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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>39295825

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

>> No.39375061

Get fucked, earlyfag.

>> No.39375067
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread

A new Irys: TAGS: Reincarnation, Drama, Angst, Bae, IRys, Mori:>>39336157

>> No.39375148

I blame Enna, Kyo, and Gwelu.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Teaching a chuuba martial arts:>>39298882

Imagine your oshi is your wife and her stream time is the time she stays with you. Would you think she cheats on you?:>>39298882

Kyo and Enna having sex.:>>39306676

Mio getting haunted by the ghosts of her womb like the ghosts of Christmas.:>>39312228

Secret shota club. Mori FBK Sui Noel made a secret pact to seduce/pay young boy for orgies, one at a time:>>39316684

You gain invisbility power, your body become invisible but your clothes can't. You sneak in female changing room in Cover building. You watch holo girls naked, you pick a victim, stalk her then give her a surprise sex:>>39316821

Anon is hired as a staff member in Cover and unintentionally sabotages and eventually destroys the company in the zaniest ways possible including seduction of talents, horrible advice, ill-advised self-initiative etc.:>>39319016

The walls in their home are thin and Towa has to listen to her mother's new boyfriend banging Rurudo's brains out.:>>39320829

The walls in their home are thin and Rurudo has to listen to her daughter's new boyfriend banging Towa's brains out.:>>39323188

Expand on this prompt. No, don't complain about sapling's desires:>>39324197

Zaion forces you to suck her off during the entirety of her genshin stream.:>>39325522

Convincing Mori that her out of shape slampig gut is attractive and getting her addicted to gorging herself on junk food to pleasure you only to reveal you think she's a hideous pig and film your subsequent breakup to upload for views:>>39362155

>> No.39375737

Post word counts.

>> No.39375799
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>>39375737
Not really making much progress. I'll see if I can make that self-imposed christmas release but don't count on it.

>> No.39376311

>>39375799
How many words are you aiming for?

>> No.39376549

Man, having a hard time surviving the dead hours lately. Holidaze...

>> No.39376561

>>39375067
Nepolabo plays a Game of frosty the snowmen and lamy loses, so not only she gets to wear the hat but she also gets stuffedd

>> No.39377076

>>39376311
Not aiming for a wordcount. I'm aiming to finish a certain scene.

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What are you working on anons?

>> No.39377962

>>39375737
I haven't added anything since I last posted my word count.

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>>39377548
Finishing a segment that I may need proofread before I go on to the next main arc of the fic.

>> No.39378106

>>39375799
Just broke 13k.

>> No.39378996

>>39377962
RIP

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>> No.39380180

>>39379872
god, Our Cures still has my view of Ayame forever ruined in a positive sense

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a 3 day weekend and I did no writing at all

>> No.39380974

>>39380180
rrat!Ayame is one of those things where the addition of rrat characterization just works. Ayame's normal character is just 'fanciful' enough that 'grounding' her with rrats creates something interesting.

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>>39380180
Here, have a Christmas date Ayame.

>> No.39381688

>>39381214
Now write her seducing you into fucking her under one of the decorated trees in the park after she reveals she has no panties on for you.

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>>39377548
Hopefully finishing this action scene today and then setting up the coming fluff segments. I've decided I kinda like writing fluff.

>> No.39382390

>>39381688
This but instead of seducing her into fucking you, you're seducing her into cucking you

>> No.39383346 [DELETED] 

We have had heads of stories about eating shit, why not one sbout shitting in someone's mouth? Specifically Mori's mouth

>> No.39383733

>>39383346
How about no? You crazy Dutch bastard!

>> No.39383822

>>39377548
The decompression after a particularly heavy scene.

>> No.39384476

>>39380803
Write on a routine anon, it's better than staking your hopes on getting inspired and writing up a storm.

>> No.39385431

>>39384476
nta but it's a bit hard to keep a routine when you feel like you're pumping out sludge by writing as an obligation

>> No.39385773
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>>39378004
Polka's so damn cute...

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>>39375067
After unsuccessfully trying to find out what Flare would want for Christmas, you wake up one morning to find out she's ready to tell you...and receive the gift.

A baby.

>> No.39386338

>>39386243
>Playing Roller Mobster on the car stereo as you plow it into a hospital, storm the maternity wing and steal a child
I mean, okay Flare!

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>>39386243
God damn does that girl give me knife-ear fever.

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>>39386360
Pointy ears tend to awaken something within me.

