/wg/ - Writing General - Terrors of The Night Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
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>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>20491552

[Anonymous No.]

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

[Anonymous No.]

Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Story recap! There... were four stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Sleeping in: Suisei, Fluff, SFW: >>20508666

Horror Intolerance: Hakos Baelz, SFW, fluff:>>20532265

Love Me, Love Me, Love: feels, tragedy, dark themes, NSFW (maybe), Moona Hoshinova, Pavolia Reine, Kureji Ollie, Ouro Kronii:>>20555071

Mel Greentext: NSFW, Bloodplay, greentext: >>20627174

[Anonymous No.]

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

More anal prolapse onegai:>>20494679
Micomet abusive relationship. Miko wants to go back to talking to Pekora and explain everything, but Suisei always gets in the way:>>20496797
(You) break up with a chuuba for a good reason (she's cheating on you/ she's mean to you/whatever). To get revenge, a friend of hers decides to make you fall head over heels in love with her. The only thing is the friend ends up falling madly in love with you instead:>>20524737
Mori/Hades:>>20529197

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>>20630394
>already page 10
Nope!

[Anonymous No.]

-:More of the stupidest shit possible:-

James's hands closed around Gura's throat as he shook her like a dog with a chew toy. "I TOLD YOU IF YOU STARTED SINGING 'UNDA DA SEA' AGAIN I'D FUCKING STRANGLE YOU, BITCH!" He shouted at the top of his lungs. Gura's tail lashed out and slapped him right in the groin, hitting his codsack like the fist of an angry god. He dropped Gura and fell to his knees on the cold metal floor of the submarine, crying, pissing his pants, shitting, and cumming. "And I told YOU that if you tried you'd regret it." He looked up at her, tears in his eyes, and reached out. Gura, by instinct, took him in her arms, her face close to his. James opened his mouth, and Gura, expecting an apology kiss, locked lips with him just as he started violently vomiting from the pain. The thick chunky effluvium shot directly down her throat, and she pissed herself in surprise, letting out a rancid shart. James pulled away, and Gura began vomiting up James' puke. Her stomach churned and she began uncontrollably shitting herself, spraying a cloud of fine brown mist behind her. James caught a whiff of the foul scent and that fed into his vomiting. This cycle continued for several minutes, until they were disturbed by a knock at the door, and the entrance of Houshou Marine, from who they were borrowing the submarine.

Marine entered the room and took one look at all the shit, piss, puke, cum, blood, and crying and loudly proclaimed "THE ARISTOCRATS!" Before exiting. She stopped at the door. "By the way, an hour and a half till Atlantis. Get that cleaned up. Freaks." Cries of "Aye aye, Captain!" ushered her out the door of the disgusting room. 'Degenerates.' Marine thought to herself. 'I'd the Klansman just go back to calling me Skipper Titty Jap instead of dealing with this shit.' She briefly considering purging them of her sub via an airlock, but no, that would probably just piss them off. Muttering to herself she went back to Akai Hatto at the helm. Haato saw her enter and stood at attention, announcing "Captain on Deck!" And saluting. Marine tossed a lazy salute at her. "As you were. Haato, you don't have to do that. We're not even in the military, you know." "Yeah, but it makes me feel cool." "Fine. Just don't bark it." "Aye aye, skipper!" Internally Marine cringed. How did she get stuck with babysitting a pack of degenerates and schizos? At least she was dealing with Haato and not Fucking Haachama.

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>>20637769
> isreal

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>>20638920
You didn't know? If I may, another ASMR chuuba that does some pretty good R-18 stuff is Ronomiya Hinagiku, which you can find on the same website. Her works never fail to make me nut and she can switch voices from a gentle caring onee-san to femdom "cum for me" lady in an instant, and I won't lie that shit gets my rocks off any day. Her desperate, carnal orgasm gasping voice does me in as well.

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>>20638920
miko's is great too, although she doesn't hold a candle to choco

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>>20640229
wait, Miko's done H-ASMR too?

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>>20641192
yup

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>>20641618
you wouldn't happen to have the link for that too, would you?

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>>20629674
As promised, Festival of Sensations part 2: Matsuri fucks the ever loving shit out of you.

Almost 16k words of multiple sex scenes with a bunch of different fetishes(that's not too crazy). This was a labour and a half, admittedly one that pushed the limits of my writing ability, especially considering this is the most I've written for a single chapter. I hope the rest of you can enjoy just how horny I am for this menhera festival, and how much I want her to drag me down the pits of depravity.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRR5zZPZ41FhpLc_Wiv28O03N0rT1nn5lEmzKxKIKsRaGhQDlpWvFfDCaX4_JrB3b5pqxFdgNxgRQSp/pub

Tags: Matsuri, NSFW, Corruption, Menhera, Filthy amounts of sex

As always, let me know what you think

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>>20641771
IKZ

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>>20634046
"Haato, reduce speed to half. I want to give them time to clean up their mess." Marine sat in the captains chair and pressed a button on a console near her. "Hopkins, to the bridge, doubletime." She pressed another button. "Captain to crew, now hear this: Due to delays ETA to Atlantis is now three hours. That is all." A woman with a slight figure and short brown hair walked on to the bridge. "Reporting as ordered, Marine." She announced, then made s popping sound with her lips a few times. "What can I do for you, big sis?" Lily was one of the rare crewmen thet Marine not only tolerated but actually enjoyed speaking to. "Hey, lil sis," she replied "I need to take a fully equipped cleaning crew..." She sighed "...and a security detail to those Klansmens quarters." "Security? You expect trouble from Gura?" Marine shook her head "No, James. He puts my teeth on edge." "Right away cap'n." She made off to do as requested.

"Rude." Muttered Haato. "I beg your *fucking* pardon?" Marine looked directly at Haato, her ire rising just as she rose from her chair. Haato reacted to Marine swearing as if she had been slapped, flinching and all. "What I meant was she didn't salute or show you respect-" "Be. Silent." Marine cut her off. "Ok, Haato, you want to play at *military*" she spat the word like a profanity. "Then listen here, lost little Ensign, you don't have the authority to criticize a superior officer. #Commander# Hops does an excellent job and holds me in extremely high regard, and I reciprocate that regard /and/ that respect. You, Haato, *you* pay me lip service and give me a false respect so you can play sailor. Don't you *ever* make that mistake again, am I clear, Ensign?" Haato was stunned, She'd never heard Marine this angry. "Aye aye, sk-" "You will address me as Captain or ma'am, Ensign!" "Yes Captain!" Haato said hastily. "How clear, ensign?" Haato's lip quivered "C-crystal, Ma'am!" "Fantastic! And if you insult or even allude to insult Commander Hopkins I *will* have you confined to quarters for the rest of the voyage, I *will* have you put on half-rations, and you *will* be left ashore when we return to a mainland port, am I clear on that?" Tears began welling in Haatos eyes. "Aye, Ma'am." "Very good. Now, as you were. I'll be in my quarters."

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>>20629654
A REMINDER THAT IF YOU'RE NOT WATCHING HOLOFES RIGHT NOW, IT'S A TERRIBLE MISTAKE

There is so much material here it's crazy. You could probably mine a short series off Shallys alone.

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>>20648890
I watched it all for free on YouTube I'll wait a couple hours and do the same this time around too.

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Can't wait for no new Risu fics to be made after HoloFes!

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>>20653064
Pekofag usually pumps out a few good nutbusters related to the rat.

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>>20653064
Risu isn't good for fics.

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>>20647430
is good, but the use of "aye aye" and "yes" aren't to be used interchangeably. "Aye aye" is short for "I understand and I will comply", it's an answer for direct orders. "Yes (X)" is to be used in all other situations.
t. sailor

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>>20653849
But anon, I am the Pekofag!

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>>20655081
Then? What are you waiting for, you needy whore? A kiss and a pat on the head? You keep talking about wanting to make people cum, get to it. Make some quality rat fucking. Earn your praise.

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>>20655293
Anon I wrote more Risu than your average writer wrote fics here, don't fucking pin this on me. I just want other people's take on her, preferably not futa because that's all I'm gonna keep writing with her.

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>>20654232
You know that, and I know that, and Marine knows that too, but the characters who don't sail don't know that ;)

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>>20655467
Sadly I think you're the only one who has a good grasp on Risu, even if you think it's lacking. There doesn't seem to be many people who know anything about ID besides you, not counting the people who want to rape Reine into the dirt.

