/wg/ - Writing General - Valentine's Day Edition

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/wg/ - Writing General - Valentine's Day Edition

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>68958272

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Story Anchor
Post em if you got em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap. There where two stories posted last thread

Sea Salt Chocolate >>69007647
Tags: Houshou Marine, Fluff, Comedy, Valentine's Day

Shameful Desire Part 2: Regretful Desire >>69025842
Tags: Sakamata Chloe, NSFW, NTS+NTR, some romance.

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>>69129544
Being Choco's manager and having her guilt trip you into taking her on a date because she wasn't asked out for Valentine's. She does let you hit because you made an earnest effort at a romantic outing.

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>>69129249
Choco, my beloved.

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>>69129544
A national geographic-style expose on fat fucks in the wild.

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So, how are your wips coming along anon?
Bonus Question: What's a fic you liked that doesn't seem to get talked about? Say something about it, maybe the writer's still here.

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>>69135531
I was thinking about Fauna while I was at work and was brainstorming ideas for some 'Fauna of The Four Seasons' thing, and it's distracting my efforts to write.

Bone-us: Waterfall of Love (and Blood) is a fic that's long dead and only in the hard archive now because the links dead, but is kind of a progenitor of that Cover Hitman idea that there are a few fics about going now. It's not super great or anything, and Nene is like early debut Nene so it's super dated in terms of what she's like, but I think it had a lot of potential. Shame that time's long gone.

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>>69135531
Last night, I wrote a bit more, and now I'm at 2.5k approx words now.

Bonus: Shoutouts to Knightly Collaborations for daring to do what most would not for various reasons.

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Rise

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So how about those chuubas? Sure are sexy.

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>>69141843
Lately I’ve been finding this one very sexy

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>>69136533
>'Fauna of The Four Seasons
I have to ask, would Winter Fauna have white/bluish white hair or would she be bald?

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>>69142576
The funny answer is bald but no I had white hair in mind

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>>69142196
Ru...

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>>69143241
>(Lu)shia
>(Lu)cahjin
holy shit

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>>69142917
Is that... Is that Fauna with Fubuki's hairstyle and eyes, or is that Fubuki with Fauna's clothing, hair accessories and hair parting? I just... I don't know. I'm confused.

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>>69142917
What a friendly looking fauna you have there.

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>>69142917
faunbuki my beloved....

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>>69143377
Her name was supposed to be Lucia

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>>69143731
Anon, look at the chest...

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>>69144283
Fan artists play around with chests sometimes, okay? When it comes to fanart, everybody's breasts are in a transitional state of existence!

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>>69129432
https://anonymousnovelite.github.io/TowerOfTattle/PartVI/episode01/index.html

Part VI episode 1! Finally new stuff, right? Though it's not quite new if you happened to read it when I first posted it as a teaser. It was actually already on the site, funny enough, but just not on the index. And come Monday (or probably Sunday night for you guys, Monday morning for the twitter post) will be the actual new new content, part VI episode 02.

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>>69144280
>the spirit of Rushia finds its way into a sexy 47 year old horse woman who makes dumb toilet jokes
amazing

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>>69143731
You can usually tell by the eye colour.

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>>69143731
Yes

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>>69145821
Practically my idea of heaven.

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>>69135531
Well, I finished Sea Salt Chocolate and I haven't decided if I want to do another shorter WIP or something longer.
>Bonus
Miko Noises is cute and always gets a laugh out of me.

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Clear.

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>>69148290
Foreshadowing says you need to write about what was happening in that tv scene.

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>>69149946
Hmm. Not so sure about that.
Maybe in some form down the road

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>>69144280
Lucia...
Lyrica...

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>>69135531
I’m sorry Kiara, I haven’t opened Google docs in weeks now.

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>>69153314
Then open it now and start writing.

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>>69135531
I want to work on it but there's like 6 hours of assignments closing in and I think I'm gonna get addicted to the binding of Isaac, again.

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>>69153738
Write a hundred words every time you get hit in Isaac.

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>>69153822
Intentional self-damage doesn't count, right? Right?

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>>69154120
Would you look at your oshi in the face and say that it doesn't count?

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>>69154225
I dunno, dont play what he said

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>>69145821
How did you get an image of all my wives

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>>69154120
alright let's cut out the middle man and say 500 words per death, and for hard mode, add an additional 50 words per level beat

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>>69129544
A sequel to "Something About Us" where a strange blonde thief breaks into your house and tries to convince you she's your dead wife.

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>>69159266
Too soon, dude.

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>>69159266
When you need her most, she'll be there.

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>>69157518
Ayame kawaii child. Where's subaru though?

>>69158674
Mumei Wife? Or at least a mumei girlfriend fic. Maybe it could be sorta like a sequel to one of those Mumei stalking fics? Like Mumei gets close enough to semi-casually stalk ye later after her early days meeting you?

