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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out the three years worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>73443330
(There was some HoloX discussion, a lot of pregnancy and we closed it out with some sluts)
/wg/ rentry for bakers: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>> No.73506966
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Story Anchor
Post em if you got em

>> No.73507036
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story Recap. There were two stories posted last thread:

Holocalypse: Part 1 - The End of the World >>73445076
Tags: Aqua, Amelia, Action, SFW, Post-apocalypse

Tower of Tattle Part VI Episode 9: A Grand Prank >>73468248
Tags: Shiori Novella, FeMC, SFW, fantasy, mystery, nasu-inspired, childhood

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>>73506921
Whoops, I forgot to edit the OP
Oh well.

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>>73506921
Hey, that's my girlfriend

>> No.73507450

La+ is the only holo I want to spank without consent

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>>73506921
Hey, that's my girlfriend

>> No.73507555

>>73507247
RUN LAPPY RUN

>> No.73508398

>>73507247
>Oh shit! There's a sale on brat-correcting ugly bastards!

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This sassy horned child and her band of sexually frustrated goons are no match for me. Probably.

>> No.73508948

>>73508900
Are fat, bald and ugly?

>> No.73509048

>>73508948
Nope. Fit, attractive, and every last inch of me is covered with hair.

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>>73507036
Pekora bringing her boyfriend to home so she can meet her Mama. (In my headcanon pekomama is s singlemom), Pekomama end up making advances on Anon and everything ends with Anon giving her a creampie while her daughter watches

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>>73510676
We had this prompt last thread. Might as well try to spin a different one if you want to reuse the single mom idea. Why not follow a holomoms style format and meet Pekomama who is a single mom trying hard to raise her 3 kids on her own? Or since you want the age difference thing I think, Pekora could be your platonic friend and you end up supporting and consoling Pekomama in a way that buds into a romance?

>> No.73511282

>>73509048
Bigfootchama...

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>>73510962
I just want to read about being Pekora's bf and and having her mother flirting me

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>>73512960
I just want to write about (me) being flirted with by Pekomama and her trying to groom me into being the ideal mate for her only daughter.

>> No.73513908

>>73512960
Reposting a prompt isn't going to do much if it's not varied or more fleshed out than before. A prompt isn't really like a request, after all - it's moreso an attempt at offering inspiration.

>> No.73514110

>>73506921
Now that's one sexy commander!

>>73493102
>doesn't use protection while teaching a lesbian hag to not waste her last few eggs.
Sounds like a certain turkey's nephew's goal.

>> No.73514999

>>73507099
Damn, those horns are extra thick.

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>>73507036
Being stalked by Subaru(she actually just wants to ask you out)

>> No.73515689

>>73510676
fuck this guy.
Im pekora's dad and i pay for her education. then i cum in her mom (my wife)
(the other two kids can come for christmas and we can fish)

>> No.73515878

>>73515689
If you were Pekora's dad you should know that she also needs attention. Fuck your daughter.

>> No.73516040

>>73515878
>If you were Pekora's dad you should know that she also needs attention
I asked how her day was, then patted her in the head and fell asleep in front of the tv. Anymore and she's gonna become codependant
>Fuck your daughter
Cousin larry i told you, we dont live in alabama anymore

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>>73507036
Suisei is actually a deific figure with Godlike power, she just forgot. You know and work to keep her focused on her idol dreams so she doesn't figure it out and start the apocalypse

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>>73519268
>Hololive is just an SCP front

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I've just finished reading the Mio's story and there's no word to describe how sad I feel for not having a MIo wife

>> No.73521005

>>73519268
Isn't that just melancholy of haruhi suzumiya?

>> No.73521869

>>73506921
I'd like a commander with a tummy like that.

>> No.73522057

>>73521005
>Indeed what I have here written makes no claim to novelty in points of detail; and therefore I give no sources because it is indifferent to me whether what I have though has already been thought before me by another

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>>73520635
Gonna write me a powerful Mio wife one day.

>> No.73522926

>>73522533
wedding dresses are so good. but not the shitty porny wedding dresses.
I want to actively fight the dress while i fuck mio

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>>73522926
I hear ya. I fought hard to get Mio in this dress, and our marriage was built on supporting each other through the toughest of battles. That should be no different on our wedding night.

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>> No.73526917

Up

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>>73506921
good OP

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>>73529557
>Mind telling me what you thought you were doing trying to go out dressed like that? Well? I'm waiting.

>> No.73530167

>>73529853
It’s ok, she can’t actually read what it says

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>>73530167
>That is without a doubt the worst excuse I've ever heard. Go to your room, and no plotting for your tonight. Everyone gets the night off.

>> No.73530487

>>73529853
>Ass? I thought it was Earth?

>> No.73530607

Which yuribaiting holo needs to learn about the benefits of loving a man the most?

>> No.73530813

>>73530607
Nerissa. Not even a question. You can even add the smug "I told you so"s from her sisters when she finally conceives.

>> No.73531115

>>73530813
I don't know, she already lusts over men and has experience. She just hasn't married one yet.

>> No.73531164

>>73530607
Reine. Bonus point if the guy she's gonna get fucked by fucks Kiara in front of her mindbreaking her in the proccess.

>> No.73532863

>>73531115
Lusting isn't enough, she's just a baiter until she commits. The goal is if (You)r ass and Kiara's are side by side, she is gonna pick the one attached to the baby maker.

>> No.73534204

>>73532863
>Mind breaking Nerissa so hard she'd willingly NTR her Oshi to get to your cock
Hot?

>> No.73535585

>>73530607
Is NoelFlare still a thing? I feel like you could convert Noel with a good dicking and/or emotional support.

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>>73535585
Noel might be more about keeping you off the cute girls rather than being opposed to you herself. She is the type of girl who could use a shoulder stronger than hers to lean on.

>> No.73539430

>>73535585
NoeFlare is so much a thing they try to keep it under wraps because it went past the baiting stage lmao.

>> No.73542334

>>73530607
Miko 100%

>> No.73544589

>>73542334
How would you even pull that off?

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>>73544589
Migo's more blondesexual than homosexual

>> No.73547213

>>73544862
So get a blond wig. Easy enough.

>> No.73547674

>>73544862
So her Lesbian Gets Dick dom/partner would be the typical big-dicked delinquent gyaru-oh

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>> No.73553349

>>73547213
>have yellow paint fall over you
>Suddenly get yanked by Hachaama into a vent
>Learn about the blonde tunnels: A place where all blonds can move around without drawing ITS attention
>"what the fuck are you guys talking about?"
>"The last time SHE caught one lacking, she fucked her so hard her entire self dissapeared...Tell me...does the name yozora mel ring any bells?"
>"The...huh...i...why cant i remember?"

>> No.73553441

>>73550055
>my weird aunt, when she's ovulating and needs a baby put inside her

>> No.73553537

>>73552764
https://youtu.be/7P-lKvqEP8I?feature=shared

>> No.73553587

>>73553441
Beast of rebelion made me want more ovulating Lui-nee.
Sometimes, all you need is to bang your aunt after coming back from classes

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Am I carrying a curse? That's like the 4th or 5th thread that's died early after I posted a story.