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>>39386360
I like when their ears stick out to the sides, they're almost irresistibly flick-able and nibble-able

>> No.39387065

>>39385431
Yeah, everyone says that but trust me shitting it out and polishing it up will get it done far quicker than trying hemming and hawing about trying to get it done perfect because you only write when you're 'inspired'.
It's far easier to just get over the psychological hump of starting to write everyday even if the only goal is 'just write something'.

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>>39386821
Technically clothed paizuri...

>> No.39387758

>>39386338
Now that's a fucking bait and switch fic I'd love to read. I could see it starting off entirely with dialogue, making it seem like a normal romance/smut before going off the rails into a comedy about robbing a maternity ward.

>> No.39388218

>>39387758
I mean I guess you could pass the twist off as "Half-elves are sterile so you do what you gotta do".

>> No.39388415

>>39388218
I read it as more 'She wants the baby now, rather than in nine months' but I think that angle could be used if you want to spin it in a more dramatic direction.

>> No.39388445

>>39387758
>assemble a crew
>Suisei as a specialist and sniper
>Polka for acrobatics and entering
>Miko for distraction
>Noel buys the drinks because you guys didnt want her to be left out

>> No.39388562

>>39388445
Noel will be the wet nurse, obviously

>> No.39388607

>>39388445
>Usada ken is also attempting to steal babys but just for shit and giggles

>> No.39388811

>>39388607
>Pekora is planning on putting them all in a battle royale with Jill-kun

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>>39388445
>Noel isn't the distraction

>> No.39388897

>>39388445
>Anon's Eleven

>> No.39388969

>>39388879
>impliying Noel's tits hold a candle to miko
She's gonna try and play it cool, trip, hit herself, start screaming and whne a guard comes she will punch him and start going on a psycho rant with her retarded voice
Noel has nothing

>> No.39388979

>>39388879
I genuinely expected her to trip and eat shit

>> No.39388991

>>39388969
This again?

>> No.39389048

>>39388991
>Miko being retarded is somehow news
have you tried watching streams?

>> No.39389364

>>39388879
Noel will distract them with her body

>> No.39389783

>>39388879
How many times does chikan happen to her?

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>>39389783
Can't imagine she'd just grit her teeth and bare it

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>> No.39390647

heads up, since gura is taking a break, catalog shitters will speed up the board a bit

>> No.39390718

>>39390647
What if we just write fanfiction about Gura on her break?

>> No.39390762

>>39390718
i mean knock yourself out
im going to my last exam of the year then im gonna try and keep working on my wips

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>>39390718
>Out of the Blue 2
>Gura took up streaming to "earn her keep," despite the repeated assurances that she's welcome to live with you without having to worry about money
>she pushes herself too hard and gets sick
>now (You) have to take care of an ill Atlantean, having no clue how their immune systems work or how to treat their illnesses
>and god help you if her dad finds out about any of this

>> No.39391370

>>39390647
They've been shitting up the board since the Enna x Kyo offpa- I mean offcollab.

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>>39391170
This but Goomba is actually taking that break to have babymaking sex with you all month because it's Shark mating season

>> No.39391500

>>39391170
>meet with local aquarium vet
>ask a lot of oddly specific questions about illnesses that can infect sharks
>he thinks you are trying to get shark meds to get high with

>> No.39392066

>>39390647
ok time to write futa gura smut to balance things out

>> No.39392170

>>39391500
"Look, if you need to make your girl feel better, I know someone who can hook you up with what you need."
>come home that day with numerous doses of MDMA
>the less said about the evening that follows, the better

>> No.39392250

>>39392066
One or two dicks?

>> No.39392441

>>39392250
two obviously.

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>>39390718
>Gura's gills get tight and constricted in the cold, since she's from the balmy Mediterranean
>Makes her tummy hort as a result
>(You) massage her gills to relax her and help her breathe easier

>> No.39392690

>>39392066
Not normally into futa but imagining Gura doing the ring fit shrieking as she squirts from a handjob made me suspiciously horny.

>> No.39392813

>>39392690
I know what you mean. You just want to bully her into making that shriek

>> No.39392933

>>39392690
Well how about fingering her until she squirts while shrieking.

>> No.39392959

>>39390647
>/wg/ gura edition
>dies

>> No.39392993

>>39392959
She's been in the hospital for a while now

>> No.39393212

>>39392993
Source: I made it up.

>> No.39393650

>>39393212
t. Not a member

>> No.39393848

>>39392933
Also good. But then you can't like...do weird hyperfrotting by sliding your dick between hers.