>>69159266
Noice. This sounds like it could make a pretty good fic.

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>>69159746
The crash was nearly three years ago but...
>>69159948
Who really planned that crash on that fateful day?

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>>69161156
>Ayame kawaii child. Where's subaru though?
Preparing dinner

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>>69161620
So, basically Subaru is doing child labor while Mio plays with favored child?

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>>69161943
That's just a household chore, not child labour.

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>>69163333
It's labor done by a child. Hence child labor by definition.

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>>69164168
Try telling people that child labour is extremely common in first world countries sometime, then - to see if they agree with your defition.

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>>69144512
How many parts will there be? I want to know the ending!

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>>69129544
suisei seducing you with her flatness

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>>69166166
Hey, at least hers bump her dress lol

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>>69166166
She's just that much easier to flip over to start fondling her shapely ass.

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>>69167725
God I need a naizuri from her

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>>69166166
What if you went to the beach with the boys, and only you knew Susei isn't a boy but actually your crush (and she knows what you know?).

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>>69168360
i kinda have an idea where
>Appear on Suicomet stream as staff-san
>one of Miko's breathmouth comments is how there's nothing sexual about suisei. they have you nod
>later on Suisei corners you
>Flat chests are actually the best arent they?
>uuuh
>cue to sex with her flat chest and shooting like a geyser
>"See? I can be sexy if i want"

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>>69168360
I need to put my cum all over those sweaty pits

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>>69169363
Yeah that too

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>>69165187
It's gonna be eight parts and part vii and part viii are gonna be multi episode like part vi.

Yeahhh. I mean I'll just say that I sincerely am grateful to readers, especially any who stick around while the story expands. I'm hoping the least I can offer is regular updates twice a week on the same days every time. Though between parts vi and vii for example there may be a break I'll have to see when I get there. Just for reference part vi has quite a few episodes built up, about 15 (though the back end of that needs a lot of revision still).

So yeah I think by the end of it tower of tattle will be word count wise in the same ballpark as some of the really long stories here

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To the person who recommended me the Polka fluff yesterday. They were cute, didn't quite hit the spot but they were good. Holomoms though, you're a right fucker for that. I didn't need to cry more, some of the those broke me. They are good.

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>>69171212
Glad you had some good reads. Mad props to the writers of all of those.

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>>69172197
I'm grateful bit at the same time I'm upset. Fuck a couple of those hit hard.

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What are the best pet play portrayals?

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>>69172868
>Kobo beating someone up for talking shit about you
My heart melted. Dammit, I need all of these in a 8 chapter series form each.

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>>69173154
Yes, that one, and the Botan one, fuck man I was not ready.

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>>69173121
Right now the best we might have are the collaring greentexts.

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>>69146405
Damn, I kinda wish there was a fic about Fucking Fubuki in the Ass.

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>>69173121
Power Botan and Extrapedestrial

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>>69176641
Me too. Several hundred of them.

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>>69176641
Like Absolutely Annihilating Ayame's Anus, except it's Frenzily Fucking Fubuki's Farthole.

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Stay alive.

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Alright, since were on energy saving mode
>Last Fic you read
>All time favorite
>Minor favorite
>Non-prose fic that you like
>One you're still holding out hope for.

>The Kiara /ss/ story
>Our Cures
>Undeniable proof of Sakura Miko's heterosexuality
>HoloLogs and HoloMoms
>Pale Blue

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>>69181279
>Sea Salt Chocolate
>HF
>ALS
>Holologs and Holomoms will this one for me too
>Suisei maid being jealous over fat fucking aqua dumpy
I more so just want to read more about Aqua's fat plush ass barely being contained by her skirt, and I don't want to have to write it myself. I already got too much ass on my plate.

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>>69129544
>Do you have a story you'd like to see written?
Okay, here goes...

A cute and wholesome yuri story about Baelz and IRys going ice skating for the first time. They're still friends at the beginning of the story but begin to realize they have affection for one another. It would be cute to read about them slipping and falling into one another's arms, trying to keep themselves upright; learning to lean and rely on each other, just like in a romantic relationship.

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>>69183205
This, but they're roller-skating naked and they accidentally slam clams.

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>>69182377
>>Suisei maid being jealous over fat fucking aqua dumpy
Wasn't Aqua the maid and Suisei your sister and/or a noblewoman?

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>>69184375
There were a few different takes on it, but yeah Suisei being your sister and a noble was the original prompt, but she ultimately puts on the maid outfit anyway to try and sway you from sullying your dick with peasant coochie.