>>73447619
Thanks for reading. Looking back over the original Holocalypse makes me glad I went through with the remake since it was pretty hard to read through, so hearing you say it's written better makes me feel a little proud. Most of the plot will be told using that switch between intermissions of the past and the main story since it'll give me a chance to make some of the characters more important to the narrative. Amelia for example has gone from "random girl" to a key part of the overarching story and I've got a lot planned for her.
The version of the wasteland in the original also felt too soft so it's good to see the desolate world I've made this time get noticed. Nice to hear the action read well too, but the music really had nothing to do with me. Lost Judgment just fucking killed it with their soundtrack. If you're thinking of adding music to your own story, don't think about it too hard. Just find a track that you like and play it while you read the scene in mind. If it works, just throw in a link.

>>73465848
Yeah, it's a complete overhaul. I'll still be following the story of the original (including the planned stuff that never got released) and include key scenes (save Aqua, meet Botan, liberate Albatross, get bullied by small women, coast trip, Sui, Vilton, hospital ambush and escape) but I wanted to add way more scenes to the story and make it more coherent. A few changes to the cast as well, which I see you've noticed. Koyo will indeed be starring. As for Aqua, she has a lot to come so her sickness is only the beginning of her relationship with (You). The amount of worldbuilding and lore will ease up in the second chapter and even more so in the third, but I'll keep that in mind. I mostly just needed to get a lot of it out of the way for context and building the setting.
>that image is pure kino and I respect the effort to make one.
Please don't. It started out as a joke and I spent half an hour in MS paint making it.

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>>73553587
>Lui sees you flirt with a girl your age
>Legally changes her name to Dyson Gen5detect Absolute in jealousy
>then drives you to get icecream

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>>73507036
getting molested by Ririka (no one believes you that this nice gal is doing so) (you are enjoying it)

>> No.73557697

Nope, no dying yet.

>> No.73559301
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So, how's your wip coming along? Need advice or to boast about how close you are to release?
Bonus question: Ever been inspired by fanfics... from another fandom?

>> No.73559470

>>73554873
I don't even know who that is.

>> No.73559644

>>73559301
I want to finish the draft within this weekend. Just pounding it to completion with little thought as to whether or not it's good. I'm already dreading the editing even though I shouldn't yet.
>Bonus Question
Of course. I used to write fanfics for other fandoms before Hololive too.

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>>73559301
I'm working on BOR chapter 2. admittedly, I need to stop overthinking things because I feel like I'm trying to plan ahead way too far out as opposed to focusing on the current chapter. But then again, this chapter is also meant to be an introduction to the main power gimmick of the fic so I want to at least be able to properly explain how abilities work and have them make sense for the abilities I already had in mind for other characters...

>> No.73561580

>>73530607
Any of the "good girls". I'mma narrow it down for this post to FWMC. They both gotta accept that one day, lesbian cest wont be enough in life.

>> No.73561659

>>73559301
Still stalled. Cant even improve the one chapter I have out.

Bonus: not fanfics, just the franchise itself. Biggest example is my FE mod.

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>>73559301
Doing... fine.
I have about 21 more scenes to script. FML. But about a third of them are Maria scenes and that'll be lots of fun because I love Maria. Hopefully that means they'll go quicker too.
And hopefully all this happens before the end of April. After that the VNs basically done. I just have to spend a week of structuring/UI/extra implementation (hopefully it will only take a week), a week of more writing/scripting for all the shit I want to add (limiting myself to a week for this), and then a week of bugtesting/playtesting. That's my super optimistic schedule.

>> No.73562902

>>73544862
I really want to see (You) having the unfortunate luck of being born with blonde hair and seeing Miko having a identity crisis because she only likes blonde haired girls and you being a filthy MALE has her attention because you have blonde hair as well.

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>>73507036
You've been dating Marine for a while by speaking a Japanese-English pidgin together but you get tired of having constant misunderstanding and decide to hire a translator who's there with you at all times, 24/7. In a fancy restaurant, he's there with you. In a rollercoaster, he's there with you. Even while you're having sex, he's there there next to the bed.
I see the translator's personality being something close to Yes Minister's Bernard.

>> No.73564471

>>73559301
Slow and steady. Managed to break through an important scene. Not 100% satisfied with it but thats what rewrites are for.

>bonus
I never participated in fanficdom before this thread.

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>> No.73567246

>>73544862
I'm a Lesbian Priestess but the most Beautiful Blonde Hair in Town is Donned by a Man???

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>>73559301
writing smut is hard and makes me hard heh. Things are going slow due to some RL shenanigans but mostly working
>Bonus
I've always engaged in some fanfics for fun, that inspired me and made me and write 2 really bad fanfics for my FE Heroes crackship and one fic that was also bad about Nice Nature from Uma musume kissing (me).
Then i landed here

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>> No.73569733

>>73569690
Shiori is tied with Mori for "autistic smelly dork critter with ultra hot and cool fanart"

>> No.73569879

>>73561707
She and Scarle are competing for best Iluna female for me.

>> No.73570864

>>73569733
>Mori and Shiori have an epic fight
>Crazy chunii battle
>Turns out the fight is fake and you walk into a clubroom with Shiori and Cali running around making pewpew noises.

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>> No.73572950

>>73572845
SAYING YES TO EVERY PERVY MARINE COMMENT! BARKING AND WORSHIPING HER FEET!

MAKING HER EXTREMELY FLUSTERED BY SAYING HOW MUCH SEX I WANT TO HAVE WITH HER

TURNING HER INTO A BLUSHING MAIDEN WHEN I ADMIT THAT IVE BUSTED A TRILLION NUTS TO HER

>> No.73574211

>>73569879
I like Maria a lot. She's surprisingly dynamic, given her shy nature.
I think I've somewhat captured Scarle's attitude and represent her okay, but she's a bit tricky to write.

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>>73559301
Good enough. It's been hard to get the sit down I need to get this last meaty streak done. Just a lot of RL stuff going on a the moment, but I'm hoping I can make some progress this weekend. God I hope I can make progress, this has been killing me to have my story not over this section yet.

>> No.73574806

>>73507036
Your oshi cheats on you, BUT you don't like it.

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>>73468248
>>73507099
De facto, the longer chapters are better for pacing than shorter chapters. If only because by nature of length more gets done in the space of a single 'read'.
Though I do have to agree, structurally the fact that this arc is inherently built around a bunch of OCs the readers struggle to really care about really fucks it over. The first five chapters had a good thing going from the protagonist/shiori duo and it kind of feels like the two of them have been in the backseat for this entire arc.
I know some part of that is intentional since they are (reduced to) kids in a (made up) world that's bigger than them but well... that aspect is kind of what's making this arc feel so, for lack of a better phrase, 'lacking in agency'. It's like they know they're stuck in a game but they're just letting stuff play out in front of them instead of rattling the cage and seeing if there's a way ahead. Especially since they're kind of being 'railroaded' by the adults in their lives instead of trying to proactively prod at everything to fish out name fragments.
I'm honestly not sure how this can get fixed, I can see what's going wrong but with the nature of how this arc is getting presented I don't really see how it can get fixed without redacted and Shiori just deciding to fuck around and not immerse themselves in the town of their memories... which would make this a different kind of arc altogether.
Like I'm still interested in this story but man, every fucking chapter is just me waiting for these OCs to die and for the murders to kick in.