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>>20656023
There's literally only one more person who might know how to write Risu and he's also a futafag, not to mention his descriptions are rather lacking. He's my main audience for the Risu fics, but trying to get him to elaborate is rather futile. He probably watches more Risu than I do, but unfortunately not everyone is gifted with the artistic talent of writing chuuba smut.

I fucking wrote Risu, Moona, Anya, a bit of Iofi, and Ollie. No one else writes them except maybe Moona getting some abuse stuff here and there. It's rather lonely in here.

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>>20656481
Why are you enamored with the warga wargas?

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>>20656481
Dunno what to tell you, people like what they like. If it's any consolation, I liked the Anya one but that's in recent memory. Also the Risu JOI even if you didn't like it after the fact. What were the other ones?

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>>20653064
I tried writing Risu once and I'm pretty sure I dropped the ball when it comes to getting her character right. Better to leave it to the professionals.

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>>20656852
Risu is lewd as fuck. People don't often talk about this aspect of hers, but she makes more innuendos than Marine or Matsuri, both which used to he my favorites until I found Risu. The blatant line skirting of hers, given that saying lewd shit is literally illegal in Indonesia, is extremely hot. Besides, she can literally sing a 7 man song by herself, she makes retarded noises that never cease to make me smile, and her design is fucking sex. Dunno what else to tell you.

The rest of the IDs I just love their broken English accent, it's cute. I don't care about Reine at all though. Ollie is energetic and can be fun at times when she's not causing drama, also her rapid fire rant going off on her own kind made me see her in other lights. It was amazing. Moona, I love disinterested characters, even though I prefer tsunderes, kuuderes are hot. Moona fills that niche, her design is even more sex than the others and she probably has the cutest English between them.

Anya? She is an unironic "men are pigs" kind of gal, but in a teasing way. She deserves rape correction with her fat tits. Her being the underdog also makes me feel for her.

Iofi, I like her relationship with Moona and Risu but watching her alone is sleeper stuff. I appreciate people who try hard, and she does that the best in her own way, going from absolute new artist to what she is now is an inspiration to artfags like me. Not to say that she is a master but her hardwork definitely put her above me.

>>20657115
Everyone has to have the same taste as me! But yeah, I still regret putting out that Risu fic, and if I had the time or motivation, I'd go back to change the script. I doubt I could do anything though, so I prefer to move on to the next and try her personality again. I have a 7K words Risu fic that I dropped and her personality doesn't feel right there either. Fucking treerrat is complicated to put into text when what she's best know for is her voice and stupid noises. Jeb... hehehe... jeb...

>>20657691
Why not remove personality and just write about fucking her in every orifice instead? I'd like to see tail fucking at least once from here, and her snuggly little fur tail hole would be perfect for that.

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>>20658583
>Artfags like me
...You're an artist?

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>>20659013
Well yeah I mentioned many times art was my main hobby, this is just a side show.

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>>20659061
Does this still hold true?

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>>20659104
I mean, I don't make money out of drawing, I barely draw anyway so, I guess not? I still like drawing more, but I write way more than I draw, way way more. To become a good artist, there's so much work involved. When I started writing, people told me I was good, and suddenly I was getting paid for it... in like 6 months. Meanwhile I've been drawing for 10 years and am not at a level to get commissions yet. This is why I hold the opinion that writing is an easier version of drawing. Personal experience.

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>>20659309
>Meanwhile I've been drawing for 10 years and am not at a level to get commissions yet.
y'need to dip your toes into the deviantart furry community

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>>20659309
>And am not at a level to get commissions yet
I'll be the judge of that motherfucker. Standby.

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>>20659614
Bro I draw like 4 times a year I'm not gonna accept anything from you.

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>>20659702
Fine, fine. I was mostly just curious anyway before anything else, scouting and whatnot. Either way, that's all.

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>>20658583
Because half the fun of Risu lewds is her S personality.
Being power-bottomed by her while she talks to you in her Ayunda voice...

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>>20659592
It's not a matter of not getting any commissioners, It's a matter of laziness. Drawing takes a long time, and I hate anatomy, it's a pain in the ass. With writing I don't have to steady my hand and get those lined right, I can just type what I'm thinking. So I draw very rarely. If I was drawing once a week I'd be at pretty big tier now, maybe making bank even, given that I can definitely do some niche fetishes (eg: egg laying, insect rape, futa, etc), but I refuse to get off my ass and try, because trying is such a bother in the art world. I'm of the opinion that if you have to study for a hobby to get good, it's not a fun hobby anymore.

>>20660376
Any moron who would shake a handful of cash in my face for my drawings, I'd take it, but not from /here/, and not from you especially, assuming you are who I think you are. My drawings aren't bad but they are bland, and so charging money for them is disingenuous. I was thinking of starting commissions for a couple months now, with the price range of 3-7$ for 20 hour drawings until suddenly a commission for writing came along, and that option wasn't needed anymore. I can focus on slowly getting good on that side, while writing and getting paid here.

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Ahem, this is getting a bit off topic. Probably shouldn't have replied seriously, or at all.

>>20660600
The fun thing is people think Risu is a bottom while Ayunda is a top, but the truth is both of them are doms, just in their own different ways. And that's pretty hot.

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>>20660789
>I'm of the opinion that if you have to study for a hobby to get good, it's not a fun hobby anymore.
if it's a hobby you genuinely enjoy, then the process of studying doesn't feel like a chore at all.
t. hobbyist metalworker

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>>20660789
>and not from you especially
Ow??
>>20660909
>both of them are doms, just in their own different ways
Correct. I can't see Risu as anything as anything other than a dom despite the softer voice. Her personality still calls for it. This is just my read on it and it's almost certainly wrong, but she seems like a teasy-taunty sort of top while Ayunda seems to be the more traditional kind.

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>>20661167
As someone who never studied for anything a day in his life, our opinions are highly opposite to each other. It's why I never got into instruments for example, but why I was so into the creative hobbies like drawing, writing, building, etc....hold on gotta clear something up

>>20661270
Dude that's literally a good thing. I'm saying I would be willing to trick morons into paying for my bad art, but not you, especially not you, because I don't want to trick you...

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>>20660909
That fucking squirrel is too hot for her own good.

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>>20661396
>but not you, especially not you, because I don't want to trick you...
Am I witnessing a dramatic love story playing out before my very eyes?

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>>20661476
Yeah, I guess it looks weird out of context, ESPECIALLY if it's not who I think it is. God I hope I'm talking to my commissioner and not some random guy.

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>>20661548
I sent you an email a few minutes ago stating it isn't me.

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>>20661396
I, uh...should've clarified that was a joke. It's cool, I get it.
>>20661548
Hah! No. But, enough off topic, you're correct.
>>20661418
It really is a shame how underutilized fluffy tails are. I was planning on something for it if the situation came up, but...well, it never did.

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>>20661578
Fuck. You sure did. For some reason I wasn't notified of it. Guess I'm in some weird love drama thing with some random now

[Anonymous No.]

We doing this? So be it. Let the purge begin

[Anonymous No.]

I'm acting a bit too autistic I gotta get off here and go back to writing. It's 8:20AM and I'm not even halfway through my daily goal.

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>>20641771
Ever single sex scene here is so fucking good, holy shit.
The best part of course being the descent, the escalation of the sex is such an experience to read through. The dialogue can't be understated too, it adds a lot to how hot the sex becomes.
This second part blows the first out of the water, I fucking hope whenever the third part comes out it does the same. Great fucking work.

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>>20630093
Well, I read the latest chapters for Love Me*3.
Fuck me, that's some good feels.
The author is so fucking good at writing fucked up events, and experiences.
Goddamn it's nice to see them back.

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>>20662572
>third part
bad news for you anonchama, but i've no plans for commissioning a third. i think it's thematically complete, and that the goals laid out at the story's inception were achieved: to depict the fall of anon via the machinations of an unhinged, psychopathic nympho version of matsuri

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Quick, forgot a word tired brain pls undastando

"Taking full _____ out of something" as in making the most of what you got.

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>>20629728
Fubuki getting abused... by her fellow holomembers.

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>>20663713
Retribution for 3 years of bullying

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>>20663531
i don't think there's enough context here to provide a suitable word

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>>20663796
The answer was "taking full advantage of the situation", Aka my brain forgot the word advantage somehow, but I couldn't delete it.