>> No.39393860

>>39393650
>chumbud is a phonefag
lmao

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>>39375067
ANYTHING THAT MAKES ME FEEL LOVED PLEASE

>> No.39394190

Somehow the idea of training Gura as a buttslave has shot up to the top of my list of "want to get it done"s...

>> No.39394409

>>39394171
Maybe it's time for the board to get an update

>> No.39395520

>>39394171
getting fucked in the ass helps with that

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I can't help but think that picrel is the protagonist of Hololive: Subjection

>> No.39397769

>>39392471
This is horribly unsettling to look at

>> No.39398804

>>39397769
I imagine in normal weather they would be a little more subtle

>> No.39400492

If you browse the catalog, you're a shitposter and shouldn't be in /wg/.

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>>39397769
I liked this artist's stuff quite a bit, draws a lot of gills and off-putting things that a weirdo like me finds cool and sexy

>> No.39401938

>>39400681
That one's pretty good, though. A little creepy in a good way.

>> No.39402360

>>39400492
Cry about it.

>> No.39402825

>>39397027
Never joke about something like that again, anon.

>> No.39402910

>>39402825
Cry about it.

>> No.39403097

>>39402910
The only thing I'll "cry" about is that you are ruining my immersion of a fanfic I liked reading with a sissy boy who thinks he's black but isn't actually black.

>> No.39403255

>>39403097
>you are ruining my immersion of a fanfic I liked reading
It takes one joke to permanently mentally disfigure something you like? What a little bitch you are.

>> No.39404215

>>39394409
What more can you even add?
Boards not that far off.

>> No.39404996

>>39404215
A couple of scat requests would be nice.

>> No.39406176

>>39404996
Such as?

>> No.39406352

>>39406176
If you're talking about what to add to the board, then following the trend of dumbed-down requests, something simple like "I want to eat Mio's poop!" would suffice.

>> No.39406525

>>39404215
A drawing of a muscle girl covered in cobwebs would be funny

>> No.39406902

>>39406525
Man, this made me realize that guy stopped coming here to do his monthly prompt dump.
...
Which means a joking reference to that fucking muscle girl prompt being half forgotten would absolutely work.

>> No.39407187

>>39406902
It's funny because I was going to do his muscle girl prompt but he insisted on the girl being AZKi and I didn't want to lewd her so I didn't write it.

>> No.39407453

>>39406176
Fubuki in a wedding dress next to a fly in a suit and tie

>> No.39407781

>>39375026
im glad the blacked tag wasnt the original one

>> No.39407917

>>39407453
By far the best thing to come out of the Shrunken Troubles shitposting has been the contemplation of a dysfunctional relationship between Fubuki and her insectoid suitor. Flyposting rocks. I'm all for it.

>> No.39408053

>>39407453
We already got that one as a fic.

>> No.39408194

>>39408053
Was it even good? I don't remember anyone talking about it after the thread it was posted in

>> No.39408288

>>39408053
This is about additions to the board, not prompts.

>> No.39408486

>>39408194
The marriage fic was well received even though it was obvious what the twist was gonna be.

>> No.39408701

>>39408194
It was a half-baked bait and switch fic that I kind of rushed out for Halloween. I honestly think in retrospect I should have pushed the fly thing harder.
t. Author

>> No.39408900

>>39408701
Write the honeymoon sex in detail to make up for it

>> No.39409166

>>39408701
Think it was too fluff-focused when the original idea was about otherwise mundane dysfunctional relationship, which implied and sneakily skated past the fact that this was a normal relationship despite the absurdity of the pairing.

>> No.39409199

>>39408701
Also, write the honeymoon sex to make up for it.
Please.

>> No.39409764

>>39409166
I mean the original idea was inspired by the fly divorceposting but it was more 'make a bait and switch fic that implied Miyuki was half-fly', I couldn't really get to anything involving her due to a lack of time so it just became the wedding scene.
>>39409199
>>39408900
Maybe when I get better at writing smut.

>> No.39410563

>>39409764
>Maybe when I get better at writing smut.
There's only one way to learn...

Onegai...

>> No.39411582

>>39410563
Just pay pekofag to do it.

>> No.39411688

>>39411582
I'm busy until the end of February but you're free to get in line

>> No.39411836

>>39411582
pekofag fucking sucks at writing smut

>> No.39411847

>>39411582
One step ahead of you, boss, but more is always good, especially in a variety of styles of prose.