>> No.73575652

>Nene admits that she farts on stream
I blame you guys.

>> No.73575853

>>73575652
why us and not ringo?

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>>73575652
She mostly did that to piss Lamy off and you know it. She can't resist making this prim lady upset with her brutish antics.

>> No.73576345

>>73576080
lamy should fart on my dick

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>> No.73578096

>>73567246
>Miko cucks Suisei with a viking-looking chad because of his glorious hair

>> No.73578168

>>73578050
LAMY FART ON MY DICK OR GET RAPED, YOUR CHOICE

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>>73574310
It's okay, Pomu, real life stuff and managing it is important. Take care of the pertinent stuff and work on it in the off hours.

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>>73575652
>>73575853
>>73576080
>the singular Nene fic in /ringo/ involves her farting to piss Lamy off

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>>73578168

>> No.73579806

>>73579644
*parries the bottle and sticks my face in her ass*
DO IT ELF WHORE, FART

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>>73579806

>> No.73579989

>>73579867
Im wearing MMO armor that makes me inmune to ice lamy.
You have to fart on my dick to kill me lamy.
You want my loot

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>>73578380
Thanks for the encouragement. I do take care of the important stuff first, the only issue is that during the off hours I'm completely drained so it makes writing hard. I'll keep doing my best though.

>> No.73580533

>>73574806
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M2CHkq_IQrU
https://genius.com/Type-o-negative-unsuccessfully-coping-with-the-natural-beauty-of-infidelity-lyrics
>You had cock on your mind
>And cum on your breath
>Inserted that diaphragm before you left
>Practicing freelance gynecology
>Where there's a womb there's a way
>With you it's for free
There should be a vtuber musical based on this song

>> No.73580551

>>73579989
>NEPOBO urging lamy to fart on Anon
>Polka thinks he's being annoying
>Nene thinks this is hilarious (unchi wwww)
>Botan thinks this is hilarious (this guy is so lame)

>> No.73580867

>>73559301
I was going to write some, but I underestimated how bad it is for writing when your conditions are taking care of a morose doggo and your only tool is your phone. I did get out a short blurb of dialogue to use for later last night, though.

>> No.73581034

>>73559301
I've been trying to finish a WIP that I've realized I'm beyond-of.
That is, I feel like I can't write something this simple anymore because I'm actively trying to improve my writing in different aspects, and the way the fic is written just clashes with all I've achieved so far.

I could rewrite it from the ground up, but at the same time, I feel like making it more complex defeats the original purpose of the fic, and in the end I'm on at a crossroad.

>bonus
I'm not gonna lie, My little Dashie made me fucking cry when I was like 12, and I wasn't even into pony stuff.

>> No.73581887

Heartbreak Tokyo doko?

>> No.73581979

>>73507036
Lying in a hot bath with childhood friend Fubuki, where you reminisce about your past and whers she comforts (you) about your rapidly declining satisfaction with existence on this mortal plane.

>> No.73582411
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>>73507036
Barbarian mr.koro smacking you over the head with a club and dragging you to her rape cave

>> No.73582760

>>73582411
This is the one Mr. Koro to pull out that one monhun weapon and land that one satisfying attack down the whole length of a dragon
And after the long day at work dismantling the corpse and rationing off the drops to those who aided the hunt, she comes home to (your) home cooking and a hot bath (a luxury in these parts of the world)

>> No.73583843

>>73574211
What text effects do you use to indicate when Scarle is speaking with her retard voice?

>> No.73583932

>>73583843
I bet comic sans, also waiting for the answer

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>>73580351
That's how things go, unfortunately.
Personally, that's why I feel setting a reasonable daily quota accounting for the time you need to relax is important. I also factor in spending times with friends and on other interests. Balance is important.

>> No.73584784

>>73583843
I just spam the fuck out of the ~ lmao

>> No.73585306

>>73583843
Why do you need text effects? Describing her dialog with her words should suffice.

>> No.73585572

>>73576080
Lamy should give Nene correction.

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>> No.73587817

>>73585306
Scarle constantly switches between her normal, sexy, and retarded baby voices. For a VN, I thought he might have come up with a fun visual way to represent that.

>> No.73588262

>>73587817
Oh I didn't realize it was for the vn. My bad.

>> No.73590978

Rise

>> No.73591324

Fall!

>> No.73592734
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>>73507036

>> No.73595055
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Lap-sama will NEVER reach page 10

>> No.73595912

>>73595055
I wish the webm kept going so you could see the cutest part of Ayame's run.

>> No.73596014

>>73582411
Imagine if viking ko'one came to young Anon's village, killed his family, abducted him, and then groomed him into being her personal slave...

>> No.73596080
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>>73507036
You're a roman 15yo doing his first year of service in a remote outpost in the north of the empire. one night you get raided by barbarian germs, Korone is commanding them. She takes a liking to you and claims you as a war trophy a.k.a sex toy

>> No.73596158

>>73574806
You cheats on your oshi, BUT you like it

>> No.73596209

>>73596014
>>73596080
Historically inaccurate. Can't get off to that.

>> No.73596236

>>73596209
so you don't know

>> No.73596664

>>73596209
You mean dog kemonomimis didn't actually live in ancient Germany?

>> No.73597695 [DELETED] 

>>73596664
They werr mostly figured of folkore, same as beastmen (known as Tiermann).
There's about the tradition of the finger, where a young princess known as Ko'one said that the man to marry him has to endure her terrible bite, and so she bit off the fingers of about a dozen men.
Then, during a raid in which dhe participated, she found a human slave boy known as Anon, and delighteled with him, she dressed him up in a prince's clothes and fake kemono ears and performed the ceremony with him. Instead of riping the finger off, she gently sucked it, and thus proclaimed him as her husband.
The fact that anon was a full human went unnoticed until the birth of Ko'one's fiest daughter, who had no tails or ears.
Anon was then prosecuted by orders of the king, but Ko'one ran away with him, while the king took after the daughter.

>> No.73598552

>>73596664
correct.
They were of mongolian origin

>> No.73598941

>>73598552
>And then Mio fired off the arrow as the horse ran over the rice farmer
UNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGH OH FUCK IM CUMMING

>> No.73599019

>>73574806
Your oshi cheats on you, BUT you don't like it, BUT you're so emotionally invested into her that you become her paypig caged-up cuck playtoy anyway just so you can keep interacting with her

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>> No.73599325

>>73599019
Your Oshi cheats BUT you dont like it BUT you cant guess her password to stop her from using cheatengine and giving herself 9999 money and exp

>> No.73599376

>>73574806
Your oshi cheats on you BUT you remain ambivalent about it

>> No.73599467

>>73599325
N-Nenechi would...she would never put codes in AoE2 right? r-right?