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>>69181279
>Little Big Auntie
>Kintsugi
>Heartbreak Tokyo
>Holoslavia Landing Page and FacelessDegenerates(.)com
>First Summer Memories

Nonprose fics got me thinking that we need more extensive lore codexes from authors. I know I'm not the only one with a massive thing of worldbuilding that's barely going to get used
I should do those autistically in-depth Servent profiles for Holomems too

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>>69186209
>we need more extensive lore codexes from authors.
I agree, since I love reading through that kinda stuff. It's on the To-Do list to make one of my own. The dream is to one day make an interactive web zone that will have all the bells and whistles. One step at a time though.

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>>69159266
You meant a sequel to the truly surprising ending of "My hypercompetitive dragon wife"?

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>>69179470
That's a lovely fic title.

Maybe I'll steal that...

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glad to see holomoms is getting a lot of talk. I really enjoy having a "braindump" space update soon mayhaps? i never did towarys and i kinda feel some ideas going here and there
>>69181279
>Seasalt Chocolate
>Moonshine blues
>Grab as much (as you can)
>Fujo Chadcast Discussion/Outline
>Quite a bit but Alt Suisei is probably the biggest one

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>>69129544
The adventures of Noel and Shota Sankisei.

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>>69181279
>LapZuri
>High-Density Comet
>Heated Negotiations
>not my thing honestly
>There was a guy who said he'd try and write a Cromartie Holostars fic and I still think that'd be fuckin funny

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>>69192609
can i get a sauce please? furiously googling gets me nothing

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>>69193473
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/91880043

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>>69193579
you a real one my friend

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>>69181279
>the new tower of tattle episode
>our cures
>onis rebellion
>hag testing
>noble lady suisei wanting to get you away from maid aqua's fat ass

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>>69129544
Going grocery shopping with your oshi.
>Bickering over what brand to choose
>scouring the whole store for twenty minutes to find that one last item you need
>Playing rock paper scissors over who gets to pay

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i just want a fic where you fuck begrudgingly fuck a fatty but by the 4th shot she's wringing out of you its very clear you are loving it

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>>69129249
Whoa, milk chocolate.

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>>69197113
Whole Lotta Okayu

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Are there any stories where a chuuba is protecting anon?

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>>69129544
The world in which all metaphysical concepts revolve around Watamelon.

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>>69200241
A big theme in holojournys is how anon is protected and supported by his hags while he tries to do the same for them.

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>>69202411
Thank you!

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>>69202411
This is going to take time I didn't realize I was getting into an epic.

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>>69188867
Yes. Bonus points if in the interim between the crash and doki breaking in you married Elira.

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>>69206298

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>>69200241
If you like greentext "Hyper Leather Vector Chloe" is a fic that kinda goes into that direction.

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>>69200241
A short fic that has Anon protecting Fubuki while also getting protected by Fubuki is called "Fubuki's hero"

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>>69191083
>holomoms
If you do get back to writing that, can you go back to the original idea and make some 'flipped dynamics' of having the typical mother/daughter be reversed?

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No, not yet! You must live!

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What does the robutt feel like?

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>>69210426
how much longer must we suffer?
when does this pain end?

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>>69211691
it will only end with the creation of /vtg/
the board cannot be salvaged, it is far too tainted

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>>69212033
where's that one novelite who said this would be over in a week. we need to weaponize his bad luck power and have him claim it will last the entire year, and hopefully that'll fix everything

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>>69212033
From the ashes a new /wg/ will be born. Evolved but unchanged! The writers will write, not for (You)s, not for commissions, not because they were told to, but for what THEY want to write.

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>>69212383
That’ll make it last 5 years

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>>69208649
sure thing. Any idea? i was thinking maybe AyaMio

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>>69212033
Rapeape doesn't care enough to separate /vt/ into two different boards. And the problem with changing into /vtg/ is that all the retards that infest this board are going to have nowhere else to go. A similar thing happened when /qa/ was wiped out.

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>>69213077
I was referring into the creation of a new board, no way in fucking hell would making /vt/ into /vtg/ do anything
Like I said, this board is entirely unsalvageable

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>>69213077
Who is this...rapeape? Dont tell me they're...THE power-that-be on vt?

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>>69129544
Snow Leopard Zeta getting collared for being a bratty cat

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>>69212944
>AyaMio
I think that could be interesting; especially since the thing it makes me think of is.
>Single Mom rrat!ayame
>Her promiscuity finally caught up to her, and she doesn't know who the father is.
>Finally getting knocked up shakes her up and gets her to shape up
>Now she tries to be a good example for little Mio while avoiding falling into her old habits.

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>>69213299
As nice as that would be, I don't think it'll ever happen. Checked.
>>69213367
Lurk moar newfag.

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>>69212533

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>>69202128
I kind of want to write this but it would just end up being Aristotle and Gura talking about a watamelon themed monad.