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>>20663822
that's the first thing that came to my mind as well, but the "out" greatly confused me

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>>20661270
you will write about me, i demand nut tribute

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>>20664288
Risu get off the computer

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>>20664707
>Risu get off
this is a scenario i'd like to read more about

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>>20664288
>Risu will never string you up and jerk you off into her mouth while demanding nut tributes, letting her fluffy tail tickle your balls
AAA

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>>20641755
https://japaneseasmr.com/46839/
https://japaneseasmr.com/4632/

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>>20665753
thanks anon

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>>20665753
My lust and desire for Miko has increased tenfold.

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>>20667100
sniff

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>>20667100
l...lick...bite...

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>>20667100
There aren't enough lewd Miko stories in the archive. I also wish she wasn't constantly portrayed as having an irrational hatred of men.

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>>20667725
Blame the militant yurishits that pervade this board.

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>>20667725
I mean can you blame them? She goes hard on the lesbian angle and has shown no interest in men whatsoever.

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>>20668160

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>>20668160
Be that as it may, just because she's into girls doesn't mean she hates guys.

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>>20667725
I accept her having an irrational hatred for men if it's a rapey mind break fic. That kind always seemed hot to me.

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>>20669036
That's because breaking a dyke into loving what she's biologically designed for is great.

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>>20629674
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR6Cb9QHx4cNHvqxtMKoFlgL_ZiF1LwPQShQfi0j7cydEVDKNC3Ltc4f95kYmpn3fCup9q4mwL4djRI/pub

Another chapter in Love Me, Love Me, Love Me

Tags: Moona, Reine, Kronii, Ollie, M-chan, light NSFW, dark, sad, tragedy

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>>20663181
I'll echo my response for chapters 4 and 5 >>20669493 but after reading that sixth one.
Goddamn your writing hits hard. Like fuck me those scenes of her anxiety and crumbling mental state are so fucking good.
I also have to say your writing speed is fucking amazing considering the quality of it. Like there's a couple sections in there that probably need a second look grammar/spelling wise but the core content is fucking great.

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>Forgetting words in sentences or simply forgetting to add endings to words (like cutting 'ings' off endings)
>Just did it again while fucking typing 'off' as 'of'
It's like I'm degenerating into an ESL, what the fuck
>>20641771
As usual, you never disappoint. I will admit that the tense changing at times (providing an example:
>“M-Matsuri,” you mouth out deliriously. “W-Why?”
And
>She then pulls her head so that only the head of your penis was left inside her mouth
Was a little jarring, but the actual smut and premise within was fucking stellar.

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>>20669493
Just read the whole thing and yeah, it's pretty good. I like the themes and inner thoughts of Moona, especially in the later chapters. Only criticism I really have is maybe the dialogue feels a little too bland/rushed? Maybe try writing their motions/expressions/thoughts or what they're doing as they talk to stretch things out a bit.
For example, instead of:
"Hey Moona." Reine said.
"Hello."
"You're a fat fuck."
"Fuck you."
It could be more like:
"Hey Moona." Reine smiled as she approached her friend.
Moona turned to her and hesitated. "Hello." She said with a small nod.
She came to a stop before her and folded her arms. "You're a fat fuck." Reine grinned.
Moona's brow furrowed as she processed her words. "Fuck you." She growled.
You're already doing a bit of this in your writing, I just think more of it could help the pace of things. That said though, this isn't a major deal and personally just my opinion. Looking forward to a continuation.

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>>20671074
Anon...
That's kind of a bad practice to not have dialogue as paragraph starters.
Your given example is pretty bad as well, since having it be
dialogue, dialogue tag, action
Is generally the accepted form of what you're trying to show.

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>>20671364
>Anon...
>That's kind of a bad practice to not have dialogue as paragraph starters.
oh good fucking lord
well done, ESL, you managed to rustle my jimmies

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>>20671074
You don't have to have dialogue as a paragraph starter. You should divide paragraphs based on the subject (as in focal character) of the paragraph.

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>>20669953
So glad you enjoyed that. I'm particularly proud of how that one came out.

I'll go and fix those grammar mistakes right quick. I always type to fast than my brain can go.

>>20671074
Fair enough. I'll try to put a bit more flare into the dialogue. When I reread it I can see what you mean, the dialogue is a bit absent of what I'm meaning to display.

Thank you. Glad you're also enjoying it.

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Don't exactly follow what >>20671074 says because doing that kills all of the narrative momentum by wrapping it in descriptive noise.

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>>20671364
>>20671883
>>20671981
Shit well maybe I'm retarded. I think it helps paint a better picture but I guess that's just me.

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>>20662572
thanks for giving this a read and enjoying it. Unfortunately, as mentioned by>>20663194 there won't be a third part as this pretty much concludes the outline made for this story, and I don't think I'll able to top this anytime soon honestly.

>>20670867
I've been trying to work on sticking to the correct tenses, but it always seems to slip from me. Writing can be very muzukashi at times, but at the very least I'm thankful you enjoyed the story as a whole. sex scenes included.

So, uh, you guys mind telling me which was your favourite sex scene?

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>>20669207
God I hope someone picks up that fucking crossick prompt.

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>>20672685
That scene where Marine is recording (You) losing control wanting and trying to breed Matsuri. The dialogue and actions all build up really well, and the description of the scene was hot as fuck.

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>>20641771
...I can't handle this menhera succubus.

Well done, MWAnon.

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Baby Bump

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>>20641771
Fuck, xD Now I want to read one nsfw of marine but something lovely

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>>20675090
I'm imagining this but with Sam Fisher goggles

[Anonymous No.]

So, I've been working on my "robot anon tagging along with Ame" idea I talked about an unholy number of threads ago and I decided to make it a cyberpunk story.

Now, my idea for how the two would meet was to have Ame come across a severely damaged robo-anon after the latter was left to rust after a negotiation between his home corpo and Cover Corp go awry and have Ame take him to safety while his systems were in the process of rebooting. On a scale of 1 to kino, how would you rate that idea ?

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>>20681215
Rescuing a rusty forgotten robot and taking care of it is always kino, though that is definitely an interesting wrinkle.

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>>20681215
2 because you're using Ame instead of the literal robot of Hololive

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>>20681686
Oh, I plan to get her involved, rest assured. Only later in the story, though.

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>>>20620763
The breast fondling part, and face fucking part.

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>>20682823
Face fucking sure is nice, innit? Such a shame it can't be pulled off very well IRL, but in this world of ours, we can use Anya instead. I'm in dire need of writing grabbing one of the horned Holos like a handlebar and making them gag and choke on some cock.

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>>20683878
ANON

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>>20683878
Fukken saved anon.

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>>20683878
that image is one of the worst images I've seen in a while

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>>20683878
>Such a shame it can't be pulled off very well IRL
Works on my machine.

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>>20681215
OK I'm asking the question on everybody's minds.

Do we have a working robo-dick? Robo-balls? Is there some sort of advanced nanomachines that would permit us to make Amelia robo-pregnant?

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>>20641771
>"Anon-kun, don't you wanna… feel good with Senchou?" Marine mouths to you, and in her single eye you see the fires of desire burning within. You gulp dryly once more, feeling the weight of her voluptuous chest pressing against you, and how her body weight reflected how much meat she had on her. Your brain kept sending primordial signals on how good it would feel to breed this woman, and soon enough your hands shift and move as if they were going to embrace her.

Forget about Matsuri, leave Senchou to ME.

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>>20684734
If Amelia is mechanical, there's no real way she would be able to make a baby UNLESS she had a piece of hardware similar to a womb in her, but that would just be regular pregnancy. If she was already made out of nano machines, she could just grow the baby as she pleased, but the would have to regularly replish her own nano machine count if she wanted it to grow realistically

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>>20684455
I agree, I was gonna use an image of raping Laplus bratty mouth while holding her by her slutty oversized handlebars, but couldn't bother to go to the original source and get better resolution. That one I at least don't have to censor (I hope). But I'd like to ask anyway, what's so bad about it?

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>>20684656
You have an automated TENGA?

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>>20684734
Nope, sorry. In-universe explanation is that Robo-anon is a second-generation android, so he is humanoid but his appearance is not exactly humanlike (if that makes sense). If he were a third-generation android and thus almost indistinguishable from a human, however, that would be another story (though he'd still be sterile).

Out-universe explanation is just that I'm not really intending to make this a Ame x robo-anon smut story for the time being. Their relationship would be more platonic due to robo-anon being what most human beings would charitably describe as socially stunted. Who knows, maybe I'll change my mind as I go and cook up something to make it work. This is meant to be a cyberpunk story after all. Also, the idea of Ame giving birth to baby cyborgs is kinda funny to me and I don't know why.