>> No.73599852

>>73599467
>Come home, ready to game with you gf Nenechi
>She's already in your room, playing in your PC
>As soon as you open the door, tears fill your eyes and your heart shatters
>Nenechi has 5 Cobras

>> No.73601012

>>73599852
>bend her over
>pull down her pants
>spank her ass
>she starts farting

>> No.73601609
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Round 2

Will write the first prompt that replies to me ending in a 3. I don't care how stupid it is, but I would prefer it be something you actually want to read.

Rules:
- 1 week delivery
- 3k to ~5k word oneshot
- current hololive girls only
- all genres and/or fetish tags acceptable besides loli (nothing under JK; /ss/ is ok tho), wedgies, or pregnancy/lactation.
- must provide a more detailed prompt than, for example, "hag sex" "fubuki butt" "sex with hags" "suisex" "sniffing smelly hags" (or some unholy combination of these examples)
- no references to or parodies of other media properties
- I might ask a few short questions for clarification, but this will not be a collaborative effort. Be detailed in your prompt.
- if no one rolls a 3 I'll pick the first person to roll the next highest number at thread death

>> No.73601877

>>73601609
JK Chloe seduces her teacher, (you)

>> No.73601924

>>73601609
I'll give this anon a chance >>73596080

>> No.73601947

>>73601609
Free use Kanata sex

>> No.73601956

>>73601609

>>73599852
>>73601012

>> No.73601997

>>73601609
Zeta is your gf and roleplays a femdom scenario where she has captured you and wants to torture you for information.

>> No.73602134

>>73601609
Putting your fingers up the butt of holos before running away (there was hot sauce on them)

>> No.73602268
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>>73601609
Anon often daydreams about having sex with a prostitute and sometimes browses the most popular local escort website but isn’t really seriously considering to actually hire one. That is until one day when Anon notices that the newest ad is by a Marine cosplayer – someone cosplaying his oshi.
The twist of course is that the escort is the real Marine. She made the ad in horny desperation but almost immediately regretted her action and deleted the ad. Anon was the only one who managed to write down her contact info during the time the ad was up.
After a long deliberation Marine decides to accept Anon’s request after all anyway. Anon meets a stuttering and red from embarrasment Marine and they enter a love hotel together. Before things advance any further though, Marine’s brain overloads and she faints. Anon sighs and puts the telly on. When Marine wakes up she sees a sleeping Anon.

After that ~the greatest love story ever told~ begins.
I originally made this prompt in 2022.

>> No.73602271
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>>73601609
During a training session where Noel is instructing the newest recruits, she’s interrupted by her squire Flare-kun who pulls her aside for some private business (Hot, sweaty, intense /ss/ sex)

>> No.73602303

>>73601609
you buy the shiraken girls on the slave market as rowers for your ship, and you treat them strictly but overall well.

>> No.73602339

>>73601609
Your kouhai Hajime asks you out on a date. Everyone is shocked to see Banchou in cute dress and hair styled, but as she is still known as baddest bitch on the block, those who tail you at the date think that you are actually doing something really illegal if you need to disguise yourselves as that

>> No.73602409

>>73602303
OK, slavery wins.
Anything specific you wanna see or just comfy slave life?

>> No.73602482 [DELETED] 

>>73601609
Luna is captured by a group of Orcs, who seek to interrogate her and undermine her kingdom. Unexpectedly, however, the shortstack princess is a sexual deviant with an incredibly repressed libido. Gangbang ensues.

>> No.73603112

>>73602409
at first they really dislike you and refuse to row properly so you stop the ship on the sea and throw them overboard without clothes as a punishment (you intend to get them back on the ship after half an hour), but when a shark appears you jump in the water and kill the shark to rescue them which earns you their respect.

>> No.73603510

>>73603112
Do you have sex with them or is this purely a managerial affair? Fantasy world or semi-historical or post-apocalyptic?

>> No.73603726

>>73602409
NTA but from what I've heard, being a galley slave was absolute hell on earth. One of the worst occupations for a human being and pure torment. But you can of course always make a cartoonish and light-hearted Looney Tunes depiction of everything.

>> No.73604414

>>73603510
no sex unless they want it in the end, raping them wouldn't fit with treating them well overall. you should be strict but honorable, if that makes sense.
fantasy world I would say, magic isn't necessary but could be used for plot convencience. of course there's a half-elf and a fennec girl so those are necessary fantasy elements. and the rowing shouldn't be as bad as it was historically, it should be taxing but not excruciating or dangerous to their health...maybe they're merely supporting a sail. I just liked the idea of a naval setting because that way you're isolated with only them out on the beautiful sea, and the idea of work that's uniform and requires discipline.

>> No.73605174

>>73604414
OK, I think I somewhat get what you're looking for. This is some kind of weird domination fetish thing that's objectively morally evil but doesn't feel like it?

>> No.73605336

>>73604414
>strict and honorable
>slaveowner

>> No.73605401

>>73605336
Sometimes slavery is a reality of the world, and you can choose to be a total dickhead with your slaves, or give them somewhat a fair life given the hand they were dealt.

>> No.73606124

>>73605174
not really, if it was supposed to be smut I would have wanted sex to be included 100%. I mainly wanted to come up with something for you and remembered how the HoloSubjection fic was interesting and almost good but too angsty. I guess them being naked in the water is fanservice but it's kind of necessary if you don't want them to drown, wet clothes are really heavy.
>>73605336
hey, I would agree with you if it was about today, but it's just a story. I don't mind morals I disagree with inside a story as long as the protagonist is also principled in a selfless way. and good people always existed even in times where horrible shit was pretty common, you just have to measure them by their normal not yours.

>> No.73607168

>>73606124
Well, I can't say I really understand the appeal of this story idea, but I'll read HoloSubjection and brainstorm something.

>> No.73607249

>>73604414
>>73605401
well historically speaking it wasnt worth it being a shithead to your slave, and all the civilizations on earth used slavery. In a way, its the less fucked up thing we used to do to our fellow men because it kinda needed a mentality.
out of the top of my head you had
>In greece, the slave was just a live-in employee. Beloved slaves were more akin to a butler/gardner and could even inherit the masters' property. Of course, being mistreated was always a thing, but it was preferable to being a beggar. They punched you for antyhing back there
>Egyptians gave slaves day offs and they had medical attention + a guy who acted like a union's superviser. If you were a non egyptian slave though, tough shit
>Koreans and North americans got a bit goofy
>In south america slavery was prohibited*. The indigenous people were seen as "innocent" so they could work for the euros but had to be respected and cared for (this had real mixed results). *Black people get fucked

TLDR: Slavery was just a thing back there. You could easily not hate the slaves nor be abusive andit kinda paid off. Of course, your morals were first.