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>>69217188
do it anyway

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Rise

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>>69212533
I still remember that thread where we talked about Anon facing Papa Rat in a Senator Armstrong-esque showdown
>"Why don't you DIE?!"
>"MATING PRESSES, SON!"

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I should really stop leaving writing to when I'm already extremely tired and unable to concentrate...I need to find my goldilock zone of night time quietude and being too late to be productive.

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>>69217188
Maybe Plato's work about Atlantis was written with Gura's input.

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>>69223828
I usually write after dinner so around 7-7:30 PM. Most people in my house have retreated to their rooms by then so it's nice and quiet. Plus it's a nice way to form the habit.
Not sure about your situation but you would always try something like that.

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>>69223828
I watched Starship Troopers for the first time today and the start of that gif really made me wince

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>>69129544
In preparation for your first time together, Suisei has done her research and has read a bunch of hentai doujins in order to be properly (read: awkwardly) seductive and playful.

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>>69229987
>Instead of reading romantic vanilla erodoujins suisei reads wacky fantasy corruption/rape doujins.
>Entire time acts like a defeated heroine swearing about how she'll never betray her master.

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>>69230384
>"Go ahead, try me! Ill never break to your m-monsterous cock! Suisei says.
>"Nailed it, good job me, I bet he'll love it" she thinks, puffing her chest out in triumph
>"Suisei what the fuck are you talking about?" you ask, standing there in your boxers.

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>>69231422
>Suisei switching character, going from everything between succubus going after a hero to overconfident adventurer going after goblins
>Until finally she just gives up
>"Anon, what the hell do you want?"

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>>69232902
I only want my shooting star/
and I want her as you are.

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>>69230384
>Suisei? Why do you have a halberd in your bedroom?
>Why are you standing like that? What do you mean pick up the sword you picked out? Wha?
>AIEEEEEEEE
>"What a cute little hero. Guess this means I get to take my prize~"

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Not yet~

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>>69129544
indulging in watame's breading fetish by covering botan with a light coat of breadcrumbs

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>>69237339
>Botan is both disappointed she's not getting sandwiched and completely amused by the situation

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>>69237339
Where did this Watame breeding fetish thingy even start?

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>>69238366
dont exactly remember how, but anon mentioned something like "a chuuba that is so in love with you/your seed that she wants it to prosper everywhere, encouraging you to spread it far and wide"
Watame fell into that roll because she's a horny sheep that's also really sweat and would fit a "my friends get a piece of my hubby because he's the best and deserves the best and they are the best and deserve the best" while also being enough of a freak to propose something as weird as "hey please impregnate my friends" with a smile and no ulterior motives.

That gave birth to "A sheep's need to breed", which is pretty good and features resident hag kitty, which also helps the myth because of her M tastes and the inversion of the usual "botan eats watame" trope

TLDR: ITs a fun idea, features two beloved chuubas, features hags and impregnation and is easy to slot in everywhere

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Uhh...
>Chuuba you find easiest to write
>Chuuba you find hardest to write
>Favorite Chuuba to write

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>>69238736
god this fucking picture drives me so fucking insane its unreal. if my sheep wife presented this sexy lion to me telling me to seed her to guarantee my bloodline lives on for generations i would put 5 in her minimum then impregnate my sheep wife and all her friends good fucking god this is hot

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>>69238736
>>69240451
>pounding Botan's pussy while you tug on her leash
>Watame sits in the cuck chair the entire time looking at you like this

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>>69240218
>chuuba you find easiest to write
Nerissa so far seems to be the easiest. She rarely mumbles and is very extroverted, so her way of speaking kind of feels like a nice neighbor you share anime with. She also doesnt "abuse" memes, meaning that those are not part of her personality and more of a suplement
>Chuuba you find hardest to write
Genuinely, more than hajime (???) Miko (Mikonese) and Korone (really thick accent) id say the hardest would be someone like Moona. Indonesian is already fucking impenetrable, but add a quirky girl that loves subtle puns/crass humor and barely speaks english and you are out of luck. Doesnt help that the one thing that helps "cheat" with Kaela (her broken speech and her gap moe) dont work on Moona since she never sticks to her image and her english is nt good enough.
>Favorite Chuuba to write
Mori is really flexible but i guess its Kiara, since i've written her twice already

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>>69240665
>all while she fondles her tits and plays with herself either waiting for her turn, or what she hopes for more secretly, you give her some denial play and walk right past her to fuck her gemmates

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>>69240665
I feel like she'd either be next to you or lying right next to Botan. She might also be masturbating.

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>>69240218
>Chuuba you find easiest to write
Marine
>Chuuba you find hardest to write
Miko
>Favorite Chuuba to write
Peko-chan

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>>69240451
>>69240665
i love the implication that Botan is strong enough to break out at any point, but subconsciously choses not to.
Perfect shit, i fucking love it. Hag kitty needs a litter

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Kitanya became a vtuber who was capable of acting out her characters lore, and lived happily ever after.