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>>20686105
Amelia is meant to be human in my idea. The idea was for robo-anon to go with her as she makes her living as a merc/private eye in a cyberpunk world and have him learn what it means to be human as he gets exposed to both the good and the bad of mankind.

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>>20686973
Huh. My brain somehow swapped every single instance of Ame and Anon and I thought of that plot as completely backwards. NGL I have no interest in EN so regular Ame entices me even less, but if you're going for some cold machine kind of romance, I'm sure you can pull off some cool stuff.

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>>20687105
Completely understandable, and thanks, I'll do my best.

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>>20678510
Isn't Coco supposed to be a kid dragon.

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>>20689226
Cocunny...

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>>20689226
Imagine going out on several dates with her and all around having lots of fun. You feel like she comfortable around you and flaunts her sexy features all the time near you if to tease, but then when it comes to the moment of confessing your love and kissing her, she scream for you to back off and calls you a pedophile

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>>20689395
What the fuck happened to my brain. I know I'm sick as fuck but chill out with skipping on the words.

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>>20629674
Been a while. This kinda fits this >>20496797 I guess, though she only does it once here.

A Little Business Lesson [3k words]
Tags: Suisei, Miko, Pekora, Gore, Snuff
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTdIWopNNhJSxwBvJtOxts5jz_Yn15SFR_QAiS_oFUMkQYPZLVbAB2UntOdrZDcMA00JNybYfrX40e-/pub

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>>20629674
Genki Taiga sex
https://ehsex dot blogspot.com/2022/03/personal-training.html

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>>20689777
You know, I didn't really care if it got a story or not as I really only wanted to share the image and get some discussion around it, and I usually have no intention on reading the stories that my prompts get precisely because of that reason, but I'll make an exception for you. I know right? Such a selfless hero. Keep in mind that I read a story with the sole intent of giving criticism, and my enjoyment of it comes later, if any. I do this because it's hard for me to feel emotion from writing, so I decide to try and help the writer instead.

I can see that you took this in the PekoMiko rrat direction. In my mind I was thinking more like why hasn't she streamed with Pekora for so long, and the answer would be Suisei, not rape. But it's certainly one way to go about it. Not really a problem.

I believe a story can sometimes do well by starting with dialogue, but it's usually best if the dialogue isn't related to the plot all too much because otherwise it feels forced. It can be hard to land this prose.

I think the fic might have worked more in a past tense, especially actions that have been happening for a while, like "she swept the dirty shrine absentmindedly", or "The sound of a coin bouncing inside the donation box pulled Miko back to reality", but that may just be me.

Your description of the rape is pretty good I'll give you props for that. Doesn't feel erotic, yet you described how aroused Miko was feeling just right.

The idiom "seen one in the flesh" doesn't really work for an object made out of cold hard steel.

How did Suisei get clothes in Miko's shrine after taking a bath? I feel like you could've expanded on that by either saying she kept clothes in her place which has its own implications, or by saying she got into Miko's clothes from her wardrobe, which would've allowed you to describe more of that. Scratch that I'm too inpatient. But I do feel like you could've expanded more on this topic. Not to mention that it should be cold given that it is raining, so plain shirt doesn't fit much, especially after a warm bath.

I can already see the foreshadowing with the police cars and it's pretty impressive if this goes where I think it's going.

The dialogue from the reaction falls a bit flat, but the reaction itself was decent. Also, her puking into the bag that held Pekora's held is pretty good. You could have easily taken this into a "what the hell did you do?" scenario where she tries to run off and call the police, because I think she's too accepting of her best friend being hacked to pieces. That could lead to Suisei capturing her and a mindbreak ending, but that's just what I'd do.

The "love you" falls pretty flat. Not gonna lie. I think if Miko didn't respond and was just broken it would've been better for what you did.

Overall, pretty decent. You got a good handle on describing the environment, but some parts of your dialogue could use more work. Or perhaps you just didn't think thoroughly about how someone should or would react in X situation. Or perhaps I'm just being too idealistic about realism again. Anyway, thanks for taking that prompt up.

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>>20692195
Forgot to mention, the police cars never ended up coming back, which left me slightly disappointed. But in a way, it's still a fun little nod as to what had happened.

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>>20692413
Forgot to mention in my "forgot to mention", the implication of where the police cars are going already works well enough. For your ending, there was no way you could relate them back into the story. If Suisei giggled nervously when they passed by, it's already *chef's kiss*

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>>20686328

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>>20689777
Read a little bit into this and I just wanna say before I move on and forget that your take on the Pekomiko rape rrat is exceptional

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>>20689777
>>20695889
Incredible. I love the way that despite brushing over heavy detailing of the corpse and surroundings, Suisei's insistence on the process of evidence disposal makes things seem intensely gorey regardless.

Suisei even seems all there in the head, which is somehow even more scary, and actually more attractive, too.

It's sexy, it's disgusting and it's unnerving/chilling all at the same time. Very good read, anon!

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>>20689777
>“Now all that’s left is just to toss this to the pigs. Will you do that for me, Mikochi? You’re getting the hang of this. Now can you do me a favor and throw this lighter and gasoline can for me, too? Good girl. Good girl.”
...throw it where? It's raining, and you can't throw it into the sty because you need the pigs alive to eat the corpse and I'm guessing the old man wouldn't like you hurting his animals anyway.

Also, all the mentions of Pekora's severed head made me hanker for a Yandere Suisei fic in this vein where she uses one of her victims to give (You) a decapitation blowjob.

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>>20697800
>Yandere Suisei fic in this vein where she uses one of her victims to give (You) a decapitation blowjob.
Holy shit that's metal as fuck. I did not know I wanted this.

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>>20699171
I feel like a ton of heinous, vomit-inducing sex crimes take on a whole different light when you have a hot girl egging you on. Killing Sora to rape her corpse is horrible. Suisei killing Sora, then having (You) rape her corpse to make you complicit in her crime? That's fucking hot.

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>>20700203
I mean that's pretty much the essence of the yandere genre. Fucked up things done by a cute girl, with an undercurrent of doing it for (You).

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What the fuck did I wake up to what are you guys doing

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>>20701937
just talkin bout fuckin corpses bro

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>>20702043
The idea of Suisei pulling out the ol faithful "20lbs of ass and pussy!" but it's just Gura's severed pelvis shouldn't have made me laugh

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>>20701937
Anon, you ever find yandere girls kind of hot?

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>>20700203
Honestly I'm more interested by the fact of how morbid the act is rather than how hot it is (I still do find it strangely hot though). The horror of being forced to commit necrophilla just so you don't incur the wrath of the yandere, and end like the corpse you're fucking sounds like it would be make such a good fic if done right.

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>>20702798
Pretty sure something like that would be in the same genre conceptually as that KFP collaborator fic where it needs to be a careful balance of fucked up actions and hotness. There's a certain horror in it of course but also that same appeal as an openly yandere romance.

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>>20701937
Just talking about necrophilia, y'know, usual Sunday.

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>visualization of how /wg/ perceives Fubuki

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>>20707361
i perceive her with fewer clothes senpai

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>>20707361
...No? /wg/ use her as the default girl when they need to stick a random personality onto a chuuba, they don’t treat her specifically like a horny menhera.

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>>20707361
festi val fox

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>>20707361
Matsuri's clothes are somehow less lewd than Friend's default clothes.

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>>20707361
Perfection...

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>>20629728
Have we had an abuse story where everyone mistakenly thinks (you)'re the abuser and not the chuuba?

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>>20709510
I mean it's an in universe fear that's been used in stories before but not as the "main" theme of one... Unless that punch whore greentexts count.

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>>20709719
Punchwhore is more of a romance/mindbreak

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>>20711150
You're right, just reread that one again, thought that was supposed to be a bigger part in it but greentexts do tend to seem longer than they actually are.
I suppose any fic that runs with this >>20709510 as the premise has like two options that I can think of in regards to how a fic would be written.
The first is pretty much like that 'initial state' of punch whore where everyone openly thinks you're a piece of shit abuser but the twist is that you've been forced to abuse her so that you can never leave. Ironically like another rushia fic in the archive; if only by implication
The second is a mystery fic about her friends trying to investigate her strange behavior, with the obvious conclusion coming out that (You), her boyfriend is abusing her... only for them to dig deeper and find out that it's actually the other way around. I think this was the initial 'pitch' for that psycho killer sequel.