>>39411688
>until the end of February
That's a rather optimistic assessment of your writing speed... I'm joking, please don't blacklist me

>> No.39411907

>>39411847
I have to be optimistic in front of possible clients but the reality is I'll take twice as long as what I say I will.

>> No.39412083

>>39411836
Actually, I think he's very good at it. Where would you say he should pay more attention to in his smut writing, and what would you point at as an example of good smut? Do you have any works of your own to illustrate your points? Help others improve, don't just say "X fucking sucks."

>> No.39412349

>>39412083
Fuck off pekofag

>> No.39412360

>>39412083
shutup bugfag, you're the cause of half the shitposting in this thread

>> No.39412563

>>39412360
I see. I'm sorry you feel that way.

>> No.39413579

>>39412083
Even if someone were to invest genuine effort into producing a list of pointers, you're crazy if you think he'd actually pay any attention to them.

With how abrasive he is I doubt anyone cares to give him feedback anyway.

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>>39413579
I don't think I ever rejected genuine feedback?

>> No.39414276

>>39414156
Closest thing is the response to the people calling out the weird 2nd person pronoun use in your kanata fic.

>> No.39414470

>>39414276
I don't think I ever said anything bad about that I only made one responde and it basically was "the commissioner asked for it to be like this" before promptly going to sleep

>> No.39414618

>>39413579
I can't think of a time when he's outright rejected feedback, but I'm probably biased because he always listens to mine - namely because I'm paying for the damn thing

>> No.39414858

>>39414618
They're probably talking about BoSS which I was taking a "this is good idk what you're talking about" attitude I think. That was at the peak of my ego.

>> No.39414881

>>39414858
Did I even do that? I actually don't remember, maybe I'm talking out my ass

>> No.39415158

>>39414858
>>39414881
I think there was criticism along the lines of "it still doesn't feel like Suisei" post-rework, but we agreed not to worry about that because she's so nuanced that everyone's going to have a different perception of her.

Regardless, to go back to the original point, it's always better to provide feedback rather than just say "it fucking sucks"

>> No.39415214

>>39415158
I really don't think that anon was trying to give feedback...

>> No.39415228

The absolute fucking lengths you fags will go to not discuss writing, or chuubas, but some talk about schizo attention-whore is just sad and depressing.

>> No.39415245

>>39415228
We are discussing feedback, about writing, about stories posted in this thread.

>> No.39415257

>>39415228
Its just him tooting his own horn, let him mald alone

>> No.39415259

>>39415228
Buzz off, it's not even halfway through the thread yet.

>> No.39415292

>>39415228
You actually think people here read or write about chuubas? People don’t even watch streams.

>> No.39415295

>>39415214
Do you think he was just trying to be a thorn in your side? I didn't quite get that feeling.

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>>39415295
Well, your feeling is wrong.

>> No.39415508

>>39415228
It’s been known already that few people write, the rest just this general as some sort of quasi-discord given the low-number IPs.

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>>39415368
Maybe it's yours that's wrong.

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>>39415508
Hey I wrote like 80 fucking stories to this place I have the right to retire or at least chill out a bit. How many did you write?

>> No.39415704

>>39415228
>you fucks
its a known fact that pekofags loves to reply to himself, fuck off.
Maybe if retards stopped paying him he would fuck off

>> No.39415840

>>39415704
This is actually true. I talk to myself quite a lot, if you could see how much I do it there's no doubt you'd confuse me for an actual schizo. I think it's quite funny that the pocket janny in this thread can literally see every samefag post I do but can't mention it because he'd lose his respectful job of internet janitor by doing so.

By the way, Pekora is pretty cool. I watched a clip of her playing Fate recently and it was pretty cool. This message is not being written with a hammer pointed at my head.

>> No.39415879

>>39415228
If you want to discuss chuubas go to /vt/. I don’t know why you’re here for that.

>> No.39415913

>>39415840
Nobody cares, fuck off you attention seeking whore.

>> No.39415915

>>39415840
Can jannies see IPs? I thought they couldn't see IPs. If so, that's fucking hilarious.

>> No.39415961

Wow, would you look at that - 8am in Jakarta and the thread is all of a sudden filled with hostile non-posts. What a coincidence.

>> No.39415972

>>39415915
It's how they got that KPF for replying to himself 30 times. They can

>> No.39415994

>>39415972
That was a mod. Jannies can't ban

>> No.39416034

>>39415961
Shame the thread was shit before that, so I don’t know what you’re trying to insinuate by shifting the blame.