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>>69243175
Who

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>>69244076
https://www.youtube.com/@Kitanya_Is_Here/

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Up

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>>69129544
Making out with Shion

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>>69248645
Go on...

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>>69249351
Pinning Shion down and making out with her as she tries to push you off, not because she doesn't want to but because she has work stuff to do.

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>>69250169
"Jeez anon, am I that irresistible? Ha!"

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>>69250570
"Neee...I guess you need to make the most out of it when you finally get it up, huh?"

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Getting personality right is so hard.

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>>69250690
"Oh wait, is it up already? I barely felt it haha!"

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>>69241049
Sauce for that?

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>live.

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Anyone cooking something with lamy?

>>69255611
https://twitter.com/penguru_086

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>>69240218
Of the ones I've written?
>Chuuba you find easiest to write
Bae. Her being extroverted and sweet yet still self-reflective makes it pretty easy to write her dialog and actions.
>Chuuba you find hardest to write
Towa. She's a reserved person so I had to take real care to parse her character. Paid off but still.
>Favorite Chuuba to write
Suisei. Extremely flexible. Can be serious when need be, dorky when need be, sweet when need be.

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>>69240990
>>69240738
I'm curious as to what you guys find difficult when writing Miko? I wrote her once and granted it wasn't a huge story but I wouldn't call writing her difficult. I have been meaning to write a bigger story with her so maybe I'll change my tune.

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>>69230384
>>69231422
>>69232902
You know as funny as this is, I feel like Suisei isn't quite the right fit for it. Shes too self-aware I feel. Miko or Nene would work a lot better imo.

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>>69260012
No, but that troublesome rear is enticing.

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>>69266656
Miko did end up raping Pekora because she tried canoodling her like girls in depraved yuri mangas do.

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>>69266875
I think Miko has the right amount of airheadedness and pervertedness to no sell it. She's an avid eroge/nukige consumer so she knows the tropes but is inexperienced with men and not self-aware enough to question it.

Suisei is too self-aware and not naive enough to do the fantasy angle. She would treat normal vanilla doujins as a kind of instruction manual ala shoujo manga and romance.

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>>69264294
for me its more of the mikonese elements that make up the entirety of miko.
Miko without her speech and verbal ticks feels really weird, and like Korone, there's a bit of an accent that you have to be a bit concious about.
Its like writing a cowboy. Write too much"howdy" and "partner" and its a parody, but add none of that and it isnt a cowboy at all

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>>69271516
I think I see what you mean. What did you write that had Miko in it?

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>>69272885
its basically into backlog hell but it was a oneshot about the typical "No way migo the dumbass can be cute" when she, indeed, can be super cute

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>>69273709
Ah. I know the feeling but it's still a bummer. I'd read the hell out of that for what its worth.

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Wake up

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>>69252564
I want a subversion of the teasy brat trope where the MC actually cries and the brat feels really bad about it.

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>>69251227
You can say that again, man.

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>>69279205
>God dammit, Shion. Now look what you've done. You've made someone cry, again. Just don't know when to shut the hell up, do you? This is why nobody likes you. Idiot. Moron. Disgusting. You should apologize for even existing.

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>>69280497
Dont...

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Up

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>>69238736
Watame ordering her to give you a blowjob, laying her across her knees, and spanking her the entire time so she works faster.

[Anonymous No.]

Talk about your WIPs
Now.

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>>69286215
The first one was supposed to be a short exercise to get me back into the swing of things, but the brain went bad and now it's taking much longer than it should. I have the whole sequence of events lined up in my head, I just can't get myself to write it out. It's also my first time writing a fic from second-person perspective, which has affirmed that I vastly prefer third-person.
The other WIP is a sequel that I need to make live up to the first one, so that's been intimidating me and making me procrastinate.

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>>69280497
Cue Depresshion

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If you woke up as a girl, what would be the first thing you'd do?
other than masturbate or have sex

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>>69289702
Masturbate and have sex.

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>>69271083
>>69266656
>>69273709
>>69129544
Fic where Miko acts like a brat from a 2koma instant loss comic but then gets surprised when she isn't instantly mating pressed.
>Nye... Why am I not being bred yet?
>Thats... not how real life works Miko.

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Uh... Chuubas in alternate setttings, throw out some concepts.
Bump

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>>69289702
I'd probably fuck one of my friends so he doesn't die a virgin
Also masturbate because I'm curious about how it feels.