Which leads us to a more "historically accurate prompt"
>Winning the war whatever and winning your slave flare
>You dont hit not hate her, but she is a slave so she is inferior. She still gets paid so one day she can buy her freedom
>your curiosity gets picked. start interacting
>also elf pussy has you crazy and she's well aware she can live a better life as a housewarming slave
>ultimately come to understand, care and love Flare as a real human bean
>she buys her freedom and stays, you free her and marry her despite the society, yadda yadda

>> No.73607557

>>73605401
I know I'm just being cheeky.
>>73607249
Romans were allowed to rape their slaves free of consequence.

>> No.73608223

>>73607557
Old laws are really funny
>slaves are worth less than people and if someone kills a free man then they should be executed.
>UNLESS THEY KILL THEIR OWN OWNER
>Specially if there's three testimonies of people seing the owner be enough of a dick to justify his death
>If that's the case, the slave must pay the fee to free themselves then they go to jail as a free man
>otherwise, they must re-enter the market and are forgiven their crime

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>> No.73611082

>>73608223
Only in 2015 did Iceland repeal a law that allowed people to kill any Basque people on sight. A fic where some intrepid chuubas break weird laws would be fun.

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This slavery discussion is just reminding me of this discussion chain from a few months back. >>66551018
Though I guess this time it's more on the realistic power fantasy of it rather than full degen hentai mode.

>> No.73611403

>>73610794
>Anon! I finally remember! These aren't my First Summer Memmories!

>> No.73612598

>>73581034
Could you possibly keep the simplicity while still flexing the improvements you've with your writing thus far? That way you may not have to make it more complex and have it clash with its original purpose, while still basking in how far you've come as a writer.

>> No.73614228

>>73581034
You haven't gone far enough as a writer if you think making hot smut/adorable romance is beyond you.

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Board stop being fast, I've only written a few paragraphs and you're back on page 10.

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>>73591324
No!

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>> No.73627247

>>73623601
o-okay Azki, we're chill. Just put the knife down, and we'll get some words in, alright?

>> No.73629958
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73629958

>Anon! Anon, you've gotta bump the thread! You can't phonepost from that thing!
>*BANG BANG BANG*
>Who are you calling!? The Police? They can't bump it!
>*BANG BANG BANG*
>Anon it's on Page 9, hurry! I'm not leaving you alone until you bump it!
>*BANG BANG BANG*

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>>73623601
No need for violence! I almost got 1k words already.

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>>73629958

>> No.73633695

>>73629958
>"ANON YOU GOTTA BUMP THE THREAD"
BANG BANG BANG BANG
>"WHY ARENT YOU PICKING UP YOUR PHONE?"
BANG BANG BANG BANG
>"ANON STOP BREEDING ME AND BUMP THE THREAD! ITS ON PAGE 9!"
BANG BANG BANG BANG

>> No.73634705

what a strange yet arousing development

>> No.73635236

>>73634705
>Me, after Azki came in with a knife and now she's naked on top of me

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>>73507036
Anon is a battle hardened menhera fucker. years of flings with the craziest girls in the company have let him able to stop stabs, mend bullet wounds and to hide like a shadow.

But they havent prepared him for his biggest challenge: A girl that isnt actually fucking crazy, a girl who wont stab him.
A girl who might just want to have a date with him

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>>73636282
>Anon preps for edgy cracked gem
>Turns out she fixed herself really easily
>All of his preparation is for naught as now he must deal with a fully armed and operational meme gem.

>> No.73637393

>>73507036
AZKi makes a risky download and gets infected with a virus that turns her into a nympho

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>>73637056
>"Oh hey! You are early! Im sorry...you didnt wait long for me didnt you?"
>"No..huuh no i didnt..I just got here"
>"Oh great! Come on then! i cant wait to see the movie!"
>The second Bijou turns around he throws a gun in the bushes

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i love this fucking rock and her comfort hagsmith like you wouldnt believe

>> No.73638634

>>73569733
>>73570864
Das why they my favorite of their gen.

>>73574211
Tell me more...

>> No.73638796

>>73595055
White hair lassies!

>> No.73638808

>>73602409
>>73602303
Oh wow, a pretty good idea this time. Looking forward to reading the result.

>> No.73638952

>>73601609
Sexual deviant warden (You) having his way with Advent.

>> No.73639171

>>73611090
What the fuck is that lack of neck girth...

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>> No.73641130

>>73640843
I'm sorry Azki! I'm at work, I can't write that much, I'll do more tomorrow I promise! Just don't hurt me

>> No.73642227
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>>73637996
For some reason this is making me think this is some kind of Biboo vs Bijou thing with Biboo having all of her (cool) cringe powers and Bijou having all of her purity.

>> No.73642280

>>73507036
Mori has a masturbation addiction.
In meetings, meeting kouhai, on stream, even when seeing her family she physically can’t stop fingering herself or using a vibrator

>> No.73644120

>>73642280
Uhh...
>Myteriously receiving a link to the controls of a vibrator.
>Not thinking much you set it to max
>Watch as Mori climaxes on stream as she half heartedly tries to brush it off.

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>>73636282
>Anon the jaded manwhore learns to trust and love again thanks to a normal girl who likes him for normal reasons.
I dig it, but is Biboo the right choice? I feel like she might be a degree too "innocent."

>> No.73644873

>>73636282
>have regular wholesome relationship with biboo
>let your guard down for the first time in a long time
>kaela now has you in your sights
> you have to fight her off without biboo's knowledge, and each time biboo turns to you both of you need to pretend you get along

>> No.73645099
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>>73644553
Wouldn't being innocent just make her more appropriate for the role? After having to deal with so much degeneracy, you find yourself with a girl who doesn't even swear, whose "antics" mainly consist of purposefully making you cringe with dumb zoomer memes.

>> No.73645564
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>>73602339
Date with Jimmy...

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>>73645099
I'm not 100% against it, I'm just opening it up for exploration.
I guess it is the manwhore aspect of the prompt that I'm not really gelling with, gives me Rance vibes, and I feel like Biboo should be treasured a bit more than that.
If it were me, I'd have Anon be someone who keeps attracting menhera's, either unwittingly and/or not. A Kamijou Touma character. Doesn't have to be a cherry boy but someone not addicted to girls wearing hospital grippy socks.

That said, I can totally see Biboos response:
>"Beebs, the truth is, I slept with a LOT of batshit women. My black book is filled out and crossed out. I don't think I can match someone innocent like you."
>"Oh. Thats Okay! :D"

>> No.73647898

Survive

>> No.73648185

>>73646146
> "y-you don't mind?"
> "nope. Everyone has a past. I'll do what I can to make you feel comfortable. "
> "r-really? anything?
> biboo nods innocently.
> "well...there's one thing I've always wanted to do..."

> "cut to Anon and biboo cuddling, she gently pats his head while he sobs and blubbers about his struggles while biboo listens intently"
> "that's right anon, let all those icky feelings out"

>> No.73648737

>>73648185
She is the gem of emotions after all.

>> No.73649647

>>73648185
>>73648737
I know it's against the spirit of it but this making me imagine Biboo as an emotional vampire with this scene being where it gets revealed. Causing Anon to become an emotionless puppet Biboo keeps as her boyfriend.
Now it's up to a Menhera and or a Slut to save Anon from...
The Depradations of the Jewel of Emotions

>> No.73650088

>>73649647
I'd go the opposite way, where she intensifies your emotions via reflection. It would make time spent without her seem dull and empty, leading you to isolate yourself from everyone except her.