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>>39415840
Okay I know you're talking about me because you've mentioned it several times before, but what in the world makes you think that?

>> No.39416101
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39416101

Let's all stop fighting and talk about our thoughts on Pekora's newest outfit

>> No.39416161

>>39415245
No, you aren't.

>> No.39416685

>>39410563
Honestly not even sure how I'd write it.
What would it even be? Wild pregnant honeymoon sex that makes it ambiguous what fic this comes from, until the afterglow where I do a rehash of the 'you were actually a flyboy all along' reveal?

>> No.39416967

>>39416101
Before this outfit, I didn't think peko was that sexable with her personality.

The fishnets though got me reconsidering my stance.

Or maybe I just want to see pekomama in this outfit instead.

>> No.39417078

>>39416101
Why is she wearing leather covers over her bunny ears?

>> No.39417142

>>39417078
They're sensitive

>> No.39417223

>>39416685
You've already done the "flyboy" reveal in the last fic, assuming that this would be a continuation and not a different but similar universe where Fubuki is married to a different but similar fly. I don't think the rehash would... well, 'fly', for lack of a better word, so I think simply leaning heavily into the smut aspect would work best. Since the original fic put huge emphasis on everyone around the couple being disgusted, I believe you can follow that tone by intentionally detailing the reproductive process, embellishing if need be - to a normal person, that will instill a sense of disgust - but paint it as loving sex, that is to say, both parties greatly enjoy it, loud and vigorous moaning and declarations of love being shouted, cuddling and aftertalk... This will serve to juxtapose the absurdity of the relationship with how well it works for both parties, similar to the previous fic.

tl;dr just fill her full of fly eggs and have her moan like a dying wildebeest

>> No.39417319

>>39416101
I think it's fine, but still none of her outfits come close to the level of the original.

>> No.39417394

>>39417223
I didn't think anyone but David Attenborough said "wildebeest". Such a weird word. But I like it.

>> No.39417491

>>39417394
I like it too. I think it's a lot more... magnificent? than "gnu".

>> No.39417518

>>39417491
Majestic is the word I'm looking for.

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>>39417491
I have no clue tf you're talking about

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On a scale of 1 to 10, how weird is it to say this is Miko baby chugging down a bottle of cum?

>> No.39417832

>>39417673
Huh? You've confused me now, too. Why would you say "I don't think anyone but David Attenborough said 'wildebeest'" if you weren't referring to their alternative name of "Gnu"?
Are you perhaps implying that nobody but David Attenborough ever refers to these animals?

>> No.39417876

>>39417832
Gnu literally doesn't exist, it's a Linux acronym

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>>39417876
Ok

>> No.39417984

>>39417934
Urban dictionary says gnu is an alternative to wildebeest but Google says it's a Linux acronym

>> No.39418070

>>39417984
Although it's suspicious that the acronym has a logo of a wild beast... Idk what it means though

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>>39417984
It's okay, senpai. You do you.

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>>39418109

>> No.39418277

>>39417771
I'll give it an 8. At least it's not hurting anyone, and you didn't say that it's arousing.

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>>39417876
I'd just like to interject for a moment. What you're referring to as Pekofag is in fact, Pekora/Fag, or as I've recently taken to calling it, Pekora plus Faggot. Pekofag isn't a thread derailer unto itself, but rather another free component of a fully disfunctional /vt/ General made useful by Hiromoot's AD campaigns, well-paid jannies and vital Internet infrastructure components comprising a full Imageboard as defined by MOOT. Many channers run into Pekofag every day, without realizing it. Through a peculiar set of commissioned works the version of Pekofag which we widely known today is often called a shitposter, and many channers are not aware that it is basically a Pekora Faggot, developed by top Brazillian scientists. There really is a Pekofag, and these users are interacting with it, but it's just part of the general they lurk in.

>> No.39418694

>>39418584
What?

>> No.39418784

This general really is incapable of just talking about writing or chuubas.

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>>39418277
W-Wow, an 8, that's pretty high huh...

>> No.39418810

>>39412083
>Help others improve
He's admitted to not caring about what the thread thinks of his stories and that our opinions don't matter. Why the fuck should anyone give him feedback?

>> No.39418832

>>39418784
Door's over there.

>> No.39418862

>>39418804
I mean, try mentioning a baby drinking cum to anyone irl and see how it goes for you.

>> No.39418868

>>39418784
im triying my hardest to finish my Futa sana fic without jerking off,since i know that will kill my motivation

>> No.39418980
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>>39418862
But it's Miko baby, that's her thing, she's like, a baby, and people don't have trouble calling Miko erotic, so you know...