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>>69289702
limit test my bladder. I find it really weird how much smaller female bladders are compared to male ones.
Also i would probably masturbate but i would try all the female only options, like the laundry machine or a subwoofer

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>>69289702
Realistically, what else is there to try? Shitting in the women's bathroom? Wearing a skirt without people thinking you're a queer? Gain a bunch of orbiters by streaming with a virtual avatar?

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>>69289702
Uh... um....
Go clothes shopping I guess? Girl's got cute clothes. Ask my female friends to help me shop for clothes and underwear cause God knows I have no clue

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>>69295920
And then pretend to be afraid of men except for conveniently chat.

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>>69286215
Im sorry Anya, i havent touched my wip in a while...
But what i do have is a very small Holomoms update, so please dont shoot me
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRwbjPSqY3I64grZl_y3_V_KnNoinOqObqUZs8Yf4kODT_paFY98wCZOZFlIuQgNLphHgi9I7vOF5o4/pub

>>69293991
>Reaper Kiara
>Depressed Lone Wolf(Lion) Botan
>Idol Dream is over Miko (OL Miko being depresso)
>Alt menhera suisei my beloved
>Skittish and shy Ollie

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>>69286215
I'm almost done with the pilot to my hopefully first series

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>>69302589
500 words away from my own series pilot

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>>69293991
The Calliopeople timeline, where Gura and Calli switch events happening to them, as well as attitudes and traits.

So in this timeline:

>Gura had the lean yab
>Calli had the hiatus
>Shinkiro was with Calli instead
>Gura got the Universal deal
>Calli is the "CGDCT Queen"
>Gura is enemy number 1 in Vt

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>>69293991
Chuubas in Outremer.

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>>69303267
Ugh
>/vt/ calls her Calli, meanwhile the rest of the fandom calls her Mori.
>Horny copypastas like picrel are about Gura instead.
>/wg/ occasionally gets horny prompts about wanting to fuck a sweaty Gura while she 'Sha-ha-harks"

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>>69289702
sing

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>>69306224
Morig regular by any chance?

What was the default of that third point then?...

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>>69300890
>WataBotan
Feels a bit halfbaked, especially since you didn't really lean into the mother/daughter relationship here. Then again they're not really a mom/daughter relationship in the first place so I can see why you just leaned into chaining together a watame single mom idea, and a botan daughter idea.
>AyaMio
It's an okay premise, I like how you leaned a bit into the lazy oni rrat.
I think the premise/extended epilogue format is kind of fucking you here since you're naturally structuring it as wife's part for the premise while the kid gets her part in the epilogue. So how the kid gets raised is effectively thrown into the ??? in between.
>>69306530
Nah, just someone that found that soundpost while wandering threads.
The default of the third point is in reference to the fact that we're more likely to get horny prompts about mori than gura so in the inverse we'd get more gura prompts than mori. i.e in that universe 'Utterly Deranged Horny Calliope Fluffsmut Ramblings' would be a greentext that spun off of Gura teasing (You) about wanting to bang mamashark into a greentext chain about growing up, going to school, and having like 3 kids with Gura.

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Clear.

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>open up porn
>watch for 30 seconds
>get bored
>rewrite scene in my head to be about me fucking a chuuba
>cum
This hobby has ruined me. I do it every single time.

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>>69286215
I have an outline and the greentext I based it off of.

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>>69302911
Pic related? either way, I hope it goes well for you anon.

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>>69302589
Sure hope your pic is related!

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>>69289702
Masturbate and have sex. I'm already a girl.

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>>69315774
Post tits with timestamp or leave.

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>>69315833
How's 2008? Obama's going to win the election in November, by the way.

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> mfw going to sleep knowing I didn't write for the past 3 days

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>>69315908
YWNBAW no matter how much of your dick you get chopped off

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>>69315774
What fics do you enjoy most?

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I refuse to accept that there's women here until we get a femanon self insert protagonist.

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>>69316104
Tower of Tattle

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>>69316104
Curious Tenshi

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>>69316181
oh shit

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>>69316248
That's not an anon now is it

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>>69316181
Can we have another one?

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>>69316281
Fuck you

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>>69316494
Yeah bet you'd like to

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A question for the thread.
How do you handle the fact that calling her 'Mori' is mostly a /vt/ism? Do you shift what everyone else calls her to that or do you make that a character trait for (You)?

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>>69317548
I handle it by not thinking of her at all.

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>>69317548
Mori is her last name and nobody in Hololive really calls each other by their last names with the exception of Chloe(?). The EN girls certainly wouldn't call her Mori. You could do Anon calling her Mori at first and then switch to Calliope (and then even just Calli) as they get more familiar and friendly with each other. You know, typical Japanese social etiquette stuff.
If I was writing Mori, especially in a romance/fluff scenario, I would never call her Mori in it.

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>>69316025

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>>69317945
>image macros straight from reddit

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>>69240897
I want to put a chastity belt on Watame and have her orgasm only from watching me breed her friends.