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>>20707361
I don't think about Fubuki at all.

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>>20707361
I think about Fubuki all the time.

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>>20707361
I think about Fubuki, and Fubuki thinks about me

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>>20707361
I think about fucking Fubuki between her shapely buttocks.

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That fucking hololive offbrand holy grail war prompt/discussion from last thread is still stuck in my head.
I've been thinking about the 'master/servant' pairs for it, with the soft theme I've noticed from the two pairs that got thrown out there of You/Gura, Kson/Kanata is that they reflected a shipping pair. Since the initial prompt had you as a detective and Kson is you know who.
So that kind of gave me an idea for the master/servant pairs effectively being reflection of ships by having one be the chuuba that's pactbound and the other person being an OC that kind of fills the other's 'role' in the ship. Basically letting the OC that needs to exist have some bits of character to base it off of. Either that or just go with non-holos as the masters

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May you find your motivation.

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>>20717289
think you need it more than anyone else here anonchama

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>>20716207
Don't much about Fate but for Master/Servant pairs maybe some pairs like

Reine/Pochi
MilkyQueen/Mori
Risu/Ayunda
Bookish Korean Woman/Ina

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>>20716207
>making OCs when there's a bunch of Holos that are just literally normal girls or could easily pass for normal girls
>when if you somehow run out of Holos, Niji has a million chuubas that are also normal girls

But I doubt you'd run out of Holos to begin with. There's seven Masters and seven Servants. One of the Masters is (You), and if I recall correctly from last thread you mentioned having Kson be a Master with the power-reveal that she has a dragon form, right? So that's 2 slots taken, you need five more Masters.

Here's a list of Holos that are basically normal girls, or are magic users with relatively low-key powers:

- Sora (literally just a human idol singer)
- Suisei (see Sora)
- Matsuri (literally just a cheerleader)
- Amelia (a completely normal human without her watch, so basically no more powerful than a mage with a Mystic Code)
- Subaru (literally just a human high school student)
- Aqua (literally just a maid)
- Migo (human shrine maiden)
- Shion (human magician, no standout powers)
- Reine (human magician, no standout powers)

This list fills up the remaining Master roster almost twice over while leaving a ton of chuubas left over for Servants. This is before getting into defunct Holos, Homostars, or Holos that are technically not human but have paper-thin lore nobody follows (Nene, Iofi, Azki...)

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>>20717763
>Holos that are technically not human but have paper-thin lore nobody follows (Nene, Iofi, Azki...)

>Master Current Nene with Chink Nene Servant

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>>20717763
I mean the idea was to have thematic master servant pairs, just picking random Holos and sticking them with other Holos just screams low effort holy grail war fic. Especially since I'm squeamish about offing one of them for real...
But you do bring up a good point that relying on established characters is better than making up OCs.
Of course that does bring into question what good contrasts/thematic pairs would be for this.

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>>20718610
I think that's fairly easy using their units as a reference. Stuff like SorAZ, or AquShio, etc. You can also throw a curveball with a crack pairing of sorts. But of course the most important thing is the execution of the story, which involves the most grueling part, actually writing it.

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>>20629728
One of the chuubas with an extended lifespan meets (You) and is instantly reminded of someone from hundreds of years ago that you look like exactly

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>>20629728
Reciting bible passages in front of the demon/monster/satan-worshipping Holos

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>>20721815
I think this was an Ayame fic right?
Not taking taking a dig at the idea though, reincarnation romance always gets me.

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>>20722196
I kinda wanna take a shot at writing a melancholic/bittersweet reincarnation romance fic. Maybe something on the lines of the long-lived chuuba meeting the first reincarnation of (You), only to lose you just like last time, and as the centuries pass, she goes from excited to meet you, to angry, afraid and bitter as fate always seems to set her up to meet you and fall in love, only to eventually lose it and break her heart all over again. She'll try to avoid you and at one point even say she hates you, when in reality she hates herself for being cursed with such a long life only to see you die and fade away countless times over the years. However, when even her age finally catches up to her absurdly long life, she finally accepts that those fleeting moments with you were the ones she should be cherishing regardless of how long or short the time she's able to spend with you. And at the end, when she's on her deathbed, the latest reincarnation of yourself is there, holding her hand as she finally realizes throughout her whole life, over millennia and many centuries, she had already been spending it by your side, and dies with a smile on her face.

I lied, I want to write a warm, loving fic of two people sharing their lives together, until the very end.

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>>20723931
>Story ends with Old man Anon finding a young woman that looks and acts just like her.
>Their meeting reflecting a scene earlier, except this time she's the young one.
God, I fucking love reincarnation romance.

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>chuubas tend to have chuuni lore with fantasy and magic to justify their designs
>chuubas grow in power and importance as their number of members and subs increases
I see the parallels and can't get them out of my head.

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>>20724775
Yo is that Elden Ring

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>>20725330
leaked DLC

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>>20629728
Miko, fed up with her poor luck in the world of female romance, decides to go on a date with you. She's shocked by how much of a good time she has.

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>>20729106
The CYOA should've been done on Valentine's day with which HoloMem you'd date

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>>20729106
This but you're black and she ends up addicted to your fat cock

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>>20729272
Maybe next Valentines. This year's was in the middle of a pretty wild time.

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>>20729272
That really doesn't sound like CYOA material since Choice doesn't really seem like something that would meaningfully add something to it... Unless you mean it in like the "Thread users all individually pick off from where a prompt starts" kind of way.

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>>20729325
Interracial is great. Submitting to being sexually violated by a lesser creature is hot as fuck.

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When I last looked a thread ago there was an anon brainstorming up what sort of mythological figure the holos would be, which was really fucking cool. But I have to ask, where do you guys dissapear to when I want to write something, and am looking for a cool prompt that isn't about Risu's dick?

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>>20731511
It's early NA, midday EU, and I'm trying to coom, it's just dead hours

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>>20731511
You mean this string of posts >>20590526? Yeah, that was fun. I love worldbuilding.

I dunno, anon. Post something you'd like to see and I'll improv something - maybe you'll like it and can use it for ideas. Don't expect me to reply right away though, it's 3AM and I should have gone to bed like four hours ago already.

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>>20731881
Oh cool you're the guy. Its fine I was hoping more for a prompt, since I don't have an idea of what I want to write yet myself, so I suppose I get to brainstorm a bit.

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>>20731511
first of all, that literally branched off from mommy Mori yandere incest

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>>20731511
Generally those people are 'baited' in by interesting discussion/questions. So if you're looking for a prompt to get out of it, I recommend asking an interesting open question like, I dunno...
Who'd be the best party for a revenge fantasy stories? Like one of those protagonist gets betrayed by their party and needs to get back at them by rape correcting them.
Or something like that, this probably isn't that interesting of an open idea.

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>>20729106
This but you just did it because you thought it would be funny to play along with her "joke", however Miko actually starts developing feelings for you while you keep thinking it's an elaborate joke.

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>>20731987
Was it post nut clarity?

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Finally got the time to sit down and read through all of Holofantasy Chapter 6 today, and I just wanted to say that I fucking hate you, AA.
You wrote this beautiful story, with enjoyable characters, an interesting plot, and gripping combat. Hundreds of pages of continuous story, gradually fleshing out this expansive world and it's colourful inhabitants, all while evil festers in the background, never revealing itself fully, but always hinting at it's presence. An absolute literary masterpiece by fanfiction standards.
And then you go and shit on the whole thing by pairing Anon up with fucking Marine of all people. A retarded boomer pirate. You could have paired him up with Coco, completing the loopback from chapter 1. You could have paired him with Polka, the enemy-turned-friend girl he's known longest. What about Fubuki? All that setup in the past, wasted. Even bloody Kanata would have been a better partner, with some throwback to her divine mission.
All that potential, gone, so Anon could get his rocks off inside some dusty old hag.
FUCK I HATE MARINE SO FUCKING MUCH
Yes, I know it's all dice rolls. I'm still mad.

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>>20732497
>He thinks fucking someone means they're dating

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>>20732386
I think it mostly might be worldbuilding autism, shit's fun to do once in a while especially since the fics here mostly don't require much of it.

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>>20707361
I think about Fubuki and Fubuki thinks about me as well. I love her so much it's unbearable.

