
>>12588379
Stop being faggots.

>> No.12588621

>>12587883
> B-but I already blew my load peko!... I... Ok, Pekora will do it.
I take your hard cock, still ready for action.
> You're a hard one to please aren't you peko? I can see why, with a cock so big~ let's start peko, we don't have much time!
I grab your throbbing cock with one hand and grasp your balls with my other. Letting my saliva drool onto your member for lube, I start jerking you off really quickly, up down up down while I massage your testicles carefully.
> Is this... good peko? No? Ah... we are out of time! I gotta-
You grab my head with both your hands and slam your cock deep inside my throat. In a hurry, you don't hold back at all, pounding my face again and again with your full strength. I was now a tool meant to get you off. I helped you by swirling my tongue around it the best I could while you ravaged my tight mouth, going deep inside my throat. Before long, due to the speed, you were already there. You slam my face forward into your groin one final time and fill my mouth up with your thick hot seed. I choke a bit on it, but after a while you could feel my throat swallowing it with your cock still inside. You pull out, thin strands of saliva connecting my mouth to your cock.
> had enough peko?

>> No.12588720

>>12588621
Sorry for the lack of quality but page 11 made me too nervous to actually spend time on it.

>> No.12588722

>>12588621
Stop being a fag.

>> No.12588759

>>12588720
Love you. Mwah.

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