>> No.73650109

>>73649647
>1950's black and white horror Orchestra plays main theme.

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>> No.73651928 [DELETED] 

>>73649647
Why would a menhera or a slut want to save anon?

>> No.73652936

>>73650996
>Houseparty
>Out of nowhere Moona motions to follow her with her pokerface
>Fucks You like her life depends on it
>Goes back to the party with crooked clothes and her pokerface while you struggle to breath

>> No.73654400

>>73652936
I like the idea of Moona just suddenly dragging you into places to have quick sex, bathrooms, closets, secluded alleyways

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>>73506921
La+ is really cute!

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>> No.73656648
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I am posting on this thread to inform everyone that I've finished a first draft for the first time in months. That is all.
Now comes the hard part...

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>>73656648
Good shit, anon! You got this!

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So, how big has your wip grown anon?

>> No.73658734

>>73657738
10k words for me. La+ will have a good number of words to chew on.

>> No.73658799

>>73658734
Please do not feed La+ paper with your story on it anymore.

>> No.73659246

>>73658799
She needs to grow big and strong
Paper fiber for her bones, and words for her mind

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Lapu needs all the fiber she can get

>> No.73661538

>>73607249
>In greece, the slave was just a live-in employee. Beloved slaves were more akin to a butler/gardner and could even inherit the masters' property. Of course, being mistreated was always a thing
Sparta was part of Greece and they made it legal to randomly hunt down and kill slaves for no reason.

>> No.73661686

>>73661538
Well, that's a special case. The Spartans (a tiny elite minority in their own territory) saw themselves as conquerors, still technically at war with the whole community that they had enslaved.

>> No.73661976

>>73507450
Have you considered that her colleague Sakamata Chloe has a chubby ass that should be reddened up every day?

>> No.73662236

>>73661686
They annually declared a short war against their own slaves to make it okay in gods' eyes to kill them.

>> No.73662409

>>73662236
But did they just do that as a legal formality to be allowed what they already wanted to do? Our limited sources can't really tell us that, because we don't understand the culture and traditions enough.

>> No.73662482

>>73661976
I know and agree with that, but I'll still ask for permission first.

>> No.73663597

>>73662409
They did it because they were terrified of a slave revolt. Funnily enough, Sparta was doomed to irrelevancy.

>> No.73663706

>>73663597
Bret Devereaux had an excellent writeup on the history of Sparta. Long story short, it's a failed state and its policies were idiotic.

>> No.73664119

>>73657738
2,5k. Not much but it's grown.

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>>73662482
I'm simply doing a public service.

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>>73658799
Don't worry, I'm writing it with this edible paper stuff. She likes it a lot

>> No.73666404

>>73664566
I think it's better in private, really.

>> No.73666957

How often the head of state fights wars alongside their soldiers on the ground? In Battle For Aurorai, Botan the Queen of Savan joins your party midway through the defense of her Lion's Keep and Coco too as Leader of Stadt Des Feuers much later.

>> No.73667227

>>73666957
>How often the head of state fights wars alongside their soldiers on the ground
The mediterranean/Islamic culturse usually had the king or prince in the field to supervise the fighting and to inspire, specially Alexander, Darius and several islamic leaders.
After that, it depends. European Kings usually didnt bother but nobles were very involved in the fight

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>>73666957
Depends on what kind of leader they are and the SOCIETY they are a part of. I like highlighting how real leaders don't need a crown and will be at the front lines taking hits whenever shit goes down. It really depends on the values and building you've established / want to establish for the leader and culture in question.

>> No.73667259

>>73666957
It stopped being a thing by the end of the Middle Ages coinciding with the rise of gunpowder. There's probably some exceptions.

>> No.73667334

>>73666957
They only do it if they're culturally required to, really. You can command from the back much more easily, and if it's necessary you can still go nearer to the front later on.
That cultural requirement usually fades away once you get away from monarchies and/or it becomes too easy to kill people in armor.

>> No.73667351

>>73667227
I guess English kings were built different then because they valued martial prowess.

>> No.73667444

>>73667351
>english kinds were built different
yeah they were. They were the most divorced from rome and its inheritors and thus didnt share most of their policies and/or ideas
Now if that's a good or bad thing it depends. The spanish kings were fantastic heads of state and the french kind of conquered a good chunk of europe twice

>> No.73667554

>>73667444
Thanks for the good laugh. Checked.

>> No.73669007

>>73667334
>>73667227
>>73667244
I admit, I had Black Panther on the brain when I made her and her whole lineage rulers of Savan, which is basically animal people land. Kemos, Matara/Juni-likes and everything in between that derives from land/air animals live here.

The only time there wasn't a Shishiro in the Lion's Keep was when the Takanes took over by force long before even Botan's grandparents were born. Yes, its that ancient, but still taught in history in her era.

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>>73669007
Do you have all your world's history and stuff logged somewhere? If you do, what kind of format is it?
Date X.Y. - Main event description, simple and to the point
Open ended paragraphs going into the specifics of the land's history from a high level.

>> No.73670875

>>73669441
Here, have a rentry.

https://rentry.org/99iee

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Which one would you read?
>Sailon Moon-esque type of story featuring HoloX with Anon filling the "Tuxedo Mask" role (Romance subplot: Chloe)
>Pre-Hololive romance story featuring either Marine or Pekora set in a workplace (Marine worked in a black company and Pekora worked in a cafe IIRC)
>Classic visual novel high school romance story featuring either a Chloe or a Marine route

>> No.73671280

>>73671095
I'd read all three of those but if I had to pick:
>Sailon Moon-esque type of story featuring HoloX with Anon filling the "Tuxedo Mask" role (Romance subplot: Chloe)
Because I had a similar idea and would like to see it come to fruition.

>> No.73671922

>>73671095
maybe the second. Traditional Magical girl isnt that interesting for me and i hate sailor moon itself while i think highschooler Marine is a waste of her charms.
OL marine all the way

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>>73670875
Neat. Mad props for putting this together for yourself. I love making up history and cultures with some flavor to them. It's always a good side activity for writing that not only helps you make your own world more robust, but it also pretty relaxing on the brain.

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>> No.73675086

>>73674403
I don't trust that face

>> No.73675432

>>73675086
She's getting those words out of your head, one way or another.

>> No.73676032

>>73675432
Azki please..i told you im not into sounding

>> No.73676090

>>73671095
Where's the Ayame option? She's in your image...

>> No.73676414

>>73676090
I just thought that a picture of an oni offering a taste of her cooking kinda fit what I was doing there

>> No.73676573

>>73666957
Depends on the culture and organization of the state. There are obvious risks involved in personally participating in battle. However, not leading your own troops has its own risks, a powerful and popular general might just decide to take the throne for himself, which is one of the main reasons to personally lead your army. In medieval Europe, kings usually led their armies, but as governments stabilised and became more bureaucratic, they gave way for professional generals.