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>>20732497
Anon...
Sorry to disappoint. It caught me by surprise pretty hard, but that's ultimately the appeal of dice, right? In the same way that Anon's made it so far the way he has. I appreciate that you enjoy (enjoyed?) the story and the aspects I was always somewhat worried about (world building, characters, overall tone and setup, etc.) And I hope you enjoy the next chapters whenever they come out, since I've got a few planned. Actual spoiler discussion ahead if you really care to get pissed off and accuse me of being a hack, else feel free to ignore.
Stuff with Marine is by no means the end of any potential 'routes' if you're worried about that. Just a reason to break out stuff I've had sitting around since Chapter 2. Tonally, this was supposed to be a lot different at first, but luck always has a funny way of making things work. Sort of like creating a Fighter only for shit to go so wrong you're now the head of a daycare due to a series of debts. He should've gotten fucked a long time ago by this point, but the story would've kept going.
At the very least I hope you enjoyed the sex scene, but if hags aren't your thing...well, forgive me.

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>>20732378
>Keep playing into the "joke" because the both of you are so clearly into it and having fun
>Think part of the joke is a contest to see who can fluster the other the most.
>Inadvertently making her fall deeper in love as she tries harder to get you to take it seriously.
>Until one day she does do something that gets you to crack and admit, that maybe you are seriously in love with her.
>Big kiss, mutual confession scene.
Just sprinkle in some drama somewhere in between each step and you basically have a romcom.
I fucking love shit like this

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>>20734715
do I want to write another romcom series with Miko? I think my pile of WIP shame should be attended to first.

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>>20735076
Wait another?
Hating You, Hating Me writer?

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DMCA-o-rama part 25
Tags: Nyanners, Ironmouse, Final Fantasy X, Honkai Impact 3rd

https://pastebin.com/2pZBYS6E

First draft, expect jank.

If there's any interest at all I might think about continuing.

(there are no parts 1-24 atm)

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>>20735464
You know how some writers make the future bits of their first draft first so they can get the initial idea out there so they have a strong scene to aspire to write towards...
This ain't it. It just feels like a random scene in a middle of series... except not even a good scene.
Assuming you're posting in good faith. The scene is okay, it's nothing that I'd give out as an excerpt but it works if it's one of those scenes linking events. The paragraphs could be bigger, and the descriptions could be lengthier; but if it's telling a story it would maybe work.

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>>20629728
I'd really like to read a fic taking place in the old West era on an unfinished railroad track, under the hot sun. All of Hololive are being used as prison labour, bound in chains and forced to break rocks, but being used to this treatment as part of their sentences, they spend most of their time bickering and bantering. I'd like to see a Tarantino-style conversational piece between one entire generation smack-talking the performances of other Holos during the 3rd Fes.

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Oh god did sakura summer anon have another breakdown?
Their post got deleted. Link's still up.

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>>20739829
I didn't even know he came back.

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>>20739829
wat

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>>20735429
Yeah, I thought it was obvious enough. That was a fun story to write and had a lot of greentext inspiration from the thread as well.

Blogposting now, but Foxes Over Ducks recently hit 1k hits on AO3, and surprisingly Festival of Sensations is just about to hit 1k hits as well. But surprisingly the stories that get the more detailed feedback are ones like Shooting Star, Falling Star. I find it interesting that the general public(or those that consume fanfiction outside of this hellhole of a website) would either silently consume coom material, or gush entirely about even more niche content like homostars. While obviously different from the feedback here, it's still interesting to see the differences.

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>>20739903
It's just generally much easier and more entertaining to provide feedback about SFW stuff. I love coombait as much as the next guy, but it doesn't stimulate your own creative senses and send ideas shooting through the neuron highway of your mind like a nice tragedy, or something experimental.

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>>20739871
>>20739873
Their post now deleted
>>20669493

>>20739903
MHanon, that's very clearly from the fact that the ao3 audience from both the website and fandom are heavily female dominated; not even including the fact that ao3 really doesn't have a 'review culture' so niche fandoms always have fuck all for responses, especially with how there's an account creation queue.

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>>20739829
Dude's such a fucking menhera that I kind of want to cum in him. Pin him down pronebone and pant about how everything's going to be okay and that he's a good boy while I paint his colon white with millions of my kids never-to-be...

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>>20739829
Can you honestly blame him after the shit he's been through ?

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>>20742242
yes

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>>20742242
Honestly, Yes?
At some point the pity license kind of runs out and you have to deal with the fact that they've been acting like a menhera due to old traumas resurfacing due to writing.
I wish him the best, genuinely; but they need a healthier hobby, or at least one that they can handle wrangling with their pecularities.

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>>20732667
RUSHIAAAA STOOP! YOU'RE MAKING STORIES WITH YOU EVEN HARDER TO WRITE!

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>>20744891
Thank God, Yagoo cut off the rm from the character before her new breakdowns.
Cause fuck me is the depths of her craziness a fucking pit that isn't even cute anymore.
Also slow thread today huh.

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>>20744891
I was wrong about you Rushia. You're not a yandere. YOU'RE BATSHIT INSANE

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>>20732667
I want to believe a schizo photoshopped that but I know in my heart that she's just a crazy bitch

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>>20744891
You gotta be fucking kidding me.

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>>20745405
MAKING THE MOTHER OF ALL RRATS ANON. CAN'T FRET OVER EVERY TWEET!

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>>20744891
woah, she's just like me

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>>20745542
I'd like to believe that too but the time in which that post appeared on 5chan after the original tweet was deleted was just too perfect. You can see the original 5ch thread in one of the replies.

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>>20716207
Dude, I've been thinking about it too. I even thought of something like an equivalent to Servant classes to put the chuubas in based on their theme and lore.

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>>20745859
I have no clue why I just said 5chan.

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>>20745861
>Servant classes
Honestly that's something that been going through my head in terms of thinking about the idea too since there's two options here.
Go full Nasuverse crossover and have it in that setting warts and all. The problem of course being tying all that shit together in a fused holo-Nasu setting... Thankfully I won't have to deal with Nasu lore purists /here/ but damn is all of the lore daunting in terms of trying to tie that shit.
Or just go with having it be in a Nasu influenced original chuuba setting where I'd have the freedom to pick up the cool bits of lore but in turn have to be in make shit up land for writing it.

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>>20746943
>Nasu influenced original chuuba setting
That's pretty much what I was thinking too with my class equivalents (haven't figured out all of them yet, but I have like four out of seven already).
For starters, they wouldn't be called "Classes" but "Sigils". But like Servant Classes, these Sigils would dictate a spirit chuuba's behavior and abilities as well as be based on concepts they could be linked to.

First Sigil I thought of is the Sigil of Beasts, which is basically the Berserker class but with chuubas who have an animal motif (except Mumei, I'll come back to that). Corpse-eating Gura would be that one, obviously, but you could also have Fauna as a perma-Yandere under that specific Sigil, for example.

Next is the Sigil of Man, for spirits of manmade beings (like Roboco, who's a robot) or who are tied to mankind in a way (like Mumei, who embodies civilization).

Then you'd have the Sigil of Light, which is given to chuubas who embody "sacred" or "benevolent" esthetics (Kanata would be an obvious choice by virtue of being an angel, but a sane Fauna would go there as well).

And finally, you'd have the Sigil of Dark, which is given to chuubas with "evil" or "creepy" esthetics (Mori, because Grim reaper, or Ina because lovecraftian lore).

That's what I have so far. What do you think ? If you could help with the last three ones, I'd like that too.

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>>20745978
Anon, your sleep reps...

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>>20748790
I assume you're looking for the equivalent of a Holy Grail War's Knight classes since you're effectively looking for a trio of "sigils" to represent.
I guess thematically, off the top of my head... How about the sigil of Sun, Moon and Star.
With Star being the saber class equivalent of having all round high stats and a strong NP equivalent. Thematically representing the Idol ideal of being the star of the stage. Obvious candidates being Sora or Suisei.
Sun being the Lancer equivalent representing energy, positive emotions, the idol ideal of granting smiles. Obvious candidates being Polka (forma de clown), and Nene.
Moon being the Archer equivalent representing, sadness, melancholy, pensiveness, the idol ideal of touching their hearts. Obvious candidates are Polka (Forma de Deppresion), and Nene.

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>>20749616
Huh. That's actually pretty neat. Let's go with that.

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For the anon who's writing that WWII Kiara story you should have her refer to you using "Sie" at the start then move on to "du" when she gets more comfortable with the mc.

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>>20750368
Thanks, I'll keep it in mind.

It actually gives me a clearer idea for a scene I had in mind where (You) make the effort to learn some German to try and impress her, only for her to get mad when you accidentally say something off and she takes it the wrong way.