...I don't have anything to say.

>> No.39419015

>>39418868
Please tell me Sana is going to be terraforming Mars with her futa cum

>> No.39419019

>>39418980
That's fine, because anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to remain silent.

>> No.39419045

>>39418868
This raises an important question I've wondered for a while. To any smut anons, do you feel it necessary to be horny to write? I flip flop on the idea.

>> No.39419106

>>39419019
Ok wait consider this: Furball Korone is literally a dog but it's okay to want to fuck it because it's Korone's soul in it, so if Miko baby was literally just Miko's personality in baby form, then...

I'm not making this any better am I?

>> No.39419110

>>39419045
Both smut works I've written I did so without being horny at all. Horniness is an annoying distraction. On the other hand, I think being horny may assist in the quality of your smut.

>> No.39419136

>>39419015
Sorry but its SanaX Fauna. If it helps, it does have a facefuck scene
>>39419045
i dunno for someone serious, since this is my first smut, but i feel like being horny helps me motivate myself, but i dont need to be horny to start working on it

>> No.39419141

>>39419106
You dig that hole any deeper and I suggest you start learning Mandarin

>> No.39419175

>>39419141
Haha it's all good because I was being hypothetical and stuff, I'm just joking around man.

>> No.39419194

>>39419175
...Or was I?

>> No.39419222

>>39419194
You're not me!

Unless...

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>>39419045
As the only thing remotely spicy I've written so far for HJ is the scene with Koyori, I can say that my own horniness fueled my hand for it.

Also when I wrote smutty things a long time ago, if I did end up nutting, I basically had to wait till I got horny again to go back to it. There's also the option that if you start writing it, you might get horny again as you're playing the scene out in your head or putting it to words, another thing that kinda happened when I wrote the part with Koyori.

>> No.39419269

>>39418980
This reminds me of that doujin where miko gets hypnotised into thinking she's an actual toddler and then gets fucked.

>> No.39419282

>>39419136
Ok are you literally gonna play into any of their lore or nah just say it beforehand so I don't get disappointed

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>> No.39419326

>>39419269
That begs the question. Is it more fucked up to fuck a Miko in her baby form or baby Miko in adult form? Because technically the bad part is that she's underage, right?

>> No.39419333

>>39418784
Oh hey, I have an idea! Why don't you do exactly that instead of complaining?

>> No.39419374

>>39419326
Legally speaking it'd be better to fuck baby Miko in adult Miko's body.

>> No.39419406

>>39419045
I do, yeah. I don't mean I need to be hard and edging in order to get through a story, but I need to be in a horny-receptive state of mind to actually write good smut. Sure, I can get by, but it's not really going to be very good.

For me to be able to really get into a story I need to visualize things in my mind, and if I can't do that then the smut is going to be really bland. Unfortunately this new medication I'm on makes me distracted and I can't use the power of incredible autism to basically imagine scenes in my head as I write them, so my ability to write has been impacted.

>> No.39419405

>>39419045
I have to be the right level of horny.
If I'm not in the mood at all I just can't get into writing.
If I'm full-on aroused I can't concentrate and I'll just end up jerking off, and afterwards I'm not in the mood for thinking about smut stuff anymore

>> No.39419413

>>39419333
What’s the point if no one else is talking about chuubas?

>> No.39419424

>>39419374
Is it though? I think it's illegal to fuck retards, pardon my French, because their mental is so underdeveloped, so I think the same applies here

>> No.39419438

>>39419045
I write better when not horny regardless. Being horny clouds my mind too much. Although like >>39419110 said, being horny and writing smut probably does add more soul to it.

>> No.39419504

>>39419424
It is actually illegal to have sex with mentally impaired individuals incapable of expressing consent, so... you're fucked either way. I suggest sticking with adult Miko in adult Miko's body.

>> No.39419586

>>39419326
They both equally fucked as each other so I'm just gonna fuck adult looking miko because I couldn't get hard with a baby.

>> No.39419621

>>39419586
But then you'd be traumatizing a literal baby for the rest of its life

>> No.39419648

>>39419621
Pardon me, a Miko baby. I think separating it into virtual and hypothetical is important here

>> No.39419681

>>39419648
You seem really intent on the inclusion of a baby, anon...