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>>69318211
Take your pills and go.

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>>69303267
i was wondering why this post got filtered and i remembered i put that dogshit meme term in there to stop the gura threads from showing up lmao.

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>>69315967

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>>69317945
>deleted

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Adios, shitposter. Don't come back.

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What's the onomatopoeia for fucking a rock and her mom?

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>>69318639
Which one? Lean? Hiatus?

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>>69321461
cgdct garbage.
it was already a must filter in /a/ because it was ground for shitposting years ago but here is the number 1 term to filter gura bait threads and posts aside from maybe "shork" and SNOT
i highly reccomend using it since it cuts like, 40% of the catalog and a good chunk of replies when they switch targets to her

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>>69321667
Man, too bad that acronym is so specific. A pseudo-shitpost fic having a secret super weapon with that specific acronym sounds hilarious.

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>>69313358
No, tho it did inspire me.
It's indo birbhag

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>>69321667
Ah.
Yep, you do that, and I should too. Because they're mostly by unicorn nigs

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>>69320566
I think that's called getting nutty putty'd.

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>>69289702
Become morbidly obese

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>>69307302
yeah these two were me de-railing a bit from the usual formula in order to not get stale. Thanks for reading anyway.
Ayamio was definitely the "weirdest" to write for me because the limited scope doesnt allow for the "rratayame" to develop, but i had a lot of fun with shishiwata precisely because the original idea of these shorts is UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH SINGLE MOTHER EROTIC and also sparkling some karmic jab at the shitbag by killing him with kindness.
i also think that its extremely sad as a concept to have a kid and for them to not even acknowledge you. kinda wanna write an idea where you dont know you had a kid with that one fling and so 10 years later you try and mend that bridge

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>>69325905
>i also think that its extremely sad as a concept to have a kid and for them to not even acknowledge you. kinda wanna write an idea where you dont know you had a kid with that one fling and so 10 years later you try and mend that bridge
I mean it's kind of running into rrat territory but that's 100% a shiori fic if you believe the rrat that she's half filipino.

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>>69300890
I thought the WataBota one was super cute. You were to quickly demonstrate the essence of Watame's optimism that helps her persevere while also trying to put others first. Botan also growing to know that there's more to life than money was also a good touch. For what it's worth, I think how that one progressed is pretty on par. I've known a few people who were just a check to be sent to their fathers, and the attempt to reconnect later like that, expecting to just be re-accepted into their lives, but they're nothing more than a stranger when someone who actually cares steps into their lives.

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>>69326490
Shiori talked about that yeah. I can see a fic where you find your cooky daughter and try to prevent her from electrocuting herself and overall avoid scrapping her out of the sidewalk
>>69326725
oh yeah im talking deserved attempts. Friend of mine grew up without his parents, only to learn that his grandpa stonewalled his dad out of his life. That really stuck with me because they had their growing pains, but are now quite happy and go bowling together.
A story that captures that bad feeling of missing out on someone's life but eventually connecting its pretty cool

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While we're on the topic of Shiori.
Anybody else kind of find it funny from a 'lore perspective' how Advent have their parents/family be mentioned on stream, especially given the whole super hell prison jailbreak thing as part of their debut trailer?
Kind of making me imagine they were all in the equivalent of superhell's minimum security and their 'breakout' was just all of them being cell buddies who happen to share the same parole date.

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>>69329482
I do like the idea that the breakout was just a little stroll out the front door, and that Shiori would try to play it up as some grand scheme when it was just "Yeah, this guy joe is gonna let us out. Just walk with me, it'll be fine."
From a lore take on their families as a separate topic, Nerissa's is an easy one to explain, they're all just demon birds, they couldn't / didn't want to bother catching all of them, but also can't exactly fuck with the facility that kept Nerissa.
Bijou's mom showing up and given an appearance really fucked me up though. Not only is she hot, but it adds new ideas that I want to tweak into my current outline for Bijou. I don't have a decent explanation since Bijou is supposed to be some miracle of nature that has catastrophic powers on mortals if she's left unchecked.

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>>69331408
>Young Bijou was giving off somuch UOHHHHH energy that her mom sent her off to super hell jail to protect her from the horde of pebblephiles driven to madness.

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>>69331408
>>69332079
i like the idea that Bijou's usual chuuniness and desire for adventure gets her in trouble, so momseki just sighed and sent her to superjail so she stops for a bit.

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>>69332359
I'm also playing with the idea that rock people are a thing and something similar to what you suggested happens. Bijou's original conflict is that she will have mommy issues out the ass and has to work through them, and by association Anon will also be on her shitlist a little bit.