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>>20749458
It’s nearly 4AM and I have to be at uni in six hours. But fuck sleep, I’m writing Towa fluff.

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>>20629728
Reine exposed armpit erotic

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>>20752829
Absolutely

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>>20750875
Here's a suggestion for that: (You) call Kiara "Frau" instead of "Fraulein" (Mrs. and Ms. respectively). It's something minor but Germans are pretty anal about that type of stuff.

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>>20744891
I will never forgive her for having such a hot design but also being so fucking crazy. I really wanted to believe that maybe, just maybe, this really was just a menhera panic attack that spiraled out of control, but the more that comes out, the more it's obvious that she's just terminally insane and not in the sexy way.

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>>20754423
>call her Mrs.
>"...are you... are saying I'm... married, Anon? And cheating with you? D-do you think I'm a cheating WHORE!? DO YOU?"
>she's crying now
>"Or... or, are you saying you think I'd cheat on YOU!? That we'd be married and happy and I'd still betray your trust and loyalty? How can you say that to me? How dare you..."

After that she could either go nuts on (You), which gives the excuse for another NSFW session (sex or torture or whatever), or maybe she gets it in her head that somebody's putting ideas into your head and starts killing some of the other prisoners for spreading lies.

Also, we need a Kiara edit for pic related.

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>>20755875
I thought the implication was that she was getting old but your idea makes more sense.

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>>20755875
>killing some of the other prisoners for spreading lies.
Or...y'know, maybe make you rape a frog chuuba at gunpoint?

That's what I was gonna do

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>>20756202
>make you rape a frog chuuba at gunpoint
OK yeah that's way hotter.

Make sure it's unprotected

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>>20717763
>Reine (human magician, no standout powers)
Wait I don't know Reine that much but, is she really a normal human lore wise? What about her 'Peafowl' kingdom lore?

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>mfw reading "Stolen Dreams"
Props to the author, I don't think I've ever been so aroused and depressed at the same time.

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>>20756959
Just read it few days ago and yes, that shit is fucking hot

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>>20756942
I'm just going off the official lore blurbs. I'm pretty sure the whole princess thing didn't come up until later streams.

[Anonymous No.]

Been looking around for ReineIRyS fanfic and found the ones where they did a rape-roleplay and that is like the hottest shit I've ever read in my fucking life.
Bless whoever made it

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>>20629728
Anon conducts a Hotline Miami esque psychedelic raid on a CoverCorp blacksite where they keep all the graduated chuubas, to ensure they don't spill any company secrets. Can feature either all of the graduates, or just one in particular you like. Up to you whether it's SFW or not.

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>>20756202
hot

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>>20757718
Time to kill the Chinese branch.

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>Pg. 9 after 21 minutes

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>>20754423
>>20755875
God help you if you overhear her talking with some japanese comrades, and think she'll take kindly to you calling her "Kiara-chan"

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>>20756959
I kept waiting for something to turn it around, but nope. Bad end all the way through.

Seems primed for an alternative sequel where (You) somehow break out and rape-correct every Niji in your path as you try to find your way back to HoloMyth.

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>>20759913
If I remember right wasn't a sequel discussed?

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>>20758907
/wg/ is dying. Did you expect anything else.

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>>20760364
Mudrat

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>>20759146
She does have a foreign...interrogator

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>>20762844
The rape of nanking but committed by chuubas!

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>>20762844
aye
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d9GCvpqJZ9c

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saviourfag anon here. Quick question. Which do you prefer/think is better? Using Kiara's avatar as her appearance or using her roommate?

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>>20764207
The former. The latter would make it very off-putting even though I do think she's genuinely attractive

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>>20764207
Age old question, but I'm personally voting avatar, as I believe it's better to omit as much roommate content as possible

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>>20764207
roommate

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>>20764207
Avatar

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>>20764207
Avatar is generally the ideal solution since it keeps it all within the bounds of chuuba fic. Roommate shit cuts it a bit too close to rpf in my opinion.
Unless you're willing to make up a fake "Real!Kiara" design ala the holoreality image that's her in universe look within the story. I.e. same general build but with more "realistic" features.

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>>20764207
I'd say roommate only because I think they look alike.

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>>20629728
You find a tiny Gawr Gura trapped inside a glass jar outside your front door

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>>20764207
I'm personally always thinking of them as a mix. When I think of Okayu, she'll be a fluffy cute cat, and if I ever actually write polka then she might be a bit on the fluffy side too, and self-conscious of it.
Part of everything is that holos aren't too far removed from themselves. i.e. Kson happens to be pretty damn tall because she's a hafu.
The common meme right now is "omg, mori is fat" but I honestly see those poses more as her doing stupid rap poses while she's readying for the next verse, even though I know the size of her roommate which isn't -that- large anyway

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>>20764207
I mean her RM looks pretty similar to her, doesn't she. They're both redheads..

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>>20764207
Defo the avatar.
My personal headcanon is that in the fanfictions, all the girls lok exactly like their VTuber avatar counterparts. Would make you wonder what's the point of using an avatar in the first place if that's the case, but I simply choose not to think about it.
So yeah, I vote for avatar.

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>>20769282
Plausible deniability. Haha, the Guardian of Nature really looks like that?!

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>>20768918
Mori's not so much fat as she's bloated from chugging back the drinkable equivalent of rubbing alcohol day in and day out. Never thought I'd concernfag for a chuuba but I hope that girl gets her head on straight before she drinks herself into a fatty liver.

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Alright I think I'll just stick to avatar. Seems like it will be a lot easier to work with than her roommate especially when it comes to the smut. Thanks for the input everyone.

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>>20769595
I'm a heavy drinker, and for sure she has an unhealthy/addictive idea about the whole bit, but she's not as fat as the memes are making her out to be.
There's a whole aside I have as to her as a person, but characterization-wise, she's not fat.

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>>20770059
lol cuckbeat

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>>20769809
Thought you were keeping the Kiara grooms and coerces you for sex arc for a few chapters more while she's still grooming (You)

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>>20769493
Is this a reference to her roommate or do you just not like her avatar?

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>>20770355
Oh I'm still far from that, this is just for something else.

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>>20769809
>Seems like it will be a lot easier to work with than her roommate
I can't post it here because it's a vacation, but Kiara's roommate has some photoshoots where she's pure sex. I think she'd rather they not be distributed though, afaik those were some uh, dark times for her.

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>>20770441
Neither, I like Fauna alot, it's the idea of a (you) meeting any Holo('s avatar) in like a grocery store. A sleepy kitsune or shrine maiden or asshole dragon. A mix of our world and an augmented reality of demi-humans, "I know elves exist, but I haven't seen one in my neighborhood, did you say your name was Fu-rare?"

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Wow, what a day where /wg/ decides its okay to roommate posts.

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>>20629728
More Irys

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>>20770882
ESLchama...

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>>20770832
I imagine they'd still try to disguise themselves to some degree. Hats, baggy clothes, etc. Think celebrities trying to go incog.

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>>20771526
They cosplay as each other for deniability. Like that idea Ina had to cosplay as Noel so one will know it's her.
>Inb4 The Forbidden Fubuki

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>>20771526
For sure, but easier or harder depending on the persona. Mio constantly wraps her tail around her leg, and a big hat could hide her ears, but Gura and Shion would have an issue.

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>>20771976
Not Shion, I meant La+. I get the gakis confused and I'm a drunk as implied by the response chain.

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>>20770059
Why are there cuckbeats itt?

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>>20770832
Ah, I see. Well, your idea is quite neat, now that you put it like that. As >>20771526 Anon said, I still think they'd at least try to disguise themselves with clothes and caps, but still keeping their core appearance the same as their avatar's.
But now that you gave an example of what you meant, I quite like it.

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>>20772305
Who really pays attention to the person in the grocery line? I just want to get home and make dinner so I can watch my favorite streamer. Funny that that person in line sounded similar...

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>>20676516
WHERE'S THE HAIR???

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>>20772477
shaved down there obv

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>>20772915
MY SWEET MATSURI CAN'T BE A SHAVEFAG

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>>20772084
Imagining Laplus in normal everyday situations is always funny to me due to the fucking idea of this Demon Loli living normally and undisturbed in Tokyo. Like imagine just seeing those two horns while lining up in a convenience store.

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>>20773034
Sorry you had to find out this anon...