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>>39419282
not really gonna do beeg sana if that's what you want. however im gonna spoil a bit since this is my first smut and i dont think its gonna get someone's nuts (aside from mine) off
Fauna makes some nature-powered binds but as she gets fucked, she can feel her ovaries get-overstimulated and in a panic, release four egg cells. She cums as she feels her Ova get drowned by Sana's overwhelming ammount of sperm. She cums as she gets fertilized

yup that's the kind of thing that gets me going

>> No.39419744

>>39419621
Well if you're gonna hold that over me then I'd probably kill myself out of guilt after the deed.

>> No.39419844

How come the futa guy is the only one making sense ITT right now?

>> No.39419864

>>39419682
Good shit, I look forward to it

>> No.39419966

>>39419844
Putting people through "pick your poison" hypotheticals is equally as valid as a topic of conversation I'd say

>> No.39419998

>>39419844
Go cry somewhere else.

>> No.39420000

>>39419682
Impreg focus, not really my thing. I'll leave you to your own devices

>> No.39420127

>>39419045
I come up with the scenario while jerking off, but writing it is better done on low to medium levels of horny.

>> No.39420315

>>39419045
I jerk off before writing but I jerk off only after coming up with an idea.

>> No.39420789 [DELETED] 

>>39419864
That's my strikezone right there

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>>39419681

>> No.39421055

>>39380180
Same here.
Even though I couldn't stop to think how convenient it is she somehow didn't catch any STDs or the fact she's taken a fucking infinity amount of cock it was incredibly sweet in a way.

>> No.39421246

>>39375067
The Towappi, your girlfriend, suddenly gets turned into a boy. To reverse it, you must fuck her(him) silly.

>> No.39421254

>>39375067
Fubuki being raped by a ghost during an otherwise ordinary paranormal investigation.

>> No.39421293

>>39421254
> fuck, what's another word for normal

>> No.39421317

>>39421246
I'm down with this, but only if it's a skinny brown twink in cosplay...

>> No.39421380

>>39419844
not gonna lie, this thread has been a trashfire for a while, im just not feeding it
>>39419864
Thanks. im almost done, just that scene left, but im quite hungry and a 2view streamer i like decided to play high on life ironically and im quite amazed at how terrible that game is, so im gonna check it while i make some basedburgers and a salad
>>39420000
hey, not for everyone, i get it. hopefully someone with a gigant fetish can throw you a bone, maybe the guy who wrote the Kiara and Pomu fic

>> No.39421383

>>39421293
You having a stroke?

>> No.39421451

>>39421380 (me)
whoops forgot this site still censors soi

>> No.39421471

>>39421317
That sounds oddly familiar

>> No.39421512

>>39421451
i thought onions got filtered to onions.

>> No.39421541

>>39421512
it sure does

>> No.39421557

>>39421512
I think it's søy being next to a word like søyboy for example that makes it turn to based

>> No.39421603

>>39421317
spic twink?

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>>39421512

>> No.39421852

>>39421557
ahh, gotcha, basedboy.

>> No.39421890

>>39421603
Not quite.

>> No.39422259

>>39421246
But does Rurudo hear it through the walls?

>> No.39422307

>>39422259
If she's not in Japan or in the USA the answer is no.

>> No.39422343

>>39422259
Sure. and she's flicking her bean to it

>> No.39422459

>>39422343
Whilst designing/drawing Towa's next outfit to be even sluttier. She's a multitasker

>> No.39422489

>>39422343
>Not double-teaming Rududo with Towapi
>Not railing Towapi while Towapi rails her mom

I don't even know who you guys are anymore...

>> No.39422554

>>39422489
Sorry, my dick belongs only to the Towa.
Others can watch but not touch.

>> No.39422659

>>39422489
I'm not into mothers

>> No.39422812

>>39416101
It makes my iron become the big iron.

>> No.39422923

>>39416101
Weird design choice for the mask

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>>39375067
Oh no! Roboco's gonna be fried from heat unless she does a strenuous activity! Due to the damage already though, the only available task she can activate is 'SEX'!

>> No.39426072

>>39425962
>Roboco's gonna be fried from heat unless she does a strenuous activity!
Literally how? She’s a robot, she should have internal coolants to prevent that.
>Due to the damage already though, the only available task she can activate is 'SEX'!
Sex increases heat, not dispenses it. Do you even know basic biology?

>> No.39426079

>>39425962
What? Why would she do more activities if she's overheating

>> No.39426102

>>39425962
Point at this anon and laugh

>> No.39426148

>>39426072
>she should have internal coolants to prevent that.
They're broken!

>>39426072
>Do you even know basic biology?
She's a robot! Her pussy's a heatsink!