It mostly depends on the country. The tribal chief of a fledgling warrior principality would lead their army (from the back, it's extremely rare for any historical period to have the ruler on the frontlines), but the emperor of a robust bureaucratic empire might not even be on the same continent as a campaign happens. What kind of setting are we talking about?

>> No.73676589

>>73676414
That's true, I guess. But she can well have a scenario too.
>>73676032
Don't worry, she'll introduce you to it before going "in depth".

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So, a fic about being a former slaver, rising to the ranks to be a general, meeting a psychotic yet loving Azki, getting sounded, shitting your ass out with Laplus, Dating princess bijou, then getting betrayed and fucked by moona while Lamy farts on your dick and there's also hags.

got it

>> No.73677352

>>73677266
Don't forget about healing the lesbian

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>>73677352
You know pal? you could have told me that BEFORE i wrote it

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>>73676589
Well, Ayame is a top 3 holo for me so I wouldn't mind it. The first idea that comes to my mind is doing a fic set in a futuristic version of Edo, sort of like Samurai Pizza Cats (or Gintama). That kind of setting could be a good fit for Ayame's goofiness.

>> No.73679846

>>73507036
(You) come back from work, sit in front of your computer, and do something like play AoE II for a couple of hours. Then you get an ominous message from an unsaved number saying 'Don't forget your WIPs!'
Your WIPs? The last one, about fucking Fubuki's tits, is lying amidst the virtual cobwebs of a forgotten folder, but you'll get to it. You browse /wg/ for a bit and then close the tab without bumping.
Then, you hear someone at your front door, you go and get it, there's no one. You go back to your computer, a gif of Azki is playing in it, and suddenly she taps the screen of your computer.

You will not survive.

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>>73679846

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>>73679846
I then boot up Forza Horizon 5.

>> No.73680350

>>73680193
but that's most wanted

>> No.73680415

>>73680350
Not that Azki would know.

>> No.73680640

>>73676573
>it's extremely rare for any historical period to have the ruler on the frontlines
That's just not true.

>> No.73681292

I want a story the recaptures my experience as a teen: having all the girls want to get in my pants, being the most handsome guy ever and having an absolutely massive cock that all the girls brag about. Exactly how it happened.

>> No.73681391

>>73657738
Not much. Still brainstorming some ideas and trying to see characters in different roles so I can see which would suit them best.

Once I have a formula nailed down, I'll get to work.

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>> No.73681550

>>73681443
Boring

>> No.73681721

>>73681443
Boing

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>>73681721
Boing-boing.

>> No.73682216

>>73681550
Not boring because Foobs has gotten a fic in a while.

>> No.73683489

>>73655306
Something's not right about that La+

>> No.73685453

>>73671095
>>Sailon Moon-esque type of story featuring HoloX with Anon filling the "Tuxedo Mask" role (Romance subplot: Chloe)
This but it should absolutely have a gag of Laplus slowly coming to the realization that she hasn't formed a secret organization, but a magical girl squad.

>> No.73686311

>>73682216
Good. Let's hope the trend continues

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>>73686311
Are you looking for attention, anon? Alright, here you go.

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Why are they looking at me like that...

>> No.73687643

>>73687437
Because you're an idiot who tripped and fell on the floor, now Aki has to end your virginity, as per tradition.

>> No.73690478

>>73687437
Your penis flopped out when you fell over

>> No.73690684

>>73687643
>NO PLEASE, IT WAS A MISTAKE
>you know the rules
>PLEASE NOOOO
>you know i have to do it. ITs tradition
>AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
>Ride.exe

>> No.73692997

>>73680640
Yeah, frontlines is not the right word. What I meant is that it's rare for a head of state to be where the actual fighting happens. Even if they're present during the battle, they would normally command the army from the back, staying at a safe(-ish) distance.

>> No.73695894

>>73692997
Nowadays yeah, but it used to be commonplace.

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>> No.73700911

>>73676573
The FE setting. Most of the time, rulers are either NPC or enemies. But I said scre that, you're getting one midway through Ch7 of the game. And its Botan. And she is preceeded by her second in command, Lamy.

Fun fact: in all of Savan's history, Wamy is the first non-Savanese to hold such high power in the Savanese court.

There are 6 people on the High Council, which also include Foob and Mion.

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>> No.73705113

>Mamamori
>Mamatori
>Paparat
>Mr.Ravencroft
>DadRys

Aside from these. which other EN parents are known?

>> No.73705242

>>73705113
Hasn't Gura talked about her mom a couple times? And I think I've seen Teamates complain about Ame's awful mother.

>> No.73705360

>>73705113
Mamapuppy and Momseki exist, with momseki being a sweet lady that sings biboo trigger while cleaning.
Aside from that i think Fauna talked about her dad once?

>> No.73705403

>>73705242
Gura's mom was on one of her streams

>> No.73705761

>>73705113
Kiara has mentioned her dad specifically I think only one time, and it was taking her to see monster trucks. Shiori has mentioned her dad a bit as well, though she met him a bit later in life. Nerissa's mom is also more known than her dad I don't know how the fuck you missed her. Ina's talked about her parents every now and again, too.

>> No.73707994

>>73705113
Mori has talked about her bio Dad and her Stepdad before.
Not sure how you missed Mamarat
Mumei's talked about her parents (spoilers they're both autistic)
Shiori's talked about her parents that she totally loves you guys they're great really.

>>73705360
Fauan's talked about her mom and dad a couple of times.

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>> No.73711514

>>73519268
I might be wrong, but I vaguely remember someone mentioning that an SMT game had more or less the same plot you are describing.

>> No.73711798

>>73709498
>The world if Suisei got to fuck her brother

>> No.73711909

>>73519268
>Suisei is actually a deific figure with Godlike power
She wasn't?!?!?!

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>>73705242
>>73705360
>>73705761
>>73707994
Thanks. Originally i was asking for a roster pic, since i wanted to write a "HoloEN parents get an invitation to a mistery place".
The idea was those that i mentioned+one or two wildcards showed up and established some implied past (Like Paparat originally being a rat and getting huge by bench pressing kangaroos and Mr.Ravencroft+Mamamori hating Mamatori for making their daughters kinda gay).

The whole point of the joke was that they were assembled to adress subject X (anon) and paint him as some kind of semi-mitical figure that they need to make their daughters breed with (ANON FUCK MY DAUGHTER, SHE HAS X CATS/IS ALL ABOUT IDOLS, HER OVARIES ARE DIYING) with some jokes like Paparat rigging all the gaming chairs with a hidden fart compartment so he can sabotage any stream, Mr ravencroft being able to deliver "Astarion Lore" through an EMP that turns girls into theather kids and Mamatori even threathening to unleash "global wawafication" and turning everyone gay.

So yeah. the whole premise was just an excuse for a joke...until i realized i had no punchline. I spent like 20 minutes sitting going through iterations (they all activate their countermeasures and that creates Hololive EN with the joke being it was a prequel, Anon going NO WAY FAG and backflipping away, Zeta leaking the information and going "we do a little trolling" or the hag council crashing the party) but in the end none landed.