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>>20773034
shaved>hairy

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>>20773045
>assholes being all like 'OH MY GAWD, MUH DARKNESS
>she's wearing shorts and an oversized shirt, stepping over the assholes while she sighs and goes back home
>can't even kayfabe against it anymore, just is a bitch in public, driving the simps away

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>>20773422
Looks like someone doesn't know about the 5chan Laplus leak.

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>>20773544
That's online, not in person. She's a keyboard warrior.

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>>20772471
One would have to wonder why were they wearing such oversized, baggy clothes... Oh well, fashion is weird at times.

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>>20773647
>She's a keyboard warrior.
ain't we all?

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>>20773034
If there's one girl in Hololive who shaves it's Festival.

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>>20771887
The Forbidden Fubuki is honestly a really good cosplay. A shame it just gets thrown around for shitposting 'cause it works well on her and she looks cute.

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>>20770729
God I wish she did porn before she regained her senses

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>>20775041
Would not be surprised if people jerked off to that wrestling video.

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>>20774533
What makes you say that? And you have Choco who admitted that she does and Moona who fuckin did it on stream

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>>20775371
NTA but festival seems like the kind of character that would keep it clean down there "just in case" , she'll be the type to stop if you ask once you're together but before that she wants it clean to maximize her chances.

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>>20775124
I ain't seen it, but I would. People can say her roommate is weird, but I'm more interested in her personality.
Her confidence and determination mixed with her self-doubt is sexy as fuck. Imagine having a girl who would tell you "fuck off, I'm going to try out!" and coming back to you in tears when she doesn't get the part, ready to give up on life but only you can support her ideals.

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>>20629728
Giving Fauna a birthday dick down

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>>20757107
It's clearly she said on her devut stream anon

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>>20775996
Sounds really fucking unattractive, to be honest

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>>20777073
Sounds like you're a bitch ass nigga who ain't no rock to the weak women around him.

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>>20773647
Your statement implies she'd be nicer online due to the leak having her be a good girl that's just as nice as how her fellow Holos view her.

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>>20777338
Is that wrong?

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>>20777257
What you are is not a rock, but an emotional tampon

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>>20777573
I'm sorry you're so soft and absorbent, but I'm glad your therapy is working out for you. Do your best, I'll be cheering you on!

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>>20777707
Okay lol

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>>20775996
Ah yes the saviourfag prequel.

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>>20773034
I like some hairy gash as a matter of course, anon, but >>20774533 is right. She's literally exactly the type.

[Anonymous No.]

How does updating previous stories work? I want to add a chapter to mine and may add chapters in the future. I wasn't planning on doing that but now I hit a stride recently.

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>>20784874
usually authors create separate google docs for each chapter

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>>20784874
>write your chapter
>anchor your chapter to the story anchor at the start of the thread, titling it something like [series name, chapter whatever]
>AA will archive it to a series page containing it and all previous chapters
He runs a tight operation.

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>>20785184
>>20785284
danks

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>>20785284
>>20785851
Also reasonably certain there's some specific rules for something getting called a series in archive since otherwise it just gets chained to the bottom of the updated post with a ^ to indicate it's a sequel/next chapter.

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>>20787411
Preferably 3 or so chapters or a big enough story that ends with it being clear more is coming are the two criteria that were discussed, else everything with a sequel would be consider a series

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>>20784874
Of course that doesn't apply if you were writing all of your fic in one Google doc/rentry page/post to ao3
Then you just repost the link to the story anchor alongside the indication that you've updated a part or a chapter. The Google doc dance is mostly from the fact that a lot of writers prefer being anonymous and gdocs publishing is fully anonymous.

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honestly the whole vtuber/roommate dichotomy is pretty interesting to think about, but I wouldn't know how to make it not-weird
at least with art, its visually obvious that the "roommate" is just as much of an eccentric anime character as the vtuber

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>>20788839
>honestly the whole vtuber/roommate dichotomy is pretty interesting to think about
No, it really isn't. Also, drop the subject now.

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>>20788839
It's one of those things that are interesting to think about in an original fic about vtubers sense, not in a vtuber fanfiction sense. The dichotomy of a double life as an anime girl online is interesting but ultimately out of scope for this thread due to /vt/ rules.
Especially since making up a fake roommate for a fic that isn't just dogwhistling their real roommate is probably near impossible.

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>>20629654
My Ina/Kiara story is finished at last, for the 1 person who might still be interested:
>https://pastebin.com/KSyN4c6L

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>>20789032
I second this. Last thing we need is doxxnigs shitting up the thread.

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>>20629674
Say, Can You See? Chapter 2
Tags: Okayu, SFW, fluff?

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New thread
>>20789772

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>>20787995
While not a hard rule, I'm inclined to say a series needs to hit a minimum of 3 chapters, but after writing a two part story with 10k words minimum each, it feels a bit hard to truly put a requirement on what a series is other than "needs more than one chapter". I guess as long as the writeanon and AA agrees that it's a series(and it has more than one chapter) it will be treated as such. What do you think should constitute as a series to be archived as such?

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>>20789032
kys seanigger

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>>20789646
May as well post it in the other thread now since the dumbass put it up

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>>20790203
The hard and fast rule for me is 3 chapters, either that or a large enough chapter and concept that's assured to be a series of them like holoreality.
Either way I agree with your opinion that it should be an agreement between author and archivist.

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Gimme a Holo, and tell me what car you think they would drive.

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>>20791157
Suisei, she'd drive my dick wild

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>>20791157
Watson and a classic yellow VW Beetle. idk, just fits the look

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>>20791157
Mumei is the only holo we know that has a driver's license...
but to answer your question it'd probably be some hand me down toyota.

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>>20791157
I should rephrase this to:

Give me as many chuubas you can think of and the cars you think they would drive/fit them the most. This is for that street racing story.

>>20791318
Yeah I can see that fitting her motif. Or an old 1970s/1980s american landbarge with an oversized engine and marshmallow suspension.

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>>20791592
Mumei, 2001 Honda Civic

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>>20791592
Marine, Audi coupe b3

Did you see the Holo's in race queen outfits?

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>>20791157
>Kronii
>Her moms minivan she's allowed to borrow sometimes when she's a good girl

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>>20791592
>Pekora
>She stole Yagoo's Mercedes

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>>20757107
It's clearly she said on her degut stream anon

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>>20791847
>Normal looking Civic, nothing too interesting about it from the outside
>80mm turbo on the inside, with an electronic straight pipe cutover in the cabin and NOS
Normal on the outside, a monster on the inside. That'd fit Mumei for sure.

>>20792372
Sexy. I can see that.

I have, of course, it's a really cute design. I'd have trouble not buying it if they made them into figures...

Here are some I've settled on:

Sora - Mercedes SL65 AMG Black Series; a refined car from the outside, but an absolute beast inside. It's not overly flashy like supercar competitors, but still quite a car.

Miko - A90 Supra, because this poor dummy played Forza, saw the new Supra and said "It's our Toyota we're so proud of!"

Korone - R32 GTR NISMO, because the car she drove in Gran Turismo 2 was a GTST since she didn't have enough money to buy an R. Or she could drive an Evo 6, since she fawned over them a lot (but I'd be showing my bias).

I'm looking for a car that would fit Suisei; something somewhat flashy, but not too flashy. The kind of car a woman wearing a long dress with a deep cut looks good coming out of .

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Sakura Anon seems to have gotten banned. From the bottom of his story
>If you’re reading this, the mods decided to ban me for a day and for some fucking reason delete my posts. I did not delete my own posts, some fucktard mod got mad at me I guess. In summation: FUCK MODS, FUCK JANNIES. I’ll be back in a day.

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>>20757107
It's clearly she said on her debut stream anon

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>>20793585
not exactly a car guy, but I guess a Porsche or Lotus? I'm not too clear about their performance honestly, but I'm thinking in comparison to the "major" supercars like Lambo or Ferrari.

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>>20793694
I see... well, if you're reading this Sakura anon, I still want to cum in you. Give me a call.

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>>20793924
Yeah, Porsche was going to be my first pick, but god damn if their stupid naming conventions aren't a pain to deal with. Oh, it's a 911. Yes but is is a 997 911 or a 993 911?

Lotus is a good pick, but I wouldn't exactly say women are big fans of older Lotus designs. Can't blame them, the late model Elise and Exige are ugly, though the Evora definitely looks better.

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>>20793694
>isreal
What the fuck mods.

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>>20791592
>This is for that street racing story.
LETS FUCKING GOOOOO
I wonder which holos would drive big American muscle cars?