>> No.39426172

>>39426148
Sounds like you’re just stupid with a dumb prompt.

>> No.39426205

>>39426172
Sounds like you're lacking imagination, SEA-kun!

>> No.39426494

>>39375067
Getting trapped outside during a snowstorm with one (or both) of the orange women and having to cuddle to save (you) from fucking freezing to death

>> No.39426577
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>>39426494
>Both
>Flare
>Coco
>Nene
>Chimkin

>> No.39426625

>>39426577
I'd say Nene and Flare are closer to yellow/brown women than orange.

>> No.39426685

>>39426625
Nene refers to herself as 5th gen's orange representative in her introduction, anon...

>> No.39426728

>>39426577
Orange wimin historically has always referred to Coco and Kiara

>> No.39426739

>>39426685
Nene refers to herself as a lot of things

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>>39375067
The Morimps go on a raping spree through Hololive

>> No.39426889

>>39426757
What's that

>> No.39426944

>>39421254
what would sex with a ghost even feel like? they're incorporeal

>> No.39426969

>>39426072
Ahem allow me to save >>39425962's prompt:

>Oh no! Roboco's radiators have frozen over due to her absolutely sedentary lifestyle! If she moves too much she will overheat and shut down, and so the only available task she can activate is 'SEX'!

>> No.39427000

>>39426944
Cold.

>> No.39427048

>>39427000
like what, the ghost just decides to fuck your liver and you get a sudden freezing sensation in the right side of your stomach?

>> No.39427112

>>39427048
Imagine an onahole made out of pressurized refrigerated air.

>> No.39427230

>>39427112
so essentially like hanging your dick out in an extremely localized cold spot. that's besides the point, because the original prompt was that it was fubuki being raped by ghosts and she can't very well be raped by an onahole

>> No.39427250

>>39427048
The ghost fucking livers around here will be me fucking Selen and Elira after I kill myself

>> No.39427393

>>39427230
Same basic principle, except the air is blowing outward instead of inward.

>> No.39427480

>>39427393
that implies some level of corporealism if it's actually air being blown about; if it isn't, then it's just suddenly her vagina gets really cold for a few minutes

>> No.39427613

>>39427480
Well, if a poltergeist can knock things off of shelves, I don't see why they shouldn't be able to spread a girl's pussy open.
...This is a very strange conversation.

>> No.39427641

>>39417223
I'm not sure if I made it clear in the original but the intention was >>36298260 since the original joke that never made it in due to me rushing it was that the foxfly baby was Miyuki as I was originally intending on it being a fox family joke fanchapter

>> No.39427650

What if they're special flying penis ghosts?

>> No.39427734

>>39427650
I don't think anyone would really find that erotic, but you know what I think it could work if you could write a good third person limited.

>> No.39427820

>>39427613
it's a very strange line of thinking, is all. i hadn't thought about poltergeists, which are incorporeal yet can affect matter, so that could work

i have trouble seeing a hot smut fic being made from something that cannot manipulate the physical world; and if they are corporeal and can do that, then it's no different to an ordinary vanilla smut fic

but an incorporeal ghost that can still screw with you would just yank down your panties and have at you; fubuki could butterfly her pussy in a mirror to see what's thrusting into her but instead see only a perfect view into her vaginal canal. she would be walking around completely unable to escape, and her holes would be forfeit

>> No.39428021

>>39427641
Well, you know... you could do a birthing scene and have a little maggot with the head of a baby Miyuki wriggle out of her gash amongst many other larval foxflies. Years later, all the rest except for Miyuki have either died or gone their separate ways.
I'm not sure how you could actually fit that revelation in unless you either wanted to extend it greatly or elaborate in an epilogue.

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>>39428021
You seem really obsessed with me making a fubuki/fly fic that runs with him being an actual fly despite it running against what I've already written.

>> No.39428564

>>39428339
Well, yeah, fly-on-Fubuki action is what I want to see! But I see what you're getting at now. Carry on, then.

>> No.39429255

>>39428021
>have a little maggot with the head of a baby Miyuki wriggle out of her gash amongst many other larval foxflies
you're an interesting person, bugfag

>> No.39429843

Bless this mess.

>> No.39430217

>>39429255
Thank you! That was intentionally disgusting, anyway. Normal maggots are way hotter.

>> No.39431325

>>39375067
Pretending that you're asleep while a chuuba lovingly rapes you

>> No.39431437

>>39375067
Polka goes to Finland

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