So that idea is just gone, and so im sharing it with the thread because i thought it was amusing. Also i kinda wanted Triad boss mamarat to make a cameo and a gigantic dadseki going "I THINK WE SHOULD RESPECT TRUE LOVE" but it was all floating in my mind palace with no way to connect it

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>>73507036
Getting drunk with your pal Lamy and waking up in a motel in las vegas, married and with 40 missed calls from your friends and family

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>>73519268
>>73520631

My autism is kicking in!

Hololive and most corpos sounds like something that the SCP JP branch would write.
>Recruiting/capturing/debt trapping/sealing dangerous and bizarre humanoid beings that come out of who knows where?, space?, other dimensions?, parallel universes?, alternative timelines?...
>All of that...
>To just make them stream videogames...
>Or sing...
>Etc...
>Somehow... This is the only containment procedure that works...
>As long as someone's watching, they won't fuck the planet
>Everything else just puts the world at risk
>Using some [REDACTED] to animate their reaction
in-real-time and turn it into a 2D or 3D live model when in reality there's an actual waifu/husbando behind this filter being powered by [REDACTED] and [REDACTED] radiation readings indicate non-existent risk of usage of material and hardware previously mentioned
>Create a massive hoax that makes people think there's roommates, they aren't, they are either just agents or paid actors or bystanders that got brain washed into thinking they are chuubas or are streaming or puppets that are not even human, but they fake being the roommates to not raise suspicion. Whether they know it or not. There's an almost unnatural sync when both the roommate and the chuuba stream together, gets scary accurate when both faced are shown, memetics effect doesn't make people notice the double voice effect
>Glitchs on-stream/scuff is just anomalous manifestations
>Anomalies self-terminate once they decide to "graduate", they fucking bleep out of reality when X condition happens, mostly graduation streams or noticed, terminations are when the Foundation accidentally ends them by doing X or when they just fucking vanish for no reason
>There's very strong anomalies, all the big corpos and indies are them, they need large amounts of audience and work to keep from exploding, but thankfully their memetics capabilities means they naturally attract attention from people specifically into anime/manga or who are very, VERY in need for attention or to follow something. Usually does not work in ultra-religious people, if it works in someone like that, it means they actually understand religion wrong even if their passion about it is true, cue they fall for the "idol", the virtual youtuber.
>Kizuna Ai was about to XK the planet but using the above mentioned [REDACTED] was tricked and contained into streaming albeit East, West Korea and Atlantis got deleted from existence retroactively, only rumours left, a fair price for the entire world and our species continuous survival.
>The last surviving piece of Atlantis...
>An anomaly of the same type yet greater power than Ai-san
>A benevolent anomaly, (unlike Ai-san who apparented cooperative behavior to escape, failed) that actually benefits the world when streaming unusually
>She eats the power from other anomalies by just existing behind-the-scenes
>The Mythical Apex Predator
>Gawr Gura.
>She's still young (between 9-10k years [unclear]) and inexperienced
>But one day, she will unify both anomalies and normalcy, bringing forever peace to the planet and then the universe.
Also:
>They didn't notice that the fucking (containment) agency is literally called COVER, because it is the biggest cover-up of them all.
>HoloFES and similar events are not 3D and holograms or screens, but a severe physical manifestation of the anomalous effects that tricks people into thinking it is all computer generated, it is not.
>Groups of Interest include The Unicorn Cabal, The Sistersite, etc
>Not all of the anomalies are under the control of the council either, thus explaining above effects
>Some anomalies have no roommate and actively seek to undermine normalcy by choice or by just existing

That was a nice experiment, might try to flesh it out later. SCP-like stuff can be fun as a format yet the original site is not very fun anymore. Even the RPC fucks seem more reasonable these days. And they shouldn't seem so reasonable.
Anyways, have fun with this prompt/idea whatever. I don't know how to submit it to the archive for people's inspiration anyways, but I hope this was a good read.
I'm gone. Have fun!

>> No.73717088

>>73715065
>Lamy wakes up and practically can't walk because you mating pressed, no protection, powerful nakadashi, her baby maker last night for 8 hours straight before collapsing straight into sleep (she fainted at the 2 hour mark anyways)

>> No.73718135

What would it be like to have either Laplus or Bijou as a girlfriend?

>> No.73718420

>>73718135
It'd be annoying always bruising their cervixes.

>> No.73719325

>>73718135
Bijou would probably be hard to justify to anyone in the open, I guess if you are high energy then both of you would be fine. Also slight zoomer humor debuff.
Laplus would get called kid and wouldn't let slide any kind of criticism towards you or her or both, but would cry about it while hugging you in private because she can't stand that people can't take her seriously or far more than a chunni brat despite her efforts.
It would also be somewhat interesting.
Because she would definitely go around with this tomboyish air of authority in-public but would completely melt for you in private because she has a huge feminine side that she hides to the world, massive gap moe, good if you are into that.

>>73718420
Also, ahem, if your dick is small, their below average height and size might be a blessing.

Why did I made this reply to that post?, oh yeah, I always fall for bait.

>> No.73719507

>>73719325
>bait
I'm sorry that your dick is so small anon.

>> No.73721031

>>73718135
Watch out for the horns+tail/crystals while getting physical with them, or you get hurt.

>> No.73721261

>>73719507
Did I said it wasn't small?, no. I just said that I always fall for such bait. But why?, because it applies to me.
We are all going to make it... I know it.

>> No.73721464

>>73721261
You keep bringing this shit up unprompted and you're either fishing for pity or you have a humiliation fetish, neither of which is going to be indulged.

>> No.73722159

>>73680193
What if Azki had the power to self-insert herself in games so that you would "get the hint" to finish your WIPs?

>> No.73722292

>>73722159
>Win game
>feel nothing
>lose game
>AZKi's back telling me to bump the thread

>> No.73723037

>>73506921
that is one sexy picture

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You got this, Anon. Regardless of the hurdles that block your path, you'll he able to leap them and reach your goals

>> No.73724109

>>73721464
I was just trying to make a good laugh out of it.
Oh well... Back to the usual.

>>73723061
Thanks. Will do.

>> No.73724815

Can someone bake a new thread and make it a Bijou one please?

>> No.73724984

>>73724815
Can you suck my dick and after give my balls a lick?

>> No.73725007

>>73520631
So that confirms that /become/ is real because of The Bartender entry huh?

>> No.73725036

>>73530607
Rather have it being them mulching men with various weapons. It's better that way. No need for men in Holostories.

>> No.73725082

>>73725036
But I need to be in the story...for plot reasons.

>> No.73725113

>>73724984
If I were a cute girl then the answer would be yes, anon. Infact I'd even do it for free and anytime you want me to.

Alas, I'm no cute girl.

>> No.73725168

>>73547213
The Wig comes off during sex.
You get to learn why PekoMiko ended.
You will never be able to tell anyone the truth of what happened that day and why you refuse to have Miko get anywhere close to your ass.

>> No.73725194

>>73725082
Look if it ends up with you /becoming/ then there is no male in the story. Just Two Lamy

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