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>>69333008
Methinks Bijou fits more a "no bullshit" personality and is just a rock vibing and having fun...which then causes trouble because her fun also includes being a brat.
So in that line of thought, the entire conflict with momseki would be actually not a conflict at all. Bijou is just bullshiting and making you clash with her mom for funsiesand mom is playing along because it seems like fun

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>>69333444
>Momseki reforms like a dark souls boss. Genuinely creepy as she reataches herself
>"Oh i see..."
>Steady yourself
>She smiles
>"You are Bijou's Friend! Oh she talked so much about you in those letters!"
>huh
>Before you know it, you are sitting in a table, with hot tea and snacks
>"That girl! seriously! she's just like her dad some times"

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>>69333444
That's a fun angle, but without spoiling too much, I do want to write how being abandoned affected Bijou, since after being imprisoned for being what she was born as, she's going to have a lot of misgivings towards her distant creator. She'll be angry towards her mom for not knowing how to properly handle her power, and the being responsible for making them capable of this power in the first place.
The clash you mentioned could be a fun thing to write as like an after event that Bijou sets up because she wants to see if her mom could beat you up.

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>>69286215
I wrote 1k of the most fire fanfic this thread will ever see.
I will now drop it on WIP hell and not touch it for another year or so.

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>>69336952
>Sora gets to fuck THAT

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>>69337410
We need a "office free use" Nodoka fic.

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>>69333008
New HJ arc?

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>>69343863
An eventual one. Not sure when exactly I want to place it, but there's arcs that I at least it know will have to take place before it.

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>>69344495
That's a very cute Biboo.
Speaking of cute, I'm looking forward to the next romance and sex scenes.

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>>69344673
Me too. I'll do my best to deliver.

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>>69344673
>>69345224
I'm not as much into the action scenes or the top level plot of hj but I love the characters and how they're growing closer together. Future harem dynamics and scenes will really benefit from all the groundwork laid now

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>>69340344
Matsuri is the second most spankable holo.

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Hope everyone has a productive weekend

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>>69351862
Hope you die 1,000 deaths.

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>>69351862
Thanks, you too.

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>>69351862
I wrote about you spanking IRyS today, and tomorrow she'll suck your dick.

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Up

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>>69129544
An awkward and burgeoning teen romance with Bijou, where you both like each other but have zero idea how to communicate it and cross that line.

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>>69129544
poru sex

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>>69129544
Sex with a very soft hag's bellybutton

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>>69362156
Hell yeah.

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>>69320566
*TINK TINK TINK TINK TINK TINK TINK*

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>>69362156
Shouldn't you get her pregnant first? The clock is ticking.

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>>69364072
I don't think you can get hard enough to make those noises

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>>69365618
For Bijou? Course I can

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>>69365028
That can come later (or many months before?). I need that tummy soft and pliable, not taut.

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>>69366861
Help the loli rock does things to me.

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>>69129249
sexy choco

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>>69362156
hell yeah

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>>69168799
hot

[Anonymous No.]

Oh no, not yet

[Anonymous No.]

Gotta hold it in, just a bit more!

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>>69379496

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>>69362156
Hell yeah

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Did you guys see what VN Shiori put out?

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>>69380755
i still want that fic where Nerissa creams herself prematurely and you have to cheer her up

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>>69383114
Yep. No porn though, so don't care.

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>>69383114
Is there any actual romance, or is it just Shiori being Shiori (weird)?

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>>69385848
Latter

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>>69385848
yes

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[Anonymous No.]

Not yet

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>>69320566
https://files.catbox.moe/xorsa7.mp4

[Anonymous No.]

Just a little bit longer

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>>69383604
>Visiting Nerissa's family
>Have already been over plenty of times before, so you're confident enough to tease her a little bit when nobody's looking
>She fucking cums the second you actually touch her
>Have to sit down and have dinner next to a Nerissa who's very clearly recovering from an orgasm
Honestly I'd kill for any female quickshot fic

[Anonymous No.]

Guess I'll bake the next thread. Any requests? First come, first serve

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>>69406352 (me)
I'll bake when the time's right of course

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>>69406352
chuuba MILFs

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>>69406494
>>69406352
(as in, Pekomama, Mama Mori, Mama Lillie, etc)

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>>69406548
Yeah I was about to ask lol. Alright, got it

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>>69404469
If someone writes a 3k+ word fic containing this exact scenario I promise a very detailed (You) review.

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>>69280497
Who's the old scolding her if she's making (You) cry?

[Anonymous No.]

alright get baking

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>>69412850
Aqua thread?

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>>69412850
Gotcha
>>69412886
Milf thread

[Anonymous No.]

A bit early, but here's the new bread. MILF-flavored
>>69413019
>>69413019
>>69413019
We can have Onyan in the next thread

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>>69411409
It's her internal monologue. She's scolding herself.